zts - WhiteBlue [Osu|Taiko] · forum

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-07-02T19:50:32+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 8월 3일 화요일 at 오전 12:16:10

Artist: zts
Title: WhiteBlue
Source: DJMAX
Tags: Portable 2 TECHIKA Trilogy KIMYS
BPM: 144
Filesize: 5419kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.8 stars, 146 notes)
Hard (4.66 stars, 260 notes)
Maximum (4.99 stars, 393 notes)
Normal (3.57 stars, 186 notes)
Taiko (4.83 stars, 748 notes)

Download: zts - WhiteBlue
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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33th map, Completed

Trance song in DJMAX Trilogy, Portable 2 and DJMAX TECHNIKA

Composed by zts
Visualized by KIMYS

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-08-02T15:16:58+00:00, edited 22 times in total.

DJNightmare

882 posts

Joined February 2009

DJNightmare 2010-07-03T14:28:06+00:00

Starred!
And heres my diff, and here i am waiting to fail once more =O

Download: zts - WhiteBlue (MoonFragrance) [Password].osu

roflninja

348 posts

Joined October 2009

roflninja 2010-07-09T20:02:38+00:00

Hi,
notes felt a early, or is it just me?

[easy + normal]
both fine, just 1 suggestion
00:54:724 (1) - start on previous tick?

i couldnt find anything else, nice map

Sanjenin Nagi

381 posts

Joined December 2009

Sanjenin Nagi 2010-07-09T20:54:47+00:00

STAR~☆

NaomiMinette

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NaomiMinette 2010-07-10T02:10:23+00:00

[Easy]
01:34:516 (3) - Line this up with (1)? If you do, fix (4) afterwards.

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
02:03:266 (3) - Move this one grid space left?
02:04:100 (6) - ^

[Maximum]
Also fine~

Sorry, but I don't do Taiko mods

Anyway, really nice map. ★~

Dotsu

996 posts

Joined March 2009

Dotsu 2010-07-10T04:48:04+00:00

Hi!
My suggestions:

[Easy]

00:14:516(1):Finish

[Normal]

01:49:933(2):New combo
02:03:266(3):^
02:14:933(6):^

[Hard]

00:47:641(5):Put this under 4
00:47:849(6):New combo
00:48:058(1):Remove new combo
01:02:849(4):Whistle
02:02:849(1,2,3),(4,5,6):Distance

[Maximum]

Circle Size + 1

Great map!

~STAR~ + ~KUDOSU STAR~

banvi

1,793 posts

Joined June 2009

banvi 2010-07-10T10:23:58+00:00

Hello

Easy
01:02:433 (2) 1 grid left (grid lv3)
02:13:683 (3,4) ^
Normal
00:47:016 (4,5) spacing error. so (5) move 1 grid up.
01:56:391 (2) 1 grid up
02:14:308 (5,6,7,8,9) spacing error XD
Hard
00:38:266 (2,3) 1 grid up
00:54:568 (1) start 00:54:724 (red tick)?
01:39:933 (1) 1 grid up
01:40:141 (2) 1 grid left
02:03:266 (3,6) 1 grid right
Maximum
00:54:568 (1) start 00:54:724 (red tick)?
01:28:474 (4) 1 grid left
01:32:432 (3,4,5) 1 grid right

verynice~
star & gl

aRiskOfRain

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Joined June 2009

aRiskOfRain 2010-07-10T10:51:22+00:00

Easy;

00:46:183 (4) - Symmetry is cool yo.
00:52:849 (4) - Left 1, down 1.

bmin11

5,438 posts

Joined October 2008

bmin11 2010-07-10T14:19:16+00:00

찾을꺼라 기대하지도 않음 솔직히

Tanmak

896 posts

Joined August 2009

Tanmak 2010-07-10T14:54:34+00:00

음..

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-07-10T16:19:52+00:00

[taiko]
nice. suggestion: Add some finishes in the first part (inrto) of the song?

[Max]
0:22:433 (5) left 1 grid
1:16:183 (3,4) unique the shape of these slider?
1:32:433 (3,4,5) right 1 grid

[hard]
0:17:849 (1) right 1 grid

nice, star~

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-07-11T08:26:48+00:00

[Easy]:

00:54:724 (1) - suggest silent or turn down the volume of this whole spinner (except the end)
02:16:243 (T) - this section should be at 02:16:183 imo.

[Normal]:

the same as Easy lol
01:47:849 (1) - reshape it with this code (search 107849 in your notepad and replace that line):
```
136,192,107849,6,2,B|197:276|320:272|378:192,2,280,2|4|6
```

[Hard]:

same as Easy

[Maximum]:

00:54:568 (1) - ahh...

star

Ra-s

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Joined May 2009

Ra-s 2010-07-11T08:52:53+00:00

Sure

4,220 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2010-07-11T17:09:11+00:00

oh my MF~
star~*

Lemon Water_old

199 posts

Joined March 2010

Lemon Water_old 2010-07-11T18:38:05+00:00

Oh dang.

STAR!

I'll mod later.

EDIT: Just some suggestions.

General
Maybe make one of the combo colors white since the song is called white blue, but it's your opinion.

Easy
00:17:433 (5) - Move one grid up. (lvl 3)
00:20:766 (4) - Move two grid down. (lvl 3)
01:29:933 (2) - Move down two grid. (lvl 3)
02:14:099 (4) - Style suggestion: This looks funny, can you move it under (2)?

Normal
02:03:683 (2) - Move one grid left. (lvl 3)
02:03:891 (3) - ^

Hard
01:51:599 (6) - Maybe make this slider face horizontally instead of diagonally.

Taiko
Fine for me.

Insane
01:37:016 (4) - Strange jump.
01:39:516 (1) - Move one grid right. (lvl 3)
01:50:090 (2) - Move two grid right and one grid up. (lvl 3)

Love the hitsounds, and it looks like I faked starred before I modded.

REAL STAR!

Last edited by Lemon Water_old 2010-07-12T00:53:29+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

DerekMcD

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Joined February 2009

DerekMcD 2010-07-12T00:34:16+00:00

*Star*

Hanyuu

2,223 posts

Joined February 2009

Hanyuu 2010-07-15T17:05:13+00:00

star !

Garven

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Garven 2010-07-16T09:59:58+00:00

Ack, sorry I took so long getting to this.
You know, just pm me if you want mods for your maps. :3

[Easy]
00:54:724 (1) - I dunno about a double spinner on an easy. I'd delete the second one and map through it.

[Normal]
No break at all in a normal? :/
Nice diff

[Hard]
Great

[Taiko]
Kind of a weird spot for the kiai section to me.
01:07:016 (5) - End this slider at 01:07:849.
01:22:016 (6) - End this slider at 01:22:433.
01:49:516 - This part onwards feels much better for kiai.

[Maximum]
Maybe increase the new combos a bit more during the .5 section. You lose about 1/3 of your health if you get all 300s.

Bah, there's nothing left to mod this far in, haha. I would recommend you find some of the taiko modders to take a look at the Taiko difficulty though. lepidopodus, arken1015, or Zekira would be a good place to start.

lepidopodus

3,548 posts

Joined November 2009

lepidopodus 2010-07-17T12:20:12+00:00

Well nice map so not much to suggest XD

Taiko
00:27:328 (x) - add k?
00:52:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dddkkkd?
01:02:849 (4) - maybe it's too quiet to put finish?
01:07:016 (5) - I think it would be better to put circle, cause circle is somewhat 'lighter' than slider.
01:19:308 (11) - k?
01:58:578 (x) - add d?
02:02:224 (12,13,14,15) - dddk?
02:15:974 (6,7,8,9) - kkkd?

Nice map, star~

Hanyuu

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Joined February 2009

Hanyuu 2010-07-17T16:35:20+00:00

hm i am not sure about the offset i use +15ms custom offset. plays more accurate for me

Diasios

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Joined August 2008

Diasios 2010-07-20T12:03:26+00:00

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• Offset: 1200 (resnap all notes)
• Remove countdown since it's unused.

Sure

4,220 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2010-07-30T18:53:53+00:00

Hanyuu wrote:
hm i am not sure about the offset i use +15ms custom offset. plays more accurate for me

huh? Is offset changed?

I feel better -12ms from current offset. (current : 1200ms)

[Maximum] & [Taiko]
Turn off countdown.

That's all. XD

Kurai

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Kurai 2010-07-31T21:21:08+00:00

:33'

Shiro

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Joined May 2009

Shiro 2010-08-01T13:21:06+00:00

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Easy:
Nothing to say.

Normal:
00:14:312 (7) - Too far from previous object.
00:44:521 (1) - Move it one grid left and up so it lines with (5) and (6) ?
00:47:437 (5) - Too far from previous object.
01:56:396 (2) - ^
01:57:438 (4) - ^

Hard:
00:56:604 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner, move it away.

Taiko:
Nice diff.

Maximum:
Won't mod.

Well, star.

mm201

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mm201 2010-08-02T04:36:59+00:00

All difficulties:

soft-hitclap.wav and soft-hitclap2.wav match the background music TOO WELL, such that I hear a strange subharmonic when I hit objects with them.
Don't make BOTH slidertick and sliderslide silent. I'd suggest the EBO slidertick.
Breaks?

Easy:

Set tick rate 2.

Normal:

00:54:729 (1) - This double spinner is inappropriate for a normal.

Hard:

Looks fine.

Taiko:

00:40:563 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not a taiko player but it seems these triplets would be confusing.

Ultimate:

02:16:292 (1) - This spinner is necessary. Just end the map at 02:16:188 - .

lepidopodus

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Joined November 2009

lepidopodus 2010-08-02T04:41:13+00:00

MetalMario201 wrote:
Taiko:
00:40:563 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not a taiko player but it seems these triplets would be confusing.

I think that's Ok for current difficulty and suit well with music. 1/6 isn't that hard for Taiko Oni, and this one doesn't have too high BPM for 1/6.

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-08-02T05:11:32+00:00

MetalMario201 wrote:
All difficulties:
soft-hitclap.wav and soft-hitclap2.wav match the background music TOO WELL, such that I hear a strange subharmonic when I hit objects with them.
- i think it's depend on speaker.
Don't make BOTH slidertick and sliderslide silent. I'd suggest the EBO slidertick.
- they are noisy @_@ it's necessary?
Breaks?
- this song is not long -about two minutes- and easy diff has break.
Easy:
Set tick rate 2.
- i think it's too insane to be easy diff

Taiko:
00:40:563 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not a taiko player but it seems these triplets would be confusing.
- as lepidon said, it's avaliable in taiko diff

others all fixed :3
thank you

Leorda

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Joined June 2009

Leorda 2010-08-02T12:01:21+00:00

Annyeonghaseyo

Your bg dimensions are fit to my laptop = ="

[General]
Combo 1 and 2 are almost same, please find it better

[Easy]
00:06:188 (4) - New combo?
01:39:938 (x) - Add note with clap?
01:43:271 (x) - ^

[Normal]
00:13:896 (6,7) - Spacing error
00:45:354 (2) - Clap at start and end?
00:47:021 (4,5) - Spacing error
00:59:937 (2) - Make symetric?
02:14:313 (5,6) - Spacing error
02:15:146 (7,8) - ^
02:15:563 (8,9) - ^

[Hard]
Fine~

[Maximum]
Fine~

Good song
STAR

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-08-02T15:19:40+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Annyeonghaseyo

Your bg dimensions are fit to my laptop = ="

[General]
Combo 1 and 2 are almost same, please find it better
- i don't think they are almost same <_<

[Easy]
00:06:188 (4) - New combo?
01:39:938 (x) - Add note with clap?
01:43:271 (x) - ^
- nah

[Normal]
00:13:896 (6,7) - Spacing error
00:47:021 (4,5) - Spacing error
02:14:313 (5,6) - Spacing error
02:15:146 (7,8) - ^
02:15:563 (8,9) - ^
- i use 1.0x distance in 8bit notes.

00:45:354 (2) - Clap at start and end?
- i don't think it's fit D: