Why is their a custom slider tick when there are no custom sound sections used in the song? Please remove it unless you plan to add it in.
Easy+:
Normal mod:
00:34:090 (1) - this slider would look better if the slope was more smooth
02:54:590 (2) - This slider is rather boring with the amount of repeats it has, so can you please replace it with something else
03:07:590 (2) - Since the curve does not look like the sine wave it was intended to be, the curve looks really bad, I advise you check over the anchor points to make sure it looks right
Combo mod:
00:46:590 (3) - new combo to follow the lyrics?
From this point on, it is very difficult for me to advise you on combos because you seemed to prefer longer combos as the song went on, so those combos were very inconsistent with the combos in the beginning. For example, compare 00:45:090 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) and 01:33:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6) or 00:50:590 (1,2,3,1,2) and 01:39:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6). Please decide on one way you want to add combos to your map and stick with it.
Timing section mod:
02:44:590 (1) - Because the hitsound volume changed, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings as this hitsound section but make the timing section not have kiai and be a quarter note earlier
Midget:
Normal mod:
01:26:590 (1,2,3) - these anitjumps are not used anywhere else in the song and song does not suggest using them, so please remove them
I really don't like the fact that there are 2 10+ sec breaks right next to each other, please map at least part of 1 of them
Combo mod:
Sadly I can't follow your combos too well. You seem to constantly switch between adding combos for one set of lyrics or 2 sets of lyrics, or sometimes I don't know what you are adding combos too at all. Look at the examples below
00:44:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5 probably needs a new combo
01:07:090 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - compare the first 2 combos and the second 2 combos
01:22:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - shouldn't there be at least 1 more new combo in here to follow the lyrics
Please fix these examples and come through your map to make sure your combos are consistent
Timing section mod:
02:44:590 (1) - Because the hitsound volume changed, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings as this hitsound section but make the timing section not have kiai and be a quarter note earlier
Hard:
Normal mod:
00:45:590 (4) - I would advise you move this down a bit so it doesn't touch the hp bar (it might be just the shading around the note touching the hp bar, but it still does not look that great)
00:47:840 (2) - it would be nicer looking if 4 did not partially overlap 2
01:38:840 (2,3,4,5) - this was the only time in the difficulty you used stacked sliders, so it was extremely weird for me. I avise you cahnge this pattern because this sudden change in style does not really suit the map and does not fit the song that well
01:51:340 (2) - this curve would look better if the curve was sharper
Combo mod:
01:27:340 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 00:39:340 (1)
02:04:840 (5) - new combo for new line of lyrics like your previous few combos
02:16:590 (4) - ^?
02:20:590 (6) - ^
Timing section mod:
02:44:590 (1) - same as Easy+
Krisom's Insane: (very nice slider art)
Normal mod:
00:20:340 (4) - if possible please change this pattern so 4 does not touch the next slider, though I do understnad that you do not want a jump here
02:49:340 (1) - (Nazi) place on top of 02:48:090 (9) to make it look slightly nicer
Timing section mod:
00:18:590 - move a quarter note back for the change in hitsound volume
Overall, nice mapset. Easy and Hard could have their sliders aesthetically in some places, but besides that, I didn't find any other major issue. Star.
....This is a jap version!!!
Sorry, very quick mod today, I'm really busy D: If I have some extra time I will do a re - mod for you :S
