1. eveless's Yakusoku (4.61 stars, 364 notes)
2. My Hanataba (2.7 stars, 109 notes)
3. Stardust (4.83 stars, 557 notes)

Pokie wrote:

求控星技巧... 没控，作完发现正好D:
my Hanataba OAD-1 okie

her Yakusoku
HPD+3 OAD+1 thats it at first,but i changed them to make star rating under 4.45> < okie i will change them back now
00:11:461 (1,3,4) - 1 grid down okie
01:24:041 (3) - 嗯..這裡mute掉某些音效? ..sliderslide之類的 ._. okie

叮叮叮
玩不來._. D:


水mod不好意思 DX
實在沒什麼要挑的..
所以不給kds也...也..沒關係..喔...>_>

nv > <

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
all suggestions, i'm not good enough to mod such an awesome map.

Surely not.
plz point them out if there'r sth looks unreasonable or incomprehensible. it must be helpful to me.
whatever i rlly know little about so-called "rank rules"


[my Hanataba]
01:10:009 (2,2,2,2) - 这里。。。如果是按照我个人的习惯是习惯造一个音效不同来突出音乐的不同，具体而言是第一个slider加头的whistle，第二个slider加尾的，第三个加头的，第四个加。。。加circle……

normal所以没想太多D：
1'09开始的4小节简单化，只突出末尾一击，1'17开始的小节中间加个whistle要了整体变化，单节变化太花怕盖过整体效果。。

[her Yakusoku]
音响的话hitnormal效果不明显
OA+1
00:13:638 (2,3) - whistle? 2 k
00:14:848 (2,5,6) - whistle? 2,6 k
00:45:816 (5) - 这里是故意上了一格么。。不是的话拉下来 k
01:49:686 (6) - 关掉grid上拉一点 k
02:33:961 - 加拍 k, add slider(5)
03:00:574 (5) - whistle? k,nice
03:03:719 (3,4,5,6) - 不太合规矩，6是不是new combo下 k,nice
03:07:590 (5) - 尾音whistle? k

[Stardust]
01:09:525 (1) - 我可能还是更喜欢这一个段落求变。。。 同上，我要了整段的渐变，让我再想想
02:59:848 (2,3) - 建议这两个尾也加whistle，这样更突出4的位置变化 2ok,3离4的尾巴有点近，加了破坏安静气氛
03:29:363 (1) - 再加个note然后晚1/4开转盘。。。可行吗。。。k，一开始是有这个note的，斟酌了下感觉差不多
04:19:444 (2) - unrankable..按规矩的话必须是稍微露出点尾部和头部不一样。。。但是既然只需要长按，看看能不能网开一面 一般不知道左右时候都会定住光标看情况，这儿属于定住以后完全来得及反应的。。。我是这么想的

TW-KUMA01 wrote:

artist 應該是 Sound Horizon 0.0
我愛這首歌>A<''
star~

[Aramary] wrote:

いや、別に変えてもいいけど
あらまり姫にしたいだけD:

orioncomet wrote:

[General/All Difficulties]
- dark red combo color a bit hard to see, can you make it lighter then this.. maybe just me tho >_< fixd> <

[my Hanataba]
01:45:090 (2) - If This diff is suppose to be an Easy or Normal diff This silder is a bit hidden for me >_< sorry, I just don't like hidden note on Normal or Easy diff >.<; fixd> <



[her Yakusoku]
03:47:388 (1) - end this spinner at red tickfixd> <
seem fine to me ~
sasuga my moemoe> <

[Stardust]
fix your offset to the same offset as 1st offset because you just use red timing selection for BPM changes, don't forgot to resnap all note!
- 2nd offset should be 189,525
- 3rd offset should be 195,088
- 4th offset should be 259,442
- 5th offset should be 263,312 | and why bpm is x2? but don't matter >_< because after this timing haven't any hitnote then It's just fine for me about BPMx2 here. and this offset is useless you can remove it If you want ~ All fixd,thx> <
00:28:396 (1) - a bit hard to see but fine, I guess.. because I didn't get miss on it xD! XD
00:47:751 - add note + sound clap here! (sound good to me >.<) there was a note here but i del'd that at last, ok add again> <
01:07:106 (5,6,7,8,1) - I was about to miss with them but I passed X3! XD
01:28:154 (4) - I'm a bit confuse with this combo >_< If you look at combo when playing (like me) you will remember this combo when you clicked 01:26:945 (1,2,3).. So, I just ask you to add new combo on 01:28:154 (4) > < fixd> <
03:46:783 (1) - end this spinner at white tick? fixd> <
04:19:444 (2) - I don't sure If this silder is unrankable because I can't see the point of silder go but If you would like to add SB for tell the player what's the way this silder go that should be ok >_< last slider will never break combo i think. cuz it's slow enough(there'r at least 3seconds allow you to move cursor back to that slider), even you went the opposite direction><

whoa, <3 the song
ありがとうございました> <

Derekku wrote:

A hidden SB'd note is definitely not unrankable. :p
:0

[General]
*Since the SB is difficulty-specific, please remove the .osb file from the song's folder and do a full submission.
ok,miss'd at last submitting,thx
*I suppose that you should force the Default skin on all diffs (since you're doing the SB at the end of [Stardust]).
didnt notice this,thank you&nice
*Offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 3,719ms instead. (Actually, the offset is a bit late, so use 3,709)
so pro, but thank you
*A new uninherited section should be added to all three difficulties at 195,815ms. This is because of the music basically stopping beforehand which screws up the measure/downbeat (again).
thank you
*Actually, it gets a bit iffy before that, even. The offset keeps getting later and later which requires extra timing sections. x__x; Please add the following three uninherited (red) timing sections to all difficulties: 177,926ms, 181,806ms, and 185,686ms. Remember to resnap after all of these timing adjustments, btw.
thank you
*Preview point is at a strange place o-o;
thank you
*SB'd hitcircle/approachcircle are a bit choppy/low-quality. =x
thank you
*Kiai should be the same for the creator's difficulties (guest diff kiai doesn't matter). Please match up Stardust/my Hanataba's kiai.
thank you, another me mapped STARDUST-diff just as a GD, so that ok
*Some of the custom hitsounds are too quiet. Having them at such low volume is unrankable since the player can't use them as feedback while they're playing. This is mainly a problem in the guest diff where the majority of the song sounds like 0% volume.
thank you

[my Hanataba]
*Capitalize "my"?
ok
00:38:557 (1) - a bit far from the center of the spinner
thank you
01:16:541 (3,4) - These should be spaced a bit closer together (or make them a slider)
thank you, its 1.4 here
01:52:106 (1,2,3,4) - this looks/sounds wrong. How about trying this instead?
ok but i'll try another rhythm,thank you


[her Yakusoku]
*Capitalize "her"?
ok
03:08:860 (1,2,3) - These should not be on 1/8th ticks. Please see the timing adjustments above.
thank you

[Stardust]
*3rd uninherited timing section should be at 195813 to keep the downbeat consistent.
thank you
*This difficulty is so confusing that I can barely watch it let alone play it. @-@ All of the slider/spacing changes are a bit too ridiculous.
thank you
*The 1/4th speed sliders might be an issue with the drain killing the HP bar.
thank you
*This difficulty will really need some work/remapping if you want it to get ranked.
thank you

[Aramary] wrote:

Shinxyn wrote:

i thought its friendly enough to help peoples whos playing or seeing my map to understand the scenario , but now they're all eveless, oh sorry, useless ;_;

eveless wrote:

......i want to change my username to -ap001

NatsumeRin wrote:

eveless wrote:

......i want to change my username to -ap001

Garven wrote:

SPOILER

Yay, Sound Horizon!

Hitsounds were <3

[my Hanataba]
Short, but nice.

[her Yakusoku]
01:31:057 (3,4) - I was kind of expecting it to go with the lyrics here, but oh well.
02:14:364 (1,2) - This spacing intentional? The distance isn't bad - It's just different compared to the rest of them.
Nice diff here.

[Stardust]
00:27:791 (4,1) - These are a little iffy, though a second playthrough would have no problem at all. Eh.
03:09:525 (4) - I was kind of expecting this to end right on the final "naze nano yo!" It'd feel more powerful to me.
03:36:136 (4,1) - ..you know what, these were cool and played just fine.
04:23:856 (1) - D: