DystopiaGround - Take my Brave · forum

Chewin

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Chewin 2015-08-24T21:38:35+00:00

meow

alacat

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3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2015-09-01T18:50:04+00:00

http://puu.sh/jWwba/40523c6ebe.zip My Normal

Chewin

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

Chewin 2015-09-02T11:35:34+00:00

Finally ty alacat <3

Easy will be made by sekai!

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2015-09-04T04:04:34+00:00

Hi!from your queue
[nao]

00:08:354 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow imo,by the way you can fix the nazi blanket
01:13:638 (5) - remove this note?compare with 01:13:297 (3,4) - not much sound on this
02:15:513 (4) - slider end add clap
02:40:399 (1,2,3) - maybe the guitar on this is 1/6,not recommend to put 1/4 here
03:29:490 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - watch out,these are 1/3

[-kevincela-'s Hard]

00:44:660 (1) - remove NC?
03:57:598 here also can add finish

[alacat's Normal]

N/A

nice song :3

Sekai

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Sekai 2015-09-04T17:26:23+00:00

Finally finished my easy, with 1.5 stars. I hope it's good enough for the set now ></

moe moe moe www

osu file format v14

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172,168,170797,2,0,P|173:225|220:272,2,120,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172160,6,0,L|424:168,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
468,240,173183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,300,173524,2,0,P|356:308|304:356,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,240,174888,6,0,P|488:196|448:80,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
388,44,175910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,108,176251,2,0,B|288:108|288:108|256:96|256:96|204:96,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,188,177615,6,0,B|380:232|380:232|380:316,1,120,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,336,178467,2,0,L|296:248,1,80,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
212,232,179149,2,0,P|160:228|96:256,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,180001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,104,180342,6,0,B|96:104|136:124|136:124|176:104|224:104,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,181365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,104,181706,2,0,B|336:104|376:124|376:124|416:104|456:104,1,160,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,182729,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,280,183070,6,0,B|364:280|364:280|296:344,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,184092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,172,184433,2,0,L|256:48,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,160,185797,6,0,L|168:280,1,120,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
84,300,186649,2,0,L|84:208,1,80,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,132,187331,2,0,P|120:88|196:80,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,188183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,75,188524,6,0,P|388:85|424:132,2,120,4|4|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,164,189888,2,0,B|344:204|344:204|376:248,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,260,190570,2,0,P|232:276|164:252,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,192,191933,2,0,P|208:152|224:72,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,132,193297,2,0,L|372:96,1,80,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,56,193979,5,4,0:0:0:0:
468,140,194320,2,0,P|476:196|436:256,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,312,195172,2,0,L|295:297,1,80,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,195854,2,0,L|221:202,1,120,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,192,196706,6,0,P|116:124|152:40,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,197729,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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392,96,199433,6,0,P|424:136|428:212,1,120,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
444,288,200285,2,0,L|360:272,1,80,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,200967,2,0,B|220:240|220:240|160:256,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
76,236,201820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,176,202160,6,0,B|218:155|218:155|301:177,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,132,203183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,88,203523,2,0,B|217:67|217:67|134:89,1,160,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
64,132,204547,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,216,204888,6,0,B|85:231|121:205|121:205|160:190|201:212,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,205910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,248,206251,2,0,L|400:352,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,207615,6,0,L|364:120,1,120,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,64,208467,2,0,P|244:56|212:68,1,80,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
136,32,209149,2,0,P|132:84|176:140,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,210001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,192,210342,6,0,B|396:192|396:192|460:220,2,120,4|4|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,276,211706,2,0,B|316:276|316:276|268:256|268:256|204:256,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,212899,2,0,P|120:96|132:32,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,213751,2,0,P|256:48|332:48,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,214433,12,4,217145,3:0:0:0:
120,192,218338,6,0,P|176:192|224:148,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,184,219189,2,0,P|328:128|392:104,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,220553,2,0,B|428:224|428:224|428:308,2,120,6|6|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,260,221917,6,0,L|208:260,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,223280,2,0,L|176:176,2,120,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,92,224644,2,0,L|400:92,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,64,226008,6,0,P|140:56|80:96,2,120,6|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,144,227371,2,0,B|161:221|161:221|126:261,1,120,4|6,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,292,228223,2,0,B|269:313|269:313|329:292,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
416,196,229246,6,0,B|416:148|416:148|404:120|404:120|404:76,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,40,230098,2,0,P|272:20|204:52,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,108,231462,2,0,L|156:180,2,120,6|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,192,232826,6,0,L|180:264,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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348,240,235553,2,0,P|364:296|428:332,2,120,4|4|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,236917,6,0,B|296:108|296:108|324:52,2,120,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,164,238280,2,0,B|208:104|208:104|180:48,2,120,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,239644,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,240155,12,0,243053,0:0:0:0:

Chewin

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Chewin 2015-10-18T10:22:23+00:00

Shit. I totally forgot this .__.
I will revive it when I will come back, thank you sekai and Sellenite! And sorry again T_T

Chewin

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Chewin 2015-11-08T12:13:58+00:00

Revived !!!!!

alacat

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alacat 2015-11-08T13:47:44+00:00

yay

Chewin

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Chewin 2015-11-08T20:42:31+00:00

will fix tags asap xd

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Chewin 2016-05-04T17:40:31+00:00

reviving for rank

alacat

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alacat 2016-05-05T03:38:14+00:00

!!!

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alacat 2016-05-05T15:43:40+00:00

quick checking for Chewin :3

Chewin wrote:
will fix tags asap xd

pls

[General]

Please add "nao" to Tags

[Easy]

AR 3 is better for playing!
Please unify Tags ~
00:51:308 (3) - try to remove a finish to the head ? It's not fit
01:44:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe you forgot to add new combos *.*
03:23:523 (3) - unsnapped at end!
01:59:490 (3) - Same as above

[Hard]

00:25:570 (3) - hmm, That finish sound is a little loud to me. try to remove or turn down the volume!
00:37:501 (2) - add a whistle to the head or tail to take guitar sounds ?
00:44:660 (1) - This part is short for new combo, i feel it's necessary
00:48:581 (2) - missing a clap to the tail ?
02:01:706 (1) - Please set the normal sampleset to the head!
02:09:717 (1) - add a finish to the head

[nao]

00:54:035 (5) - Please set the normal sampleset to the head
00:56:763 (5) - ^ if you like this patterns, pls add more !
01:06:308 (1) - missing a finish?

That's all

will shot a star!

Bonzi

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Bonzi 2016-05-05T16:02:39+00:00

d

nao

mi pare che l'offset sia un pò in ritardo. -5 a tutti i timing points suona molto meglio imo
00:50:792 (1) - perchè qui c'è un solo whistle mentre sono 2 in 01:58:803 (2) - e nessuno in 02:50:792 (1) - ? pls illuminami potrei non capire qualcosa xd
01:06:303 (1,2) - ci avrei messo qualcosina su questi, 00:58:121 (2,3) - hanno un clap nonostante credo che abbiano più o meno la stessa intensità xd
01:46:701 (1) - spostalo a x:301 y:330, ora come ora non é dritto
03:29:149 (4) - rip 1/3 drums :'(, o forse non te ne sei solo accorto perchè hai fatto copia incolla e 180 flip dell'intera sezione
xdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd?
03:30:848 (3) - ,03:38:845 (2) - , 03:39:186 (3) - , 03:40:720 (5) - , 03:41:061 (1) - , 03:42:936 (2) - , 03:43:277 (3) -, 03:44:811 (4) - , 03:45:152 (1) - , 03:46:345 (5) - , 03:47:027 (2) - e 03:48:220 (2) - non sono snappati. forse perchè hai fatto copia incolla e 180 flip dell'intera sezione
xdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd?
03:49:241 (1) - imo credo che questa sezione suonerebbe meglio se in ogni beat in cui é settato il sampleset normal ci stesse anche uni soft clap (03:49:753 (2) - , 03:50:093 (4) - , 03:50:434 (6) - , etc.) Com'è ora suona troppo debole

scusa se é short <3

Chewin

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Chewin 2016-05-06T09:13:59+00:00

alacat wrote:
quick checking for Chewin :3

Chewin wrote:
will fix tags asap xd
Fixed eheh

pls

[General]
Please add "nao" to Tags added!
[nao]
00:54:035 (5) - Please set the normal sampleset to the head nice catch, added!
00:56:763 (5) - ^ if you like this patterns, pls add more ! done here and on next ones <3
01:06:308 (1) - missing a finish?Yea, I was already gonna to ad it on 01:06:308 (1,2) - as well, thanks!!!!
That's all will shot a star! THANKS <3

Bonzi wrote:
d

nao
mi pare che l'offset sia un pò in ritardo. -5 a tutti i timing points suona molto meglio imo controllerò meglio, grazie per il timing check <3
00:50:792 (1) - perchè qui c'è un solo whistle mentre sono 2 in 01:58:803 (2) - e nessuno in 02:50:792 (1) - ? pls illuminami potrei non capire qualcosa xd perchè a differenza tua che sei un pro negli hitsounding io succhio assai <3 fixed! li ho rimossi tutti che sono brutti.
01:06:303 (1,2) - ci avrei messo qualcosina su questi, 00:58:121 (2,3) - hanno un clap nonostante credo che abbiano più o meno la stessa intensità xd fixed already mah boy
01:46:701 (1) - spostalo a x:301 y:330, ora come ora non é dritto O.O fixed
03:29:149 (4) - rip 1/3 drums :'(, o forse non te ne sei solo accorto perchè hai fatto copia incolla e 180 flip dell'intera sezione
xdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd? In realtà me ne sono accorto mentre controllavo la mod di alacat eheh il copia e incolla lo giustifico dicendo che la mappa è di 10 anni fa pft. Mappato gli 1/3, thanks <3
03:30:848 (3) - ,03:38:845 (2) - , 03:39:186 (3) - , 03:40:720 (5) - , 03:41:061 (1) - , 03:42:936 (2) - , 03:43:277 (3) -, 03:44:811 (4) - , 03:45:152 (1) - , 03:46:345 (5) - , 03:47:027 (2) - e 03:48:220 (2) - non sono snappati. forse perchè hai fatto copia incolla e 180 flip dell'intera sezione
xdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd? HOLY SHIET FIXED
03:49:241 (1) - imo credo che questa sezione suonerebbe meglio se in ogni beat in cui é settato il sampleset normal ci stesse anche uni soft clap (03:49:753 (2) - , 03:50:093 (4) - , 03:50:434 (6) - , etc.) Com'è ora suona troppo debole fighissimo, grazie!
scusa se é short <3 short ma ottima <3 Ti ringrazio awww

Thank you guys, I fixed everything! Updating :3

Electoz

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Electoz 2016-05-06T19:27:20+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

Combo colours didn't set in -kevincela-'s Hard.
Kiai's end isn't snapped.
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
1. normal-hitfinish2.wav

[Sekai's Easy]

00:37:842 (3) - Pretty sure that cymbal sound didn't land on that reverse but on 00:38:524 . A similar case applies at 01:43:297 (3) .
00:39:206 (1,2) - I think this rhythm is better cuz it feels weird to end 00:39:206 (1) on 00:39:717 where the new stanza is starting, also ending 00:40:058 (2) at 00:40:229 gives a better emphasis both vocal and instrument.
00:45:172 (3,4) - Ctrl+G is better if you're following vocal cuz this feels off when you landed a slider on 00:45:683 which isn't on vocal.
00:51:308 (3) - To me feels like that cymbal landed on either 00:51:138 or 00:51:479 .
00:52:160 (1,2,3) - 01:03:070 (1,2,3) - Kinda curious that why you're not following vocal on these places like the rest of the song. Same applies to the same places in later kiais.
01:01:876 - Feels like hitsound is missing idk.
01:31:876 (3) - This could have been started at 01:32:047 if you're following vocal.
01:44:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Okay seriously I don't know how you NC'd throughout the song but isn't this combo a bit too long?
01:50:456 (9) - Feels a bit off cuz 01:50:967 didn't land on vocal, tbh I think 1/1 rhythm works fine here.
02:07:331 (3) - You can start this on 02:07:501 if you're following vocal. Same applies to 02:59:149 (3) - 03:20:967 (3) .
02:14:831 - Auto sampleset?
02:15:513 (3) - I think it sounds better to start the slider on 02:15:683 . Like what you did on 01:07:501 (3) . Same applies to 03:07:331 (3) - 03:29:149 (3) -
02:32:388 - Map this beat? Well it's optional since the rhythm is kinda similar to 00:05:115 (1,2) .
02:49:433 (1,2) - Blanket is off.
03:23:523 (3) - Unsnapped, according to aimod.
03:55:553 - That auto-finish sounds pretty off imo.
Idk feels like you are focusing on vocal and then didn't follow vocal in some places so idk if this is intentional.

[alacat's Normal]

03:27:276 (6) - Unsnapped.
03:51:803 (1,2) - Swap NC? You NC'd here differently compared to 03:54:530 (7,1) - 03:57:258 (6,1) .
Sry I'm really bad with drums can't mod anything else ;-;

[-kevincela-'s Hard]

00:10:399 (3,4) - Well I know this is intentional for aesthetic reasons but still don't like how this was spacing equally as 00:10:570 (4,1) .
00:25:570 (3,4) - Ctrl+G? Feels a bit weird when finish is on the tail lol.
00:30:001 (4,1) - Hmm I prefer a slight increase in spacing here.
01:58:808 - Imo all hitsounding here should be removed, so it will be similar to 00:50:626 .
02:40:570 (3,4,5) - Can you make an even spacing on these?
03:14:320 - Two green lines exist at the same point.
01:13:808 (1) - 02:21:990 (4) - 03:35:611 (1) - 04:00:155 (3) - Is there any reason why you NC'd only some of these? To me they're pretty much the same tho.

~~I never good at modding higher diffs but let's try~~ nah sry I'll take my word back cuz I can't find anything.
Well anyways hope my mod helped somehow, good luck~

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Chewin 2016-05-07T10:55:16+00:00

It looks a very nice mod, thank you so much for your support and for accepting the request Electoz!

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2016-05-09T09:07:26+00:00

heya heya
passing by to drop a quick stuffs o3o

check ai mod, you got kiai unsnapped 03:12:445 - here on all diffs

[nao]
00:34:263 (1) - try arrange this more flowy like you did usually ? i think it's better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5113208
01:02:814 (7) - well why this one is the only that dont have clap on this 01:02:729 (6,7,8,9) - section xDD
02:31:195 (2,3) - missing clap ? ah anyway i recognized the whole stream part doesnt have snare drum emphasize. is this on purpose ?
03:30:172 (2) - add NC here too ? it's still 1/3 rhythm o.o
02:15:513 (4) - miss clap at end
03:04:433 (1,2,3) - this may touches hp bar
03:53:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - combos might too long considered the previous section that spamming NC
03:59:729 (1,2,3,1) - bigger jumps pls lmao

[Hard]
inconsistent combo colours error
00:21:479 (1) - 00:48:581 (2) - 01:31:365 (6) - 03:38:848 (2) - 03:31:024 (3) - etc, missing clap
02:31:024 (1) - hmm try covering more drum ? using 1/2 jumps here looks good with the atmosphere
02:50:797 (1) - remove NC ? they're 2 single nc atm
03:14:320 - two timing point exist at the same time

[neko]
check ai mod for unsnapped stuff
01:13:297 (5) - there's no snare stuff on the bgm, remove clap ? same for 03:33:751 (2) -
01:35:115 (5) - add clap at reverse point , 03:59:644 (5) - same
03:46:349 (1,2) - make this stacked ? somehow 03:46:349 (1,2,3) - doesn't look very pretty

[world]
AR 3 to keep the spread with normal diff
01:44:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - isn't this combo is too long ? lol
00:58:467 (2) - might be easier if this be a note and u start 3/2 from 00:58:808 -
01:43:297 (3) - end this at the white tick ? its pretty weird now with that finish tbh
03:34:433 (1) - eeehhh need more recovery time ? i recommend break instead

good map, good luck guys :3

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Chewin 2016-05-09T09:34:08+00:00

Thank you, I will fix all today :3

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alacat 2016-05-09T14:37:14+00:00

fixed everything! Thanks, Electoz and Mochi

http://puu.sh/oLG4X/8b7d88aa99.zip

Chewin

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Chewin 2016-05-10T08:56:46+00:00

High fixed timing in all diff (I hope..) and fixed everything from your mod, momochi!
Thank you guys for your support

EDIT: 1 year has passed from this beatmap submit <3

Sekai

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Sekai 2016-05-10T12:34:49+00:00

Sorry for the delay Chewin ></

Finally got the time to update the diff =w=/

Also don't forget to add "Sekai-nyan" and "Sekaii" to the tags, just in-case you forgot www

Sekai is bakai wwww

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Take My Brave.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51308
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 76706,84717,142160,152899,181706,203183,217145
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Take my Brave
TitleUnicode:Take my Brave
Artist:DystopiaGround
ArtistUnicode:DystopiaGround
Creator:Chewin
Version:Sekai's Easy
Source:
Tags:nao The Epilogue -kevincela- kevincela alacat Sekai-nyan Sekai
BeatmapID:820994
BeatmapSetID:310811

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
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[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,76729,83212
2,142184,151394
2,214457,216915
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 0,128,64
Combo3 : 255,128,0
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168,160,185792,6,0,L|168:280,1,120,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
84,300,186644,2,0,L|84:208,1,80,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,132,187326,2,0,P|120:88|196:80,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,188178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,75,188519,6,0,P|388:85|424:132,2,120,4|4|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,164,189883,2,0,B|344:204|344:204|376:248,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,260,190565,2,0,P|232:276|164:252,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,192,191928,2,0,P|208:152|224:72,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,132,193292,2,0,L|372:96,1,80,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,56,193974,5,4,0:0:0:0:
468,140,194314,2,0,P|476:196|436:256,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,312,195167,2,0,L|295:297,1,80,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,195849,2,0,L|221:202,1,120,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,192,196701,6,0,P|116:124|152:40,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,197724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,76,198065,2,0,B|300:96|308:120|308:120|296:148|296:148|296:196,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,96,199428,6,0,P|424:136|428:212,1,120,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
444,288,200280,2,0,L|360:272,1,80,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,200962,2,0,B|220:240|220:240|160:256,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
76,236,201815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,176,202155,6,0,B|218:155|218:155|301:177,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,132,203178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,88,203518,2,0,B|217:67|217:67|134:89,1,160,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
64,132,204542,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,216,204883,6,0,B|85:231|121:205|121:205|160:190|201:212,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,205905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,248,206246,2,0,L|400:352,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,207610,6,0,L|364:120,1,120,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,64,208462,2,0,P|244:56|212:68,1,80,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
136,32,209144,2,0,P|132:84|176:140,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,209996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,192,210337,6,0,B|396:192|396:192|460:220,2,120,4|4|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,276,211701,2,0,B|316:276|316:276|268:256|268:256|204:256,1,160,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,212894,2,0,P|120:96|132:32,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,213746,2,0,P|256:48|332:48,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,218355,6,0,P|176:192|224:148,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,184,219207,2,0,P|328:128|392:104,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,220570,2,0,B|428:224|428:224|428:308,2,120,6|6|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,260,221934,6,0,L|208:260,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,223297,2,0,L|176:176,2,120,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,92,224661,2,0,L|400:92,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,64,226025,6,0,P|140:56|80:96,2,120,6|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,144,227388,2,0,B|161:221|161:221|126:261,1,120,4|6,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,292,228240,2,0,B|269:313|269:313|329:292,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
416,196,229263,6,0,B|416:148|416:148|404:120|404:120|404:76,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,40,230116,2,0,P|272:20|204:52,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,108,231479,2,0,L|156:180,2,120,6|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,192,232843,6,0,L|180:264,2,120,4|4|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,156,234207,2,0,P|424:192|436:256,2,120,2|4|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,240,235570,2,0,P|364:296|428:332,2,120,0|4|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,236934,6,0,B|296:108|296:108|324:52,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,164,238297,2,0,B|208:104|208:104|180:48,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,239661,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,240172,12,0,243070,0:0:0:0:

Chewin

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Chewin 2016-05-14T10:30:21+00:00

It's ok, I will update asap, thanks sekai!

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Chewin 2016-05-19T12:19:11+00:00

Updated c: Waiting for Satellite's mod

Satellite

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Satellite 2016-05-31T12:38:43+00:00

[General]

Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms : normal-hitfinish2.wav
all diff remove WidescreenStoryboard check.

[Sekai's Easy]

00:37:837 (3,1,2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this
01:31:871 (3) - same as above.
01:43:292 (3,1,2,3) - same as above.
02:07:326 (3,4) - same as above.
02:15:677 (3,4) - same as above.
02:59:144 (3,4) - same as above.
03:07:496 (3,4) - same as above.
03:20:962 (3,4) - same as above.

[alacat's Normal]

00:58:121 (2,3) - 何もhitsoundがないのはさびしいかも？Insaneにあわせてclapとかどうでしょう？
02:06:303 (2,3) - ^
02:58:121 (2,3) - 03:19:940 (2,3) - ^

[-kevincela-'s Hard]

Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped : 03:35:611 and 03:35:696 and 03:37:145

[nao]

Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped : 03:13:979 and 03:35:696 and 03:58:792

alacat

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alacat 2016-06-02T08:07:38+00:00

added clap hitsounds!! Thanks modding

http://puu.sh/pdKiQ/37baaa6819.zip

Sekai

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Sekai 2016-06-04T05:15:24+00:00

Chewin, please fix the diff for me. I'm so busy right now ></

Sorry and thanks! ;w;

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Chewin 2016-06-06T07:59:04+00:00

Ok Sekai <3 I will check asap!

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2016-06-15T06:24:38+00:00

Helloo~
Is this supposed to back grave again?
Sugestion,

General

Are you sure about the timing? umm so far the song pretty constant to me, I think no need multiply red lines or at least some can be reduced
Hitsound file normal-hitfinish2.wav might have delay >5ms which is unrankable

Nao

There's several unsnapped green lines that may affect your gameplay (03:13:979 - , 03:35:696 - , 03:58:792 -) especially the slow sv on this one 03:13:974 (1) -
00:21:644 (4) - That extended slider play weird, imo thats not a good way to highlight the vocal or instrument
00:51:474 (1,3) - Are you sure they are supposed on 1/8? yet you use 1/4 on here 00:50:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - which have same electronic sound
01:59:655 (1,3) - , 02:51:474 (1,3) - and 03:13:633 (7) - Same as above, you sure they are supposed to be on 1/8
02:21:815 (5,1) - Spacing on (1) can be emphsized more imo, due to strong beat on big tick, not sure why you put that so close to (5)
03:29:996 (1,2) - I believe they supposed to be snapped on 1/6 due to drum sequences on 03:29:315 (1,1,1) - not sure why those two on 1/4 instead
03:35:302 (2) - Better be snapped here 03:35:250 - on red tick instead imo, because the beat on big tick here 03:35:302 - a bit too late
03:53:184 (1) - Umm thats not really comfortable to play a bit confusing tbh, maybe you can rearrange into http://puu.sh/ptisX/4dacc14e44.jpg ?

Kevincela Hard

There's several unsnapped green lines that may affect your gameplay (03:35:696 - and 03:37:145 -)
00:56:758 (2,3) - Ctrl+g that one? due to vocal, the slider supposed to be clicked on here 00:56:757 - so the rhythm more reasonable to hear
02:00:336 (1) - Slider end not snapped properly
02:04:940 (2,3) - 02:56:758 (2,3) - and 03:18:576 (2,3) - Same as above, try to ctrl+g that one
02:50:792 (1) - Delete nc? make it consistent on your nc patterning on previous 02:49:428 (1,2,1,2,1) -
03:35:302 (2) - Better be snapped here 03:35:250 - on red tick instead imo, because the beat on big tick here 03:35:302 - a bit too late
03:48:411 (2,1) - Try to avoid a complete stacked on them, slider path (1) a bit unclear while testplay, try this http://puu.sh/ptj20/c9fcc389a6.jpg ?
03:51:990 (6,1) - Also ctrl+g? for long piano sound

Alacat Normal

02:46:700 - Missing clap I guess, your hitsound a bit empty there
03:51:820 (7,1) - Umm actually your rhythm choice on that one a bit weird imo, I think they better be like this http://puu.sh/ptjl5/8297bfb483.jpg , so at least the big tick is more clickable. There's several rhythm like that 03:54:547 (7,1) - and 03:57:275 (6,1) - .

Btw I'm not the best person on distinguish snapping, so better find a second opinion on them might be good, but so far some of your snapping on nao is a bit questionable to me :p

Good luck

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Chewin 2016-06-21T20:01:39+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Helloo~
Is this supposed to back grave again?
Sugestion,

General
Are you sure about the timing? umm so far the song pretty constant to me, I think no need multiply red lines or at least some can be reduced Removed one, it should be nice now idk
Hitsound file normal-hitfinish2.wav might have delay >5ms which is unrankable fixed lol
Nao
There's several unsnapped green lines that may affect your gameplay (03:13:979 - , 03:35:696 - , 03:58:792 -) especially the slow sv on this one 03:13:974 (1) - already fixed
00:21:644 (4) - That extended slider play weird, imo thats not a good way to highlight the vocal or instrument fixed
00:51:474 (1,3) - Are you sure they are supposed on 1/8? yet you use 1/4 on here 00:50:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - which have same electronic sound actually i think it emphasize more the kiai that is coming!
01:59:655 (1,3) - , 02:51:474 (1,3) - and 03:13:633 (7) - Same as above, you sure they are supposed to be on 1/8
02:21:815 (5,1) - Spacing on (1) can be emphsized more imo, due to strong beat on big tick, not sure why you put that so close to (5) fixed
03:29:996 (1,2) - I believe they supposed to be snapped on 1/6 due to drum sequences on 03:29:315 (1,1,1) - not sure why those two on 1/4 instead it was an 1/4 stream before but I fixed a wrong pattern so I kept the 1/4 rhythm with sliders
03:35:302 (2) - Better be snapped here 03:35:250 - on red tick instead imo, because the beat on big tick here 03:35:302 - a bit too late this is so dumb imo :\ actually red tick is snapped there to fill the vocal
03:53:184 (1) - Umm thats not really comfortable to play a bit confusing tbh, maybe you can rearrange into http://puu.sh/ptisX/4dacc14e44.jpg ? it's easy readable! And your pattern would destroy the flow I wanted to make there T_T
Kevincela Hard
There's several unsnapped green lines that may affect your gameplay (03:35:696 - and 03:37:145 -) fixed
00:56:758 (2,3) - Ctrl+g that one? due to vocal, the slider supposed to be clicked on here 00:56:757 - so the rhythm more reasonable to hear nice catch, fixed it
02:00:336 (1) - Slider end not snapped properly fixed sorry!
02:04:940 (2,3) - 02:56:758 (2,3) - and 03:18:576 (2,3) - Same as above, try to ctrl+g that one tried to fix in the best way to don't break the flow
02:50:792 (1) - Delete nc? make it consistent on your nc patterning on previous 02:49:428 (1,2,1,2,1) -
03:35:302 (2) - Better be snapped here 03:35:250 - on red tick instead imo, because the beat on big tick here 03:35:302 - a bit too late
03:48:411 (2,1) - Try to avoid a complete stacked on them, slider path (1) a bit unclear while testplay, try this http://puu.sh/ptj20/c9fcc389a6.jpg ? it's fine in this way already
03:51:990 (6,1) - Also ctrl+g? for long piano sound it actually fits best in this way because of drum emphasize
Alacat Normal
02:46:700 - Missing clap I guess, your hitsound a bit empty therefixed
03:51:820 (7,1) - Umm actually your rhythm choice on that one a bit weird imo, I think they better be like this http://puu.sh/ptjl5/8297bfb483.jpg , so at least the big tick is more clickable. There's several rhythm like that 03:54:547 (7,1) - and 03:57:275 (6,1) - . you are actually right but if you listen on 03:54:889 (1) - and 03:57:616 (1) - you can hear some clash in the cymbals there! I think alacat wants to keep the same pattern in both 3 spots to make it consistent with previous 3 ones
Btw I'm not the best person on distinguish snapping, so better find a second opinion on them might be good, but so far some of your snapping on nao is a bit questionable to me :p

Good luck

Thank you for the very nice mod ^^ Updated everything!

Satellite

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Satellite 2016-07-14T12:57:07+00:00

recheck and looks fine to me. so bubbled :3

To next BN
please double check nao diff
00:51:474 (1,2,3,4) - 01:59:655 (1,2,3,4) - 02:51:474 (1,2,3,4) -
There is no problem in test play , However, I was interested in some diff spread with the Hard diff.

Good luck :p

Chewin

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Chewin 2016-07-15T11:31:59+00:00

Thank youu <33

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Chewin 2016-07-15T16:52:36+00:00

I hope someone will check this before it goes in grave.

Gero

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Gero 2016-07-16T20:14:12+00:00

Hello Chewin.

General

As I've mentioned this to you in the game, I think your timing isn't quite right at all, since you've placed the timing just an earlier beat than where it should be, because if you listen the beats into the background music, you could realize that just right here 00:06:132 - and here 00:06:814 - so if you look at the timing that you currently have, you can see that these claps are in red ticks when in fact the beats goes from white ticks, therefore, I'd would recommend you to use these red lines that fix the problem, don't forget to resnap all notes and put everything on the site where it belongs, (Checked and confirmed with some BNs already.)
```
[TimingPoints]
337,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
215080,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
215628,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
217162,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
218525,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
```

Sekaii's Easy

01:23:263 - I'm pretty sure that this manual break is unnecesary in this difficulty, remove it.
02:31:359 - Same as above.

00:39:201 (1,2) - This rhythm is bothering me a little bit, the sudden change between voice and music is quite strange and a little difficult to read for inexperienced players, so something like this would fit better.

alacat's Normal

♥

-kevincela-'s Hard

03:29:315 (2) - It's not a big deal, but it's unsnapped by 1 ms.

nao

01:13:633 (5) - There is no sound in this note, so I'd recommend to remove it and moving the previous note in this way to make an anti-jump with the next slider, it works just fine, try it.
02:40:393 - If I'm not wrong, this supposed to be 1/6, how about to replace that triple by 1/6 repeat slider? it follows the music in a better way in my opinion.
03:29:996 (1,2) - Those two sliders are not 1/4, check Kevin's difficulty because he used the correct rhythms at this part.
03:58:809 (3) - I know what you tried to do here, but I think that would be a lot better if you change it by another rhythm, since the next triple after that slow slider, it flows kinda weird that's why I'm suggesting you to change that by something else.

I won't pop your bubbled, but after the timing changes you should ask to the previous BN to restore it, call me back.

Last edited by Gero 2016-07-22T19:17:42+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Chewin

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Chewin 2016-07-16T20:45:48+00:00

Gero wrote:
I'll check this tomorrow.

Remember that maps with bubble can't go to graveyard even if already passed the month.

I didn't know it! In past bubbled maps could go in grave with getting popped (if I'm not wrong).
Thank you so much Gero, I appreciate it <3~

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Chewin 2016-07-22T19:56:04+00:00

Gero wrote:
Hello Chewin.

General
As I've mentioned this to you in the game, I think your timing isn't quite right at all, since you've placed the timing just an earlier beat than where it should be, because if you listen the beats into the background music, you could realize that just right here 00:06:132 - and here 00:06:814 - so if you look at the timing that you currently have, you can see that these claps are in red ticks when in fact the beats goes from white ticks, therefore, I'd would recommend you to use these red lines that fix the problem, don't forget to resnap all notes and put everything on the site where it belongs, (Checked and confirmed with some BNs already.)
[TimingPoints]
337,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
215080,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
215628,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
217162,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
218525,340.909090909091,4,2,2,60,1,0
It should be fine now, thanks!
Sekaii's Easy

01:23:263 - I'm pretty sure that this manual break is unnecesary in this difficulty, remove it.
02:31:359 - Same as above. no need to map those parts

00:39:201 (1,2) - This rhythm is bothering me a little bit, the sudden change between voice and music is quite strange and a little difficult to read for inexperienced players, so something like this would fit better. I probably forgot to fix this o.o thanks!
alacat's Normal

♥
-kevincela-'s Hard

03:29:315 (2) - It's not a big deal, but it's unsnapped by 1 ms. it is, actually xD Fixed!
nao

01:13:633 (5) - There is no sound in this note, so I'd recommend to remove it and moving the previous note in this way to make an anti-jump with the next slider, it works just fine, try it. I don't like this kind of antijumps zzz sorry I want to keep this xp
02:40:393 - If I'm not wrong, this supposed to be 1/6, how about to replace that triple by 1/6 repeat slider? it follows the music in a better way in my opinion. nice catch, i fixed in a cool way (i hope)
03:29:996 (1,2) - Those two sliders are not 1/4, check Kevin's difficulty because he used the correct rhythms at this part. fixed
03:58:809 (3) - I know what you tried to do here, but I think that would be a lot better if you change it by another rhythm, since the next triple after that slow slider, it flows kinda weird that's why I'm suggesting you to change that by something else.it should be nice now xp
I won't pop your bubbled, but after the timing changes you should ask to the previous BN to restore it, call me back.