James2250 wrote:

Not going to get into the whole I I I debate, will let the BAT's decide that

I would make the final spinner end in the same place on every diff will look into it

Normal:
01:17:445 (1) - I would start at 01:17:604 ok, done

Hard:
I say that the overall diff is too high for a hard lower 1, this was mentioned before, but i liked it were it was
00:24:626 (3,4) - spacing? placed differently

Taiko:
fine to my limited knowledge

Teras' Isane:
looks nice

Sallad's Hard:
I would just make the kiai time like all the others seeing as the other 4 have it the same way but up to you i think it's fine, up to Sallad

*star*

Leorda wrote:

[General]
1) Your video dimensions is unrankable, maximum is 640x480 (current 704x396)

Nekoo[] wrote:

Here's the video without audio if you want it 10mb reduce, lol =P
http://www.mediafire.com/?f3kwd82p9413d69

Let me know if it's weird, anyways I'm off to bed, ciao.

Nekoo[] wrote:

Here's the video without audio if you want it 10mb reduce, lol =P
http://www.mediafire.com/?f3kwd82p9413d69

Let me know if it's weird, anyways I'm off to bed, ciao.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Hard;

01:07:232 (2,3) - Spacing.

Concerned about the diff spread, but I believe that has been mentioned.

1. Offset 1011

1. Tick Rate 2 ?

GladiOol wrote:

[General]

1. Offset 1011

[Tera's Insane]

1. Tick Rate 2 ?

Hmm,kay.
00:11:064 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:16:170 (4) - Add New Combo.
00:16:489 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:18:564 (1) - ^
00:23:830 (11) - Add New Combo.
00:24:149 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:26:542 (9) - Add New Combo.
00:27:021 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:51:276 (1) - ^
01:02:285 (x) - Make the kiai time end here! Like in [Salad's Hard].
01:13:776 (3) - Ugly Anti Jump, please make the spacing consistent.
01:15:053 (3) - ^
01:16:010 (4) - Add New Combo.
01:17:766 (1) - Make this spinner end 1/2 earlier.
Starred~

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Normal]
00:35:794 (2) - Sounds better 1/2 of a tick ahead.
01:04:677 (1) - I suggest removing the repeat and adding another slider of the same length at 01:05:953.

[Hard]
Add 2 seconds of lead-in time instead of 1.
00:45:687 (4) - Move this 1/2 of a tick back? OR add a note at 00:45:528.
01:14:889 (2) - What is this ending to? Shorten it to the white tick.
01:16:166 (4) - ^? Lengthen to the white tick.
01:17:443 (1) - Would look better if this spinner started at 01:17:602.

For the three difficulties above, you should move the max volume of the normal hit sampleset to the middle. Those default claps are a little loud with such a soft mp3.


And add 2 seconds of lead-in time on Sallad's Hard as well.

Samah wrote:

They all look pretty good, so not a lot I can pick on really.

Normal:
00:21:432 (3,4) - Move these 1 grid left
00:57:177 (3) - Make this slider half a beat longer (end at 00:58:134)

Hard:
00:21:432 (3) - New combo maybe?

Starred.

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~Normal~

1. 00:23:985 (1, 2): Not snapped a little it as well... Highlight both of them and move one grid left.
2. 00:25:900 (1): Move one grid left.
3. 00:41:858 (1): Try turning off grid snap and make this slider straight better.
4. 00:58:453 (4): ^
   
   
   ~Hard~
5. 00:03:241 (7): Move this to x:276 y:173...
6. 00:03:560 (1): Move this to x:210 y:242...
7. 00:04:517 (2): Move this to x:277 y:174...
8. 00:16:725 (1): Move this to x:217 y:192...
   
   After you done all four of them, just fixed them straight as you can.
   
   ~Sallad's Hard~
9. 00:07:353 (2): Move one grid left > one grid down.

DJPop wrote:

Last mod : Thu May 19, 2011 12:34 am (over 1 year ago)
Oh my ... D:


~General~
- Shorten the video's name, I suggest "Swinging.avi" or "Swinging (TV Size).avi" done
- Need an Easy diff, because Normal is too hard for beginners imo will work on it
- Move all green timings' offset +36, also check if some are misplaced done
- Try to use this custom clap in every diffs http://up.ppy.sh/files/normal-hitclap.rar will look into it


~Normal~
00:49:517 (4) - add new combo done
01:17:602 (1) - remove finish, end with soft hitsound, 5% volume done

~Hard~
00:21:432 (1,2) - change claps to whistles done
01:04:836 (3) - add whistle at middle note done
01:14:889 (2) - make its shape more circular done
01:17:602 (1) - end with soft hitsound, 5% volume done

1. 00:01:964 (6) - this doesn't reallly follows any rhythm... if you was intended to follow guitar it should start here 00:01:804 -
2. 00:02:283 - make this beat clickable, since it's an important one
3. 00:04:038 (2,4) - spacing between this two seems weird... yo should try to have the same spacing between objects even if they aren't consecutive
4. 00:04:198 (3,5) - ^
5. 00:04:677 - add a note here?
6. 00:07:709 - ^ this kinds of pauses feels weird when u're playing
7. 00:12:815 - ^
8. 00:15:049 - ^ this is a very important beat... you could add a 1/2 slider here
9. 00:18:560 (2) - this slider doesn't really fits the voice... maybe change that part into this
10. 00:20:315 - add a note here or finish this spinner (00:19:038 (1) - ) there
11. 00:22:709 (6) - move this slighly to right side, to have same spacing between 00:22:389 (4,5,6) -
12. 00:22:868 (7,8) - bad overlap... move 00:23:187 (8) - slighly to up side to fix it
13. 00:25:102 - this SV change doesn't make much sense... it might confuse players, because it seems exactly like a 1/2 slider, also, the music doesn't really changes so you should make it consistent with previous patterns (i'm talking about 00:17:443 (10) - )
14. 00:27:975 (7) - spacing isn't correct here xd
15. 00:28:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream sounds a little overmapped... you already had mapped this rhythm before (00:18:241 - ).. make it consistent
16. 00:32:124 - 00:32:443 - 00:32:762 - add notes in those places... as a general guide, 1/2 notes fits nicely almost always
17. 00:51:113 (6,7,8,9) - why so many stacks D: it would be better to space it normally imo
18. 00:55:661 (6) - this note sound out of place tbh
19. 00:52:709 (3) - the main "problem" here is that you change the polarity between red and white ticks... you started the sliders in white tick here 00:52:070 - but then you suddenly change it to red tick 00:52:868 - there... you shouldn't change the polarity that way, because music doesn't really change in that point. so this rhythm fits better imo
20. 00:54:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make it consistent with previous rhythm
21. 01:02:283 (11,1,1) - those sliders are too long for a insane diff... it's better to map to the beat here instead voice