1. Easy (1.48 stars, 106 notes)
2. Hard (3.23 stars, 258 notes)
3. Insane (4.14 stars, 342 notes)
4. Normal (2.05 stars, 153 notes)

1. For a beginner mapper, I suggest you keep safe and use the Distance Snapper for now.
2. For the part that starts at 00:16:652 - to 00:30:037 - , I suggest you use BSD 1/3 With the exception on the small little part at 00:22:652 - to 00:24:037 - .
3. 00:18:345 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Feels really messy. Tidying it up please.
4. 00:22:652 (1,2,3,4) - These can be turned into reverse sliders instead.
5. 00:59:114 (4) - This curve looks a bit strange, don't you think?

1. 00:21:960 (4) - Placed a bit too early.
2. 00:34:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can fix this star pattern using Ctrl D and Ctrl S. Ctrl D for the shape and Ctrl S for distance.
3. 01:27:268 (1,1) - This feels lacking, I think you should at least put a little more effort for this part since it's the build up leading to the chorus.
4. 01:34:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is really strange. A standard 4/4 rhythm would sound better.
5. 01:42:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same here^

1. 00:30:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - You can make better streams by using a Slider and then converting it into a stream using Ctrl F.
2. 00:34:422 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, Ctrl D and Ctrl S.
3. 01:34:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange rhythm.

Victorica wrote:

Hi~ From my modding queue~ :3

[Normal]

1. For a beginner mapper, I suggest you keep safe and use the Distance Snapper for now.
2. For the part that starts at 00:16:652 - to 00:30:037 - , I suggest you use BSD 1/3 With the exception on the small little part at 00:22:652 - to 00:24:037 - . ok,fixed in both hard
3. 00:18:345 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Feels really messy. Tidying it up please. ok
4. 00:22:652 (1,2,3,4) - These can be turned into reverse sliders instead. I think these now is better
5. 00:59:114 (4) - This curve looks a bit strange, don't you think? fixed

It's a bit unpolished but it's decent!

[Hard]

1. 00:21:960 (4) - Placed a bit too early.fixed
2. 00:34:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can fix this star pattern using Ctrl D and Ctrl S. Ctrl D for the shape and Ctrl S for distance. fixed
3. 01:27:268 (1,1) - This feels lacking, I think you should at least put a little more effort for this part since it's the build up leading to the chorus. The slider fixed
4. 01:34:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is really strange. A standard 4/4 rhythm would sound better.
5. 01:42:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same here^ remapped

[Insane]

1. 00:30:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - You can make better streams by using a Slider and then converting it into a stream using Ctrl F. fixed
2. 00:34:422 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, Ctrl D and Ctrl S.fixed
3. 01:34:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange rhythm.fixed

Over all, the idea is pretty good~ You just need to polish the map a bit. ^^ You can look up other maps for ideas as well. :3 I hoped my mod helped~

jogfi2002 wrote:

[General]
歌不错w
offset似乎没问题，但好像往后挪几毫秒打起来更舒服。软件测的，就这样吧
我个人觉得在Normal里，滑条最好不变速，即使是一段段地变。

标题的罗马音：Inochi wa Utsukushii 已修改
source和TAG考虑加几个吧 一直想不到加什么tag


[Normal]

01:07:191 (3,4) - 两个折返次数不同，而且后一个比前一个多一次折返，新手可能比较容易断 已修改
01:11:345 (5) - 改成一个1/2拍的长条，从01:11:575开始 已修改
01:15:037 (3) - 增加滑条长度，使之在下一条白线上结束 已修改
01:20:806 (2) - 类似这种都可以改成我上面说的那样，看你要不要保持吧，我觉得会对新手比较友善而且不打破平缓的节奏。那就先不改了
01:24:268 (1) - 可以考虑改成这样：改了



01:39:960 (5) - 改成1/4拍长的滑条吧 改了
01:46:422 (4,5) - 改成这样： 改了




[Hard] NC相关全部改了

00:24:845 (5) - New Combo
00:29:114 (5) - ^
00:38:345 (5) - ^
01:27:268 (1) - 略显沉闷，可以考虑换成二连或者短滑条混搭二连 改了
01:59:114 (6) - 换成滑条，至下一白线结束 改了
02:01:422 (5) - New Combo
01:34:653 (1) - 从这里开始的New Combo建议重设，初次玩很容易被这个颜色所误导。个人觉得跟着钢琴声的间隔1 2 1 2这么排比较好。
01:42:038 (1) - 这里开始的一段误导性更强，节奏和刚刚打完那一段是相同的，但间隔却不一样，变成了等间距。还是按前面的排距离会比较好。
01:50:345 (3) - 同样的问题，建议在这里New Combo，后同。
01:59:114 (6) - 换成滑条，这里是KIAI时间，空出这么大一段不太好。


[Insane]

这个难度的完成度没有前面的高。

00:17:461 (2) - 建议你在这个蓝线前面的红线上加一个NOTE，后面都这样，相比之下较为充实。对于Insane来说，前面这一大段NOTE+SLIDER实在有些闷。改了
00:33:960 (2,1) - 这个空白是故意留出来的？明明这句还没唱完啊。 改了
00:38:345 (7) - New Combo
00:46:653 (1) - 将一些滑条换成二连吧。换成了跳
01:06:730 (6) - 换成2NOTE+1SLIDER，总长度不变。改了
01:13:422 (1) - 太长了，切成两个短一些的滑条吧，可以从01:14:345再开始减速。改了
01:30:038 (5) - New Combo
01:48:730 (4,1) - 连打跟下一段之间的过渡太突兀，歌曲本身的变化并没有那么强烈，略有些怪。后面的部分改了，这里就先这样吧
02:02:345 (9) - New Combo

[-Hina-] wrote:

姥爷您好w 乃团饭大好评！

[Normal]
00:22:883 (2) -
00:23:806 (4) - 感觉这两个短滑条有点奇怪 改了

换成这样↑↑↑的单点过渡会不会好一些
01:39:037 (4) -
01:40:422 (6) - 两个滑条不合拍 改成滑条+单点 最后一个NOTE可以加个收尾音照应歌最后一个重音 感觉没什么问题
后面的副歌段也有这个问题


[Hard]
01:27:268 (1) - 单用折返对应有些枯燥 和后面一个转盘改成四方跳试试看？改了滑条

[Insane]
00:33:730 (1) -
00:33:961 (2) - 再加个NOTE 改了
01:48:384 (1,2,3,4) - 换成滑条 不了，太简单


三个难度感觉hard完成的最好;w;~加油
要不要考虑做个走れ！bicycle【xD! 打算做12单，其他的我到时候再挑吧

jogfi2002 wrote:

[General]offset似乎没问题，但好像往后挪几毫秒打起来更舒服。

• 
  现在offset肯定错了. 机器测的应该能用,楼上叫你往后调一点你+30就差太远了..
  NH难度最后转盘结束的时间不一样

• 
  01:42:067 (1) - 建议好好跟一个轨..这里换一条轨跟让人不知所措
  01:59:606 (7) - 同上

• 
  00:16:683 (1) - In难度是1/4,这里开1/3是闹哪样
  00:17:452 (2) - 不要随便开1/3, 25%仔细听,明显不对
  01:44:113 (4) - 感觉这里空拍不自然
  01:48:729 (6) - 同上

• 
  同Hard,不要随便1/3啊

• 
  歌很喜欢;w;
  建议多做几张图锻炼一下 ..
  还有大部分note都集中在中间，也利用一下四个角落调动一下玩家嘛

Garden wrote:

[General]

• 
  现在offset肯定错了. 机器测的应该能用,楼上叫你往后调一点你+30就差太远了.. 改成509了
  NH难度最后转盘结束的时间不一样 fixed

[Insane]

• 
  01:42:067 (1) - 建议好好跟一个轨..这里换一条轨跟让人不知所措 改了
  01:59:606 (7) - 同上 改了一点，这里原来的note确实很奇怪

[Hard]

• 
  00:16:683 (1) - In难度是1/4,这里开1/3是闹哪样 fixed
  00:17:452 (2) - 不要随便开1/3, 25%仔细听,明显不对
  01:44:113 (4) - 感觉这里空拍不自然 尝试补了一个滑条
  01:48:729 (6) - 同上 ^

[Normal]

• 
  同Hard,不要随便1/3啊 fixed

[Others]

• 
  歌很喜欢;w;
  建议多做几张图锻炼一下 .. 在做呢ww
  还有大部分note都集中在中间，也利用一下四个角落调动一下玩家嘛 这个人格也说了，改的过程中一直在往这方面做

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi, late mod from my modding Q
Was busy with school these past days >.<

Let's mod anyway...

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : dem, pls don't do dis

[General]

1. The song is only 2 mins, why don't make Easy? ok，it will cost some days
2. Try to add some tags; for example: "Life is Beautiful"; the English version of Inochi wa Utsukushii, and maybe the album; "Toumei na Iro" and the Japanese version of the album 透明な色 and others, you can find some other tags, internet serve vast information. ok
3. Please start the kiai here 01:34:662 since the big sound is there, you don't have to put kiai at where you put the audio preview. ok
4. Your combo colors are very bright compared with your background... use a dark color replace orange

[Normal]

1. 5 DS problems, please fix, Normal may not have any of thesehave tried to fix it.I even don't know why it appear because I always use distance-snap in normal
2. You may not change Slider Velocity at Normal! ok
3. 00:16:662 (1) - Avoid using 1/4 beat (blue tick) for Normal and below (unless the bpm is slow like 100 or below), it might be too hard for Normal players. Furthermore, the sound there don't really support 1/4 slider since there's no sound at blue tick. I suggest to simply use circle or just delete the slider since the sound there is pretty minor.ok
4. Please watch this tutorial about polarity. Your whole rhythm at the beginning causing polarity problem and I highly don't suggest it for Normal and below since the new players might have trouble reading. I know you are following the piano (?) but it's still not a good reason. Fixing it now would cause you to remap the beginning and maybe you don't want to do it (it's good if you actually remap it tho) but please pay more attention to polarity stuff. sorry,I still don't know what is it.
5. 00:28:201 (1) - Please don't use 1/2 reverse slider for Normal. It kinda equal as 1/4 multi reverse slider for Hard and above. It might be surprising for new players to read since they are not used to multi reverse (more than 2 reverses) just use a couple of 1/2 sliders or 1/2 SINGLE reverse slider. Or do it like you did here 00:37:432 (5,6) - fixed it because I think it's a little simple
6. 00:45:509 (1) - As I said, don't use 1/4 rhythm for Normal; just use single 1/2 slider for this.fixed
7. 00:46:662 (3) - NC because of the verse change, or do it here 00:47:124 (4) - when the vocal startsfixed
8. 00:54:047 Add a note, the sound here is big you know.fixed
9. 01:08:816 ^ use slider
10. 01:11:355 Add a note to support vocal? ok
11. 01:12:509 You kinda miss the big sound with finish (that mean the sound is "very" big) here.... Following vocal huh... maybe you can reconsider it... Fixed it but I think it's good for easy diff
12. 01:15:047 (3) - Please do it like this http://puu.sh/jyCx6/5b0e396fc5.jpg it'll fit the vocal better. ok
13. 01:24:278 (1) - why you use 3/4 pattern here? it doesn't make sense, there's no sound at blue tick. Please change it to 1/2 rhythm (like using 1/2 double reverse slider or anything else that you can come up with) to support the vocal better. It's a bug.fixed
14. 01:27:278 (1) - This slider, end this here 01:30:970 I think it'll make more sense since the music stops there. You can make a short break after that. ok
15. 01:39:047 (4) - Shorten this to the red tick and add a note at the white tick to support the vocal better since the vocal at the red tick is pretty big. http://puu.sh/jyCJX/ec10719d7a.jpg removed the red tick and fixed it
16. 01:40:432 (7) - Please do it like this http://puu.sh/jyCLb/55aede2c99.jpg it'll definitely fit the vocal better.
17. 01:42:047 Please add a note to support the (very) big sound if you insist on following the vocal. fixed
18. 02:00:509 (1) - end the spinner here 02:03:739 since it's where the last drum fall (you don't need to end spinner at big white tick)
19. Try to let the vocal go loose for a bit since you seems to be too strict on following vocal which caused the big sound to get ignored instead.Have tried to fix it

[Hard]

1. 00:16:662 (1) - same as Normal, better use simple circle or a 1/2 slider since it's Hard. It'll make a better polarity that way too. fixed
2. Same polarity problems as Normal. But it's easier to fix it for Hard since you can add circle after the slider so the polarity would be better, example : http://puu.sh/jyD27/5531cfaa7e.jpg (please note that I changed the rhythm to give you better example)
3. 00:44:355 (7) - Why the SV suddenly increase here? .-. the song don't really change, I suggest to keep it at the same speed.
4. 00:54:047 Why do you reduce the SV here again? The song don't change at all, please keep it at the same speed.
5. 01:13:432 ^ Tried to fix all SV questions
6. 01:20:585 (2) - Reduce the reverse, use max 2 reverses (unless it's a 1/4 multi reverse slider which uses to simplify stream) fixed
7. 01:34:662 VERY big sound got ignored, please DON'T do this. fixed
8. Same problem as Normal, you stick too much to vocal causing the big sound to get ignored instead. Remember vocal is not the only thing you have to map. Pay more attention to this next time.Have tried to fix it

Good luck~

- Suwako - wrote:

M4M from my queue

Easy all fixed
00:32:355 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/jKvhi/b91f313373.png much better with this rhythm
00:37:893 (4,5) - this would make the map boring so you can change it like this http://puu.sh/jKvpg/45124aad61.png
00:45:278 (3,1) - fix this blanket
00:47:124 (2,3) - ^
00:51:278 (3,1) - blanket slider would be better http://puu.sh/jKvzU/f08ce90e99.png
00:58:201 (5,6) - fix the blanket http://puu.sh/jKvFf/45606f2489.png
01:00:970 - add a note here
01:10:201 (2,3) - blanket this http://puu.sh/jKvL7/f551a695c9.png

Normal all fixed
00:17:470 (2,3) - blanket this
00:19:316 (2,3) - ^
00:25:778 (4,1) - ^
00:28:662 (2,4) - don't overlap these
00:39:278 - add a note here
00:47:124 (1) - fix this slider, make the end of the slider to the white tick
00:58:662 (3,4) - blanket like this would be much better http://puu.sh/jKw8p/4219198b42.png
01:10:662 (4,5) - blanket this
01:15:047 (3,4) - ^

General for Easy and Normal : need plenty of praticing ... you should make more blankets, don't curve your sliders too much everywhere, don't reverse the sliders in Normal too much, there are so much of it that i can't fix it all ... Remember to fix the DS after editing

Hard
00:19:316 (2,3) - blanket this ... fixed
00:27:624 (4,1) - ^ fixed
00:49:893 (1) - this is better http://puu.sh/jKwwS/c0ea381192.png fixed
01:10:662 (4) - this would look better http://puu.sh/jKwFR/e7d0a7b00a.png fixed
01:47:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is too hard for a hard diff fixed
01:50:816 (5) - separate this slider into a note and an 1/2 slider fixed
02:04:201 - add a note here remain,strange

Insane
00:31:893 (1,2) - don't curve these sliders too much remain.It's normally
00:33:509 (6,1) - make these look like they connect together fixed
00:34:432 (2,3,4,5,6) - calm music, don't make a jump like crazy here... some parts after too use 1.5 DS now
01:38:816 (3) - separate this slider into a note and an 1/2 slider fixed
01:49:201 - add a note here remain,it's too hard to add a note after a quick reserve
01:52:201 (1,3) - overlap 1 and 3 like this http://puu.sh/jKxmM/3ae6f610ea.png fixed
02:04:201 - add a note here remain,strange

General for Hard and Insane:you still need to make more blankets, don't separate notes and break the DS too much especially in the Insane diff... don't curve the sliders like i said in easy and normal ...

Good luck