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iroha feat. Kagamine Rin/NicoNico Chorus - Meltdown
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[Skin]
Is it me, or does the slider nuke look like it's spinning the wrong direction?
[Easy]
Yar.
Some of the linear sliders were kind of weird, but not enough to care.
[Lighter]
Nice
[Hard]
I'm not digging all those whistle sounds, but whatever.
00:43:723 (4) - Make it perty like this.
02:17:905 (5) - Extend this slider to 02:19:541 and silence the end. If going with only vocal, then leave it.
[Insane]
Weird getting the custom clap on this diff only...
02:18:087 (1) - Extend this slider to 02:19:541 and silence the end. If going with only vocal, then end at 02:19:360.
Nice set of maps. Nothing to pick at, really. G'yorb.
[Skin]
Is it me, or does the slider nuke look like it's spinning the wrong direction?
[Easy]
Yar.
Some of the linear sliders were kind of weird, but not enough to care.
[Lighter]
Nice
[Hard]
I'm not digging all those whistle sounds, but whatever.
00:43:723 (4) - Make it perty like this.
02:17:905 (5) - Extend this slider to 02:19:541 and silence the end. If going with only vocal, then leave it.
[Insane]
Weird getting the custom clap on this diff only...
02:18:087 (1) - Extend this slider to 02:19:541 and silence the end. If going with only vocal, then end at 02:19:360.
Nice set of maps. Nothing to pick at, really. G'yorb.
Used many suggestions (including soft finishes and claps, along with adding my own since I had never finished hitsounding the verses anyway. Thanks for helping and for giving me the motivation to finish. XPKrisom wrote:
Hitsounding here is really weird IMO ._. o-o;
Reduce the slidertick? I like the faster pace with slidertick 2 on my diff, so I'd like to keep that. ):
Some timing sections (such as 01:10:996) seem unused here ouran forgot to put my normal-slidertick into the folder. x_x
@ouran: Please credit Shinde for the spinner circle and spinner approach circle. O: and me for the rest maybe ;3
Also, I JUST noticed that each chorus has a lead in measure that's only two beats long. Thus, the osu! metronome gets screwed up. I really recommend adding an uninherited section at both 69,177ms and 141,177ms to fix this. No resnapping or anything of the like should be needed since the actual offset isn't being changed.
Allllso.. why does Seymour's diff (this is a reminder to rename it to include his name) have an extra uninherited timing section? Delete that and resnap please.
Don't forget to add in my custom hitsound (it's in the .zip I PM'd you the other day).
Offset feels like it's 5-7ms late, but I was going to try and find a better quality mp3, so I guess the offset can wait for now. (Though if you decide to change it, remember to change the 2nd and 3rd offsets I mentioned above as well).
Download: NicoNico ChorusKagamine Rin - Meltdown (ouranhshc) [Derekku's Lighter].osu
Not usually a fan of vocaloid songs, but this one is pretty good. ^_^
Anyway, here's my mod:
Yellow = Hitsounds
Green = Timing/Beat Placement
Red = Snapping/Spacing
Blue = Misc/Suggestion
Purple = Skin related
Anyway, here's my mod:
Yellow = Hitsounds
Green = Timing/Beat Placement
Red = Snapping/Spacing
Blue = Misc/Suggestion
Purple = Skin related
Krisom's Easy:
00:13:541(2) and 00:14:268(4) - Maybe make these line up with the ends of your 00:11:723 (1) and 00:14:632 (1) sliders more?
00:46:632(1) - I'm not sure on this one, but are sliders that overlap like this allowed? Change if needed.
01:04:086 (1) - This slider shape looks a little lopsided to me, maybe you can move the top-left point over to the right 1-2 spaces?
Derekku's Lighter:
Didn't notice anything screaming "change me!"
SeymourLyon's Hard:
Didn't notice anything screaming "change me!"
Insaner:*star*
Didn't notice anything screaming "change me!"
Fix:jmaeshawn wrote:
01:04:086 (1) - This slider shape looks a little lopsided to me, maybe you can move the top-left point over to the right 1-2 spaces?
176,118,64086,6,0,B|176:70|176:70|208:38|208:38|304:38|304:38|336:70|336:70|336:150,1,280,0|4Kudosustar~
General: maybe you can shorten the mp3 to save space.
~Krisom’s Easy~
00:42:996 (3)- 2 grid boxes to the right? (trying to align it with (1) )
~Dereku’s Lighter~
Nothing
~Seymourlyon’s Hard~
01:15:904 (8, 9) – spacing
01:22:267 (3, 4) - ^
02:29:722 (1, 2) - ^
~Insane~
00:14:269 (8) - align with 9
02:16:632 (3) - spacing
02:36:087 (3) - ^
02:36:450 (5) - ^
02:39:541 (1) -^
~Twinkle twinkle little star~
~Krisom’s Easy~
00:42:996 (3)- 2 grid boxes to the right? (trying to align it with (1) )
~Dereku’s Lighter~
Nothing
~Seymourlyon’s Hard~
01:15:904 (8, 9) – spacing
01:22:267 (3, 4) - ^
02:29:722 (1, 2) - ^
~Insane~
00:14:269 (8) - align with 9
02:16:632 (3) - spacing
02:36:087 (3) - ^
02:36:450 (5) - ^
02:39:541 (1) -^
~Twinkle twinkle little star~
ouran: Did you up the OD in my diff according to Dusty's suggestion? I don't remember doing so which is why I'm asking. XP
I just noticed that the Drain is kinda low as well, so could you (ouran) up it 1-2 notches? ty <3
EDIT: Timing sections still aren't right on the other diffs. First/Second look fine, but the third isn't in the wrong spot (and seems to be in DIFFERENT spots throughout the diffs o_o)
EDIT 2: I thought that the mp3 was the same quality as seymour's, but it seems to be a bit better, even though it's still only 128 kbps. I can't seem to find a better quality one, so I suppose you can go ahead and apply that -5 or -7 fix to all offsets. =x
I just noticed that the Drain is kinda low as well, so could you (ouran) up it 1-2 notches? ty <3
EDIT: Timing sections still aren't right on the other diffs. First/Second look fine, but the third isn't in the wrong spot (and seems to be in DIFFERENT spots throughout the diffs o_o)
EDIT 2: I thought that the mp3 was the same quality as seymour's, but it seems to be a bit better, even though it's still only 128 kbps. I can't seem to find a better quality one, so I suppose you can go ahead and apply that -5 or -7 fix to all offsets. =x
It's good for me. Star.
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
Anyway, it's ok.
- spinner-spin.png wasn't centered well. I fixed that the best i could, you can find it below in this attachment.
Add 3ms to the second uninherited timing section (yeah it's only 3ms but they make the difference D:)
No kiai at all?
The mp3 is long. They'll ask you to cut it, i suppose.
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Ok
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Ok
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
imho Circle Size Normal is better.
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
01:51:353 (6) - new combo?
01:58:990 (9) - stack correctly
02:16:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dunno why but i find it hard to read and play.i suggest to add a repetition at 02:16:990 (2) and to move 02:17:535 (3,4,5) a bit closer like i did in the picture below
- .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
01:05:355 (1) - this slider is messed up because it should be 0.5x. Please fix the inherited timing section.
Anyway, it's ok.
Nicely done! lol the skin tripped me out at first
~STAR
~STAR
Star 
oh Ovo
Chorus ver.
Chorus ver.
[Insane]
01:05:355 (1) - why are there 2 timesections on this slider, both 0 volume and using different samplesets? Not the point though, I suggest you don't silence beginning of a slider and put a finish on it (N or S, both are fine imo, probably N is better)
02:18:093 (1) - ^ (hitfinish)
01:11:729 (1) - reduce the spinner by 1 white tick and put a clap on it, most times spinners are better as "rhythm fillers", not as elements of a main beatmap rhythm (though your opinion seems to differ if I remember your maps right. Well, at least give this a thought.)
01:31:911 (6,1) - please, don't do this kind of jump there. Please. It's pretty much unpredictable and irritating. Probably should've typed more on this one to convince you to remove it, but too tired for that.
Also, as a personal opinion, I find the second part of the map (after the pause) getting a bit boring after each minute of playing. I mean, it flows with the music, spacing is ok, but nothing catches your attention in a special way, you're just repeating same rhythm patterns, hearing boom, pop, boom, pop, boom, pop, boom, pop (that's how hitsounds sound for me :D )... Though map quality is pretty high and I got no idea how to make it more interesting, so oh well.
Hard needs +2 OD. At least +1 it goddamit. Other than that pretty fun.
Derrek's is fine I guess.
Krisom's
00:08:809 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 lvl3 grid to the left (yes, I am that nazi, and yes, I notice this during playtests)
00:34:991 (1) - what about making this slider bezier to match curve movement of 00:33:536 (1,2,3,4) and then use this slider for all the copypaste pattern (including previous slider and ones after the pause. The ones after pause could also use different curving direction.)?
01:09:172 (1,2,3,4) - grid snap this, so it'll be perfectly centered (I'm not joking, I notice this during playing)
02:21:172 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:32:808 (1,2,3,4) - ^
mmmkay.
01:05:355 (1) - why are there 2 timesections on this slider, both 0 volume and using different samplesets? Not the point though, I suggest you don't silence beginning of a slider and put a finish on it (N or S, both are fine imo, probably N is better)
02:18:093 (1) - ^ (hitfinish)
01:11:729 (1) - reduce the spinner by 1 white tick and put a clap on it, most times spinners are better as "rhythm fillers", not as elements of a main beatmap rhythm (though your opinion seems to differ if I remember your maps right. Well, at least give this a thought.)
01:31:911 (6,1) - please, don't do this kind of jump there. Please. It's pretty much unpredictable and irritating. Probably should've typed more on this one to convince you to remove it, but too tired for that.
Also, as a personal opinion, I find the second part of the map (after the pause) getting a bit boring after each minute of playing. I mean, it flows with the music, spacing is ok, but nothing catches your attention in a special way, you're just repeating same rhythm patterns, hearing boom, pop, boom, pop, boom, pop, boom, pop (that's how hitsounds sound for me :D )... Though map quality is pretty high and I got no idea how to make it more interesting, so oh well.
Hard needs +2 OD. At least +1 it goddamit. Other than that pretty fun.
Derrek's is fine I guess.
Krisom's
00:08:809 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 lvl3 grid to the left (yes, I am that nazi, and yes, I notice this during playtests)
00:34:991 (1) - what about making this slider bezier to match curve movement of 00:33:536 (1,2,3,4) and then use this slider for all the copypaste pattern (including previous slider and ones after the pause. The ones after pause could also use different curving direction.)?
01:09:172 (1,2,3,4) - grid snap this, so it'll be perfectly centered (I'm not joking, I notice this during playing)
02:21:172 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:32:808 (1,2,3,4) - ^
mmmkay.
[Timing]
[Insane]'s 2nd red line offset = 69,184
[SeymourLyon's Hard]、 [Derekku's Lighter] and [Krisom's Easy]'s 2nd red line offset = 69,172
Why they are different?
Fix them plz.
Mapset is fine for me.
Just a suggestion :
[Derekku's Lighter]
Slider tick rate 2 is a bit noisy for me.
i suggest change it to 1.
Be careful the sliders will crashed after you changing Slider tick rate.
[Insane]'s 2nd red line offset = 69,184
[SeymourLyon's Hard]、 [Derekku's Lighter] and [Krisom's Easy]'s 2nd red line offset = 69,172
Why they are different?
Fix them plz.
Mapset is fine for me.
Just a suggestion :
[Derekku's Lighter]
Slider tick rate 2 is a bit noisy for me.
i suggest change it to 1.
Be careful the sliders will crashed after you changing Slider tick rate.
@ouran: 69,172 is the correct 2nd offset.
Tick rate 1 felt too quiet/slow to me. xPkioukiou wrote:
Slider tick rate 2 is a bit noisy for me.
[Mod Infos]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]
- • Artist: iroha feat. NicoNico Chorus
- • Disable countdown
• 01:07:718 (9 | end-slider) - Remove finish
• 02:19:353 (5 | end-slider) - ^
Oh hey
Nicely done, but it feels more like a Normal than an Easy. Dare I say it, but maybe you need an easier one? or tone this one down somehow?
[DEREKKU'S LIGHTER]
01:48:081 (1) - Maybe this would sound better pushed 1/4 forward? (and make 1/4 shorter)
[SEYMOURLYON'S HARD]
No issues that are worth talking about. This difficulty is odd compared to Lighter and Insane though.
[INSANE]
I love the slider shapes you made. Just sayin'
I wasn't keen on the bit at 00:39:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9), but everything else was good stuff.
Awesome. Apart from Easy being a bit too tough. No big complaints. Very nice.
Starred
- Timing seens fine, but I don't think you need the red timing sections at 01:09:173 and 02:21:172. They don't seem to do much apart from restart the stanza count.
Nicely done, but it feels more like a Normal than an Easy. Dare I say it, but maybe you need an easier one? or tone this one down somehow?
[DEREKKU'S LIGHTER]
01:48:081 (1) - Maybe this would sound better pushed 1/4 forward? (and make 1/4 shorter)
[SEYMOURLYON'S HARD]
No issues that are worth talking about. This difficulty is odd compared to Lighter and Insane though.
[INSANE]
I love the slider shapes you made. Just sayin'
I wasn't keen on the bit at 00:39:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9), but everything else was good stuff.
Awesome. Apart from Easy being a bit too tough. No big complaints. Very nice.
Starred
That's exactly why the uninherited sections are there. They're not hurting anything, so we might as well make the stanzas correct, right?Doomsday93 wrote:
Timing seens fine, but I don't think you need the red timing sections at 01:09:173 and 02:21:172. They don't seem to do much apart from restart the stanza count.
This didn't sound any better to me, sorry. o-o;Doomsday93 wrote:
01:48:081(1) - Maybe this would sound better pushed 1/4 forward? (and make 1/4 shorter)
bubbled
more hitsounds imo imo imo <3
more hitsounds imo imo imo <3
Insane:Skyripper wrote:
more hitsounds imo imo imo <3
This difficulty is completely devoid of finish hitsounds. Whyyy? You also have no normal whistles, despite this fitting this song SO WELL. The entire song is just claps every 2 beats and then like a couple finishes near the start.
I'm not going to pop the bubble because the only issue I have is with hitsounds, but you really should add more.
So I'm going to post a huge amount of finish suggestions, mainly because YOUR MAP DOESN'T HAVE ANY RIGHT NOW (except like a couple soft finishes near the beginning). Some parts would sound better as normal-whistles, but since you are apparently against adding those, I won't mention it. It sounds so much better to me after adding all this stuff.
00:07:355 - Decrease the volume of all your normal sections from here til 00:31:355 by 2-3 ticks. Why are these parts louder than the chorus? it makes no sense.
00:08:809 (1) - finish
00:31:355 (5) - finish
00:32:082 (2) - finish
00:33:082 - why is this timing section softer than the others? Increase by 2 ticks
00:43:718 (4) - finish on slider beginning
00:49:536 (4) - ^
00:55:354 (2) - finish on start
01:00:809 (2) - clap on endpoint
01:01:173 (1) - finish on start, remove clap
01:09:172 (1) - finish on start
01:13:535 (4) - ^
01:14:081 (5) - ^
01:14:808 (7) - ^
01:17:626 - why does the volume increase here? Sections from 01:07:900 until here should have max volume then
01:19:353 (1) - finish on start
01:20:444 (4) - clap on end
01:20:808 (1) - finish
01:25:171 (6) - finish on start
01:25:717 (7) - ^
01:26:444 (9) - ^
01:29:535 (2) - finish on start
01:30:990 (1) - finish, remove clap
01:31:899 (6) - clap
01:42:535 - this same part earlier had lower volume by 1 tick. Add a section here and do that for this part too?
01:44:081 (2) - finish
01:55:717 (4) - finish on start point
02:07:353 (2) - finish on start
02:10:262 (4) - finish on start
02:13:171 (1) - ^
02:21:172 (1) - finish on start
02:25:535 (2) - ^
02:26:081 (3) - ^
02:26:808 (5) - ^
02:30:990 (1) - finish on endpoint
02:32:626 - add circle here? You have a note here during the other chorus part. Also put a clap on it.
02:32:808 (1) - finish on start
02:37:171 (3) - ^
02:37:717 (4) - ^
02:38:626 (1) - oh hey this part is different. Whatever. Finish on start.
02:40:081 (2) - finish on start
02:42:990 (1) - finish, remove clap
02:43:899 (6) - clap
Or hey since I did all this already except 02:32:626 you can just download the file.
Download: iroha feat. Kagamine RinNicoNico Chorus - Meltdown (ouranhshc) [Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Lybydose wrote:
Insane:Skyripper wrote:
more hitsounds imo imo imo <3
This difficulty is completely devoid of finish hitsounds. Whyyy? You also have no normal whistles, despite this fitting this song SO WELL. The entire song is just claps every 2 beats and then like a couple finishes near the start.
I'm not going to pop the bubble because the only issue I have is with hitsounds, but you really should add more.
So I'm going to post a huge amount of finish suggestions, mainly because YOUR MAP DOESN'T HAVE ANY RIGHT NOW (except like a couple soft finishes near the beginning). Some parts would sound better as normal-whistles, but since you are apparently against adding those, I won't mention it. It sounds so much better to me after adding all this stuff.
00:07:355 - Decrease the volume of all your normal sections from here til 00:31:355 by 2-3 ticks. Why are these parts louder than the chorus? it makes no sense.
00:08:809 (1) - finish
00:31:355 (5) - finish
00:32:082 (2) - finish
00:33:082 - why is this timing section softer than the others? Increase by 2 ticks
00:43:718 (4) - finish on slider beginning
00:49:536 (4) - ^
00:55:354 (2) - finish on start
01:00:809 (2) - clap on endpoint
01:01:173 (1) - finish on start, remove clap
01:09:172 (1) - finish on start
01:13:535 (4) - ^
01:14:081 (5) - ^
01:14:808 (7) - ^
01:17:626 - why does the volume increase here? Sections from 01:07:900 until here should have max volume then
01:19:353 (1) - finish on start
01:20:444 (4) - clap on end
01:20:808 (1) - finish
01:25:171 (6) - finish on start
01:25:717 (7) - ^
01:26:444 (9) - ^
01:29:535 (2) - finish on start
01:30:990 (1) - finish, remove clap
01:31:899 (6) - clap
01:42:535 - this same part earlier had lower volume by 1 tick. Add a section here and do that for this part too?
01:44:081 (2) - finish
01:55:717 (4) - finish on start point
02:07:353 (2) - finish on start
02:10:262 (4) - finish on start
02:13:171 (1) - ^
02:21:172 (1) - finish on start
02:25:535 (2) - ^
02:26:081 (3) - ^
02:26:808 (5) - ^
02:30:990 (1) - finish on endpoint
02:32:626 - add circle here? You have a note here during the other chorus part. Also put a clap on it.
02:32:808 (1) - finish on start
02:37:171 (3) - ^
02:37:717 (4) - ^
02:38:626 (1) - oh hey this part is different. Whatever. Finish on start.
02:40:081 (2) - finish on start
02:42:990 (1) - finish, remove clap
02:43:899 (6) - clap
Or hey since I did all this already except 02:32:626 you can just download the file. <= i did that
[attachment=0:70aa1]iroha feat. Kagamine RinNicoNico Chorus - Meltdown (ouranhshc) [Insane].osu[/attachment:70aa1]
Ok ranking this because the only changes were hitsounds and...adding one circle. Everything else was good. Still would have liked to see normal whistles in Insane but whatever.
Oh man I totally modded this 7 months ago
Oh man I totally modded this 7 months ago
Congratz ~
(ﾉ^^)ﾉ―――――――※※☆★congratulations!!★☆ ouranhshc
ah yes.. nico2 <3
nice btw
nice btw
Where the hell is normal difficulty level =_= I'm pretty disappointed of not seeing it in...
Emiya Shiro wrote:
Where the hell is normal difficulty level =_= I'm pretty disappointed of not seeing it in...
Derekku's Lighter??