00:52:919 (5) - I remember that Seikatsu used NC here, I think one of you have to ditto the other one here.. not 100% sure, just pointing out. You have NC here 01:34:361 (1) - so something isn't right. good point, but I think the new combo is not necessary to here.
01:04:780 (3,4,5) - make these straight? keep triangle shape *w*
01:06:873 (3,4) - Ctrl + G looks fun. Right now the 2,3 and 4,5 feels like its not expressing the music enough and plays a bit awkwardly great, fixed!
- 00:17:477 (5) - maybe do it parallel with 00:17:059 (4) - or ctrl+J form? fixed.
- 00:28:640 (2) - move a bit to right for straight flow ok!
- 01:01:570 (4) - move on y=268 for straight flow? again fixed!