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xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[Insane]

• • 01:47:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders

Nice map.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
first offset:2206
second offset:114282
the second offset should at the place before notes get started. but i'm not sure... have to admit it's really hard to time it.

[Normal]
00:27:180 (1) - 1 grid left to align with the (2) before?
00:29:596 (2) - align with (1)
01:12:683 (3) - make the second point on slider down a bit to make it symmetrical?
01:30:804 (1) - ...really slow... use something instead..?
01:45:301 (1) - start 1/2 later (still end at the same place), sounds better.

[31's Rock]
not 31's taiko or 31's drum= =? it plays fine, but maybe don't know if you should do something to the kiai (or change other 2 diffs kiai?)

[Insane]
00:03:824 - 00:11:878 - feel asleep cause of the same beats and hitsounds.
00:44:797 (6) - add a note?
get tired of the claps....nearly all at same place

Shinxyn wrote:

:o
The first offset is fine, then the music slows down a bit on 01:50:125, so unless you wanna get someone to time the slow down there, I would say just avoid mapping it
The second offset works, but it doesn't have to be placed before the notes~ so on 115892 would be more proper

Normal-
01:12:675 (3) - mm... maybe start the claps on the third beat here? (the second repeating note on 01:13:481)
01:50:125 - move this timing panel a bit before the note, so people don't mishit a normal sample instead of soft (though I would rather prefer you remove these notes cuz of the slow down)
01:55:188 (1) - this note doesn't fit the offset or timing, and I don't want you to snap to 1/8... just remove this?
02:20:255 (1) - this was kinda for Normal tricky since you were following vocal a bit, then suddenly reverted to the drums... okay though.. oh and move the timing panel before the note for hitsound sample change
Hmm... okay

Taiko looks fine (though, looks hard?)

Insane-
Not too "Insane", but wouldn't wanna call this Hard okay then
01:11:870 (3) - imo, the clap sounds out of place here remove? maybe
01:50:125 - same as Normal
01:55:187 (1,2,3,4) - same as Normal, just remove this or find the timing for this section
02:14:416 - move timing panel before note please
4 note streams D:
The "no clap on the streams" seems on purpose... sounded kinda lacking, but okay...
Okay

Yea.... just remove 01:50:125 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - from both Normal and Hard and there shouldn't be a big timing mishap anymore :X unless you can get someone to time that part~!

Shinxyn wrote:

Quick recheck..

Normal-
01:55:892 - since you removed those notes, this timing panel doesn't do anything, just remove it >_>
02:14:416 - move timing panel before note >_< oops >_>
Okay~

Insane-
00:43:581 (1) - ... just... remove this note? since I would say most players would tend to continue following the vocal from 00:42:474 (1,2,3)... but up to you
01:22:239 (1) - ^ (also cuz of three notes following vocal before)

is it just me or does the drums slow down around 02:36:161?

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions you can totally ignore

~All Diffs~
- Delete 31's Taiko from Tags? I think samiljul is enough.

~Normal~
01:30:796 (1,1,1) - These looong spinners make the map more boring than it should be ;_; Also it feels weird as spinner + slider + spinner. I suggest you to map one of the spinners, but it's totally up to you =x
01:55:892 (x) - Why you don't start mapping here like on Insane? The startpoint after the break here it's a bit weird o.o

~31's Taiko~
Nothing wrong here~

~Insane~
01:30:796 (1,1,2) - This part doesn't flow as well as the rest of the map... The first slider sounds nice, but the other two doesn't sound that fine x.x

Nice map! Good luck~
*star*

Mafiamaster wrote:

Remove k-on from tags, it's already in source.

[Normal]
02:37:167 - Possibly add a note here or extend the slider to reach this part.

[Insane]
00:33:011 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make sure 1 isn't touching the previous slider?
01:38:044 (2) - Remove new combo?
02:04:147 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing with 00:33:011 (1,2,3,4).

Mafiamaster wrote:

Looks good now!

2st Beatmap

2nd not 2st

STAR ~

Gens wrote:

you might want to get a Derek for this. =U

Gens wrote:

I think the second offset is a bit late, by 5ms or so. Try -5ms and tell me what you think. The BPM might be a bit off too... so you might want to get a Derek for this. =U

Also, goddamn. I feel embarrassed when modding things like this.

[Normal]

01:30:796 (1,1,1) - Also not fond of these spinners along with the slider. Feels lazy.
01:55:892 - Shouldn't the break finish here? Feels awkward. fix

[Insane]

01:30:796 (1,1,1) - I don't get along with these... what are they following exactly, specially the second one?

Overall opinion about the map... well, nothing special or interesting about it. No really, why do all chinese maps look the same? They're pretty nice built and all but it isn't very interesting. =/
Oh well, at least I liked what you did about the sliders. Almost everyone was linear and with red sliderpoints.

Now, I'll pop it for the moment...

Derekku wrote:

BPM/Offsets look fine. 5ms is such a tiny difference that I usually won't mention it to the mapper unless I get that value the entire time I test. I fluctuated between +5 and -5 when testing, so that should be accurate enough.

Aside from that, though, I have a small complaint with the background. With letterboxing during the breaks enabled, the band name at the bottom of the background shows just a bit and looks strange. (Example here) So, I moved it down slightly and got rid of a few blemishes around the image. If you'd like, just replace your current background with this, make sure it's saved as the same name, and full submit. :p

Gens wrote:

Follow up:

[Normal]

01:27:575 - Did you forget to put the break? Big mistake. fix
[Insane]

01:38:044 (2) - I like how you kinda fixed this but this slider still sounds a bit awkward. Should start at 01:37:239 if anything (and then you could add some beats after it to fill in).remove slider change note

ztrot wrote:

I don't know this was really late, I was hitting like 12-14ms early I think it might have to do with BPM

ztrot wrote:

mp3 is 320kbs fix that plz

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The song audio file should also be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself - ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 256kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BAT - they will be more than happy to find one for you.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

The song audio file should also be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself - ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 256kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BAT - they will be more than happy to find one for you.

Sorry for the confusion. Here is the part in the ranking criteria talking about the bit rate.

Here is your new mp3: http://www.mediafire.com/?wqvmfqrox7aqoil
The offset should be exactly the same as the old one, so you should not need to change the offset
(Note: I will probably take down this mp3 in 24 hrs)

Besides that, add HTT to the tags.

Faust wrote:

You shouldn't phrase it that way, Derek. It sounds like crap when you do.

Derekku wrote:

Faust wrote:

You shouldn't phrase it that way, Derek. It sounds like crap when you do.

...Pardon me?