Galileo Galilei - Aoi Shiori · forum

Umi

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2015-05-26T00:05:00+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 25 juillet 2015 at 20:17:00

Artist: Galileo Galilei
Title: Aoi Shiori
Source: あの日見た花の名前を僕達はまだ知らない。
Tags: Ano Hi Mita Hana no Namae o Bokutachi wa Mada Shiranai anohana opening xChippy collab xChumi
BPM: 132
Filesize: 9336kb
Play Time: 05:32
Difficulties Available:

Hanabi (3,8 stars, 928 notes)

Download: Galileo Galilei - Aoi Shiori
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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xChumi come back ! ~

Parts

00:00:361 to 00:51:270 - Umi
00:51:270 to 01:45:815 - xChippy
01:45:815 to 02:36:724 - Umi
02:43:997 to 03:32:179 - xChippy
03:32:179 to 04:30:360 - Umi
04:44:906 to 05:32:179 - xChippy

SB by Lanturn

Credits to Megurine Luka for Skin.

Last edited by Umi 2015-07-25T18:17:24+00:00, edited 72 times in total.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

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Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2015-05-26T00:07:17+00:00

xChumi <3

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2015-05-26T00:11:56+00:00

A wild lanturn appeared.

*Umi throw a Masterball

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2015-06-04T15:18:13+00:00

Yes.

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2015-06-10T11:56:38+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

tags suggetion:
opening
combonumbers in comboclor 6 is very hard to see about this custom skin. I suggest to avoid the similar color as white

[Hanabi]
Umi

02:24:679 (2,3,4) - hard to find rhythm. I prefer stream or reversing like 02:21:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - or 02:28:315 (3,4) -
03:32:179 (1) - i prefer to end at blue line like 03:35:815 (1) -
04:13:997 (1) - why is only this straight? I think it is better to keep the sequence of curved pattern at this part

xChippy

01:09:451 (1,2) - i feel this jump is a little hard because sandwitched by the circles of 1/4 rhythm
01:32:179 (3) - I suggest Ctrl+G ( or 01:32:633 (4) - ) only right to left pattern is a little boring
02:49:451 (1,2,3) - why not make symmetric pattern about vertical line?
03:10:361 (3,4,5) - hard to see. increase spacing
04:44:906 (1,2) - this overlapping is not good looking
04:50:360 (1,4) - stack correctly
05:04:906 (1) - I prefer to keep 1/2 rhythm at this part
05:27:633 (3,4,5,6,1) - I prefer to decrease spacing a little. around 1.5x~1.6x is better for this part, imo

really good song and cute skin~
and, nice mapping Umi, xChippy! xChumi <3
double star ~☆☆
~Good Luck~

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2015-06-10T13:13:06+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
tags suggetion:
opening added
combonumbers in comboclor 6 is very hard to see about this custom skin. I suggest to avoid the similar color as white changed a bit the color
[Hanabi]
Umi
02:24:679 (2,3,4) - hard to find rhythm. I prefer stream or reversing like 02:21:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - or 02:28:315 (3,4) - did something else
03:32:179 (1) - i prefer to end at blue line like 03:35:815 (1) - fixed
04:13:997 (1) - why is only this straight? I think it is better to keep the sequence of curved pattern at this part curved a bit
really good song and cute skin~
and, nice mapping Umi, xChippy! xChumi <3
double star ~☆☆
~Good Luck~

thx for your mod and stars Rand! =w=b

Kami Kun

Kami Kun 2015-06-10T13:43:03+00:00

Hope to see this map ranked soon ~

Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-06-13T08:35:25+00:00

awesome !!

Umi

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Topic Starter

Umi 2015-06-13T10:11:57+00:00

thx guys!

NVAN

268 posts

Joined November 2013

NVAN 2015-06-14T18:05:45+00:00

Good evening, Sir or Miss
Your mod as you requested.

Legends

| Unrankable. There's a chance that it's actually a bad idea to be mapped
| Highly Recommended. Give me a strong reason to refuse this
| Suggestions. You can keep this alone if you don't like it
| Comments or Attention. Just a word of the map's part. You better not reply it to keep yourself happy.

[Hanabi]

00:28:542 (3) - Move it to x:392 y:120 (The sharp point of 00:27:633 (1)) So you can make a shape there.
00:33:770 (2) - A slider should overlap a circle because sometimes it'll be invisible on a normal type skin. I recommend you to move it x:284 y:240
00:57:861 (5,6,7,1) - Nice overlap
01:06:270 (3,6) - Try to use the same slider for these two. I can see these two sliders are diffrent
01:02:633 (2) - (Nazi) Move it to x:336 y:72, so the hea of it could be like in the middle of 01:03:088 (3,4) and the head of 01:03:542 (5)
01:04:451 (2) - Why the DS is diffrent than 00:52:633 (4). Fix this!
01:18:088 (3) - Move the 2nd achor point to x:300 y:136. It'll be more fit with the 01:16:724 (1)
01:44:679 (6) - Move it to x:136 y:196 so it'll blanketed by 01:43:997 (5) and it can be in the middle of 01:43:542 (4) and the head of 01:44:906 (1)
01:48:315 (3) - Try to make this blaketed by 01:48:542 (4)
02:13:997 (3) - (Nazi) Move it to x:320 y:216, it'll make a triangle at 02:13:088 (1,2) since 02:13:997 (3,4,5) looks like a triangle
02:51:270 (1) - Spooning isn't prefect, move the 3rd anchor point to x:256 y:8 and the last anchor point to x:360 y:44
03:50:360 (1,3) - Try to make this one not overlapped by 03:50:360 (1). It's pretty hard to be read for some new AR9 Readers
04:15:815 (1,2) - (Nazi) Oh, what the bloody hell is this?! You better make it like this, my friend! It's seriuosly annoying for any who tried this for the first time. You want to see more players raging?
05:09:451 (4) - Tweak this a bit little to the left (Precisely x:96 y:64) Since that isn't really placed well in the middle of 05:08:542 (1)

Nice maps

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2015-06-14T22:50:26+00:00

XeroiZi HD wrote:
Good evening, Sir or Miss
Your mod as you requested.

Legends
| Unrankable. There's a chance that it's actually a bad idea to be mapped
| Highly Recommended. Give me a strong reason to refuse this
| Suggestions. You can keep this alone if you don't like it
| Comments or Attention. Just a word of the map's part. You better not reply it to keep yourself happy.

[Hanabi]
00:28:542 (3) - Move it to x:392 y:120 (The sharp point of 00:27:633 (1)) So you can make a shape there. fixed
00:33:770 (2) - A slider should overlap a circle because sometimes it'll be invisible on a normal type skin. I recommend you to move it x:284 y:240 i like the pattern
01:48:315 (3) - Try to make this blaketed by 01:48:542 (4) nop prefer the current way
02:13:997 (3) - (Nazi) Move it to x:320 y:216, it'll make a triangle at 02:13:088 (1,2) since 02:13:997 (3,4,5) looks like a triangle did something else
03:50:360 (1,3) - Try to make this one not overlapped by 03:50:360 (1). It's pretty hard to be read for some new AR9 Readers i don't think so
04:15:815 (1,2) - (Nazi) Oh, what the bloody hell is this?! You better make it like this, my friend! It's seriuosly annoying for any who tried this for the first time. You want to see more players raging? it's not that hard to read imo, but i'll kee this in my mind

Nice maps

ty for mod~

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2015-06-17T17:35:33+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
xChippy
01:09:451 (1,2) - i feel this jump is a little hard because sandwitched by the circles of 1/4 rhythm fixed
01:32:179 (3) - I suggest Ctrl+G ( or 01:32:633 (4) - ) only right to left pattern is a little boring nah prefer it this way
02:49:451 (1,2,3) - why not make symmetric pattern about vertical line? Prefer to keep it like this so there is a jump to 3 which fit the music
03:10:361 (3,4,5) - hard to see. increase spacing seems fine tho
04:44:906 (1,2) - this overlapping is not good looking ^
04:50:360 (1,4) - stack correctly done
05:04:906 (1) - I prefer to keep 1/2 rhythm at this part Consistency reasons
05:27:633 (3,4,5,6,1) - I prefer to decrease spacing a little. around 1.5x~1.6x is better for this part, imo decreased a bit
really good song and cute skin~
and, nice mapping Umi, xChippy! xChumi <3
double star ~☆☆
~Good Luck~

XeroiZi HD wrote:
Good evening, Sir or Miss
Your mod as you requested.

Legends
| Unrankable. There's a chance that it's actually a bad idea to be mapped
| Highly Recommended. Give me a strong reason to refuse this
| Suggestions. You can keep this alone if you don't like it
| Comments or Attention. Just a word of the map's part. You better not reply it to keep yourself happy.

[Hanabi]

. I recommend you to move it x:284 y:240
00:57:861 (5,6,7,1) - Nice overlap
01:06:270 (3,6) - Try to use the same slider for these two. I can see these two sliders are diffrent intentionally different yeah
01:02:633 (2) - (Nazi) Move it to x:336 y:72, so the hea of it could be like in the middle of 01:03:088 (3,4) and the head of 01:03:542 (5) eeh moved it a bit away, wouldnt go for that small spacing
01:04:451 (2) - Why the DS is diffrent than 00:52:633 (4). Fix this! done
01:18:088 (3) - Move the 2nd achor point to x:300 y:136. It'll be more fit with the 01:16:724 (1) fixed my own way
01:44:679 (6) - Move it to x:136 y:196 so it'll blanketed by 01:43:997 (5) and it can be in the middle of 01:43:542 (4) and the head of 01:44:906 (1) doesnt fit musically referring to the emphasize
02:51:270 (1) - Spooning isn't prefect, move the 3rd anchor point to x:256 y:8 and the last anchor point to x:360 y:44 seems fine to me tho
05:09:451 (4) - Tweak this a bit little to the left (Precisely x:96 y:64) Since that isn't really placed well in the middle of 05:08:542 (1) aight

Nice maps

Thanks for modding~!

My part

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Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-06-20T11:50:57+00:00

XCHUMI <3

[Skin]
It might be me, but the numbers are really hard to read on the lightblue, yellow and orange color

[General]
Add a Storyboard for the names for the collab, it's a nice extra touch
Why is kiai on at 03:46:724 (1,2,3) - these notes? The music is nearly silent, aren't you better of removing kiai here (for a new start after this)?

[Umi]

00:13:088 (1,2) - This doesn't play that nice, Ctrl G (2) and it'll play better
00:18:997 (2,3) - The stack feels a little weird, because in the previous parts, you Always use "jumps" and no stacks, Space them for consistency with the rest of this part
01:59:224 (2) - This slider feels weird, as it ends on a fairly strong sound. Please remove 1 reverse of it, and then add a circle at 01:59:679
02:15:588 (3) - Please make this either 2 sliders or 4 circles. Kicksliders like these is quite hard to notice, as the second reverse comes in pretty late
02:17:406 (3) - ^^
04:21:269 (1,4,5,6) - This overlap, compared to the others, is one of the only overlaps which is actually a little awkward to play. I think it's better when you stack these 3 circles under the end of (1)

[xChippy]

00:54:906 (1,2) - Please space them a little less, it totally doesn't look like it's 3/4, and this way it'll also look a little better, something like 232:240 or 200:200 feel good for (2)
00:55:815 (3,4) - ^^
01:28:088 (3,4,5,1) - I don't feel the flow here, I'd say you should ctrl G (3,5) so it'll feel better
03:10:361 (3,4,5) - The music doesn't imply any usgae of 1/4 here, it feels overdone. The music is really calm here, no drums or other sounds
03:31:156 (7,8) - Why is the distance on these 2 notes much lower compared to the previous notes?
05:16:497 (3) - This note feels really out of place, as there is no sound supporting it
05:20:133 (3) - ^^

Great map!
Have a star, and the best of luck!

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2015-07-01T12:31:28+00:00

Sorry for the late reply, i was on holidays ^^

baraatje123 wrote:

XCHUMI <3

[Skin]
It might be me, but the numbers are really hard to read on the lightblue, yellow and orange color it's fine to me

[General]
Add a Storyboard for the names for the collab, it's a nice extra touch looking for a storyboarder atm~
Why is kiai on at 03:46:724 (1,2,3) - these notes? The music is nearly silent, aren't you better of removing kiai here (for a new start after this)? yup fixed

[Umi]
00:13:088 (1,2) - This doesn't play that nice, Ctrl G (2) and it'll play better it plays good imo
00:18:997 (2,3) - The stack feels a little weird, because in the previous parts, you Always use "jumps" and no stacks, Space them for consistency with the rest of this part fixed
01:59:224 (2) - This slider feels weird, as it ends on a fairly strong sound. Please remove 1 reverse of it, and then add a circle at 01:59:679 it doesn't feel weird to me
02:15:588 (3) - Please make this either 2 sliders or 4 circles. Kicksliders like these is quite hard to notice, as the second reverse comes in pretty late easy to read imo
02:17:406 (3) - ^ ^
04:21:269 (1,4,5,6) - This overlap, compared to the others, is one of the only overlaps which is actually a little awkward to play. I think it's better when you stack these 3 circles under the end of (1) i don't think so

Great map!
Have a star, and the best of luck!

thx for star and mod barraatje !

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2015-07-03T18:30:25+00:00

baraatje123 wrote:

XCHUMI <3

[xChippy]
00:54:906 (1,2) - Please space them a little less, it totally doesn't look like it's 3/4, and this way it'll also look a little better, something like 232:240 or 200:200 feel good for (2) Reduced a bit tho tbh this wouldnt cause any reading difficulties
00:55:815 (3,4) - ^^ ^
01:28:088 (3,4,5,1) - I don't feel the flow here, I'd say you should ctrl G (3,5) so it'll feel better nah current is fine. Not aiming for a circular flow
03:10:361 (3,4,5) - The music doesn't imply any usgae of 1/4 here, it feels overdone. The music is really calm here, no drums or other sounds There is a small vocal tho, but oh well seems like it's not that major, removed it
03:31:156 (7,8) - Why is the distance on these 2 notes much lower compared to the previous notes? First one is to introduce the deacceleration last one is for the soft finish.
05:16:497 (3) - This note feels really out of place, as there is no sound supporting it I get where you're coming from but the pitch changes on those notes. Besides because of the similarity to the intro and more places people might think it would be out of place leaving it blank. As most of the players would have likely memorized the original melody which emphasized that beat more clearly.
05:20:133 (3) - ^^ ^
Great map!
Have a star, and the best of luck!

Thanks for modding!

Update pls *^*

My parts

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Kami Kun

Kami Kun 2015-07-04T00:59:48+00:00

*Shoots more Stars*
Edit : I hope this will make me join in Senpai profile ;-;

Umi

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Topic Starter

Umi 2015-07-05T14:29:54+00:00

Senpai noticed u =w=b

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2015-07-05T22:21:04+00:00

Tu me déçois t'as pas encore réussi à la rank depuis tout ce temps.
Ah mais oui, c'est pas tv size !!!
/me runs far away

Umi

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Umi 2015-07-06T00:21:09+00:00

Tu peux participer au rank si ça te chante ahah :p

#umireconvertion #yeuxdoux #taspaslechoix

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2015-07-06T08:55:27+00:00

Placeholder, maybe...

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2015-07-22T20:02:09+00:00

Hello there, sorry for delay.

Hanabi

General
- Unrankable issues :

01:38:542 - There are 2 green timing point at the same time, please remove one.
03:32:179 - Those timing points are at the same time but they don't have the same volume, please fix it.

- Questions, suggestions :
Did you forget to enable these settings, or it is just intentional ? => http://puu.sh/j8WEd/d8a1fd3656.png
I don't really know a lot about storyboarding, but what is Thumbs.db in storyboard file ?

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Umi
00:03:088 (3) - it could be better if you don't overlap this circle here, it will be more fluid to play and it will be easier to read as well.
00:17:861 (4,5) - There is less distance between both compared to 00:17:633 (3,4) - . And you did the other way round for previous pattern to emphasize the last downbeat you can hear on this tick for example 00:18:088 -. Is that intentional ? imo, you should keep consistency and use a higer distance between 00:17:861 (4,5) - compared to 00:17:633 (3,4) - .
01:57:398 (2,3,4,5) - This looks a little weird to play because the spacing is different and the motion is circular. It could be difficult to handle if you play it with doubletime. It could be better if you make a perfect diamond with a consistent spacing to make this pattern smoother and more comfortable to play.
04:29:451 (3,4,5,6) - It looks more logical if you make a perfect square instead, because it looks like the pattern you created and it will be more comfortable to play a perfect "Z" pattern.

xChippy
01:02:171 (1,2) - Here you used a 3/4 slider, but i don't really think it is a good idea because you skip the vocal which is more important here 01:02:398 -. And there is no important sound on the blue tick you followed with this 3/4 slider, not like 00:59:443 (3) - which sounds fine, or 01:03:989 (1) - .
03:35:815 (1,2,4,5) - It could be better for reading if you make them consistent, i mean the circle after the 3/4 slider which is overlapped or completely stacked because it could be trapping for players.

I guess it could be ready to be pushed forward after I got all answers.
Call me back ~

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2015-07-22T22:09:46+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello there, sorry for delay.

Hanabi

xChippy
01:02:171 (1,2) - Here you used a 3/4 slider, but i don't really think it is a good idea because you skip the vocal which is more important here 01:02:398 -. And there is no important sound on the blue tick you followed with this 3/4 slider, not like 00:59:443 (3) - which sounds fine, or 01:03:989 (1) - . fixed
03:35:815 (1,2,4,5) - It could be better for reading if you make them consistent, i mean the circle after the 3/4 slider which is overlapped or completely stacked because it could be trapping for players. Not muh part ouo

I guess it could be ready to be pushed forward after I got all answers.
Call me back ~

Thanks CB~

Only the first part

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Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2015-07-23T02:07:43+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello there, sorry for delay. COUCOU CB

Hanabi

General
- Unrankable issues :
01:38:542 - There are 2 green timing point at the same time, please remove one. Deleted
03:32:179 - Those timing points are at the same time but they don't have the same volume, please fix it. fixed

- Questions, suggestions :
Did you forget to enable these settings, or it is just intentional ? => http://puu.sh/j8WEd/d8a1fd3656.png intentionnal
I don't really know a lot about storyboarding, but what is Thumbs.db in storyboard file ? nope deleted

____________________________________

Umi
00:03:088 (3) - it could be better if you don't overlap this circle here, it will be more fluid to play and it will be easier to read as well. stacked with previous slider
00:17:861 (4,5) - There is less distance between both compared to 00:17:633 (3,4) - . And you did the other way round for previous pattern to emphasize the last downbeat you can hear on this tick for example 00:18:088 -. Is that intentional ? imo, you should keep consistency and use a higer distance between 00:17:861 (4,5) - compared to 00:17:633 (3,4) - . I did something else too
01:57:398 (2,3,4,5) - This looks a little weird to play because the spacing is different and the motion is circular. It could be difficult to handle if you play it with doubletime. It could be better if you make a perfect diamond with a consistent spacing to make this pattern smoother and more comfortable to play.ok fixed
04:29:451 (3,4,5,6) - It looks more logical if you make a perfect square instead, because it looks like the pattern you created and it will be more comfortable to play a perfect "Z" pattern. I kinda like the current pattern

I guess it could be ready to be pushed forward after I got all answers.
Call me back ~

Updated, Thx CB!

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2015-07-23T16:18:53+00:00

Good Luck, Bubbled #1.

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,686 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2015-07-25T15:08:46+00:00

hi umi chippy chan :3

[General]

Source must be changed "あの日見た花の名前を僕達はまだ知らない。"

[Hanabi]

all suggestion
00:17:861 (4,5) - Ctrl + G more better flow imo.
03:31:270 (8) - and 05:22:633 (4) - missing distance snap?

that's all call me back :3

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2015-07-25T17:06:08+00:00

Satellite wrote:
hi umi chippy chan :3 Oh, hi satellite-san! :3

[General]
Source must be changed "あの日見た花の名前を僕達はまだ知らない。" changed
[Hanabi]
all suggestion
00:17:861 (4,5) - Ctrl + G more better flow imo. fixed
that's all call me back :3

Thx

waiting xchippy reply ~

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2015-07-25T18:17:24+00:00

First one is intentional, fixed the other one

Thanks Satellite-san

Umi

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Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2015-07-25T18:18:29+00:00