Junichi Masuda - Shion Town no Thema [Osu|OsuMania] · forum

Julie

Joined March 2013

Julie 2015-09-28T14:58:40+00:00

[General]

I know this might sound really stupid haha, but add "Lumael" in tags. Even if the full GDer name is in his diff, he still deserve his name in tags. And if you think about it, it does make sense, that mean when we search his name we can also find the other difficulty, or if someone accidently delete his GD, they can still find the map by typing "Lumael".

Unuse hitsound : normal-hitwhistle.wav, all difficulty are using soft custom 1 histound, and there is not custom keysound that are use for mania, so please remove this unuse file.

soft-hitwhistle.wav This are unrankable, since they start after 5ms.
soft-hitfinish.wav could be better so that the main sound is closer to 5ms.
Here you go : https://puu.sh/krgk4.zip

[Lumael's Easy]

00:18:360 (3,1) - Only part that is over 1.25x spacing, is currently 1.46x, you probably move it accidently, put it back to 1.20x >w<.

00:23:609 (4) - Remove, since you didn't even map this sound as well 00:31:243 - , and is easier if you just map the main sound for beginners player

Nothing more to point out, should be ready.

[Normal]

There is a bunch of unconsistent spacing, Normal and Easy should't be having spacing issue detect by AImod.
Try pressing ctrl + shift + a, you will see a box pop out saying "No problem were found in this map!". Now try checking the box above, you will see this :

AImod don't detect all the spacing issue everytimes, so I'll point them out.

I'll supose your main distance spacing for Normal is 0.90x since you use that mostly.
You might be having trouble with the begining spacing due to your 0.90x SV, which is probably not suggested in the song, since the rhythm is the same all the way to the end, the only thing that change is some new instrument joining in the music, but the rhythmn is still the same everytimes.

00:01:184 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - All these are near 1.00x spacing.

00:03:092 (3) - NC this like you did here 00:06:909 (1) - , since you mostly kept your NC at each stanza, so it will be more consistent instead of having one combo with 5 notes.

00:07:863 (2,1) - These spacing is 0.70x

00:10:726 (3) - NC this since you did 00:18:360 (1) - , should be the same, and same reason as 00:03:092 (3) - .

00:16:452 (1,2,3) - Next time for your future map, try not to make these kind of small slider that only touch the border border border of the next one, it doesn't really look good in game, right now is fine, I supose is to make it flow with your Hard, but just a tips for next map xD.

00:17:406 (3,1) - Spacing between these are 0.76x.

00:27:903 (1,2) - Really unconsistent spacing and easy to see it. The spacing is 0.97x between these, which is more close to 1.00x, and is pretty easier to see it, since you did this sort of rhythm twice, 00:16:452 (1,2,3) - and here 00:27:903 (1,2,3) - . The slider touch a bit at 00:16:452 (1,2,3) - and 00:28:380 (2,3) - while 00:27:903 (1,2) - don't.

00:31:720 (1,2) - Spacing is unconsistent, the spacing between them is 0.75x, it should be the same as 00:33:629 (3,4) - , and if mapping a harder level, usually this 00:33:629 (3,4) - should be lower spacing then this 00:31:720 (1,2) -.

00:33:629 (3) - NC this, for the new stanza.

00:44:126 (1) - Hmm maybe abusing combo here hahaha, don't NC this xD. Keep it consistent with the part before and so that it fit the symetric.

[Hard]

00:03:092 (3) - NC this like you did here 00:06:909 (1) - .

00:16:452 (1,2,3) - Spacing are pretty huge compare to the other 1/4 beat xD, it can really be unexpected by players and feel unconfortable, because this sound 00:17:168 (2) - is really low, there no really new sound, is only a repeat of the previous sound in the song, so I really suggest deleting it, it shouldn't be a note where you have to tap for.

00:10:488 (5,4) - Delete these 2, it feel kinda force to play, and player can feel better the begining of a new sound.

00:16:452 (1,2) - This sudendly feel kinda too easy compare to 00:08:818 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:24:086 (1,2,3,4) - , the difficulty of playing should feel the same for these part xD.

00:20:030 (4,6) - same reason as 00:10:488 (5,4) -

00:29:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should feel the same as 00:14:543 (1,2,3,4) - , or the other way around.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

[General for mania]

Try lowering the volume, 100% is so huge @.@. It feel like the soft-hitnormal is taking over the song because is really loud compare to the song.

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Faded's 7K NM]

00:19:315 (19315|0,19792|1) - Move these note to the right, so it feel more symetrical to 00:16:452 (16452|0,16929|1,17406|2,17883|0) - , and that it doesn't feel like is a part of this 00:20:269 (20269|2,20746|1,21223|0,21700|1,22178|2) - .

00:23:132 (23132|4) - Move to the 2nd column, so that it match with the background pitch, because the instrument in the background it go lower pitch and higher at 00:23:609 - .

00:27:426 (27426|0) - same reason as the 1st one, to flow like this 00:24:086 (24086|0,24563|1,25040|2,25517|1) - .

00:29:812 (29812|2,30289|0,30766|2,31243|0) - This isn't supose to be the same column, the sound you map for these small note aren't the same in the song.

00:45:080 - to 00:46:989 - Your whistle hitsound are starting to be unconsistent, check what you did on your EZ.

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Spayyce 2015-09-28T18:23:06+00:00

Julie wrote:
[General]

I know this might sound really stupid haha, but add "Lumael" in tags. Even if the full GDer name is in his diff, he still deserve his name in tags. And if you think about it, it does make sense, that mean when we search his name we can also find the other difficulty, or if someone accidently delete his GD, they can still find the map by typing "Lumael". added. I totally forgot x.x

Unuse hitsound : normal-hitwhistle.wav, all difficulty are using soft custom 1 histound, and there is not custom keysound that are use for mania, so please remove this unuse file. removed thanks

soft-hitwhistle.wav This are unrankable, since they start after 5ms.
soft-hitfinish.wav could be better so that the main sound is closer to 5ms.
Here you go : https://puu.sh/krgk4.zip thank you <3

[Normal]

There is a bunch of unconsistent spacing, Normal and Easy should't be having spacing issue detect by AImod.
Try pressing ctrl + shift + a, you will see a box pop out saying "No problem were found in this map!". Now try checking the box above, you will see this :

AImod don't detect all the spacing issue everytimes, so I'll point them out.

I'll supose your main distance spacing for Normal is 0.90x since you use that mostly.
You might be having trouble with the begining spacing due to your 0.90x SV, which is probably not suggested in the song, since the rhythm is the same all the way to the end, the only thing that change is some new instrument joining in the music, but the rhythmn is still the same everytimes.

00:01:184 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - All these are near 1.00x spacing. changed them all around

00:03:092 (3) - NC this like you did here 00:06:909 (1) - , since you mostly kept your NC at each stanza, so it will be more consistent instead of having one combo with 5 notes. changed thank you

00:07:863 (2,1) - These spacing is 0.70x It's fine for me? :S

00:10:726 (3) - NC this since you did 00:18:360 (1) - , should be the same, and same reason as 00:03:092 (3) - .missed this. good find fixed

00:16:452 (1,2,3) - Next time for your future map, try not to make these kind of small slider that only touch the border border border of the next one, it doesn't really look good in game, right now is fine, I supose is to make it flow with your Hard, but just a tips for next map xD. Yeah, I made sure not to make them touch each of the borders.

00:17:406 (3,1) - Spacing between these are 0.76x.

00:27:903 (1,2) - Really unconsistent spacing and easy to see it. The spacing is 0.97x between these, which is more close to 1.00x, and is pretty easier to see it, since you did this sort of rhythm twice, 00:16:452 (1,2,3) - and here 00:27:903 (1,2,3) - . The slider touch a bit at 00:16:452 (1,2,3) - and 00:28:380 (2,3) - while 00:27:903 (1,2) - don't.

00:31:720 (1,2) - Spacing is unconsistent, the spacing between them is 0.75x, it should be the same as 00:33:629 (3,4) - , and if mapping a harder level, usually this 00:33:629 (3,4) - should be lower spacing then this 00:31:720 (1,2) -.

00:33:629 (3) - NC this, for the new stanza.

00:44:126 (1) - Hmm maybe abusing combo here hahaha, don't NC this xD. Keep it consistent with the part before and so that it fit the symetric. mistake on my part haha I stomped it XD

I believe I have fixed all inconsistencies with spacing

[Hard]

00:03:092 (3) - NC this like you did here 00:06:909 (1) - donee C:

00:16:452 (1,2,3) - Spacing are pretty huge compare to the other 1/4 beat xD, it can really be unexpected by players and feel unconfortable, because this sound 00:17:168 (2) - is really low, there no really new sound, is only a repeat of the previous sound in the song, so I really suggest deleting it, it shouldn't be a note where you have to tap for. I removed the note in question (inb4 ENN spread C:)

00:10:488 (5,4) - Delete these 2, it feel kinda force to play, and player can feel better the begining of a new sound. I want to keep them here for consistency.

00:16:452 (1,2) - This sudendly feel kinda too easy compare to 00:08:818 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:24:086 (1,2,3,4) - , the difficulty of playing should feel the same for these part xD. you told me about the spacing of a note before x.x

00:20:030 (4,6) - same reason as 00:10:488 (5,4) -consistency aswell for the upcoming notes c:

00:29:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should feel the same as 00:14:543 (1,2,3,4) - , or the other way around. improved on it best I could without messing up the rest of the notes xD
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for the mod really appreciate it

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-09-28T23:33:46+00:00

update fixed all

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Pokemon Red & blue - lavender town theme (music).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 8579
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shion Town no Thema
TitleUnicode:シオンタウンのテーマ
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:増田 順一
Creator:[ Space ]
Version:Lumael's Easy
Source:ポケットモンスター 赤・緑
Tags:Lumael -Faded- Lavender Theme Pokémon Red Green and Blue versions LucaSA4 Yellow Syndrome creepypasta green pokemon
BeatmapID:725705
BeatmapSetID:325899

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2.5
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"pokemonlavender.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1184,477.13717693837,4,2,1,40,1,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 158,226,156
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 123,176,202
Combo4 : 226,156,156

[HitObjects]
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320,72,3092,2,0,P|396:64|488:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,164,4523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,188,6432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,264,6909,2,0,P|128:272|36:264,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,188,11681,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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320,204,13589,2,0,P|316:248|327:283,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,360,14543,2,0,B|316:400|256:352|256:352|232:288|160:280,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,216,16452,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,104,17406,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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13,15,24086,5,4,0:0:0:0:
89,190,25040,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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336,268,36492,2,0,P|335:307|350:344,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,37446,1,4,0:0:0:0:
392,112,38400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,144,39354,6,0,L|32:152,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,256,43172,2,0,P|400:176|372:64,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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132,168,46034,2,0,L|52:171,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,268,46989,1,4,0:0:0:0:

hmm okay thats it I think, it was quite hard to find a good way to replace notes after fixing spacing there, anyway I tried my best, hopefully enough for ranking
Thhx for mod >w<

Bara-

11,971 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-09-29T14:08:22+00:00

Recheck

[General]
• Usage of mp3 and ogg as hitsounds is not recommended (consider converting to .wav?):
{soft-hitwhistle.mp3}
It's not that big of a deal, but .wav files are much better used for hitsounds

[Lumael]
00:18:360 (3,1) - Inappropriate spacing. There may not be any jump (or low DS) part in an easy (nor in normal)!
00:36:492 (2,3) - Blanket?
Good diff!

[Normal]
Please increase DS by 0.05-0.1 (to 0.95-1) so the 1/2 will not overlap. It is quite ugly, and can cause DQs
00:08:818 (1,2) - Spacing
Also good, as all spacing issues were found by Julie

[Hard]
00:16:452 (1,2) - No reason for jump. It doesn't fit here at all
00:41:263 (1,2,1,2) - The spacing here makes no sense, as there are no strong sounds indicating jumps

Okay, I personally think the map needs some more work, but that's spacing based
Please turn off grid snap, and snap everything to the same DS (even in Hard, unless you feel a jump is right)
You don't need to turn grid snap off, but it causes more equal distance which plays much more smoother

Call me when it's all fixed

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-09-29T14:14:18+00:00

More spacing issues? Damn I suck appling mods. I will fix when I get home

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Spayyce 2015-09-29T20:17:48+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
Recheck

[General]
• Usage of mp3 and ogg as hitsounds is not recommended (consider converting to .wav?):
{soft-hitwhistle.mp3} I was just told you use .mp3's rather than the .wav counterpart.
It's not that big of a deal, but .wav files are much better used for hitsounds

[Normal]
Please increase DS by 0.05-0.1 (to 0.95-1) so the 1/2 will not overlap. It is quite ugly, and can cause DQs
00:08:818 (1,2) - Spacing
Also good, as all spacing issues were found by Julie distanced everything accordingly and fixed some stacking issues I found

[Hard]
00:16:452 (1,2) - No reason for jump. It doesn't fit here at allfixed it with a slight change in the upcoming pattern c:
00:41:263 (1,2,1,2) - The spacing here makes no sense, as there are no strong sounds indicating jumps I made my indication more obvious, it should play smoother and cleaner now.

Okay, I personally think the map needs some more work, but that's spacing based
Please turn off grid snap, and snap everything to the same DS (even in Hard, unless you feel a jump is right)
You don't need to turn grid snap off, but it causes more equal distance which plays much more smoother

Call me when it's all fixed

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2015-09-29T20:54:08+00:00

Oh gawd, my bad, I just cut the part didn't knew it was .mp3, I'm going to convert it for you if you want when I get back home in 2 hours xD.

Thanks bara x3. I'm going to recheck the whole thing again after bubble as well xD.

EDIT : here you go https://puu.sh/ksOfo.zip , too bored in class so did it in class xD
I have no idea why my audacity suddendly start export mp3 file =w=.

Phos-

773 posts

Joined December 2012

Phos- 2015-09-29T21:49:28+00:00

Julie wrote:
[General for mania]

Try lowering the volume, 100% is so huge @.@. It feel like the soft-hitnormal is taking over the song because is really loud compare to the song. Okay, I reduced it to 50%.
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[Faded's 7K NM]

00:19:315 (19315|0,19792|1) - Move these note to the right, so it feel more symetrical to 00:16:452 (16452|0,16929|1,17406|2,17883|0) - , and that it doesn't feel like is a part of this 00:20:269 (20269|2,20746|1,21223|0,21700|1,22178|2) - . Okay, I made it more symmetrical.

00:23:132 (23132|4) - Move to the 2nd column, so that it match with the background pitch, because the instrument in the background it go lower pitch and higher at 00:23:609 - . Okay, done.

00:27:426 (27426|0) - same reason as the 1st one, to flow like this 00:24:086 (24086|0,24563|1,25040|2,25517|1) - . Done.

00:29:812 (29812|2,30289|0,30766|2,31243|0) - This isn't supose to be the same column, the sound you map for these small note aren't the same in the song. Okay, done.

00:45:080 - to 00:46:989 - Your whistle hitsound are starting to be unconsistent, check what you did on your EZ. Done~

Thanks for modding!

Updated .osu files

[Easy]

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Pokemon Red & blue - lavender town theme (music).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 8579
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Shion Town no Thema
TitleUnicode:シオンタウンのテーマ
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:増田 順一
Creator:[ Space ]
Version:Faded's 7K EZ
Source:ポケットモンスター 赤・緑
Tags:Lumael -Faded- Lavender Theme Pokémon Red Green and Blue versions LucaSA4 Yellow Syndrome creepypasta green pokemon
BeatmapID:758229
BeatmapSetID:325899

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:7
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"pokemonlavender.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1184,477.13717693837,4,2,1,50,1,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 158,226,156
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 123,176,202
Combo4 : 226,156,156

[HitObjects]
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Title:Shion Town no Thema
TitleUnicode:シオンタウンのテーマ
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:増田 順一
Creator:[ Space ]
Version:Faded's 7K NM
Source:ポケットモンスター 赤・緑
Tags:Lumael -Faded- Lavender Theme Pokémon Red Green and Blue versions LucaSA4 Yellow Syndrome creepypasta green pokemon
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Irreversible

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2015-09-29T21:53:17+00:00

dis so scary X_X

Lumael

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Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-09-29T22:11:38+00:00

;w; I just checked my diff and I found out that you didn't update it Space ;w; that's why there's still spacing issues..

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Spayyce 2015-09-29T23:43:19+00:00

huh? It should be updated? hmm, I may double check it since I updated it in college. Strange, it all worked fine on my side..

EDIT: Expect these to be all updated tomorrow evening (my time yo)

EDIT EDIT: I applied all the difficulties, and they should be good to go c:

Bara-

11,971 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-09-30T16:29:52+00:00

BUBBLED!!!

The bubble is a ghost, you cannot see it normally :p

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-09-30T16:41:11+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
BUBBLED!!!

The bubble is a ghost, you cannot see it normally :p

Unless you quote

Bara-

11,971 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-09-30T16:46:47+00:00

Then it's still invisible

Lumael

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Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-09-30T17:01:54+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
Then it's still invisible

Huhh XD. Btw thanks for bubble:3

Julie

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Joined March 2013

Julie 2015-09-30T17:12:48+00:00

Space contact me when you get online x3!!

Spayyce

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Topic Starter

Spayyce 2015-09-30T19:04:41+00:00

thank you for the bubble c: <3

Phos-

773 posts

Joined December 2012

Phos- 2015-09-30T19:06:53+00:00

thanks for bubble :3
hype hype

Julie

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Julie 2015-09-30T20:45:17+00:00

HYPE HYPE IS READY TO GO!!
CONGRATZ SPACE, FADED AND LUMAEL XD!!

Was fun working with you Baruru >w<!

Re-check and just point out 2 stuff

2015-09-30 15:09 Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/723758 Junichi Masuda - Shion Town no Thema [Hard]]
2015-09-30 15:09 Julie: 00:29:096 (3,4) - ctrl + g the rhythm,00:29:335 - this sound should be a tapable note, instead of an end of slider
2015-09-30 15:10 Julie: end of slider aren't tap by user.
2015-09-30 15:10 [ Space ]: oh
2015-09-30 15:10 [ Space ]: what about this overlap it creates: http://puu.sh/ktPZg/12c4d4f7ec.jpg
2015-09-30 15:12 Julie: ohh
2015-09-30 15:12 Julie: redo pattern a bit
2015-09-30 15:13 Julie: jsut ctrl +g the rhythm xD
2015-09-30 15:13 Julie: ofc need to change a bit the placement
2015-09-30 15:13 [ Space ]: fixed it, it should be fine
2015-09-30 15:16 Julie: cool update please
2015-09-30 15:16 Julie: x3
2015-09-30 15:16 Julie: dont mind if the bubble pop, you dont need re-bub just heart icon xD
2015-09-30 15:17 [ Space ]: donee
2015-09-30 15:22 Julie: in normal, 00:46:989 (3) - NC like you did in Hard?
2015-09-30 15:22 Julie: also new part of the song xD
2015-09-30 15:23 [ Space ]: finished c:

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-09-30T20:47:02+00:00

First ranked gd o///// thanks you so muuch !

Spayyce

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Topic Starter

Spayyce 2015-09-30T20:58:09+00:00

HYPE

DD 2nd ranked beatmap ! Lub you all <3

Phos-

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Phos- 2015-09-30T21:09:40+00:00

My first ranked guest difficulties as well, thanks for the taking the time to check this out and qualify it ^^

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

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Joined May 2012

Okoayu 2015-09-30T21:51:46+00:00

just wandering through and wondering why you didn't mute the sliderslides because things like 00:31:720 (1,2,1,2,1) - where volumes on the sliders as a whole increase sound very weird if you have a sliderslide in there as well because it's getting so much louder in comparison to the heads that the last 2 just sound lol

but that might me my personal bias towards sliderslides

also
hard
00:43:172 (3) - why exactly does this of all things not have a new combo lol
also just saying that 00:37:446 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - as a whole seem hella uninspired but ok

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-09-30T22:47:14+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
just wandering through and wondering why you didn't mute the sliderslides because things like 00:31:720 (1,2,1,2,1) - where volumes on the sliders as a whole increase sound very weird if you have a sliderslide in there as well because it's getting so much louder in comparison to the heads that the last 2 just sound lol

but that might me my personal bias towards sliderslides

also
hard
00:43:172 (3) - why exactly does this of all things not have a new combo lolmeh xD
also just saying that 00:37:446 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - as a whole seem hella uninspired but ok ironically it took the longest part to make to satisfaction XD

I did at one point, although I prefered them with sound in the end lol

EDIT: Regarding the NC we'll get it fixed up tomorrow, when everyone is online.

skystorms88

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Joined February 2014

skystorms88 2015-10-01T01:26:43+00:00

If somehow this map got DQ'ed, You should remove '7K' from mania's diff name:

7K EZ -> EZ
7K NM -> NM (also don't forget the GD mapper's name)

Having 'x-K' diffname in single key-count mania mapset is unnecessary, imo.

Fycho

Global Moderator

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Fycho 2015-10-01T04:08:18+00:00

[General]

soft-hitwhistle.wav only has 56ms which is less than 100ms, causes issues with soundcards, and disobeys the current ranking criteria.
Romanised Title must be Shion Town no Theme. テーマ is a borrowed word(katakana), we only romanise it in English way not in Romaji. For some reason this guy made a spelling mistake and not found it later, apologies for it.
Artist: 増田順一, http://puu.sh/iCHsL/c11b6cbf71.jpg

[Hard]
I'd like to say this difficulty is severely overmapped, and doesn't fit the music well. Moreover, the whole hitsounds volume of the map is too large. And the sliderspeed is a way too fast. These issues can be discussed/elaborated on further in my opinion.

00:09:533 (3) -00:10:488 (5) - for this kind of beats, which are very weak in music, if you want to map this, at least decrease the hitsounds volume of it, current it's too noisy.
00:20:030 (4) - overmapped
00:22:416 (2) - overmapped
00:23:848 (6) - overmapped
00:27:187 (2,4) - ^
...

Not going to point out those overmapped sliderends, persoanlly I think sliderend overmapping is slightly accepted.

puxtu

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puxtu 2015-10-01T08:15:59+00:00

skystorms88 wrote:
If somehow this map got DQ'ed, You should remove '7K' from mania's diff name:

7K EZ -> EZ
7K NM -> NM (also don't forget the GD mapper's name)

Having 'x-K' diffname in single key-count mania mapset is unnecessary, imo.

how can a BN missed this?

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-10-01T11:47:58+00:00

e.e

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-10-01T12:48:16+00:00

puxtu wrote:
skystorms88 wrote:
If somehow this map got DQ'ed, You should remove '7K' from mania's diff name:

7K EZ -> EZ
7K NM -> NM (also don't forget the GD mapper's name)

Having 'x-K' diffname in single key-count mania mapset is unnecessary, imo.
how can a BN missed this?

Guidelines ≠ Criteria

Julie

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Joined March 2013

Julie 2015-10-01T13:57:14+00:00

puxtu wrote:
skystorms88 wrote:
If somehow this map got DQ'ed, You should remove '7K' from mania's diff name:

7K EZ -> EZ
7K NM -> NM (also don't forget the GD mapper's name)

Having 'x-K' diffname in single key-count mania mapset is unnecessary, imo.
how can a BN missed this?

puxtu you know me, this is my 1st time making this error =w=, too tired of uni.

Yo check back the 2 point you decline from me on Hard, imma go more in details on the overmap and explain why is consider overmap, and probably will mess up a bit with spread, will also help that out. Lets get it back on this weeks.

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Spayyce 2015-10-01T14:04:57+00:00

Fycho wrote:
[General]
soft-hitwhistle.wav only has 56ms which is less than 100ms, causes issues with soundcards, and disobeys the current ranking criteria. fml i gotta change this again q.q alright
Romanised Title must be Shion Town no Theme. テーマ is a borrowed word(katakana), we only romanise it in English way not in Romaji. For some reason this guy made a spelling mistake and not found it later, apologies for it. My other map had this on the end and I was told it had no problem with the current ranking procedures, I will anyway.
Artist: 増田順一, http://puu.sh/iCHsL/c11b6cbf71.jpg
It is?

[Hard]
I'd like to say this difficulty is severely overmapped, and doesn't fit the music well. Moreover, the whole hitsounds volume of the map is too large. And the sliderspeed is a way too fast. These issues can be discussed/elaborated on further in my opinion.
00:09:533 (3) -00:10:488 (5) - for this kind of beats, which are very weak in music, if you want to map this, at least decrease the hitsounds volume of it, current it's too noisy. reduced to 25% volume
00:20:030 (4) - overmapped removed
00:22:416 (2) - overmapped changed to a slider and removed the note in question
00:23:848 (6) - overmapped removed
00:27:187 (2,4) - ^ removed them both
...
Not going to point out those overmapped sliderends, persoanlly I think sliderend overmapping is slightly accepted.

Thanks for checking! I need to change a few things beforehand, also I tried my best to make sure it wasn't a difficulty that is an obviously inflated version of the normal as best I could. x.x

EDIT: Someone else can change the length, mine is fking up whenever I open the file and I cannot do anything with it without my whole computer dying.

Julie

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Joined March 2013

Julie 2015-10-01T14:30:43+00:00

[Normal]

00:16:452 (1,2,3) - and 00:27:903 (1,2,3) - Keep this kind of rhythm for hard. It might cause a distability among normal player.

[Hard]

00:09:533 (3) - is not really mapped for anything, the only sound that appear there is a sound that appear on every red stick, really low background sound and player would'nt really feel it.

00:10:488 (5) - ^

00:09:772 (4) - This rhythm should be like 00:08:818 (1,2) - , because this 00:10:249 - is one of the main sound, which mean one of the important sound to map, so player should be able to hit this sound instead of just dragging the cursor.

00:11:442 (2,4) - Same reason as 00:09:533 (3) -

00:20:030 (4) -
Suggestion : Instead of this being a tapable note where player will hit on a no sound, make it an end of a slider. Make a slider that start here 00:19:792 - (the main sound) to here 00:20:030 - , just like you did here 00:18:360 (1,2) - . So that mean this one 00:19:315 (3) - would become a small slider as well.

Suggestion : Since if you do the suggestion above, most of the map will be short slider, and will be a bit boring to play if is all the same. so how about just making this 00:19:315 (3) - into a small slider to 00:19:553 - (for the weak sound) , delete 00:20:030 (4) - , and put a normal note here 00:19:792 - . That mean there will be a small break for the huge change in instrument pitch.

00:20:746 (2,3) - same reason as 00:20:030 (4) - , suggest taking my 1st suggestion.

00:22:416 (2) - Welp they consider this as overmap, is a really low repeat sound of this sound 00:22:178 - , which also appear here 00:22:893 - and here 00:23:370 - , so suggest making a small slider like 00:22:655 (3,4) -

00:23:609 (5,6) - These 2 should be a small slider like these 00:22:655 (3,4) - , the rhythm is still the same xD.

00:25:279 (2,4) -same reason as 00:22:416 (2) - , this soound is on every red tick, but most player ill barely notice what is matching for.

00:27:187 (2,4) - ^

00:29:096 (3) - ^

XD! By the way space, don't feel bad for me and baruru x3.

For the hard, since all the song go to the same rhythm, if you ever lose some idea on pattern feel free to pm me or baruru

!!!

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puxtu 2015-10-01T14:43:34+00:00

Julie wrote:
puxtu you know me, this is my 1st time making this error =w=, too tired of uni.

I love you too

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-01T15:20:32+00:00

Julie wrote:
[Normal]

00:16:452 (1,2,3) - and 00:27:903 (1,2,3) - Keep this kind of rhythm for hard. It might cause a distability among normal player. fixed like you said C:

[Hard]

00:09:533 (3) - is not really mapped for anything, the only sound that appear there is a sound that appear on every red stick, really low background sound and player would'nt really feel it.

00:10:488 (5) - ^

00:09:772 (4) - This rhythm should be like 00:08:818 (1,2) - , because this 00:10:249 - is one of the main sound, which mean one of the important sound to map, so player should be able to hit this sound instead of just dragging the cursor.

00:11:442 (2,4) - Same reason as 00:09:533 (3) -

00:20:030 (4) -
Suggestion : Instead of this being a tapable note where player will hit on a no sound, make it an end of a slider. Make a slider that start here 00:19:792 - (the main sound) to here 00:20:030 - , just like you did here 00:18:360 (1,2) - . So that mean this one 00:19:315 (3) - would become a small slider as well.

Suggestion : Since if you do the suggestion above, most of the map will be short slider, and will be a bit boring to play if is all the same. so how about just making this 00:19:315 (3) - into a small slider to 00:19:553 - (for the weak sound) , delete 00:20:030 (4) - , and put a normal note here 00:19:792 - . That mean there will be a small break for the huge change in instrument pitch.

00:20:746 (2,3) - same reason as 00:20:030 (4) - , suggest taking my 1st suggestion.

00:22:416 (2) - Welp they consider this as overmap, is a really low repeat sound of this sound 00:22:178 - , which also appear here 00:22:893 - and here 00:23:370 - , so suggest making a small slider like 00:22:655 (3,4) -

00:23:609 (5,6) - These 2 should be a small slider like these 00:22:655 (3,4) - , the rhythm is still the same xD.

00:25:279 (2,4) -same reason as 00:22:416 (2) - , this soound is on every red tick, but most player ill barely notice what is matching for.

00:27:187 (2,4) - ^

00:29:096 (3) - ^

XD! By the way space, don't feel bad for me and baruru x3.

For the hard, since all the song go to the same rhythm, if you ever lose some idea on pattern feel free to pm me or baruru !!!

i dont even recognise my map anymore

I'm deleting the hard also, because it's becoming a normal with really inflated CS and slider velocity, which I know will get complained at for being an 'inflated normal'. It was also too crumbly (if that's the right word) because when I would take one thing out the rest of it would fall, creating two seperate problems out of one, ect.

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-10-01T15:29:36+00:00

Faded- should be the submitter now.-.

Okoayu

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Okoayu 2015-10-01T15:38:45+00:00

yes you just lost host privileges

Phos-

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Phos- 2015-10-01T15:47:55+00:00

Space did you legit just delete a difficulty that you've worked so hard on up until now?
I do understand how you feel, getting frustrated with large mod posts, disqualifications, etc but you have to remember this though; most of these are just suggestions. If you don't like how a suggestion seems, then you are free to deny it. (as long as it isn't one of the DQ reasons, which you've kinda already fixed). Who cares if people complain that it's an "inflated normal"? As long as it's still a hard by rankability standards, it doesn't matter.

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-01T16:28:51+00:00

-Faded- wrote:
Space did you legit just delete a difficulty that you've worked so hard on up until now?
I do understand how you feel, getting frustrated with large mod posts, disqualifications, etc but you have to remember this though; most of these are just suggestions. If you don't like how a suggestion seems, then you are free to deny it. (as long as it isn't one of the DQ reasons, which you've kinda already fixed). Who cares if people complain that it's an "inflated normal"? As long as it's still a hard by rankability standards, it doesn't matter.

With the amount of mods regarding 'overmap' it would get DQ'ed again and again and again, I honestly don't care at this point. It would end up just above 2 stars by the end.

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-01T16:47:34+00:00

resubmitted hard with like ALL changes MADE SO E0gftwegkargaseg

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Okoayu 2015-10-01T17:18:54+00:00

[easy]
00:16:452 (1,2,3) - with all the symmetry and stuff going on,
why

like
why do you do that to me by slightly overlapping these 2 while avoiding anything like that throughout the restttt

00:33:629 (2) - could u have this one bend at the sound or something http://puu.sh/kuSct/93842ddf35.jpg is an idea because right now it just goes partly over its own end in order to highlight exactly nothing in particular

log

18:45 Okoratu: xD by deleting your hard you really lost the ability to host it because of the contribution rule lol
18:47 Okoratu: http://puu.sh/kuQvz/86fab81b47.png y did it do this
18:51 *[ Space ] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/793858 Junichi Masuda - Shion Town no Thema [Advanced]]
18:51 [ Space ]: I resubmitted as advanced
18:51 [ Space ]: Check it out c:
18:51 Okoratu: Thema
18:51 Okoratu: or
18:51 Okoratu: Theme
18:51 Okoratu: dzzt
18:51 [ Space ]: ffs
18:52 [ Space ]: ok changed
18:56 Okoratu: xD
18:57 Okoratu: 00:20:269 (1,2,3) -
18:57 Okoratu: is meh
18:57 Okoratu: hh
18:57 [ Space ]: just like the rest of it ik
18:58 Okoratu: especially since you did 00:12:635 (1,2,3,4,1) - for the same instance just before
18:58 Okoratu: and if at all i'd do this like http://puu.sh/kuR7b/c8a39ebaaa.jpg
18:58 [ Space ]: fixed it
18:58 Okoratu: because that doesn't leave you with the strongestt sound of that on the end of 3 :/
18:59 Okoratu: 00:29:812 (4,1) -
18:59 Okoratu: combos why
19:00 Okoratu: 00:18:360 (3) -
19:01 [ Space ]: fixed combo
19:02 [ Space ]: ok post this as an irc and i will give kds c:
19:02 Okoratu: idk 00:37:446 (1,2) - are kind a different from the sliderspammery that follows how about overmapping sliderends like 00:12:635 (1,2,3,4) -
19:02 [ Space ]: oh more xd
19:03 Okoratu: dunno
19:03 Okoratu: or circles but then it's be a lot of circles
19:03 [ Space ]: It's fine for me
19:03 [ Space ]: I don't see what I can do, the music repeats itself
19:03 [ Space ]: so why should I change the type of slider?
19:04 [ Space ]: on the other 'sliderspam' you can hear 4 instances, on the part you mentioned you can only hear two
19:04 Okoratu: because 00:37:446 (1,2) - has more stressed sounds than 00:39:354 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
19:04 Okoratu: ??
19:04 [ Space ]: I don't want to change it because then everyone will jump at the fact it's 'overmapped'
19:05 Okoratu: so are 00:12:635 (1,2,3,4) - but that's just sliderends lol
19:05 Okoratu: but you got a point there
19:05 [ Space ]: yeah, there is only two emphasised beats on the part you mentioned
19:06 Okoratu: on 00:37:446 (1,2) - ?
19:06 [ Space ]: yeah
19:06 Okoratu: melody does dudu dudu on 1/1 there though
19:06 Okoratu: and doesnt on the other sliders
19:06 Okoratu: which was ~the argument~
19:07 [ Space ]: but the beat I put the notes on is /more/ emphasised than the ones at the end of the slider
19:08 Okoratu: and melody is similar to 00:22:178 (1,2,3,4) - just the sounds are different, the arrangement is similar
19:08 Okoratu: but whatever
19:08 [ Space ]: k
19:10 Okoratu: 00:31:720 (1,2,1,2) - sv changes in combination with volume could also be cool but that's completely up to you
19:11 [ Space ]: i think it's fine with the volume increment

19:12 Okoratu: comboing in normal has the same random screwups as advanced
19:12 Okoratu: 00:27:903 (3) -
19:12 Okoratu: lol xd
19:12 Okoratu: even easy has more circles than your normal
19:12 Okoratu: uh
19:12 Okoratu: m
19:13 Okoratu: dafuq
19:16 [ Space ]: it's because i changed a lot of them
19:16 [ Space ]: i deleted a slider and readded it XD
19:18 Okoratu: if normal could end up at like 15 or so circles to show that you at least tried or something idk
19:18 Okoratu: XD

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-10-01T23:09:39+00:00

fixed the second one, even though none of this is a problem, ty

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Pokemon Red & blue - lavender town theme (music).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 8579
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shion Town no Theme
TitleUnicode:シオンタウンのテーマ
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:増田 順一
Creator:[ Space ]
Version:Lumael's Easy
Source:ポケットモンスター 赤・緑
Tags:Lumael -Faded- Lavender Theme Pokémon Red Green and Blue versions LucaSA4 Yellow Syndrome creepypasta green pokemon
BeatmapID:725705
BeatmapSetID:325899

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2.5
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"pokemonlavender.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1184,477.13717693837,4,2,1,40,1,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 158,226,156
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 123,176,202
Combo4 : 226,156,156

[HitObjects]
40,76,1184,6,0,P|116:68|208:76,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,148,2615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,3092,2,0,P|396:64|488:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,164,4523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,260,5001,6,0,P|408:268|316:260,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,188,6432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,264,6909,2,0,P|128:272|36:264,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,176,8341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,92,8818,6,0,L|220:80,2,160,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,188,11681,1,4,0:0:0:0:
336,32,12635,6,0,P|346:70|342:109,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,204,13589,2,0,P|316:248|327:283,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,360,14543,2,0,B|316:400|256:352|256:352|232:288|160:280,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,216,16452,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,104,17406,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,180,18360,2,0,P|56:264|112:356,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,341,20269,6,0,P|314:337|378:325,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,239,21223,2,0,P|321:243|257:255,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,163,22178,2,0,P|183:203|63:135,1,160,4|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,15,24086,5,4,0:0:0:0:
89,190,25040,1,4,0:0:0:0:
253,289,25995,2,0,P|341:295|436:283,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,100,27903,5,2,0:0:0:0:
380,158,28380,2,0,P|324:170|272:170,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,68,29812,2,0,L|504:53,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,208,31720,6,0,L|220:224,1,160,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,117,33629,2,0,B|108:81|158:87|158:87|172:51|236:22,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,114,35537,6,0,P|396:178|376:230,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,36492,2,0,P|335:307|350:344,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,37446,1,4,0:0:0:0:
392,112,38400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,144,39354,6,0,L|32:152,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,344,41263,2,0,L|224:336,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,256,43172,2,0,P|400:176|372:64,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,68,45080,6,0,L|96:72,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,168,46034,2,0,L|52:171,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,268,46989,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-02T08:04:49+00:00

Applied the easy, changes are all made. Can we rerank ^w^

Fycho

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Fycho 2015-10-02T20:30:59+00:00

there is no space between artist according his twitter, do you'd remove the space.

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-02T20:34:01+00:00

Fycho wrote:
there is no space between artist according his twitter, do you'd remove the space.

Twitter doesn't allow for spaces in names I don't think. Also according to the wikipedia page here it shows evidence of a space

Okoayu

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Okoayu 2015-10-02T20:43:18+00:00

wikipedia and credible sources are 2 completely different things

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-02T21:27:13+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
wikipedia and credible sources are 2 completely different things

So what is a "credible source" , twitter?

Shulin

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Shulin 2015-10-02T22:38:14+00:00

If you're going to romanize the Japanese title then it should be Thema not theme.

テーマ is a German loan word and not an English one.

DQ was wrong.

EDIT: Also there is a space between his name on his official blog; though debate over a space is petty and pointless.

Last edited by Shulin 2015-10-02T22:45:49+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-10-02T22:42:47+00:00

Shulin wrote:
If you're going to romanize the Japanese title then it should be Thema not theme.

テーマ is a German loan word and not an English one.

DQ was wrong.

I agree as his other map is thema as well

HappyRocket88

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HappyRocket88 2015-10-03T00:49:44+00:00

Poke me as soon as you have addressed this issue. _:3_>_

Julie

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Julie 2015-10-03T02:35:26+00:00

How about we just stick with the weird romaji here http://vgmdb.net/album/22597 xD. Really not sure if thats a mistake or not really funny, theme became "topic" @.@ xD

But yeah another evidence for the artist name I guess xD.

Bara-

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Bara- 2015-10-03T14:40:31+00:00

What the heck happened to the DL link?
Wanted to redl due to diffname change, but it keeps giving me errors ;w;

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-03T15:42:54+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
What the heck happened to the DL link?
Wanted to redl due to diffname change, but it keeps giving me errors ;w;

idk it does the same for me, I will send a puush later.

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Fycho 2015-10-04T01:00:04+00:00

His own(official) twitter is credible source, but according the official blog, both space one or non-space one is ok, in case you want to keep consistent with your another map.
But never follow wiki and vgmdb, it's not official.

Just searched a bit about テーマ yes it's from german, then thema.

Fix your hitsound and overmap then feel free to get it requalified.

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-04T11:06:24+00:00

Fycho wrote:
His own(official) twitter is credible source, but according the official blog, both space one or non-space one is ok, in case you want to keep consistent with your another map.
But never follow wiki and vgmdb, it's not official.

Just searched a bit about テーマ yes it's from german, then thema.

Fix your hitsound and overmap then feel free to get it requalified.

I already fixed overmap, so there is nothing to change on that part, and for simplicity I am going to remove the offending hitsound in question.

EDIT: gimme hart and bubbels

Bara-

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Bara- 2015-10-04T13:40:50+00:00

Rebubbled, before the ghosts can get me
Wait, this tekst is already like a ghost
HEEELLLLPPPP

Julie

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Julie 2015-10-04T15:09:13+00:00

re-recheck

General :
I guess keep it consistent on the artist name :
増田順一 -> 増田順一

- Change all the preview point to 00:08:818 - , so when people press the BG on the site, they can hear instantly the song instead of having a small blank, or a small eccho of this sound 00:08:341 - .

Advanced :
00:08:818 - + Lots of green line with volume change. This part shouldn't be 30%. For example this part 00:08:818 - is 30% while this 00:09:056 - is 50%, and like I mention before, the only sound that there is here 00:09:056 - is a repeat of this sound 00:08:818 - but really lower. So that 50% green line, you probably want to snap it at 00:09:295 - .
Also, I don't suggest putting 30% here 00:08:818 - , because starting there, there is more instrument that come into play, so it should be louder.
Same for 00:09:772 - , 00:10:726 - , 00:11:681 - , etc.

00:31:720 - I think you lower it too much, 20% hitsound volume, while it could be like this 00:35:537 - 40%.

00:37:565 - Snap this green like at 00:37:446 - .

00:38:519 - This green line move it to 00:39:354 - , is starting at 00:39:354 - that it should be the same volume as 00:41:263 - and 00:43:172 - .

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-04T15:18:16+00:00

Julie wrote:
re-recheck

General :
I guess keep it consistent on the artist name :
増田順一 -> 増田順一 done

- Change all the preview point to 00:08:818 - , so when people press the BG on the site, they can hear instantly the song instead of having a small blank, or a small eccho of this sound 00:08:341 - .
fixed
Advanced :
00:08:818 - + Lots of green line with volume change. This part shouldn't be 30%. For example this part 00:08:818 - is 30% while this 00:09:056 - is 50%, and like I mention before, the only sound that there is here 00:09:056 - is a repeat of this sound 00:08:818 - but really lower. So that 50% green line, you probably want to snap it at 00:09:295 - .
Also, I don't suggest putting 30% here 00:08:818 - , because starting there, there is more instrument that come into play, so it should be louder.
Same for 00:09:772 - , 00:10:726 - , 00:11:681 - , etc. fixed all

00:31:720 - I think you lower it too much, 20% hitsound volume, while it could be like this 00:35:537 - 40%. tweaked it a little bit c:

00:37:565 - Snap this green like at 00:37:446 - . fixed oki

00:38:519 - This green line move it to 00:39:354 - , is starting at 00:39:354 - that it should be the same volume as 00:41:263 - and 00:43:172 - . moved timing point

xaxax

Julie

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Julie 2015-10-06T03:05:06+00:00

4th and hopefully last recheck.

Normal :

Just try keep green line same as Hard, my reason for the change is on the post above and here xD.

Hard :

00:14:663 - and 00:15:617 - remove these greenline, 00:15:020 (2,4) - should be the same volume as 00:14:543 (1,3) - .

00:26:114 - and 00:24:205 - remove these green line, keep your volume consistent with 00:16:452 - (example)

00:29:812 (1) - remove the whistle at the end of the slider, it look random should be like 00:30:766 (1,2) - .

Hopefully unuse green line is not unrankable as long as it don't affect the gameplay, but just remove it if you see some after this update xD.

Faded's NM :

Oh I miss something

00:37:923 (37923|1,38877|1) - remove these LN, the same instrument also play here but with different pitch 00:29:812 (29812|5,30766|5) - , and also there isn't the same sound at 00:37:923 - and 00:38:877 - .

Like the symetrie you did, if I were to map this, I would have done copy pasta~ haha xD

Hopefully last recheck this time, sorry for delaying it so long x.x

HappyRocket88

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HappyRocket88 2015-10-06T03:23:39+00:00

At least Julie takes her time for qualifying a map. _:3_>_

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Spayyce 2015-10-06T06:33:16+00:00

I will fix it later in college lmao

Spayyce

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Spayyce 2015-10-06T09:47:50+00:00

Julie wrote:
4th and hopefully last recheck.

Normal :

Just try keep green line same as Hard, my reason for the change is on the post above and here xD. okay I will check through for consistency

Hard :

00:14:663 - and 00:15:617 - remove these greenline, 00:15:020 (2,4) - should be the same volume as 00:14:543 (1,3) - . fixed

00:26:114 - and 00:24:205 - remove these green line, keep your volume consistent with 00:16:452 - (example) done C:

00:29:812 (1) - remove the whistle at the end of the slider, it look random should be like 00:30:766 (1,2) - . lole it wasn't meant to be there ty for finding

Hopefully unuse green line is not unrankable as long as it don't affect the gameplay, but just remove it if you see some after this update xD.

thanks for re-re-recheck XD

Phos-

773 posts

Joined December 2012

Phos- 2015-10-06T15:28:01+00:00

Julie wrote:
Faded's NM :

Oh I miss something

00:37:923 (37923|1,38877|1) - remove these LN, the same instrument also play here but with different pitch 00:29:812 (29812|5,30766|5) - , and also there isn't the same sound at 00:37:923 - and 00:38:877 - . I agree with this, it's much better now :3

Thanks for modding! ^^

Updated .osu file

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Pokemon Red & blue - lavender town theme (music).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 8818
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shion Town no Thema
TitleUnicode:シオンタウンのテーマ
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:増田 順一
Creator:[ Space ]
Version:Faded's NM
Source:ポケットモンスター 赤・緑
Tags:Lumael -Faded- Lavender Theme Pokémon Red Green and Blue versions LucaSA4 Yellow Syndrome creepypasta green pokemon
BeatmapID:758230
BeatmapSetID:325899

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:7
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"pokemonlavender.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1184,477.13717693837,4,2,1,50,1,0


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Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2015-10-07T01:55:44+00:00

i re-download and it seem nothing changed, maybe recheck my point I mention? XD

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Spayyce 2015-10-07T15:49:07+00:00

Julie wrote:
i re-download and it seem nothing changed, maybe recheck my point I mention? XD

idk :s It should be alright now xD

Yuzeyun

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Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2015-10-07T16:00:07+00:00

start bag bicycle use

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2015-10-08T02:40:40+00:00

Oki re-re-re-re-rechecked XDD!

Should be fine now, sorry for draging it so long x.x!

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-10-08T02:42:15+00:00

Congratulations! \o

You've survived to Julie's ranking curse, here your reward.

RANKED MAIPU!

Lumael

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Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-10-08T02:46:49+00:00

Yey, hopefully itll last more this time:3

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2015-10-08T03:21:21+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Congratulations! \o

You've survived to Julie's ranking curse, here your reward.

RANKED MAIPU!

LOLOLOL I laugh! xD

He went through hell with me, he was up at 3am not long ago x3

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-10-08T03:28:32+00:00

Julie wrote:
LOLOLOL I laugh! xD

He went through hell with me, he was up at 3am not long ago x3

Oh did you go to hell together? Next time let me know. <3

Bara-

11,971 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-10-08T05:01:36+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Congratulations! \o

You've survived to Julie's ranking curse, here your reward.

RANKED MAIPU!

LOL

Gratz space!!

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

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Joined May 2012

Okoayu 2015-10-08T11:11:28+00:00

Congrats

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Spayyce 2015-10-09T18:17:45+00:00

thank you c:

Yuzeyun

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Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2015-10-09T18:48:21+00:00

now let's map my calm remix of dark cave

Sonnyc

7,760 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-10-13T13:24:29+00:00

Dropping some comments you could keep in mind for your future mappings:
[General]

Gray combo color was pretty distracting to read personally, since the BG was something achromatic.

[Lumael's Easy]

00:45:080 (1,2) - Pretty hard to understand why no hitsounds were existing here.

[Advanced]

00:01:184 - 00:08:818 - This section had a 50% volume which is inconsistent with Lumael's difficulty. The current volume setting is making your sliderslide sound pretty loud. Something that would've been definitely better if it was setted as a consistent 40%. Same applies for Normal.
00:14:543 (1,2,3,4) - A sloppy shaped triangle I'd say.
00:30:766 (1) - Questionable NC setting since your combo cycle was 1 stanza consistently. I personally found no reason to make this inconsistency even considering the readability issue.

Nice work. I liked the way how you made sliders.
You definitely did improved from your last mapset. Good luck for your future works!

Spayyce

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Spayyce 2015-10-13T13:47:22+00:00

I don't mind with slight inconsistency with GD's. If it was my difficulty I would probably address the issues.

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-10-19T02:31:44+00:00

Ranked!