なぎあす!
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Thanks for modding~ Reclaimer!Reclaimer wrote:
Hello!Jewelry
- 05:15:798 - I don't think you should cut the kiai out here, sure the vocals stop but the music doesn't! hmm...keep it!
Pretty small mod, couldn't find much lol, hopefully this helps!
all fixedです-Nanaka- wrote:
みなさんこんにちわ
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.いやしねさん
- 04:38:156 (2) - これは絶対Stackさせないほうがいいです、04:37:166 (4,5) - と合わさり読みにくいですし音も違うので04:38:722 (4) - の終点にStackとかどうでしょう
私はここでコンボ切れました()niceです!修正しました- 04:51:458 (4,5,1) - DS広すぎませんか?神経使わせるとこでもないと思いますし減速の事を考えるとJumpさせるべきではないと思います たしかに!手前と同じDS1.15に縮めました!
- 04:55:986 - ここVo拾ったほうがサビできたああああって感じますしiyasineStyleでかっこよくとってほしいです(無茶ぶり) slider置いてみました o/
- 05:08:722 (1) - NC打ってあるとはいえ05:07:873 (2,3) - と似ているのでかなり読みにくいですスタックさせた方がなめらかにプレイできると思います 手前の(3)にスタックしました
ヒットサウンダー OK_oreHITSOUNDER!!
全体的にレベル高すぎて全く書けませんでした
頑張ってください
Reclaimer wrote:
Hello!General
- The biggest think is lack of kiai times where they should be, I'm sure there's a reason for it but it's just something I noticed
- Really good map good job
Jewelry
- 00:15:551 (5,6) - Are these supposed to be close together? umaburi
- 00:50:202 (7,1) - Pretty big gap for 1/4 o.o emphasize 00:50:435 (1)
Pretty small mod, couldn't find much lol, hopefully this helps!thanks Reclaimer!
-Nanaka- wrote:
みなさんこんにちわ
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.
[notice]General
- OD+1
PP欲しいです()
-Nanaka- wrote:
みなさんこんにちわ
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.General
- OD+1
PP欲しいです()でりすさん
- 06:00:572 (1) - Drumwhistle使わないのであればSampleDにしてAddSoftはどうでしょう? ですね!
- 06:05:938 (5) - pattern的にはSampleD? 忘れてました!
- 06:05:938 (5,6) - に比べ06:06:182 (6,1) - 近すぎませんか?音的には06:04:231 (8,1) - より強いと思います AIMの動かし方で強調してると思ってください。
- 06:07:889 (1,3) - NC交換、意図は分かりますが曲調的にはどう考えても入れ替えた方が合います 自分の中でNewComboの付け方は、配置のpattern>vocals>downbeatsとか なので意図がわかっていただけてるのならこのままが一番でしょう。
- 06:21:060 (3) - x320y320あたりはどうですか?06:20:084 (1,2,3) - でpattern的には分かりやすく思います あまり好きじゃないです、スミマセン・・・
- 06:23:011 (4) - Ctrk+G? 飛びすぎじゃないでしょうか・・・
- 06:25:450 (2,3) - こういう流れはどうでしょう? 同じく、個人的に好きな配置ではないです。昔の自分ならやってたんでしょうが・・・w
06:41:304 (5) - Dwhistle yes!- 06:41:304 (5,1) - 06:41:548 (1) - は強調されるべきBeatですし手前の流れからしてもStackはありえないと思います、ついでにNC欲しいです stackとして強調させてるつもりなのですが、それとありえないなんてことはないと思いますけど・・・ここからよりよいパターンは自分では思いつかないので保留します。NCは追加しました。
でりすさんの昔から譜面好きです
全体的にレベル高すぎて全く書けませんでした
頑張ってください
ありがとうございました-Nanaka- wrote:
みなさんこんにちわ
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.General
- OD+1
PP欲しいです()ok!あらきゃっとさん
- 02:53:657 (3,4,5) - 動かすほど強い音もってないように思えます、1/4リピートかスタックに変更しませんか?
個人的にはreverseで跳ね返して02:54:166 (6,7,1) - でJumpしたほうが面白いかなと思います 流れ的に上から下に移動したかったのでスペーシングを狭くしました!- 03:02:301 (5,6,1) - 窮屈に感じました03:02:556 (6) - をx284y200あたりに持ってくると見た目維持しつつ改善するとおもいます 修正しました!
- 03:18:318 (4,5,6,1) - いい流れとは思えません03:18:318 (4) - も近すぎますし03:18:827 (6,1) - これもいきなりな流れですし全体でみても浮いてみえます
こんな感じの流れはどうでしょう? 03:17:810 (3) - ここctrl+gしてみました :3
03:18:064 - ちなみにここのwhistleはなにもfollowしてないように思えるので03:18:318 (4) - に追加でどうでしょう?- 03:23:149 - Finishどうですか? 追加しました!
- 03:52:961 (5) - whistle? ここは多分違うのでこのままで!
ハイレベル...
Alyce wrote:
hi~ request form in game chat
[iyasineさん]
- 05:14:100 (2) - circle 2つ or 1/4 slider+circleにしてみませんか? sliderの終点からボーカル(新しい歌詞)が始まってるのでそれを拾いませんか? メロディーじゃなくて裏の音を拾っているならこのままでもいいと思います!たしかにcircleで叩かせるのも良いですがslider終点に強い音をハメるのも好きなのでここはkeepさせてください
really nice collaboration
sorry my bad japanese
i'm not very good at japanese
gl
N a s y a wrote:
:idea:
[癒しね]
- 04:45:798 (4,5,6) - スライダーの後ろの音曲に合わせて小さくするのどう?素晴らしい
- 05:17:213 (2) - finish? ok!
- 05:24:854 (4) - ^ ok!
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Alyce wrote:
hi~ request form in game chatありすちゃんmodありがとう
[kachaさん]
- 00:26:016 (1,2) - ここの音取を 00:22:296 (1,2) - と同じにしませんか? ボーカルの伸び具合的に同じようなところだと思うので同じパターンにしてあげた方が読みやすいし メロディーにもあってるかなって思います。 逆にこれと同じにしました00:22:296 (1,2)
- 00:29:737 (1,2) - same as above ^
- 00:29:040 (5,6) - ctrl+g 00:29:272からボーカルが伸びてるから今のだとすこし違和感あるかなって個人的に思います ok
- 00:33:226 (7,1) - ^ ここは後ろの音全部短髪で拾いたいからこのままで
N a s y a wrote:
[白貝]
- 00:32:993 (5) - add finish? まじじゃん鳴ってたつけた
- 00:50:435 (1) - finish後ろじゃね? はい…
なしゃさんmodありがとう
Satellite wrote:
みうなちゃん
[ShiraKai]Call me Back ~ :3/
- 00:14:854 (3,4) - ここを3/4 slider + circleにしているのは何か意図が・・・?終点の 00:15:319 - ここから音は確かに始まっているのですが、それなら、00:13:691 (1) - こちらも同様なパターンにもなりますし、静かな曲で無理に3/4 slider + circleにしなくてもいいと思います。 あってると思ってましたすみませんなおしときます
- 00:21:830 (4) - 終点に強い音が来るのは結構違和感がありました、これをSliderではなくてCircle2つで拾ったほうが綺麗になると思うんですがどうでしょうか?それか、音取り自体を変更してみるとか・・・。提案だけ置いておきます。 前にななかさんに提案して頂いていた案で行くことにします。
- 00:22:761 (2) - 曲調的にonbeatに強い音が来るので、Sliderの終点がonbeatだと聞こえがあんまりよくないように思います。以下の音取りを使用してみては~
Alyceさんのmodを受け、その辺りを大幅に変更しました。その箇所は単発で拾う形となりました。- 00:30:435 (2,3,4) - 同様に音取りの提案です、多分メロディにあわせるなら以下の音取りのほうが好ましいです ん~~ごめんなさい!ここはこの流れが気に入っているのでこのままで!
- 00:33:691 (1,2,3) - ここの123ですが3でFinishが入るのでDSが12を狭く23で広くにしたほうが曲調にフィットすると思います。 2015年ベスト分かりmod賞を授与します(直しました)
- 00:37:877 (3) - 演出的なアレンジになりますがSlider始点に add finishしても合うかもしれません。 とても、すき
- 00:38:226 (4,2) - プレイだと全く支障なかったんですが、曲調に対しても遠すぎますし、しらかいさんのパート全体を通してこの箇所だけ難易度がものすごく上がっており、非常にバランスが悪いです、変更しないにしてももっとサークルを近づける必要があります、また、変更の提案は2種類あり、Circleを消してSliderで全てフォローするという変更かそれか以下の音取りのように判定の甘いスライダーを用いてフォローするという変更(下記挿入SS)、個人的な意見では後者ですがしらかいさんにお任せします。 音鳥の提案ありがとです== 参考にして配置を変えてみました~~
- 00:42:528 (5) - スライダーの終点にAdditions : D の whistleを追加しませんか?合うと思います。 ok
- 00:45:551 (4) - 00:22:761 (2) - と、同様にSlider終点にonbeatがきているので違和感があります、違ったように変更したほうが好ましいと思います。 ここはボーカルが伸びてるからこのままでも自然に叩けると思ってます
- 00:50:202 (7,1) - 流れは問題ないと思うんですが、譜面のバランスを考えると要所で一気に難しくなっているので、もっとわかりやすい流れを作ったほうがいいと思います、以下画像に参考程度の提案をするので、できれば違った形でもいいので変えてみてください。 最後をキックじゃなくて3連スタックにしていつものジャンプ入れときました
http://puu.sh/lRymH/2383c29df9.jpg- 00:52:528 (2) - 00:22:761 (2) - と、同様 ここもボーカルに合わせてるので(たぶん)
- 00:55:784 - ~ 00:57:644 - ここの間の赤線のところは additions : D の whistleを全部いれると合う気がします・・・。アレンジになりますが・・・。 ないす==
- 01:00:202 (2) - 終点に Additons : D の whistleを入れると合うと思います。 ok
- 01:05:551 (2) - 00:22:761 (2) - と、同様 ボ(ry
- 01:12:993 (2) - ここのwhistleは不要だと思います。ha-i
- 01:20:435 (2) - same as above. ^
さててmodありがとう
Haruru wrote:
ドモデスはるるさんmodありがとうShiraKai
00:43:691 (2) - 俺だったら00:42:993 (1) - に合わせたくなっちゃう ブランケットがいいノォン
01:10:202 (3) - 01:08:109 (4,5) - ここハーフスタックだから同じようにしたほうが好き う~~むあれはあそこだけにしておきたいw
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Satellite wrote:
みうなちゃん
[General][Rei24]
- Fine to me~
ズビバゼン
- 01:40:716 (4,5) - 多分だけどここの2個 "Ctrl+G"したほうが流れもよくなって叩きやすくなると思います。現状だと図形だけどDSばらばらだし・・・ ここもうまるっともりっと配置変えちゃいました
- 01:41:393 (3,4,5) - ここの3つの流れですが、悪くないんですが 01:41:393 (3,4) - ここはなんていうか音的に slider リバースのほうがフィットしているきがして、01:42:069 (5) - これは直線スライダーより 01:43:874 (4) - ここみたいに曲げたほうが曲調にあってる気がするんですよね?なので以下の画像みたいな感じに配置したほうがいいような感じがします・・・。もちろん現状でも何の問題もなく、変更しなくても大丈夫です。 ここも同様にまるもりっと変えました!sliderはリバースにして01:42:069 (4) - も曲げてみたんですがどうでしょう?
- 01:45:002 (1) - add finish. ここにはfinishがあったほうがいいと思います。 なしゃしゃんに指摘してもらいました
- 01:44:550 (5,1) - 01:45:002 (1) - ここにFinishが入るような強い音があるので、Spacingがかなり狭く感じ盛り上げに欠けると思います、そのために、流れと配置をキープしたまま、01:45:002 (1,2) - ここを "Ctrl+G" してみては如何でしょうか? nice!!!
- 01:47:483 (1) - 現状より "Ctrl+G" した流れのほうが綺麗だと思います。もっと言うのであれば、01:48:611 (1) - ここと形をそろえてこんな感じにしてみてもフィットすると思います。 さてらいとさんの案を少しアレンジして置いてみました!
- 01:55:603 (1,2,3,4) - 音取りの提案です、裏の音をフォローしてこんな感じにしたほうが合うと思います。 いいですね・・・配置も変えました
- 01:59:438 (5) - ここでNcいれて、02:00:791 (1) - ここにNcは不要です。02:01:242 (3) - ここでNcが必要になります。02:02:370 (1) - ここにNcは不要です。02:03:047 (4) - ここでNcが必要です。02:03:723 (1) - ここにNcは不要です。
- 02:00:340 (9,10,1,2) - ちょっとこの流れって微妙だと思うんですよね・・・ 02:00:791 (1,2) - ここ "Ctrl+G" しませんか? 02:00:791 (2,3,4) - (NCいじっちゃったのでコンボ数はずれてます )ここの変わらな~いのところは音程とか雰囲気に合わせて意図的に配置してるのでno changeで!(ただ配置が悪いのには同意なので02:00:565 (1) - このcircleの配置を変えてみました)
- 02:07:784 (7) - ここはcircle+circleに変えたほうがフィットします、歌詞もきちんと "どこまで" と4個分用意されているので。 なるほど!そういう音取りの考え方はかなり新鮮でいいですね。ッて感じで1時間くらいかけて配置してたらやばいくらい配置変わりました
- 02:10:039 (1) - ここにNcは不要です、02:10:265 (2) - ここから新しいNcです。 okdesu
- 今一度全体的にNewComboのつけ方がバラバラなので見直す必要があります。わからない場合はお声かけして頂ければチェックします。
Haruru wrote:
ドモデス
[centre]Rei24
okey!
- 02:05:528 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4112784 こんな感じの方が好き 俺はこっちのがすき
02:16:355 (2) - whistle
Satellite wrote:
みうなちゃん
[iyasine]Call me Back ~ :3/
- 05:05:326 (1) - ここはcircle+circleにしたほうがいいと思います、歌詞も2個分単発置けって言ってるし・・たしかに言ってらっしゃる・・・
- 05:08:722 (1,2,3) - 微妙なDSずらしてるのは意図的・・・?ここは意図的なんですよ~、(2)→(3)の高低差が欲しくて(2)を若干下げた感じです。中途半端に見えますが正三角形より叩きやすいのでお許しを!
- 05:17:213 (2) - 演出的には slider 始点に add finishいれたほうが合う、裏にも音あるし~ okです!
Haruru wrote:
ドモデス[centre]iyasine
- 05:18:911 (1) - 曲的にちょっとはなした方がフィットしそうだしCtrl+Gしてもいいかも fixed!
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modありがとう~!Satellite wrote:
[alacat]
- 02:54:420 (7) - 現状でも何も問題なく流れも綺麗ですが、個人的には x380 y196 あたりの流れのほうが好きです! fix!
- 02:55:691 (3) - 手前からの流れを考慮するのであれば終点は上向きのほうがフィットすると思います。:arrow: fix!
- 03:01:030 - 03:01:539 - 03:02:047 - ここの3箇所はAdditions : D の whistleを3個鳴らすほうがすき・・・。 今回D:whistleは後ろの音を取ってみたのでこのままで!
- 03:17:301 - 03:17:810 - 03:18:318 - Same as above!
- 04:10:689 (6) - 流れ的に Ctrl+G もいけるけどうどうしましょう? ここはこのままで!
- 04:14:780 (4) - same as above!:arrow: fix!
Recheck ありがとうございましたSatellite wrote:
Recheck
[Rei24]
- 02:24:926 - ここから無音化させてないsliderを用いるのは意図的でしょうか?私には雑音に聞こえ好ましくないと思いました、曲調もかなり静かですし、メロディをもっときれいに聞かせるべきだと思います。 かなり前にalacatさんにも指摘されてたのを直し忘れてましたごめんなさい fixed!
- 02:26:280 (5) - うーん、終点 02:26:731 - ここじゃないですか? okeyです!
Karen wrote:
Hi~[General][Jewelry]
- nothing
alacat:
- 04:01:416 (3) - i suggest to follow the piano here, so better change the rhythm to a 3/4 slider + a 1/2 slider.
- 04:10:416 (5,6) - the spacing is kinda too big here as in such a peaceful part, so i suggest to ctrl+g (6)
fixed both
Call me back for the second icon ~ Thank you so much <3
thanks Karen!Karen wrote:
Hi~[General][Jewelry]
- nothing
Shirakai:
- 00:46:482 (8,1) - this looks kinda too far, consider making them closer OK
- 00:53:109 (4) - this note is totally useless imo, the music here doesnt support this overmapping. sorry no change,i want to express the trembling of sound
- 01:07:644 (3) - NC for the anti jump here. ok
- 01:10:202 - add whistle here, like you did on 01:13:923 - ok
- 01:15:319 - hmm i know you intentionally ignored the beat...but personally i think it's better to map this. i see... but this rhythm is good for me;;
Call me back for the second icon ~
thanks Xinely!Xinely wrote:
hi alacat ~
once i saw karen modded this map so i go to mod as well :p
General
- soft-hitclap2 has delay (altho still 3 or 4 ms) but i think we can remove the delay http://puu.sh/lYfG9/a8308f5525.wav
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Jewelry
[*]00:36:714 (5) - imo if you're totally following the drums, you can remove this note and make a mini jump between 00:36:482 (3,4) - 00:36:830 (5,6) -
certainly,but its rhythm is difficult for this map imo;;
[*]00:46:482 (8,1) - yep agree with karen yea :3
call me back after karen ~
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Karen wrote:
Hi~
Rei24:
- 01:45:227 (2,3) - the flow can be better if you ctrl+g this o.o
- 01:56:505 (5,6) - ^ same, well just my personal taste here
okey! fix both
Xinely wrote:
Jewelry
[*]01:44:550 (5) - the flow from tail to this head doesnt point out properly which make the flow feels a bit weird for me.. i would say ctrl+g for it or move the slider to 56,128 moved the slider to 56,128
[*]01:52:671 (4) - somehow normal spacing looks a bit weird for me since you did jump for 01:53:122 (1,2) - which are sliders. i would say to make mini jump here example 200,216 nice! fixed
Karen wrote:
Hi~[General][Jewelry]
- nothing
iyasine:
- 05:16:081 (8) - can delete this note for making a stop here fits well. hmm...keep it!
Call me back for the second icon ~
Xinely wrote:
hi alacat ~
once i saw karen modded this map so i go to mod as well :p
Jewelry
- 04:43:534 - probably add note here? for following the weak piano also for vocal since i saw you're following vocal as well like 1/4 ones Good point , but i like this it
- 04:55:986 - probably increase the volume about 30%, i almost cant hear the hitsound here ok~fixed!
- 05:07:024 - i would like suggest to map here since it has cymbal music afterall hmm...bass folw
- 05:25:703 (2) - maybe remove this slider since i cant hear a sound in 05:25:703 - keep it! synthesizer flow
call me back after karen ~
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Thanks, XinelyXinely wrote:
hi alacat ~
once i saw karen modded this map so i go to mod as well :p
General
- soft-hitclap2 has delay (altho still 3 or 4 ms) but i think we can remove the delay http://puu.sh/lYfG9/a8308f5525.wav Thanks! change to this
Jewelry
- 03:24:929 (4) - since this last note has cymbal i think make the jump a bit far for emphasis it nicely? example 208,48 fixed and added new combo to this note.
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