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[]Kalibe wrote:
[Stjppa's Easy]
00:23:432 (1) - Is this NC nessesary? It's a new sound, so yes.
00:25:368 (2,1) - Looks weird, because theirs ends are not stacked properly. Dunno if it's noticable when playing, but changed it.
00:42:400 (8) - Fix spacing. Ok.
01:26:723 (5) - Hm clap on end don't fit with music. Replace it with finish imo. Hitsounding is from Another, and it's fine imo.
Uhh claps in places like 00:06:400 (1) - 00:12:594 - 00:23:432 (1) - 00:37:368 - Don't fit with music, so i prefer change them to finish. Meh.
01:47:045 (4,1) - 01:53:239 (4,1) - Swap NCs You should actually mention the third NC too, but whatever. Changed.
[]Nekomata wrote:
easy
00:35:819 (3,4) - this is a pretty nice rhythm for this part, why not do it for this as well 00:41:626 (7,8,1) - which currently sounds weird imo Doesn't really work well, maybe I'm just too dumb lol. The problem is, that the polarity wouldn't be exact the same and it would result it getting a 1/2 pattern there.
00:48:206 (8) - similar to above, but i think you can put in a 1/2 right before 00:49:755 (1) - . (and maybe nc it too - example) As above. No need to change it.
01:20:723 (1) - you can improve the curves on this.. try this code (save map first, then open .osu and search for 80723, replace, save, and reload):32,242,80723,6,0,B|32:336|128:352|176:272|176:272|208:192|256:144|304:192|336:272|336:272|384:352|464:320|463:241,1,660.000020141602,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:Will test it later.
01:56:336 (2,3,1) - i suggest this rhythm if you want to get that beat. because it seems like you follow it and then suddenly you're not so yeah it can feel weird to play (by weird i mean it forces a read). But with your suggestion there's also a sudden double-repeat.
00:23:432 (1) - can also apply rhythm ^ Some newer players need rest, you know.
pinataman wrote:
[Stijpa's Easy]
00:00:207 (1) – I'd prefer this red node to be in the middle of the slider to better represent the note at 00:00:400 - . Try moving the middle node to ~101, 52 I don't even understand the half, but if it's what I think, it's fine.
00:07:948 (4,5,1,2,3) – I'd prefer this to have a little curve instead of being linear because the flow into (3) is a bit odd: http://puu.sh/lS446/3f66d67e07.jpg Aye.
00:16:465 (2,3,4,5) – This might look nicer if 2, 5 made a triangle like: http://puu.sh/lS4AN/481f7d7431.jpg I tried.
00:18:787 (1,2,3,4) – Consider giving this a little more curve: http://puu.sh/lS561/1d4673d013.jpg I tried.
00:21:884 (1,2,3) – Compare the angle that these slider ends and circles make with that of 00:22:658 (2,3,1) - . I think it'd look nicer to have these angle be more similar, so try a pattern that looks like: http://puu.sh/lS1AD/465f14dd54.jpg Not exactly the same, but changed it.
00:24:981 (1,2,3) – This could be more linear. To construct: delete (2) for now and make 1 and 3 have a DS of 1.2x. Now make a slider head where (1) is and a slider tail where (3) is. Then ctrl + shift + S by .5. Then place that slider where (2) was so that the DS is 1.2x I did it on purpose tho.
00:26:529 (4,5,1,2) – This would look nicer if (2) was equidistant from (5) and (1) (i.e. make a triangle). http://puu.sh/lS521/84cbdf663c.jpg I like it this way. Sorry.
00:34:271 (1,2,3) – This could be more curvy like: http://puu.sh/lS2QU/ab838c05f0.jpg Nice,
00:38:916 (3,6) – (6) might look nicer if it were stacked to go with the triangle you make with the slider heads at 00:39:303 (4,5) - I like you.
00:58:658 (4,1) – Personally, I don't like the flow these make since you have to go linearly into the head then immediately cut backwards. Rotating 00:59:045 (1) - 45 degrees counterclockwise helps give a little bit of horizontal motion to the right going into it, which flows better to me: http://puu.sh/lS4Ua/af9b796433.jpg I like it this way.
01:20:723 (1) – The middle of this slider doesn't look good to me since it looks pointed. Delete the very most center node for a second and it'll become a lot nicer curve. Try to aim more for that. This might mean you have to make the slider a bit wider. Also, the nodes directly next to the red anchors don't form a line. If they did, the slider wouldn't look a little jagged at the red anchors. So try something like: http://puu.sh/lS3Jx/13e300762b.jpg Improved it a bit different.
01:33:110 (1,3) – This could be blanketed a little better Can't really say if I improved it now. But looks better than before.
Blizs wrote:
Stjpa's Easy
- 00:23:432 (1) - I think it's not really deserve a single combo. And you did 8 beats combo on the other notes so I highly recommend to do that here too.
- 00:40:077 (5,6,7,8) - This point feels doesn't really fit to the song. I hear some emphasis on red ticks there but you keep the notes on the white ticks. And I don't really sure too if make 00:42:400 - to 00:43:561 - empty was a good idea since I hear some instruments in the song that doesn't deserve any pause. How about use this pattern or this pattern for 00:40:077 (5,6,7,8,1) - instead ? I think it follow the song better. (take a note that you may need an NC on 00:40:077 (5) - since the combo looks too long) Its purpose is to give newer players a bit rest, since this is still an Easy diff. Also I mapped to the drums and they still exist here, so everything is fine.
- 00:46:658 (6) - And you may need an NC here too with same reason as the note above. Oops.
- 00:48:206 (8,1) - Like 00:42:400 (8,1) - , I don't really sure if make it empty is a good idea since I hear some big effect instrument in the song. I suggest to change 00:48:206 (8) - into a 3/2 slider and then reverse it. Same reason as above.
- 01:32:529 (3,1) - you give a high different spacing that really not recommended for Easy diff. I suggest to give it a consistent spacing My bad.
- 01:56:336 (2,3,1) - I'm not really sure but isn't put a note on blue tick is really hard for easy diff (and maybe it's unrankable)? I suggest to use this pattern instead since it's pretty usual and readable. It's definitely not unrankable, and I like it.
FCL wrote:
M4M from your queue
- [Easy]
- 00:00:207 (1) - this and similar forms looks bad for me because red dot at end of spider makes him ugly But if fits.
- 00:42:400 (8) - spacing error, check it Fixed it with previous mods.
- 01:56:336 (2,3) - good idea, but i think for beginners this moment will hard for read. Probably you could be do 3 reverse, it will be better imo But I like it...
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