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Savage Genius - Forever... (TV Size)

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roflninja
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roflninja
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on October-13-10 at 3:27:09 PM

Artist: Savage Genius
Title: Forever... (TV Size)
Source: Elemental Gelade
Tags: Coud Ren Cisqua Rowen Kuea Erementar Gerad Sekuyi Sallad4ever Firce777
BPM: 149
Filesize: 16201kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.59 stars, 65 notes)
  2. Firce777's Taiko (4.83 stars, 458 notes)
  3. Hard (4.68 stars, 170 notes)
  4. Normal (3.32 stars, 89 notes)
  5. Sallad's Insane (4.98 stars, 244 notes)
  6. Sekuyi's Hard (4.49 stars, 130 notes)
Download: Savage Genius - Forever... (TV Size)
Download: Savage Genius - Forever... (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
BPM 149,10 I saw 149,101.
Offset: 802

Cake
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja

Teras wrote:

BPM 149,10 I saw 149,101.
Offset: 802

Cake
Hurray for cake
Thanks once again Teras
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
Some suggestions:

Artist: Should be savage genius
Title: Should beForever... (TV Size)
Tags: Add "Erementar" and "Gerad"

Note: Be careful when you change Title and Artist fields. Check that the folder of the beatmap is named "17537 Savage Genius - Forever (TV Size)" before full submit the map, otherwise you may encounter some problems (for example submit the map as a new one and not just update it.)
roflninja
348 posts
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roflninja

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Some suggestions:

Artist: Should be savage genius
Title: Should beForever... (TV Size)
Tags: Add "Erementar" and "Gerad"
Added the tags, left the artist and title alone

Edit: Added Hard
NaomiMinette
osu! Alumni
3,916 posts
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NaomiMinette
Heya~ Modding in place of I_Tatsuo_I, so here's my mod:

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might wanna fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

[General]
Get rid of the first Kiai Timing sections for both difficulties. They're sorta random and don't fit.

[Normal]
SPOILER
* 00:11:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The current placement of the beats are really confusing here. Use something like this: ...and then something like this (yes, it's still the same combo): The shapes of the sliders on the grid are up to you.
---
* 00:15:892 (1) - Make this slider end at a white tick (00:16:898).
---
* 00:17:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - Another placement issue. Use something like this: ...and then fix the spinners after those notes: First spinner should start at 00:20:117 and end at 00:20:922 and the second spinner should start at 00:21:123 and end at 00:22:129.
---
* 00:23:940 (1) - And yet another placement issue... I think it's better if you ended this slider at 00:24:745, make a repeating slider start at 00:24:946 and end at 00:25:550 that looks like this: ...and then make the third slider start at 00:25:751 and end at 00:26:153.
---
* 00:28:166 - Add a note here?
---
* 00:29:172 (3) - Make this end on a white tick (00:29:775).
---
* 00:31:385 (2,3) - Confusing spacing; make these two into a slider instead or something.
---
* 00:32:190 (4,5) - Same as before
---
* 00:32:994 (1,2,3) - Make all three of these sliders end on a white tick. It sounds weird how they end currently.
---
* 00:45:670 (2) - This slider sounds weird... Make it like this instead: Put a circle at 00:45:670 and make the repeat slider start at 00:45:872 (make sure it still ends at 00:46:676).
---
* 00:47:381 (1) - Make this spinner start at 00:47:280 and end at 00:48:286 instead?
---
* 00:52:310 (1) - Make this end at 00:55:530 instead.
---
* 00:56:938 (1) - Do something like this instead: Put a note at 00:56:938 but make the slider start at 00:57:139 and end at 00:57:542.
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* 01:01:767 (4) - Honestly, this would sound better if you ended it at 01:01:968 then added a note at 01:02:371.
---
* 01:02:773 (5,6) - End these on white ticks...
---
* 01:10:016 (2) - Same as before
---
* 01:11:626 (4) - And again, same as before...
---
* 01:13:236 (2,3,4) - Probably would be better if you made these into a single or repeating slider. The spacing is confusing here.
---
* 01:16:053 (3) - End this on a red tick (01:16:254).
---
* 01:17:058 (5) - Better off making this just a hitcircle.
---
* 01:17:662 (1) - This sounds better if you ended it at 01:18:869 instead.
---
* 01:19:473 (3) - Make this end at 01:20:077.
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* 01:20:177 (4) - Make this start at 01:20:278 and end at 01:20:881.
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* 01:21:284 - Put a spinner here then make it end at 01:22:894?
[Hard]
SPOILER
* 00:04:021 (1) - Make this end at 00:04:624 instead.
---
* 00:05:630 (5) - Same as before...
---
* 00:20:117 (1) - Make this end at 00:20:922 instead (what is up with you wanting to end sliders/spinners on blue ticks when it doesn't sound right :o)
---
* 00:21:224 (1) - Make this start at 00:21:123 and end at 00:22:129 instead.
---
* 00:23:840 (1) - Make this start at 00:23:940 instead (make sure it still ends at 00:24:141).
---
* 00:27:964 (7) - Make this end at 00:28:367 instead?
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* 00:31:184 (3,4,5,6,7) - I'm sorry, but this cluster plain out sounds weird. Make the notes follow the vocals better.
---
* 00:32:994 (1,2,3) - Ugh... Stop ending these on blue ticks when it doesn't sound right... End them on white or even red ticks...
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* 00:41:043 (6) - I think this should be a hitcircle instead.
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* 00:42:652 (6) - ...Make this end at 00:43:256 or 00:43:457.
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* 00:44:061 (2) - Make this a hitcircle instead?
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* 00:44:866 (1) - This probably would sound better if you made a repeating slider like this: (You don't need to change where it starts and ends; just change the slider.)
---
* 00:45:872 (3,4,5) - Make these end on red ticks?
---
* 00:50:701 (6,7) - Same as before
---
* 00:51:505 (8) - Make this end on a white tick.
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* 00:52:310 (2) - End on a red tick...
---
* 00:53:517 (3) - End on a white tick...
---
* 00:57:139 (2) - End on white tick?
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* 01:00:157 (2) - Probably would be better if you put a hitcircle instead then put a note at 01:00:358.
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* 01:03:175 (4) - Judging by the previous three sliders, at LEAST stack this one properly.
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* 01:04:383 (1) - *sigh...* End on a white tick...
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* 01:10:016 (2) - End on a white tick.....
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* 01:11:928 (5) - This would sound better if you ended it on a red tick.
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* 01:14:040 (5) - End on a red tick...
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* 01:16:254 (1) - End on a red tick.....
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* 01:19:171 (2,3,4,5) - Move these back; 2 should start at 01:19:071, 3 on 01:19:272, etc.
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Add a spinner at the end like I suggested on Normal? It sounds weird where you cut this off...
Overall... you REALLY need to pay attention to where sliders/spinners start and end...
roflninja
348 posts
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Topic Starter
roflninja
Made alot of those changes (alot seemed your personal preferences but anyway)
Some of those i must have missed when i changed the offset, sorry about that
Left a few spinners alone because they would become unrankable if i did change them =/

Thanks for the Mod
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello :D
General
Hitsounds volume is big overall. Please turn down -2 ~ -3.
Normal
00:20:218 (1) start 00:20:117 (1 before white line)
00:26:556 (5) delete & (6) start silder this time?
00:34:603 (3) I think better whistle or clap than finish.
00:57:139 (2) finish 00:57:542 (1 before white line)
01:17:662 (1,2) spacing is too close.
Hard
00:38:226 (3) I think better whistle or clap than finish.
00:41:646 (3) ^
00:58:648 (1) delete
01:04:383 (1) finish 01:05:187 (1 before white line)

nicemap~
star & gl ;)
roflninja
348 posts
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roflninja
Done. Thanks for the Mod :)
NaomiMinette
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NaomiMinette

roflninja wrote:

Made alot of those changes (alot seemed your personal preferences but anyway)
Err... Sorry if it appeared that way :? Anyway, time for a recheck:

[General
Maybe an offset around 780-790 would sound better (I can't get an accurate number because I can't really hear a backbeat in the song)... Also, can you fix where the Kiai Time ends?

[Normal]
* 00:18:508 (4) - This slider sounds weird when it hits the reverse arrow...
* 00:26:556 (5,6,7) - Aren't these kinda low (the slider end and... well... the notes)?
* 00:52:310 (1) - Don't have to, but can you make this slider neater?
* 00:57:139 (2) - End on red tick?

I await for at least one more difficulty before I give you a star~
roflninja
348 posts
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Topic Starter
roflninja
Done. Thanks again Blazevoir
I'll probably start mapping a [easy] around 1am tonight when I get bored
NaomiMinette
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NaomiMinette

roflninja wrote:

Done. Thanks again Blazevoir No problem :)
I'll probably start mapping a [easy] around 1am tonight when I get bored Looking forward to it~
roflninja
348 posts
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Topic Starter
roflninja
It's only midnight, but there's easy
Kecco
908 posts
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Kecco
•Overall•
-What do you think about changing combo colours?
-I think the mp3 is not in the best quality, search another one?
-BPM 149!
-Offset : 570 ~ Resnap All Notes
-The spinners you placed on the end of the diffs are not matching. Easy and Normal have a spinner at the end different from Hard's one. Fix these spinners or make the Hard's one shorter. I suggest the first option.

•Hard•
00:02:411 (4) - New combo?
00:05:630 (5) - ^
00:34:577 (3) - Make it symmetrical?
00:36:589 (1,2) - Ugly sliders, remake them please.
00:38:601 (4) - New combo?
00:47:052 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 later.
00:50:473 (5) - New combo?
00:53:692 (3) - This slider should start 1/2 later and place a note here 00:53:491
01:17:635 (1) - Centre this?

•Normal•
Slider velocity is too high for me. Reduce it.
00:20:017 (1,1) - Those spinners are too quick for a Normal diff.
00:35:207 (1) - ^
00:47:280 (1) - ^
00:50:198 (5) - New combo?
00:52:310 (1) - Omg, switch this to a spinner?
01:04:383 (1) - This spinner is too quick for a Normal diff.
Suggestion for your next maps, remember : Normal diffs should be mapped on 1/1, also 1/2 but without exaggerating.

•Easy•
00:22:331 (5) - This slider is not matching perfectly on the previous slider, replace it.
00:28:970 (5) - Distance error.
01:04:383 (1) - This spinner is too quick for an Easy diff.
Suggestion for your next maps, remember : Easy diffs should be mapped just on 1/1, not else.

It's not a bad map, but neither good. Is this your first map?
Star~
roflninja
348 posts
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Topic Starter
roflninja
Done. Thanks Kecco
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
Hello,

[Overall]

Add colors please.

[Easy]

- 00:39:056(2) : Extend by 1 tick.
- 01:10:868(1) : Shortened by 1 tick.
- 01:11:674(x) : Add circle ?

[Normal]

- 01:20:106(4) : Spacing.

[Hard]

- 00:41:039(3) : Delete it and replace it with a circle.
- 00:46:375(3) : Spacing.


Okay, that's it.
Good luck.

Get my star.
NaomiMinette
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NaomiMinette

Kecco wrote:

Is this your first map?
You'd be wrong, lol. Look at roflninja's sig :P Anyway, 3rd recheck~

[General]
Wtf Kecco, that's a horrible offset to use. roflninja, PLEASE set it back to like 785 for all difficulties (and of course, resnap all notes).

Note: The following is according to the current offsets you used.

[Easy]
00:11:070 (1) - I dunno... Wouldn't this be a bit confusing to hit for beginners? Maybe move it a white tick forward?
00:12:882 (3) - End a white tick forward?
00:17:513 (1) - Move a white tick forward?
00:18:318 (2) - Make it start a white tick backward? (If you DO move this, make sure it still ends where it originally ended.)
00:22:345 (5) - Probably would be better if you didn't make this slider repeat and made it a long slider instead.
00:23:956 (1) - Move a white tick forward?
00:26:372 (1) - ^
00:27:781 (4) - Make this end on a white tick forward?
00:39:056 (2) - ^
00:41:674 (1) - Move this slider in the timeline (i.e. make it start at 00:41:875 and end at 00:43:486).
00:47:311 (1) - Make this end a white tick backward?
00:48:922 (1) - Make this start a white tick forward? (If you DO fix this, make sure it still ends where it originally ended.)
00:57:781 (2) - Make it start a white tick backward? (If you DO move this, make sure it still ends where it originally ended.)
01:11:674 - Add a note here?

[Normal]
00:11:039 (1) - Weird sounding slider when it hits the reverse arrows...
00:45:872 (3) - Same case as before (just that there's only one reverse arrow)
00:50:201 (1) - Well... assuming you didn't change the offset immediately, can you make this end on a red tick?
00:51:510 (3) - Again, assuming you didn't change the offset immediately, can you make this end on a white tick?
roflninja
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roflninja
Done. Thanks to both of you
NaomiMinette
osu! Alumni
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NaomiMinette
Back again. This will probably be the last time I'll mod this.

[General]
Merely a suggestion, but can you make all difficulties' Kiai Time start at 00:56:959 and end after the final spinner?

[Easy]
00:22:328 (5) - End on a white tick, either backward or forward?

Oh look what I just did. I gave you 2 different stars~
roflninja
348 posts
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roflninja
All done. Thanks alot Blazevoir :)
NaomiMinette
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NaomiMinette
You're welcome :)
Muya
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Muya
[Easy]
00:21:321 (4) 0.5grid up
00:26:556 (1.2.3.4.5) 3grid left
00:48:905 Make this slider start at 00:49:106
00:57:764 add circle , Make this slider start at 00:57:965
01:19:307 (2) 1.5 grid left 3grid up

[Normal]
01:14:678 add circle
01:14:678 (1) Make this slider start at 01:14:880

[Hard]
00:01:187 (1) remove new combo
00:02:395 (3) add new combo
00:21:221 (1) add finish?
00:35:214 (1) ^
00:43:871 (1) add whistle
roflninja
348 posts
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Topic Starter
roflninja
Done. Thanks for the Mod
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[hard]
0:28:771 (1,2,3) spacing different from before?
0:50:717 (2,3,4) add finish at the beginning of (2,4) also?
1:13:267 (2) make this symmetrical...

no spacing problems for the others...
you can try more different combinations of notes and sliders xD
anyway, star~
roflninja
348 posts
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roflninja
Done. Thanks for the Mod
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
Hi!

My Suggestions:

[General]

  • Hitsound is too noisy and no rules.
[Easy]

  • 00:12:865(3):Repeat + 1
    00:15:885(1),00:35:214(1),00:47:294(1):These spinners are too short for Easy
    00:36:623(1):Too close to the spinner
    00:51:120(3):Add finish here
    00:57:160:Kiai Time start here
    01:19:307(2):Remove finish at the end of this slider
    01:21:321(1):Finish
[Normal]

  • 00:11:053(1):Repeat - 1 and add a circle here - 00:12:463
    00:19:912(1):Spinner starts here
    00:22:329(1):Too close to the spinner
    00:34:611(3):Remove finish at the end of this slider and add it at the beginning
    00:36:624(1,2):^
    00:57:161:Kiai Time start here
    01:09:846(1):Remove finish
    01:10:048(2):Add finish at the beginning of this slider
    01:11:457(3):Remove finish
    01:11:658(4):Add finish at the beginning of this slider
    01:20:316(4):Remove finish at the end of this slider
    01:21:323(1):Finish
[Hard]

  • 00:00:583(1,2):Don't put notes before the red line
    00:21:120(1):Spinner starts here
    00:57:161:Kiai Time start here
    01:09:844(1):Remove finish
    01:10:046(2):Add finish at the beginning of this slider
    01:11:455(3):Remove finish
    01:11:657(4):Add finish at the beginning of this slider
    01:20:113(5):Remove finish at the end of this slider
    01:21:323(1):Finish
Good map!

~STAR~
Garven
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Garven
As per your request:

[General]
The mp3 is pretty low quality. Try to find a better one.
I love how I always get this picture when the vid is trying to catch up.

[Easy]
00:15:885 (1) - Whoa, that spinner is way too fast. Map something different, please.
00:22:328 (5) - It might be better to just have this start on the white tick instead of the red. It doesn't feel like it fits in this easy difficulty.
00:30:382 (1) - Get rid of the repeat and add a beat at 00:32:194 .
00:35:214 (1) - Once again, too short for an easy. Try something else.
00:47:294 (1) - ^
00:57:764 (2,3) - Eeh
01:06:824 (3,4) - Maybe end these on the red ticks to go with the vocals that you're mostly following during the kiai?

[Normal]
00:11:053 (1) - ..what is this slider trying to go with in the music?
00:15:885 (1) - Kinda goofy lookin' with those red anchor points.
00:20:013 (1,1) - What? Please, no. Do one longer spinner or map through it.
00:35:215 (1) - You really like these short spinners in easy difficulties, don't you?
00:36:624 (1,2) - The rhythm is awkward with these two.
00:47:295 (1) - Hrm...
00:52:329 (1) - Why is it that you have a great opportunity for a grand spinner, and you put a huge slider in there instead? :P
01:00:685 (2) - This should start on the blue tick.
01:01:188 (3) - This should end on the blue tick.
01:04:410 (1) - :/

[Hard]
Even though it's technically faster, the slider speeds all feel the same. This difficulty is especially cramped-feeling with so many notes on the screen at once with very little movement. Try upping the slider speed and distance snap, please.
You really should follow the vocal's rhythm instead of just doing steady eighth notes all the time. It'll give the map a bit more spice compared to doing the same drab rhythm the whole time.
I'll just leave this one kind of general in case you do respace things.

Feel free to ask for a re-mod if you decide to do the change in hard.
NaomiMinette
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NaomiMinette

impossiblexu wrote:

Don't put notes before the red line
You actually CAN put notes before the red line. It's allowed. (Heck, even the offset can be in the middle of the song and it's still allowed.)
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
Everyone just loves taking my style of mapping, chewing on it, spitting it out, stomping on it, covering it in dirt, then start argueing over who's going to eat it accidentaly knock it down a cliff where it falls into the ocean where it slowly sinks and dies.

Fine. I made alot of the changes. Though its starting to feel more and more like other peoples maps now
Garven
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Garven
You're aware that you don't have to accept any mods that people post, right? Choose the ones that you agree help make your map better and reject the ones you don't. I was simply posting how I felt about the general design - lots of circles on screen really close together overlapping a lot with very little movement and not much rhythmic variation didn't feel much in the "fun" end to me. If you disagree and you find that your design is fun, then don't bother with the changes.
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
Im aware of that. Sorry if it seems wierd. But its just when multiple people make the same/similar mods, I tend to finally fix them
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
Heyas~

Some Mods from my side^^ Of course you don't have to accept all of them. The most are just suggestions.
If you see a " - " it's a normal mod. if you see a " -- " beneath, it's a follow up to the previous mod. meaning the mods with a " -- " only can/should be done, when you did the previous, primary mod ( " - " ) first.

[Easy]
- 00:35:214 ~ (6) lengthen to white tick
- 01:06:824 ~ (3,4) shorten to red tick [supports the vocals more and sounds better]
- 01:16:086 ~ (4) ^
-- 01:17:495 ~ insert hit circle
-- 01:18:905 ~ ^

[Normal]
- 00:11:053 ~ (1) repeat point on red tick to start with the rythm you are using in this diff
-- 00:12:060 ~ insert hitcircle (stack with end of (1), so it's in perfect line from the start)
- 00:19:912 ~ (spinner) lengthen to red tick
- 00:35:215 ~ remove spinner
-- 00:34:611 ~ (3) lengthen to red tick and repeat. also place finish on beginning and end.
-- 00:36:624 ~ (1, 2) remove finish hitsound
- 00:45:886 ~ (3) whoopsy, that's 1/4 note too far. end should be the white tick ;)
- 00:50:316 ~ (1) shorten by half and start it at 00:50:517
- 01:14:376 ~ insert a hitcircle
-- 01:15:685 ~ (3) remove
-- 01:14:880 ~ (2) shorten to white tick and repeat

[Hard]
- 00:01:389 ~ (3) too early. start at white tick
- 00:56:556 ~ maybe insert hitcircle?
- 00:56:757 ~ ^
- 01:13:267 ~ (2) end together with vocals at 01:13:569
- 01:14:073 ~ (5) end together with vocals at 01:14:375
- 01:16:287 ~ (spinner) end previous red tick


Nice maps, keep it up! And have a cookie* ^^

//edit ~ Can I do a diff?^^ I couldn't hold back. Feel free to use it :D

Download: Savage Genius - Forever (TV Size) (roflninja) [Sekuyi's Hard].osu
roflninja
348 posts
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Topic Starter
roflninja
Thanks for the mod Sekuyi. Did all but 2 of those

Your dif was added :)

Also, thanks for the cookie :P
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Hi there :)
My friend told me to watched the show just because of this song :D

[General]
- don't forget to add sekuyi on the tags ;)
- add 1 second lead-in for easy and normal diff
- I think you could add more hitsound, it's still too
- generally kiai it's better to put kiai in a downbeat so you should put the kiai in 00:57:161 (2) instead

[Easy]
00:12:865 (3) - hmm..delete the repeat and shorten the slider to 00:13:670, oh and don't forget to add circle on 00:14:073 after that
00:14:476 (4) - if you insist of using 1/2 beat then its better to remove this repeat and shorten the slider to 00:15:281
00:44:878 (1) - I'm not sure, but maybe move it back to red tick ?
00:50:717 (3) - I suggest to delete 1 repeat, cause the lyric is already over after the 3rd repeat (and you even used finish on it :3)
01:17:495 (5) - whoops the lyric start on the later notes, so I think this circle is not necessary

[Normal]
00:27:765 (6) - if your following the lyric, this should be on the previous blue tick
00:28:168 (7) - and this should be on 00:27:966
00:58:772 (1) - lengthen this slider so the repeat will land on blue tick

[Sekuyi's Hard]
00:44:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - kinda trip me the first time I heard it, maybe because of the 3? oh well just inorite
00:55:348 (1,1,1,1,2) - you might have to spread this out, it's kinda hard to read because of the hitburst especially the kick slider

[Hard]
00:36:623 (1) - shouldn't this slider end on 00:37:026 (previous white tick) ?
00:37:429 (2) - ^
00:38:637 (1) - ends too early imo, how about end it on 00:40:650?
00:44:878 (1) - delete 1 repeat, and add circle on 00:45:885
00:47:093 (x) - add circle?

*sigh* I actually want to try making a diff for this, but Sekuyi make it first XD
Anyway Good Luck :)
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roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
Thanks for the mod Sallad4ever. Did most of those. Hoping to see a dif from you. I'll leave [Sekuyi's Hard] for Sekuyi for now
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
Applied the 2nd one. The last slider combo (1,2) is now better to see.

Download: Savage Genius - Forever (TV Size) (roflninja) [Sekuyi's Hard].osu
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Hi~ =)

In red maybe important, In blues suggestions

[General]
-Resize ElementalGelade.jpeg to 800x600

[Normal]
-00:19:912 (1) finish it in 00:21:724 and start this 00:22:530 (1) in 00:22:329
-00:36:221 add a circle
-Try this
SPOILER
-00:52:329 (1) try to center it

-01:16:088 (3) change it for a circle and add circles in 01:16:289 and 01:16:491
-01:19:108 add a circle

[Hard]
-00:47:294 (1) silence the finish of this spinner sounds better to me

Well nothing bad found, still I think u can improve some parts adding some circles in easy and follow rythm and not vocals.
I love this song and I have it in my "song pending for mapping", so u steal me another song for map T_T.

Star~ And good luck hoping for see this ranked like last time =)
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
K, after checked all diffs, I think the note placing is fine. You should try to improve your hitsounds, they are too random now.

and you should use Normal instead of soft imo.

place claps on the drums is a good way.

no kds for this post thx.
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
orz
Download: Insane.rar
still need a lot of mod :(
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
Thanks for the mod Astom, sorry about stealing the song =/
Added Sallads dif (if you have a preffered name tell me, called it Sallad4ever's insane for now)
And im horrible at hitsounds. Open to any suggestions on those :(
Orz-
18 posts
Joined May 2010
Orz-
:)
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
brikel
Hi~~

Um.. add no sound "soft-sliderslide.mp3" file? the silderslide sound is harsh to the ear.

[Normal]
00:59:980 (1) - reduce the end point 1/2 and
01:00:584 (2) - move 1/2 before?

[Seyuyi's Hard]
00:47:294 (1) - move the spinner's end point 1/2 before?
00:47:898 remove this timing point? you don't use it.
01:09:945 remove this timing point.

The other is mayby fine.
Good song. Star~ :)
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
I'm sure I include silent soft-sliderslide on my diff pack please use it and do a full submit :3

I forgot to tell you about this before sorry :o
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,848 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
Hi!

[General]
Set stack leniency to "always stack."

[Easy]
00:12:865 (3) - Make this slider a single white tick long and then repeat it.
00:30:382 (1) - Reduce length by a single red tick and then place it on 00:30:583
00:35:214 (6) - How about a spinner here instead?
00:52:328 (1) - Hmm...no offense, but that's an ugly slider. Try not to make the endpoint of the slider overlap with the slider itself.
00:57:764 (2) - Reduce length by a single red tick and then place it on 00:57:965

[Normal]
Nothing that hurts if left as it is, but some sliders could use a bit of retouching, like 00:15:885 (1) or 01:17:699 (1).

[Hard]
00:04:006 (1,2,3,4) - Use constant spacing.
SPOILER
00:05:617 (1,2,3,4) - ^
SPOILER
01:13:871 (3,4) - How about stacking these notes with 01:14:073 (5)
SPOILER

[Sekuyi's Hard]
Fine.

[Sallad's Insane]
OMG THIS IS BEAUTIFUL SALLAD <3




Star!
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
Thanks DJ KRZY, did all but the spinner (used to be one but to many people complained)
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • You should find a better mp3, this one is horrible imo
[Easy]

  • • 00:50:717 (3,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
Mystearica
Mystearica
Mostly ok. Following percussion here would've been nicer rhythm I think. Don't really get what some things are mapped to but I guess overall it's not a huge problem.

[Hard]

00:38:637 (1) - This slider is just odd rhythmically, end it earlier + more circles or sliders imo

[Sekuyi]

00:32:798 (1,2) - Stack these together so the mirrored 3 is more intuitive? It's not really a problem. You can leave it.

Easy and Normal are the best diffs imo :)
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
Done, thanks
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi

Mystearica wrote:

[Sekuyi]

00:32:798 (1,2) - Stack these together so the mirrored 3 is more intuitive? It's not really a problem. You can leave it. done
thanks. I had no clue what to do with them :D

Download: Savage Genius - Forever (TV Size) (roflninja) [Sekuyi's Hard].osu
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
Easy

00:32:194 (2,3) - This is just a nit pick, but this angle is a little harsh.

00:32:999 (3) - I think that this can be slightly more centered with the notes around it. Turn grid snap off and shift it around some.

Normal

00:15:885 (1) - Ugly slider.

01:04:410 (8,1,2) - I suggest that you curve 8 inward so it's pointing at note 2 and moving note 1 to the center of the screen.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16655

Sekuyi's Hard

Fine

Hard

00:38:637 (1) - Center this?

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16656

Sallad's Insane

01:22:227 (3) - New combo?

Other than that it's a really fun and well made map.


Star for this for sure.
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