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termerys
Rox's Super Cute Bunny Girl Moe Moe Kyun Nyan Cute >3<
=O=!!
GabrielRKF
Topic Starter
termerys
Last Spell!!?? =O= (what about those "bunny girl stuff"? lol)
[DBF]
Star~
Topic Starter
termerys
Finally!!, release for pending! Ready for MOD!!
NaomiMinette
Heya :) I know that in the mod queue you said that this map had 16 star priority, but it was recent (within 24 hours) so I'm modding this anyway. So... let's begin!

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix
Red = you MUST fix this

[General]
* You NEED a difficulty with 3 or less stars (unless you're only going for approved).
* Add custom colors?

[Eazy+]
What the... Why isn't this as long as the other two difficulties (play length of around 3:55)?

[Rox's Last Spell]
01:15:999 (4) - Isn't this a bit too high/close to the healthbar?
01:52:832 (1,1) - Get rid of these spinners and actually map here?

[Lunatic]
00:26:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Just get rid of these?
03:55:499 (1) - Split this spinner in two? (First one would start at 03:55:499 and end at 04:00:499 and second one would start at 04:00:832 and end at 04:06:166.)

I'll do a recheck later.
Topic Starter
termerys

Blazevoir wrote:

Heya :) I know that in the mod queue you said that this map had 16 star priority, but it was recent (within 24 hours) so I'm modding this anyway. So... let's begin!

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix
Red = you MUST fix this

[General]
* You NEED a difficulty with 3 or less stars (unless you're only going for approved). I'll re-map the Eazy then = =
* Add custom colors? Like what? (I have no idea what should i put in :3)

[Eazy+]
What the... Why isn't this as long as the other two difficulties (play length of around 3:55)? Remap!

[Rox's Last Spell] I'll let he fix by himself ><
01:15:999 (4) - Isn't this a bit too high/close to the healthbar?
01:52:832 (1,1) - Get rid of these spinners and actually map here?

[Lunatic]
00:26:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Just get rid of these? No thanks, I prefer more emotionally starting :3
03:55:499 (1) - Split this spinner in two? (First one would start at 03:55:499 and end at 04:00:499 and second one would start at 04:00:832 and end at 04:06:166.) Some say it is so tire to spin for a long time at the end and maybe it's too much score as the original one is 15M :3

I'll do a recheck later. Yes Sir!
aRiskOfRain
Eazy+;

Rename to Normal?
00:39:499 (4) - 1/2 later, 1/2 shorter?
00:49:166 (1) - Too soon after the spinner
01:31:832 (1) - ^

YOU NEED AN EASY KTHX
GabrielRKF

Blazevoir wrote:

[Rox's Last Spell]
01:15:999 (4) - Isn't this a bit too high/close to the healthbar? I don't really think that it's a problem :/
01:52:832 (1,1) - Get rid of these spinners and actually map here? Nah. I like long spinners.
ElecoR
gg!!
Topic Starter
termerys

DiamondCrash wrote:

Eazy+;

Rename to Normal? Ok, as I let my friend do a easy =w=
00:39:499 (4) - 1/2 later, 1/2 shorter? No thx ><
00:49:166 (1) - Too soon after the spinner roger
01:31:832 (1) - ^ ^

YOU NEED AN EASY KTHX
indyinyou
:lol: star !
NaomiMinette
Hmm... Send me a forum PM once you update Normal and post an Easy difficulty.
l3lueskyiiz
Download: Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [l3lueskyiiz's Easy].osu

โพสแบบนี้เหรอ (・ω・`)

SPOILER


แหกโค้งตอนสุดท้ายทุกที



ครั้งแรกก็ S เลย OwO

BG ไม่ตรงน่ะพี่เติม มันมีดำๆโปล่มาด้วย ลองเอานี่ไปใส่แทนดู

poypk
great map.
So fun to play it.
Fighto ne.
Backstep
แก้ตรงรายละเอียดเพลง นิดนึงเติม -.-

Rox's Last Spell ไม่ใช่ Rox's Last Speel ? =w=//
NaomiMinette
Okay, recheck time:

[General]
Okay... From 1.5 stars to 5 stars is just way too much of a difficulty jump... You should've kept your Normal (well... your Eazy+ that felt like a Normal).

[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]
00:14:166 (1) - I don't know... Wouldn't it sound better if the slider looked like this?

It ends at 00:15:499; you'll have to fix the spacing of the notes after this slider if you do decide to change it.

---
00:35:499 (3) - Move this one grid space; it's so that it spaces out the same as (1).
02:06:166 (1) - Make this symmetrical?

Err... Yeah... That's it for my recheck. I hope you still have that difficulty you removed. :?
l3lueskyiiz
Download: Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [l3lueskyiiz's Easy].osu

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Blazevoir wrote:

Okay, recheck time:

[General]
Okay... From 1.5 stars to 5 stars is just way too much of a difficulty jump... You should've kept your Normal (well... your Eazy+ that felt like a Normal).

[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]
00:14:166 (1) - I don't know... Wouldn't it sound better if the slider looked like this?

It ends at 00:15:499; you'll have to fix the spacing of the notes after this slider if you do decide to change it.
<< fix
---
00:35:499 (3) - Move this one grid space; it's so that it spaces out the same as (1). << fix
02:06:166 (1) - Make this symmetrical? << fix

Err... Yeah... That's it for my recheck. I hope you still have that difficulty you removed. :?
Backstep
Orange = my suggestion.
Purple = you should fixed it or addded.
[General]
• ควรเพิ่มเสียง slider tick เสียงเดียวกับ SC clap.

[Normal]
SPOILER
Suggestion.
00:15:499 (3) Back of slider add finish.
00:27:499 (1,2) back of slider SC clap.
00:29:499 (4) ^
00:31:832 (3,4,5) SC clap.
00:32:832 (6) Finish.
00:33:832 (3) SC clap.
00:34:166 (5) middle slider SC clap.
00:35:166 (6) SC clap. (ถ้าเป็นไปได้ทำเป็นรีเทิร์นสไลด์ถึง 00:35:499)
00:35:832 (1,2,3) start slider add SC clap.
00:37:832 (4) back of slider add SC clap.
00:45:999 (2) finish
00:46:499 (4,5) SC clap.
00:47:166 (7) ^
00:47:332 (8) finish
00:49:166 (1) start slider add clap.

ขี้เกียจ mod เต็มเพลงง่ะ :o
ปล. ถ้าเป็นไปได้ทุกดิฟตั้งแต่ 00:49:166 มันจะอยู่ตรงเส้นขาวพอดีใช่มะ ?
นับเส้นขาวไปข้างหน้า 2 เส้นจะอยู่ตรง 00:49:832 ให้ใส่ SC clap แล้วนับไป 2 เส้นเรื่อยๆแล้วใส่ SC clap.
aspara
epic!! :)
Lesjuh
Remove .osb from song folder and full submit!

[Lunatic]
03:27:499 (1,2,3) - Make some space between these sliders so you can clearly see when to hit them.

Easy
01:36:832 (1,2) - Spacing?

That's it!
Topic Starter
termerys

Lesjuh wrote:

Remove .osb from song folder and full submit! Rogerthat

[Lunatic]
03:27:499 (1,2,3) - Make some space between these sliders so you can clearly see when to hit them. Done

Easy
01:36:832 (1,2) - Spacing? fixed

That's it!
al2e10
AMSP

[Lunatic]____★★★★
It so Lunatic.

[Rox's Last Spell]
- Spacing
00:24:832 (1,2) - And 00:25:832 (3,4) - Was not the same spacing.
01:12:166 (1,2,3,4) - Not the same spacing
01:27:166 (1,2) - Too far.
01:32:498 (1,2) - ^
01:37:832 (1,2) - ^
- Other.
Too boring

[All]
Great map.
You got your name in the Al2e KD Star list

STAR!
GabrielRKF

al2e10 wrote:

[Rox's Last Spell]
- Spacing
00:24:832 (1,2) - And 00:25:832 (3,4) - Was not the same spacing.
01:12:166 (1,2,3,4) - Not the same spacing
01:27:166 (1,2) - Too far.
01:32:498 (1,2) - ^
01:37:832 (1,2) - ^
- Other.
Too boring
Changing nothing. The "Too far" is a jump and I've seen a lot of these "not the same spacing" on tieff and other people's map. >_>
GabrielRKF
JhnySmthApl
[General]

Keep your kiai times on the start of the combo's. And same with the ends but well.... at the end :P

Also I don't know why but I found your mapping a bit hard to follow. Ex: I couldn't tell what you were mapping like the beat or vocals or...what. That's just a personal thing so don't fret over it.

Your maps are good but all those straight lines kinda get dull after awhile. Maybe run through with your creative hand and change the shape of some sliders?

[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]

01:05:499 (1,2) - Shorten by 1/2 tick
02:10:166 (4) - Move back 1/2 tick
02:48:666 (3) - Move back 1/2 tick

[Normal]

00:56:999 (4,5) - Maybe make this into a repeater?
02:44:832 - End here OR continue onto next Kiai since its such a short pause.
03:43:832 - End Kiai time and keep combo or keep it going

[Rox's Last Spell]

Just fine!

[Lunatic]

Just fine!

Good song. Good map. Good job!
You get one of those five pointed thingies!
Topic Starter
termerys

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

[attachment=0:72ec8]Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [Rox's Last Idea].osu[/attachment:72ec8]

Please, go ;__________;
ok, now it's work
GabrielRKF

termerys wrote:

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

[attachment=0:9727f]Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [Rox's Last Idea].osu[/attachment:9727f]

Please, go ;__________;
ok, now it's work
Please, tell me that you didn't upload the new diff...
Topic Starter
termerys

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Please, tell me that you didn't upload the new diff...
I changed into the original name, because I think u won't be seriously use the "last idea" lol
Nakagawa-Kanon
remove .osb file


[Easy]
nothing to wrong ;;

[Normal]
nothing;;

[Hard]
01:01:166 (1) - remove newcombo
01:01:499 (3) - add newcombo
01:02:166 (1) - remove newcombo
01:03:332 (4) - add newcombo


[Lunctic]
02:36:666 (5) - add newcombo
03:30:166 (3) - add newcombo
03:30:499 (1) - remove newcombo
Jinxy
Song is kinda soft for its speed. Also, it seems to go softer at 1min 35sec, for some reason...

[Normal]
Is it just me or are all the beats starting on a white tick, even though there are parts that are sung on red ticks?

[Rox 666 bullshit crap]
This is a stupid name and you know it

[Lunatic]
00:26:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - What the hell? Make this playing time longer, or remove it entirely. Its unnecessary and makes the player feel bored, having to hit 7 beats then break more.


Starred, I guess
GabrielRKF

JInxyjem wrote:

[Rox 666 bullshit crap]
This is a stupid name and you know it
Haha, long story~
We tryied using "Last Spell", "Last Idea", ... But all the names failed the upload (we still don't know why) 'orz
THIS one worked (kinda scary).
Wasn't supose to keep it. xD
Topic Starter
termerys
Haha, long story~
We tryied using "Last Spell", "Last Idea", ... But all the names failed the upload (we still don't know why) 'orz
THIS one worked (kinda scary).
Wasn't supose to keep it. xD
I changed it already... bad luck!!!
Topic Starter
termerys

JInxyjem wrote:

Song is kinda soft for its speed. Also, it seems to go softer at 1min 35sec, for some reason...

[Normal]
Is it just me or are all the beats starting on a white tick, even though there are parts that are sung on red ticks? what do u mean?

[Rox 666 bullshit crap]
This is a stupid name and you know it lol

[Lunatic]
00:26:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - What the hell? Make this playing time longer, or remove it entirely. Its unnecessary and makes the player feel bored, having to hit 7 beats then break more. deleted


Starred, I guess
kd, i think
Topic Starter
termerys

dksslqj wrote:

remove .osb file What?, OMG, not again

[Lunctic]
02:36:666 (5) - add newcombo
03:30:166 (3) - add newcombo
03:30:499 (1) - remove newcombo
all fixed, thanks and kd
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]
- You've mapped a fair portion of the beginning to the vocals. In an easy difficulty this isn't really recommended. I suggest going back through your map and mapping more to the beat.

00:15:832 (2,3,1,2) - new combo at 2 and Remove new combo at 1
01:21:166 (2) - New combo here, possibly.
02:09:499 (3) - New combo here.

easy mods are fun. No massive problems, really.

[Normal]
00:15:499 (3) - Your current slider is, well. Messy. Maybe this will help. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25124
01:00:166 (2) - I suggest setting slider style to Linear here. (select the slider and press A)
03:52:666 (2) - You've really used linear sliders for most of the beatmap; this curvy one is a little messy too. Why not change it to linear? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25127

It's pretty good, really.

[Rox's Hard]
- Love most of the sliders in this difficulty, good job Roxkyuubi~

00:15:499 (1) - You have red slider points but it still looks better if you set the slider style to linear as well. (select the slider and press A)
00:47:499 (1) - You should totally move this forward to the white tick and shorten accordingly. Otherwise it fades in during the notes and- YAY DISTRACTION
01:18:249 (1) - Same here, only with the red tick.
01:32:166 (2,3) - Two notes at the exact same time. Definitely Fix This

Apart from these few things, lovely.

[Lunatic]
02:33:832 (4,5,6) - Massive distance snap change in this part here. Maybe ease up on that a bit?
02:35:499 (1) - Hiding a note here is rather mean. 1/2 after the spinner the 300 or whatever the player got would cover the note. Also, not enough reaction time. Remove, please.
03:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Last time I tried this I was told it was unrankable. Make these jumps way smaller, please.

Other than that, all good.


A decent mapset, For me Rox's hard stood out to me the most though. Have a star.
Topic Starter
termerys

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
00:15:499 (3) - Your current slider is, well. Messy. Maybe this will help. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25124
01:00:166 (2) - I suggest setting slider style to Linear here. (select the slider and press A)
03:52:666 (2) - You've really used linear sliders for most of the beatmap; this curvy one is a little messy too. Why not change it to linear? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25127

It's pretty good, really.

[Lunatic]
02:33:832 (4,5,6) - Massive distance snap change in this part here. Maybe ease up on that a bit?
02:35:499 (1) - Hiding a note here is rather mean. 1/2 after the spinner the 300 or whatever the player got would cover the note. Also, not enough reaction time. Remove, please.
03:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Last time I tried this I was told it was unrankable. Make these jumps way smaller, please.

Other than that, all good.


A decent mapset, For me Rox's hard stood out to me the most though. Have a star.
all fixed, thanks
GabrielRKF

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Rox's Hard]
- Love most of the sliders in this difficulty, good job Roxkyuubi~

00:15:499 (1) - You have red slider points but it still looks better if you set the slider style to linear as well. (select the slider and press A) You'r right. Really looks better. Changed~
00:47:499 (1) - You should totally move this forward to the white tick and shorten accordingly. Otherwise it fades in during the notes and- YAY DISTRACTION Ok, done~
01:18:249 (1) - Same here, only with the red tick. Done~~~
01:32:166 (2,3) - Two notes at the exact same time. Definitely Fix ThisOps. Did it when I used the script. Fixed anyway~

There was a similar spinner at 02:32:916, so I decided to change it too~

Apart from these few things, lovely.

A decent mapset, For me Rox's hard stood out to me the most though. Have a star.
Go up, ego! Go up! >w<

Thanks a lot. Pretty useful mod~

Download: Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [Rox's Diff].osu
Larto
Add "l3lueskyiiz" to the tags

Rox's Diff:
Maybe call it "Fox's Lunatic" instead of just "Fox's Diff"?
Also, some notes are unsnapped. Detect them with AIMod.

l3lueskyiiz's Easy:
01:30:832 (1,2) - What's that spacing...? Move them farther apart
GabrielRKF

Larto wrote:

Maybe call it "Fox's Lunatic" instead of just "Fox's Diff"?
Hm, I don't know... Having 2 Lunatics looks weird.
Larto
Äölkijuhzgtfrde
Andrea
[Overall]

Remove the file .osb and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]

Remove the unused Audio Lead-In.


[Normal]

Remove the unused Audio Lead-In.


[Rox's Diff]

Remove the unused Audio Lead-In.


[Lunatic]

Remove the unused Audio Lead-In.


Fix and I'll rank.
Topic Starter
termerys

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Remove the file .osb and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]

Remove the unused Audio Lead-In.


[Normal]

Remove the unused Audio Lead-In.


[Rox's Diff]

Remove the unused Audio Lead-In.


[Lunatic]

Remove the unused Audio Lead-In.


Fix and I'll rank.
all fixed
><
Andrea
Something isn't right. When I re-downloaded this all the difficulties asked me to upload to latest version. Do again a full submission.

EDIT: Ranked~
Topic Starter
termerys
thanks andrea ><
Faust
Enjoy the taste of Lunatic from our super cute moe bunny girl featuring Roxkyuubiforever and l3lueskyiiz! *

l3lueskyiiz's Easy: 100%
Normal : 100%
Roxk's Diff : 100%
Lunatic: 100% Lunatic is ready to be tasted...
Just sayin'
Andrea
Heart fixed.
GabrielRKF
yay o/
Topic Starter
termerys
3rd of User rating, WOO!
YGOkid8
...oh crap, I'm too late >.<
Dypo_old
Wow. This Beatmap (yes, it deserves an uppercase letter) is awesome! =D

Although I kept losing in the beginning because of the distracting background- *SHOT*
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