1. 31's Drum (4.61 stars, 693 notes)
2. Insane (4.93 stars, 342 notes)
3. Normal (2.78 stars, 173 notes)

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Osu can always make room for more K-ON!!!

[Normal]
00:13:489 (1) - shorten this slider to end at 00:14:093
00:15:099 (2) - ^ same thing but to 00:15:703
00:16:710 (3) - ^ same thing (just remove the white tick at the top and it should be fine
00:18:321 (x) - add a note here
00:41:073 (x) - ^
00:41:475 (x) - ^
00:46:005 (1) - move spinner to this point
01:19:730 (x) - add a note here
01:20:133 (x) - ^
01:51:844 (4) - make sure this is on that tick
02:15:401 (2) - move note here
02:15:603 (3) - move note here
02:15:804 (x) - add note here
02:16:005 (5) - move note here (it will be a 5 after you add the note....just making that clear )
02:16:408 (6) - move note here
02:16:911 (1) - ^ same thing
02:17:213 (2) - ^
02:17:616 (3) - ^
02:18:019 (4) - ^
02:18:422 (5) - move note here, and remove one repeat
02:21:844 (x) - add a note here
02:22:247 (x) - add note here
02:37:146 (1) - move spinner here, and extend to end at 02:43:690
Rensap after all this...

[Insane]
00:40:469 (1) - extend slider to end at 00:40:670
01:51:744 (4) - move slider to start here
02:21:240 (1) - extend slider to end at 02:21:442
Then check your snapping, although jumps are fine

Maybe make a hard? Thats up to you

~STAR

• 00:13:489(1,2):Add Finish
  00:16:710(3):Add Finish at beginning of this slider
  00:18:321:Start Spinner here and remove Finish at the end of the spinner
  00:23:958(5,1):Spacing,too close
  00:27:583(2):Add Clap
  00:45:905:Start Spinner here
  01:02:616(5,1):Spacing,too close
  01:06:241(2):Add Clap
  01:35:234(2,1):Spacing,too close
  01:50:133-End What's wrong? Why there are lots of Blue Beat Note?
  Maybe you shoule find a good timer.

• 00:40:469(1):Add Clap at beginning of this slider
  01:09:865(5):Remove Clap at the end of this slider
  01:10:267(1):Add clap

impossiblexu wrote:

My Suggestions:

[Normal]

• 00:13:489(1,2):Add Finish
  00:16:710(3):Add Finish at beginning of this slider
  00:18:321:Start Spinner here and remove Finish at the end of the spinner
  00:23:958(5,1):Spacing,too close
  00:27:583(2):Add Clap
  00:45:905:Start Spinner here
  01:02:616(5,1):Spacing,too close
  01:06:241(2):Add Clap
  01:35:234(2,1):Spacing,too close
  01:50:133-End What's wrong? Why there are lots of Blue Beat Note?
  Maybe you shoule find a good timer.

[Hard]

• 00:40:469(1):Add Clap at beginning of this slider
  01:09:865(5):Remove Clap at the end of this slider
  01:10:267(1):Add clap

Good map!!
~STAR~

banvi wrote:

Hi
General
You should ask timing help.
Normal
01:30:804 (1,2) This slider don't fit this part of this song. I like better rhythm IMO.

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[attachment=0:b4b4d].jpg[/attachment:b4b4d]

01:55:905 (2,3) spacing is close.
02:09:965 (3,4) spacing miss
02:18:020 (4,5) spacing is far
02:29:295 (2) 1 grid up
Insane
00:18:724 (2,3,5,6) a bit slope. Intentional?
00:27:583 (1,2) spacing is far
01:30:804 (1,1,1) same as normal , I don't like this rhythm. uh... but let you.

First , you should find correct timing.
But thismap is nice~
star & gl

Alace wrote:

BPM:149.00
offset:115892
can`t get that small part XD

arken1015 wrote:

Fine to me :3
Anyway, keep going ;_;
And sorry for nothing to help you due to your skill :3...

Slanox wrote:

Hello,

[Normal]

I think, you should rise by 1 tick Circle size.

- 01:51:844(4) : On the red tick 01:51:945.
- 02:20:053(x) : Add circle ?

[Insane]

- 00:18:321(x) : Add circle ?
- 01:19:529(x) : Add cricle ?
- 02:25:690(5) : 1 grid up ?


Okay that's it.
Pretty map.
Get my star !

DJ KRZY wrote:

[Normal]
01:12:683 (1,2) - Consider flipping the shape of these two sliders vertically to alleviate the overlaps.
01:51:744 (4) - Elongate the slider by a single blue tick, and then begin the slider at 01:51:744.
02:37:166 (1) - End this spinner at 02:43:811.

[Insane]
아무래도 곡 중간중간에 파란 틱에서 시작하는 연타들이 문제가 될것 같네요
00:09:562 - modify the pattern so it looks like this:

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00:12:784 (1) - Remove note
00:14:395 (1) - ^
00:43:891 (X) - Add a note like this:

SPOILER

01:09:361 - modify the pattern so it looks like this:

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01:22:750 - modify the pattern so it looks like this:

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01:30:804 (1,2,3) - The drain might be a tad bit too unforgiving for these sliders. I suggest that you either remap this part or lower the drain by 1.
01:41:677 (X) - Add a note here.
01:43:287 (X) - Add a note here.
01:57:905 (1) - Was the most difficult part by far, but I think this would do:

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Ask a BAT about how you should NC that.

02:24:683 (X) - Add a note here at the end of the stream to make it a four-circle stream instead of a three-circle one.
02:34:247 - modify the pattern so it looks like this:

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우와 이렇게 혼신을 다해 모딩해본적은 없는거같아 ㅜ 무려 한시간을 조금 더 소요한 모딩ㅜ

Star!

brikel wrote:

Hi~ Hi~

If you don't use SB, remove "HO-KAGO TEA TIME - Sakuragaoka Girls' High School Song (Rock ver.) (hujune).osb" and fullsubmit.

[Normal]
00:42:281 (6) - add circle? not add
01:36:039 (2) - reduce the end point 1/1 fixing repeat pattern and add circle at 01:38:858?
Spacing is maybe fine. Differently fix

[Insane]
01:06:240 (1) - um..it's awkward? change fix
02:02:334 (6) - circle change slider, the end point 02:02:737 and
02:02:537 (1) - remove this slider?
fix

Um... It's good~ .I don't find enough problem. Star~

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
You may as well turn off the countdown. I mean, the girl counts off for the band at the exact same spot.

[Normal]
01:51:744 (4) - Maybe rotate this a bit so it's not overlapping so much?
02:28:509 (1) - Maybe position this closer to the center of the spinner? It's really soon after for this level of difficulty.
02:37:166 (1) - End this at 02:43:710.

[31's Rock]
Sounds... complicated. Way beyond my skill, though it doesn't sound too bad.

[Insane]
01:34:428 (2) - New combo these long sliders please. Watching your health drain away is really fun. :/ Though honestly, this part was kind of dull anyway. Maybe remap it?
01:51:744 (4) - Instead of having this just bounce back and forth and sounding bad, just have it go once and end at 01:52:952.
02:37:267 (1) - End this at 02:43:710.

A decent set. Normal had a few overlaps I didn't like, but they were obviously designed that way, so eh.

Eirene wrote:

[Insane]:
01:45:502 (1) - change a bit the shape like this :

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[attachment=0:0c219]mod4.png[/attachment:0c219]

02:36:564 (3) - remove the clap and add a finish at the end of the slider

[Normal]:
02:15:421 (2) - move one grid up and one grid left
02:37:166 (1) - if you listen carefully at the music, there is a finish here... so you might add a beat and move a bit the spinner like in the Insane ?

taiko diff is very good

seems to be a pretty god job this time :3

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
The 1st and 2nd combo color are too same, find the other?

[Normal]
00:32:012 (5) - I don't like this slider, please use bezier
00:37:650 (1) - Move 1 grid up?
00:39:260 (4) - This slider is bad, use bezier
00:42:079 (5) - Move 1 grid left?
01:05:033 (2) - Move 1 grid up?
01:06:643 (3) - New combo?
01:07:851 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:09:865 (3) - New combo?
01:40:469 (1,2,3) - I don't like this slider
01:51:744 (4) - Overlapped by previous slider is not good, IMO
02:23:274 (1) - Move 1 grid left?

[31's Rock]
Fine~

[Insane]
Please decrease the HP Drain Rate, I saw the Life Bar are going to half

01:18:724 (2,3,4) - Move 1 grid left?
02:17:638 (3) - Unsnapped, LOL
02:18:041 (4) - ^
02:20:457 (2) - ^
02:21:061 (5) - ^
02:21:061 (5) - ^
02:30:524 (1) - ^
02:31:128 (1) - ^
02:31:732 (2) - ^
02:32:940 (3) - ^
02:35:759 (4) - ^
02:36:363 (2) - ^

Nice song
STAR

wmfchris wrote:

Normal is ok?
[insane]
0:34:026 (1) left 2 grid? fix
1:07:046 (4) wrong spacing fix
1:11:878 (3) finish->clap? fix
1:53:153 (x) break fix
1:56:294 (2) left 1 grid < I see no problem.

[31's rock]
....~
I can only say it is play-able lol

star

vivere wrote:

Hi hujune ^^

[Normal]:
Good.
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[31's Rock]:
O_O.
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[Insane]:
Good.
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star

Astom wrote:

hi~
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[General]
-Delete HO-KAGO TEA TIME - Sakuragaoka Girls' High School Song (Rock ver.) (hujune).osb and fullsubmit fix
-Why you have same BPM two times with differents offsets? In my opinion, second is better This song should have been offset to 2.[Insane]
-Unsnaped circles, open AIMod and fix them Is intended.

Only that, Star~

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• • 01:47:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Use this background
  
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  [attachment=0:18e28]ho-kago-tea-time-1.jpg[/attachment:18e28]

[Insane]

• • 01:47:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders

Nice map.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
first offset:2206
second offset:114282
the second offset should at the place before notes get started. but i'm not sure... have to admit it's really hard to time it.

[Normal]
00:27:180 (1) - 1 grid left to align with the (2) before?
00:29:596 (2) - align with (1)
01:12:683 (3) - make the second point on slider down a bit to make it symmetrical?
01:30:804 (1) - ...really slow... use something instead..?
01:45:301 (1) - start 1/2 later (still end at the same place), sounds better.

[31's Rock]
not 31's taiko or 31's drum= =? it plays fine, but maybe don't know if you should do something to the kiai (or change other 2 diffs kiai?)

[Insane]
00:03:824 - 00:11:878 - feel asleep cause of the same beats and hitsounds.
00:44:797 (6) - add a note?
get tired of the claps....nearly all at same place

Shinxyn wrote:

:o
The first offset is fine, then the music slows down a bit on 01:50:125, so unless you wanna get someone to time the slow down there, I would say just avoid mapping it
The second offset works, but it doesn't have to be placed before the notes~ so on 115892 would be more proper

Normal-
01:12:675 (3) - mm... maybe start the claps on the third beat here? (the second repeating note on 01:13:481)
01:50:125 - move this timing panel a bit before the note, so people don't mishit a normal sample instead of soft (though I would rather prefer you remove these notes cuz of the slow down)
01:55:188 (1) - this note doesn't fit the offset or timing, and I don't want you to snap to 1/8... just remove this?
02:20:255 (1) - this was kinda for Normal tricky since you were following vocal a bit, then suddenly reverted to the drums... okay though.. oh and move the timing panel before the note for hitsound sample change
Hmm... okay

Taiko looks fine (though, looks hard?)

Insane-
Not too "Insane", but wouldn't wanna call this Hard okay then
01:11:870 (3) - imo, the clap sounds out of place here remove? maybe
01:50:125 - same as Normal
01:55:187 (1,2,3,4) - same as Normal, just remove this or find the timing for this section
02:14:416 - move timing panel before note please
4 note streams D:
The "no clap on the streams" seems on purpose... sounded kinda lacking, but okay...
Okay

Yea.... just remove 01:50:125 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - from both Normal and Hard and there shouldn't be a big timing mishap anymore :X unless you can get someone to time that part~!

Shinxyn wrote:

Quick recheck..

Normal-
01:55:892 - since you removed those notes, this timing panel doesn't do anything, just remove it >_>
02:14:416 - move timing panel before note >_< oops >_>
Okay~

Insane-
00:43:581 (1) - ... just... remove this note? since I would say most players would tend to continue following the vocal from 00:42:474 (1,2,3)... but up to you
01:22:239 (1) - ^ (also cuz of three notes following vocal before)

is it just me or does the drums slow down around 02:36:161?