This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on August-04-15 at 12:24:16 PM

Artist: Joe Hisaishi
Title: Summer
Source: 菊次郎の夏
Tags: Piano Film Kikujiro Kikujirō no Natsu Curved Music II 藤澤 守 Fujisawa Mamoru Bandai Visual Tokyo FM
BPM: 90
Filesize: 4011kb
Play Time: 02:24
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.28 stars, 127 notes)
2. Hard (3.4 stars, 313 notes)
3. Insane (3.96 stars, 374 notes)
4. Normal (2.05 stars, 173 notes)

Download: Joe Hisaishi - Summer
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All difficulties completed, ready for modding!

o_O

Gee Lao, ur getting real big

gj, big improvement from last time

Ok, I finished the mod for your mapset, and here it is!






Overall, nice mapset, cool song, good luck with your map

HydroCannon13 wrote:

Ok, I finished the mod for your mapset, and here it is!

General

- you should uncheck widescreen support, no point to check it when there is no storyboard or video

Easy

- 00:00:042 (1,2,1) - you should make these sliders all the same
- 00:17:375 (3,4,5) - fix the spacing between these 3 notes
- 00:28:375 (3) - I think this is too sudden, I would get rid of this note altogether and then fix the spacing between 00:28:042 (2,3,4)
- 02:21:375 (2) - make this slider something more simple, a slider like this doesn't go with the music too well
- increase OD (idk, I think it should be increased but its fine if you leave it

Normal

- 00:35:708 (8,9) - take the whistle off of these to make the hitsounds consistent with the rest of this part
- 00:41:042 (8,9) - same here
- 02:21:375 (2) - same thing I said in the last slider for the easy diff

Hard

- 01:06:708 (1,2,3,4) - just want to say this part is awesome
- 01:26:042 (4) - add a clap here and a whistle on 01:26:375 (6,7) to be consistent with hitsounds
- 02:21:375 (1) - this is what the last sliders for the easy and normal diff should look like if you want to do a pattern like that

Insane

- 02:02:542 (11) - snap the end of this to the white tick

Overall, nice mapset, cool song, good luck with your map

I took all of your suggestions/fixes into account, thanks for the mod!

Hiyori wrote:

Hey there! I'm here since you posted on my Modding Queue

EASY:

1. First I think you need to fix your Distance Snap. Easy and Normal diffs needs DS on at all times. For you, you picked 0.5 DS but your distances are not on 0.5. Better fix it Hmm, I'm not even sure if I made this map with DS in mind. Anyhow I changed the DS to 1.0 (unfortunately this causes awkward overlapping in the first section due to low SV before first spinner), thanks! --- Actually I seem to use 1.0DS throughout the song anyway.
2. 00:04:042 (2,1) - dont overlap Autofixed itself after adjusting DS
3. 00:30:708 - add circle Added
4. 00:42:708 (2,3,1,2) - i dont know if this is okay with an easy diff, might be too hard to read for new players Hmmm, you may be right. I removed one reverse arrow for each slider here.
5. 01:17:375 (1,2,3,4) - This is creative and nice but umm no please. New players might not be able to catch up to this True, I remember my first time seeing this kind of slider pattern in other maps, they were confusing
6. 01:32:042 (2,1) - awkward overlap Fixed
7. 01:38:042 (4,1,2) - ^^ same as above Fixed as well
8. 01:57:375 (1,2) - ^^ Another fix
9. 02:00:708 (2,3) - blanket better Done

NORMAL:

1. 00:20:708 (1,2) - stack 2 on the slider. Move 1 down. Fixed so that only the 2 stacks with the slider Edit: I decided to stack neither of the two notes, so that I can be more consistent with the Distance Snap
2. 01:16:042 (4,1) - dont overlap Fixed
3. 01:24:042 (3,1) - ^^ Fixed as well
4. 01:33:375 (1) - move to x: 248 y: 140
5. 01:34:042 (2) - move to x: 172 y: 56
6. 01:34:708 (3) - move to x: 80 y: 136
7. 01:35:375 (4) - move to x: 156 y: 220 I think you want me to create a Square here, so I made one using Polygon Creator with x0.8DS, starting at 248, 140. Then I changed the positioning of the following combos a bit Edit: I re-positioned this part to be more consistent with Distance Snap
8. 01:55:708 (5,1) - dont overlap Fixed

HARD:

1. 01:09:708 (2,3,4,5) - Square better True, it looks ugly now that I look at it again
2. 01:12:042 (1,2,3,1,2) - reduce your hitsounds here. I'm not sure what you meant by this, but I did remove the Normal hitsounding from the two sliderends
3. 01:23:208 (3) - try this? click me Fixed, I also re-positioned the next two combos a little bit to reduce spacing during combo transitions
4. 01:56:375 (5) - clap here is kinda loud and is distracting, try to reduce the volume Fixed, as well as the one at 01:59:042 (6)
5. 02:08:708 (1,1) - ^^ same as above If you're talking about reducing volume, I personally think it's fine, not too loud imo. If the '^^' was referring to the "try this?", I think it looks fine and is still playable. Thanks for the suggestion though

Overall cute map! Hope this short mod helps Goodluck!

Thanks for the mod, it wasn't short at all, very helpful

From my queue t/343526



Insane and Easy were pretty much perfect.
Good Luck!

-Ldan- wrote:

From my queue t/343526

Normal

Tip Section
Not many people like these 00:36:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -


Try something more like this Hmm, I was experimenting with that pattern, but I guess it's too confusing to stack notes like that on Normal and in general. Fixed

Hard

Tip Section
In hard, constant DS [Distance Spacing] is quite important, not many maps without it got ranked.
To quickly use DS you can hold ALT while moving objects! [You probably already know that, but just in case you don't]
You can add a new combo here 01:10:708 - I believe DS isn't as important in Hard, but I'll do a run through of this map again anyways /// True, true. Fixed

Insane and Easy were pretty much perfect.
Good Luck!

Thanks for your time

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Hi! from my queue. nice song! Good job. :3




That's all I didn't find anything bad in the harder diffs.

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HappyRocket88 wrote:

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Hi! from my queue. nice song! Good job. :3

General
Ok there some thing you must keep on ming while you map

1. The background image is 1365x768, It must be resized to 1366x768, please. Thanks for the re-size!
2. As you don't nothing on tags I'd suggest you add this info into tags. Added.
   
   SPOILER

   piano, film
3. Take into a count to snap all the inherited timing points troughout the diffs. Cleaned up some 1/4 snapped Inheriting points on Easy/Normal.
4. I'd say to reduce the vol of the timing a little bit more, pls. They're too noisy. I reduced the volumes a bit, not sure if I need to further reduce them again.

Easy

1. 00:08:042 (1) This spinner is too short and it might confuse nwebies, please replace it by a slider, that fits better imo. Fixed, I didn't really consider that, I'll keep that in mind next time I make Easy difficulties
2. 00:35:375 (2) Stack this slider end in this slider 00:38:708 (4) 's head. Fixed
3. 02:20:042 (1,1,1) Remove the NC in these circles. there's no need lol I have them like that in all of my other difficulties, I think it's fine unless there is a specific issue regarding adding New Combos within a beat

Easy

1. 00:16:708 (2,3) The flow here isn't good. Try something more intuitive. I fixed it, not sure if it's too much better though
2. 00:42:708 (2,3) Fix this blanket, please. Fixed

That's all I didn't find anything bad in the harder diffs.

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Thanks for the mod and the re-sized Background

Here, as you requested in our queue, I'll mod this piece of art
Please note, that I DO NOT mean to be offensive in my mod, so don't take anything too seriously, please!

[General Thoughts]
Ne map is nearly not perfect, and should not be rankable (or if it is, than the new nominators are either doing a terrible job, or 2015 is the years of beginner maps & mappers)
I have to mention, you do a LOT of unnecessary overlaps, especially in Normal!
Blankets should be a thing on your map, but there's so much, that I just have to mention here, that there's a lot of bad/missing blankets.
I seriously don't want my mod just about bad blankets and bad overlaps, so I won't mention them. But you know there are.
Randomly increasing DS in Easy and Normal. They are bad.
Silencing notes are unrankable if they affect the gameplay.
Also, please don't add horrible hitsounds. They are

[Easy]
Slider speed changes should be forbidden, unless something (like kiai) happens during the song/map
Good example: 01:12:042 - here, it's ok, 'cause it's kiai time, the song could be faster, so the map could be a tiny bit faster and harder as well, but just a tiny bit, 'cause this is still any Easy map
Bad example: 00:10:042 - Here, the slider speed is back tp 1.0, wich should be by default. Such change, especially just randomly somewhere in the map should be forbidden, as the player (who's a beginner) will not expect it, and might fail. I know this isn't such a big change, but still, it should be forbidden.

With these, a LOT of jumps occur in this map, and just by saying "Oh the AI mod didn't detect any, it should be fine", you cannot hide them.
Here are some examples:
00:04:708 - You can clearly see, that 2 and 3 sort of collide in 1/1, but 3 and 1 does not!
Also an example about what the AI mod doesn't seem to detect at all
00:50:375 - Look at the space between 3 and 4
01:01:708 - And now look at the space between 1 and 2

1/2 jumps should not be a thing in an Easy diff
01:06:708 - For example
However, you can create 1/2 reverse sliders like this 01:25:708 (2) -
IF you really want this to be normal in your diff, you can still increase the BPM to twice as much, so the map can go in 1/1

02:20:042 (1,1,1) - Make these as a slider, so they don't confuse the player

[Normal]
00:10:042 (1) - Just in case you didn't know, in Normal, you are able to create 1/4 reverse sliders. However, do not use them constantly!

00:05:375 - With the random slider velocity change, the distance increased again. Please do not modify the slider velocity, unless gameplay change occurs (like kiai), and you fell it important!
This happens a lot in this map, so I guess I can say a distance snap increase after each slider velocity change, which is still a bad thing on Normal.
Example: 01:31:375 - Distance snap here 01:33:042 - DS between 5 and 1..


01:22:708 (1,2,3) - Horrible blankets
01:25:375 (1,2) - Again. And I stop here, there's too much

02:20:042 (1,1,1) - Make this as a slider, so they don't confuse the player

[Hard]
00:02:708 (1,2) - Just an example for a bad blanket
But seriously, I won't mention more
00:12:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think such stream should be on insane, since this might be a little bit hard for the players (you know, osu is not just about top 10 players, we've got beginners.. A lot..)
01:14:042 (1,2) - An example for a weird overlap
I won't mention more, there's too much for me

[Insane]
00:36:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fail. Fix this
00:50:375 (10,11) - Try to move 11 a bit further, so it will not look like it's part of the stream

That's it, because I don't want to repeat myself, sorry!

I hope you'll improve in the future!

Hullahopp wrote:

Here, as you requested in our queue, I'll mod this piece of art
Please note, that I DO NOT mean to be offensive in my mod, so don't take anything too seriously, please!

[General Thoughts]
Ne map is nearly not perfect, and should not be rankable (or if it is, than the new nominators are either doing a terrible job, or 2015 is the years of beginner maps & mappers) Isn't that what modding is for?
I have to mention, you do a LOT of unnecessary overlaps, especially in Normal! Yet you didn't really mention any below...
Blankets should be a thing on your map, but there's so much, that I just have to mention here, that there's a lot of bad/missing blankets. I agree, some blankets were really lazy on my part.
I seriously don't want my mod just about bad blankets and bad overlaps, so I won't mention them. But you know there are.
Randomly increasing DS in Easy and Normal. They are bad.
Silencing notes are unrankable if they affect the gameplay. If you meant sliderends, I removed sliderend silencing. I don't think it necessarily affects gameplay however, just somewhat disturbing for some people.
Also, please don't add horrible hitsounds. They are They are...? Hmm, I'll likely go over my map later once I get time to do so

[Easy]
Slider speed changes should be forbidden, unless something (like kiai) happens during the song/map
Good example: 01:12:042 - here, it's ok, 'cause it's kiai time, the song could be faster, so the map could be a tiny bit faster and harder as well, but just a tiny bit, 'cause this is still any Easy map
Bad example: 00:10:042 - Here, the slider speed is back tp 1.0, wich should be by default. Such change, especially just randomly somewhere in the map should be forbidden, as the player (who's a beginner) will not expect it, and might fail. I know this isn't such a big change, but still, it should be forbidden.
I purposely have the slider speed for the first 10 seconds set at a lower value, because this part doesn't have the right hand piano in yet and thus is less intense than the rest of the song. However, I have compromised by setting the SV to 0.75 for all diffs except [Insane] throughout the beginning part until 10 seconds in.

With these, a LOT of jumps occur in this map, and just by saying "Oh the AI mod didn't detect any, it should be fine", you cannot hide them. All notes are snapped to a certain DS, there shouldn't be any jumps with the exception of 'visual jumps' during SV change transitions.
Here are some examples:
00:04:708 - You can clearly see, that 2 and 3 sort of collide in 1/1, but 3 and 1 does not! Fixed automatically with the SV fix
Also an example about what the AI mod doesn't seem to detect at all
00:50:375 - Look at the space between 3 and 4
01:01:708 - And now look at the space between 1 and 2 Am I not allowed to change the DS in [Easy] at all? Personally I find this part of the song to be less intense than the rest of the song (and of course, compared to the upcoming Kiai), and thus I reduced the DS to 0.8, which doesn't seem like a significant, yet appropriate change to me.

1/2 jumps should not be a thing in an Easy diff
01:06:708 - For example How is this a jump? The DS in this section is a constant 0.8.
However, you can create 1/2 reverse sliders like this 01:25:708 (2) -
IF you really want this to be normal in your diff, you can still increase the BPM to twice as much, so the map can go in 1/1

02:20:042 (1,1,1) - Make these as a slider, so they don't confuse the player Fixed

[Normal]
00:10:042 (1) - Just in case you didn't know, in Normal, you are able to create 1/4 reverse sliders. However, do not use them constantly!

00:05:375 - With the random slider velocity change, the distance increased again. Please do not modify the slider velocity, unless gameplay change occurs (like kiai), and you fell it important! Fixed, mentioned in [Easy]
This happens a lot in this map, so I guess I can say a distance snap increase after each slider velocity change, which is still a bad thing on Normal.
Example: 01:31:375 - Distance snap here 01:33:042 - DS between 5 and 1..


01:22:708 (1,2,3) - Horrible blankets
01:25:375 (1,2) - Again. And I stop here, there's too much I fixed most of them that looked ugly.

02:20:042 (1,1,1) - Make this as a slider, so they don't confuse the player Fixed

[Hard]
00:02:708 (1,2) - Just an example for a bad blanket Fixed
But seriously, I won't mention more
00:12:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think such stream should be on insane, since this might be a little bit hard for the players (you know, osu is not just about top 10 players, we've got beginners.. A lot..) If I'm not mistaken, [Hard] is for somewhat experienced players? Anyhow, I closed the gaps between each note so that it becomes easier.
01:14:042 (1,2) - An example for a weird overlap
I won't mention more, there's too much for me Fixed

[Insane]
00:36:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fail. Fix this Elaborate please.
00:50:375 (10,11) - Try to move 11 a bit further, so it will not look like it's part of the stream Hmm yeah.

That's it, because I don't want to repeat myself, sorry!

I hope you'll improve in the future!

I feel that at some points, you're just trying to enforce unnecessary changes for your taste. However I did fix some of the points you mentioned (blanket, overlap...). I'm also considering changing the second half of the song after kiai time to 1.0x SV for consistency. I'll probably do that once I find time.

Anyways, thanks for the mod, gave me lots to think about.

Hello there~! Gonna go through your map and try to get something done~!

Watched the move a time, it was bizzare indeed.

General

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Metadata

1. You can add some tags that'll be useful if you want for example: Kikujirō no Natsu, Curved Music II, 藤澤 守, Fujisawa Mamoru (His real name).
2. You can place 久石 譲 (Hisaishi Jō) into the artist as you can Romanize it to Joe Hisaishi, in this case seeing the current name you have is a bit wrong.
3. You can place 菊次郎の夏 (Kikujirō no Natsu) as the Source and the translation in brackets could go to the tags as well along with the english translation which is Kikujiro.

Easy

1. 00:08:042 (1) - The normal hit sound at the end of this slider reaaaly doesn't fit with the calm and relaxing song like this, you should've kept that soft hitsound for that.
2. 00:24:042 (1) - Maybe blanket it like this?
3. 00:28:708 (3) - Maybe add a whistle to the start or a Finish to the middle of the slider?
4. 00:48:708 (2,3) - Maybe a whistle could go on (2)'s slider end or on (3)?
5. 01:01:375 to 01:11:375 - Maybe add whistles to every second white tick up until 01:11:375. Not only does it sound good it signals the buildup towards the Kiai too
6. 01:18:042 (2,4) - Replace the claps for whistles, sounds very out of place imo.

Normal

1. 00:21:042 (2) - Try to avoid stacking in Easy/Normals.
2. 00:28:042 (2,3,4,5,6) - A suggestion.
3. Personal notice: use a DS of 1.1x, try and see for yourself. Other wise nothing major with this diff.

Hard

1. 00:45:375 (2) - Move this to x:112|y:184.
2. 01:44:042 (3) - Maybe blanket this a b i i i i t better like this.
3. 01:52:542 (4,5,6) - The gaps between these notes are quite big for Hard jump, maybe have some equal distance while still keeping your jump safe but fun like this.
4. 02:03:375 (1,2) - I don't know what the purpose of these very short sliders are for that a simple star pattern normal jump can't fix.
5. 02:10:042 (1) - Move this to x:356|y:336.
6. 02:11:375 (1,2,3) - Example here.
7. 02:14:042 (1,2) - Like I mentioned before, I don't know what the purpose of these very short sliders are for that a simple star pattern normal jump can't fix.
8. 02:20:542 (1) - Stack this on top of (2).

Insane

1. 00:10:042 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion.
2. 00:11:208 (6) - Another suggestion.
3. 00:15:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe polish it up like this?
4. 01:52:042 (5) - Bring this back to x:208|y:224 to fix that star? pattern.

Verdict

Now then, there is some polishing to be done in your maps, in terms of hit sound placement where it's hit or miss as well as your patterns placement and spacing. It is a piece of music I like and I will keep an eye on it if any more modding would be possible after changes. Good luck~!

Crimmi wrote:

Hello there~! Gonna go through your map and try to get something done~!

Watched the move a time, it was bizzare indeed. Never watched the movie myself, just really like the song

General

______________________________________

Metadata

1. You can add some tags that'll be useful if you want for example: Kikujirō no Natsu, Curved Music II, 藤澤 守, Fujisawa Mamoru (His real name).
2. You can place 久石 譲 (Hisaishi Jō) into the artist as you can Romanize it to Joe Hisaishi, in this case seeing the current name you have is a bit wrong.
3. You can place 菊次郎の夏 (Kikujirō no Natsu) as the Source and the translation in brackets could go to the tags as well along with the english translation which is Kikujiro. I didn't even realize how much could be added to metadata, thanks a bunch

Easy

1. 00:08:042 (1) - The normal hit sound at the end of this slider reaaaly doesn't fit with the calm and relaxing song like this, you should've kept that soft hitsound for that. Aye, fixed
2. 00:24:042 (1) - Maybe blanket it like this? Yeah, that looks better
3. 00:28:708 (3) - Maybe add a whistle to the start or a Finish to the middle of the slider? Added a whistle.
4. 00:48:708 (2,3) - Maybe a whistle could go on (2)'s slider end or on (3)? Added on 3
5. 01:01:375 to 01:11:375 - Maybe add whistles to every second white tick up until 01:11:375. Not only does it sound good it signals the buildup towards the Kiai too Aye, on my other difficulties I have Finishes on beats 1, 3. Not sure if I should change those to whistles as well
6. 01:18:042 (2,4) - Replace the claps for whistles, sounds very out of place imo. Fixed, also changed claps on 01:20:708 (2,3) to whistles

Normal

1. 00:21:042 (2) - Try to avoid stacking in Easy/Normals. I just changed these two notes to a slider, seems like this part was a little tricky to figure out for me and when playing :/
2. 00:28:042 (2,3,4,5,6) - A suggestion. Fixed, I think it fits better now since the 4, which is the peak of the 5 notes, is also the peak in this musical phrase
3. Personal notice: use a DS of 1.1x, try and see for yourself. Other wise nothing major with this diff. I feel like this is too much work, for something not too major. Poor excuse, but oh well :/

Hard

1. 00:45:375 (2) - Move this to x:112|y:184. Fixed
2. 01:44:042 (3) - Maybe blanket this a b i i i i t better like this. Fixed
3. 01:52:542 (4,5,6) - The gaps between these notes are quite big for Hard jump, maybe have some equal distance while still keeping your jump safe but fun like this. Hmm, fixed
4. 02:03:375 (1,2) - I don't know what the purpose of these very short sliders are for that a simple star pattern normal jump can't fix. I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say :c
5. 02:10:042 (1) - Move this to x:356|y:336. I'm guessing you want me to blanket with 02:09:375 (1)? Fixed
6. 02:11:375 (1,2,3) - Example here. Like this?
7. 02:14:042 (1,2) - Like I mentioned before, I don't know what the purpose of these very short sliders are for that a simple star pattern normal jump can't fix.
8. 02:20:542 (1) - Stack this on top of (2). Fixed

Insane

1. 00:10:042 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion. Fixed
2. 00:11:208 (6) - Another suggestion. Fixed
3. 00:15:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe polish it up like this? Fixed
4. 01:52:042 (5) - Bring this back to x:208|y:224 to fix that star? pattern. That note was originally far placed to give contrast from the previous star pattern, but the music sounds no different, thus I think the fix makes sense to me.

Verdict

Now then, there is some polishing to be done in your maps, in terms of hit sound placement where it's hit or miss as well as your patterns placement and spacing. It is a piece of music I like and I will keep an eye on it if any more modding would be possible after changes. Good luck~!

Thanks for the mod! I'm glad you like the music, hard to find osu! players that like this song

Bad: http://puu.sh/iY5dE/d82479984a.png
Good: http://puu.sh/iY5f6/943048ad4c.png

ShinyEmerald wrote:

Bad: http://puu.sh/iY5dE/d82479984a.png
Good: http://puu.sh/iY5f6/943048ad4c.png

Okie

[Hard]
00:28:708 (7,8,9,10) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3393142 do this instead please it reads better, and complies with DS.
00:25:375 (5) - Also this is hard to read for most people.
01:40:708 (7,8,9,10) - Again please space them out.
02:08:708 (1,1) - Jump is too much

[Insane]
01:40:708 (9,10,11,12) - Space out.

BG is soo kawai wth

Osuology wrote:

[Hard]
00:28:708 (7,8,9,10) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3393142 do this instead please it reads better, and complies with DS. Aye, fixed.
00:25:375 (5) - Also this is hard to read for most people. Hmm, changed to what I have here: 00:22:708 (6,7,8)
01:40:708 (7,8,9,10) - Again please space them out. Fixed
02:08:708 (1,1) - Jump is too much Hmm, you may be right, this jump could be too much for a Hard. Fixed.

[Insane]
01:40:708 (9,10,11,12) - Space out. Okay.

BG is soo kawai wth Haha lol

Thanks for your mod!

From Queue


Sorry its such a small mod i couldn't really find much wrong with it and I am bad at mapping hards and such so I feel like if i modded the easier diffs it would destroy them lol Anyways nice song choice and Gl

Squarey wrote:

From Queue

Insane

1. 00:07:375 (4) - I would revere this slider to make it finish the pattern instead of having those as 3 big jumps and then one thats the same slider but a lot closer Could you explain this? All four sliders here have an equal distance spacing of x1.20, so I do believe they are all the same transitions.

2. 00:23:708 (1) - Curve this it would make the map flow better imo Yup, fixed.

3. 00:25:375 (5) - Move this a bit to the left to make it a better blanket I'm not sure which blanket you're referring to, but I moved it a bit to the left since then the following notes aren't directly below this slider.

4. 00:42:042 (1) - Change where the bend is it seems weird with it that close to the beginning of the slider I pressed Ctrl+G and moved it around a bit

5. 01:31:375 (5,6) - Maybe curve the ends of these to make it a better blanket The blanket should look better now.

6. 02:13:375 (5) - Move this so it makes the star neater Fixed

7. 02:18:709 (5) - ^ Fixed

8. 02:21:375 (1) - Maybe add a spinner here instead of the slider Hmm I think I'll keep my map ending consistent throughout all my difficulties.

Sorry its such a small mod i couldn't really find much wrong with it and I am bad at mapping hards and such so I feel like if i modded the easier diffs it would destroy them lol Anyways nice song choice and Gl

Thanks for your time, no problem

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Artavia wrote:

From My Modding Queue

General

1. 02:20:055 - Inherited Points가 한 지점에서 두번 겹치거나, 언스냅되어있는 상태는 Unrankable이므로 반드시 수정하시고 유념하시길 바랍니다. 맵 보다보니 전체 난이도에 공통적으로 들어가있네요. 02:20:055에 두개 겹쳐있거나 언스냅 되어있다는건 못찾겠습니다만... 키아이 전에 쓸모없는 Inheriting Point가 하나 있어서 그건 지웠습니다. 맵 4개 다 확인해 봤는데, 다른 언스냅/겹친 포인트는 못찾겠네요. 만약에 아직 남아 있다면 이건 따로 메시지 부탁드립니다.
2. 전체적으로 뉴콤보가 조금 일관성이 떨어집니다. 특히 노래가 후반부에 진입할수록 심해지는데, 이러한 일관성은 이지와 노멀에서 굉장히 중요한 요소로 작용하기 때문에 전체적으로 수정해주셔야 할것 같습니다. 어느정도 수정하긴 했습니다만, Easy랑 Normal에서 콤보당 노트 빈도가 높아진 느낌이; Hard랑 Insane은 어느정도 맞게 고쳐진것 같고요.
   
   하나의 방법은 첫번째 큰 흰틱(타이밍 라인 첫박자)에서 세번째 큰 흰틱 직전까지는 새롭게 뉴콤보를 쓰지 않는게 보통 이지와 노멀에서 사용하는 '뉴콤보의 일관성' 이지만, 일관성만 지킨다면 큰 흰틱에서 두번째 큰 흰틱까지만 되어도 상관은 없습니다.
   
   또 다른 방법은 노래나 보컬에 맞춰서, 강조할 곳에 따라 사용하는 것인데 매핑에 어느정도 익숙해지면 쓰는것을 추천해드립니다.
3. 필요하거나, 노래의 분위기에 알맞다면 변속을 사용할수는 있으나 이지나 노멀에서 변속을 사용하지 않는것을 추천하는 바입니다. 변속이라면 Slider Velocity 바꾸는것을 말씀하시는 것 같은데... 이지에서 변속을 쓴 부분은 피아노 오른손이 없는 초반이랑 키아이고요, 노멀에서는 초반, 키아이, 그리고 특정 부분의 진동 슬라이더 뿐인데... 키아이에서 변속을 올리는것도 무리가 되나요?

Easy

1. CS-1? 음 이건 굳이 바꾸지 않아도 될것 같네요.
2. 00:21:388 (1,2) - 이런 슬라이더보다 일반적으로 둥근모양인 00:31:388 (1) - 이런 모양을 쓰는게 더 낫지 않을까요? 고쳤습니다. 지금 보니 기존 모양은 예쁘지도 않고 어색하게 보이네요.
3. 00:51:055 - 음... 이곳에 쉬는 구간이 있다는건 어색한거 같네요. 살짝 그런 느낌이 없지않지만 쉬는 구간을 어디 다른곳에 넣을지 모르겠네요
4. 01:06:721 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이런 부분이나 01:22:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 이런 부분은 이지에서 반드시 지적이 들어오기 마련입니다. 박자는 예상하기 꽤나 쉽고 BPM도 낮은편이지만, 처음 이지를 플레이하는 유저들에게는 어렵게 느껴질 것이고, 보통 이런식으로 약간의 스택이 되어있는 상태는 처음 하시는 분들이 읽기 조금 어렵다고 합니다. 그렇군요... 1/2를 덜 쓰는, 좀 더 간단한 패턴으로 고쳤습니다.
5. 02:21:388 (2) - 이지인데 이런 부분은 굳이 진동슬라이더를 쓸 필요 없이 스피너를 쓰는게 더 좋은거 같습니다. 고쳤습니다. 전에 다른 모더분도 이거 지적했었던 부분이네요.

Normal

1. 00:10:055 (1) - 리버스 슬라이더보다 00:14:055 (5) - 이런게 더 낫지 않을까 생각합니다. 그렇네요.
2. 00:20:721 (1) - 여기 왜 뉴콤보가 들어갔는지 모르겠네요... 여기에 포인트를 주고싶어서였는데, 노멀에서는 그냥 일관성을 따라야 할것 같네요.
3. 00:35:721 (4,5) - 지우고 슬라이더를 쓰는게 나을것 같아요. 00:41:055 (4,5) - 여기도 마찬가지로... 네, 고쳤습니다.
4. 00:51:055 - Easy 난이도와 같은 입장입니다.
5. 01:55:721 (5,1,2) - Normal 난이도에서 이런 박자는 별로 추천드리고 싶지 않습니다. 엇박이라 그런건가요? 00:43:055 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 여기처럼 바꿨습니다.
6. 02:21:388 (2) - 이곳도 그냥 스피너를 쓰시는 것이 좋을거 같아요. 곡의 마지막 부분이기도 하니 스피너가 훨씬 어울릴거예요.넵.

Hard

1. 00:08:055 (1) - 스피너보단 노트를 채워보시는것이 어떤지... 음 뭔가 곡 초반에서 피아노 오른손 들어오는곳까지 자연스러운 흐름을 주고 싶었는데... 제 생각에 노트를 채우면 왼손 매핑하다 뜬금없이 오른손 들어오는게 부자연스러울것 같아서 일단은 냅두려 합니다.
2. 00:24:555 (4) - 좀더 낮은 물결모양이 되면 어떨까요? 예시 넵.
3. 00:29:721 (1) - 여기도 스피너는 별로 어울리지 않는거 같아요. 여기는 노트 채워 넣었습니다.
4. 00:42:721 (2) - 이거보단 00:45:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이런식으로 박자를 채우시는게 어울릴거예요. 네, 기존 리버스 슬라이더가 이상하긴 하더군요.
5. 01:17:388 (1,1,1) - 이런것보다는 리버스 1번쓰시고 서클 1개씩 채우는게 더 좋습니다. 음 앞으로는 더블 리버스는 자제해야겠네요.

Insane

1. 오각형 모양의 서클점프를 많이 찍으셨는데 너무 비슷하게 많이 찍으신건 아닌가 하는 생각이 드네요. 세어보니 많긴 많더군요;; 몇개는 변경했습니다.
2. 01:01:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 인세인인데 거의 노멀이랑 비슷하게 박자를 많이 비우셨는데 조금 알맞게 채워주세요. 채웠습니다.
3. 01:12:055 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이런부분은 거의 뉴콤보가 노래에도 맞지 않고 일관성에도 맞지 않습니다. 상위 난이도라지만 어느정도 지켜주실건 지켜주셔야 해요. 말씀하신 부분을 새로 매핑 했습니다.

소중한 시간 내주셔서 감사합니다

zorefire wrote:

Sorry About that

*WARNING*: I'm telling the you what most mappers won't so don't be offended by some words hard critique will make your map better

[General]
Keep the volume low I did an overall volume decrease throughout the difficulties, and throughout the song.

01:07:388 - starting here it gets too loud

[Easy]
01:21:388 (7) - take off that crash Yeah, the crash does sound unnecessary there lol

01:22:721 (1) - the hit at the end sounds too out of place for a soft song like this Changed them to whistles.

01:12:055 (1) - from here on lower the volume of that hit sound, the whistle The entire Kiai is now quieter. I'm not quite sure if I necessarily need to make certain points quieter than other points.

02:24:055 - for this spinner use a silent wav for the ending Didn't know you could do that I changed every last note in all the difficulties to a silent .wav

01:29:721 (4) - use the same hit sound for this here > 01:30:721 (5) Not sure what you mean here, 01:30:721 (5) - has no added hitsounds. I changed 01:29:721 (4) - sliderend to a whistle though.

[Normal]
00:08:055 (1) - remove this please it's so out of place go with previous pattern I believe this isn't the first time I've got this suggestion. I guess it really is an awkward spinner

Silent last spinner ending Yup

[Hard]
00:08:055 (1) - Mmm spinner doesn't fit on this map to be honest take it out please and use notes Fixed

00:21:388 (3,4,5) - use this same pattern here 00:22:721 (6,7,8) I'm guessing you want me to stack the circle on the sliderstart...? If so it's fixed.

00:37:388 (5) - end this here 00:37:888 and add a circle here 00:38:055 I guess you want the downbeat of the left hand mapped, right? fixed.

01:16:555 (8,9) - move these closer I'm following the consistent 1.20x distance spacing here, I think this is fine.

01:24:055 (1,2) - jump is too big I think you're actually referring to these 01:23:721 (5,1)? I moved the 1 closer to the 5.

01:25:055 (5) - ^ There is not much I could do here without messing up the pattern here. If this becomes an issue I'll likely re-map this part then.

The Kiai part the notes are too far apart bring them closer together For the most part there is a consistent distance spacing of x1.20. However I did make some of the more spaced jumps a bit easier to fit a Hard difficulty.

[Insane]
00:08:055 (1) - spinner = bad Haha okay

00:22:721 (6) - bring this up a little bit Fixed

00:42:055 (1) - that's ugly Hmm, I just fixed this to a curve.

01:01:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these are too close too easy for an Insane give them more space for a jump Hard was harder than those lol There is no need for increased spacing here imo. Plus, the same spot in [Hard] looked visibly farther apart due to the gap in the timeline. Both occasions are actually consistent with the distance spacing.

01:17:388 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no just no spread them apart please Fixed

02:21:388 (4) - move this down pleasehttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3428154 I'm guessing you want me to hit the four corners here lol, fixed.

[Combo Colour]
Please change them it looks like you created the map and forgot about them I'm not quite sure how to do this... Google didn't solve my question :/

the change the yellow to orange take out the red and the blue and use a darker shade of green and also add light brown

AND REMEMBER MAPS DON'T GET RANKED OVER NIGHT IT TAKES TIME THIS MAP MAY BE RANKED IN THE NEXT 2 MONTHS DON'T GIVE UP ALSO ANOTHER TIP THE MORE MODS THE BETTER GET 5 PAGES OF MOD'S AND YOU SHOULD BE GOOD DON"T FORGET TO HAVE A SUFFICIENT AMOUNT OF KUDOSU ON A MAP AND IF YOU HAVE TO DELETE A WHOLE SECTION AND RESTART OVER DO SO
3 YEARS OF WISDOM TO YOU Thanks

Thanks for your mod! It would be great if you could PM me how to add custom combo colours, without having to force the user to use a certain skin whenever they play my map.

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Insane

1. 00:05:388 (1,2,3,4) - The shape of these really could be improved Hmm, yeah. Fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:08:055 (1) - It really doesn't make sense to have a spinner here when you could map to the simple 1/2 beat of the piano, ending it here 00:09:388 for emphasis on 00:10:055 (1) - (may apply to other difficulties) Fixed this for all difficulties except Easy. This should now be the last mod with this comment
3. 00:32:555 (4) - I don't feel that this shape is called for by the music. This is a relatively calm part, so having a subtle slider shape to go with that makes much more sense Perhaps a loop was unnecessary, I fixed this to a much simpler shape.
4. 00:50:555 (11) - I recommend changing this for 2 circles, so you can get a hittable downbeat and finish on 00:50:721. It really doesn't make sense when you have a finish on a slider end, as the slider start or circle gives more emphasis and proper audio feedback. That makes sense to have a circle have the finish. Fixed.
5. 02:02:555 (11) - ^
6. 02:21:388 (4) - Same as 00:32:555 (4) - The song's ending isn't calm like the part you pointed out. I think this is fine. However if more people suggest to change this, I may change this to a simple spinner like all the easier difficulties.

Hard

1. 00:28:721 (7,8,9,10) - I doubt players at this level are experienced enough for 1/6 quads. I recommend just using a 1/6 with reverse. Hmm, I agree, a random 1/6 quad could be quite confusing. Fixed.
2. 00:32:555 (4) - Same as on Insane Fixed
3. 00:50:555 (7) - Same as on Insane Fixed as well.

Normal

1. 00:26:721 (1) - This slider shape may be a bit difficult for newer players to react to. I recommend changing this. Fixed to a curve.
2. 00:50:055 (4) - This falls under slider manipulation as the speed of the slider ball is significantly reduced by an artificial method. This is unrankable, be sure to fix it. Is this actually unrankable? Anyhow, changed to a 1/4 reverse slider + a circle.
3. 01:06:721 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is really bad. Having so many circles on a Normal in quick succession just makes it feel mashy. Add some sliders in here. Added a couple sliders, hopefully that makes it better.

Easy

1. Nothing.

Thanks for the mod, I'll go ahead and cast my vote on your poll

zorefire wrote:

How To Change Combo Colour

Step 1. Click Osu Edit

Step 2. Select Song

Step 3. Click The View Tab on the beatmap

Step 4. Go into Song Setup

Step 5. Click Colour Tab

http://postimg.org/image/cxj2q8475/

Hmm I realized I have to uncheck "ignore all beatmap skins" to see colours. I'll re try custom combo colours tomorrow.

zorefire wrote:

You didn't change them into silent.wav's

You have to find a silent wav file and implement

and that's what you call a custom hitsound

I believe I added them. I hadn't updated the beatmap when I finished your mod, so check now.

hi.

General:
• There's no need to use letterbox during the breaks. Disable it.

Easy:
• Check AIMod and fix issues with Distance Snap.
• 00:05:388 (1,2) - The design of these sliders looks weird. What about a design similar to this?
• 00:08:055 (3,1) - I see you wanted to make a blanket here, but it's slightly off. Redesign the (3) to make a perfect blanket.
• 00:42:055 (1) - Remove the new combo and add new at 00:42:721 (2) - .
• 01:12:055 (1,2,3) - The 01:13:055 (2) - kinda breaks the flow. My suggestion is to put the (2) little bit higher + do the same at 01:12:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .
• 01:43:388 (1) - Instead of this slider, use pattern likethis. It fits more into a song.
• 01:48:721 (1) - ^
• 01:54:055 (1,2) - I would use normal 1/2 slider instead of this, because rookie players may not handle it.
• 02:04:721 (3) - Try pattern like this.
• 02:06:721 (6) - End this slider at 02:07:388 - and put a note at the downbeat with a new combo.
• 02:10:721 (4,5) - Blanket is really off.
• 02:13:388 (6) - Make a new combo here and remove it at 02:14:055 (1) - .
• 02:15:388 (2) - Rotate it by -13* and try to redesign both of the sliders for perfect blanket.
• 02:20:055 (1) - Remove NC.

Normal:
• Again, Check AIMod and fix DS issues.
• 00:26:721 (1,2) - Blanket seems off.
• 01:22:721 (1,2,3) - ^
• 01:25:388 (5,6) - ^
• 02:06:721 (6) - Same case as in easy.
• 02:17:388 (6) - ^

Hard:
• 00:36:721 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is really hard to play. What about trying this one instead?
• 00:39:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
• 01:05:388 (5,6,7) - Make a slider with reverse arrow that would end at 01:05:888 (6) - because the player won't expect something like this and it's quite hard to catch the rhythm on a blue tick. (At least on this slow part)
• 01:10:721 (5,6,7) - ^
• 02:03:388 (1) - These kind of sliders are 1/8 sliders (not 1/16). Proof: Play at 25%.

Insane:
• Set AR to 8-8,5.
• Except some sliders (like design of these sliders) + sliders like these: 02:03:388 (1) - seems fine to me.

Imo, this mapset should need more mods and more checking.
Hope that helps.
Good Luck!

Hey, Finally got around to finishing off my queue.

EASY

00:02:721 - (3) This slider shape, while the curve is nice it's still anti-flow in a position that doesn't need it, I'd recommend standardizing it's shape to match sliders 1 and 2.

00:06:721 - (2) This sliders positioning forces a slight pull-back over the pattern, I'd suggest moving the slider Tail to curve into slider 3 a little bit.

00:12:721 - (3,4) These are a little bit off of where the movements of the map go, shift these a little bit down and to the left.

00:14:055 - (5) Pull the Slider head a bit right to shallow out the curvature here.

00:15:388 - (1) ^^^^^^

00:16:721 - (2) I'm not going to try to explain this

00:20:055 - (5) This slider could be curved, would be prettier visually and a little bit nicer flow wise.

00:22:721 - (2) This slider should be lowered a bit to improve map flow.

00:26:721 - (1) This slider is strange, shift it a little bit down and to the right and invert the direction of the tail.

00:35:388 - (4) This slider feels off-positioned, I'd suggest tilting it to be more steep vertically. (ofc, this means moving it slightly to adjust for DS)

00:38:721 - (4) Should be curved to form a circle centering the 5 circle.

00:42:055 - 00:47:388 - This entire segment is just weird and doesn't fit with the rest of the map, Consider revising.

01:04:055 - (5,6) Hmm, shift these slightly right, it'll probably fix the slight offset they have from the flow of the map.

01:12:055 - 01:16:721 - For this section you should make the circles bridging rather than sticking out, move the sliders so that they continue on the other side of the circle instead of next to it and this'll feel much better.

01:17:388 - 01:21:055 - Avoid stacking these.

01:28:055 - (1,2,3,4) I'd suggest making these pairs just a single slider, the middle tick in these sets are unnecessary.

01:43:388 - (1) This slider's head is angled down slightly. Avoid this for improved flow.

01:56:055 - (4) Awkward note here, Consider revising.

02:10:721 - (4) This directional transition is weird, Maybe make the slider go straight down instead of pulling back.

02:18:055 - (1) This is a little bit out of flow, maybe mirror it to make the slider head face upwards?



I'm going to leave it here as I can assume the problems in the other diffs are similar, they should be a bit better off than this diff is. Just give motion a thought when you're mapping as it's the biggest issue here. GL with the rest of the set.

Mortem wrote:

hi.

General:
• There's no need to use letterbox during the breaks. Disable it. Hmm not sure what this even does, unchecked them all.

Easy:
• Check AIMod and fix issues with Distance Snap. AIMod didn't say anything, and fixed one DS issue.
• 00:05:388 (1,2) - The design of these sliders looks weird. What about a design similar to this? I just changed these to regular curves. In fact I made all of these sliders here a 1/1 so they don't stack.
• 00:08:055 (3,1) - I see you wanted to make a blanket here, but it's slightly off. Redesign the (3) to make a perfect blanket. Re-designed this slider to make it a bit parallel to the (1).
• 00:42:055 (1) - Remove the new combo and add new at 00:42:721 (2) - . Fixed
• 01:12:055 (1,2,3) - The 01:13:055 (2) - kinda breaks the flow. My suggestion is to put the (2) little bit higher + do the same at 01:12:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . I think you're right, now the player can simply go in a smooth circular motion rather than arching(?) out.
• 01:43:388 (1) - Instead of this slider, use pattern likethis. It fits more into a song. Fixed, I guess this better follows the right hand?
• 01:48:721 (1) - ^ Fixed
• 01:54:055 (1,2) - I would use normal 1/2 slider instead of this, because rookie players may not handle it. Fixed
• 02:04:721 (3) - Try pattern like this. Fixed, goes better with the song now
• 02:06:721 (6) - End this slider at 02:07:388 - and put a note at the downbeat with a new combo. Fixed
• 02:10:721 (4,5) - Blanket is really off. I adjusted the slider here to be a little lengthier.
• 02:13:388 (6) - Make a new combo here and remove it at 02:14:055 (1) - . Fixed
• 02:15:388 (2) - Rotate it by -13* and try to redesign both of the sliders for perfect blanket. Yup, fixed these sliders
• 02:20:055 (1) - Remove NC. Fixed

Normal:
• Again, Check AIMod and fix DS issues. AIMod is really weird here, points to an unsnapped time. The only parts in the song with DS changes are Kiai, shortly after the break, and when I do the blanket patterns. I believe this is fine, isn't it not?
• 00:26:721 (1,2) - Blanket seems off. Fixed
• 01:22:721 (1,2,3) - ^ This is a real tricky one... Not sure if this fixed it :/
• 01:25:388 (5,6) - ^ Fixed the slider itself for better blanket.
• 02:06:721 (6) - Same case as in easy. Fixed
• 02:17:388 (6) - ^ Fixed

Hard:
• 00:36:721 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is really hard to play. What about trying this one instead? Fixed to something similar.
• 00:39:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
• 01:05:388 (5,6,7) - Make a slider with reverse arrow that would end at 01:05:888 (6) - because the player won't expect something like this and it's quite hard to catch the rhythm on a blue tick. (At least on this slow part) That's a good point, I fixed this part.
• 01:10:721 (5,6,7) - ^ I think I'll keep it like this, so that there is momentum being built before the kiai.
• 02:03:388 (1) - These kind of sliders are 1/8 sliders (not 1/16). Proof: Play at 25%. Hmm, true. Not sure why I couldn't notice these before.

Insane:
• Set AR to 8-8,5. I figured someone would suggest this at some point, since this song is more of a calm song. Changed to AR8.5.
• Except some sliders (like design of these sliders) + sliders like these: 02:03:388 (1) - seems fine to me.

Imo, this mapset should need more mods and more checking.
Hope that helps.
Good Luck!

Thanks for the mod, hopefully I'll be able to get more quality mods to improve my mapset

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Hey, Finally got around to finishing off my queue.

EASY

00:02:721 - (3) This slider shape, while the curve is nice it's still anti-flow in a position that doesn't need it, I'd recommend standardizing it's shape to match sliders 1 and 2. Fixed while I was addressing the above mod. These are all 1/1 sliders now.

00:06:721 - (2) This sliders positioning forces a slight pull-back over the pattern, I'd suggest moving the slider Tail to curve into slider 3 a little bit. Fixed while addressing mod above

00:12:721 - (3,4) These are a little bit off of where the movements of the map go, shift these a little bit down and to the left. To be honest, I don't quite understand what you mean here but fixed anyway.

00:14:055 - (5) Pull the Slider head a bit right to shallow out the curvature here. Fixed

00:15:388 - (1) ^^^^^^ Fixed

00:16:721 - (2) I'm not going to try to explain this Huh?

00:20:055 - (5) This slider could be curved, would be prettier visually and a little bit nicer flow wise. Fixed

00:22:721 - (2) This slider should be lowered a bit to improve map flow. Fixed this part.

00:26:721 - (1) This slider is strange, shift it a little bit down and to the right and invert the direction of the tail. This IS strange, fixed to a curve.

00:35:388 - (4) This slider feels off-positioned, I'd suggest tilting it to be more steep vertically. (ofc, this means moving it slightly to adjust for DS) Not sure what you're feeling, but I fixed this part so that I can adjust for DS since I changed the previous part.

00:38:721 - (4) Should be curved to form a circle centering the 5 circle. Fixed

00:42:055 - 00:47:388 - This entire segment is just weird and doesn't fit with the rest of the map, Consider revising. Remapped.

01:04:055 - (5,6) Hmm, shift these slightly right, it'll probably fix the slight offset they have from the flow of the map. I'm guessing you want a 'gradually-to-the-right' kind of thing here, fixed.

01:12:055 - 01:16:721 - For this section you should make the circles bridging rather than sticking out, move the sliders so that they continue on the other side of the circle instead of next to it and this'll feel much better.Fixed with above mod.

01:17:388 - 01:21:055 - Avoid stacking these. I can't really avoid stacking these with the 1/2 slider pattern... Instead I made the first four sliders into individual circles.

01:28:055 - (1,2,3,4) I'd suggest making these pairs just a single slider, the middle tick in these sets are unnecessary. Fixed

01:43:388 - (1) This slider's head is angled down slightly. Avoid this for improved flow. This part should be better now after addressing the above mod.

01:56:055 - (4) Awkward note here, Consider revising. Either there was an awkward note here that I fixed on my own, or I just don't see anything awkward about it.

02:10:721 - (4) This directional transition is weird, Maybe make the slider go straight down instead of pulling back. Made it more vertical, but not quite straight.

02:18:055 - (1) This is a little bit out of flow, maybe mirror it to make the slider head face upwards? Fixed



I'm going to leave it here as I can assume the problems in the other diffs are similar, they should be a bit better off than this diff is. Just give motion a thought when you're mapping as it's the biggest issue here. GL with the rest of the set.

Thanks for your mod, I'll try to keep flow and motion in mind next time I map/when I fix this mapset

Maybe Gladius wrote:

Thanks for your mod, I'll try to keep flow and motion in mind next time I map/when I fix this mapset

NO DO NOT LISTEN YOUR FLOW IS JUST FINE

Osuology wrote:

Maybe Gladius wrote:

Thanks for your mod, I'll try to keep flow and motion in mind next time I map/when I fix this mapset

NO DO NOT LISTEN YOUR FLOW IS JUST FINE

uhhm I 'll probably change things if I see them as a change for the better... keeping my ears open to all suggestions since I'm still fairly new at this.

[Insane]
I find a lot of the jumps in this map highly overmapped, excess spacing, hard to read, doesn't suit the music etc. (Which is evident in the starcount) I'll point out some examples.

1. 00:10:388 (3,4) - This jumps is way too large, and nothing happens in the music to show that.
2. 00:15:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:50:277 (9,10) - Combine these two into a slider for more playability imo
4. 01:15:221 (3,4) - Another jump that is too large
5. 01:15:888 (6,7) - This section in the music does call for a jump, but this one is still too big I think.
6. 01:22:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, jumps too large, and sudden massive increase in spacing compared to previous part which doesn't suit music.
7. 01:25:388 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
8. 01:30:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:38:388 (1,2) - ^
10. 01:48:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
11. 01:51:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
12. 02:02:277 (9,10) - Slider (Explained above)
13. 02:07:721 (3,4,5) - Jumps unsuitable, spacing increase etc.
14. 02:12:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
15. 02:18:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

And I think that about covers it. I get that you want to make cool patterns (and they do look cool) but the spacing between these jumps are just way too high for the slow, peaceful nature of the song, and really don't suit, this overmapping is highly excess imo. You could still make the same cool patterns (mainly the stars) with lower spacing, and at the same time have it suit the pace and sound of the song.

That's it for me, GL with map!

Hi! Sorry for the late response, was away for about a week out of town.

cheezstik wrote:

[Insane]
I find a lot of the jumps in this map highly overmapped, excess spacing, hard to read, doesn't suit the music etc. (Which is evident in the starcount) I'll point out some examples.

1. 00:10:388 (3,4) - This jumps is way too large, and nothing happens in the music to show that.
2. 00:15:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:50:277 (9,10) - Combine these two into a slider for more playability imo I'm not really sure if this is more playable, will keep this in mind though.
4. 01:15:221 (3,4) - Another jump that is too large
5. 01:15:888 (6,7) - This section in the music does call for a jump, but this one is still too big I think.
6. 01:22:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, jumps too large, and sudden massive increase in spacing compared to previous part which doesn't suit music.
7. 01:25:388 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
8. 01:30:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:38:388 (1,2) - ^
10. 01:48:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
11. 01:51:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
12. 02:02:277 (9,10) - Slider (Explained above)
13. 02:07:721 (3,4,5) - Jumps unsuitable, spacing increase etc.
14. 02:12:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
15. 02:18:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

And I think that about covers it. I get that you want to make cool patterns (and they do look cool) but the spacing between these jumps are just way too high for the slow, peaceful nature of the song, and really don't suit, this overmapping is highly excess imo. You could still make the same cool patterns (mainly the stars) with lower spacing, and at the same time have it suit the pace and sound of the song.

I fixed most of the jumps you mentioned + some more. Didn't bother commenting on each section since they were mostly about the issues with jumps.

That's it for me, GL with map!

Thanks for your mod!

Hi there. You asked for a nm request from my queue 6 months ago t/336458/start=45. Here I am with a very late mod.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

Insane
1) 00:09:721 I am curious as to why you left this space empty? This is because there is a strong note here so I would place a note here.

2) 00:15:388 (1,2,3,4) - The jumps are spaced differently. I would use distance snap just to make the jumps more refined. When playing though I had no problem with the jumps. What I have suggested is purely cosmetic.

3) 00:43:221 Blanket looks imperfect to me. Please fix it.

4) 00:50:388 (10,11,12) - I would refine it and make it a proper triangle pattern. Use distance snap for these notes.

5) 01:36:055 (3,5) - Not aligned properly imo. For symmetry move slider 2 up to (127,184).

6) 01:39:721 (6,7,8,9) - The pattern does not look perfect to me. Use ctrl+shift+d as a guide for creating these shapes.

Other than that, rhythm is solid so I cannot fault that, albeit at times you have very different rhythm patterns.

Hard
1) 00:24:055 Considering the previous slider, this note is not straight compared to the previous slider. I would shift this to (119,155) to make it straight.

2) 00:37:388 (5) I was thinking of shortening the slider to 00:37:721and then add a note at 00:37:888. When I first played this difficulty I released it early, but I am sure that when I play it again I will not make that mistake. The current one is fine so if you do not want to change it that is fine.

3) 01:06:721 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket. Applies to 01:08:055 (3,4) - as well. You can fix one set and then reflect it to the other side.

4) 01:28:055 (1,2) - These sliders are not parallel by 1 px imo. This is really small so you do not have to consider it.

Everything else is fine, but some of the above points may apply to other parts if you do want to refine your map.

Normal
1) In terms of distance snap AI mod points out that:
- 01:55:055 (4,5) - 5 is further apart than 4. I assume if you distance snap it though you lose the blanket.
- Applies to 01:56:222 but again you will lose the blanket.

I recommend not applying the above change though. I just wanted to point it out to you.

Easy
1) 01:06:721 (1,2,3) - Imperfect blankets.

2) 01:34:055 (1,2,3,4) - It looks a bit weird to me but I assume the note placement was intentional (you wanted an irregular zig zag pattern)

Overall. This was an interesting map and a very relaxing one as well. There are some refinements to be made. If you decide to revive this map, I would say go for it.

Good luck and sorry for replying 6 months later.

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