P*Light feat. yukacco - Stargazer (DJ Shimamura Remix) · forum

Liiraye

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Liiraye 2015-05-21T16:32:50+00:00

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VINXIS 2015-05-21T16:35:03+00:00

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diraimur

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diraimur 2015-05-21T16:52:10+00:00

How can you say it plays bad?
Sorry dude, with all the respect, can you even pass this map?

1n54n3:
I'd increase AR to 9.2, but then again, thats me. I think it plays better with high ar.

00:00:124 (1,2,3) - this is kinda stressing considering the song just starts, and first beat's volume isn't high enough to be worthy of a click, perhaps remove these three and make a spinner.

00:16:581 (1,2) - increase those sv for maximum mlg mapping xddddddddd

00:20:009 (3) - change dis into one hit circle and 00:20:352 - add 2/1 slider here xdxdxdxd

01:59:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is there any particular reason why sv increases? I don't have anything against it, but music doesn't really seem to be fitting for a sv increase.

nice map 1337/420 xd

Mokori's Hard
soon xd

Normal
3normal5me

pkk

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pkk 2015-05-21T18:11:54+00:00

FIRE

Just going to mod insane for now, although the hitsounding suggestions apply to all diffs.

Hitsounding

I strongly recommend you use a custom soft-hitnormal since the default soft-hitnormal is really quiet compared to your other hitsounds. Use this one, it sounds quite nice
I recommend you use this hitsound file for a default soft-whistle hitsound. I'll explain the hitsounding below
~~00:33:038 - I suggest you raise the volume here to at least 60% since the soft-hitnormal is barely audible~~
nvm this, I gave you a new soft-hitnormal
From 00:33:038 - to 00:36:809 - :
00:35:095 - 00:35:438 - 00:35:781 - 00:36:295 - 00:36:809 - etc, all the strong piano sounds can be mapped with the default soft-whistle. Since you used a kick sound for soft-hitwhistle, this is why I asked you to download the above hitsound file which I have named drum-hitclap. Slap on additions drum then a clap and it will give you the default soft-hitwhistle sound hooray

00:34:752 - 00:35:438 - 00:36:124 - etc, for the hihat/snare/whatever sound it is that occurs on every other tick, you can use additions drum whistle
01:04:581 - Adding a 65% volume point here and then adding drum sampleset on the objects from 01:04:581 - 01:05:009 - sounds pretty nice

Insane

One thing I would watch out for is spacing. Sometimes you have really low spacing and at other parts where the music is equally intense, you have higher spacing. Like this 02:03:552 (1,2) -

00:10:752 (4) - try ctrl+g here to create a jump to emphasize the downbeat + strong vocal at the start of the next slider.
00:12:295 (3,3) - these can go on for 1/2 longer but then they'd be super long ugly sliders idK
00:20:009 (3) - consider removing the repeat to place a slider at 00:20:352 - to map the vocal, or at least use a circle instead of a repeat end since there is some emphasis at 00:20:352 -
00:22:752 (3,4,6,7,8) - pls blanket properly wtf
SPOILER
Also 02:03:552 (1,2) - and other places
00:23:095 (4,5) - I suggest reducing the spacing a little here (try around x 240 y 237) to make this more comfortable to play. Right now it feels a bit awkward because the jump causes the player to move fast, then immediately slow down at the slider which has a fairly low SV. It could also be because of the angle of the jump (it goes down tot he left while the next slider is going left, this + the jump and low SV might make it feel weird). Don't forget to adjust spacing for objects after the slider if you move it
00:26:181 (1) - removing repeat and adding a 1/1 slider at 00:26:524 - sounds nice to match the vocal
00:32:352 (1) - you can have the downbeat clickable by shortening this slider by 1/4 and adding a circle at 00:33:038 -
00:34:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - this feels kind of forced, mostly this part 00:34:752 (2,3,4) - (also the same at 01:01:666 (6,1) - I guess). I recommend either remapping this pattern or change the position of the circles/sliders. Here is something feels better to play imo:
example of what you can do
00:39:552 (3) - maybe move this to the left a bit (x 87 y 233) so the spacing at 00:39:038 (2,3) - looks nicer
00:43:495 (6,7) - imo this jump is too big when you consider the music at this point. Ideally, you want the jump at 00:43:838 (8,1) - to emphasize the strong beat at 00:44:009 - . I recommend you move 00:43:666 (7) - somewhere closer, maybe around x 177 y 308 so you can form part of a hexagon:
6*6 sides = 666
If you want a cooler star shape, you can do this: 00:50:524 (7,1) - x 381 y 340, 00:49:838 (2,3) - x 418 y 247, 00:50:352 (6) - x 347 y 182.
00:51:038 (2,3) -feels a bit out of place, I suggest you use even spacing since I don't think the jump is necessary. You can stack the circles, one way to do this is stacking 00:50:866 (1,3) - and 00:50:181 (5,2) -.
01:04:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a bit challenging and is also uncomfortable to play. Having circles 1/2 after a stream is always tricky. There are ways to emphasize it without doing a stream + circle like that. One way to do it is to have two 1/4 sliders after 4 circles:
SPOILER
It would look something like this (but not as shitty):
subpar example
01:11:438 (1) - I forgot if it was unrankable to have objects touch the HP bar, so I'd check on that
01:19:495 (6,1) - stacking them causes the emphasis to be lost imo, see if you can rearrange 01:18:981 (3,4,5,6) - . One way would be to stack 01:18:981 (3,5) - then moving 01:19:495 (6) - to x 324 y 241.
01:21:038 (1,2) - this might look nicer if you space them out more, perhaps you can stack 01:20:695 (6,2) -
01:26:695 - I suggest you add a note here because of that sound in the music. If the sound wasn't there then it would've been completely fine to leave it empty. Anyways you can do something cool like this:
SPOILER
01:26:181 (3) - x 289 y 265, 01:26:695 (4) - x 294 y 285. I also recommend you move 01:27:381 (2,3,4,5,6) - down to the right a little (~x 391 y 240) so the flow at 01:27:209 (1,2) - is smoother when it goes into the curve.
01:37:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sick. Only thing I would suggest here is moving 01:38:352 (6) - to x 254 y 361 so you get more variety of jumps (01:37:838 (3,4,6) - will also form a triangle ΔΔΔ)
01:45:209 (5,6) - jump is a bit big imo, plus the angle makes it awkward to play. I suggest you angle it in a way that 01:45:381 (6) - is above 01:45:209 (5) - :
SPOILER
01:52:066 (7,8) - tone this jump down a little, preferably with around the same spacing as 01:51:895 (6,7) -
01:53:438 (4,5) - godlike stacking 10/10
01:57:209 (3,4) - I recommend you lower the spacing a bit, maybe stack 01:57:381 (4) - with the tail of 01:58:066 (1) - . Also feels more comfortable to play imo
01:59:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - idk how I feel about this
02:05:609 (3,4) - this is pretty hard to read. At other places you mapped this with circles (02:00:124 (5,6) - ), and this is the first part where you have 1/4 slider jumps. Not to mention that's an insane jump. The spacing at 02:05:266 (2,3) - is a bit low so I suggest you increase it. One way would be to bring it to the left side and stack 02:05:952 (5,6) - with the head of 02:05:266 (2) - :
ugly example but you get the idea
02:11:095 (1) - like near the beginning, you can shorten this by 1/4 then add a circle on the downbeat before the slider. This makes the downbeat clickable and creates more emphasis. I also recommend you end the last spinner at 02:15:724 - like in the hard GD.

Insane is nice, but it still needs work. I didn't look over normal or hard that much yet and I probably won't until before this gets bubbled, so you can message me before then if you want me to check. If you have any questions about anything, feel free to message me in-game $$$

Have fun mapping xd

edit: added in download for custom soft-hitnormal at the top

VINXIS

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VINXIS 2015-05-21T20:02:02+00:00

not even full mods fukuguys jkily

byfar

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byfar 2015-05-21T20:30:02+00:00

yellow

[Normal]
good1

[Mokori's Hard]
good2

[Insane]
wow dude nice

sorry im a newbie modder, i cant mod good maps

sry altho i have to say 69:00:420 (6,9) has some flow issues.

VINXIS

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VINXIS 2015-05-21T20:32:02+00:00

quality mod

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VINXIS 2015-05-21T22:56:07+00:00

diraimur

1n54n3:
I'd increase AR to 9.2, but then again, thats me. I think it plays better with high ar. op 4 4.5 star ez insane imo

00:00:124 (1,2,3) - this is kinda stressing considering the song just starts, and first beat's volume isn't high enough to be worthy of a click, perhaps remove these three and make a spinner. slider and circle isntead n changed partterns after 2

00:16:581 (1,2) - increase those sv for maximum mlg mapping xddddddddd meeeehh will think about it

00:20:009 (3) - change dis into one hit circle and 00:20:352 - add 2/1 slider here xdxdxdxd ~~but the pattern th o~~ k only cuz u both said so

01:59:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is there any particular reason why sv increases? I don't have anything against it, but music doesn't really seem to be fitting for a sv increase. imo it's just as justified as 01:48:981 (6,7,8,9,10) - so yea idklol

nice map 1337/420 xd

Mokori's Hard
soon xd

Normal
3normal5me

finish the rest of ur mods soontm ples luv u

pkk

FIRE dam dis longass mod

Just going to mod insane for now, although the hitsounding suggestions apply to all diffs.

Hitsounding

I strongly recommend you use a custom soft-hitnormal since the default soft-hitnormal is really quiet compared to your other hitsounds. Use this one, it sounds quite nice
I recommend you use this hitsound file for a default soft-whistle hitsound. I'll explain the hitsounding below
~~00:33:038 - I suggest you raise the volume here to at least 60% since the soft-hitnormal is barely audible~~
nvm this, I gave you a new soft-hitnormal
From 00:33:038 - to 00:36:809 - :
00:35:095 - 00:35:438 - 00:35:781 - 00:36:295 - 00:36:809 - etc, all the strong piano sounds can be mapped with the default soft-whistle. Since you used a kick sound for soft-hitwhistle, this is why I asked you to download the above hitsound file which I have named drum-hitclap. Slap on additions drum then a clap and it will give you the default soft-hitwhistle sound hooray

00:34:752 - 00:35:438 - 00:36:124 - etc, for the hihat/snare/whatever sound it is that occurs on every other tick, you can use additions drum whistle
01:04:581 - Adding a 65% volume point here and then adding drum sampleset on the objects from 01:04:581 - 01:05:009 - sounds pretty nice

zzz i realy wanan keep the hitsounds simple for this mapset tbh. I added the soft-hitnormal tho

Insane

One thing I would watch out for is spacing. Sometimes you have really low spacing and at other parts where the music is equally intense, you have higher spacing. Like this 02:03:552 (1,2) - dam spaced that 1

00:10:752 (4) - try ctrl+g here to create a jump to emphasize the downbeat + strong vocal at the start of the next slider. dam
00:12:295 (3,3) - these can go on for 1/2 longer but then they'd be super long ugly sliders idK yaaaa no thxxxxx
00:20:009 (3) - consider removing the repeat to place a slider at 00:20:352 - to map the vocal, or at least use a circle instead of a repeat end since there is some emphasis at 00:20:352 - dam rip pattern :C
00:22:752 (3,4,6,7,8) - pls blanket properly wtf
SPOILER

Also 02:03:552 (1,2) - and other places end urself
00:23:095 (4,5) - I suggest reducing the spacing a little here (try around x 240 y 237) to make this more comfortable to play. Right now it feels a bit awkward because the jump causes the player to move fast, then immediately slow down at the slider which has a fairly low SV. It could also be because of the angle of the jump (it goes down tot he left while the next slider is going left, this + the jump and low SV might make it feel weird). Don't forget to adjust spacing for objects after the slider if you move it dam changed the part
00:26:181 (1) - removing repeat and adding a 1/1 slider at 00:26:524 - sounds nice to match the vocal ~~nah i think the repeat works better with the vocals imo idk~~ jk changed
00:32:352 (1) - you can have the downbeat clickable by shortening this slider by 1/4 and adding a circle at 00:33:038 - imo too op for a 4.5star insane idk
00:34:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - this feels kind of forced, mostly this part 00:34:752 (2,3,4) - (also the same at 01:01:666 (6,1) - I guess). I recommend either remapping this pattern or change the position of the circles/sliders. Here is something feels better to play imo:
dam changed stuff for both
00:39:552 (3) - maybe move this to the left a bit (x 87 y 233) so the spacing at 00:39:038 (2,3) - looks nicer dam yea
00:43:495 (6,7) - imo this jump is too big when you consider the music at this point. Ideally, you want the jump at 00:43:838 (8,1) - to emphasize the strong beat at 00:44:009 - . I recommend you move 00:43:666 (7) - somewhere closer, maybe around x 177 y 308 so you can form part of a hexagon:
o i changed this before but it didnt update so rip
If you want a cooler star shape, you can do this: 00:50:524 (7,1) - x 381 y 340, 00:49:838 (2,3) - x 418 y 247, 00:50:352 (6) - x 347 y 182. nah i think it plays perfectly like this so d
00:51:038 (2,3) -feels a bit out of place, I suggest you use even spacing since I don't think the jump is necessary. You can stack the circles, one way to do this is stacking 00:50:866 (1,3) - and 00:50:181 (5,2) -. dam i did a thing
01:04:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a bit challenging and is also uncomfortable to play. Having circles 1/2 after a stream is always tricky. There are ways to emphasize it without doing a stream + circle like that. One way to do it is to have two 1/4 sliders after 4 circles:

It would look something like this (but not as shitty):
wh i really thought it was good as it was asdfjkfgsdkgjksdsdjklgsl;vv meh maybe if i have to change it i will i g u e s s
01:11:438 (1) - I forgot if it was unrankable to have objects touch the HP bar, so I'd check on that it should be fine zzz, it barely touches for me in low res so
01:19:495 (6,1) - stacking them causes the emphasis to be lost imo, see if you can rearrange 01:18:981 (3,4,5,6) - . One way would be to stack 01:18:981 (3,5) - then moving 01:19:495 (6) - to x 324 y 241. dam i did a thing
01:21:038 (1,2) - this might look nicer if you space them out more, perhaps you can stack 01:20:695 (6,2) - dam moved the second slider a lil
01:26:695 - I suggest you add a note here because of that sound in the music. If the sound wasn't there then it would've been completely fine to leave it empty.
01:26:181 (3) - x 289 y 265, 01:26:695 (4) - x 294 y 285. I also recommend you move 01:27:381 (2,3,4,5,6) - down to the right a little (~x 391 y 240) so the flow at 01:27:209 (1,2) - is smoother when it goes into the curve. dam added a note but i left them stacked cuz imo that's better tbh
01:37:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sick. Only thing I would suggest here is moving 01:38:352 (6) - to x 254 y 361 so you get more variety of jumps (01:37:838 (3,4,6) - will also form a triangle ΔΔΔ) fukc asgsdfgfdhdfsg i cbb to fix the structure so rip
01:45:209 (5,6) - jump is a bit big imo, plus the angle makes it awkward to play. I suggest you angle it in a way that 01:45:381 (6) - is above 01:45:209 (5) - :
dam
01:52:066 (7,8) - tone this jump down a little, preferably with around the same spacing as 01:51:895 (6,7) - dam
01:53:438 (4,5) - godlike stacking 10/10 dam
01:57:209 (3,4) - I recommend you lower the spacing a bit, maybe stack 01:57:381 (4) - with the tail of 01:58:066 (1) - . Also feels more comfortable to play imo dam changed the positioning slightly
01:59:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - idk how I feel about this LOL
02:05:609 (3,4) - this is pretty hard to read. At other places you mapped this with circles (02:00:124 (5,6) - ), and this is the first part where you have 1/4 slider jumps. Not to mention that's an insane jump. The spacing at 02:05:266 (2,3) - is a bit low so I suggest you increase it. One way would be to bring it to the left side and stack 02:05:952 (5,6) - with the head of 02:05:266 (2) - :
nurfed the sliders lol
02:11:095 (1) - like near the beginning, you can shorten this by 1/4 then add a circle on the downbeat before the slider. This makes the downbeat clickable and creates more emphasis. I also recommend you end the last spinner at 02:15:724 - like in the hard GD . nah to slider thing, ye to spinner

Insane is nice, but it still needs work. I didn't look over normal or hard that much yet and I probably won't until before this gets bubbled, so you can message me before then if you want me to check. If you have any questions about anything, feel free to message me in-game $$$ dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd pls do other diffs 4 me to bb

Have fun mapping xd

edit: added in download for custom soft-hitnormal at the top

Nathan

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Nathan 2015-05-22T04:21:15+00:00

kamal u post the log cuz im too lazy xdddddddddd

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VINXIS 2015-05-22T04:24:29+00:00

sukiNathan wrote:
kamal u post the log cuz im too lazy xdddddddddd

l o l only if i have to because half of it was a skype call and sukinathan just sending me shit on osu irc. Then we both used osu irc after the cal ripd in piec, and then we modded on skype cuz nathan's bancho died lol

Gaia

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Ciyus Miapah

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Ciyus Miapah 2015-05-22T06:49:08+00:00

Insane:
Basically your patterning based on vocal, i prefer made Vocal combo patterning instead following downbeat as new combo
looks you need blanket lessons
i hope you map dubstep
i like you.
and stop memeing okay ^_^

00:20:352 - why you didnt made sliderart here \:D/
00:21:552 (4) - nc this? (im looking at 00:30:124 (1) - combo)
00:25:666 (4,5) - swap this pattern (slider first then add circle). Probably this is quite weird transition
00:31:495 (6,1) - im better made a spinner then this sliders... (so you can put a circle on 00:33:038 - )
01:03:209 (1,2,3,4) - clean this symetrical spacing between slider body, it just little thing
01:05:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this transition quite confusing me between dnb pattern and melody (maybe this just me), but i prefer to make 01:06:809 (5) - didnt stacked but its up to you since you make same pattern at next part
01:11:438 (1) - probably this sliderends is unrankable because its almost offscreen and probably hit HP bar,i suggesting move all your slider pattern atleast move this slider end
to y10 or made this part placement like this 01:14:181 (1,2,3) -
01:48:981 (6) - new combo this
01:52:409 (9) - would be interenting if you delete this notes and move 01:52:238 (8) - to x121y88 or anything else
01:58:924 (4) - probably you need to put your slider in 01:59:095 -
02:01:152 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - a bit confused, just a thing xD
02:08:695 (6,7,1,2) - change circle to slider, change slider to circles, looks this part 02:09:038 - needs final attack
02:11:866 (1) - spinner end has quite loud hitsound, i prefer reduce volume or made it silence

just it i didnt mod normal and hard

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VINXIS 2015-05-22T07:21:15+00:00

omg Gaia LOL

Fort

Insane:
Basically your patterning based on vocal, i prefer made Vocal combo patterning instead following downbeat as new combo no u
looks you need blanket lessons no u
i hope you map dubstep no u
i like you. no u
and stop memeing okay ^_^ dam

00:20:352 - why you didnt made sliderart here \:D/ dam
00:21:552 (4) - nc this? (im looking at 00:30:124 (1) - combo) imo they're 2 entirely difference circumstances so no
00:25:666 (4,5) - swap this pattern (slider first then add circle). Probably this is quite weird transition slider on white tick is ebtter to play
00:31:495 (6,1) - im better made a spinner then this sliders... (so you can put a circle on 00:33:038 - ) nooooooooooooooo imo slider is bettr
01:03:209 (1,2,3,4) - clean this symetrical spacing between slider body, it just little thing wh they're perfect mang
01:05:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this transition quite confusing me between dnb pattern and melody (maybe this just me), but i prefer to make 01:06:809 (5) - didnt stacked but its up to you since you make same pattern at next part
01:11:438 (1) - probably this sliderends is unrankable because its almost offscreen and probably hit HP bar,i suggesting move all your slider pattern atleast move this slider end
to y10 or made this part placement like this 01:14:181 (1,2,3) - dam but idk how to fix it without killing everything so
01:48:981 (6) - new combo this dam
01:52:409 (9) - would be interenting if you delete this notes and move 01:52:238 (8) - to x121y88 or anything else meh i think this is better tbh zz
01:58:924 (4) - probably you need to put your slider in 01:59:095 - dam
02:01:152 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - a bit confused, just a thing xD idk i think mapping the vocals works better here so
02:08:695 (6,7,1,2) - change circle to slider, change slider to circles, looks this part 02:09:038 - needs final attack they;re all circles now xdd
02:11:866 (1) - spinner end has quite loud hitsound, i prefer reduce volume or made it silence dam

just it i didnt mod normal and hard fukumemeane

guis pls mod the normal and hard too wtfwtfwtfwtfwtf

also added walaowey's mod for the insane i did over irc at the same time lol

Asahina Momoko

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Asahina Momoko 2015-05-22T08:21:04+00:00

VINIS more meme pls w

walaowey

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walaowey 2015-05-22T09:32:58+00:00

Yo o/ .. mod all of the diff lol.. :3
and da fuq with all those post @.@ .. lmao :v

btw here's the mod

General

Bruh, tbh, check your diff again (Normal and Insane).. most of the blanket can be improve :v
disable widescreen (no SB) and letterbox . >w<

Insane

mod in irc :3

2015-05-22 14:47 VINXIS: can ut
2015-05-22 14:47 VINXIS: testplay and mod
2015-05-22 14:47 VINXIS: my map ples
2015-05-22 14:47 walaowey: oo..sorry
2015-05-22 14:48 walaowey: link me your map again @.@
2015-05-22 14:48 VINXIS: l0l
2015-05-22 14:48 VINXIS: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/313831
2015-05-22 14:51 walaowey: mm
2015-05-22 14:51 VINXIS: m
2015-05-22 14:51 walaowey: how about just mod here in chat?
2015-05-22 14:51 walaowey: xD
2015-05-22 14:51 VINXIS: LOLk
2015-05-22 14:52 walaowey: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700530 P*Light feat. Yukacco - Stargazer (DJ Shimamura D&B Remix) [Insane]]
2015-05-22 14:52 VINXIS: wiw
2015-05-22 14:52 VINXIS: everyone so far
2015-05-22 14:52 VINXIS: modded the insane only
2015-05-22 14:52 VINXIS: rip
2015-05-22 14:52 walaowey: lol
2015-05-22 14:52 walaowey: dont worry
2015-05-22 14:52 walaowey: i will mod all diff :3
2015-05-22 14:52 walaowey: btw
2015-05-22 14:52 VINXIS: ok lol
2015-05-22 14:52 VINXIS: the hard is a gd
2015-05-22 14:53 walaowey: 00:00:124 (1,2) - u can try to blanket this
2015-05-22 14:53 walaowey: oo..then i will mod it later and post it to forum @.@
2015-05-22 14:53 VINXIS: lolk
2015-05-22 14:54 walaowey: 00:16:924 (2,3) - this blanket can be improve too
2015-05-22 14:55 VINXIS: FUCKING BLANKETS SRHIDTJGSdmfakl,wfer;
2015-05-22 14:55 walaowey: lol
2015-05-22 14:55 VINXIS: gf 2
2015-05-22 14:55 VINXIS: d
2015-05-22 14:55 VINXIS: uyn
2015-05-22 14:55 walaowey: be more careful with blanket :3
2015-05-22 14:55 VINXIS: fuk blankets
2015-05-22 14:55 walaowey: btw, you map base on vocal? :v
2015-05-22 14:56 VINXIS: yea
2015-05-22 14:56 walaowey: kk
2015-05-22 14:56 VINXIS: kk
2015-05-22 14:57 walaowey: btw 0033:038 - the beat is very strong here
2015-05-22 14:57 walaowey: 00:33:038 -
2015-05-22 14:57 walaowey: i think u should add a circle here
2015-05-22 14:57 VINXIS: fuk
2015-05-22 14:58 walaowey: maybe let the slider end at 00:32:952 -
2015-05-22 14:58 walaowey: then add a circle at 00:33:038 -
2015-05-22 14:58 walaowey: just a sugggestion though
2015-05-22 14:58 VINXIS: yea thats wot i didd
2015-05-22 14:58 VINXIS: lo  l
2015-05-22 14:58 walaowey: kk
2015-05-22 15:00 walaowey: 00:38:524 (1,2) - blanket xD
2015-05-22 15:00 VINXIS: die
2015-05-22 15:00 walaowey: haha
2015-05-22 15:01 walaowey: 00:47:952 (7,1) - stack this 2
2015-05-22 15:02 walaowey: you're gonna be so happy :3
2015-05-22 15:02 walaowey: 01:05:952 (1,2,3,4) - blanket >w<
2015-05-22 15:02 walaowey: 01:11:095 (5,1) - ^
2015-05-22 15:02 VINXIS: fuk ur b l a n k e t s
2015-05-22 15:02 walaowey: xD
2015-05-22 15:05 walaowey: 01:53:438 (4,5) - stack this properly
2015-05-22 15:06 VINXIS: ok dad
2015-05-22 15:07 walaowey: 02:09:038 (1,2) - i think change this slider to circles only
2015-05-22 15:08 walaowey: the beats in this part feels like single tapping lol..
2015-05-22 15:09 walaowey: 02:11:095 (1) - i think u can change this like the previous one at 00:32:352 (1) -
2015-05-22 15:13 walaowey: lol
2015-05-22 15:13 walaowey: sorry about that
2015-05-22 15:13 walaowey: internet dc @.@
2015-05-22 15:13 VINXIS: nice dc lol
2015-05-22 15:13 walaowey: thats all for insane
2015-05-22 15:13 VINXIS: lmaoyea
2015-05-22 15:13 VINXIS: ok dad
2015-05-22 15:13 VINXIS: just do forum for normal and hard tbh lol
2015-05-22 15:13 walaowey: yeah ikr
2015-05-22 15:13 VINXIS: and say u ircd the insane with me
2015-05-22 15:13 VINXIS: ye
2015-05-22 15:13 walaowey: just want to say that lol
2015-05-22 15:13 VINXIS: l o l
2015-05-22 15:13 walaowey: my line not stable @.@
2015-05-22 15:14 VINXIS: rip
2015-05-22 15:14 walaowey: get back to u later :3
2015-05-22 15:14 VINXIS: kklmao
2015-05-22 15:16 VINXIS: ah
2015-05-22 15:16 VINXIS: 01:52:238 (8) - what are the
2015-05-22 15:16 VINXIS: co-ordinates of this note
2015-05-22 15:17 walaowey: x:384 y:212
2015-05-22 15:18 VINXIS: ok thx dad
2015-05-22 15:18 walaowey: lol
2015-05-22 15:18 walaowey: k o/

Mokori's Hard

01:25:666 (2,3,4) - blanket this together?
Nice diff xD

Normal

Lol, bro, where is your DS ? @.@ ..
please check your diff again because the first half of the map was not in DS..
Normal diff is made up of constant DS-ing lol..
00:28:924 (2) - change this to a 1/2 slider

Good luck with ya map o/

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-05-22T10:29:15+00:00

what the hell gaia

edit: add "mokori" as tags for forum beatmap searching

VINXIS

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Topic Starter

VINXIS 2015-05-22T21:51:27+00:00

walaowey

General
Bruh, tbh, check your diff again (Normal and Insane).. most of the blanket can be improve :v kill urself
disable widescreen (no SB) and letterbox . >w< dam

Normal
Lol, bro, where is your DS ? @.@ ..
please check your diff again because the first half of the map was not in DS..
Normal diff is made up of constant DS-ing lol.. spacing's too big for the big spaces between the sliders at the beginning so lol. re-checked the spacing anyway lol
00:28:924 (2) - change this to a 1/2 slider dam

Good luck with ya map o/ the

k did som tagz shiot 2

thx walawo

Evrien

168 posts

Joined April 2011

Evrien 2015-05-22T22:28:30+00:00

Feels pretty natural now after my tip about SV in Normal. Good job and good luck with ranking!

VINXIS

Featured Artist

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Topic Starter

VINXIS 2015-05-22T22:35:39+00:00

ya thx 4 dat mi frnd
ill post log if i hav 2

Kuki

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Kuki 2015-05-23T05:26:17+00:00

IRC MOD GL WITH THE SPEEED RANKKKKK

I HELPED WITH RHYTHM AND ALSO THE FKD UP THE NORMAL SLIDERS

also might do hitsounds if u want idk

SPOILER

2015-05-23 16:46 VINXIS: theres a gd tho btw
2015-05-23 16:47 Kuki: ummm
2015-05-23 16:47 Kuki: k
2015-05-23 16:47 Kuki: should i mod that too
2015-05-23 16:49 VINXIS: sud mod all the diffs xd
2015-05-23 16:49 Kuki: ih
2015-05-23 16:49 Kuki: ooh
2015-05-23 16:49 Kuki: i mapped this a bit agao
2015-05-23 16:49 VINXIS: o
2015-05-23 16:49 VINXIS: lol im aiming for rank
2015-05-23 16:49 VINXIS: this weekend
2015-05-23 16:49 Kuki: lol fuck
2015-05-23 16:49 Kuki: okay
2015-05-23 16:49 Kuki: dman
2015-05-23 16:49 Kuki: dman
2015-05-23 16:49 Kuki: damn
2015-05-23 16:50 VINXIS: speed ranku
2015-05-23 16:50 Kuki: but also dman
2015-05-23 16:50 VINXIS: dman
2015-05-23 16:50 VINXIS: its better if u mod on forum post but ya
2015-05-23 16:50 VINXIS: np ur map btw
2015-05-23 16:50 Kuki: 00:26:181 (1) - pls make this cool
2015-05-23 16:50 Kuki: like
2015-05-23 16:50 Kuki: art slider
2015-05-23 16:50 Kuki: lol
2015-05-23 16:50 Kuki: in insane
2015-05-23 16:50 VINXIS: r u modding the isnane
2015-05-23 16:50 VINXIS: o
2015-05-23 16:51 Kuki: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/698776 MitiS - Living Color]
2015-05-23 16:51 VINXIS: o
2015-05-23 16:51 Kuki: 00:31:495 (6) - pls perfect currve
2015-05-23 16:51 Kuki: note here maybe 00:38:095
2015-05-23 16:51 Kuki: ontop of 00:38:181 (7) -
2015-05-23 16:52 VINXIS: ah maybe
2015-05-23 16:52 Kuki: 00:40:838 - same here if u do that
2015-05-23 16:53 VINXIS: did the slider stuff btw
2015-05-23 16:53 Kuki: sikh
2015-05-23 16:53 VINXIS: yemen
2015-05-23 16:54 Kuki: force curve dis since it's synthy 01:16:924 (1) -
2015-05-23 16:54 VINXIS: its curved tho
2015-05-23 16:54 VINXIS: its a scaled version of 01:16:238 (3) -
2015-05-23 16:54 VINXIS: cuz aesthetic
2015-05-23 16:54 Kuki: oh aesthetic af
2015-05-23 16:54 VINXIS: o
2015-05-23 16:55 Kuki: 01:22:238 - uhh this
2015-05-23 16:55 Kuki: um
2015-05-23 16:55 Kuki: I forgot
2015-05-23 16:55 Kuki: wait
2015-05-23 16:55 Kuki: oh yeah put triple there on slider
2015-05-23 16:55 VINXIS: mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmayb dam
2015-05-23 16:56 VINXIS: idk wud kill the flow i was going
2015-05-23 16:56 VINXIS: but it sounds like a good idea l0l
2015-05-23 16:56 Kuki: 01:32:609 - note here on 01:32:695 (4) -
2015-05-23 16:56 Kuki: yeah idk watever
2015-05-23 16:56 Kuki: ye
2015-05-23 16:56 VINXIS: lol
2015-05-23 16:56 Kuki: 01:35:952 - mayb note here
2015-05-23 16:57 VINXIS: no cuz rhythm consistency
2015-05-23 16:57 Kuki: oh k mb i suck
2015-05-23 16:57 VINXIS: same
2015-05-23 16:57 Kuki: i think
2015-05-23 16:58 Kuki: note here
2015-05-23 16:58 Kuki: 01:48:638 -
2015-05-23 16:58 Kuki: and here 01:48:809 -
2015-05-23 16:58 Kuki: and stack on 01:48:981 (1) -
2015-05-23 16:58 Kuki: it looks cool asfuck and suits
2015-05-23 16:58 VINXIS: tru
2015-05-23 16:58 Kuki: when u trying to rank
2015-05-23 16:58 VINXIS: but it sounds like overmap tho asdgskg
2015-05-23 16:58 Kuki: cause tomorrow night i can hitsound
2015-05-23 16:58 Kuki: not even overmap u bitch
2015-05-23 16:58 Kuki: follows perfectly just gotta hitsound niqqa
2015-05-23 16:59 Kuki: 01:54:981 (5,6,7,8,1) - lol ctrl-g maybe idk
2015-05-23 16:59 VINXIS: kyea added those 2 n o t e s
2015-05-23 16:59 VINXIS: no cuz flo
2015-05-23 16:59 Kuki: I mean yeah but no
2015-05-23 16:59 Kuki: like
2015-05-23 17:00 Kuki: ctrlg timeline not actual
2015-05-23 17:00 Kuki: u no
2015-05-23 17:00 VINXIS: o
2015-05-23 17:00 Kuki: yeah
2015-05-23 17:00 Kuki: souns better cause shitty windchime thinbg
2015-05-23 17:00 VINXIS: oya woops
2015-05-23 17:00 VINXIS: i literally fukd rhythm rip
2015-05-23 17:01 Kuki: lol
2015-05-23 17:01 VINXIS: fuk 2 much work
2015-05-23 17:01 VINXIS: xd
2015-05-23 17:01 Kuki: pls
2015-05-23 17:01 Kuki: but yeah
2015-05-23 17:01 Kuki: um
2015-05-23 17:01 Kuki: when are u ranking
2015-05-23 17:01 VINXIS: like
2015-05-23 17:01 VINXIS: this weekend
2015-05-23 17:01 Kuki: well like
2015-05-23 17:01 VINXIS: i need 2 mod celsius' map so he can bubble
2015-05-23 17:01 VINXIS: and then i bring sukinathan to rank
2015-05-23 17:01 Kuki: lol cel my nigga
2015-05-23 17:01 VINXIS: based
2015-05-23 17:01 Kuki: um
2015-05-23 17:01 Kuki: like
2015-05-23 17:02 Kuki: I can hitsound tomorrow night
2015-05-23 17:02 Kuki: sunday night
2015-05-23 17:02 Kuki: at like 9
2015-05-23 17:02 VINXIS: for this map??/??/?//??//?
2015-05-23 17:02 VINXIS: cuz i did i wanted 2 keep it simple
2015-05-23 17:02 Kuki: si
2015-05-23 17:02 VINXIS: cuz saferank
2015-05-23 17:02 Kuki: cause i'm like good at it
2015-05-23 17:02 Kuki: idk
2015-05-23 17:02 Kuki: if it works it works if it doesn't fuck me
2015-05-23 17:02 VINXIS: saferanktho
2015-05-23 17:02 VINXIS: idklol
2015-05-23 17:03 Kuki: whre do u live in us
2015-05-23 17:03 Kuki: o
2015-05-23 17:03 VINXIS: >us
2015-05-23 17:03 Kuki: canada
2015-05-23 17:03 Kuki: kek ha
2015-05-23 17:03 VINXIS: nicencenceniecni
2015-05-23 17:03 VINXIS: alberta
2015-05-23 17:03 Kuki: cincenatti caaliforrnika
2015-05-23 17:03 Kuki: ok
2015-05-23 17:04 Kuki: ok well at like
2015-05-23 17:04 Kuki: 4am on sunday
2015-05-23 17:04 Kuki: for you
2015-05-23 17:04 Kuki: I will have done hitsounding
2015-05-23 17:04 Kuki: I will only do simple
2015-05-23 17:04 Kuki: like
2015-05-23 17:05 Kuki: nothing under ~10% volume
2015-05-23 17:05 Kuki: so that way still saferanak
2015-05-23 17:05 Kuki: and everyone knows im dank at hitsounding because vinxis
2015-05-23 17:05 Kuki: vinxis map
2015-05-23 17:07 Kuki: oh i forgot
2015-05-23 17:07 Kuki: moddingg
2015-05-23 17:07 Kuki: normal diff now
2015-05-23 17:08 Kuki: 00:13:838 (1) - half circle is out of playfield
2015-05-23 17:08 Kuki: maybe not an issue but ye
2015-05-23 17:09 Kuki: 01:05:952 (1) - what is
2015-05-23 17:09 Kuki: what is that
2015-05-23 17:10 Kuki: reverse on red tick is better
2015-05-23 17:10 Kuki: idk what that is tho
2015-05-23 17:11 Kuki: uh
2015-05-23 17:11 Kuki: wat
2015-05-23 17:11 Kuki: 01:11:438 (1)
2015-05-23 17:11 Kuki: that too
2015-05-23 17:13 VINXIS: o
2015-05-23 17:13 VINXIS: was afk
2015-05-23 17:13 Kuki: 01:14:181 (1) - same here
2015-05-23 17:13 Kuki: wut r u doin
2015-05-23 17:13 Kuki: can u explain
2015-05-23 17:13 Kuki: plz
2015-05-23 17:13 VINXIS: sdf
2015-05-23 17:14 VINXIS: oh
2015-05-23 17:14 VINXIS: what
2015-05-23 17:14 VINXIS: the fuck
2015-05-23 17:14 VINXIS: i changed sv
2015-05-23 17:14 VINXIS: i thought i fixed the sliders lol
2015-05-23 17:14 Kuki: LOL
2015-05-23 17:14 VINXIS: w o w
2015-05-23 17:14 Kuki: threw the the fuck off
2015-05-23 17:14 Kuki: i was like
2015-05-23 17:14 Kuki: "wtf this new 2015 mapping"
2015-05-23 17:14 VINXIS: LOL
2015-05-23 17:14 VINXIS: p l s
2015-05-23 17:14 Kuki: i wasnt gonna say
2015-05-23 17:15 Kuki: cause i thought it was on purpose
2015-05-23 17:15 Kuki: kik
2015-05-23 17:15 VINXIS: r i p
2015-05-23 17:16 Kuki: 01:59:095 (2) - u wanna stack this on (3)
2015-05-23 17:16 Kuki: k mokori's hard
2015-05-23 17:16 Kuki: just like
2015-05-23 17:16 Kuki: tell them to look at this when i post
2015-05-23 17:16 VINXIS: w o w
2015-05-23 17:17 VINXIS: k
2015-05-23 17:17 VINXIS: lemme fix the normal first tho
2015-05-23 17:17 Kuki: wa
2015-05-23 17:17 Kuki: i'll just type it in
2015-05-23 17:17 VINXIS: kk
2015-05-23 17:18 Kuki: 00:12:295 (3) - this is super cool but you could curve since it's long as, curve maybe
2015-05-23 17:19 VINXIS: is this mokori's hard
2015-05-23 17:19 Kuki: ar 7.5 maybe too
2015-05-23 17:19 Kuki: yeah
2015-05-23 17:20 Kuki: dude
2015-05-23 17:20 Kuki: vinxis
2015-05-23 17:20 Kuki: he beatatmapped the thing
2015-05-23 17:21 Kuki: 01:51:038 (1,1) -
2015-05-23 17:21 VINXIS: i tOLD U I DID IT TOO wo w
2015-05-23 17:22 Kuki: sorry fuk o\ m g
2015-05-23 17:22 Kuki: 01:55:324 (1) - can curve this because theree's the piano riff here
2015-05-23 17:22 VINXIS: omargod
2015-05-23 17:22 Kuki: k
2015-05-23 17:22 Kuki: \LOL
2015-05-23 17:22 Kuki: done diggity
2015-05-23 17:22 VINXIS: O
2015-05-23 17:22 Kuki: posting now
2015-05-23 17:22 Kuki: yesssssssssss
2015-05-23 17:22 VINXIS: kklopl

chisaki-san

20 posts

Joined December 2013

chisaki-san 2015-05-23T05:36:13+00:00

quick irc mod xoxoxox

17:22 [Chisaki-san]: i literally have
17:22 [Chisaki-san]: nothing to sa y
17:22 VINXIS: not even for the
17:22 VINXIS: normal
17:22 VINXIS: and hard
17:22 [Chisaki-san]: not really
17:24 [Chisaki-san]: 00:31:152 (3) - on normal rotate by -6 pls
17:24 [Chisaki-san]: that
17:24 [Chisaki-san]: is all maybe
17:26 [Chisaki-san]: 01:36:124 (1) - on normal
17:26 [Chisaki-san]: make this end on a f00king white tick
17:26 [Chisaki-san]: so that the middle is on the red tick
17:26 [Chisaki-san]: br0
17:28 [Chisaki-san]: ok
17:28 [Chisaki-san]: ill just make a forum mod post
17:28 [Chisaki-san]: so you can get back to it

VINXIS

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Topic Starter

VINXIS 2015-05-23T05:41:39+00:00

k fixed both stuff from chisaki's mod

@M o k o r i check out walaowey's mod and kuki's irc pls

also removed letterbox, removed countdown, and added combo colours!!1!1!2

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-05-23T09:04:03+00:00

omg

[Insane]

00:16:581 (1,2,3) - You should be emphasizing the transition from 2>3 not 1>2 There's a flow-break when you play 1>2 but nothing from 2>3 even tho usually map some kind of jump/flow break to emphasize the pitch change.
00:23:095 (5,1) - Bigger jump? Emphasize that slider more.
00:25:666 (4,5) - Honestly, Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm sounds better cuz theres a held vocal that begins on 00:25:666 - .
00:31:495 (6) - If you pull the red control point back a bit, you can map the slight direction change to that feint beat at 00:31:924 - . Looks pretty cool
Watch where my time line is
00:34:752 (2,3) - These circles don't really map to anything honestly. Try removing 2 and adding a repeat to slider 1.
00:41:266 (1,2) - Why not blanket 1? Make it flow better since you're already creating emphasis with the large jump. (00:38:524 (1,2) - This one was nice)
Try something like this? It'll still flow into your next jump pattern pretty well
00:44:009 (1) - (all soft)Whistle on slider-end? (Idk just try this hitsound rhythm and see if you like it)
00:45:038 (7) - Whistle on slider-end
00:45:552 (1) - ^
00:46:409 (4) - Whistle on slider-head.
00:46:752 (1) - Whistle on slider-end
00:47:781 (6) - Drum-whistle fits nicely
01:03:209 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this so easy lol. Make them all circles or at least more dense than the previous combo. Look at the pattern before: 01:01:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You map circles to the second half of the combo even tho the circles on the red-ticks are quite feint.
01:06:809 (5,6) - Don't stack them D: a jump from 5>6 would really emphasize the beat better. Try moving 5 to 320||80.
01:09:552 (5,6) - ^ Please D:
01:21:038 (1) - Two circles instead? 01:21:209 - Is a significant beat too, contrast it with slider 2's end 01:21:552 - where there's no beat.
01:29:095 (7) - How about 224||168. Larger jump to emphasize 1, Also creates a parallel jump pattern with 01:28:409 (2,5,6) -
01:33:895 (2) - No triplet?
01:35:609 (4) - If you moved this to 200||204 you could improve the flow + readability of this pattern.
01:40:581 (2,3,4,5) - I really feel like flow here could be improved
This just makes more sense to me
01:42:466 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this rhythm. Right now you have a slider-end mapped to 01:42:638 - when this is a really strong beat. Also make sure to map a jump from (the new) 4>5 if you do.
01:47:095 (1,2,3) - Kinda lame D:. Double blanket with Ctrl+J ;c. I really think you should reconsider this pattern. Try and map a jump from 2>3 since that's what you've been doing with similar patterns. (01:41:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
01:59:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nice linear pattern. But circles 5, 6, and slider 7 are kinda off x___x. Coordinates if you want to improve aesthetics and stuff:
02:00:124 (5) - 316||152
02:00:295 (6) - 368||284
02:00:466 (7) - 412||136

[Mokori's Hard]

00:17:609 (2) - Shouldn't this begin at 00:17:781 - since you've been following the vocals with every object up to this point.
00:28:238 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm honestly..,. beginning slider 3 on the white tick 00:28:924 - plays better, than on a red tick.
00:53:266 (3) - This slider ends up getting a lot of overlap. Try rotating your slider pattern here
Just an idea
01:06:638 (2,3) - Moving them down 1/2 a beat (01:06:809 - ) Makes more sense rhythmically. But it could mess up your pattern a bit. Still though, right now you're omitting the beat at 01:06:981 - when it should really be something clickable. (You also map that beat in the combo right after, so I recommend this change )
01:17:609 (3) - 1/2 slider instead? transitions into 4 better imo. There's also a beat at 01:17:781 - . It's not as significant, but clearly audible so you could still map it to a slider-end instead of putting a 1/1 gap in between.
01:39:381 (2,3,4) - This is a really big rhythm change compared to your rhythm choice in previous sections. I would at least map 01:39:724 - . So you can still have some diversity with the gap, without suddenly losing note density and using such a different rhythm.
01:44:352 (1,2,1,2,1) - Kinda unnecessary NC spam imo... Due to the repetitiveness of the song, it doesn't sound any different from the combo's that preceded it.
02:16:409 (1,2,3,1) - Interesting that you map this section, but Vinxis doesn't. (Maybe he should too).

[Normal]

00:16:581 (1) - How about making some of the other sliders more fancy too? Otherwise this one just looks out of place lol.
00:57:724 (1,2) - Why not just blanket them for aesthetic purposes lol.
01:16:238 (4) - Try rotating this like 45-60 degrees from selection center. It'll improve the flow going into slider 1.
01:27:895 -01:29:266 - Why so empty D:. The gap before was warranted because of the pause, but not here. Map this part out.
01:38:524 (4) - How about just making this a circle instead? Since this part is really dense compared to other sections of your diff.
01:43:666 (4) - Rotate this like -45 degrees so it flows better into slider 1 too.
01:53:952 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - This entire section, you switch your NC pattern to every measure as opposed to Every two... which is quite odd since it's not the Kiai Section anymore. Also, this part is actually more difficult than Kiai because of consecutive circle usage and 1/2 repeats. Your Kiai section heavily used 3/2 repeat sliders which really cut down on note density. It's quite noticeable here.
02:02:181 (1,2,3,4) - You don't use 4 consecutive circles in Kiai even . I honestly wouldn't recommend more than 3 consecutive circles on what is your easiest difficulty. Try making either 1 + 2 or 3 + 4 a 1/1 slider.

Good luck D:. Imo Normal is a bit too easy, you should try to use more 1/2 rhythm in Kiai because right now your Normal functions too much like an Easy with 1/1 rhythm

. I can already see spread issues with Normal and Mokori's Hard due to Hard's use of 1/2 rhythm and Normal being almost exclusively 1/1. Imo, buff some of the 3/2 repeat sliders on Normal because they're greatly reducing note density in the Kiai sections. Also, introduce some 1/2 rhythm by simply extending some of your 1/1 sliders to 3/2, or making some of your circles with 1/1 gaps in between 1/2 sliders instead.

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2015-05-23T10:31:18+00:00

walaowey wrote:
01:25:666 (2,3,4) - blanket this together? ok!

@Kuki
sorry, but i keep those sliders shape. i like them ;w;

monstrata

monstrata wrote:
[Mokori's Hard]
00:17:609 (2) - Shouldn't this begin at 00:17:781 - since you've been following the vocals with every object up to this point.
00:28:238 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm honestly..,. beginning slider 3 on the white tick 00:28:924 - plays better, than on a red tick. hmm i don't think so, keep
00:53:266 (3) - This slider ends up getting a lot of overlap. Try rotating your slider pattern here fixed with another way
01:06:638 (2,3) - Moving them down 1/2 a beat (01:06:809 - ) Makes more sense rhythmically. But it could mess up your pattern a bit. Still though, right now you're omitting the beat at 01:06:981 - when it should really be something clickable. (You also map that beat in the combo right after, so I recommend this change ) 01:07:152 - doesn't have strong sound and don't want to break current pattern, so keep it
01:17:609 (3) - 1/2 slider instead? transitions into 4 better imo. There's also a beat at 01:17:781 - . It's not as significant, but clearly audible so you could still map it to a slider-end instead of putting a 1/1 gap in between. ok!
01:39:381 (2,3,4) - This is a really big rhythm change compared to your rhythm choice in previous sections. I would at least map 01:39:724 - . So you can still have some diversity with the gap, without suddenly losing note density and using such a different rhythm.
01:44:352 (1,2,1,2,1) - Kinda unnecessary NC spam imo... Due to the repetitiveness of the song, it doesn't sound any different from the combo's that preceded it.
02:16:409 (1,2,3,1) - Interesting that you map this section, but Vinxis doesn't. (Maybe he should too). i thought i should map here. keep

no commented=fixed!

thanks for mod guys

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VINXIS

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VINXIS 2015-05-23T14:43:12+00:00

monstrata

omg omargod

[Insane]

00:16:581 (1,2,3) - You should be emphasizing the transition from 2>3 not 1>2 There's a flow-break when you play 1>2 but nothing from 2>3 even tho usually map some kind of jump/flow break to emphasize the pitch change. dam
00:23:095 (5,1) - Bigger jump? Emphasize that slider more. dam
00:25:666 (4,5) - Honestly, Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm sounds better cuz theres a held vocal that begins on 00:25:666 - . 2 circle stack ins t e ad
00:31:495 (6) - If you pull the red control point back a bit, you can map the slight direction change to that feint beat at 00:31:924 - . Looks pretty cool
dam y o
00:34:752 (2,3) - These circles don't really map to anything honestly. Try removing 2 and adding a repeat to slider 1. first circle is a feint snare and the other one is a hat xddd
00:41:266 (1,2) - Why not blanket 1? Make it flow better since you're already creating emphasis with the large jump. (00:38:524 (1,2) - This one was nice)
dam i like ur box
00:44:009 (1) - (all soft)Whistle on slider-end? (Idk just try this hitsound rhythm and see if you like it) nooo zzzz
00:45:038 (7) - Whistle on slider-end
00:45:552 (1) - ^
00:46:409 (4) - Whistle on slider-head.
00:46:752 (1) - Whistle on slider-end nooo zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
00:47:781 (6) - Drum-whistle fits nicely yaa i added a drum-hitwhistle too now lol
01:03:209 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this so easy lol. Make them all circles or at least more dense than the previous combo. Look at the pattern before: 01:01:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You map circles to the second half of the combo even tho the circles on the red-ticks are quite feint. dam
01:06:809 (5,6) - Don't stack them D: a jump from 5>6 would really emphasize the beat better. Try moving 5 to 320||80.
01:09:552 (5,6) - ^ Please D: i really dont want to agssdgds
01:21:038 (1) - Two circles instead? 01:21:209 - Is a significant beat too, contrast it with slider 2's end 01:21:552 - where there's no beat. wh
01:29:095 (7) - How about 224||168. Larger jump to emphasize 1, Also creates a parallel jump pattern with 01:28:409 (2,5,6) - dam put it closer to the slider head tho
01:33:895 (2) - No triplet? oya
01:35:609 (4) - If you moved this to 200||204 you could improve the flow + readability of this pattern. i like it under the slider tho tbh
01:40:581 (2,3,4,5) - I really feel like flow here could be improved ???? cb does this kind of spacing too lol. might change to smth like urs tho if it becomes a problemo
01:42:466 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this rhythm. Right now you have a slider-end mapped to 01:42:638 - when this is a really strong beat. Also make sure to map a jump from (the new) 4>5 if you do. stacked it xddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
01:47:095 (1,2,3) - Kinda lame D:. Double blanket with Ctrl+J ;c. I really think you should reconsider this pattern. Try and map a jump from 2>3 since that's what you've been doing with similar patterns. (01:41:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) i really like the aesthetic of this one so no. if it's a huge problem 4 others then maybe xd
01:59:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nice linear pattern. But circles 5, 6, and slider 7 are kinda off x___x. Coordinates if you want to improve aesthetics and stuff:
02:00:124 (5) - 316||152
02:00:295 (6) - 368||284
02:00:466 (7) - 412||136 dam

[Normal]

00:16:581 (1) - How about making some of the other sliders more fancy too? Otherwise this one just looks out of place lol. dam i did the thing to the enxt slidor
00:57:724 (1,2) - Why not just blanket them for aesthetic purposes lol. no u
01:16:238 (4) - Try rotating this like 45-60 degrees from selection center. It'll improve the flow going into slider 1. dam 50 deg
01:27:895 -01:29:266 - Why so empty D:. The gap before was warranted because of the pause, but not here. Map this part out. dam ok dad
01:38:524 (4) - How about just making this a circle instead? Since this part is really dense compared to other sections of your diff. dam
01:43:666 (4) - Rotate this like -45 degrees so it flows better into slider 1 too. idr wot it was before i did the thing u said at the bottom so lol
01:53:952 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - This entire section, you switch your NC pattern to every measure as opposed to Every two... which is quite odd since it's not the Kiai Section anymore. Also, this part is actually more difficult than Kiai because of consecutive circle usage and 1/2 repeats. Your Kiai section heavily used 3/2 repeat sliders which really cut down on note density. It's quite noticeable here. dam did a thing (was an accident anyawy lol
02:02:181 (1,2,3,4) - You don't use 4 consecutive circles in Kiai even . I honestly wouldn't recommend more than 3 consecutive circles on what is your easiest difficulty. Try making either 1 + 2 or 3 + 4 a 1/1 slider. dam

Good luck D:. Imo Normal is a bit too easy, you should try to use more 1/2 rhythm in Kiai because right now your Normal functions too much like an Easy with 1/1 rhythm

. I can already see spread issues with Normal and Mokori's Hard due to Hard's use of 1/2 rhythm and Normal being almost exclusively 1/1. Imo, buff some of the 3/2 repeat sliders on Normal because they're greatly reducing note density in the Kiai sections. Also, introduce some 1/2 rhythm by simply extending some of your 1/1 sliders to 3/2, or making some of your circles with 1/1 gaps in between 1/2 sliders instead. dam k changed the rhythm in kiai

also mapped the part thing that mokori did and i didnt k xd

thx b luv u

ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2015-05-23T17:09:55+00:00

how to get sp like kamal what the fuck

Spaghetti

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Spaghetti 2015-05-23T17:31:57+00:00

just some little things, no kds.

comment, might just be my preference.
Recommended.
Highly Recommended.
Unrankable.

[General]

You don't have a SB, disable Widescreen Support.

[Mokori's Hard]

00:36:809 (1,2,3,4) - Please make this parallel to the beats you placed at 00:35:781 (1,2) - . It just doesn't play right the other way imo.
00:59:095 (3) - This stack doesn't really work, I'd just place it in front of the slider end.

[Insane]

00:26:009 (6) - Take this note and stack it on top of the slider head since this note compliments a pick up into whatever they're saying on the slider. (I think it's すんで .)
02:16:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sliders at the end would fit better imo.

GL

Asahina Momoko

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Asahina Momoko 2015-05-23T17:41:07+00:00

Spaghetti wrote:
[Mokori's Hard]
00:36:809 (1,2,3,4) - Please make this parallel to the beats you placed at 00:35:781 (1,2) - . It just doesn't play right the other way imo.　no sound at 00:37:324 - , so can't make that parallel
00:59:095 (3) - This stack doesn't really work, I'd just place it in front of the slider end. i think it's fine

thanks for mod

VINXIS

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VINXIS 2015-05-23T17:47:46+00:00

sphaget

just some little things, no kds. owoops didnt read this l0l

[General]

You don't have a SB, disable Widescreen Support. dam

[Insane]

00:26:009 (6) - Take this note and stack it on top of the slider head since this note compliments a pick up into whatever they're saying on the slider. (I think it's すんで .) k changing to slider
02:16:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sliders at the end would fit better imo. star tho

GL

SkinnyJommy

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SkinnyJommy 2015-05-23T22:27:36+00:00

Mod requested by the one and only VINXIS PRIME!

sorry if bad, cuz im bad

[Insane]

00:25:152 - You could put a circle here, there is a sound or make 00:24:809 (1) - a reverse slider but then you'd have to change the upcoming notes around

00:46:752 (1) - Maybe you could turn this into a 1/2 slider because there is a hat sound there?? http://puu.sh/hXXJr.jpg

00:52:238 (1) - ^ same thing here... just want you to catch all the drum sounds, because its a d'n'b song right, maybe im wrong idk

01:05:181 - theres clearly a sound here ^_^

01:06:809 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I moved these around a bit... 5 (236, 328) | 6 (100, 224) | 1 (316, 287) | 2 is stacked on the previous 2 | 3, 4 and 5 are stacked on 1 | 6 (oh i didn't change this) and it should look like this! 1 http://puu.sh/hXZwm.jpg - 2 http://puu.sh/hXZyS.jpg I think this better fits what you were trying to create, with the reverse flow thing. its actually really cool how you did that. good job!!!

01:10:066 (1,2) - I think you should switch these two on the timeline... it just feel better to play, and follows the song better because the wub would be on the slider, which as of now, it is not. also if you choose to do this, move 2 on top of 1 http://puu.sh/hY0gD.jpg

01:12:981 (1,2) - I really like this, just pointing it out :O

01:23:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ILLUMINATI

01:25:152 (1) - Could blanket this better http://puu.sh/hY0Qe.jpg

01:55:324 (1) - hmmmm you could turn this into two 1/4 sliders to follow the bell ring thing

I'm not good at modding anything other than insanes.... im sorry but thats it for my mod

Hopefully it was somewhat helpful, GL dude!!

VINXIS

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VINXIS 2015-05-23T23:05:15+00:00

SkinnyJommy

[Insane]

00:25:152 - You could put a circle here, there is a sound or make 00:24:809 (1) - a reverse slider but then you'd have to change the upcoming notes around imo not emphasized enogugh

00:46:752 (1) - Maybe you could turn this into a 1/2 slider because there is a hat sound there?? http://puu.sh/hXXJr.jpg dam

00:52:238 (1) - ^ same thing here... just want you to catch all the drum sounds, because its a d'n'b song right, maybe im wrong idk dam

01:05:181 - theres clearly a sound here ^_^ dam i undermapped that before

01:06:809 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I moved these around a bit... 5 (236, 328) | 6 (100, 224) | 1 (316, 287) | 2 is stacked on the previous 2 | 3, 4 and 5 are stacked on 1 | 6 (oh i didn't change this) and it should look like this! 1 http://puu.sh/hXZwm.jpg - 2 http://puu.sh/hXZyS.jpg I think this better fits what you were trying to create, with the reverse flow thing. its actually really cool how you did that. good job!!! zzzzz i dont rlly wanna break the structure so ill keep it for now but yea

01:10:066 (1,2) - I think you should switch these two on the timeline... it just feel better to play, and follows the song better because the wub would be on the slider, which as of now, it is not. also if you choose to do this, move 2 on top of 1 http://puu.sh/hY0gD.jpg dam

01:12:981 (1,2) - I really like this, just pointing it out :O yaye i did a good

01:23:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ILLUMINATI LOL

01:25:152 (1) - Could blanket this better http://puu.sh/hY0Qe.jpg omar fucking god

01:55:324 (1) - hmmmm you could turn this into two 1/4 sliders to follow the bell ring thing dam

I'm not good at modding anything other than insanes.... im sorry but thats it for my mod

yee all g

Hopefully it was somewhat helpful, GL dude!!

thx 4 mode

ok BNs plz bubble plz

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2015-05-23T23:43:01+00:00

the stupid stuff in insane
figure out why it's stupid

00:10:752 (4) -
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01:04:924 (5,6,7) -
01:06:809 (5,6) -
01:10:752 (4) -
01:13:495 (3) -
01:14:181 (1) -
01:19:666 (1) -
01:25:152 (1,2,3) -
01:27:724 (6,1) -
01:27:895 (1) -
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01:30:638 (1) -
01:29:266 (1) -
01:36:124 (1,2) -
01:33:381 (1) -
01:36:981 (4,5) -
01:55:324 (1,2,3,4) -
01:50:524 (2) -
02:00:466 (7) -

whatever from here onward idc anymore

VINXIS

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VINXIS 2015-05-24T02:53:27+00:00

Okoratu

the stupid stuff in insane
figure out why it's stupid

00:10:752 (4) - circle
00:12:295 (3) - l 0 l
00:15:038 (3) - k
00:17:781 (4) - dam
00:20:009 (3) - y u hatin on d i s
00:24:809 (1) - circles
00:25:666 (4,5) - circles
00:26:181 (1) - wow ok dad
00:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it looks so niec imo and idk wats wrong with it so rip
01:03:895 (5,6) - i kno u wont like this lol
01:04:924 (5,6,7) - i never missed so im keepign it since i like it 2 unless if it's unranklebv
01:06:809 (5,6) - constipatign
01:10:752 (4) - moved it upwardz
01:13:495 (3) - O
01:14:181 (1) - O
01:19:666 (1) - asdf
01:25:152 (1,2,3) - fuckign kicks
01:27:724 (6,1) - fuk u
01:27:895 (1) -
01:27:895 (1) -
01:27:895 (1) - iDK WHATS WRONG WITH IT OKO Y U HAVE TO KIL m e
01:30:638 (1) - dam
01:29:266 (1) - wh a thw hw aht thh awawt
01:36:124 (1,2) - is this a blanket mod
01:33:381 (1) - whatdoi d o kghsdhgskdgsdg fuckme
01:36:981 (4,5) - the
01:55:324 (1,2,3,4) - wot
01:50:524 (2) - dam
02:00:466 (7) - wHA899965432

whatever from here onward idc anymore FUCK

k i tried to do some more shit after that shit too ok aka like 1 other thing ok

Kuki

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Kuki 2015-05-24T03:27:50+00:00

irc mod for unrankables, map is pretty polish now bruh

SPOILER

2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: I can like
2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: hitsound now
2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: if you waant
2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: just basics
2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: xox
2015-05-24 15:12 VINXIS: its getting bubbled
2015-05-24 15:12 VINXIS: like now
2015-05-24 15:12 VINXIS: soontm
2015-05-24 15:12 VINXIS: like
2015-05-24 15:12 VINXIS: rlly soon
2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: ohhhh
2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: sooooo
2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: that's a
2015-05-24 15:12 VINXIS: its already hitsounded anyway xdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: nooo
2015-05-24 15:12 Kuki: wow rip my life
2015-05-24 15:12 VINXIS: rip ur lif
2015-05-24 15:15 Kuki: gotta mod more
2015-05-24 15:15 Kuki: uhggg
2015-05-24 15:15 Kuki: anything oyu want checked
2015-05-24 15:16 Kuki: can quick irc again, dont need to forum post now
2015-05-24 15:16 VINXIS: just unrankable things i g u e s s
2015-05-24 15:16 Kuki: mk u want me to chekkkk
2015-05-24 15:17 Kuki: mk checking
2015-05-24 15:17 VINXIS: klol
2015-05-24 15:17 Kuki: 00:17:781 (4) - u considered stacking
2015-05-24 15:18 Kuki: would look cute/10
2015-05-24 15:18 VINXIS: custom stacks m809
2015-05-24 15:18 Kuki: 00:24:466 (6) - conzidered stakkin
2015-05-24 15:18 Kuki: sorry i love stackin
2015-05-24 15:18 VINXIS: custom stacks m809
2015-05-24 15:18 Kuki: idk what meanas
2015-05-24 15:18 Kuki: 00:28:238 (2) - u wanna like blanket this
2015-05-24 15:18 VINXIS: not completely stacked
2015-05-24 15:19 Kuki: mk
2015-05-24 15:19 VINXIS: like oko';s maps
2015-05-24 15:19 Kuki: 00:31:152 (5) - considered a curve here?
2015-05-24 15:19 Kuki: since vocala
2015-05-24 15:19 Kuki: would look nice imo
2015-05-24 15:19 VINXIS: nah idk
2015-05-24 15:19 VINXIS: if celsius says so l0l
2015-05-24 15:19 Kuki: mk
2015-05-24 15:20 Kuki: 00:35:781 (1) - i see that it fits to (4) but maybe curve idk
2015-05-24 15:20 VINXIS: no cuz pattern
2015-05-24 15:20 Kuki: mkkkkkkkkkkk
2015-05-24 15:20 VINXIS: kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdkd
2015-05-24 15:20 VINXIS: dkdkdkdk
2015-05-24 15:20 VINXIS: dk
2015-05-24 15:20 VINXIS: d
2015-05-24 15:20 VINXIS: k
2015-05-24 15:20 VINXIS: playing taiko now
2015-05-24 15:20 VINXIS: kdkddkdk
2015-05-24 15:20 Kuki: 00:43:324 (5,6,7) - idk if this fits
2015-05-24 15:21 Kuki: it probably does
2015-05-24 15:21 Kuki: I mean
2015-05-24 15:21 Kuki: it doees
2015-05-24 15:21 Kuki: but if feels awk
2015-05-24 15:21 Kuki: 00:48:124 - u kinda miss a solid beat here would mapping this really ruin structure?
2015-05-24 15:21 VINXIS: ya obtuse angles adgjksdgsgd
2015-05-24 15:21 VINXIS: idk wot to do with those jumps tho
2015-05-24 15:22 VINXIS: idk ill do it but i feel itshould be
2015-05-24 15:22 VINXIS: not mapped or smth
2015-05-24 15:22 Kuki: idk
2015-05-24 15:22 Kuki: it's a break i guess but still
2015-05-24 15:22 Kuki: like
2015-05-24 15:22 Kuki: solid
2015-05-24 15:22 Kuki: and you mapped it like 1 second before too
2015-05-24 15:22 VINXIS: k
2015-05-24 15:22 VINXIS: ya tru
2015-05-24 15:22 Kuki: 01:48:638 (6,7) - omg ty
2015-05-24 15:22 Kuki: these are actually beautiful
2015-05-24 15:22 Kuki: sound so good
2015-05-24 15:22 VINXIS: just mapepd it like 00:50:524 (7,8,1,2) - then
2015-05-24 15:23 VINXIS: LOL
2015-05-24 15:23 Kuki: ye nice
2015-05-24 15:23 VINXIS: niec
2015-05-24 15:23 VINXIS: wot about unrankable shitiopst
2015-05-24 15:23 Kuki: 01:55:324 (1) - u wanna maybe curve blanket 01:55:495 (2) -
2015-05-24 15:24 Kuki: wat u mean
2015-05-24 15:24 VINXIS: unrankable stuff like ths tuff maps get d q ' d for
2015-05-24 15:24 VINXIS: also wot dou mean byt tha t
2015-05-24 15:24 Kuki: yeah fair enoough
2015-05-24 15:24 Kuki: I mean curve the slider to blankeet the triple
2015-05-24 15:24 VINXIS: o
2015-05-24 15:24 VINXIS: not rlly meh
2015-05-24 15:24 Kuki: cause it kinda plays funny cause thhe slider doesnt lead?
2015-05-24 15:25 VINXIS: idk
2015-05-24 15:25 VINXIS: slider leniency is there tho so its like
2015-05-24 15:25 VINXIS: a circle
2015-05-24 15:25 VINXIS: basicaly
2015-05-24 15:25 Kuki: yeah i see
2015-05-24 15:25 Kuki: just tested and it plays fine
2015-05-24 15:25 Kuki: aalright
2015-05-24 15:25 VINXIS: okd add
2015-05-24 15:25 Kuki: no issues that i can see now
2015-05-24 15:25 Kuki: i'll post nao
2015-05-24 15:25 VINXIS: k g

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-05-25T06:39:53+00:00

[general]

thorough check
The stargazers are a family, Uranoscopidae, of perciform fish that have eyes on top of their heads (hence the name). The family includes about 51 species (one extinct) in eight genera, all marine and found worldwide in shallow and deep saltwaters.[1]

In addition to the top-mounted eyes, a stargazer also has a large, upward-facing mouth in a large head. Their usual habit is to bury themselves in sand, and leap upwards to ambush prey (benthic fish and invertebrates) that pass overhead. Some species have a worm-shaped lure growing out of the floors of their mouths, which they can wiggle to attract prey's attention. Both the dorsal and anal fins are relatively long; some lack dorsal spines. Lengths range from 18 up to 90 cm, for the giant stargazer Kathetostoma giganteum.

Stargazers are venomous; they have two large venomous spines situated behind their opercles and above their pectoral fins. The species within the genera Astroscopus and Uranoscopus can also cause electric shocks. Astroscopus species have a single electric organ consisting of modified eye muscles, while Uranoscopus species have theirs derived from sonic muscles.[2] They are some of the few marine bioelectrogenic bony fishes, the other being the striped catfish.[3] These two genera within stargazers are out of eight total independent evolutions of bioelectrogenesis.[2] They are also unique among electric fish in not possessing specialized electroreceptors.[4]
add blank hitsound for sliderslide cus why not ?

[insane]

00:14:524 (2,3) - jumps here is quite big for the calm part like this maybe move (3) to around x256 y172 would make the spacing here more reasonable
00:20:009 (3) - uhh this looks better
SPOILER
00:23:095 (5) - nazi move this to x364 y320 so pattern here looks cleaner 00:22:409 (2,3,5) - , currently overlap here 00:22:409 (2,5) - is not really good
00:24:638 (7,1) - flow is a bit awkward , give more angle here would make flow here better , try move 00:24:809 00:24:809 (1,2,3) - to x28 y284
00:25:324 (3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm here kinda feel a bit too intense for this part and not fit the song here somehow , maybe try this rhythm
SPOILER
00:27:209 (3,4) - better make spacing here lower than 00:27:381 (4,1) - so the flow here play better imo , try move (4) to around x352 y236
00:36:295 (2,3) - flow a bit weird , try this pattern instead ?
SPOILER
00:41:781 (2,3) - same , try this one ?
SPOILER
better flow and transition
00:47:609 (6,7) - this spacing should be bigger than 00:47:781 (7,8) - to make sense with the music more , this would nice
SPOILER
00:48:124 (1,1) - stack these would make the pattern "looks" better , I mean " looks better"
00:50:009 (3,4,5) - try move this to around x272 y328 so it would make flow here 00:49:838 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit better imo
00:51:209 (3,2) - stack these would make the pattern "looks" better
00:56:352 (3,1) - fix stack nazi
01:01:324 (4,5) - spacing here should be a bit bigger than 01:01:495 (5,6) - to make sense with the music more, try something like this
SPOILER
01:05:095 (6) - move this to around x184 y224 would make the flow here 01:04:924 (5,6,7) - better imo , currently it feel pretty awkward here 01:05:095 (6,7) -
01:08:695 (1,2,3,4) - transition is not really good here , try move this 01:09:209 (2,3,4) - to around x496 y92 , would make flow and transition here 01:08:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - better imo
01:27:895 (1,2,3,4) - same , this one hard to fix tho , try this ?
SPOILER
01:53:438 (4,5) - nazi fix stack
01:56:352 (7,1) - why lower spsacing suddenly here ? the music is not changing or something here imo , try place like this
SPOILER
02:06:124 (6,1) - spacing here should bigger than 02:05:952 (5,6) - to make sense with music more , try move (1) to around x232 y308

you can make the pattern looks better tho I mean make some pattern looks a bit more cleaner would be nice

[mokori]

somehow I feel like the slider in the beginning so fast ;_; maybe try to lower sv in the beginning ( from 00:11:095 - to 00:32:866 - )would be nice

00:19:324 (1) - dam you can just copy paste this 00:16:581 (1) - tho , make this 00:19:324 (1) - same as 00:16:581 (1) -
00:56:009 (3,4) - hmm..make spacing consistent like 00:55:324 (1,2,3) - for better flow ? or you can do stack here both work
01:06:638 (2,3,1) - try this rhythm ? might play better imo
SPOILER
01:11:438 (1) - curve this the another way? so it would make flow here 01:11:438 (1,2) - a bit better imo
SPOILER
01:13:152 (7,8,1) - make spacing consistent for better flow ?

[normal]

wait wtf I remember seeing this normal only about 1.7 ish star rating lol

00:11:095 (1) - better ctrl+g so the flow here 00:11:095 (1,1) - will be a bit easier for new player
00:30:124 (1,2) - better put this on the right side of playfield so the flow wii be a bit better for new player
SPOILER
00:38:524 (1) - curve the another way so it make flow here 00:38:524 (1,2) - better for new player imo
SPOILER
00:41:266 (1) - curve the another way so it make flow here 00:41:266 (1,2) - better for new player imo
SPOILER
00:52:238 (1) - curve the another way so it make flow here 00:52:238 (1,2) - better for new player imo
SPOILER
you should know what it should be now q:
00:54:295 (4,1) - 0.84x spacing geegee
00:54:981 (1,2) - top kek spacing
00:59:095 (2,1,2,3,4) - D I D Y O U F K I N G G I V E U P I N L I F E O R ( make spacing consistent )
01:11:438 (1) - this looks better imo , currently is me irl
SPOILER
01:13:838 (5,3) - better stack so pattern here looks better
01:25:152 (1,2) - I have better idea to get 1.0x spacing here
SPOILER
01:28:581 (4,1) - try stack here so pattern here looks better
01:30:638 (1) - also me irl , this looks better
SPOILER
01:32:009 (3) - curve the another way so it make flow here 01:32:009 (3,4) - better imo
SPOILER
01:36:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - u sure this is gud for new player ? r u ok ? , try nerf this a bit , a bit diff spike here somehow , I think it doesn't need to focus on kick that much
SPOILER
01:38:866 (1) - somehow give a bit curve at head would make flow here 01:38:866 (1,2) - nice
SPOILER
01:45:724 (3,4) - THE ( spacing )
01:55:324 (1,2) - WH
02:03:552 (1,2,3) - same
02:06:295 (1,2,3) - E U D U R S E L F
01:56:009 (2,3) - might as well fix this slightly error in spacing too
01:57:724 (5,2) - better stack so pattern here looks better

mokori's hard looks fine while normal and insane diffs can be improved a bit in flow , aesthetic and spacing consistency

good luck , have fun ~~meming~~ mapping

moya

205 posts

Joined November 2014

moya 2015-05-25T07:21:11+00:00

http://ask.fm/VINXIS/answer/127418810648

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

VINXIS 2015-05-25T07:36:47+00:00

CelsiusLK

[general]

The stargazers are a family, Uranoscopidae, of perciform fish that have eyes on top of their heads (hence the name). The family includes about 51 species (one extinct) in eight genera, all marine and found worldwide in shallow and deep saltwaters.[1]

In addition to the top-mounted eyes, a stargazer also has a large, upward-facing mouth in a large head. Their usual habit is to bury themselves in sand, and leap upwards to ambush prey (benthic fish and invertebrates) that pass overhead. Some species have a worm-shaped lure growing out of the floors of their mouths, which they can wiggle to attract prey's attention. Both the dorsal and anal fins are relatively long; some lack dorsal spines. Lengths range from 18 up to 90 cm, for the giant stargazer Kathetostoma giganteum.

Stargazers are venomous; they have two large venomous spines situated behind their opercles and above their pectoral fins. The species within the genera Astroscopus and Uranoscopus can also cause electric shocks. Astroscopus species have a single electric organ consisting of modified eye muscles, while Uranoscopus species have theirs derived from sonic muscles.[2] They are some of the few marine bioelectrogenic bony fishes, the other being the striped catfish.[3] These two genera within stargazers are out of eight total independent evolutions of bioelectrogenesis.[2] They are also unique among electric fish in not possessing specialized electroreceptors.[4] me irl
add blank hitsound for sliderslide cus why not ? dam

[insane]

00:14:524 (2,3) - jumps here is quite big for the calm part like this maybe move (3) to around x256 y172 would make the spacing here more reasonable dam i tried
00:20:009 (3) - uhh this looks better dam
00:23:095 (5) - nazi move this to x364 y320 so pattern here looks cleaner 00:22:409 (2,3,5) - , currently overlap here 00:22:409 (2,5) - is not really good dam
00:24:638 (7,1) - flow is a bit awkward , give more angle here would make flow here better , try move 00:24:809 00:24:809 (1,2,3) - to x28 y284 moved 00:24:466 (6) - instead
00:25:324 (3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm here kinda feel a bit too intense for this part and not fit the song here somehow , maybe try this rhythm dam
00:27:209 (3,4) - better make spacing here lower than 00:27:381 (4,1) - so the flow here play better imo , try move (4) to around x352 y236 dam
00:36:295 (2,3) - flow a bit weird , try this pattern instead ? dam
00:41:781 (2,3) - same , try this one ? dam blame sukinathan
00:47:609 (6,7) - this spacing should be bigger than 00:47:781 (7,8) - to make sense with the music more , this would nice dam did a thing
00:48:124 (1,1) - stack these would make the pattern "looks" better , I mean " looks better" dam
00:50:009 (3,4,5) - try move this to around x272 y328 so it would make flow here 00:49:838 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit better imo dam
00:51:209 (3,2) - stack these would make the pattern "looks" better dam
00:56:352 (3,1) - fix stack nazi wh
01:01:324 (4,5) - spacing here should be a bit bigger than 01:01:495 (5,6) - to make sense with the music more, try something like this i feel teh opposite imo
01:05:095 (6) - move this to around x184 y224 would make the flow here 01:04:924 (5,6,7) - better imo , currently it feel pretty awkward here 01:05:095 (6,7) - dam klol but im sensing ppl r guna h8
01:08:695 (1,2,3,4) - transition is not really good here , try move this 01:09:209 (2,3,4) - to around x496 y92 , would make flow and transition here 01:08:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - better imo dam changed rhythm shit so lol
01:27:895 (1,2,3,4) - same , this one hard to fix tho , try this ? imo this one's fine :< ples
01:53:438 (4,5) - nazi fix stack wh
01:56:352 (7,1) - why lower spsacing suddenly here ? the music is not changing or something here imo , try place like this dam did a thing
02:06:124 (6,1) - spacing here should bigger than 02:05:952 (5,6) - to make sense with music more , try move (1) to around x232 y308 dam

you can make the pattern looks better tho I mean make some pattern looks a bit more cleaner would be nice i did didn't i asfsdgksjdf fukc

[normal]

wait wtf I remember seeing this normal only about 1.7 ish star rating lol lol wot it was always above 1.9 stars m9

00:11:095 (1) - better ctrl+g so the flow here 00:11:095 (1,1) - will be a bit easier for new player
00:30:124 (1,2) - better put this on the right side of playfield so the flow wii be a bit better for new player
00:38:524 (1) - curve the another way so it make flow here 00:38:524 (1,2) - better for new player imo
00:41:266 (1) - curve the another way so it make flow here 00:41:266 (1,2) - better for new player imo
00:52:238 (1) - curve the another way so it make flow here 00:52:238 (1,2) - better for new player imo k invalid now cuz ez diff
00:54:295 (4,1) - 0.84x spacing geegee dam
00:54:981 (1,2) - top kek spacing dam
00:59:095 (2,1,2,3,4) - D I D Y O U F K I N G G I V E U P I N L I F E O R ( make spacing consistent ) O LOL RIP
01:11:438 (1) - this looks better imo , currently is me irl dam
01:13:838 (5,3) - better stack so pattern here looks better dam
01:25:152 (1,2) - I have better idea to get 1.0x spacing here dam
01:28:581 (4,1) - try stack here so pattern here looks better wh
01:30:638 (1) - also me irl , this looks better dam
01:32:009 (3) - curve the another way so it make flow here 01:32:009 (3,4) - better imo dam did a thing
01:36:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - u sure this is gud for new player ? r u ok ? , try nerf this a bit , a bit diff spike here somehow , I think it doesn't need to focus on kick that much new ez diff
01:38:866 (1) - somehow give a bit curve at head would make flow here 01:38:866 (1,2) - nice dam
01:45:724 (3,4) - THE ( spacing )
01:55:324 (1,2) - WH
02:03:552 (1,2,3) - same
02:06:295 (1,2,3) - E U D U R S E L F
01:56:009 (2,3) - might as well fix this slightly error in spacing too dam all spacing problems were cuz of SV changes n shiot
01:57:724 (5,2) - better stack so pattern here looks better dam

mokori's hard looks fine while normal and insane diffs can be improved a bit in flow , aesthetic and spacing consistency fukjc

good luck , have fun ~~meming~~ mapping

Nathan

Beatmap Nominator

2,144 posts

Joined August 2014

Nathan 2015-05-25T07:40:58+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
00:41:781 (2,3) - same , try this one ? dam blame sukinathan

disguy
wtf did I do

Kanye

159 posts

Joined November 2013

Kanye 2015-05-25T08:50:17+00:00

shitboi

Insane

00:12:295 (3) - Move to x:464 y:292 4 aesthetic
Silent Hitsounds at these slider ends cos sounds cool (I went to 5% volume cos I'm lazy lmao) ↓
00:11:095 (1,2,4,1,2,4,1,2,3,5,1,2,3) (if
00:23:609 (2) - Move to x:44 y:280
00:23:952 (4) - Move to x:40 y:108 (i used ds 2.0 for these last 2 points)
00:24:295 (5) - stack under this ^
00:31:152 (5,6) - silent hitsound these slider ends
00:32:352 (1) - silent this slider end as well
00:34:924 (3) - ur pushing it br0
00:34:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe move this whole pattern to the left by like x = 20 or something
01:29:095 (7) - maybe move to x:268 y:196
Chorus pretty dank
02:11:095 (1) - Silent hitsound this slider end
02:16:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can feel the breaks already

I'd mod the rest but I can only mod insanes soz

gl Cool Canadian Bromar

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2015-05-25T18:17:16+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
[mokori]
somehow I feel like the slider in the beginning so fast ;_; maybe try to lower sv in the beginning ( from 00:11:095 - to 00:32:866 - )would be nice
00:19:324 (1) - dam you can just copy paste this 00:16:581 (1) - tho , make this 00:19:324 (1) - same as 00:16:581 (1) -
00:56:009 (3,4) - hmm..make spacing consistent like 00:55:324 (1,2,3) - for better flow ? or you can do stack here both work
01:06:638 (2,3,1) - try this rhythm ? might play better imo
SPOILER
01:11:438 (1) - curve this the another way? so it would make flow here 01:11:438 (1,2) - a bit better imo
SPOILER
01:13:152 (7,8,1) - make spacing consistent for better flow ?

all fixed, thanks celsius

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64581
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 65952
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

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TitleUnicode:Stargazer (DJ Shimamura D&B Remix)
Artist:P*Light feat. Yukacco
ArtistUnicode:P*Light feat. Yukacco
Creator:VINXIS
Version:Mokori's Hard
Source:
Tags:edm SKETCH UP! Recordings dance music M_o_k_o_r_i mokori drum and bass dnb
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265,370,105895,2,0,L|176:363,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,297,106409,2,0,P|337:238|317:138,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,59,107095,6,0,P|172:126|126:197,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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282,244,108124,2,0,P|222:213|183:137,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108552,12,2,109838,0:0:0:0:
391,98,111038,5,0,0:0:0:0:
391,98,111209,6,0,P|412:130|421:173,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,168,111552,2,0,P|323:206|299:242,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,173,111895,2,0,P|207:194|164:203,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,113,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
170,113,112581,6,0,P|241:80|309:111,2,150,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,196,113438,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,196,113609,2,0,L|129:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,347,113952,2,0,P|150:307|239:334,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,345,114466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,345,114638,2,0,L|297:253,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,183,114981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,183,115324,6,0,L|473:173,2,150,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,134,116181,2,0,L|151:141,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,219,116524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,219,116695,2,0,L|33:226,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,298,117209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,298,117381,2,0,P|214:239|176:146,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,50,118066,6,0,B|106:35|106:35|221:54,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,100,118581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
374,86,118752,2,0,P|359:48|328:22,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,100,119095,2,0,L|298:249,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,323,119609,2,0,P|219:297|206:262,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,172,119952,2,0,L|129:186,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,200,120295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,274,120466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,280,120638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,233,120809,6,0,P|342:212|418:228,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,271,121324,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,271,121495,2,0,L|473:186,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,121838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,104,122009,2,0,L|365:189,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,268,122352,2,0,P|378:304|389:359,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,208,122866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,208,123038,2,0,B|257:185|214:185,2,75,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,267,123552,6,0,P|370:168|337:98,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,33,124066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,63,124238,2,0,L|501:49,2,75,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,122,124752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,94,124924,2,0,B|226:96|194:73|194:73|169:112|121:118,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,122,125781,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,122,125952,2,0,L|358:224,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,250,126295,6,0,P|361:285|277:238,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,95,126981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,214,127324,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,214,127666,2,0,P|156:179|240:226,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,327,128352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
439,170,128695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
381,101,128866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,133,129038,6,0,P|254:133|212:145,2,75,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,201,129552,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,233,129724,2,0,P|228:233|186:245,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,303,130238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,303,131095,2,0,P|248:230|310:108,1,225,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,86,131781,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,131866,12,0,135724,0:0:0:0:
319,226,136409,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,140,136581,2,0,P|327:126|379:129,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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P*Light feat. yukacco - Stargazer (DJ Shimamura Remix)

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