Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue

[Insane]

um.... Is following ds in Insane good? I don't think so as it will be quite boring
If you use constant ds (1.4), then a little to check as notes are readable and playable, flowing is not a big matter also
00:03:289 (1) - flowing
00:45:326 (3,4) - ^
00:50:141 (6,8) - I hate straight line
00:56:437 (6,1) - flowing
01:05:326 (6,1) - flowing
01:08:289 (4,5) - flowing
nothing to say........
boring

-end-

Chocox wrote:

Background Image Improvement

no kds.

So I realised Normal BG was resized improperly , making it look flattened. I hope you like this image \:D/

New BG

There do not seem to be many changes...-^^;
However, I use it because a change does not have the big problem. Thank you

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue
requested 11 days ago
Sorry for late modding

[Insane]

um.... Is following ds in Insane good? I don't think so as it will be quite boring
If you use constant ds (1.4), then a little to check as notes are readable and playable, flowing is not a big matter also
As for DS : There is no plan of the change. I set all it in 1.6 at first. But there was indication that space became too much large. Therefore I changed DS to 1.4 only when "Inherited Points" became 1.2. I don't think that the present conditions have a problem.

00:03:289 (1) - flowing I don't understand it well only in "flowing". Either would be that the flow is bad? The reason that the flow has bad, Or If there is the indication of the moving coordinate, I can understand it.
00:45:326 (3,4) - ^
00:50:141 (6,8) - I hate straight line I had the placement of the straight line by a flow of melody and the music here. Because my image changes when I change it, I can't change it. I'm sorry.
00:56:437 (6,1) - flowing
01:05:326 (6,1) - flowing
01:08:289 (4,5) - flowing
nothing to say........
boring ^^; Thanks for modder.

-end- Thank you for modding

gokugohan12468 wrote:

M4M from your queue~

[ZJ's Easy][list]
CS +0.6 to keep my diff below 1.5 :3

00:10:511 (2) - x:192|y:272? Because that is blanket :3 00:12:363 (1) - blanket with 00:12:363 (1) -
00:10:882 (3) - x:232|y:192 (If can't put that, use DS 1.1x) why？
00:57:919 - That have a vocal sound so add a circle did it on purpose, otherwise the difficulty will boom :o
00:59:586 - ^ but is can blanket
01:00:882 - ^ and ^ I don't understand...

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

from M4M queue

EASY

00:25:141 (2) - I think a drum clap would sound more obvious, instead of a drum whistle, or you could choose to add both add both

00:54:956 (4) - I would suggest adding a circle here at (144.216) to make the rhythm feel more continuous, and not broken off Well, I know what you mean but did it on purpose so that the rhythm won't be too hard for beginners.

01:05:697 (3) - I would recommend curving this just to make it a bit more aesthetically pleasing yeah,good idea

SPOILER

tutuhaha wrote:

delete "op" in tag begin osu cannot search for two letter

[Easy]
00:12:363 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3357865 I prefer mine, the downbeat won't be clickable if I change like that...
00:40:511 (1,2,3,4) - too hard in easy diff I think, maybe just use the same way like 00:43:474 (1,2,3) - Well, fix it on my own since many guys complained about this
01:02:363 (2) - slider begin at here, is really hard to read now same with the first point...
01:17:919 (2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3357873 sounds good, but there is no much difference between these two imo, so keep...

call me back when you ready

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tutuhaha wrote:

_(:зゝ∠)_biubiu

• 
  Titleに"(TVサイズ)"を追加
  

• 
  00:13:660 (1) - (7)の場所的にやりにくい気がします。00:14:215 (3) コピーでCtrl Gがいいと思います
  00:29:030 (2) - (5)にStack
  00:31:993 (3) - 流れよくないと思います。(4)にStackがいいと思います
  00:34:956 (2) - 上と同じ理由です。(3)にStackがいいと思います
  00:56:067 (5,6) - 今のままだと(1)がかなり当てにくいです。00:54:771 (5) に00:56:067 (5) をStackさせて(6)をx116 y44辺りに持ってくるといい感じだと思います
  01:11:993 (2) - 1/2にして01:12:271 にCircleを追加
  01:15:697 (4) - 上と音取り同じでいいと思います
  
  img

  

-Maruk- wrote:

どもども

泡付いてるのでGeneral以外直すかはお任せします
[General]

• 
  Titleに"(TVサイズ)"を追加
  
  
  再度、こちらでも確認したんですが公式やwiki,通販関係とか見てもほとんど"TV size"表示がないんですよ。
  BNからの指摘もなかったので無くても問題ないかなと思ってます。次のBNもしくはQATから同じ指摘がきたら変更しますです。

[Insane]

• 
  00:13:660 (1) - (7)の場所的にやりにくい気がします。00:14:215 (3) コピーでCtrl Gがいいと思います (6)→(7)と左上向きの流れからの下に下がって再度左上向きのスライダーは抵抗ありんす。(現在は∞を書くぽい流れ)keepです。
  00:29:030 (2) - (5)にStack keepです。ズレててもInsaneでは問題と思うのとDS1.6で配置してるので無理にはずす必要ないかなと。
  00:31:993 (3) - 流れよくないと思います。(4)にStackがいいと思います 音やvocal聞いてもstackさせる必要が感じられない、、keepです。
  00:34:956 (2) - 上と同じ理由です。(3)にStackがいいと思います 今のままでもいいと思ってるんですが音の繋ぎ(2→3へ)としてはこちらの方がいいかも、、泡割れたら修正します^^;
  00:56:067 (5,6) - 今のままだと(1)がかなり当てにくいです。00:54:771 (5) に00:56:067 (5) をStackさせて(6)をx116 y44辺りに持ってくるといい感じだと思います 流れは良いと思ったんですが00:56:067 (5) - を移動させると00:56:623 (1,2,3) - への綺麗な配置（5を中心に1→2→3と外回りの円の流れ）が無くなるのがつらいです。
  01:11:993 (2) - 1/2にして01:12:271 にCircleを追加 01:12:271で拾う音がない(´・ω・｀)。強いて言えばvocalでしょうか、、hitsoundも付けれないのでいらないかなと。
  01:15:697 (4) - 上と音取り同じでいいと思います 上とは少し違う理由でkeepです。01:15:697 (4) - で流れ切りたいです。音とvocal共にここで一旦止まっているのと01:15:882 - に音が無いのでスライダーで引っ張る必要もないと判断したからです。
  
  img

  

Good luck~ 時間取ってもらってありがとでした 修正なくて申し訳ない

BeatofIke wrote:

Soon...

1. AR 8.7 would be better, considering the BPM and lack of large jump sequences.
2. 00:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find it quite awkward starting the map with this stream... It wouldn't hurt to map the intro so this stream doesn't feel so weird to play right at the start.
3. 00:57:919 (6,7) - These kick sliders felt very random. You don't use them elsewhere on the map for similar notes.
4. 01:17:549 (1) - I think 2 circles would fit better here.
   
5. I'm seeing some issues with lack of emphasis in many parts of this Insane.
   00:16:437 (6,1) - This is what i *want* to see. Where you map some sort of jump, flowbreak, etc... to emphasize the note here, because in the music, this note is also emphasized. You follow the 1.40x DS spacing too much, and that results in patterns that look good structurally, cuz they're all spaced well, but do not adequately emphasize the music.
   
6. Here is a list of places:
7. 00:15:696 (3,4) -
8. 00:18:660 (3,4) -
9. 00:19:400 (6,1) -
10. 00:25:141 (4,1) -
11. 00:34:215 (3,1) -
    
12. Some parts, emphasis is not mapped on the appropriate note:
    
13. 00:54:956 (6,7,1) - 6 is much stronger than 7, as you can hear from the drums, however you map a very large jump onto 7 instead, which doesn't correspond with the music very well.

1. 00:04:586 (4,1) - This rhythm is really weird for me. You completely miss 00:04:956 - . Try this rhythm instead:
   
   2 1/2 sliders

   
2. 00:39:863 (2,3) - This rhythm is really not appropriate for Hard. You are making the players click on blue-ticks instead of white/red ticks which is really awkward to play.
3. 00:52:363 (1,2,3) - I really question your usage of this kind of rhythm on a Hard. You really miss out on important notes in the song that the singer stresses:
4. 00:53:104 - 00:53:660 - I think this rhythm could definitely be improved, and made a bit more complex.

1. 01:17:549 (4,1) - It would be better if you didn't overlap because of the hit-burst that will cover the next slider. It's still readable, but here's an easy solution if you want.
   
   You could try something like this

   

1. Nothing to point out. Good job too!

monstrata wrote:

[Normal]

1. 01:17:549 (4,1) - It would be better if you didn't overlap because of the hit-burst that will cover the next slider. It's still readable, but here's an easy solution if you want. for me the pattern in your image does not flow that smooth in a Normal diff. I nevertheless feel the current one is totally readable.
   
   You could try something like this

   

Good diff!!

Unfortunately, I feel the Insane still has a lot of room for improvement, and rhythm choice in Hard can also be improved.

monstrata wrote:

[Insane]

1. AR 8.7 would be better, considering the BPM and lack of large jump sequences. I confirmed it in AR8.7. I was troubled very much. However, I think that balance with speed of the indication of note and the speed of the slider is bad. I keep it.
2. 00:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find it quite awkward starting the map with this stream... It wouldn't hurt to map the intro so this stream doesn't feel so weird to play right at the start. I cover a drum sounds overall and make it. The introduction does not have a drumbeat at all. I never think that it is good to place the note in the introduction. I rather think that it is unnatural. I keep it.
3. 00:57:919 (6,7) - These kick sliders felt very random. You don't use them elsewhere on the map for similar notes. It might be surely random. This point 00:58:011 - 00:58:197 - does not have the sound. However, I chose a kick slider to a flow daringly. I want to keep emphasis to flow. If there is pointing out again from different modder, I consider it.
4. 01:17:549 (1) - I think 2 circles would fit better here. ok.
   
5. I'm seeing some issues with lack of emphasis in many parts of this Insane.
   00:16:437 (6,1) - This is what i *want* to see. Where you map some sort of jump, flowbreak, etc... to emphasize the note here, because in the music, this note is also emphasized. You follow the 1.40x DS spacing too much, and that results in patterns that look good structurally, cuz they're all spaced well, but do not adequately emphasize the music.
   This part is DS1.6. I repeated changes in many modding. Please refer to this for the detailed process. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4331654 I keep it.
   
6. Here is a list of places:
7. 00:15:696 (3,4) - It's the same as the above
8. 00:18:660 (3,4) - ^
9. 00:19:400 (6,1) - ^
10. 00:25:141 (4,1) - ^
11. 00:34:215 (3,1) - ^
    
12. Some parts, emphasis is not mapped on the appropriate note:
    
13. 00:54:956 (6,7,1) - 6 is much stronger than 7, as you can hear from the drums, however you map a very large jump onto 7 instead, which doesn't correspond with the music very well. ok. I moved 00:54:956 (6,7) -

Unfortunately, I feel the Insane still has a lot of room for improvement, and rhythm choice in Hard can also be improved. hmm..The improvement up of the further difficulty may become overmap. I do a review. Thank you for the modding

-Maruk- wrote:

00:34:956 (2) - 上と同じ理由です。(3)にStackがいいと思います この部分直しておきました。ありあと

monstrata wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:04:586 (4,1) - This rhythm is really weird for me. You completely miss 00:04:956 - . Try this rhythm instead:
   
   2 1/2 sliders

   
2. 00:39:863 (2,3) - This rhythm is really not appropriate for Hard. You are making the players click on blue-ticks instead of white/red ticks which is really awkward to play.
3. 00:52:363 (1,2,3) - I really question your usage of this kind of rhythm on a Hard. You really miss out on important notes in the song that the singer stresses:
4. 00:53:104 - 00:53:660 - I think this rhythm could definitely be improved, and made a bit more complex.

1. 00:04:215 (2) - Blanket it with 00:03:289 (1) - ? It will makes flow run smoothly throughout this rhythm

1. 00:04:215 (4) - Blanket it with 00:04:771 (1) - ? The flow feels so rigid here, blanket may helps to make it more flexible and easy to be read . If you apply this one, realize other flow that have same problem clearly
2. 00:04:956 - This downbeat couldn't be ignored imo . This beat brings the one of the loudest beat in the intro section but only without cymbal sound . Make the pattern like this could help you to map that downbeat, it's same like what you did on 00:05:697 (2,3) -
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:141 (1,2) - This overlap might be a little tricky . (2) looks a bit covered up on its head may causing some gameplay problems imo . Rearrange the flow, use the similar placement like you did on 00:25:511 (3,5) - to avoid any problems that may found
4. 00:50:141 (3) - Looks a little bad because 00:50:697 (4) - first direction before the anchor points noticed isn't paralleled up with this slider . You can make it parallel and move it up a bit to avoid density between the objects so it won't creates something awkward like this imo

1. 00:14:956 (7,1) - Fix spacing . The current one is very close and it makes the flow very dense . It may causing some misread to people who often facing 3/4 rhythms too
2. 01:02:549 - End the first kiai at this section . It fits more better . The current one feels really awkward

1. 00:12:919 (4,5,6,7) - You could make them into more flexible jumping flow . The current feels a bit rigid
2. 00:14:215 - Use additions drum clap instead of additions drum whistle? Fits more better imo

Ipas wrote:

Hello! | From monstrata's Kudosu! tab
Please check this mod before bubble ><

[Adol's Normal]

1. 00:04:215 (4) - Blanket it with 00:04:771 (1) - ? The flow feels so rigid here, blanket may helps to make it more flexible and easy to be read . If you apply this one, realize other flow that have same problem clearly ah, imo flow is totally fine, but blanket would make the whole pattern untidy.
2. 00:04:956 - This downbeat couldn't be ignored imo . This beat brings the one of the loudest beat in the intro section but only without cymbal sound . Make the pattern like this could help you to map that downbeat, it's same like what you did on 00:05:697 (2,3) - remove my objects and listen carefully. the downbeat is NOT on the beginning of the bar.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:141 (1,2) - This overlap might be a little tricky . (2) looks a bit covered up on its head may causing some gameplay problems imo . Rearrange the flow, use the similar placement like you did on 00:25:511 (3,5) - to avoid any problems that may found really? i feel this type of overlap is readable for newbie players and looks fine. The space is not enough for a pattern like 00:25:511 (3,5) -. Also there is an Easy diff to balance the spread.
4. 00:50:141 (3) - Looks a little bad because 00:50:697 (4) - first direction before the anchor points noticed isn't paralleled up with this slider . You can make it parallel and move it up a bit to avoid density between the objects so it won't creates something awkward like this imo tired to make some change here.

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Go rank! Nice map~
Good Luck!

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417,96,82734,2,0,L|437:155,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,95,83474,2,0,L|243:154,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,138,84030,2,0,B|340:191|340:191|322:255,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,318,84586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,258,84956,6,0,B|112:231|112:231|57:231,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,343,85697,2,0,L|217:342,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,259,86437,2,0,L|237:259,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,260,86993,2,0,B|423:259|423:259|464:221,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,156,87549,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,104,87919,6,0,L|374:49,2,55,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,178,88474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,159,88660,2,0,B|248:161|248:161|200:186,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,226,89215,1,6,0:0:0:0:

Ipas wrote:

Hello! | From monstrata's Kudosu! tab
Please check this mod before bubble ><

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

1. I'm seeing some issues with lack of emphasis in many parts of this Insane.
   00:16:437 (6,1) - This is what i *want* to see. Where you map some sort of jump, flowbreak, etc... to emphasize the note here, because in the music, this note is also emphasized. You follow the 1.40x DS spacing too much, and that results in patterns that look good structurally, cuz they're all spaced well, but do not adequately emphasize the music.
   This part is DS1.6. I repeated changes in many modding. Please refer to this for the detailed process. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4331654 I keep it.
   
2. Here is a list of places:
3. 00:15:696 (3,4) - It's the same as the above
4. 00:18:660 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:19:400 (6,1) - ^
6. 00:25:141 (4,1) - ^
7. 00:34:215 (3,1) - ^

monstrata wrote:

I meant 1.60x My bad on that. You completely miss the point though. Your mapping doesn't emphasize certain notes that the song emphasizes.
Example: 00:16:437 (6,1) - You map a jump here, but not at 00:19:400 (6,1) - . Even though its the same melody that is being mirrored.
Because you follow DS so strictly on your Insane, notes that are emphasized in the music just play like any other note in your map...

Don't think of this as hating on your map or anything . It's best if I bring up what I think may be an issue and have your BN's interested in bubble/ranking consider it first before pushing it forward. Better than a QAT bringing this up after it's been qualified .

I surely regard DS as important. However, it is an exception about Hard diff and the Insane diff. I don't use DS at need and the point that thought. In any event, next BN is in the middle of modding. I perform a review of your MOD again. However, I don't make modifications unless modding is over.
I'm sorry..

Ipas wrote:

[Del's Hard]

1. 00:14:956 (7,1) - Fix spacing . The current one is very close and it makes the flow very dense . It may causing some misread to people who often facing 3/4 rhythms too
2. 01:02:549 - End the first kiai at this section . It fits more better . The current one feels really awkward

Ipas wrote:

Hello! | From monstrata's Kudosu! tab
Please check this mod before bubble >< The situation changed. I accept your MOD. Thank you very much

[Insane]

1. 00:12:919 (4,5,6,7) - You could make them into more flexible jumping flow . The current feels a bit rigid It is the place that I edited many times here. I changed it simple daringly.
2. 00:14:215 - Use additions drum clap instead of additions drum whistle? Fits more better imo fixed

Go rank! Nice map~
Good Luck! Thank you for modding. Ipas-san

1. 00:15:326 (1,2,1,2) - All the 3/2 sliders feel a bit boring all together. Consider switching some to 1/1 for variety (Applys to later similar parts as well)
2. 00:59:771 (2,1) - This is quite confusing for newbies, as the tail of (1) is closer to the tail of (2) then the head of (1) is to the tail of (2) (I hope you understand) (This is a DQ-able point)
3. 01:10:141 (1,2) - ^^

1. 00:09:400 (4,5) - Flows quite badly, due to the reverse Arrow pointing at the previous object. Move it somewhere else, or move the end to 288:28 (or smth)
2. 00:59:030 (2,3,4) - This is quite a difficulty spike. Everything is sliders, but then suddenly, a triplet pop up. Better make them a slider+circle
3. 01:07:919 (2,3,4) - ^^
4. 01:12:363 (3,4,5) - ^^

1. 01:29:030 (5,1) - Consider increasing spacing between these two for the final sound

1. 01:28:289 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels like a huge Spike, due to high jumps, consider toning it down to 2.0 DS

Baraatje123 wrote:

[General]
All clear

[Adol]Adol-san is very busy and couldn't revise it. Instead, I will revise it in substitution. It's approved for the person in question.

1. 00:09:400 (4,5) - Flows quite badly, due to the reverse Arrow pointing at the previous object. Move it somewhere else, or move the end to 288:28 (or smth) fixed
2. 00:59:030 (2,3,4) - This is quite a difficulty spike. Everything is sliders, but then suddenly, a triplet pop up. Better make them a slider+circle I think that repeat slider is suitable.
3. 01:07:919 (2,3,4) - ^^ ^
4. 01:12:363 (3,4,5) - ^^ fixed

Such a weird mapping style O.o
I love it

[Insane]

1. 01:28:289 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels like a huge Spike, due to high jumps, consider toning it down to 2.0 DS fixed.

This diff is focused on DS a lot, which I find quite inappropriate for Insane
I;m also not a fan of the offbeat sliders, but they do follow vocals fine As for this diff, indication of DS has been increased...Because I did not think that I receive indication of DS in "Insane diff", I'm at a loss. I almost changed the placement to DS1.4 daringly. (All the beginning was pointed out in 1.6)
If you need help pushing this map forward, get a few more mods on the Insane and you can call me back (that diff kinda needs more work, mostly spacing wise) okay. Thank you for modding.

Good luck!

1. 01:29:030 (5,1) - Consider increasing spacing between these two for the final sound fixed. I moved 01:29:215 (1) - to 404.136. http://puu.sh/k31ew.png

Milan- wrote:

insane
-00:57:919 (6,7) - this sounds better imo http://puu.sh/k1AWs/be076a015f.jpg The sound you're trying to map is really low and ambiguous. I'd prefer if you do triple for emphazing the cymbal, rather than mapping sounds that are hard to hear. Up to you really. hmm,,,,,okay. I revise it while regretting it. I like kick slider here lol. However, Because 1 circle of the 00:57:549 (4) - stops a flow, it is unnatural.
-01:01:067 (1) - using the repeat to cover the cymbal doesn't sound too good. Try to make 01:01:252 - clickable like http://puu.sh/k1B6t/1e9e7a1fc6.jpg or something similar fixed
-01:03:752 - maybe add a note?xd the drums are more clear there. fixed
-01:11:993 (2) - this should end at 01:12:178 - imo. Fits the vocals better. but up to you fixed
-01:13:660 (3) - clap on tail doesn't sound cool... Change it for drum-whistle. Sounds better. fixed
-AR 9 seems excessive. The map doesn't have jumps at all (just some few places) and also the BPM is low. I'd use AR 8 instead, plays good enough. But you don't like low AR i think, so 8.5 will be ok too. I don't want to change AR. but, Because there was the pointing out of the also monstrata-san, I switch to AR8.7.

Normal
-00:04:771 (1,2) - ay sounds bad as is ;w; the downbeat carries all the rhythm, if that makes sense. So ctrl+g'ng will sound cooler. It happens on other spots too like 00:08:474 (2,3) - ,mapping to vocals would be much natural to play; 00:11:437 (2,3) - 00:54:400 (5,6) - 00:55:882 (2,3) - 00:57:363 (5,6) - 01:00:326 (4,5) - 01:04:771 (2,3) - 01:06:252 (5,6) - 01:20:326 (4,5) - 01:24:030 (4,5) - 01:26:993 (4,5) - upbeat is stronger than the offbeat. Drums dont matter in any of these points, newbies listen the main melody and vocals over some very low kick (pretty much everyone listen to that xd) This is Adol-style!! I was troubled very much...However, Because it is entrusted from him, I accept it. fixed.
-00:17:919 (6,2) - sketchy overlap uuh.. It's kinda confusing due the fact that there's not a big gap between these and the flow with 00:18:289 (1) - is a bit sharp. 01:17:549 (4,5,1) - similar, it'd be better if you dont do that tbh ※↓
-00:30:141 (1,2) - this is actually ugly imo xd ※↓
-00:51:993 - ;w; vocals were cute I changed the 00:51:623 (5) - to the 1/1 slider.
-01:10:697 (2,1) - slightly overlaps aren't really cool, overlap more or not overlap at all. looks better ※↓
※This diff had to do a change of the rhythm and a change of the placement big by a correction of the overlap. However, I tried for keeping a base as much as possible. I'd like you to re-check.

Uhm, if rhythms in Hard and Normal are changed, call me back. If not, gl, kbai hm,,Anyway, If it is finished all, I call you.

• Metadata looks fine and the source aswell http://shirobako-anime.com/music.html
  
  
  
  

• Easy

1. 00:10:882(3)- An 3/2 slider with a repeat sounds weird here as I can listen the music.For a better rhythm here I suggest to remove the repeat from 00:10:882(3)- and snapping it to 2/1 slider and then adding a note on 00:11:993-.It should be like here
2. 00:30:141(1,2)- Have you tried to make these sliders same? If yes,it doesn't look so good in my opinion.My suggestion is to make first ctrl+C (I mean to copy the slider) then make ctrl+V to paste then make ctrl+J and then move the copied slider to 189|334.It should be like here
3. 00:57:919- In my opinion,you can add a note here for emphasizing 'koname' lyric instead ignoring it
4. 01:26:437(3)- As I said on 00:10:882(3)-,a 3/2 slider with a repeat sounds weird to me in my opinion.You can remove the repeat and snapping it to 2/1 slider and then adding a note on 01:27:549- to follow the vocal properly

• Adol's Normal

1. 00:49:400(1,2,3)- This rhythm could be much better here if you want to follow the song properly here.For example,00:49:400(1)- can be snapped to 3/2 slider and 00:49:956(2)- can be an 1/2 slider placed on 00:50:326- so the rhythm must be like here
2. 00:52:919(1,2,3)- This 1/1 slider -> 1/1 -> note rhythm sounds weird to me and it doesn't follow the vocals properly as I can see. If you want to follow the vocals properly,my suggestion is to move 00:52:919(2)- to 00:53:104- and adding a note on 00:52:919-.It should be like here
3. 01:08:660(3)- Making a ctrl+J to this slider would give a better transition between this slider and the next note (01:09:215(4)-) and also a better transition between this slider and 01:07:919 (2)-

• Del's Hard

1. 00:32:734(4)- You can use different type of rhythm here in my opinion.For example,00:32:734(4)- can be an 1/2 slider and on 00:33:104- you can add an 1/1 slider to follow the vocal much better and properly.It should be like here
2. 00:45:326(2,3)- I guess 00:45:697(3)- as an 1/4 slider with one repeat doesn't follow the vocal properly in my opinion.My suggestion is to replace this slider with a note placed on 00:45:882- and snapping 00:45:326(2)- to an 1/1 slider to follow the vocals properly.It must be like there
3. 00:55:326(1,2)- This 1/1 slider -> 1/1 rhyhtm sounds a bit weird and it seems it doesn't follow the vocals properly.I suggest to replace 00:55:882(2)- with just a circle and then place a 1/2 slider on 00:56:067- to follow the vocals properly and much better.Here
4. 01:04:215(1,2)- As I said on 00:55:326(1,2)- The 1/1 sliders rhythm sounds weird here and it doesn't follow the vocals properly.You can use this rhythm for following the vocals properly

• Insane

1. 00:35:141(3)- On 00:35:511- there's still vocal as I can hear so snapping the slider to the red tick (00:35:511-) to follow that vocal instead ignoring it wouldn't hurt at all
2. 00:36:623(3)- An 1/2 slider with an repeat doesn't sound so good in my opinion.I suggest to remove the repeat and then snap the slider to 1/1 slider I mean to red tick (00:36:993-) like here for following the vocal properly
3. 01:03:474(3,4,5,6,7)- Here a 5x stream ( I mean 5 circles stream ) doesn't follow the music really well in my opinion.If you want to follow the music properly here,I suggest to delete 01:03:567(4)- so from 01:03:660- you'll have triplets which will fit the music BG. It should be like here

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello! M4M

• Adol's Normal

1. 00:49:400(1,2,3)- This rhythm could be much better here if you want to follow the song properly here.For example,00:49:400(1)- can be snapped to 3/2 slider and 00:49:956(2)- can be an 1/2 slider placed on 00:50:326- so the rhythm must be like here hm,,It is good rhythm. However, it has some resistance that note of the 00:50:141 - is removed. Therefore I changed it in this way. http://puu.sh/k8DBH.jpg
2. 00:52:919(1,2,3)- This 1/1 slider -> 1/1 -> note rhythm sounds weird to me and it doesn't follow the vocals properly as I can see. If you want to follow the vocals properly,my suggestion is to move 00:52:919(2)- to 00:53:104- and adding a note on 00:52:919-.It should be like here fixed
3. 01:08:660(3)- Making a ctrl+J to this slider would give a better transition between this slider and the next note (01:09:215(4)-) and also a better transition between this slider and 01:07:919 (2)- okay.

• Insane

1. 00:35:141(3)- On 00:35:511- there's still vocal as I can hear so snapping the slider to the red tick (00:35:511-) to follow that vocal instead ignoring it wouldn't hurt at all okay. I switched to 1/1 slider.
2. 00:36:623(3)- An 1/2 slider with an repeat doesn't sound so good in my opinion.I suggest to remove the repeat and then snap the slider to 1/1 slider I mean to red tick (00:36:993-) like here for following the vocal properly hm..ok.
3. 01:03:474(3,4,5,6,7)- Here a 5x stream ( I mean 5 circles stream ) doesn't follow the music really well in my opinion.If you want to follow the music properly here,I suggest to delete 01:03:567(4)- so from 01:03:660- you'll have triplets which will fit the music BG. It should be like here You are right when it surely listen well. fixed.

That's all from me! I'm really sorry for this long delay You can call me back for rebubble or Milan- or another BN.It's your choice.
Until then,Good Luck! okay. Thank you for modding

-Nanaka- wrote:

暇つぶし びっくりしたｗありがとございます^^
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

General

1. The gap between Easy and Normal is large 現在Adol-sanはとても忙しくて返信出来ません。今は私が代理で答えてるのでそれに答えます。これが彼らのmap styleのようです。Easyを少し上げてNormalを落とすのが理想だと思います。ですが、Normalに関しては基を変更する事になるので私は彼のスタイル（基）を変更する事が出来ません。というか、出来ればしたくないです。ここがどうしてもネックになるのであれば彼らに相談します..（GDはほんと難しい('A`)）
   Easy SV 0.8 DS 1.0<Normal SV 1.1 DS 1.4,so High lol

Adol's Normal

Geneでも書いた通り今、彼は対応出来ないので私が対応します。これは彼からの希望です。つか、返信してるじゃんｗｗどゆ事？ｗ

1. 00:08:474 (4) - Remove Note.00:07:734 - You here sound picked up did not for melody is strange. 00:04:771 (4) - also here the sound different
   try 00:07:919 - 1/1 repeat Slider 00:09:030 - Circle.or ← Ctrl+G rhythm,Either 1/1 repeat sliderの方が良さげなので変更します。サビ後のフレーズも同じなので修正します。
2. 00:10:882 (3,4) - ^ same ^
3. 00:23:845 (5,1) - bad flow (5)とその後のnoteを少し移動させました。
4. 00:34:586 (1) - Remove NC 00:37:363 (1) - ^ 00:37:919 (2) - add NC
   This can see easy will fixed
5. 00:41:808 - add whistle or Clap I added clap.
6. 00:42:549 - 00:43:289 - add whistle.fit Vocal fixed
7. 00:49:400 (1) - end at 00:49:771 - 00:49:956 - add note better,sound increased it is height up rhythm ここ前にByByさんに指摘されて修正した所なんですよね～、、まー言われた通りに変更したわけではないですがｗ以前は見にくい配置だったのですが、あれから配置変えして1note入れても問題ない状態なので変更します。

Insane

• 
  どうでもいいけど自分で作ったカラフルボックスはAR9なのにBPM1高いこっちは何故8.7なのかが分かりませんでした 個人的にはAR9がいいです('A`)ですが、BNも含め数人から指摘が合ったので採用しました。我を通すより意見が多い案件を優先しただけです、、まー納得はしてませんｗ

1. 00:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 開幕うるさいです、すくなくとも00:02:734 (1,2) - はDrum whistleでの方があってると思います 5連打は35%まで落としました。whistleも変更しました.
2. 00:06:808 - 00:07:734 - ここにもS whistle足したほうが良い感じになると思います fixed
3. 00:12:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistle.Clapのつけ方おかしいと思います、一回全部外して以下試してみてください fixed. (6)だけスネア音拾いたいのでそのままでいきます。
   00:12:363 (1) - Soft Finish
   00:12:549 (2) - S whistle
   00:12:734 (3) - Clap
   00:12:919 (4) - S whistle
   00:13:104 (5) - Clap
   00:13:289 (6) - S whistle
   00:13:474 (7) - Clap
   ついでに流れもよくないので置きなおすか5.6をDtrl + Gしてみてください 個人的にはctrl + Gみたいな流れが好きです。最初そういう感じの配置がかなりありました。ですが、DSに忠実な譜面なのでこういうジャンプは結構つっこまれて全てなくしましたorz。また言われる可能性がかなり高いので配置変えにします。
4. 00:14:215 - 少なくともここはSClapでいいと思います fixed
5. 00:35:141 - 00:36:067 - 00:36:623 - 00:37:363 - 私なら全部S Finishにします fixed。なんかうるさくなった気が、、ｗ
6. 00:39:030 (1,2) - どちらかというと高音がなってるのにD Finishは重たいです、普通にS FinishかS Clapでよくないですか hm,,clapでいきます
7. 00:45:326 (3) - D要素ないです、普通にClapにしましょう fixed. 以下同じ↓
   00:45:697 - S whistle
   00:46:067 - D whistle
   00:46:252 - S whistle ここだけはSが違和感あったのでD whistleでいきます
   でいいと思いました
8. 00:49:030 (4,1) - 手前のパターン引き継いで1のClap外して4の頭に付けた方がいいです fixed
9. 00:56:437 (6,1) - 流れ強引すぎですblanketしたかっただけにしか見えません、43/271あたりに置くのが自然な流れだと思います ここ前にもつっこまれた所なんですよね。ん～、、okay. ただしDS1.4で似た感じの配置にします。次のnoteからかなり位置がずれるので、このあたりの配置を変えました。
10. 01:08:845 - パターン的にここDwhistleじゃないんですか付けるにしても01:09:586 (3) - こっちだと思います fixed
11. 01:17:549 (1) - S Finish 2note後の01:17:919 (3) - にFinish付いてて２回連続がどうも違和感あります。と言うか高音が個人的に納得いかない、、重すぎるという事であればD whistleに変更します。
12. 01:21:252 (3) - bodyのSampleDrum外してくださいノイズ入ってます nandetsuiteru
13. 01:23:289 - 01:23:474 - 手前の以下ry S whistleでいいです7にはお好みで (6)だけにしときます
14. 01:27:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 最初の参考に付け直してください fixed

mod time: 1hour

gl ありがとでした

Milan- wrote:

Hard
-00:08:474 (2,3) - uhm sounds more natural if you ctrl´g this rhythm.
-00:09:400 (1) - finish on head?
-00:24:956 (3,4) - ctrl'g this rhythm too.. sounds a bit weird as is, cuz from 00:25:141 - starts vocals and there's a clear cymbal too.
-00:34:215 (3) - Dont use tails for very strong beats like this one. Cymbals or downbeat should be clickable, so something like this http://puu.sh/k6aCU/e11f25b179.jpg do the same but better I will consider it, i like it like now xD
-00:59:400 (4,1,2,3) - this rhythm sounds weird, the long slider doesnt fit where it is tbh, something like http://puu.sh/k6aSy/4a65ca21fd.jpg may work better and still have a pause
-01:06:067 (2,3) - uuh sounds bad. Try ctrl'g too, so it follows the vocals and doesnt ignore the strong upbeat. Here too 01:24:030 (3,4) -
-01:26:437 (1,2,3,4) - try something like this http://puu.sh/k6b4F/812c62cac4.jpg . or just ctrl g 01:26:808 (2,3) - . Right now sounds like mapping nothing
-01:18:474 (4,5,6) - prefer if you use a 1/4 repeater for the sake of gameplay, but uhm up to you.
-There are some stuff that are harder than Insane lol, so please nerf them:
-00:12:271 (6) - i think it's unneeded, the sound is really low and no really, but up to you iguess
- 00:40:511 (1,2,3) - these patterns should use the constant 1.3x. Especially 00:44:215 (1,2,3,1) - . change DS for 00:44:215 (1,2,3,1)-
-00:53:844 (1,2,3,4) - prefer to use 3 circles max, 4 circles is the only thing that makes Insane an Insane. Same for 00:14:215 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Will consider it
-00:10:141 (3,4,1,2) - try to avoid these many consecutives "jumps". Will consider it
-00:57:549 (4,5,1) - try to nerf the distance a bit between these. It's a bit too high
-If you nerf these, spread will be much better, k. cool

Milan- wrote:

normal: 00:09:030 (4,1) - distance plz.. also, 00:06:437 (1,2) - i think it'd be nice if (2) was more apart of (1) like this http://puu.sh/kAcnH/dc75f4559c.jpg . It may be confusing for some players

let me know

Milan- wrote:

okey gl

1. 00:43:474 (1) - Better to transform this slider into 2 circles for each beats instead, so that they will catch the drums like this 00:40:511 (1,2) - , which are fits nicely

1. 00:56:437 (4) - This slider doesn't feel good by using it like this . I'd rather to follow the vocals here, by switching the rhythm between 00:56:437 (4,1) - . I think this downbeat 00:56:808 - isn't really important (since you're made it on slider end), so skipping it won't be a matter

Ipas wrote:

Hello!

[Del's Hard]

1. 00:56:437 (4) - This slider doesn't feel good by using it like this . I'd rather to follow the vocals here, by switching the rhythm between 00:56:437 (4,1) - . I think this downbeat 00:56:808 - isn't really important (since you're made it on slider end), so skipping it won't be a matter

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Call me back later

Ipas wrote:

Qualified! Have a nice day~

MkGuh wrote:

Congrats! O3O

P o M u T a wrote:

Congrats! O3O

-Maruk- wrote:

おめでとー

Adol Christin wrote:

a bit late.... congratulation, kunka san~