[osz File Scan!]
If black.jpg is part of the SB why not add it to the SB folder?
[General]
Use 2000 for lead in time instead of 1996?
Different preview times, Abnormality has 100757, while the others have 100815
Gray combo color can cause confusion during tag play on multi.
The hitsounds are so loud it's hard to tell the difference between them and the music drums.
I recommend you crop the mp3 if your not going to map it all.
[Timing]
01:51:959 - Avoid using kiai time just for fountains.
[Drag's Oni]Try to leave less sharp corners on sliders like for example: 01:13:339 (1), 01:16:097 (1) and many others, the curves could easily be made more smooth. Like this for example:
00:40:235 (1,2) - The fact that you have 2 different sized sliders like this looks awkward, i recommend you try to make stuff more symmetrical next time when you think about your patterns.
00:42:189 (6,7,8) - Try to position theese as if they are coming out from the middle of the previous 2 notes? something like this for example:
00:47:132 (5,6,7,8,9) - If you were aiming for a parallelogram (9) is a bit farther from (5) than (7) from (6).
02:02:649 (5) - Spacing too close, turn into new combo to fix, or move it to the same position as (1).
[Insanity]00:33:109 (3) - Mapped to silence? you cant just bring a stream outta nowhere, make sure your notes are following the musical patterns and the rythm of the song.
00:39:316 (4) - ^
01:06:097 (8) - What's with the control points of this slider, they look so awkwardly placed, no wonder the slider looks like that, i recommend you rearrange the waypoints so the curve looks less semi-but not so-curvy and actually looks like a curve, or if you prefer even better you could make an arc slider:
[Sensei's Demon Parade]I guess imma ignore the sliders except a few of them if i dont want to write a wall of text, but i seriously recommend you do a better job with your sliders, specially bézier ones, otherwise they wont look appealing at all, an example is: 00:34:718 (1) It has a sharp corner on the left side, make a curve that it wont have a corner, but a smooth curve instead, try 4 control points instead of 3?.
00:42:994 (1) - I dont know what this slider is supposed to be... i recommend you remake it, probably the slider speed+BPM is making it look awkward like this.
00:48:166 (1) - Better curve than the 1st one i mentioned, it still could be better but i don't mind if you leave it.
00:57:821 (2,3) - Ugly overlap, make (3) not touch (2) at all.
01:06:787 (4,1) - Spacing too close and doesnt seem intentional so the new combo wont save you.
01:07:821 (1) - Spiral sliders like this dont look good because they are too small i recommend you rethink the shape of the slider.
01:09:201 (3) - Shorten by 1/1.
01:42:304 (3) - Sharp corner on a bézier... once again try using 4 control points instead of 3.
01:49:201 (2) - Shorten by 1/1.
[Abnormality]Incorrect preview time, either make all the other diffs use this one, or make this one use the same as the others.
Patterns are kinda random, don't mind it tho, but would be nice if you made at least some figures or something with your patterns.
00:45:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream is too long for newbies, even if its 1/1 try and replace some notes with sliders instead? it would be more fun to play too if you arrange them right.
01:12:649 (5) - New combo? Feels better for me.
01:27:821 (3,4,5) - This section here looks like you forced yourself to put (4) there, i recommend you use (4) as a part of your pattern and make something better out of it, oh also (5) could have some more curvyness, or make it completely linear, but that random turn at the end of it's... weird.
01:28:511 (5,6,1) - Same as previous one, but without the slider comment as (5) is the same slider anyways.
01:40:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another stream too long for newbies even if it's 1/1.
01:50:235 (2,3,4) - Could make an equilateral triangle.
