Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Thanks for the clarification.

[General]

The current BG size is 1200 x 600. Consider changing the size to either 4:3 or a widescreen equivalent?

• [Kantan]
  
  Consider HP-1 and OD-1 ? The difficulty settings across all difficulties will be more reasonable if this is employed.

1. 01:56:677 (60) - maybe d as you did at 00:23:420 (18) - ? The rhythms there are in fact very similar. ok
2. 02:02:163 (65) - same as ^ ok

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:43:991 (85) - this is the only difficulty that the note is mapped as D. Consider removing finish for pattern consistency throughout the set ?
2. 01:05:934 (32) - similar reason as ^ , D would be better here.
3. From 01:11:077 to 01:59:420 - this part is mapped a way too dense for the difficulty. You may want to add some 2/1 breaks by deleting notes like 01:32:506 (83,84) - deleted some notes~
4. 01:33:363 (86) - consider changing this note to D ? This could mark the change in song rhythm nicely like Kantan and Oni. ok

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:22:048 (83) - Inconsistency of finishes also occurs here. Consider using d instead like the other three difficulties ?
2. From 00:26:163 to 00:27:534 - Although the representation of the music would be weakened, the current pattern could be simplified like this for a 2/1 break since the part from 00:00:106 to 00:43:991 - is rather dense: (cursor at 00:26:848 - )
3. From 00:31:648 to 00:33:020 - same as ^
4. 01:08:506 (270) - you may delete this note since the music here is less prominent than the others.
5. 01:32:506 (402,403,404,405) - same as Futsuu, it would be better to leave a 2/1 break by deleting these notes since the kiai is really consecutively mapped.
6. 01:33:363 (407) - same as Futsuu ok

• [Oni]
  
  Looks solid.

Feel free to call me when you have got enough mods.

Nwolf wrote:

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Note that this mod contains mainly deletions and finishers so only kd this if you really think this deserves it. If I get to do a 2nd mod it will probably include less of that stuff and more ~colors~.

[General]

Add "LapFox Trax" and maybe also "Renard" to tags (1st cause that's his label for all the aliases). added

[Futsuu]

Mostly pretty fine, the only issue is the 2nd kiai which has to be nerfed drastically. It needs 2/1 breaks to split patterns and somewhere down the middle a 4/1 break as... break. This will lead to less 1/2 which is another thing we want. Try to aim for a maximum length of 7-15 1/1 notes. This is also more drastic in the first part of the 2nd kiai (up to where the vocals start).

[Muzukashii]

To have a nicer build up and less repeating stuff in the intro (probably going to mod the lower diffs here too but Muzukashii first) you could delete following notes:

00:12:277 (40) - 00:15:020 (52) - 00:17:763 (64) - 00:20:506 (76) - . After that change 00:15:791 (55) - 00:21:277 (79) - to kats to differ it from previous quads. deleted

00:52:220 (209) - Change to kat cause pitch. weff ok
01:09:363 - Try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3207138 this. It is based a bit on how Oni did it: Reducing notes a bit and then adding some again. This will also create more 2/1 breaks.

In the 2nd kiai I would suggest following deletions to create breaks: 01:12:448 (286,287) - 01:17:934 (318,319) - 01:23:420 (350,351) - 01:28:906 (382,383) - 01:33:020 (406) - , after the kiai: 02:00:020 (531) - 02:05:506 (557) -


02:16:906 (618,619,620) - Change to kat to make 02:17:248 (621) - more playable. While we're at it, 00:43:648 (192,193,194,195) - here too (including adding a finisher) :3

[Oni + Finishers below]

Following changes deletions recommend in Oni which will be connected to the following finisher additions:

00:32:934 (174) - 00:43:906 (268) - (also trade 00:43:734 (266,267) - ) 01:22:306 (507) - 02:17:163 (930) - (02:16:991 (928,929) - also trade these)



FINISHERS: I would recommend adding more finishers to all diffs to emphasis the crashes more. Especially in transitions between different parts of the song I would recommend finishers. Some of these finishers might already exist in some diffs.

00:00:106 - (important) 00:11:077 - 00:22:048 - 00:33:020 - 00:43:991 - (very important) 00:54:963 - 01:05:934 - (very important) 01:11:420 - 01:22:391 (508) - 01:33:363 - 01:44:334 - 01:55:306 - (important) 02:06:277 - 02:17:248 - (important)
more finishers now

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[OniMuzukashiiFutsuuKantan]
remove all notes

kds pls

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[OniMuzukashiiFutsuuKantan]
remove all notes

kds pls

Lanturn wrote:

Quickly resized BG for you: http://puu.sh/icgLu.jpg

Your tags conflict due to the Kantan having an extra space here: http://puu.sh/ichFr.png
Tags you could add: FIAB (commonly used apparently) and Happy Hardcore (the genre of the music, or at least I think that is what this is.)

Add some audio-leadin. 1896 is optimal, but 1500-2000 will work as well!

Also consider moving the preview point back 1/4 or 1/2.

That's about all I can do. Congrats on winning the MBC!

No KD.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[OniMuzukashiiFutsuuKantan]
remove all notes

kds pls

Gray Veyron wrote:

dam i want to qualify it.

• [Futsuu]
  
  01:11:077 至 01:59:420 - 目前2/1的休息點數量不足, 密度和一般的Muzu相差無幾. 強烈建議在這段放一些2/1 break給新手一些喘息的空間:

1. 01:16:048 (20) - 這個音可以刪除, 感覺對譜面的流向影響不大
2. 01:21:534 (40,41,42,43) - 這裡可作適當的簡化, 例如把01:21:534 (40,41) - 刪掉和將01:22:219 (43) - 改作k以配合音高
3. 01:27:363 (61) - 同01:16:048 (20) -
4. 01:32:506 (80) - 同上

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:26:763 (101) - 這裡的音高和00:15:791 (53) - 一樣, 建議也改成k
2. 00:32:248 (127) - 同上
3. 00:49:477 至 02:17:248 - 和Futsuu有相同問題, 建議也在音樂段之間刪一些音看看: 01:32:506 (398,399,400,401) -
4. 02:00:020 (527) - 同00:26:763 (101) -
5. 02:05:506 (553) - 同上

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

為了方便溝通, 以下就用中文吧

• [Futsuu]
  
  01:11:077 至 01:59:420 - 目前2/1的休息點數量不足, 密度和一般的Muzu相差無幾. 強烈建議在這段放一些2/1 break給新手一些喘息的空間:

1. 01:16:048 (20) - 這個音可以刪除, 感覺對譜面的流向影響不大
2. 01:21:534 (40,41,42,43) - 這裡可作適當的簡化, 例如把01:21:534 (40,41) - 刪掉和將01:22:219 (43) - 改作k以配合音高
3. 01:27:363 (61) - 同01:16:048 (20) -
4. 01:32:506 (80) - 同上

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:26:763 (101) - 這裡的音高和00:15:791 (53) - 一樣, 建議也改成k
2. 00:32:248 (127) - 同上
3. 00:49:477 至 02:17:248 - 和Futsuu有相同問題, 建議也在音樂段之間刪一些音看看: 01:32:506 (398,399,400,401) -
4. 02:00:020 (527) - 同00:26:763 (101) -
5. 02:05:506 (553) - 同上

cdhsausageboy wrote:

777毁灭世界

cdhsausageboy wrote:

777毁灭世界

Nwolf wrote:

\:D/

cdhsausageboy wrote:

777毁灭世界