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Rita - Hajimari no Toki

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Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Astom wrote:

Hi~
[SB]
-A little fix in code, replace it in u .osb file
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SBA.png",320,240
_F,0,21079,21476,0,1
_M,0,21476,,320,240
_F,0,35781,36178,1,0
_F,0,47701,48098,0,1
_F,0,119621,120416,1,0

fixed.

[Skin]
-star2.png 50x50 resize it please =)

= = my fault.

Nice song ^^ I love Rita's songs <3 so starred
kaouji
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB A.png",320,240
F,0,21079,21476,0,1
F,0,21476,35781,1
F,0,35781,36178,1,0
F,0,36178,47304,0
F,0,47304,47701,0,1
F,0,47701,119621,1
F,0,119621,120416,1,0

i think it's my mistake.
- S
:) star
GladiOol
Increase Drain Rate on [Rin] by one.
On [Oni] by one or two.


Beatmap looks solid in my eyes~
No need to kudosu this!

Starred~
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
k. both increased by 1.
Garven
wtf I never starredmodded this? I know I've played it before... Ah well.

Only thing I didn't like is how quiet the hit sounds were compared to the song during the kiai points. Otherwise great!
IceBeam
[Hajimari]
00:15:913 - I've added a note here,and it sounds better to me.
00:32:999 (4) - It seems to be out of Grid Snap.Not major,but somehow I've spotted it,so better fix.

And another thing: The first time I've seen it I said: "Oni and Rin? 2 Insanes with only 1 Normal?"
Probably you will need another difficultry between them? But Oni plays like Hard,however.So,maybe rename it,cause for me Oni one must be smth incredibly hard.
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Hajimari]
00:15:913 - I've added a note here,and it sounds better to me. not me...= = follow the long~long~voice...
00:32:999 (4) - It seems to be out of Grid Snap.Not major,but somehow I've spotted it,so better fix. .... i don't use grid snap in fact.

And another thing: The first time I've seen it I said: "Oni and Rin? 2 Insanes with only 1 Normal?"
Probably you will need another difficultry between them? But Oni plays like Hard,however.So,maybe rename it,cause for me Oni one must be smth incredibly hard. Oni is take from the source, not the same meaning of many [Oni]s you have seen... however i admit it's in fact the same word and same meaning.
DJPop
How about using custom spinner?

~Hajimari~
02:08:960 (1) - silence the hitsound

~Oni~
02:08:959 (1) - silence the hitsound

~Rin~
02:08:959 (1) - silence the hitsound

That's all I could find, +Star
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

DJPop wrote:

How about using custom spinner? can't find a nice one so just leave it there.

~Hajimari~
02:08:960 (1) - silence the hitsound

~Oni~
02:08:959 (1) - silence the hitsound

~Rin~
02:08:959 (1) - silence the hitsound


don't want to silence the last spinner...


That's all I could find, +Star
Mafiamaster
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Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Mafiamaster wrote:

我bubble
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eveless

Mafiamaster wrote:

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lovhin456

DJPop wrote:

How about using custom spinner?
Hi ~ Do you mean using a custom spinner BG, spinner circle and spinner circle approach and spinner metre ??
If so, I can do that :3 Not sure about the spinner circle though ...
Here ~
You can make your BG the spinner BG :3
Hope this helped ~


Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

lovhin456 wrote:

DJPop wrote:

How about using custom spinner?
Hi ~ Do you mean using a custom spinner BG, spinner circle and spinner circle approach and spinner metre ??
If so, I can do that :3 Not sure about the spinner circle though ...
Here ~
SPOILER
[attachment=2:5a464]spinner-approachcircle.png[/attachment:5a464]
[attachment=1:5a464]spinner-metre.png[/attachment:5a464]
[attachment=0:5a464]spinner-circle.png[/attachment:5a464]
You can make your BG the spinner BG :3
Hope this helped ~
don't need to since i didn't use lots of spinners... (also the problems is i don't have a nice spinner BG, use BG as spinner BG is not what i like)
have thought about this after you gave me the hitcircle... but give up since i can't find a good BG and nice elements to deal with...
thanks anyway.
lovhin456

NatsumeRin wrote:

don't need to since i didn't use lots of spinners... (also the problems is i don't have a nice spinner BG, use BG as spinner BG is not what i like)
have thought about this after you gave me the hitcircle... but give up since i can't find a good BG and nice elements to deal with...
thanks anyway.
Ahh, okk no problem, I also tried to search for some OniMari images, obviously didn't have luck, I'll try to find a nice one (if I can...) but it acually doesn't matter since the map is already good enough (:
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

lovhin456 wrote:

NatsumeRin wrote:

don't need to since i didn't use lots of spinners... (also the problems is i don't have a nice spinner BG, use BG as spinner BG is not what i like)
have thought about this after you gave me the hitcircle... but give up since i can't find a good BG and nice elements to deal with...
thanks anyway.
Ahh, okk no problem, I also tried to search for some OniMari images, obviously didn't have luck, I'll try to find a nice one (if I can...) but it acually doesn't matter since the map is already good enough (:
if you could i won't mind self pop to get it better.
when searching OniMari i only find two nice BG... the other one is what i used in Aka no Sora....
*sigh. that's the point.
lovhin456
LOL I found some images I know they are small but I can resize any of them so they fit the spinner BG thing and without losing quality (:
Here, http://www.indowebster.web.id/showthread.php?t=66306 Tell me if you like any of them
This also, you don't want to know how I got them ...

Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

lovhin456 wrote:

LOL I found some images I know they are small but I can resize any of them so they fit the spinner BG thing and without losing quality (:
Here, http://www.indowebster.web.id/showthread.php?t=66306 Tell me if you like any of them
This also, you don't want to know how I got them ...
SPOILER
[attachment=1:5885a]onimari_2.png[/attachment:5885a]
[attachment=0:5885a]onamari_1.png[/attachment:5885a]
nice to be a BG but failed to be a spinner-BG...you know why orz.......character is at the center where would be covered with the spin....
btw, the size... is original..? a little strange to me.
lovhin456

NatsumeRin wrote:

nice to be a BG but failed to be a spinner-BG...you know why orz.......character is at the center where would be covered with the spin....
btw, the size... is original..? a little strange to me.
No I resized them, though if you want the original file just ask ~ and I'll edit that post. Anyways, that's all I can do , good luck with your map :3
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

lovhin456 wrote:

No I resized them, though if you want the original file just ask ~ and I'll edit that post. Anyways, that's all I can do , good luck with your map :3
thanks for your help and the skin. next time i may ask you directly for another skin XD
lovhin456

NatsumeRin wrote:

thanks for your help and the skin. next time i may ask you directly for another skin XD
xD You can ask me anytime
Lybydose
What's with normal-hitnormal3.wav and normal-hitnormal4.wav?

Could you re-arrange the combo colors? (Just make the current color2 to be 1 and color1 to be 2). Reason is that 01:27:436 (3,4,5,6) in Rin is pretty much impossible to see with the kiai flash at the same time, but if you change the color ordering it's fine.

Oni:

01:03:595 (5) - is the beginning of this slider supposed to be a non-custom soft whistle? it's the only one I heard in the map

Rin:

00:10:152 (2) - the beginning of this slider sounds odd to me. I think it sounds better if you move it forward 1/8

Storyboard:

Some small changes to make it look a little better if you want:

The color of the square in A.png is slightly different from the colors of the squares in S0101.png etc, so it looks kind of strange that you can see both squares.

Also, the scrolling letters (L01.png etc) look kind of funny because they go under the S0101.png squares but not the A.png square.

Picture of what I mean: http://puu.sh/8Jr
Notice how you can see two squares on top of each other. It looks worse while the song is playing because you can see the darker square fade in and out and move around.

What you could do if you wanted was resize all of the S0101.png letters (either the images or just scale them higher in the SB) so that it's the same size as the square in A.png. Then the scrolling letters would look better and you wouldn't be able to see the color difference. It probably wouldn't be too hard since you could just edit the storyboard via scripting to just copy/paste a bunch of lines.
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Lybydose wrote:

What's with normal-hitnormal3.wav and normal-hitnormal4.wav? i should already deleted them during last full-submit, but anyway will full-submit again.

Could you re-arrange the combo colors? (Just make the current color2 to be 1 and color1 to be 2). Reason is that 01:27:436 (3,4,5,6) in Rin is pretty much impossible to see with the kiai flash at the same time, but if you change the color ordering it's fine. fixed

Oni:

01:03:595 (5) - is the beginning of this slider supposed to be a non-custom soft whistle? it's the only one I heard in the map on purpose. don't want the default soft normal.

Rin:

00:10:152 (2) - the beginning of this slider sounds odd to me. I think it sounds better if you move it forward 1/8 discussed with Lyby and found a better way to solve.

Storyboard:

Leave Storyboard thing to kaouji.

Some small changes to make it look a little better if you want:

The color of the square in A.png is slightly different from the colors of the squares in S0101.png etc, so it looks kind of strange that you can see both squares.

Also, the scrolling letters (L01.png etc) look kind of funny because they go under the S0101.png squares but not the A.png square.

Picture of what I mean: http://puu.sh/8Jr
Notice how you can see two squares on top of each other. It looks worse while the song is playing because you can see the darker square fade in and out and move around.

What you could do if you wanted was resize all of the S0101.png letters (either the images or just scale them higher in the SB) so that it's the same size as the square in A.png. Then the scrolling letters would look better and you wouldn't be able to see the color difference. It probably wouldn't be too hard since you could just edit the storyboard via scripting to just copy/paste a bunch of lines.
kaouji
Storyboard is fixed( i guess )
Licnect

Mafiamaster wrote:

我bubble
..............................lol
Lybydose
I ranked this
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Lybydose wrote:

I ranked this
thanks~
Faust
Congrats Rin!
[Aramary]
moemoe
eveless
8-) 终于
wanhyrzh
:D Congrats~!
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
thanks guys.

and haters gonna hate. yep.

Mismagius

NatsumeRin wrote:

thanks guys.

and haters gonna hate. yep.
Ha ha ha, you're so funny!




Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Blue Dragon wrote:

NatsumeRin wrote:

thanks guys.

and haters gonna hate. yep.
Ha ha ha, you're so funny!
image
just mean how many 10s and how many 1/2/3s, i seldom get 7 or 8 ratings, even 9 is much less than others. that's the point. should i be proud lol.
Mismagius

NatsumeRin wrote:

just mean how many 10s and how many 1/2/3s, i seldom get 7 or 8 ratings, even 9 is much less than others. that's the point. should i be proud lol.
yes you should, you have 16 ranked maps and most of them with 9+ rating, while there are people that map VERY good maps and get something about 7.5, and most of them don't complain, seriously.
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Blue Dragon wrote:

yes you should, you have 16 ranked maps and most of them with 9+ rating, while there are people that map VERY good maps and get something about 7.5, and most of them don't complain, seriously.
just complaining to the 1 voters.
btw, some of my favourtie maps:
kokoro, 8.91
uraomote lovers 9.24
stardust 9.18

they're clearly better than my maps though the rating is not very high, i admit it but not sth 7.5, seriously.
mm201
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

MetalMario201 wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/5160
had a short look, old map is old, i agree 7.7 is too low, but this is also not a map as great as what i mentioned. difference can be easily seen when you start to learn those maps really have sth "IN" them.
this is a good map, not sth really great. will vote 9, or maybe 8, -1 for lots of copy&paste.

edit: is this arguement really meaningful... what i mean is you could delete all the 1/2/3s and recalculate the star rating in your brain, don't want to just judge maps here.
Shiro
Rating system doesn't mean anything anymore anyway. People just auto-vote 10 when the map is Nightcore/touhou/hatsune/anime. Others auto-vote 1 the same way. Then, people vote 1 when they couldn't FC the map, or couldn't pass it, or stupid reasons like that. Most of the people who rate don't even play all the diffs and take the time to think how good or bad the map actually was. Rating 10 or 1 just makes no sense.
Too bad it's a flaw inherent to the community that can't be fixed.

Grats on your ranked map by the way.
lovhin456
LOL I'm really late but congrats anyways :3
GabrielRKF
What a amazing map
Love it~
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
if you guys still don't know what i mean...

for some, hate the mapper = hate the map.

think about how to be a good mapper?
SPOILER
1. you need a beyond average skill.
2. you need to keep your mouth so you won't get 1 from "hate the mapper"
it's easy to get 9.5, come on guys.


Mismagius

NatsumeRin wrote:

if you guys still don't know what i mean...

for some, hate the mapper = hate the map.

think about how to be a good mapper?
SPOILER
1. you need a beyond average skill.
2. you need to keep your mouth so you won't get 1 from "hate the mapper"
it's easy to get 9.5, come on guys.

SPOILER
[attachment=1:b0e75]hajimari.jpg[/attachment:b0e75]
[attachment=0:b0e75]hajimari2.png[/attachment:b0e75]
Try to map a english song and then get 9.5.
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Blue Dragon wrote:

Try to map a english song and then get 9.5.
still complain about that? well, my style doesn't fit that. but if there's no haters (for me), i'm confidence to get a 9.3 or about.
Takuma
you complain too much
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Takuma wrote:

you complain too much
until things get improved.

edit: go to mod better/ map better/ say more "you complain too much", whatever. different people have different choice i think.
Takuma

NatsumeRin wrote:

Takuma wrote:

you complain too much
until things get improved.
You can't "improve" peoples opinions, sir. If you know what your map deserves, then that should be good enough.

EDIT: HAY WATZ UP MAFIA

EDIT2: LOL ^
Mafiamaster
lol
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Mafiamaster wrote:

lol
*sigh.
Curisu
lol at amazing sb and map :D
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