[quote="Graf"]Ok modding time \o/
00:00:236 (1,2) - No music that this is mapped to. It doesn't even fit the voice. Remove.[done]
00:01:040 (3) - There are two sounds there but one slider, I'd change it into two sliders that are both half the length of the current one.[done]
00:02:111 (3,4) - Different sound from (1,2) though mapped the same. Make into a slider from white to red tick like [done]
00:01:040 (3) advice and perhaps move on the field.<<what it means?
00:02:468 (1,2) - Part of the sound from previous comment, remove circles and make another slider.[done]
00:03:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird pattern, I'd make it more regular. Go for two squares if out of ideas.[done]
00:10:683 (1) - Really large jump, I'd move it to around where the 00:09:254 (2) is.[i move them closer]
00:10:861 (1) - Seems kind of wild in the corner, perhaps move it up so it flows into the next slider?[done]
00:12:111 (7) - No flow from previous spaced stream into next slider, move down and to the right and perhaps adjust next slider to fit.[i change it into streams]
00:15:326 (1,1) - Last syllable of 'lemonade' or whatever has nothing mapped to it. Shorten slider and add another?[done? idk]
00:16:397 (1,1) - Does it really need to be in two combos?[yup! i am sure :3]
00:17:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Starts a little early in my opinion, no sound to map the stream to.[done?]
00:18:183 (1) - I'd make it reverse 2 more times before starting the stream to fit the sound.[done]
00:19:701 (1) - Doesn't fit the sound, make a jump or something.[done]
00:21:040 (1) - Same as 00:15:326 (1,1)[done?]
00:22:468 (1,1) - 1/16 slider very hard to keep combo on, maybe make them into 1/8 or short 1/4s?[done]
00:34:254 (1,1) - A bit too close to each other, might be hard to read.[done]
00:37:290 (1) - Points away from next combo, rotate it so it flows nicer.[done]
00:38:540 (2,3) - Move the (1,2) and (3,4) closer to each other, the jump is too big.[done]
00:43:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (5,6) is a big jump but it has a build up of sorts so I guess it's not as bad. Fits the music well.[ok i dont want to change them :3]
00:44:790 (5) - The middle of the slider is a strong beat whereas the start isn't.[done?]
00:49:611 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Huge jumps, might be hard to play especially as they go back on themselves. (4,1)[done]
00:51:397 (1,2,3) - same as 00:22:468 (1,1)[done]
00:57:647 (5) - Overmapped.[done?]
01:04:076 (1,1,1) - Doesn't seem stacked, is it meant to be?[done?]
01:05:326 (6,7) - Stacked, hard to read and confusing.[done]
01:05:683 (1,2) - Very far away from each other considering (2) starts a stream. Also I'd put (1) in the previous combo and make (2) the start of a new one for the stream.[its fine]
01:06:665 (9,1) - Crazy jump considering it's on the same timing intervals as the stream was. Put it on the same distance as the stream was.[done?]
01:15:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not hearing what the triplets are mapped to, the strong beats (snares) seem to fall in the middle?[done]
01:18:183 (1) - No real sound that this is mapped to, there is sound before the slider which isn't mapped to.
01:19:611 (1,1) - Sound between these which isn't mapped.
01:19:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stream doesn't really suit the singing in the background which is slower, I'd put some sliders.
01:22:111 (1,2,3,4) - (1) is really far away from (2) considering the timing. Move them closer.[done]
01:22:826 (1,2,3,4,5) - (1) , (3) and (5) are on the same place which might be hard to read. The jumps distances are irregular. Take inspiration from Saten's Wahrheit which I think is what you were going for.[its fine i tink!]
01:24:611 (2) - Appropriate place for a slider because there's no fast beats before or after it so it can be easily held combo on.{[done?]
01:27:468 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped, I'd leave it to a triplet on the 'd-d-d'. The next note for 'down' is fine but it should flow from the triplet before.[almost done~]:!:
01:29:254 (6,7,1) - Doesn't flow well I don't think.[ok]:?:
01:31:040 (6,7) - Weird spacing.
01:31:933 (1) - Mapped in wrong space, there is a sound in the background which could be better used.
01:32:468 (1,2,3,4) - Oddly placed jumps.
01:34:611 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bit too large for my liking although still playable and appropriate. Consider making smaller.
01:36:576 (1,2) - (2) is too close to the slider end for that timing.
01:39:254 (1) - Same as 00:22:468 (1,1)
01:40:147 (2) - Same as 00:22:468 (1,1)
01:41:665 (8,9) - Too far spacing for the same interval.
01:43:718 (6,7,8) - From my experience straying a stream into the corner is a bad idea.
02:01:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and onwards - should be good as long you as you hit sound the snares/claps in
02:06:397 (1) - Same as 00:22:468 (1,1)
02:07:111 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'm only hearing three sounds there while you have a burst of 5. Also it points into the corner.
02:07:826 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to aim with that timing and awkward sideways jump.
02:12:468 (6,7,8,9,10) - Might need a new combo? Why the stacked notes?
02:13:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Awkward jumps again.
02:14:968 (5) - Same as 00:22:468 (1,1), needs a new combo too.
02:18:897 (3,1) - Awkward distancing for that timing snap. (1) should be closer to the end of previous slider.
02:19:968 (6,7) - Bit large of a jump for that timing?
02:23:897 (8,9) - ^
02:25:326 (1,2) - Very small spacing for that timing, can be hard to read.
02:27:290 (2,3) - ^
02:28:897 (2,3,4,5) - Awkward jumps.
02:32:468 (1) - I'd put the reversing slider earlier so the new stream starts as the top note of the scale in the music is hit.
02:34:522 (10,1) - Too big of a jump for that timing, should be same as the stream.
02:38:718 (1,1) - Quite close and awkward for such a long time between the notes.
02:41:397 (2,1) - Kinda awkward how the note is flowing away from the slider.
02:49:076 (1,2,1) - Does this need to be mapped?
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