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Xceon feat.Mayumi Morinaga - Sakurayozora (Extended Mix) [Os

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Draftnell
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Draftnell
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 Agustus 2015 at 22:00:46

Artist: Xceon feat.Mayumi Morinaga
Title: Sakurayozora (Extended Mix)
Source: REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!
Tags: HYPER J-POP Dai. 罪と罰 Tsumi to batsu Crime and Punishment Starving Trancer moimoi Eternalie
BPM: 158
Filesize: 7076kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Etlie's Normal - 4Key (1,76 stars, 768 notes)
  2. Expert - 4Key (4,03 stars, 2393 notes)
  3. Hard - 4Key (2,83 stars, 1752 notes)
Download: Xceon feat.Mayumi Morinaga - Sakurayozora (Extended Mix)
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Etlie's Normal = 100% Done
Hard = 100% Done
Expert = 100% Done

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Last edited by Draftnell , edited 37 times in total.
[ A v a l o n ]
1,981 posts
Joined July 2014
[ A v a l o n ]
Hi . .
mod as Draftnell request :D

General
  1. add "Eternalie" on tags
  2. offset 00:00:455 - this is fair if you put on that, since you've put some pattern before the offset start
    but before apply the offset, apply the mod below first
Column
|1|2|3|4|


  • Etlie's Normal
  1. 00:05:771 (5771|3) - LN start here 00:06:151 - since the main long sound is start on that :v
  2. 00:17:163 - start here . . make a particular LN ? put on 00:17:163 - 00:17:543 - 00:17:923 - 00:18:303 - that's the way better to expressor exchange the stream sound here
  3. 00:18:872 (18872|0,19062|1,19062|3,19252|2,19442|3,19632|0,19822|3,19822|1) - and etc. hmm i have 2 suggestion for kind of this part . . . 1. follow the main piano with only 1 note, or 2. follow the kick and drum only . . . it's really hard for NM if you follow 2 of type sound instead . . in other words, this part is quite calm than other part, but this part is harder than other parts ;w; look the highlight http://puu.sh/i0EU4/d05bd57a5f.jpg
  4. 00:24:948 (24948|3,25708|0,26467|3) - delete this if you following the piano sound, and many more xD
  5. 00:35:771 - try this ? http://puu.sh/i0Fch/f9f9b15d72.jpg
  6. 01:02:543 (62543|3) - delete this . . and make a 1/1 LN on here 01:02:353 (62353|0) - cuz when i press it, it feel like i follow vocal . . well, using LN is the way better to express instrumental sound on here xD
  7. 01:19:442 - why using 2 LN ? . . . 1 is enough i think
  8. 01:28:556 - & 01:29:315 - why use 2 notes ? . . well i suggest to use 1 note only . .cuz for other sound like this, you've only put 1 note
  9. 01:32:353 (92353|1,92543|2,92733|0,92923|3) - delete that, and make a LN on 01:32:353 - & 01:32:733 - to express the kick stream here
  10. 01:46:784 - add 1 note
  11. 01:58:556 - make LN here, and delete this one 01:58:746 (118746|3) -
  12. 02:10:328 - why not same as 01:14:125 - ? i think it's same type of sound
  13. 02:11:657 (131657|3,131657|0) - LN end here 02:12:037 - according the type sound of you follow .. (bass maybe ?)
  14. 02:13:176 (133176|0,133176|2) - same reason as ^
  15. 02:16:404 - & 02:16:784 - only 1 note? but same sound as 02:15:644 - imo
  16. 02:22:005 (142005|3,142290|2,142480|0) - why not LN ?
  17. 02:33:872 (153872|0,154442|3,154822|1) - a little weird to be pressed . . . i suggest to not follow guitar on this part, cuz the sound of guitar is a little random . . hmm maybe you can try and test this? http://puu.sh/i0G2v/1e851add05.jpg it's the way better to express this part :3
  18. 02:56:657 (176657|0) - delete, no sound on here
  19. 03:22:480 (202480|2,203999|3) - not heavy sound, delete it . . . it's make this part is more harder . . the sound is little calm here xD
  20. last, maybe you can re-arrenge of vocal part xD . . it's kinda weird to play . .. cuz the other instrumental is still clearly audible and exist on that . . . hmm i prefer to map the instrumental part . . rather than the vocal xD

  • Hard
  1. 00:00:644 (644|1,834|2,1024|1) - salah tempat bro . . . letakkan di garis biru 00:00:739 - 00:00:929 - dan 00:01:119 -
  2. 00:03:682 (3682|1,3872|2,4062|0) - sama ini sama yg di atas :'v
  3. 00:13:461 (13461|2) - pindah ke 00:13:368 - kolom 1 . . . ngikut vocal ya gak past juga itu, mending samakan aja sama pattern yang lainnya
  4. 00:16:214 - tambah note, sama suara kick nya kyk 00:16:404 (16404|3,16404|2,16594|1,16594|2,16784|0,16784|1,16974|2,16974|1) -
  5. 00:19:347 (19347|1,19442|0) - ini gak pas menurutku . . . mending ikut piano + kick atau drum aja kyk ini 00:18:682 (18682|0,18682|1,18872|2,19062|1,19062|0) -
  6. 00:20:866 (20866|1,20961|3) - sama masalahnya kyk diatas "v
  7. 00:22:480 - tambah note . . . yg lain lu jg pke 2 note kan buat kick . . . contoh suara yg sama 00:20:201 (20201|3,20201|2) -
  8. 00:23:809 (23809|2) - ganti jadi stream 1/4 . . .soalnya nada yg mulai ada "hold" nya mulai dari sini 00:23:999 - . . . plus 00:24:379 (24379|1,24569|2) - jadikan aja LN . . . coba aja
  9. 00:35:866 (35866|2) - delete, stream nya mulai dari sini bang 00:36:056 - :'v
  10. 00:36:626 (36626|2) - delete juga, stream nya berhenti . . . play aja di 25% playback rate
  11. 00:48:682 - tambah note di kolom 4, dan hapus aja ini 00:48:777 (48777|1) - no sound, stream uda berhenti
  12. 00:49:062 - LN streamnya kurang enak bro :v . . . coba aja ini http://puu.sh/i0Hlx/6ff217767d.jpg mantab dah xD
  13. 01:02:638 (62638|1) - delete, gak ada stream soundnya
  14. 01:03:682 (63682|1,63777|3) - pindah ke kolom 4 dan kolom 1 diatasnya . . . lebih pas dan enakan dimanin
  15. 01:04:822 - http://puu.sh/i0Hx9/1d75334273.jpg coba aja, lebih pas
  16. 01:06:720 (66720|1,66910|1) - coba deh di re-arrange lagi part ini . . gak enak banget menurutku xD
  17. 01:07:860 - hapus 1 . . suaranya gak sekenceng sama kick yang disini 01:08:239 (68239|0,68239|2) -
  18. 01:08:619 - hapus 1 juga . .. dan tambahin 1 note disini buat stream 01:08:714 -
  19. 01:12:417 (72417|1) - pindah ke kolom 1 . . . lebih enak
  20. 01:24:379 (84379|1,84569|3) - ctrl G
  21. 01:26:847 (86847|0,87037|1,87227|0) - tukeran kolomnya . . jadikan 2, 1, 2 . .. coba aja, lebih pas dan satu lagi . . . kebanyakan LN sama single note mu layeringnya di paksakan di kolom yang sama, padahal beda suaranya la . . . aneh jadinya waktu di test play
  22. kelupaan, 01:26:847 - add note, suara kicknya sama dengan 01:26:657 -
  23. 01:32:069 (92069|2) - delete, no stream sound exist
  24. 01:36:910 (96910|3) - kekolom 1 aja . . . klo nggk 01:36:720 (96720|2,96910|3) - ctrl g . . . . ini juga pindah aja ke kolom 1 01:37:480 (97480|1) -
  25. 01:43:366 - tambah note, sama kyk di part yg lain
  26. 01:45:265 - jangan ditanya . . . w agak sensitif kalo masalah LN :v ==> nih lebih pas http://puu.sh/i0Id5/25d6576025.jpg dapat dgn mudah meraih combo 300an
  27. 01:57:512 (117512|1,117607|3,117701|2) - incorrect snap . . . saran w ganti aja ke lain bentuk . . . krna snapnya bukan 1/4
  28. 02:05:771 - & 02:08:809 - tambah note
  29. 02:15:170 - tambah note lagi, streamnya berkelanjutan disini
  30. 02:22:100 (142100|0,142290|1,142480|2,142670|3) - nah ini salah snap nya nih klo lu ngikutin gitarnya = = > nih yg bener http://puu.sh/i0ICi/72ae2e1390.jpg
  31. 02:24:379 (144379|2) - ini mulai nya dari sini 02:24:284 - dan 02:24:758 (144758|3) - habisnya disini 02:25:138 - . .. btw itu LN nya salah tuh . .masa nada yg pendek di kasi LN . . . nih yg bener http://puu.sh/i0IM4/e4191f6119.jpg Draftnell baka XD
  32. 02:25:328 (145328|2,145518|3,145708|2,145898|0,146088|1) - nah di bagian kek gini bisa di kasi LN nih, buat ngelanjutin gitarnya
  33. 02:28:651 - tambahin aja lagi note . . . ada streamnya kok
  34. 02:30:455 - tambah note, krna di part lain lu pke 2 buat kick :v
  35. 02:31:404 (151404|1,151404|0,151594|2,151594|1,151784|2,151784|3,151974|2,151974|1) - w sarainin mending pake LN aja buat gitar nya . . dari pada pke double note . . rada2 aneh cuy . . . kan lu pke lN buat ekspresikan suara gitarnya :D
  36. 02:32:258 (152258|1) - ghost note . . delete, saran w 02:32:163 (152163|0) - ubah aja ke LN buat gitarnya
  37. 02:32:733 - tambah note
  38. 02:33:872 (153872|0) - ini harusnya panjang sampai sini 02:35:012 -
  39. 02:40:043 (160043|1,160138|2,160233|3) - snap nya bukan 1/4 . . .saran w ini 02:39:948 (159948|0) - jadikan aja LN, biar lebih sinkron sama 02:39:379 (159379|3) -
  40. 02:42:417 (162417|2) - pindah ke kolom 4 . . . lalu 02:44:315 (164315|0,164505|2) - ctrl G
  41. 02:48:493 - http://puu.sh/i0Jtv/78e2a56761.jpg buat ngelanjutin instrumental yg disini 02:48:113 (168113|0,168208|1) -
  42. 02:49:347 - tambahin note juga buat instrumentalnya . . . ini juga tambahin note 02:50:107 -
  43. 03:07:385 (187385|1,187480|2,187575|3) - ganti ke lain bentuk . .mungkin ke LN aja . . . karena snapnya bukan 1/4
  44. 03:14:410 (194410|1,194600|1,194790|3) - delete, incorrect snapped and ghost note . . saran w gmana klo pke note buat vocal aja buat opening nya . . contoh nya kek ini http://puu.sh/i0JK4/0627ac895e.jpg pake double double
  45. 03:19:537 (199537|0,199632|1,199727|2) - snapnya cuy :'v
  46. 03:20:866 (200866|2) - delete, streamnya sudah abis
  47. 03:25:376 - salah cuy . . coba aja denger2 di 25% playback rate . . . mulai dari sini 03:25:423 - http://puu.sh/i0JX1/8c33b6157d.jpg

  • SV Mod on Expert diff
  1. 01:20:581 - 01:20:866 - 01:20:961 - mendingan di delete aja . . soalnya dibagian ini gak cocok di kasi SV
  2. 02:56:657 - speed nya 2.00 trus 02:56:657 - jangan lupa tambahin 1 note buat ngefek ke SV nya
  3. 02:56:752 - speed nya 0.75
  4. 02:57:037 - speed nya 1.00 test aja . . . pas tuh SV nya
  5. 02:56:847 - delete timing ini
    hapus aja semua timing SV mu . .trus tambahin punya w yg diatas itu /o/
Draftnell
1,074 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Draftnell

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi . .
mod as Draftnell request :D

General
  1. add "Eternalie" on tags
  2. offset 00:00:455 - this is fair if you put on that, since you've put some pattern before the offset start
    but before apply the offset, apply the mod below first
Column
|1|2|3|4|


  • Etlie's Normal
  1. 00:05:771 (5771|3) - LN start here 00:06:151 - since the main long sound is start on that :v
  2. 00:17:163 - start here . . make a particular LN ? put on 00:17:163 - 00:17:543 - 00:17:923 - 00:18:303 - that's the way better to expressor exchange the stream sound here
  3. 00:18:872 (18872|0,19062|1,19062|3,19252|2,19442|3,19632|0,19822|3,19822|1) - and etc. hmm i have 2 suggestion for kind of this part . . . 1. follow the main piano with only 1 note, or 2. follow the kick and drum only . . . it's really hard for NM if you follow 2 of type sound instead . . in other words, this part is quite calm than other part, but this part is harder than other parts ;w; look the highlight http://puu.sh/i0EU4/d05bd57a5f.jpg
  4. 00:24:948 (24948|3,25708|0,26467|3) - delete this if you following the piano sound, and many more xD
  5. 00:35:771 - try this ? http://puu.sh/i0Fch/f9f9b15d72.jpg
  6. 01:02:543 (62543|3) - delete this . . and make a 1/1 LN on here 01:02:353 (62353|0) - cuz when i press it, it feel like i follow vocal . . well, using LN is the way better to express instrumental sound on here xD
  7. 01:19:442 - why using 2 LN ? . . . 1 is enough i think
  8. 01:28:556 - & 01:29:315 - why use 2 notes ? . . well i suggest to use 1 note only . .cuz for other sound like this, you've only put 1 note
  9. 01:32:353 (92353|1,92543|2,92733|0,92923|3) - delete that, and make a LN on 01:32:353 - & 01:32:733 - to express the kick stream here
  10. 01:46:784 - add 1 note
  11. 01:58:556 - make LN here, and delete this one 01:58:746 (118746|3) -
  12. 02:10:328 - why not same as 01:14:125 - ? i think it's same type of sound
  13. 02:11:657 (131657|3,131657|0) - LN end here 02:12:037 - according the type sound of you follow .. (bass maybe ?)
  14. 02:13:176 (133176|0,133176|2) - same reason as ^
  15. 02:16:404 - & 02:16:784 - only 1 note? but same sound as 02:15:644 - imo
  16. 02:22:005 (142005|3,142290|2,142480|0) - why not LN ?
  17. 02:33:872 (153872|0,154442|3,154822|1) - a little weird to be pressed . . . i suggest to not follow guitar on this part, cuz the sound of guitar is a little random . . hmm maybe you can try and test this? http://puu.sh/i0G2v/1e851add05.jpg it's the way better to express this part :3
  18. 02:56:657 (176657|0) - delete, no sound on here
  19. 03:22:480 (202480|2,203999|3) - not heavy sound, delete it . . . it's make this part is more harder . . the sound is little calm here xD
  20. last, maybe you can re-arrenge of vocal part xD . . it's kinda weird to play . .. cuz the other instrumental is still clearly audible and exist on that . . . hmm i prefer to map the instrumental part . . rather than the vocal xD

  • Hard
  1. 00:00:644 (644|1,834|2,1024|1) - salah tempat bro . . . letakkan di garis biru 00:00:739 - 00:00:929 - dan 00:01:119 -
  2. 00:03:682 (3682|1,3872|2,4062|0) - sama ini sama yg di atas :'v
  3. 00:13:461 (13461|2) - pindah ke 00:13:368 - kolom 1 . . . ngikut vocal ya gak past juga itu, mending samakan aja sama pattern yang lainnya
  4. 00:16:214 - tambah note, sama suara kick nya kyk 00:16:404 (16404|3,16404|2,16594|1,16594|2,16784|0,16784|1,16974|2,16974|1) -
  5. 00:19:347 (19347|1,19442|0) - ini gak pas menurutku . . . mending ikut piano + kick atau drum aja kyk ini 00:18:682 (18682|0,18682|1,18872|2,19062|1,19062|0) -
  6. 00:20:866 (20866|1,20961|3) - sama masalahnya kyk diatas "v
  7. 00:22:480 - tambah note . . . yg lain lu jg pke 2 note kan buat kick . . . contoh suara yg sama 00:20:201 (20201|3,20201|2) -
  8. 00:23:809 (23809|2) - ganti jadi stream 1/4 . . .soalnya nada yg mulai ada "hold" nya mulai dari sini 00:23:999 - . . . plus 00:24:379 (24379|1,24569|2) - jadikan aja LN . . . coba aja
  9. 00:35:866 (35866|2) - delete, stream nya mulai dari sini bang 00:36:056 - :'v
  10. 00:36:626 (36626|2) - delete juga, stream nya berhenti . . . play aja di 25% playback rate
  11. 00:48:682 - tambah note di kolom 4, dan hapus aja ini 00:48:777 (48777|1) - no sound, stream uda berhenti
  12. 00:49:062 - LN streamnya kurang enak bro :v . . . coba aja ini http://puu.sh/i0Hlx/6ff217767d.jpg mantab dah xD
  13. 01:02:638 (62638|1) - delete, gak ada stream soundnya
  14. 01:03:682 (63682|1,63777|3) - pindah ke kolom 4 dan kolom 1 diatasnya . . . lebih pas dan enakan dimanin
  15. 01:04:822 - http://puu.sh/i0Hx9/1d75334273.jpg coba aja, lebih pas
  16. 01:06:720 (66720|1,66910|1) - coba deh di re-arrange lagi part ini . . gak enak banget menurutku xD
  17. 01:07:860 - hapus 1 . . suaranya gak sekenceng sama kick yang disini 01:08:239 (68239|0,68239|2) -
  18. 01:08:619 - hapus 1 juga . .. dan tambahin 1 note disini buat stream 01:08:714 -
  19. 01:12:417 (72417|1) - pindah ke kolom 1 . . . lebih enak
  20. 01:24:379 (84379|1,84569|3) - ctrl G
  21. 01:26:847 (86847|0,87037|1,87227|0) - tukeran kolomnya . . jadikan 2, 1, 2 . .. coba aja, lebih pas dan satu lagi . . . kebanyakan LN sama single note mu layeringnya di paksakan di kolom yang sama, padahal beda suaranya la . . . aneh jadinya waktu di test play
  22. kelupaan, 01:26:847 - add note, suara kicknya sama dengan 01:26:657 -
  23. 01:32:069 (92069|2) - delete, no stream sound exist
  24. 01:36:910 (96910|3) - kekolom 1 aja . . . klo nggk 01:36:720 (96720|2,96910|3) - ctrl g . . . . ini juga pindah aja ke kolom 1 01:37:480 (97480|1) -
  25. 01:43:366 - tambah note, sama kyk di part yg lain
  26. 01:45:265 - jangan ditanya . . . w agak sensitif kalo masalah LN :v ==> nih lebih pas http://puu.sh/i0Id5/25d6576025.jpg dapat dgn mudah meraih combo 300an
  27. 01:57:512 (117512|1,117607|3,117701|2) - incorrect snap . . . saran w ganti aja ke lain bentuk . . . krna snapnya bukan 1/4
  28. 02:05:771 - & 02:08:809 - tambah note
  29. 02:15:170 - tambah note lagi, streamnya berkelanjutan disini
  30. 02:22:100 (142100|0,142290|1,142480|2,142670|3) - nah ini salah snap nya nih klo lu ngikutin gitarnya = = > nih yg bener http://puu.sh/i0ICi/72ae2e1390.jpg
  31. 02:24:379 (144379|2) - ini mulai nya dari sini 02:24:284 - dan 02:24:758 (144758|3) - habisnya disini 02:25:138 - . .. btw itu LN nya salah tuh . .masa nada yg pendek di kasi LN . . . nih yg bener http://puu.sh/i0IM4/e4191f6119.jpg Draftnell baka XD
  32. 02:25:328 (145328|2,145518|3,145708|2,145898|0,146088|1) - nah di bagian kek gini bisa di kasi LN nih, buat ngelanjutin gitarnya
  33. 02:28:651 - tambahin aja lagi note . . . ada streamnya kok
  34. 02:30:455 - tambah note, krna di part lain lu pke 2 buat kick :v
  35. 02:31:404 (151404|1,151404|0,151594|2,151594|1,151784|2,151784|3,151974|2,151974|1) - w sarainin mending pake LN aja buat gitar nya . . dari pada pke double note . . rada2 aneh cuy . . . kan lu pke lN buat ekspresikan suara gitarnya :D
  36. 02:32:258 (152258|1) - ghost note . . delete, saran w 02:32:163 (152163|0) - ubah aja ke LN buat gitarnya
  37. 02:32:733 - tambah note
  38. 02:33:872 (153872|0) - ini harusnya panjang sampai sini 02:35:012 -
  39. 02:40:043 (160043|1,160138|2,160233|3) - snap nya bukan 1/4 . . .saran w ini 02:39:948 (159948|0) - jadikan aja LN, biar lebih sinkron sama 02:39:379 (159379|3) -
  40. 02:42:417 (162417|2) - pindah ke kolom 4 . . . lalu 02:44:315 (164315|0,164505|2) - ctrl G
  41. 02:48:493 - http://puu.sh/i0Jtv/78e2a56761.jpg buat ngelanjutin instrumental yg disini 02:48:113 (168113|0,168208|1) -
  42. 02:49:347 - tambahin note juga buat instrumentalnya . . . ini juga tambahin note 02:50:107 -
  43. 03:07:385 (187385|1,187480|2,187575|3) - ganti ke lain bentuk . .mungkin ke LN aja . . . karena snapnya bukan 1/4
  44. 03:14:410 (194410|1,194600|1,194790|3) - delete, incorrect snapped and ghost note . . saran w gmana klo pke note buat vocal aja buat opening nya . . contoh nya kek ini http://puu.sh/i0JK4/0627ac895e.jpg pake double double
  45. 03:19:537 (199537|0,199632|1,199727|2) - snapnya cuy :'v
  46. 03:20:866 (200866|2) - delete, streamnya sudah abis
  47. 03:25:376 - salah cuy . . coba aja denger2 di 25% playback rate . . . mulai dari sini 03:25:423 - http://puu.sh/i0JX1/8c33b6157d.jpg

  • SV Mod on Expert diff
  1. 01:20:581 - 01:20:866 - 01:20:961 - mendingan di delete aja . . soalnya dibagian ini gak cocok di kasi SV
  2. 02:56:657 - speed nya 2.00 trus 02:56:657 - jangan lupa tambahin 1 note buat ngefek ke SV nya
  3. 02:56:752 - speed nya 0.75
  4. 02:57:037 - speed nya 1.00 test aja . . . pas tuh SV nya
  5. 02:56:847 - delete timing ini
    hapus aja semua timing SV mu . .trus tambahin punya w yg diatas itu /o/
APPLY ALL thx a lot Avalon o/ i know...i baka :v


#UPDATED
[ A v a l o n ]
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[ A v a l o n ]

WTF you apply all of them O_O
SpectorDG
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SpectorDG
Hey Draft :) Mod here /Hard/
FOCUS Some Red Lines and Song long words (add LN's)
MOD
00:04:157 (4157|0) - Move 4
00:04:157 (4157|0) - Add LN
00:04:632 (4632|0,4822|1) - Move 00:04:632 (4632|1,4822|2) -
00:05:012 (5012|0) - Move 3
00:05:771 (5771|0) - Add note
00:05:961 (5961|1) - ^
00:06:151 (6151|1) - Move 1
00:17:163 (17163|0) - Delete
00:17:353 (17353|0) - Add note
00:17:733 (17733|2) - ^
00:17:828 (17828|2) - Move 4
00:18:113 (18113|0) - Add Note
00:18:493 (18493|0) - ^
00:21:626 (21626|1) - Ghost Note
00:49:822 (49822|0) - Add note
Ahhh other not find something :|
Goodluck ;)
[-Star_Lenz-]
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[-Star_Lenz-]
Hi Draff-san >w<
M4M done ~

Col : 1|2|3|4|

NB : di ctrl+g Hs ke tuker otomatis >w< & ini hanya sugesti saya :D

Etlie's Normal
00:22:860 (22860|0,23049|3) - ctrl+g
00:23:429 (23429|3,23619|0) - ctrl+g because 00:23:429 (23429|3) - low pitch & 00:23:809 (23809|3) - move col 1
01:17:923 (77923|1) - move col 4 , high for pitch >w<
01:19:442 (79442|2) - move col 2 ?
01:22:480 (82480|1,82670|3) - ctrl+g
01:25:328 (85328|3) - same for picth 01:24:948 (84948|2) - 01:25:328 (85328|3,85518|2) - ctrl+g
01:27:606 - add note ?
01:28:366 - ^ ?
01:57:037 (117037|3,117417|2) - ctrl+g and 01:57:796 (117796|3,118176|2) - ctrl+g
02:33:303 (153303|2,153493|1) - ctrl+g ?
02:43:746 (163746|3,164125|2) - ^ ?

Hard
00:36:531 - add note
00:37:290 - ^
00:42:417 (42417|0,42607|1) - ctrl+g and 00:42:796 (42796|2) - move col 2
00:45:075 (45075|0) - move col 2 ?
00:59:126 - hmm ini gak di add note tapi 00:59:505 (59505|1) - ini di add note padahal picthnya sama >w< 00:59:126 - add note om kalo engga yang 00:59:505 (59505|1) - ini del
01:00:265 - di add note ajah kah ?
01:05:771 (65771|0) - move col 4
01:19:442 (79442|0,79442|3) - hmm LN pendek'in kek 01:20:581 - sini & di 01:20:961 - sini add note
01:31:594 (91594|0,91594|3) - hmm disini engga di LN nin sama kek ini 01:30:075 (90075|0,90075|1,90075|3) - ?
01:42:227 (102227|1) - move col 4 & 01:42:417 (102417|2) - move col 2
02:43:176 (163176|1,163366|2) - geser ke kanan 1 baris
02:46:214 (166214|2) - move col 2
hmm btw dari 03:18:493 - sini sampai 03:19:252 - sini engga double note yah ? >w<
Saran HP mending 8 >w<

Expert
00:08:809 - add note ?
00:10:328 (10328|0,10423|3) - ctrl+g
00:16:214 - add note ?
03:18:493 (198493|0) - move col 3
No problem >w<

I Love is song <3

Ganbatte draf-san >w<
Draftnell
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SpectorDG wrote:

Hey Draft :) Mod here /Hard/
FOCUS Some Red Lines and Song long words (add LN's)
MOD
00:04:157 (4157|0) - Move 4
00:04:157 (4157|0) - Add LN
00:04:632 (4632|0,4822|1) - Move 00:04:632 (4632|1,4822|2) -
00:05:012 (5012|0) - Move 3
00:05:771 (5771|0) - Add note
00:05:961 (5961|1) - ^
00:06:151 (6151|1) - Move 1
00:17:163 (17163|0) - Delete
00:17:353 (17353|0) - Add note
00:17:733 (17733|2) - ^
00:17:828 (17828|2) - Move 4
00:18:113 (18113|0) - Add Note
00:18:493 (18493|0) - ^
00:21:626 (21626|1) - Ghost Note
00:49:822 (49822|0) - Add note
Ahhh other not find something :|
Goodluck ;)
your mod....which diff o.o ?
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/Hard/ :>
Draftnell
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[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi Draff-san >w<
M4M done ~

Col : 1|2|3|4|

NB : di ctrl+g Hs ke tuker otomatis >w< & ini hanya sugesti saya :D

Hard
00:36:531 - add note / Ok
00:37:290 - ^ / Ok
00:42:417 (42417|0,42607|1) - ctrl+g and 00:42:796 (42796|2) - move col 2 / ^
00:45:075 (45075|0) - move col 2 ?^
00:59:126 - hmm ini gak di add note tapi 00:59:505 (59505|1) - ini di add note padahal picthnya sama >w< 00:59:126 - add note om kalo engga yang 00:59:505 (59505|1) - ini del aa lupa :v oke add note :3
01:00:265 - di add note ajah kah ? / course ^^
01:05:771 (65771|0) - move col 4 / oke
01:19:442 (79442|0,79442|3) - hmm LN pendek'in kek 01:20:581 - sini & di 01:20:961 - sini add note / ak pendekin deh
01:31:594 (91594|0,91594|3) - hmm disini engga di LN nin sama kek ini 01:30:075 (90075|0,90075|1,90075|3) - ? / nope
01:42:227 (102227|1) - move col 4 & 01:42:417 (102417|2) - move col 2 / Ok
02:43:176 (163176|1,163366|2) - geser ke kanan 1 baris / Ok
02:46:214 (166214|2) - move col 2 / Ok
hmm btw dari 03:18:493 - sini sampai 03:19:252 - sini engga double note yah ? >w< / buat bass sound gak
Saran HP mending 8 >w< hmm oke deh

Expert
00:08:809 - add note ?
00:10:328 (10328|0,10423|3) - ctrl+g
00:16:214 - add note ?
03:18:493 (198493|0) - move col 3
No problem >w<
APPLY ALL

I Love is song <3 / thx ^^

Ganbatte draf-san >w<
UPDATE !!!!
Fubukicat
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Fubukicat

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi Draff-san >w<
M4M done ~

Col : 1|2|3|4|

NB : di ctrl+g Hs ke tuker otomatis >w< & ini hanya sugesti saya :D

Etlie's Normal
00:22:860 (22860|0,23049|3) - ctrl+g
00:23:429 (23429|3,23619|0) - ctrl+g because 00:23:429 (23429|3) - low pitch & 00:23:809 (23809|3) - move col 1
01:17:923 (77923|1) - move col 4 , high for pitch >w< nai nai , this note is lower pitch , trust my piano skill '(lol maybe , but pretty sure not actually)
01:19:442 (79442|2) - move col 2 ?
01:22:480 (82480|1,82670|3) - ctrl+g
01:25:328 (85328|3) - same for picth 01:24:948 (84948|2) - 01:25:328 (85328|3,85518|2) - ctrl+g
01:27:606 - add note ? Okay , I'll try for this , I thought that it would be abit hard for NM but let's try that :D
01:28:366 - ^ ?
01:57:037 (117037|3,117417|2) - ctrl+g and 01:57:796 (117796|3,118176|2) - ctrl+g , No thank you
02:33:303 (153303|2,153493|1) - ctrl+g ?
02:43:746 (163746|3,164125|2) - ^ ? Okay for this one ^^b





I Love is song <3

Ganbatte draf-san >w<
Thanks for the mod Lenz~ , well mostly , followed Pitch based suggestion (i love pitch xD) , also , most of the 'piano' part with 1/2 I didn't Ctrl+G because I took many time to think about the pattern and the over all flow (( around 4 sec ((lol)) )) , I changed some because they were definitely better tham mine =)
basically , Thanks for the helpfull mode <3

UPDATE
Fubukicat
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Draftnell wrote:

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi . .
mod as Draftnell request :D

General
  1. add "Eternalie" on tags
  2. offset 00:00:455 - this is fair if you put on that, since you've put some pattern before the offset start
    but before apply the offset, apply the mod below first
Column
|1|2|3|4|


  • Etlie's Normal
  1. 00:05:771 (5771|3) - LN start here 00:06:151 - since the main long sound is start on that :v , Hmm no thanks , I actually like it that way
  2. 00:17:163 - start here . . make a particular LN ? put on 00:17:163 - 00:17:543 - 00:17:923 - 00:18:303 - that's the way better to expressor exchange the stream sound here , hmm nice idea , but might be abit hard so keep
  3. 00:18:872 (18872|0,19062|1,19062|3,19252|2,19442|3,19632|0,19822|3,19822|1) - and etc. hmm i have 2 suggestion for kind of this part . . . 1. follow the main piano with only 1 note, or 2. follow the kick and drum only . . . it's really hard for NM if you follow 2 of type sound instead . . in other words, this part is quite calm than other part, but this part is harder than other parts ;w; look the highlight http://puu.sh/i0EU4/d05bd57a5f.jpg
    Actually since my first map ever, I always and will keep doing , using multiple instru by 'section' so I'll consider , but I really like it this way
  4. 00:24:948 (24948|3,25708|0,26467|3) - delete this if you following the piano sound, and many more xD Actually , there is piano here x)
  5. 00:35:771 - try this ? http://puu.sh/i0Fch/f9f9b15d72.jpg ok
  6. 01:02:543 (62543|3) - delete this . . and make a 1/1 LN on here 01:02:353 (62353|0) - cuz when i press it, it feel like i follow vocal . . well, using LN is the way better to express instrumental sound on here xD OKay
  7. 01:19:442 - why using 2 LN ? . . . 1 is enough i think I use two LNs because one is piano and the other is that sound that increase will consider
  8. 01:28:556 - & 01:29:315 - why use 2 notes ? . . well i suggest to use 1 note only . .cuz for other sound like this, you've only put 1 note OK
  9. 01:32:353 (92353|1,92543|2,92733|0,92923|3) - delete that, and make a LN on 01:32:353 - & 01:32:733 - to express the kick stream here hmm No thank you , I really like my piano here ,also kick aren't that relevant at all imo
  10. 01:46:784 - add 1 note
  11. 01:58:556 - make LN here, and delete this one 01:58:746 (118746|3) -
  12. 02:10:328 - why not same as 01:14:125 - ? i think it's same type of sound
  13. 02:11:657 (131657|3,131657|0) - LN end here 02:12:037 - according the type sound of you follow .. (bass maybe ?)
  14. 02:13:176 (133176|0,133176|2) - same reason as ^ Okay so here , it depend the person , but as a bass player ( yeah I play everything LOL) I clearly can tell it dosn't sound that long , make them abit more longer , but not that much they are 1/1 now
  15. 02:16:404 - & 02:16:784 - only 1 note? but same sound as 02:15:644 - imo
  16. 02:22:005 (142005|3,142290|2,142480|0) - why not LN ? This kind of beat LN , is like super hard , already tried it on the past, so no LN here :3
  17. 02:33:872 (153872|0,154442|3,154822|1) - a little weird to be pressed . . . i suggest to not follow guitar on this part, cuz the sound of guitar is a little random . . hmm maybe you can try and test this? http://puu.sh/i0G2v/1e851add05.jpg it's the way better to express this part :3 Okay re arranged
  18. 02:56:657 (176657|0) - delete, no sound on here , this Vocal , is kinda special, I've though hey , let's inovate and make it LN , so will keep for now , noted =)
  19. 03:22:480 (202480|2,203999|3) - not heavy sound, delete it . . . it's make this part is more harder . . the sound is little calm here xD actually , I express the piano , since it's the end of the song , the piano have like an Highlight and need more beautifully power so, I added a noter at the '' bass '' (basically 1/1)
  20. last, maybe you can re-arrenge of vocal part xD . . it's kinda weird to play . .. cuz the other instrumental is still clearly audible and exist on that . . . hmm i prefer to map the instrumental part . . rather than the vocal xD
    Actually , the following Vocal is totally intended , and i'm not planning to change it, it's like my '' special '' gift to this diff ,
    Side note : you can hear an instrument at same time tham the vocal so actually , my notes are legit LOL *runs*
    ^ seriously , noted , will consider changing it
Thanks for mod avalon , I forget some , sorry i'm abit tired atm ^^'

UPDATE

Sorry for double update didn't see avalon post )w) xD sowwy orz
Draftnell
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Draftnell
Hahaha :v no prob :3

Updated !!!
-[ AmiShici ]-
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hiii Draft o/

Keysound as request ^^

i hope you like it ^^

http://puu.sh/i1omF/d0ce76c025.rar

oia, ntar volumenya atur sendiri lah yah. bisa kan? lupa ga ngatur volume. wkwkwk

Sudah malam, ikan bobo >,<

Oyasuminasai~

at 01.00 a.m. +7 UTC
Draftnell
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Draftnell

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii Draft o/

Keysound as request ^^

i hope you like it ^^

http://puu.sh/i1omF/d0ce76c025.rar

oia, ntar volumenya atur sendiri lah yah. bisa kan? lupa ga ngatur volume. wkwkwk

Sudah malam, ikan bobo >,<

Oyasuminasai~

at 01.00 a.m. +7 UTC
Uh thx a lot ><
Zevioz-
Zevioz-
hi om maho tukang bikin mem xD
req via PM,Line

Kolom = |1|2|3|4|

Ai mod OK
BG OK


Hard
00:12:227 (12227|3) - move to 2
00:32:733 - disini salah satu note jadiin LN sampe 00:33:113 - then delete 00:32:923 (32923|3) - itu mungkin lebih baik draft ._.
kalo emang jadi di LNin tentu yg ini juga 00:33:493 - dibuat LN end this here 00:33:872 -
01:03:113 (63113|0) - why LN (?)
01:06:151 (66151|3) - kalo yg ini sih gapapa di LNin
02:23:809 - kenapa gadijadiin LN lagi ._.

EX
00:19:442 (19442|3) - hmm del
00:20:201 (20201|1) - entahlah kurang setuju sama nih note ._. bingung soalnya ngikutin apa ._. saran sih jadi double note aja
00:20:961 (20961|1,21341|1) - hm del aja
00:23:144 - hayo suaranya kedengeran add note di 3
00:23:904 - disini juga add note 2 or 3 not prob
00:24:569 - add note di 2
00:49:157 - saran juga nih LNnya mending double note aja sampe 00:50:581 - suarnya cuman ngikutin satu instrumen doang ._. single note juga malahan gamasalah
00:55:138 (55138|0) - hm Lnnya kepanjangan (?)
01:07:290 (67290|3) - sama ini juga ._.
01:45:360 - hm saran ditext pink
01:51:341 (111341|3) - saran di text biru
02:03:493 (123493|0) - ^
02:22:037 - ngikut melody aja yg ini 02:21:910 (141910|1) - turunin ke 02:22:037 - , yg ini 02:22:100 (142100|0) - turunin juga ke 02:22:037 -
saran note buat melody 02:22:037 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3177086
02:22:480 (142480|0,142480|3) - ctrl + H follow pitch
02:25:518 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3177090 how ?
03:30:012 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3177093 how ? lol


itu aja deh mod dari aku draft
dont create more meme hue ;w;
GL~
Draftnell
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8-)

Zevioz- wrote:

hi om maho tukang bikin mem xD
req via PM,Line

Kolom = |1|2|3|4|

Ai mod OK
BG OK


Hard
00:12:227 (12227|3) - move to 2
00:32:733 - disini salah satu note jadiin LN sampe 00:33:113 - then delete 00:32:923 (32923|3) - itu mungkin lebih baik draft ._.
kalo emang jadi di LNin tentu yg ini juga 00:33:493 - dibuat LN end this here 00:33:872 -
01:03:113 (63113|0) - why LN (?)
01:06:151 (66151|3) - kalo yg ini sih gapapa di LNin
02:23:809 - kenapa gadijadiin LN lagi ._.

Ok yang ini aku apply all

EX
00:19:442 (19442|3) - hmm del nopee
00:20:201 (20201|1) - entahlah kurang setuju sama nih note ._. bingung soalnya ngikutin apa ._. saran sih jadi double note aja
00:20:961 (20961|1,21341|1) - hm del aja
00:23:144 - hayo suaranya kedengeran add note di 3
00:23:904 - disini juga add note 2 or 3 not prob
00:24:569 - add note di 2
00:49:157 - saran juga nih LNnya mending double note aja sampe 00:50:581 - suarnya cuman ngikutin satu instrumen doang ._. single note juga malahan gamasalah
00:55:138 (55138|0) - hm Lnnya kepanjangan (?)
01:07:290 (67290|3) - sama ini juga ._.
01:45:360 - hm saran ditext pink
01:51:341 (111341|3) - saran di text biru
02:03:493 (123493|0) - ^
02:22:037 - ngikut melody aja yg ini 02:21:910 (141910|1) - turunin ke 02:22:037 - , yg ini 02:22:100 (142100|0) - turunin juga ke 02:22:037 -
saran note buat melody 02:22:037 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3177086 oke
02:22:480 (142480|0,142480|3) - ctrl + H follow pitch ^
02:25:518 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3177090 how ? hmmm di cba deh :v
03:30:012 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3177093 how ? lol aaaaa NOPE !!!


itu aja deh mod dari aku draft
dont create more meme hue ;w; / wkwk terserah w dong :p
GL~
Ok update ><
YunoFanatic
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YunoFanatic
[ohi etlie]

00:00:455 (455|0,455|3,1974|1,1974|2) - would prefer if LN+note instead. because the long sound isnt even loud enough to be occupied by 2 lns.
00:05:771 (5771|3) - this ln should be at 00:06:151 (6151|3) - instead and ending on 00:06:530 (6530|2) - because the one which is being highlighted the one that should be emphasized is 00:06:341 (6341|1) -
02:28:936 (148936|1) - should be a double instead. could place at 2 and 3. To have a short break from lns and also because the next ln has a new sound which is if you have a ln before the ln that will be occupying the new sound is like both of them are linked and doesnt have any new sound coming.
02:56:657 (176657|0) - wouldnt this be actually a good thing to leave empty? to you know a short rest from the lns and notes or atleast replace with a note instead.
03:02:353 (182353|2,182733|1) - would instead ctrl g to have a better flow for your next pattern.

[ hard ]

00:06:341 (6341|3) - would just move this note to 00:06:151 (6151|1) - because adding note in 00:06:341 (6341|3) - is pretty nonsense and doesnt fit.
00:12:227 (12227|3) - add another note here to have consistency on what you did on 00:12:037 (12037|0,12037|3) -
00:13:651 (13651|1) - after mapping some 1/4 already youre gonna skip a should-be-mapped 1/4 section?
00:29:885 (29885|1,29885|3,30075|0,30075|3) - from this part i dislike it. it doenst make sense and its making inconsistancies. please continue to map things with that ln and note.
00:49:062 (49062|3,49062|1,49157|0,49252|2,49347|1,49442|3,49537|0,49632|2,49727|1,49822|3,49917|2,50012|0,50107|1,50201|2,50296|3,50391|0,50486|1) - i wouldnt prefer to see this kind of things in HD. just a note.
01:21:531 (81531|1,81720|1) - useless minijack.
01:31:214 (91214|2,91404|2) - ^
01:57:480 (117480|1,117543|2,117607|3,117670|2,117733|1) - i wouldnt just suddenly mapped a new snapping, why? because you have so many chance to do things like this throughout the diff and your gonna suddenly pop it from nowhere.
02:24:758 (144758|2,144948|2,145138|2,145328|2) - unneeded jack lmao

[Expertu]

pretty decent got some few suggestion but nah. heres a star >u<//
Dellvangel
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Dellvangel
Here my mod Draftnell :3

Etlie's Normal
00:55:138 (55138|1,55138|3) - move to left 1x
00:54:758 (54758|0) - move to col 2
01:46:784 - add note col 4?
02:56:657 (176657|0) - remove?

Hard
00:06:151 - add note col 3 (ikut diff normal, Hard > Normal kan?)
00:41:657 (41657|3) - move to col 3
01:24:189 (84189|3) - ^

Cuma bisa bantu dikit, map sama lagu nya bagus .. :) Like Oboro v2 xD
Fubukicat
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Dellvangel wrote:

Here my mod Draftnell :3

Etlie's Normal
00:55:138 (55138|1,55138|3) - move to left 1x No thank you , according to my previous pattern this can be keeped here , also it's to avoid pressing the same collumn too much time in a row
00:54:758 (54758|0) - move to col 2 , No thank you , it's to avoid pressing two time the same collumn it's actually pretty hard for newcomer
01:46:784 - add note col 4? , so Here , I intendly didn't add another note , because making a note here would force me to make a note in 2 or 3 but since they are pressed by LNs just before it will lead to the previous case '' hitting two times the same collumn'' < note that ,I actually did the exception once on the map
02:56:657 (176657|0) - remove? Third person asking for it ,okay removed



Cuma bisa bantu dikit, map sama lagu nya bagus .. :) Like Oboro v2 xD

YunoFanatic wrote:

[ohi etlie]

00:00:455 (455|0,455|3,1974|1,1974|2) - would prefer if LN+note instead. because the long sound isnt even loud enough to be occupied by 2 lns. Okay change
00:05:771 (5771|3) - this ln should be at 00:06:151 (6151|3) - instead and ending on 00:06:530 (6530|2) - because the one which is being highlighted the one that should be emphasized is 00:06:341 (6341|1) - Didn't changed , because I really feel like it's right to make it this way (might consider changing)
02:28:936 (148936|1) - should be a double instead. could place at 2 and 3. To have a short break from lns and also because the next ln has a new sound which is if you have a ln before the ln that will be occupying the new sound is like both of them are linked and doesnt have any new sound coming. Okay
02:56:657 (176657|0) - wouldnt this be actually a good thing to leave empty? to you know a short rest from the lns and notes or atleast replace with a note instead. I just wanted to inovate with some LN vocal, but yeah I guess an Empty place would be fine
03:02:353 (182353|2,182733|1) - would instead ctrl g to have a better flow for your next pattern. okaysu
Thanks for mod Dellvangel and Yuno-chi >W</

UPDATE
Draftnell
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YunoFanatic wrote:

[ hard ]

00:06:341 (6341|3) - would just move this note to 00:06:151 (6151|1) - because adding note in 00:06:341 (6341|3) - is pretty nonsense and doesnt fit. hmm not change, because im following the vocal >w<
00:12:227 (12227|3) - add another note here to have consistency on what you did on 00:12:037 (12037|0,12037|3) - apply
00:13:651 (13651|1) - after mapping some 1/4 already youre gonna skip a should-be-mapped 1/4 section? /waa o.o...my mistake T.T
00:29:885 (29885|1,29885|3,30075|0,30075|3) - from this part i dislike it. it doenst make sense and its making inconsistancies. please continue to map things with that ln and note. ok, change
00:49:062 (49062|3,49062|1,49157|0,49252|2,49347|1,49442|3,49537|0,49632|2,49727|1,49822|3,49917|2,50012|0,50107|1,50201|2,50296|3,50391|0,50486|1) - i wouldnt prefer to see this kind of things in HD. just a note. haha, using LN seems appropriate...So not change
01:21:531 (81531|1,81720|1) - useless minijack. hmm ok im change :v
01:31:214 (91214|2,91404|2) - ^ ^
01:57:480 (117480|1,117543|2,117607|3,117670|2,117733|1) - i wouldnt just suddenly mapped a new snapping, why? because you have so many chance to do things like this throughout the diff and your gonna suddenly pop it from nowhere. Because in there, there is a sound prompt
02:24:758 (144758|2,144948|2,145138|2,145328|2) - unneeded jack lmao waaaaaaaaaa T.T my mitstake again....ok change :v

[Expertu]

pretty decent got some few suggestion but nah. heres a star >u<// wahh wahh wahhh >w< thx ^^

Dellvangel wrote:

Here my mod Draftnell :3

Hard
00:06:151 - add note col 3 (ikut diff normal, Hard > Normal kan?) sorry, no accept xD (because tiap diff beda pattern)
00:41:657 (41657|3) - move to col 3apply
01:24:189 (84189|3) - ^ nope

Cuma bisa bantu dikit, map sama lagu nya bagus .. :) Like Oboro v2 xD hmm oke thx :v
thx a lot Dellvangel and Yuno >w<
your MOD very helpful.....and for Dellvangel : <<<<<<< LOL xD maybe you right :v
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