1. SUPERWAVE (4.91 stars, 998 notes)

Kuki wrote:

[SUPERWAVE]
00:28:015 (11) - Stack this under a note or move it so it isn't overlapping.
00:54:148 (7,2) - Fix overlap or stack.
00:55:086 (3,6) - Stack.
01:03:992 (2) - Stack or fix overlap? I don't like this here personally.
01:07:742 (2) - ^
01:11:492 (2) - ^
01:20:398 (4,1) - Fix overlap or stack.
01:28:133 (1) - Fix overlap.

That was quite quick, i'd like you to message me in-game for more help if you think you need it, also generally I think that your map is far too fast, perhaps a remap is in order? Anyways, message me in-game anytime and I should be able to help

[ Seni ] wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue.

General

I can tell you with 100% certainty that this usage of kiai is unrankable. It is rarely allowed to toggle kiai more often when it fits the song, but you are using it wrong. I've seen a situation like this before and a very experienced person confirmed it, that is why I am certain about this.I was using it to spam fountains, fixed

the only diff

Not sure but the bg looks a bit low quality. it is, I'm currently looking for another one

00:27:195 (5,6,7,8,9) - Listen again to this part more closely. It should be a 5 note stream from 00:27:195 (5) - to 00:27:429 (8) - with beat snap divisor 1/8. I hope that a 5 note 256 bpm burst won't be much of an issue, that's the only reason why I kept it 1/6

00:36:336 (3) - Fix the blanket. fixed

00:37:039 (2,3,4,5) - There is no change in the music whatsoever here. No reason for inconsistent spacing. + There is absolutely no sound on the start of 00:36:804 (1) - . Delete that slider and put one hit circle on the blue tick where the slider currently ends. Same for 00:34:929 (1) - and 00:35:867 (1) - . fixed

00:38:679 (1) - and 00:39:617 (1) - are unnecessary. You're mapping to non-existent beats. fixed

01:18:758 (1) - In my opinion would feel better if it was distorted like 01:11:726 (1) - for example. Same for the Similar sliders later on. I want those "saws" to be circle shaped sliders

01:44:656 (3,4,1) - Fix with distance snap fixed

01:45:945 (3) - Nothing wrong here, but this is just proof for my point on 00:27:195 (5,6,7,8,9)

01:54:383 (6) - Should be nc and not the 1 after it. fixed

01:55:320 (3) - Same, should be nc + this circle is where the larger spacing should start out, not the 1 after it fixed

02:23:445 (4,5,6) - Plays really weird, maybe remap. remapped

03:05:633 (6,7,8) - Everywhere else for the same sound you use slider-slider-circle, it's only different here + it doesn't fit as well as a circle does. fixed

04:27:078 (3) - No reason for this to be so close when already at 04:27:898 (7) - the spacing is back to being much bigger. fixed

04:28:367 (9) - Can be tricky to read, should move it further away. fixed

04:31:648 (6,1) - Neater blanket fixed

04:36:336 (7) - This is kind of ridiculous compared to the rest of the map. fixed

04:43:133 (6,7) - Not a good blanket. fixed

04:43:836 (1) - Same for this and 04:43:133 (6) - fixed

05:00:008 (1) - Same

05:05:633 (1,2) - Same i was not going for blankets for the last 2, I'm not sure if I have to fix them

Just personally, I think the slider speed at the start is way overdone. I doubt a person who came to play a 4.8 star marathon would be able to do such a thing. Agreed, fixed

Hope I helped. GL

inspectorscout wrote:

Yo, from my queue

As the other two modders have told you, this map is really fast, and even if its just by a little bit, I would really decrease slider velocity. flow is really good however, great job with that

01:00:008 (1) - is it weird slider day or something? you might want to try something else (a break maybe?)

01:41:492 (2,3,4) - these don't really fit, maybe a small stream or something?

01:57:078 (1) - really hard, maybe try something else (like curving it or doing just note-slider-return but make the slider smaller (half the size))

02:00:711 (1) - ^

02:08:211 (1,2) - bad flow, overlap, try to avoid it

02:20:398 (4,5) - overlap

Just check the map for overlaps and blankets, and really, consider lowering sv, this is the new 5 minute big black, only it is even faster (which is...well...not really a good thing)

good luck
~Scout