YatsuKaori wrote:

Take My Star Kasuga for penambah Stamina whups semangat

HabiHolic wrote:

Timing is very bad

better timing here

1. Offset: 360ms BPM: 185.00

litoluna wrote:

nice work '-'b
gl~

MokouSmoke wrote:

hi, saw your post on #modreqs
quick mod

[Insane]
00:18:846 (2) - fix stack fixed
00:22:414 (1,2,3) - DS doesn't match rhythm. Suggest you stack 00:23:224 (3) on 00:22:900 (2) instead like what you did for 00:23:711 (1,2,3) fixed
00:30:197 (1) - fix stack fixed
00:39:278 (1) - can blanket around 00:39:116 (5) - fixed
00:43:981 (3,4,1) - this is difficult to play and spacing too big between (3) and (4). you can keep same rhythm by changing 00:43:981 (3) to 2 circles with a triplet on 00:44:305 (1) - I'd rather delete 4, but thanks with suggestion
01:07:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - why 1/3 rhythm? song here is 1/4 No, the drum is 1/3 imo
01:16:900 (1,2,1,2,3) - confusing rhythm and doesn't match vocals. There's 4 strong vocal sounds, so use 4 triplets fixed

01:20:630 (4,5,1) - DS problem. Better to stack all of these for nice triplet deleting 5
01:22:089 (2,3,4) - ^ deleting 3
01:25:332 (3,1) - lower DS, nothing in song suggests big jump here fixed

[Hard]
00:04:900 (2) - DS or stack here Fixed
00:04:900 (2,1) - you don't stack here, but you stack at 00:06:522 (3,1) and 00:07:819 (3,1) - please be consistent! Fixed
00:34:089 (1) - move up and right for less overlap Fixed
00:36:684 (1) - I would stack here since you stack all your 1/1 rhythms and DS your 1/2 rhythms Fixed
01:16:251 (4,5) - maybe slightly lower DS? music is still pretty calm here Still thinking about it, maybe I'll change the pattern

[Normal]
00:08:143 (1) - unnecessary overlap Fixed
00:20:792 (1) - rotate CCW so same angle as 00:21:278 (2) - for better symmetry Fixed
00:31:495 (2) - can blanket around 00:30:197 (1) - Fixed
00:36:684 (3,4) - I think these would look better if slightly bent I think it's fine, but noted for future fixlist

Good luck with mapping

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

hello ;-; newbie modder sorry if bad mod
take from modreq
Insane : 01:01:240 - jarak beatnya membingungkan ( hanya saran) mungkin di ganti seperti ini : http://prntscr.com/7qf14g
No, this is insane diff. It's okay to have a jump like that.....


hard 00:34:008 - move up , mungkin seperti ini : http://prntscr.com/7qeuh4
Uhmmm, it's 1/4 distance slider.

otherwise goodluck
is bg nsfw ? I wonder about that too =w=

koreapenguin wrote:

mp3 use this : http://puu.sh/iUVNb/1f704e207d.mp3

Boobs wrote:

WARNING!
I'm new to modding and I don't have a lot of experience. I might make a few mistakes here and there.

Insane (4.36 stars, 325 notes)Quick Mod

01:01:402 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please fix. The Distance Snapping is bad on this. not consistent. no, It's 1.4x, 2.8x, 1.4x, 2.8x, 1.4x, 2.8x jump

01:18:267 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't want this to be a triple. Make this a single not. It actually fits with the song. Just place one note 01:18:267 (1). Good Idea

01:20:699 (3) - I don't like that the slider end is touching 01:20:375 (2). Place the slider end to x:197 y:236. Which means that 01:21:024 (4,1) has to be fixed according to this change. Fixed

01:22:970 (4,5,6) - The jump should have the same Distance Snapping as the jump at 01:21:997 (3,1). Fixed

01:24:429 (1,2) - Delete this because it doesn't go with the rhythm at all. The drum starts from that point imo

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~ M4M from my modding Q~

Guestmappernya orang indo toh? Pake bahasa Indo aja klo gitu xD

Free mod, ane lagi good mood sekarang, be glad -w-

[General]

1. Song setup -> design, disable "widescreen support" sama "letterbox during break"
2. Pride Kakumei = Pride Revolution. Karena "Pride" nya udah ada di title, mungkin tambahin "Revolution" ke tags. mungkin, nanti dipikirkan dulu
3. Kenapa 2015 ada di tag? .-. gintama tahun 2015 hue
4. Highly suggest : kiai yang kedua mendingan mulainya disini 01:20:213 soalnya big sound nya ada di situ. hmm, boleh juga
5. BGnya emang keliatan nsfw -w- ratingnya questionable sih hue

[Normal]

1. HP 4
2. 00:05:294 (3,1) - Hindari nge stack di Normal, apalagi kalo stacknya beda rhythm kayak gini (biasanya 1/1 ini 2/1) jadi ada sedikit pause. New players bakal bingung dan akhirnya ngeklik (1) kecepetan. Mungkin pindahin? o-o Pindahin (3) kalo susah, tapi (1) nya tetep harus di DS http://puu.sh/j3BVo/a7839f4a6b.jpg ((3) ane taro di blanketnya (2) http://puu.sh/j3BWa/bfeb4f8caa.jpg Ato kalo mau simple tambahin note lah disini 00:05:618 xD (Nggak ada yang diikutin jadi sebenernya mendingan jangan. Ribet aja dikit gpp xD) tbh, pattern kek gini di normal gpp kok
3. 00:15:024 (1) - Curve ke arah sebaliknya, flow dari (4) dan ke (2) bakal lebih enak http://puu.sh/j3C1l/f52db20496.jpg oke =w=b
4. 00:37:078 (3,1) - Overlap .-. mungkin pindahin (1) agak ke bawah dikit http://puu.sh/j3C4y/1061979753.jpg =w=b
5. 00:39:672 (2,3) - coba ctrl+g (jadinya circle dulu baru slider) kayaknya bakal lebih cocok sama lagunya soalnya 1/1 reverse slidernya bakalan khusus ngikutin vocal. Kayak gini 00:44:862 (3,4) - ah iya ya. fixed =w=b
6. 00:53:943 (1) - Pindahin ke atas dikit biar flownya lebih enak http://puu.sh/j3C9i/b5c3dbf8a7.jpg ato nggak bentuknya ubah dikit http://puu.sh/j3Cap/ab82736478.jpg ide yg pertama bagus
7. 01:10:808 (1,2,3) - Mendingan jangan di stack, bikin kayak bentuk kotak aja kayak (kurang lebih) di Easy. Lebih dapet feelnya kalo stack
8. 01:26:699 (4,5,6) - Pindahin ke kanan biar flow lebih enak http://puu.sh/j3Chy/865c3c82e4.jpg boleh juga

[Hard]

1. AR 7.5 biar diff spreadnya lebih bagus
2. OD 6
3. 00:06:916 (3,1) - Mendingan di stack deh uda stack
4. 00:08:213 (3,1) - ^ sama
5. 00:15:024 (1) - Ini sebenernya masih rankable ga sih? o-o soalnya ranking criteria bilang gini
   

   Osu! Ranking criteria wrote:

   Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds

   Tapi kayaknya penafsiran orang beda beda .-. tapi menurut ane sih hindari aja, caria aman :v lebih lagi kayaknya musiknya ngga terlalu cocok buat slider kayak gitu (walaupun maksudnya ngikutin gitar, tetep ngga cocok xD) jadi mendingan diubah jadi normal slider aja. w ganti aja deh
6. 00:16:970 (3) - Karena streamnya lumayan panjang, sebenernya mendingan pake 2 slider kayak gini http://puu.sh/j3Cv7/7f658f8134.jpg biar reversenya ngga kebanyakan. 1 aja cukup
7. 00:27:186 (1,2,3) - Mendingan di DS deh biar ngga terlalu deket sama tailnya (5). Ato nggak, stack di tailnya sekalian. stack aja deh :3
8. 00:32:537 (3) - Mendingan diubah jadi 2 circle buat support vocalnya soalnya dua 1/2 slider sebelomnya ngikutin vocal yang panjang. Terasa aneh kalo pake rhythm yang sama tapi bunyinya beda. hmm, iya juga ya
9. 00:40:159 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g buat ngikutin vocal (circle dulu baru slider) sure
10. 00:43:159 (5,6) - stack properly pls uda bener itu stack nya ; A ;
11. 00:58:483 (7) - ^ sama, mendingan pake 2 slider, tapi gpp sih 1 cukup hue, tp gw pasang 2 aja deh soalnya gw ngerasa aneh
12. 01:00:105 (3,2) - stack pls uda ; w ;
13. 01:16:645 (4,6) - Overlap, mendingan (6) dinaikin dikit biar tailnya di blanket sama (4) http://puu.sh/j3CIx/4fb4b6be2a.jpg somehow pingin w ganti patternnya
14. 01:17:781 (7,8,9) - Kalo itu di apply ^ pindahin ini juga biar tailnya (9) di blanket sama (6) sama
15. 01:19:889 (1) - Nggak cocok soalnya big soundnya jatoh di slider tail. Big sound mendingan bisa dipencet. Mungkin ubah jadi single 1/2 slider sama circle http://puu.sh/j3CM4/4de4fdece5.jpg Changed
16. 01:22:970 (2,6) - Stack pls uda stack itu hue
17. 01:29:294 (2,4) - ^ uda ; w ;

Oke, itu aja ya, udah banyak nih xD
Kehabisan waktu >.< Mungkin ane akan kembali (?)
Overall sih bagus, cuman pperlu dipoles aja :3
Good luck~

1. "2015" ga perlu ada di tags karena bukan bagian resmi dari nama Gintama (dan ngapain juga nambahin hanya karena ini sekuelnya yang tayang di tahun 2015 lol). Also coba tambah "OP2" sama "2nd" ke tags.

1. Coba pake NC tiap 4 ketukan di sini biar combo yang ada nggak terlalu pendek.
2. 00:10:159 (1,1) - Jarak antara spinner dan objek setelahnya harus minimal 4 ketukan di difficulty Easy dengan BPM segini. Biar gampang spinner diganti slider aja.
3. 00:14:375 (1) - Ga bagus loh kalau downbeat seperti 00:15:024 (katakan saja awal birama, deh) di-map dengan objek yang ga bisa diklik (contohnya circle atau kepala slider), soalnya penekanannya jadi kurang. Cuma mau bilang aja sih, tapi ini cukupi direkomendasikan untuk diubah.
4. 00:22:808 (1,2) - Ini ga sekalian dibikin blanket? Dibikin kayak gini, mungkin.
5. 00:27:997 (1,2) - Flow seperti ini aneh banget buat Easy. Coba deh minimal (1) di Ctrl+H, dan kalau bisa jangan dibikin nyentuh sama (2).
6. 00:33:186 (1) - Gak boleh ada perubahan spacing seperti ini di Easy. Tolong konsisten.
7. 00:33:186 (1,1,2,1,2) - Ini kenapa banyak banget NC-nya... Satu aja di awal.
8. 01:05:618 (1,2) - Diusahakan peletakan slider nggak kayak gini (repeat slider deketan sama ekor slider sebelumnya) biar lebih rapi. Pindahin (2) ke (73,239) gitu...
9. 01:14:051 - Ini ga perlu finish. Nggak ada bunyi yang mendukung hitsound seperti ini di sini, jadi kesannya maksa.
10. 01:18:591 - Ini juga gak perlu clap; alasannya sama dengan yang di atas. Tanpa hitsound justru lebih pas.
    
    Secara teknis sih ini hampir rankable, tapi peletakan objek masih terkesan kurang rapi dan NC-nya gak konsisten. Hitsound juga masih kerasa gimana gitu, kadang gak pas. Coba perbaiki ketiga hal ini.

1. 00:07:240 (1) - Umm ini kenapa dipakein NC btw? Kan jadi ga konsisten panjangnya.
2. 00:09:672 (3) - Clap di sini gak cocok sama musik yang ada. Lebih baik dikosongin aja.
3. 00:21:186 (1,2) - Spacing di sini gak konsisten.
4. Peletakan hitsound di sini kerasa random banget... Whistle di mana aja asal pas sama bagian yang diberi whistle ya oke aja buat lagu ini, tapi clap digaja tetap di tick kedua dan keempat tiap birama, karena emang cuma pas di sana. (Berlaku juga buat Hard dan Insane.)
5. 00:33:186 (1,2,3,4,1) - Ini kalau mau dibikin overlap minimal ekornya overlap sempurna sama badan slider lain biar kelihatan rapi. Sekarang kesannya justru acak-acakan.
6. 00:57:672 (3) - Hapus ini aja deh biar 00:56:862 (2,3,4,5,6) gak terlalu panjang, biar nggak kesusahan untuk Normal.
7. 00:58:159 (5) - Coba dipindahin seperti ini biar lebih rapi?

1. 00:09:186 (2) - Ini sebenernya ga bisa di-map 1/4; paling banter 1/2. 1/4 justru malah jadi overmap, karena instrumen di sini dimainin tiap 1/2 ketukan.
2. 00:34:159 (2) - Gak usah aneh-aneh pake slider 3/4; ga ada bunyi di tick birunya, dan justru bikin permainan jadi awkward. Pendekin aja jadi 1/2.
3. 00:35:456 (3) - ^
4. 00:42:267 (1,2,3) - Pattern ginian ga direkomendasiin di Hard; biasanya ini dipake di Insane ke atas. Apalagi 00:42:591 (3,4) gak ada note di antara mereka, dan ini bisa nipu pemain. Dibikin nyambung aja, coba.
5. 00:49:159 (3) - Gak ada apa-apa di sini dan ini ga cocok kalau di-overmap; kesannya malah seperti asal nambah-nambahin ritme. Hapus aja.
6. 01:05:375 (5) - ^ (dan lagian 01:05:456 (1) bakal terasa lebih enak tanpa note ini)
7. 01:05:456 (1) - Sama kayak 00:34:159 (2).
8. 01:08:213 (1,2,3,4,1) - Umm, spacing-nya tolong dikecilin biar perubahan snap ke 1/3 ini terasa lebih gampang dimainin berhubung ini diff Hard.
9. 01:16:645 (4,6) - Err, ini diusahain jangan nyentuh dong biar lebih rapi...
10. 01:22:970 (2) - Sama kayak 00:34:159 (2) (dan lebih baik kalau ini diganti dengan triplet di 01:22:970 - 01:23:132).

1. 00:05:943 (1,2,3) - Uhm ini sama sekali ga nyambung sama lagu karena instrumen di sini ga ada yang kerasa "memanjang" sampai perlu slider 1/4... (berlaku buat semua pattern seperti ini di awal lagu)
2. 00:12:754 (3) - Ya... Pokoknya tolong deh jangan pake slider 3/4 kalau ada bunyi instrumen di tick merah (seperti 00:12:916) dan bunyinya lebih keras daripada yang di tick biru kedua (00:12:997), karena bakal awkward kalau dimainin.
3. 00:49:159 (3) - Sama dengan Hard.
4. 00:54:997 (5) - ^
5. 01:01:726 - 01:03:186 - NC 01:01:726 (5), remove NC 01:02:537 (1), lalu NC 01:02:862 (2) biar combo-nya konsisten.
6. 01:17:862 - Gak map ini aja sekalian buat ngebikin stream? Bakal ngerusak pattern segitiga sih, tapi lebih buruk lagi kalau bunyi yang keras ini ga di-map.
7. 01:18:186 - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

Oke...

>General

1. "2015" ga perlu ada di tags karena bukan bagian resmi dari nama Gintama (dan ngapain juga nambahin hanya karena ini sekuelnya yang tayang di tahun 2015 lol). Also coba tambah "OP2" sama "2nd" ke tags.

Fixed

>Normal

1. 00:07:240 (1) - Umm ini kenapa dipakein NC btw? Kan jadi ga konsisten panjangnya.
2. 00:09:672 (3) - Clap di sini gak cocok sama musik yang ada. Lebih baik dikosongin aja.
3. 00:21:186 (1,2) - Spacing di sini gak konsisten.
4. Peletakan hitsound di sini kerasa random banget... Whistle di mana aja asal pas sama bagian yang diberi whistle ya oke aja buat lagu ini, tapi clap digaja tetap di tick kedua dan keempat tiap birama, karena emang cuma pas di sana. (Berlaku juga buat Hard dan Insane.)
5. 00:33:186 (1,2,3,4,1) - Ini kalau mau dibikin overlap minimal ekornya overlap sempurna sama badan slider lain biar kelihatan rapi. Sekarang kesannya justru acak-acakan.
6. 00:57:672 (3) - Hapus ini aja deh biar 00:56:862 (2,3,4,5,6) gak terlalu panjang, biar nggak kesusahan untuk Normal.
7. 00:58:159 (5) - Coba dipindahin seperti ini biar lebih rapi?

FIXED ALL

>Hard

1. 00:09:186 (2) - Ini sebenernya ga bisa di-map 1/4; paling banter 1/2. 1/4 justru malah jadi overmap, karena instrumen di sini dimainin tiap 1/2 ketukan.
2. 00:34:159 (2) - Gak usah aneh-aneh pake slider 3/4; ga ada bunyi di tick birunya, dan justru bikin permainan jadi awkward. Pendekin aja jadi 1/2.
3. 00:35:456 (3) - ^
4. 00:42:267 (1,2,3) - Pattern ginian ga direkomendasiin di Hard; biasanya ini dipake di Insane ke atas. Apalagi 00:42:591 (3,4) gak ada note di antara mereka, dan ini bisa nipu pemain. Dibikin nyambung aja, coba.
5. 00:49:159 (3) - Gak ada apa-apa di sini dan ini ga cocok kalau di-overmap; kesannya malah seperti asal nambah-nambahin ritme. Hapus aja.
6. 01:05:375 (5) - ^ (dan lagian 01:05:456 (1) bakal terasa lebih enak tanpa note ini)
7. 01:05:456 (1) - Sama kayak 00:34:159 (2).
8. 01:08:213 (1,2,3,4,1) - Umm, spacing-nya tolong dikecilin biar perubahan snap ke 1/3 ini terasa lebih gampang dimainin berhubung ini diff Hard.
9. 01:16:645 (4,6) - Err, ini diusahain jangan nyentuh dong biar lebih rapi...
10. 01:22:970 (2) - Sama kayak 00:34:159 (2) (dan lebih baik kalau ini diganti dengan triplet di 01:22:970 - 01:23:132).

FIXED ALL

>Insane

1. 00:05:943 (1,2,3) - Uhm ini sama sekali ga nyambung sama lagu karena instrumen di sini ga ada yang kerasa "memanjang" sampai perlu slider 1/4... (berlaku buat semua pattern seperti ini di awal lagu)
2. 00:12:754 (3) - Ya... Pokoknya tolong deh jangan pake slider 3/4 kalau ada bunyi instrumen di tick merah (seperti 00:12:916) dan bunyinya lebih keras daripada yang di tick biru kedua (00:12:997), karena bakal awkward kalau dimainin. fixed
3. 00:49:159 (3) - Sama dengan Hard. deleted
4. 00:54:997 (5) - ^ deleted
5. 01:01:726 - 01:03:186 - NC 01:01:726 (5), remove NC 01:02:537 (1), lalu NC 01:02:862 (2) biar combo-nya konsisten. fixed
6. 01:17:862 - Gak map ini aja sekalian buat ngebikin stream? Bakal ngerusak pattern segitiga sih, tapi lebih buruk lagi kalau bunyi yang keras ini ga di-map. dah jadi stream
7. 01:18:186 - ^

Buat diff Kasuga placement udah cukup bagus; yang jadi masalah cuma hitsound yang kerasa random dan penggunaan slider 3/4 di diff Hard dan Insane yang agak bermasalah.

Jujur saya sendiri belum berani untuk memberikan icon buat map ini karena terbilang masih relatif bermasalah (terutama diff Xalkyrie), tapi ya gak buruk-buruk amat lah.

Well...

Good luck

1. 00:09:672 (1) - i recommend move this to x209 y81, you did stack 00:08:862 (3,1) - is 1/1, but stack on 00:09:510 (3,1) - is 1/2, it will easy to make player confuse
2. 00:22:645 - 00:23:456 - 00:24:753 - feel empty, you can add some note here
3. 00:27:348 (4) - strong drum sound here, map circle here can fit better
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:39:672 (1,2,3) - if slider head follow vocal can better for playing
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:42:753 - triple should be here
6. 00:49:078 (2,3) - stack feel kinda boring
7. 01:08:862 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - change to two 1/3 reverse slider?
8. 01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some hitsound on this part, it's too quiet now

1. 00:05:943 (1,1,1) - 1/2 follow vocal like insane?
2. 00:27:186 (1,2,3) - stack together
3. 00:30:267 (7,1) - ds
4. 01:07:564 (3,4) - stack
5. 01:17:132 (5) - nc, speed is changed
6. 01:17:781 (7) - ^

Rizia wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:09:672 (1) - i recommend move this to x209 y81, you did stack 00:08:862 (3,1) - is 1/1, but stack on 00:09:510 (3,1) - is 1/2, it will easy to make player confuse whoa, nice idea. fixed =w=b
2. 00:22:645 - 00:23:456 - 00:24:753 - feel empty, you can add some note here It's on purpose
3. 00:27:348 (4) - strong drum sound here, map circle here can fit better gotcha
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:39:672 (1,2,3) - if slider head follow vocal can better for playing Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:42:753 - triple should be here Ah, you're right
6. 00:49:078 (2,3) - stack feel kinda boring Moved
7. 01:08:862 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - change to two 1/3 reverse slider? maybe no, sorry
8. 01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some hitsound on this part, it's too quiet now fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:05:943 (1,1,1) - 1/2 follow vocal like insane? fixed
2. 00:27:186 (1,2,3) - stack together fixed
3. 00:30:267 (7,1) - ds well, It's half of 1.67x but well, fixed
4. 01:07:564 (3,4) - stack yes, your highness *bow
5. 01:17:132 (5) - nc, speed is changed done
6. 01:17:781 (7) - ^ done too

good luck

Xalkyrie wrote:

dan sori buat kasuga , ini tahun ajaran baru jadi yaa.. rada rada sibuk :3

1. See Aerous' post above
2. Set AudioLeadIN 1000 maybe? It's too sudden to be played
3. Is your BG aspect ratio's is 16:9? If not, please change
4. No custom hitsound? I prefer to copy another mapset's hitsound

1. Missing Video
2. 00:07:240 (1,2) - The polarity looks bad for an Easy . After long 2/1 rhythms before, seems likely you can keep the current pattern here . I tested and it's work and looks more better to avoid a bad polarity on Easy . Pattern :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:13:726 (2) - This slider begins in a somewhat strange . You can try to extend this slider into 2/2 slider 00:13:889 (2) - then put it on 00:13:889 - . The rhythm sounds more better than previous . Pattern:
   
   SPOILER

   
   1. If you applied mod above, don't forget to make changes on 00:16:483 (2) - too
4. 00:16:970 (4) - Better to not making this slider ends on a loud beat like this . You still can rework on it, if you apply mod above . Simply just move 00:16:970 (4) - to 00:17:618 - then put NC on it . 00:18:267 (1,2) - Delete these two then move 00:19:240 (5) - 1/1 behind, so the following pattern will looks like this
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:21:835 (2) - This slider starts in an awkward place, and should not be emphasized because there are vocals that sound here 00:22:645 - , and you through it away while the pattern still following the vocal . It is advisable to advance the slider to 00:21:835 - , it would make it sound better
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:25:402 (3) - Rhythm here is really weird and awkward . It ends on something that doesn't have sound at all . You skipped both vocal and instrument . I suggest you to try out this pattern . 00:25:402 (3) - Move it to 00:25:726 - , remove the repeat, then extend it by 1/2 so it'll become 3/2 slider, then add a circle on 00:25:402 - . The following pattern will looks like this
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:39:672 (2) - You can't keep this slider consistent with 00:38:375 (1) - . There's no such a beat here 00:40:159 - but you map it with slider tail and put whistle on it which make you obviously want to map 00:40:159 - . I suggest you to extend this slider by 1/2 so it'll become 2/1 slider and it plays better out here, especially on it's reverse part
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   Those all is your rhythmical issues I found . About the flow, you can improve it a bit to make it more looks aesthetic
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1. 00:05:294 (3,1) - The gap between these two is really feels weird . 00:05:618 - still a vocal on it, and better to be mapped here so, yeah I suggest you to map it but not by adding more circle to be stacked on these two, but make 00:05:294 (3) - become 1/1 slider
2. 00:08:537 (1,2,3) - They creates bad polarity here . It's looks so confusing, especially by beginner player . I don't suggest you to do it since this is still a Normal diff . Maybe, you can try to make 00:08:537 (1) - into 1/2 slider . It would create similar gap between 00:08:537 (1,2,3) -
3. 00:33:186 (1,3,1) - Too many overlap in a section isn't a good idea . This is Normal, you can't just throw 3 overlaps in a row
4. 00:53:781 (4) - Delete this circle . 00:52:645 (3) - This slider covered up too much vocal here, so suddenly map the vocal with a circle isn't good idea . It creates more better gap to 00:53:943 (1) - too, so I suggest you to try it out first
5. 00:56:051 (5,6) - Map out the vocal and suddenly change it to instrument in a section feels really awkward . Seems likely you following the vocal that connected to instrument for each of them beforehand, so deleting this circle could make those all clearly consistent and sounds nicer
6. 00:56:537 (1) - If you apply my mod above, try to change this slider into 1/2 slider then move it 1/2 behind to create better gap with 00:56:051 (5) - and 00:56:862 (2) -
7. 01:04:159 (3,1) - Stack please, Idk but I think placing them like this is inappropriate
8. 01:18:591 (1) - This spinner feels too short for Normal imo . I don't have suggestion over here, so if feel like to change it do it with your own mind
9. 01:24:429 (3) - Because you placed this slider on 01:24:429 - , the whole rhythm insist you to map out this section with following the instrument but you do it vise versa . It sounded very weird rather than just following the vocal . If you want to keep the rhythm played correctly, you can try to Ctrl+G these two 01:24:267 (2,3) -
10. 01:27:186 (5,6) - Same as above, Ctrl+G makes everything should be fine
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    I feel worry about the gap between Normal and Easy
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