This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 czerwca 2011 at 22:03:29

Artist: Riyu Kosaka
Title: Candy
Source: Dance Dance Revolution
Tags: DDR Disambiguate yongtw123
BPM: 180
Filesize: 3971kb
Play Time: 03:08
Difficulties Available:

1. Candy (4,99 stars, 487 notes)
2. Dis-Normal (4,16 stars, 333 notes)
3. Hard (4,51 stars, 306 notes)
4. yongtw123's Easy (2,73 stars, 222 notes)

Download: Riyu Kosaka - Candy
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for modding!:))


Special Thanks to Disambiguate for the Dis-Normal guest diff:)


15.07.2010 Added a Normal + diff! ^^
26.09.2010 map resurrected by Lybydose, Thx!:)
17.11.2010 lowing the volume of Timing sections ^^
18.11.2010 changing the BG ^^ Thx to narakucrimson for it
22.11.2010 deleting Easy + diff and added yongtw123's guest difficulty:) Thank U!! )
23.11.2010 adding custom hitsounds from Kaneko, thank U!! ^^

Easy:
01:34:096 (2) - Move up to align it with (1)
01:34:596 (3) - Move to the right so it aligns with (2)



Candy:
02:51:429 (4) - Move it down so it's on the same level as (5)

I'll star when easy gets finished ^^

thank You:))

Hello
General
No BG... If you already add , choose full-submit.
Easy
00:46:096 (1,2) spacing is too close.
01:30:429 (2,3) spacing is too far.
Candy_
00:20:596 (5) 1 grid left(grid lv3)
00:36:096 (4) 1 grid right
01:04:762 (4) 1 grid left
01:32:096 (3) ^
01:32:429 (1) ^
01:41:762 (2) ^
01:53:096 (3) 1 grid right
02:00:429 (5) 1 grid up
02:33:762 (3) 2 grid down
02:38:762 (8) 4 grid down & 2 grid right
02:47:762 (4) 1 grid up
03:04:929 (1) unranked spinner(no more than 2000 score point in Auto play is unranked spinner.)
03:08:804 (1) ^

Nicemap ~
star~

thank You:))

...

[Easy]
00:55:262 (x) - add a note here
00:55:596 (6) - start the slider here, and shorten it to repeat 2 times, and end at 00:56:096
00:56:429 (x) - add a note here
01:20:346 (1) - move this note here
01:20:679 (2) - ^ same thing
02:33:762 (3) - shorten this slider to end at 02:33:929
02:34:262 (x) - add a slider here, and end it at 02:34:429
03:03:762 (2) - make this a repeating slider that ends at 03:04:096
(make sure to resnap after all this)

[Candy *_*]
Spacing!!! Go through it and check your snapping...and the timing sections that have x2 arent needed....so change it back to x1 and remap those areas
00:04:762 - 00:21:762 - man on the finish hit sounds! its just all noise! ....take out some out the hitsounds (especially take out the finish hit sounds when the whistle ones start to come in)

Well done map....fun song
Maybe add a normal or hard? (just suggesting)

~STAR

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = you might wanna fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

Hmm... Where to begin...

[General]
First of all, you're using the wrong BG. You could at least use the one that came from DDR Extreme 2 for the PS2 (don't use a small picture!). Also, this song is the full version of the one that was featured in DDR Extreme 2, so maybe put (Full Version) in the title? Finally, use an offset of 738 for both difficulties. Resnap all notes (this might be an issue where you used 1/6 on the beat snap divisor) then fix the other timing sections afterwards.

[Easy]
01:25:571 (4,5) - Well... assuming this is gonna be your easiest difficulty, can you make these into a slider instead? I don't think beginners will be able to hit these easily.
02:16:737 (1,2,3) - Make into a repeating slider instead? That, or don't stack (3) on (1).
02:18:071 (1,2,3) - Same as before

[Candy *_*]
00:05:404 (5) - Isn't this a bit too high?
00:33:404 (2) - Isn't this a bit too low?
00:45:237 (2) - Don't make the slider start and end stack on each other. It makes it confusing which way to follow the slider, and it doesn't help that you made this slider have 2x speed...
00:47:737 (4) - Fix the bottom of this slider. It's way too low.
01:19:904 (7) - Hold Shift while distance snapping to line this up better with (6)? (You may have to fix the next two notes after this slider.)
01:33:737 (4,5) - Lower both of these by one on the grid?
01:38:737 (2) - Same case as what I said on 00:45:237 (2)
01:57:737 (3) - Bottom of slider is a bit low... Fix this?

REALLY nice job on hitsounds I'd star this, but I refuse to until you at least add another difficulty (and I mod it, of course).


EDIT: Had to fix the DDR game I listed.

Thank You:))) I think I'm gonna make new diff too:))

Oops... I forgot to mention: set a preview point (it must be the same for both difficulties). You do this by picking a part in the song then clicking on Timing (the very top one) > Set Current Position as Preview Point. For example, set one where the main chorus plays (00:46:071) or when it gets to where the song really starts getting interesting (02:32:737).

By the way, you didn't fix your timing sections after adjusting the offset. Finally... change the BG. It looks horribly stretched.

Hiya!

These are just suggestions. You don't have to change anything if you don't want to.

Easy:
Increase the slider tick rate to 2.
Add a finish hitsound to the spinner on 00:43:071.

Hard:
Increase slider tick rate to 2.

That's all I found. Have a star ~

Hey I got your PM. I tried looking for a better DDR Candy background, but I didn't have any luck (Even zenius-i-vanisher.com didn't help since their background picture to this song is too small...) I don't know what else to say except maybe use a picture of Riyu Kosaka or just a picture with candy in it (one that isn't too colorful anyway).

I'm sorry that I couldn't find a better picture for you

that's all right:)
I will try to find or make a better background
thank You:)

Hi,
you should map a normal maybe?

[easy]
some lead in time please (song setup>audio>set it to 1.5 maybe?)

[candy]
some lead in time please
00:30:072 (10) - hmm, this might be unrankable, try not to overlap start + end

nice map

thank You:))

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
there's an unused .osb file in your folder, delete it and full-subimit.
...can you find a better BG?

[Easy]
00:25:571 (2) - 1 grid down to keep align with (1)?
01:17:738 (1,2) - it's strange. can't find it's 0.5x at first play. better to change spacing or add a warning.
01:42:404 (2,4) - remove finish.
02:16:738 (1,2,3) - turn off grid snap and move them to a symmetric place.

[Candy_]
00:17:571 (5) - 1 grid down.
00:28:738 (4,6) - completely stacked slider is unrankable.
01:24:738 (5) - what's wrong with this slider..? end on a 1/8 tick?
01:56:072 (6) - i can't read the slider...though not a matter when playing.
01:59:072 (6,7,8,9) - too crazy.

good job on hitsounds-v-

Thanks
I will try to find better BG

Easy:

01:01:737 (1) Remove circle
01:02:071 Add circle here with new combo
01:03:404 Add circle

Normal:

00:20:071 (2) This slider looked a bit ugly, make it more symmetrical?
02:20:071 (3) A bit to the right, so it's symmetrical with 1

Candy:

00:17:071 (3) 1 grid to left and 1 grid up
02:24:737 (2.3.4) Whistle hitsounds

Star~

Done, Thank U:)

Heya Doing a recheck:

[General]
Yay, much better background Kinda creepy in a way though Also, interesting storyboarding at the bottom of the screen starting at 01:17:738, but it doesn't fade in smoothly (and it disappears suddenly at 01:28:821). It also overlaps the letterboxing during the breaks.

[Easy]
00:55:071 (4,5) - Maybe make these into a slider instead? I'm not sure if beginners will be able to hit these.
01:02:404 (2,3,4,5,1) - Umm... Wouldn't it be better if:

1. 01:02:404 (2) started at 01:02:737 instead
2. You removed the note at 01:03:071 (3)
3. You made the spinner at 01:04:071 start at 01:04:737 instead (make sure it still ends at 01:07:404 if you do move it)
4. You added a note at 01:04:071 and 01:04:404

If you do decide to do the above, make sure you do it in that order.

[Normal+]
Yay, new difficulty Anyway, I didn't see anything wrong with it~

[Candy *_*]
02:23:238 (1,2,1) - Maybe flip these horizontally?

Really nice job ★~

Thank You:) I made the BG on my own in Photoshop )
thank You for modding and star ))

I see, and you're welcome

By the way, there's one more thing I want to point out (please don't give me kudosu for this):

[Easy]
01:01:737 - I feel like there should be a note here, but it's up to you.

hehe, ok:)))
I will give note there too ^^ )

[General]:

1. AudioLeadIn: 1511 make the leanin time 1500 with your notepad.
2. I didn't notice the x0.5 warning at all before it disappeared...

[Easy]:

1. 02:09:071 (5,6) - volume too high

[Normal+]:

1. 01:23:404 (2,3,4,5) - stacked weired in test, stack leniency +1 can solve this problem. remember to change all diffs' set.
2. 02:16:738 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - turn down the volume
3. 02:31:404 (1,2) - volume

[Candy *_*]:

1. 02:18:405 (2) - i donno whether it's fine with BAT, the reverse arrow is covered. though it's fun to play.
2. 03:08:738 (10) - 2 grid left.
3. quite good.

na na na~ na na na na~

done, thx )

to change absolutely
not great, to change if possible
suggestions

Overall:
Hitsounds aren't great. Normal whistles are too noisy. Try using claps to highlight the rythm of the music, and avoid using normal whistles.
You did a pretty good job on following vocals and instruments.

Easy:
00:06:071 (1,2) - Move those one grid down (lvl 3).
00:08:738 (1,2,3,4) - Move those two grids down (lvl 3). (you will need to re-space 00:11:404 (1) - )
00:16:071 (4) - Move it one grid left.
00:23:404 (2) - Hit alt+shift and place it right on a vertical line under (1).
00:31:404 (2,3,4) - Move those 3 grids right.
01:00:404 (4) - Move it two grids right and up. (if you do you'll have to move 01:01:737 (1,2,3) - too)
01:56:404 (2) - Use shift+alt to place it diagonnaly lined up with (1), then move (1) in the middle of the created form. ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17086 ) (you will have to move 01:57:738 (4,1) - to line (4) vertically with (3))
02:08:737 - Add a note here ? (in the exact middle between (4) and (5))
02:48:738 (1) - Make it a straight slider.

Normal+:
00:01:071 (2) - Place this one correctly (just hold alt and move it a little - it's not a problem for playing, but it will look better).
00:15:404 (4) - This slider is ugly, change it.
00:41:237 (6) - ^
00:45:071 (1,2) - Move those somewhere else than the center of the screen.
01:18:071 (1,2) - This distance snapping is confusing, keep the same distance snapping for the whole diff.
01:24:237 (3,4,5,1) - Don't stack those - try to find a pattern.
01:34:571 (3) - This slider is ugly, change it.
02:12:404 (2,3,1) - don't stack those or remove the new combo.
02:16:738 (1,2,3) - Make this a repeat slider symmetrical to the next one.
03:00:071 (2) - This slider is ugly, change it.
03:03:237 (1) - No new combo.
03:03:571 (2) - New combo.

Candy:
Why is a Insane diff named Candy ? Well. I said I might not mod insane diffs, and I won't mod this one.

What... the hitsounds (especially the normal whistles) are fine with this song... Maybe lower the volume for them, but they should stay

[general]
~suggestion : add DDR to TAGs
~weird sounding...
~Just call it Candy instead of "Candy *_*"

[Candy]
0:24:404 (7) Rmove clap on slider
0:31:071 (1) Regarding slider spacing,,,left 1 grid
0:36:071 (1) left 1 grid
0:44:237 (6) why put this so far?
0:48:571 (1) left 1 grid
0:54:071 (4) right 1 grid
1:02:737 (4) make this symmetrical?
1:23:404 (1) right 1 grid
1:45:237 (2) right 1 grid
1:53:737 (5) up 1 grid
2:29:071 (1,2,3) Don't put whistles, finish and clap together <_<

star.

WITAJ!

[General]
1) You have to double-check the SB about keyframe, I saw some bunch of uneeded keyframe in Fade. You have to remove it

2) In Timing.png, You have to remove the glow, because it's really bad to see!

3) Source : DDRMAX2 Dance Dance Revolution 7th Mix
4) No Tags?


[Easy]
00:33:154 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
00:41:238 (4) - Move 1 grid up?
00:43:071 (1) - Move forward to next white tick and cut short?
00:55:071 (4) - This slider is too short for easy diff
01:00:404 (4) - Allign with 2 from right?
01:48:404 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:50:071 (1) - Move 1 grid left?
02:28:071 (2) - Unrankable slider (Don't let this slider is overlap themself, the hitcircle is overlap the trace of slider, so you have to fix it)
02:33:738 (3) - This slider is too short for easy diff

[Normal+]
Fine~

[Candy *_*]
Rename to [Candy]?

00:01:071 (2) - Move 1 grid down?

Good song
STAR

Leorda wrote:

Source : DDRMAX2 Dance Dance Revolution 7th Mix

This is the full version of the song though (and I don't think any DDR game had full versions of any song unless the song was intentionally short).

Blazevoir wrote:

Leorda wrote:

Source : DDRMAX2 Dance Dance Revolution 7th Mix

This is the full version of the song though (and I don't think any DDR game had full versions of any song unless the song was intentionally short).

Opss sorry

Leorda wrote:

Opss sorry

It's fine

Hmmm.. maybe I should change the timing section 0,5x to 1x??cuz Im not good in making SB.. ;/ I dont know how to delete this unnedded keyframe..;/

EDIT:
I won't change it )

General

• - Also put "DDR" on Easy&Normal+'s tag.
  - Also the Lead-in thing that Colin already mentioned.

Easy

• - Not easy enough..imo

00:55:071 (4,5) - overlap?



Candy

• - Distance is too high ;_;

00:42:571 (1,2,3) - change the placement will be better D:
01:02:738 (4) - finish at 01:03:404
01:38:238 (9) - delete this note
01:45:405 (3) - 5 grids left and 1 grid up
01:48:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - place them like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18420
01:56:071 (6) - ^: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18422
03:04:405 (3) - hidden slider D:

hi~

[General]
I personally don't like how you have easy/normal/hard and then suddenly Candy. I suggest naming it "Insane"

[Easy]
i think it's not good to use 0.5 time in easy
00:42:571 (5) - mm, maybe move it to 00:42:737?
01:26:404 (1,2,3) - 1 grid left
01:37:571 (3) - move it on 01:37:404 (+distance snap) (?)
01:37:904 (4) - new combo
02:09:071 (1) - ^
02:48:071 (4,5) - 1 grid right

[Dis-Normal]
00:39:071 (1) - 1 grid right
00:42:571 (5) - new combo

[Normal+]
it's too hard for normal (i see that this is normal+) call it [hard], think it's better
01:37:904 (1) - turn off new combo
01:38:404 (2) - new combo

[Candy]
00:35:072 (1) - maybe move it under (7)?
00:40:738 (5) - 1 grid up
00:51:905 (2,3) - 1 grid right
01:02:738 (4) - delete one square in the end point and 1 grid up last square
02:27:405 (1) - 1 grid up
02:52:905 (1) - 1 grid up 1 right
03:07:238 (5) - new combo
star

Easy:

00:12:071 (3) - Shorten so it ends at 00:12:571.
00:28:237 (2) - Move to 00:28:071.
00:29:237 (4) - Move to 00:29:404.
00:29:404 (4) - This slider shouldn't repeat.
01:18:404 and 01:21:071 - I don't know if I like these small breaks here...
01:25:571 (3) - Either move this slider so it starts on 01:25:237 and repeats once, or replace it with a hit circle at 01:25:237 and at 01:25:904.
02:07:737 (4) - Personally I would get rid of this circle, but it's fine to leave it.
02:59:404 (1) - You need to fix the shape of this slider.


Not gonna mod the other diffs.

Done, thx )

Heh, I remember playing this song countless times in DDR

Modding as requested on queue~

[General]
-Change the black combocolor? Combocolors can be anything you want and following the color scheme of the background is sometimes a good idea, but if the approach circle cant be see in the background it's not a good idea =x
-The SB warning for the x0.5 timing should be more flashy. Try to make it a different color than purple, so that it stands out more.
-Watch out! You have some hitsound changes during the song (like 02:32:737 ) that land exaclty on the note. If the player hits these notes too early, the hitsound chenge wont happen. Move these 1/4 earlier or create a duplicate 1/4 earlier.

[Easy]
Increase OD by 1
00:12:071 (3) - Whistle the end
01:58:738 (1) - Add a finish, just like the spinner in the first Kiai Time
03:01:071 (1) - This is overlapped in an ugly way by 02:59:404 (1). Try to move it away.
03:02:738 (1) - And this is ugly overlapped by 03:01:071 (1).

[Normal]
00:12:071 (3) - Whistle the end
00:12:904 (4) - Whistle
00:13:238 (5) - ^
00:17:404 (2) - Whistle the end
00:18:238 (3) - Whistle
00:18:571 (4) - ^
00:19:404 (1,2) - ^
00:32:738 (7) - Delete?
00:44:571 (6) - Is kiiiiiinda buried by (2). Try to change (2)'s position or move this one.
00:45:071 (1) - Whistle
00:45:238 (2) - Whistle the start AND the sliderslide (I usualyl hate whistled sliderslides, but this one fits)
00:46:738 (3) - Whistle
00:58:738 (6) - ^
01:27:904 (1) - Finish at the end
01:39:738 (1) - Stack properly under (9)'s end.
01:48:571 (6) - Whistle
01:48:904 (7) - ^
01:51:238 (4) - ^
01:51:571 (5) - ^
01:53:904 (4) - ^
01:54:238 (5) - ^
...aaaand I'll point out all this patterns being whistled. You know, like 02:33:738 (3,4). Whistle the red ticks. It soudns much better.

[Hard]
01:24:237 (3) - Check this spacing. Comapre it with 01:27:071 (2)'s spacing. Something is wrong here.
Avoid using claps and finishes on the same circles...
This diff is actually nicely done!

[Insane]
Woah, this is fast, I'llm try my best but it'll be probably a shitty mod :<
00:12:238 (4) - Try a diamond shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18738
00:24:405 (7) - I think the sliderstart should have a clap instead of a finish
01:02:738 (4) - Stack under (2)'s end?
01:03:738 (1) - ^
02:43:405 (7) - Such a weird sliderwhape o_o
02:52:905 (1) - one grid left?


Good.

Hi~

[Red] You must fix that


[Easy]
01:27:738 (3) - Move 1/2 later and reduce by 1/2


[Dis-normal]
03:03:571 (8) - New combo ?

That's all I think o_o'

01:17:487 - I think that "0,5x Timing" text is... odd . You should use "0,5x Speed" or something.

[Easy]

00:43:404 (1) - Expand this spinner to 00:45:071. Sounds better.
02:16:738 (1,2,3) - You'll kill newbies with this pattern. In easy you shouldn't be obliged to read approachcircles. Remap it or transform into a slider.
02:33:737 (3,4,5,6) - I prefer not using 1/2's like this in easy difficulty. It's just too hard.


[Dis-Normal]

What's "Dis"? Make it just normal

00:16:071 (5) - Move 1/2 back.
00:21:404 (5) - ^
00:22:071 (1) - Add one slider repeat.
00:23:404 (2) - ^


[Hard]

A spam of new combos. Please reduce their number.


[Candy]

I FC'ed ^^

00:30:071 (10) - Ugly slider, make it prettier?
01:34:072 (5) - ^
03:00:071 (3) - ^


If you can't understand something, send me a message in-game and I'll explain it to you with our native language

Fun map to play, +star.

Dis-Normal its a guest diff from Disambiguate

Krisom wrote:

[Normal]
00:12:071 (3) - Whistle the end
00:12:904 (4) - Whistle
00:13:238 (5) - ^
00:17:404 (2) - Whistle the end
00:18:238 (3) - Whistle
00:18:571 (4) - ^
00:19:404 (1,2) - ^
00:32:738 (7) - Delete?
00:44:571 (6) - Is kiiiiiinda buried by (2). Try to change (2)'s position or move this one.
00:45:071 (1) - Whistle
00:45:238 (2) - Whistle the start AND the sliderslide (I usualyl hate whistled sliderslides, but this one fits)
00:46:738 (3) - Whistle
00:58:738 (6) - ^
01:27:904 (1) - Finish at the end
01:39:738 (1) - Stack properly under (9)'s end.
01:48:571 (6) - Whistle
01:48:904 (7) - ^
01:51:238 (4) - ^
01:51:571 (5) - ^
01:53:904 (4) - ^
01:54:238 (5) - ^
...aaaand I'll point out all this patterns being whistled. You know, like 02:33:738 (3,4). Whistle the red ticks. It soudns much better.

My guest Normal difficulty was uploaded a little early, the hitsounds are still being worked on and will be done soon.

All of the above will be taken into account.



A few things;

00:44:571 (6) - Is kiiiiiinda buried by (2). Try to change (2)'s position or move this one. It is kiiiinda buried but i dont think its too hard a 4 star map so im gonna leave it for now and if other people also think it should be moved then ill move it

01:39:738 (1) - Stack properly under (9)'s end. I can't stack it exactly in the same spot. Its either 1/2 a grid too high or 1/2 a grid too low, the slider ends not exactly on the grid spots or something strange??

fartownik wrote:

[Dis-Normal]

What's "Dis"? Make it just normal

00:16:071 (5) - Move 1/2 back.
00:21:404 (5) - ^
00:22:071 (1) - Add one slider repeat.
00:23:404 (2) - ^

I wanted to name the difficulty something to show it was a guest difficulty but "Disambiguate's Normal" is a bit of a mouthful but it might need to be changed to that if it bothers lots of people...

I will take a look at the changes you recommend for my difficulty as well.

With 00:16:071 (5) and 00:21:404 (5) i can see why you suggested to move them but i think they fit ok where they are. I wanted to ease into the skipping beats as most of the song has skipping old school DDR style skipping

I made the changes to 00:22:071 (1) and 00:23:404 (2) like you suggested, thanks




And also +star for the awesome difficulties Shirokitty keep up the good work

Download: Riyu Kosaka - Candy (Full ver.) (ShiroKitty) [Dis-Normal].osu

ShiroKitty wrote:

Dis-Normal its a guest diff from Disambiguate

If so, you need to add "Disambiguate" into the tags.

Don't kudos.

Hmmm... I thought, I added him to tags... but ok, I will ;P

Hi there sorry for the delay

[General]
- I'm agree with farto that 0.5x speed for the SB warning is better, but I wonder if you really need it cause the 0.5 section comes after the break, even the song suggest there's a slow down for the pace so it's not hard to predict
- It's preferable that the Song and Map Meta data is the same for all diff (except for the diff name), therefore you should put Disambiguate on the other diff's tag too
- Disable countdown on all diff
- You shouldn't put an inherited timing section exactly on the note, because if a player hit the circle early it'll use the previous timing section's setup (e.g. the timing section in 00:22:071, miss hit this note will cause it to have a normal hitsound instead of soft). Refer to this post for more information

[Easy]
Hmm...considering the high bpm and and the beat placement in the time line, this more like a normal than easy
00:55:237 (5) - add whistle?
00:55:571 (1) - add whistle at the end?
00:56:404 (2) - add whistle?
02:16:738 (1) - move the slider and... oh hey a circle is hiding in there, delete it, it's a double note XD
03:04:738 (1) - it sounds better if the end is not silenced and a finish will sound perfect too

[Dis-Normal]
Rise the OD by 1 or 2 tick?
01:25:904 (7) - remove whistle in the end?
03:04:738 (1) - same issue as above

[Hard]
00:23:404 (2) - remove the whistle from the slider slide, not the start/end of slider
01:56:071 (8) - lengthen the slider 1/2 beat just like in 03:00:071 (7)
02:28:071 (2) - remove the whistle from the slider slide, not the start/end of slider
03:04:738 (1) - same as above

[Candy]
00:45:237 (1) - start this in the previous blue tick to give the player more time?
00:54:405 (5,6) - imo this overlap is not very good
01:05:071 (5,6) - ^
02:18:405 (2) - the repeat is hidden by 02:17:905 (4) hit burst, try flipping or rotate the slider so it won't get covered
03:04:737 (4) - lollipop? :3
Maybe use more clap in the last kiai time?

Keep working on it and good luck
Star

Sorry, been mapping a lot lately, and I suck at multitasking. :P
Anyway, as per your request, Whiteneko:

[General]
There's no need to rekiai so many times. Just keep it as one section for each chorus.
Turn off the letter boxing on breaks. It cuts off half of Kosaka's head. D:

[Easy plus]
00:25:571 (2,1) - The distance here is deceiving. Move the 2 slider lower so the distance is within the snap.
00:43:404 (1) - It sounds better if you end this at 00:44:571, though the spinner itself is kind of short for an easy.
00:59:738 (2,3,4) - Check your spacing here. Looks uneven.
I am not a fan of changing to .5 and 2x in Easy difficulties. It'll generally just leave the new players confused - especially when it goes back to normal speed.
02:31:404 (1) - It felt like you were going with the synth here, so it made more sense to start this on the red tick. If you do, however, I'd make it a slider that goes into where the 2 is currently so the rhythm change doesn't mess up the newer players too much.

[Dis-Normal]
00:32:071 (3,4,5,6,7) - Kind of pushing it for a normal difficulty to me.
The .5 section didn't fit at all to me here either. :/

[Hard]
01:26:404 (1,2,3) - Check your spacing here. Either keep it at the 1x spacing or the .5 spacing.
02:31:404 (1) - Start this at 02:31:237 and end at the current spot.

[Candy]
Ack, huge spacing.
01:39:738 (1) - During this part you lose about a third of your health when you get all 300's. Do more hits or more new combos, please.

And there you go.

Ok, I made it ^^
Hmmm, I need to revive my beatmap ^^

revived

GENERAL:
slider tick rate -1

[candy]

slider velocity is WAY too fast IMO

00:07:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with this fast slider velocity and large spacing... maybe not... please change
00:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these are a bit better, but may still be a problem
01:17:071 Make the 0.5x speed warning appear during the break, much earlier than this... some people can't read that fast...
also, i think simply having the word 'SLOW' would work too

[hard]
ok

[dis-normal]

ok

[easy]

ok

good job

Ok, done, updated ^^ I only made the warning look better wth fading and moving

Star