dkun wrote:

All diffs: Song starts right away? Add delay? Fixed, I wonder how I forgpt this.
The difficulties look fine to me though~

❤ = ★ ~

Blazevoir wrote:

Well... I don't know if you fixed the issue with osu!direct not wanting to play a preview or it not wanting to show a BG, but anyway... Well, I hope it is fixed now. Thanks for telling me about this error

[General]
The last note for all difficulties sounds weird where it ends, but I guess it's not that big of an issue. I thought it was weird too, but I didn't know exactly where to stop it, so I am up for suggestions.

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
Also fine~

[Hard]
00:29:842 - Maybe add a note here? Since I don't hear any vocals here, no.
01:00:997 (2) - Move one grid space left? Moved 3, but basically the same concept

★~

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy

00:28:688 (4) - Make the reverser end of this a clap? Fixed.
01:16:381 - Make this a spinner. Or consider starting the spinner where the previous slider ends and shorten that slider. Have it end here (01:17:919 -) Okay not too sure about this, but I made this change. I hope it is still an easy diff.

Normal

00:28:688 (7) - Move left 1 unit? I like it jutting out more, so I think it is fine.

Hard

Fine





Star..

Krisom wrote:

Hi !

[General]
The lyrics start early, but I really feel that the offset should be 00:00:996, as the music starts there (If you pay attention to your clapping pattern, you'll agree with me). Also, I feel that the Kiai time should be placed on 00:53:304. Moved both, the added hitsounds persuaded me xD

[Easy]
00:24:842 (6) - Finish the end =X?
00:28:688 (4) - I expected a clap at the repeat
00:53:304 (2) - Finish the start =X?
01:03:304 (3) - Remove the sliderwhistle
01:05:612 (2) - Finish the start =X?
01:28:688 (1) - Hmm, red tick too early, white tick to late... End it at 01:30:131 ?
All done. I needed hitsound help.

[Normal]
00:24:842 (6) - Finish the end =X?
00:41:765 (1) - Remove tihs sliderwhistle
00:50:419 - Y'know, I find it weird that Easy has a spinner and Normal doesn't. Hmmm, maybe add the spinner here and the break on easy, just add a spinner here or (if you're feeling fancy) add a long slider here. That was weird, add a spinner to normal.
00:53:304 (2) - Finish the start =X? Oh, whistle the end, then unwhistle 00:53:881 (3)'s start.
00:56:381 (2) - Whistle the end, unwhistle the start. Then, remove the whistle at (3)'s start
01:02:535 (2) - Whistle the end, unwhistle the start.
01:05:612 (2) - (Look at 00:53:304 (2) )
01:08:688 (2) - (Look at 00:56:381 (2) )
01:29:458 (3) - Again, I think this should end at 01:30:131...??
All done.

[Hard]
00:25:612 (7) - Remove whistle and finish?
00:29:458 (3) - Add a repeat? (Clap the end if you do?) Since you are the second person asking about this, there is probably something here that I missed. Fixed.
00:53:304 (2) - Finish the start?... wait, these are the same notes than in normal ! Lucky me~ use what i said in normal for this Kiai.
...
01:29:458 (3) - End it at 01:30:131...??
All done here too.


Fun to play ! Yay, I am glad you enjoyed it.

Garven wrote:

Ahoy HAI

[General]
00:46:188 - Kinda weird how you have the volume gradually increase. The music doesn't feel like it would justify that, and a 'sudden' increase during the kiai isn't jarring at all. For me, the vocalist sounded slightly louder after each iteration of the line of lyrics, but I might have raised the hitsound volume a little too high. As for the chorus, I just increased the volume by one more notch since the chorus was really loud in comparison, so I don't think it is too surprising. Still, this is all just my opinion, I don't I will do anything yet, but if others ask about it, I will change it.

[Easy]
01:05:612 (2) - Put a whistle on the return part of the slider, and remove the one on the end. Done.
01:18:304 (1) - This is too soon after a spinner for an easy. With the music you have available, you could map through this easily. I was worried about this. The problem is that I mostly followed the lyrics, so it it difficult to map here. I ended up just replacing it with a slider.
The last spinner doesn't fit to me either. It'd feel better just as the three last hits. Done.

[Normal]
01:29:458 (3) - I'd just silence the end. The finish doesn't fit to me. Done.
01:28:688 (1,2,3) - Maybe lower the volume on these anyway - the slider slide sound kind of sticks out compared to the lone vocals. Done.
Nice map, though it feels a bit higher on the velocity for a normal. I like the high slider velocity, so that is staying.

[Hard]
00:25:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe do these as low-volume normal hits? Kept the finish, but made the rest normal.
01:29:458 (3) - I'd just silence the end. The finish doesn't fit to me. Done.
01:28:688 (1,2,3) - Maybe lower the volume on these anyway - the slider slide sound kind of sticks out compared to the lone vocals. Done.

I try not to do hit sound mods, but that's about all I can suggest - the mapping is just fine except for the spinners in easy, hehe.

Odaril wrote:

to change absolutely
not great, to change if possible
suggestions

Easy:
00:12:919 (1) - Move this one one grid right (and then proceed to respacing the following notes). Did not do this because 3 and 4 are 180 degree turns of each other around the origin.
00:22:150 (1) - ^ without the brackets Done.
00:59:073 (1,2,3) - Normal - whistle - normal hitsounds. Changed it to whistle whistle clap because the whistle sound good on 2 but the lack of hitsound really makes the words lose their power. The lack of hitsounds just made the area sound empty to me, and I really doubt that was the intent of the chorus.
01:00:612 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:11:381 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:12:919 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:27:919 (1) - Clap hitsound, non new combo. No to both, combos fit the lyrics and the clap hitsound sounds strange.[/color]

Normal:
00:52:919 (1) - Finish hitsound. No, this is a lead-in to the kiai, so the note is supposed to be soft.
00:53:304 (2) - Whistle hitsound on the beginning, normal hitsound on the end. I like the current setup more because it brings a lot of energy to the section.
00:53:881 (3) - ^^
00:55:996 (1,2,3) - Same as three previous lines. ^
00:59:073 (1,2,3) - Normal - whistle - normal hitsounds. Same as Easy
01:00:612 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:05:227 (1,2,3) - Same as three first comments for this diff.
01:08:304 (1,2,3) - ^
01:11:381 (1,2,3) - Normal - whistle - normal hitsounds.
01:12:919 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:457 (1) - Normal - normal - whistle hitsounds.
01:15:804 (4) - Normal hitsounds on the end. Done.
01:24:842 (2) - Normal hitsound. Done.
01:28:688 (1) - Clap hitsounds on the beginning. Done.
01:29:073 (2) - ^Done.
01:29:458 (3) - Finish hitsound at the beginning.[/color] The distinction made by the finish does not fit very well for me, so I used a clap instead.
You use too many claps in my opinion, it makes the map repetitive. I personally like the feel claps give.

Hard:
00:59:073 (1,2,3) - :3 same as for the other diffs
01:00:612 (1,2,3) - :3
01:11:381 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Silence the end of those sliders. I sort of like the noise, so it is staying.
01:23:304 (3) - Normal hitsound.I really like the impact of the finish, so it is staying.
01:28:688 (1,2) - Clap hitsound at the beginning. Done.
01:29:458 (3) - Finish hitsound at the beginning.[/color]Same as Normal.
Same comment as Normal.
Same comments as Normal as well.

Overall, those aren't excellent maps, but they aren't bad either. Nothing really good or really bad. It's pleasant to play, though. Star.

1. Needs some TAGs.
2. Offset 1000.

1. Increase Drain Rate by one (?)

1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by one or two please.

1. Decrease Drain Rate by one or two please.

Gladi wrote:

[General]

1. Needs some TAGs. I can't think of many of tags that will actually help people find this song, so I just added the abbreviation of the game name.
2. Offset 1000.

Changed.
[Hard]

1. Increase Drain Rate by one (?)

done
00:39:458 (4) - Reverse arrow on this slider to make it follow rhytm of the music and then put clap on slider end (?) Done
01:02:538 (2,3,4) - Make (4) a horizontal flip from (2) please, so it will perfectly allign. Done.
01:27:923 (1) - Remove new combo (?) Since the spacing is shorter here and put an accent on the last 3 notes, I would like to keep it, but if other ppl ask about it, I will remove it.

[Normal]

1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by one or two please.

Done. 2 down.
01:12:153 (3) - Move one grid level to the left (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise) Nice catch. Done.
01:13:692 (3) - ^ only to the right this time. ^
01:14:461 (1) - Tricky anti-jump, fooled even me playing this Normal, you might want to move the slider further away. I did a different fix, but think I fixed the antijump pattern.
01:22:538 (1) - Remove new combo (?) I sort of wanted this for the change in spacing, but like before, if anyone else asks, I will change it.

[Easy]

1. Decrease Drain Rate by one or two please.

I lowered the hp drain even further to drop the score.
01:25:996 (1) - Remove new combo (?) Done.
01:27:919 (1) - ^ I sort of like the stress the combo puts on this note, so I am going to keep it for a while longer, but the same policy applies to this combo as my other combos

Starred~

1. you mentioned the quality of the video/audio, so I did a search:
2. http://u.115.com/file/f2702af02b a webdisk in China, click '电信1下载' or '网通1下载' or '备份下载'. I donno the speed in your country lol.
3. ouch, I did the search before I got the.osz. I think the quality is quite good now.(so do a update to the creator's words orz.
4. about the tags, add OP to it.
5. I can't see the preview image in the song info page 0.0
6. disable the countdown in Easy and Normal
7. how about set a background color?
8. set the offset -538? then these will be no note before the first offset.

1. 01:28:692 (1,2,3) - a bit loud for me

1. 01:16:385 (T) - how about set a spinner here and end it at 01:18:308? of course remove the note there. or you can choose to end it at 01:17:923.

1. 01:15:808 (1) - a bit early for a spinner, 2 notes at 01:15:807 and 01:16:192 then start the spinner.
2. 01:23:308 (3) - how about replace this with a slider that ends at 01:23:692 and add 1 reverse to it?

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. you mentioned the quality of the video/audio, so I did a search:
2. http://u.115.com/file/f2702af02b a webdisk in China, click '电信1下载' or '网通1下载' or '备份下载'. I donno the speed in your country lol.
3. ouch, I did the search before I got the.osz. I think the quality is quite good now.(so do a update to the creator's words orz. Sadly, I am still unhappy about the quality of both the song and the video. I really wanted the DVD rip of the vid, but I never found the DVD. As a result, I was hoping that someone would have something better. Also, if you you compare the audio in my mp3 compared to the full one in the album, there is a world of difference, so I am still striving for something better
4. about the tags, add OP to it.
5. I can't see the preview image in the song info page 0.0 I have had this problem for a while now, but I am still unsure how to fix it, I have reuploaded the map multiple times, but nothing changed
6. disable the countdown in Easy and Normal Done.
7. how about set a background color? I am fine with the default color, but if you have a color to suggest, I will use it.
8. set the offset -538? then these will be no note before the first offset. The current offset aligns the whole notes better than tth eone you suggest, so I am going to keep it the way it is.

[Easy]:

1. 01:28:692 (1,2,3) - a bit loud for meDone.

[Normal]:

1. 01:16:385 (T) - how about set a spinner here and end it at 01:18:308? of course remove the note there. or you can choose to end it at 01:17:923 I don't really like making spinners with short recovery time, so I added 3 notes instead..

[Hard]:

1. 01:15:808 (1) - a bit early for a spinner, 2 notes at 01:15:807 and 01:16:192 then start the spinner. Added the note at 01:15:807 and started the spinner at 01:16:192
2. 01:23:308 (3) - how about replace this with a slider that ends at 01:23:692 and add 1 reserve to it? Done.

Nice song and map. star~

loser101 wrote:

Easy

1. move the circle at 00:59:846 to 1:00:038 and 1:01:384 to 1:01:576. Same with the circle at 1:12:057 to 1:12:346 and 1:13:596 to 1:13:884. Since I was following the lyrics, the notes are fine the way they are, but if other ppl ask about these notes I might change it.
2. nothing else
here [attachment=2:540f5]CHiCO[ACE] - Wake Up World (blissfulyoshi) [Easy(upload)].osu[/attachment:540f5]
Normal
same as ^ same response as Easy
nothing else
[attachment=1:540f5]CHiCO[ACE] - Wake Up World (blissfulyoshi) [Hard(upload)].osu[/attachment:540f5]
Hard
Between 00:25:038 and 00:25:711 that's crazy. I did this on dt, so it can't be that hard.
00:59:846 to 1:00:038 and 1:01:384 to 1:01:576. same response as Easy
nothing else
[attachment=0:540f5]CHiCO[ACE] - Wake Up World (blissfulyoshi) [Normal(upload)].osu[/attachment:540f5]


All out Great.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai bliss~
Told you what I found in #modHelp and such.
ANYWAY, enjoy a Tatsuo star.
*star*

p.s. Don't kds

• 
  00:53:134---01:17:750 :Kiai Time

• 
  00:30:827 (2): Add finish at the end
  01:16:019 (4): Whistle

• 
  00:30:826 (2): Add finish at the end
  01:30:057 (3): Slider ends here

• 
  00:30:827 (2): Add finish at the end
  00:52:365 (1): Spinner ends here
  01:20:442 (3): Add Clap at the beginning
  01:30:057 (3): Slider ends here

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~ HAI

My suggestions:

[General]

• 
  00:53:134---01:17:750 :Kiai Time Done. I am really thankful you caught this because the kiai sections were originally like you suggested, but I forgot to more my timing sections after changing the mp3. As a result, all my iming sections were off so I fixed them.

[Easy]

• 
  00:30:827 (2): Add finish at the end Done.
  01:16:019 (4): Whistle Done.

[Normal]

• 
  00:30:826 (2): Add finish at the end Done.
  01:30:057 (3): Slider ends here No, because I was trying to follow the lyrics and the words start fading out one on the quarter note. If I really wanted it to follow the whole lyrics, I would probably end the slider a quarter note after the whole note

[Hard]

• 
  00:30:827 (2): Add finish at the end Done.
  00:52:365 (1): Spinner ends here Done.
  01:20:442 (3): Add Clap at the beginning Done.
  01:30:057 (3): Slider ends here Same as Normal.

Good map~ Thanks

※ STAR ※

banvi wrote:

Hello
All my suggestion (nazi)
Easy
ok
Normal
00:33:134 (3,4) 1 grid right? (grid lv3) Done.
Hard
00:46:980 (3) 1 grid right? Moved 1 instead since I wanted to keep the sliders ends at same location.
00:48:518 (3) 1 grid left? ^

Great map! ~star

Djnn wrote:

Okai!
You forgot one part of the test, but it's okay. At least I know you read at least half of it ;P Sorry, I'll try to read the directions better next time I post in the queue.
Djnn Modding:

[Easy]:
01:29:480 (blank): maybe add a spinner and end around 01:31:596. And make the volume lower near the end? Well, to fit with the other diffs I have to end the spinner at 01:29:961, and that spinner is very short for an easy difficulty level, so I guess I won't add the spinner.

[Normal]:
01:29:288 (3): slider seems too stretched. 'loosen it' a bit. I'll try.............

[Hard]:
- I think there aren't enough hit circles. A lot of sliders. I like lots of sliders, so I think it is fine.

[All Maps]:
- (refers to Easy and Normal): Seems very similar to each other. Sorry, I liked the ideas I had in easy, so I made a lot of variations of the same types of patterns in normal. I guess it did not work out too well. I will try to do better next time, but I think the maps are different enough for now.......


Not a bad song at all.
star~

James2250 wrote:

Nice song

Easy:
move 01:28:519 timing section 1/4 earlier T_T, I am being sloppy. Nice catch. Done.

Normal:
move 00:06:211 (6) over so its straight like 00:17:749 (4,5,6)? I wanted these 3 notes to form a curve and then have the following note curve outward, so I am going to keep it for now. Still, I'll try to figure out a way to make this type of pattern look better in the future.


Hard:
no problems

nice clean maps
*star*

Slanox wrote:

Hey,

[Overall]

- Add combo colors ? Done. Not too sure how much I like my new color set though. If anyone has a better color palette, please tell me.

[Easy]

Looks fine.

[Normal]

Okay.

[Hard]

- 00:37:750(x) : Add circle with a finish ? Since I mapped only lyrics in that section, I don't think a note there is very appropriate, so I am going to leave this area as is.


Good.

Star !

x3ns0r wrote:

really great game and awesome song and map Thanks. I am glad I found a person who has played the Luminous Arc series.

[Hard]
01:27:173 add a slider from red tick to red tick here (maybe with clap sound) Since I mapped mostly lyrics, I don't think this slider would fit very well, but if other people ask, I might consider it.

increase the overall volume on all diffs a bit Done. (I really wish I could increase the volume of the kiai section further but it is already at 100% and I don't intend to use custom hitsounds)


star

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

00:50:058 (1) - A whistle on this spinner would be good. Done. It does sound nice.

[Normal]

00:50:056 (1) - Same as Easy. Same as Easy.
01:22:365 (1,2,3) - Don't you think this spacing is a bit too huge for a Normal?[/color] Distance snapped this now.

[Hard]

00:50:056 (1) - Silence this spinner? It would be better to me. I brought it to 10% since I don't like complete silence but If you really want, I can completely silence it.

Nice and cute map >w<

Shinde wrote:

Your thumbnail and audio preview are currently broken on the website and in-game.