Kyousuke- wrote:

M4M Arrived!

[General]

1. Unchecklist widescreen support on Normal diff
2. Normal | OD 7.5 | HP 7 |
   Hyper | OD 8 | HP 7.5 |
   Another | OD 8 | HP 8 |

[Black Another]
00:07:873 (7873|3,7947|2,8021|1) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri biar pas sama patternnya :3 00:08:467 (8467|1,8615|1) -
00:13:071 (13071|1) - pindah ke 4 lbh bagus buat patternnya (biar match sama 00:11:734 (11734|3,11734|0,11808|1,11883|0,11883|2) - ini) sama lbh balance imo
00:15:447 - gimana kalo kyk http://puu.sh/mXYRF/51eefdf5b3.jpg gini? biar lbh smooth patternnya :3 tbh pattern pny lu itu agak susah diread :'v wkwk

00:20:496 (20496|2) - pindah ke 4 samain kyk 00:19:902 - ini
00:23:615 (23615|3) - pindah ke 3 biar kyk 00:23:912 - ini (klo ngk keliatan random ._.) // cek baik-baik keseluruhan, itu ada pattern jack
00:29:482 (29482|1,29704|3,30670|1,30893|3,31858|1,32081|3,33046|1) - sbenerny semua LNnya cuma 1/2 sih, tpi itu uda bagus kok :3 gw suka LN nyaaaa! xD // nah yang bagian ini LN nya agak kurang menurut gw, ntar gw cari solusi lain gimana fixnya
00:38:244 - ini harusnya double? kyk 00:38:021 - 00:38:096 - 00:38:318 - 00:38:467 - kalo iya, nih suggestion nya http://puu.sh/mXZzF/c55afc8800.jpg
00:40:100 (40100|2) - pindah ke 2 buat pattern?

00:43:813 (43813|2,43962|2,45001|2,45150|2) - hmm jdi kurang enak, gmn klo http://puu.sh/mXZLR/59886aaa22.jpg // keep dulu deh
00:50:496 - harusnya 3 note ini :v nih suggestion nya http://puu.sh/mY03x/467820b53e.jpg
00:52:279 (52279|0,52279|1,52427|2,52427|3,52724|2,52724|3) - A B U S E akwkwkw

1. 00:52:279 (52279|1) - apus ini kyk 00:52:576 -
2. http://puu.sh/mY0hz/dc07d1be1f.jpg klo bikin kyk gini gw masih bsa pass sumpah wkwk, tenang sr nya ga turun kok :^) jauh lbh passable sama comfortable awkwk // gw keep dulu, gw gak bisa buka gambar link nya wkwkwk

01:05:942 - add note di 3, kyk yg laen buat cymbal nya. pdhl suara ini lbh kenceng loh wkwk kok ga double :^)
01:11:289 (71289|1) - pindah ke 3? nanggung :^)
01:14:407 (74407|3,75001|3) - duh pindah ke 3 biar ga ngejack itu dikanan :'v // keep, itu sengaja :v
01:39:284 - lel add note, jgn putus di tempat itu doang wkwk http://puu.sh/mY135/e14f6375c4.jpg

OH SHIT SO AWSOME KIAI I'M VERY PROUD TO YOU SON!

01:45:150 - 01:53:467 - damn holy god part, i can't mod it bcs i can't pass it :v but seems fine, ask testplayer instead
/that's pretty underrated hue
01:59:853 (119853|1) - pindah ke 3? cuma ini masa yg di 2 wkwk


conclusion: please rank this map asap lol! I'm very like the black another one :^)
the stars should be higher for me hue, rip sr
goodluck! xD /kenapa gw ngomongnya campur" ya :^)

ajeemaniz wrote:

hitsound suggestion is here!
use drum-custom hitsound, i didn't check the delay so zzzz http://puu.sh/n0aqO.rar

Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

General

1. BG : ok
2. Mp3 : ok
3. Hitsound : ok
4. Difficulty : the lowest diff must below 2.0
5. Timing: ok
6. AI Mod : ok

Normal

1. 00:40:546 (40546|0) -I think it’s unnecessary to have this LN in normal diff . so, you can remove it
2. 00:45:298 (45298|0) -^same

Hyper

1. 00:09:358 - http://puu.sh/n1yFA/25c52aa4bc.png try this. // Change another way
2. 00:28:591 (28591|0,28813|1) -ctrl+G for better pattern
3. 00:45:150 (45150|3) -move to 3 fit the pitch more better imo

Another

1. 00:14:110 (14110|3) -better to move to 3. For better pitch
2. 00:50:051 (50051|1) -move to 3
3. 00:50:496 (50496|1,50571|0) -ctrl+g
4. 00:50:645 (50645|1) -move to 4
   ^the reason is 00:50:051 (50051|1,50199|1,50348|1,50496|1,50645|1) -too many notes in col. 2
5. 00:59:556 -why don’t you add note in here ? for guitar sound maybe ? until the rest of the part // focus on piano sound
6. 01:09:506 (69506|0,69506|1) -make triple ? for cymbal same like 01:07:130 (67130|3,67130|1,67130|0) - // no
7. 01:11:883 (71883|3,71883|2) -^same // ^

Can’t pointed out many things
Sorry for my lazy mod

Mod Done

PnX wrote:

From PnX's modding queue

Normal
No errors

Hyper
No errors, mightn't it?

Another
01:38:838 - No piano sound.
01:39:284 (99284|3) - ^
01:39:432 (99432|3) - ^

Black Another
00:14:927 (14927|0) - Didn't hear any sound. // i hear snare sound
00:21:759 - A sound same as 00:21:536 (21536|1). Should fill it? // no, focus on rythm
00:22:501 - ^ // ^
00:22:947 - ^ // ^
00:24:135 - ^ // ^
00:49:828 (49828|3) - No sound. // i hear snare sound
00:50:274 (50274|3) - ^ // ^
01:18:789 - I hear a sound. Should it be added? (You might intend it, I don't sure.)
01:19:234 - ^
01:19:531 - ^
01:21:610 - ^
01:21:907 - ^
01:28:294 - Sound look similar to 01:28:071 (88071|1) - Adding it?

Nice map! GL >.<

Pizza wrote:

The PizzaComet Modding Queue

Heyyo!

GENERAL

- Diff yang paling gampang harus dibawah 2*, consider to reduce the NM or adding EZ diff? ;w; // nah buat ini liat kedepannya aja

col 1234

NM

- 00:14:110 - change to this, iya keliatan gak balance, tapi dari segi kenyamanan lebih enak, soalnya kalo dari jari telunjuk ke jari manis itu rada kurang nyaman imo (apalagi kalo ada hold), terutama untuk player baru >> http://puu.sh/nmGUK/8369dfb072.jpg
- 00:51:982 >> http://puu.sh/nmHdm/21517f6b4b.png
- 00:57:328 (57328|0) - move to 4
- 00:57:625 (57625|2,57625|3) - move to 1 & 2
- 01:00:744 (60744|2) - move to 2

Hyper

- 00:07:427 - biar balance kayak pattern sebelumnya http://puu.sh/nmHE6/d07eea1f26.png
- 00:58:813 - just suggestion >> http://puu.sh/nmHOw/193a6debb1.jpg
- 01:33:714 - try this, itu yang 2 LN di tempat sebelumnya udah di kiri, variasiin lagi ww >> http://puu.sh/nmHZL/8d1946879f.jpg
- 02:01:487 - just suggestion, biar sama variasinya http://puu.sh/nmIav/3a2b7145e2.jpg

Another

nice diff, can't find any problem, awesome sick SV

alright just that! feel free to reject

ArcherLove wrote:

can't mod.. too good..
have stars hentai lnp

Muu-chan wrote:

halo lnp san
amazing as expected

* Aku notice sesuatu nih di Black Another sama Another 01:15:744 (75744|3,76041|2,76338|1) - setiap LN harusnya berhenti di setengahnya.
* 01:44:259 - same case w/ ^ both diff
* Terus aku liat di 2 diff itu ada bbrp pattern yg sama.. aku saranin di ubah2 dikit deh. Terus ada jg yg cuman di geser 1 kolom tp yg lain sama :"
> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4653747
> dari 00:57:922 ~ 01:05:794 -

good luck ^^

[Baim] wrote:

halo mamah, NM dari Kuelapis gw

cuman notice aja sih di diff Another sama Black Another

di bagian sini 00:57:922 - 01:13:962 - patternya sama semuaa x'D coba lebih di ubah dikit mungkin di bagian another atau BA nya
01:53:541 - di part ini juga x'3 sampe sini 01:57:922 - // Fixed some pattern
mungkin masih banyak yg sama mah :'
masalah yg lainnya udah oke deh
sorry cuman segini
Good Luck.
take star.

jukkaduei wrote:

JUKKADUEI

From NM request

Column |0|1|2|3|

Normal

Great diff
00:52:427 (52427|1,52576|2,52576|0,52724|1) - Rearrange it. It's repetitive.

Hyper

Perfect diff I can't find a defects.

Another

Perfect diff I can't find a defects.

Black Another

Great diff
00:57:328 (57328|3,57365|2,57402|1,57440|0,57477|3,57514|2,57551|1,57588|0,57625|2,57625|3) - Do it like this. // keep, 1/12 is fine

Your map is already great. I hope this map will ranked soon