Nanjo Yoshino - Tasogare no Starlight · forum

Maboyu

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Maboyu 2015-05-09T01:04:27+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年9月14日 at 上午 12:33:57

Artist: Nanjo Yoshino
Title: Tasogare no Starlight
Source: グリザイアの楽園
Tags: - LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA - Opening grisaia no rakuen IamkwaN
BPM: 152
Filesize: 16251kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.54 stars, 89 notes)
Hard (3.19 stars, 198 notes)
KwaN's Insane (3.84 stars, 301 notes)
KwaN's Normal (1.83 stars, 129 notes)

Download: Nanjo Yoshino - Tasogare no Starlight
Download: Nanjo Yoshino - Tasogare no Starlight (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6 グリザイアの楽園 opening

Easy By Me 100%

Normal By IamKwaN 100%

Hard By Me 100%

Insane By IamKwaN 100%
video and BG by Shad0w1and

If downloading before 2015/8/31,please redownload !

Last edited by Maboyu 2015-09-13T16:34:40+00:00, edited 32 times in total.

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2015-05-16T04:06:44+00:00

备选BG

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-06-20T05:43:10+00:00

終於做好了
http://puu.sh/jc91p/b80be210c2.rar

Karen

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Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-09-04T10:52:13+00:00

General

為啥artist不是南條愛乃

Easy

00:15:714 (2,1) - 我覺得Easy用這節奏不太好。。建議把前面那個滑條拉成折返，然後00:16:701 - 這裡放圈
00:17:095 (2) - 讓滑條停在00:17:490 - 這裡更好，因為紅tick那裡沒音

Normal

00:17:490 - 為啥你們倆都不跟這個音o_O
00:38:411 (1,2) - 我覺得直接一個滑條就可以了，中間紅tick那裡沒必要跟==

Hard

00:06:635 - 這裡漏掉感覺挺奇怪的，建議加個圈
00:07:326 (3) - 這裡白線開始overmap三連特別不合曲，00:07:523 - 這裡有個很明顯的音，在這三連比較好，跟kwan的insane一樣
00:09:793 - 我覺得這音挺重要的，因為是後面重音的前面一個音，這裡跟了能更好的表現後面的重音，所以我覺得不漏比較好
00:11:372 - ^
00:48:674 (5,6) - 這裡overlap應該不是故意的吧，因為前面00:45:516 (5,6,5,6) - 這裡都沒有這樣做

Insane

00:19:365 (5) - 雖然這裡背景有音但是那個音我覺得純粹是用來裝飾的，這裡人聲很平和，這個note顯得有些overdone。
00:28:938 (1,2,3) - 這三聲沒什麼區別，我覺得用同一個梗比較好，推薦這樣：
SPOILER
00:34:464 (3,4) - 有些無聊，因為是滑條所以可以試試多樣一點的flow（其實是我個人不喜歡00:34:859 (4,1) - 這樣的flow233），比如
SPOILER
01:09:793 (6,1) - 後面那個是重音感覺不隔開好坑==
01:12:753 (3,5) - 這裡跟這兩個vocal做1/4滑條比較合適的樣子
01:20:056 (3,1) - 這兩個疊一起不太好玩，試試01:20:253 (1,2) - ctrl+g
摸KwaN's Insane真他媽三生有幸！

南條好萌，唱不准233
夠12sp可以喊我o_O

EDIT: 忘了查圖233
TAG里加 Iamkwan (x
KwaN's Normal: 00:44:727 - 雙綠線

Last edited by Karen 2015-09-04T11:00:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-09-04T10:54:30+00:00

夠了
[N]
00:17:095 (3) - 因為這是連貫的四個鼓點懶得拆了
00:38:411 (1,2) - 我用1/2的原因是表現中間 00:38:510 - 1/4的密度
雙綠線刪了

[I]
00:19:365 (5) - ok
00:28:938 (1,2,3) - ok
00:34:464 (3,4) - 這flow我抄的yf 鼠標玩的蠻好 233
01:09:793 (6,1) - NC了不是日本流只能這樣坑了自己聽音樂況且我這種overlap一半的都是3/4間隔不信你看看 o_O
01:12:753 (3,5) - 跟我講人聲的去死吧 >:[
01:20:056 (3,1) - ok
摸KwaN's Insane真他媽三生有幸！ ok >:[

I

osu file format v14

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Maboyu

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Topic Starter

Maboyu 2015-09-04T13:28:03+00:00

Karen wrote:
General
為啥artist不是南條愛乃改了:3

Easy
00:15:714 (2,1) - 我覺得Easy用這節奏不太好。。建議把前面那個滑條拉成折返，然後00:16:701 - 這裡放圈 Good idea改了!
00:17:095 (2) - 讓滑條停在00:17:490 - 這裡更好，因為紅tick那裡沒音好!
Hard
00:06:635 - 這裡漏掉感覺挺奇怪的，建議加個圈好! 加了!
00:07:326 (3) - 這裡白線開始overmap三連特別不合曲，00:07:523 - 這裡有個很明顯的音，在這三連比較好，跟kwan的insane一樣
這邊的話我刪00:07:326 (3)，後面那個不3連!
00:09:793 - 我覺得這音挺重要的，因為是後面重音的前面一個音，這裡跟了能更好的表現後面的重音，所以我覺得不漏比較好我想讓這邊稍微停頓XD 想了蠻久的QAQ
00:11:372 - ^ ^
00:48:674 (5,6) - 這裡overlap應該不是故意的吧，因為前面00:45:516 (5,6,5,6) - 這裡都沒有這樣做故意的>.<

南條好萌，唱不准233
夠12sp可以喊我o_O

EDIT: 忘了查圖233
TAG里加 Iamkwan (x 以補上!
謝謝Ren呀>.<

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2015-09-04T14:35:58+00:00

Regarding to the Source, please use 'グリザイアの楽園', put '- LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA -' to the Tags.
http://puu.sh/jZEt0/70a95331cc.png from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xzH_4ZF07iY
http://puu.sh/jZEp6/14687241ec.jpg from http://www.at-x.com/search/keyword?aird ... 92&x=0&y=0
http://puu.sh/jZE71/c989a97cc8.png

Karen

2,864 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-09-04T14:46:01+00:00

Good map!
Bubbled!~

Karen

2,864 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-09-05T13:25:56+00:00

sorry but there are still some issues need to be fixed:

Easy:
00:00:517 (1,1) - 这里起码要隔四拍（四条白线）
01:19:464 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 这里连续1/2节奏有些太多了，建议简化些

sorry for inconvenience. ;_;
call me for a rebubble after this

EDIT: Rebubbled

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2015-09-13T02:15:15+00:00

Random check

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

None.

[Easy]

1/4折返在Easy有點偏難..而且這些節奏跟Normal diff完全相同，強烈要求簡化節奏，以下:
00:14:135 (1,2) - 扣折返
00:46:306 (2) - 扣去折返
00:49:464 (2) -同上
01:09:990 (1,2) - 這在Easy真的太難了也是要扣折返

[KwaN's Normal] 雖然說不要看星數，好像做得有點簡單

Kiai的finish有點小聲尤其是第一段
00:17:095 (3) - 縮成1拍滑條然後後面加個note看看?
00:42:951 (3) - 拆成像00:41:766 (1,2) - 如何

[Hard] 跟上面Normal方法選一個，把這個CS大小降成3.5取CS平衡，然後星數變成3.19了，最快方法

有些應該是故意沒疊好?
00:45:023 (3) - 不太明顯可以去掉，君媽也沒加
01:24:003 (6) - 看看可不可以1/4滑條，這一段連續note在Hard diff有些難啊

[KwaN's Insane]

01:12:359 (1,2) - 交換NC，聲音起頭為新的New combo較適合。

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2015-09-13T03:31:18+00:00

[N]

00:08:411 (4,5,6,7) -
00:15:714 (2,1) -
00:46:306 (2) -
01:04:266 (2,3) -
01:19:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:22:622 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -

以上這些都是為了加難而放的節奏所以我不同意這Normal很簡單的說法

00:17:095 (3) - 縮成1拍滑條然後後面加個note看看? 我回ren的摸時說了不想拆這四個連續的鼓點
至於finish 跟insane的音量一樣也沒改

小船, 關於Hard:

00:57:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這真心已經夠難
01:09:990 (1,2) - ^
01:24:003 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

感覺沒有必要為了那無謂的星數調CS

另外水摸了點Hard

00:06:339 (3) - 肉眼看出前後DS不同就算ctrl+G 00:06:339 (3) - DS也不一致
00:27:359 (3) - CTRL+J 跟00:26:569 (2) - 做個blanket好像美觀點
00:31:503 (3,4) - 跟 00:36:438 (3,1) - 的manual stack幅度不同
00:48:674 (5,6) - 沒疊好
00:53:411 (3,1) - 突然的manual stack不整潔建議跟00:51:043 (1,2) - 一樣perfect stack
01:11:470 (1) - 延長至01:12:753 - ?

I

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Maboyu

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Topic Starter

Maboyu 2015-09-13T07:10:24+00:00

船爺!

smallboat wrote:
Random check

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
None.
[Easy]
1/4折返在Easy有點偏難..而且這些節奏跟Normal diff完全相同，強烈要求簡化節奏，以下:
00:14:135 (1,2) - 扣折返以修改!
00:46:306 (2) - 扣去折返以修改!
00:49:464 (2) -同上 ^
01:09:990 (1,2) - 這在Easy真的太難了也是要扣折返以修改!

[Hard]
跟上面Normal方法選一個，把這個CS大小降成3.5取CS平衡，然後星數變成3.19了，最快方法 CS就不變了!
有些應該是故意沒疊好?
00:45:023 (3) - 不太明顯可以去掉，君媽也沒加好刪
01:24:003 (6) - 看看可不可以1/4滑條，這一段連續note在Hard diff有些難啊好!
感謝船爺!><

駿馬

IamKwaN wrote:
另外水摸了點Hard
00:06:339 (3) - 肉眼看出前後DS不同就算ctrl+G 00:06:339 (3) - DS也不一致改了
00:27:359 (3) - CTRL+J 跟00:26:569 (2) - 做個blanket好像美觀點這個就不改了!QAQ
00:31:503 (3,4) - 跟 00:36:438 (3,1) - 的manual stack幅度不同 fixed
00:48:674 (5,6) - 沒疊好 fixed
00:53:411 (3,1) - 突然的manual stack不整潔建議跟00:51:043 (1,2) - 一樣perfect stack fixed
01:11:470 (1) - 延長至01:12:753 - ? 好!
謝駿馬!!!>.<