intoon wrote:

M4M

[Easy]

00:50:900 (3,4) - add clap at tail? ok
04:04:577 (3) - x64 y200 current one is fine imo

[Normal]

00:53:327 (2,3) - DS? slightly error like +0.1-0.3 or -0.1-0.3 is fine
01:25:312 - add something? ::: 02:41:194 - have something here about similar part. ok
04:43:621 (4,5) - I prefer current rhythm

[Hard]

00:26:136 (1,2) - inconsistent DS wh
01:21:562 (3,4,5) - ^ slightly error like +0.1-0.3 or -0.1-0.3 is fine
02:13:841 (1,2,3) - ^? fixed a bit
02:20:900 (1,2) - ^ looks fine
03:12:077 (1,2,3) - ^? uhh ok fixed
01:17:591 (2) - x136 y96 ye
01:59:944 (2) - x200 y212 is placed completely middle about 01:59:503 (1,3) - looks fine imo
02:06:783 (1,2) - little close than other DS.. I fk up

[Insane]

00:20:401 (3) - x28 y128 ? ::: this place was considered previous slider's direction. fixed a bit
00:29:666 (1) - give some curve like 00:30:328 (2) - ? ok
01:25:753 (6,7) - change to triplet? no, not sound right to me
01:55:312 (5,6,7,8) - suggestion :: curve partten is more funny than straight partten.. > < no, I think current one fit the song here

1

02:01:268 (1,2) - I want to focus vocal and ignore kick here
04:11:856 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:46:158 - add note here?? i'd like triplet here~ um.. overmapping? overmapped :C
04:45:496 (8,1) - inconsistent DS here? is osu!editor fk up my map ? fixed

AsakuraNe wrote:

Helooo~ :3 M4M from your queue~
Status:DONE(will finish within 24 hours)
These are just suggestions. If you don't want to change it. feel free to do so.

Click me Senpaaai

GENERAL

1. How about cutting the mp3? The sound ended at 05:01:964 though. Just telling I believe it's fine lol

EASY

1. 00:50:680 - There's a piano sound here~ Start a slider here and remove reverse on 2 no , I don't want to map piano here
2. 01:32:371 - Fix DS y
3. 01:43:400 - ^^ i s2g
4. 01:48:694 - Move to y:184 for perfect triangle current is fine
5. 02:58:841 - Fix DS o
6. 03:05:900 - How about curving 2 like this? http://puu.sh/hVY2F/0fcce1ee68.jpg Move 2's middlepoint to x:172 y:324 current one fit music imo
7. 03:57:077 - Perfect triangle by moving 2's middlepoint to x:236 y:280 and endpoint to x:236 y:220. Move 3 to x:268 y:156 current one is finelazy
8. 04:15:386 - Why don't you just copy 1 and paste here then Rotate 30 degrees anti-clockwise? because it looks the same(a little bit) or change 2's slider pattern. wait don't they look same I mean I want their shape to be same
9. 04:21:783 - Fix DS slightly error is ok
10. 04:26:636(3,4) - Move 3 to x:120 y:312 and 4 to x:40 y:268 with it's middlepoint at x:16 y:196 and endpoint at x:32 y:128 to make 3 not that close with the previous slider. It looks like this: http://puu.sh/hVYEU/58e6d383b5.jpg current one is finelazy
11. 04:32:371 - Fix DS:arrow: slightly error is ok

NORMAL

1. 00:23:269 - Fix Blanket. Well, from the looks of it, I think you intentionally made slider 2 a "not meant to blanket slider" because of 5 but just telling If ever you blanket, then copy the slider and paste at 5 /me runs xD not meant to blanket slider 4 life , no I don't intend to blanket here
2. 00:39:209 - There's a piano sound here~ How about this pattern? http://puu.sh/hWabK/29a3da8c89.jpg lol nvm I listened to your placing of notes again and again and it seems you're not following the piano for this part so.. ###0
3. 01:10:091 - Fix blanket don't intend to do blanket
4. 03:39:430 - Add whistle asglsklgsl
5. 04:42:959 - How about this pattern instead? http://puu.sh/hWcVE/472184851c.jpg

same as what I said for intoon lmao , it sound weird when I ignore this beat 04:43:841 -

HARD

1. 00:14:445 - Minor fix for blanket. Move endpoint to x:168 y:104 ok , fixed just for you xdddddddd
2. 01:19:136 - How about this slider pattern instead? http://puu.sh/hWemD/d10f3724f6.jpg Add red point at x:412 y:228, 3rd point at x:452 y:280 and endpoint at x:408 y:340 that slider doesn't fit the song here imo
3. 01:57:849 - Add circle overmapped :C
4. 01:59:503(1,2,3,4) - Make 1.6x DS consistent no, current is fine, I'm doing bulidup feeling thing here 01:59:283 (3,1,2,3,4) -
5. 02:03:253 - Minor fix. Move endpoint to x:240 this one looks perfectly fine for me
6. 02:09:319 - Add circle overmapped :C
7. 03:47:371 - How about changing this to 1/1 slider instead to follow the vocals more then add circle no , not sound right to me
8. 04:26:966 - Add Circle overmapped :C

INSANE

1. 00:17:092 - How about changing the pattern? The 3 1/2 sliders is wierd to me. Because this part of the song is still slow and the 3 1/2 sliders is bulding up(well, I can't explain xD) Maybe somethink like this: http://puu.sh/hWgCn/f420c21f49.jpg or http://puu.sh/hWgF9/dd3b53206b.jpg should be fine it's the hardest diff here and I'm follow vocal which sound pretty prominent here so I think player can play this fine
2. 00:37:886(3,4) - I don't hear any sound here. How about removing 3 and 4 I hear something like feint sound or something here q:
3. 01:22:555 - Better if there's a circle here. :3 It follows the vocals too. And it's more Fun vocal is something between 1/4 and 1/6 so I try to avoid mapping vocal and mapping instrument instead just to be safe
4. 02:09:761 - How about changing to 1/2 slider? wh ,no that not sound right here xD
5. 02:38:437 - Same as my suggestion above at 01:22:555 same
6. 03:43:841 - Minor fix for blanket. Move it up a little at y:216 dam
7. 03:52:003 - A bit hard to read. 3 is okay but for 4, i get a little early clicking it. :3 that because you focus on vocal too much lol if you focus on instrument I'm sure you can play this perfectly fine to sums thing up I would say I can map both vocal and instrument here sine it sound pretty dominant here but well I'm thinking that if I happen to map the vocal on 1/1 there it make the spacing here poo and I need nc to fix that thing and yes I don't want to nc much here so want I do this focus only on instrument , ok
8. 04:22:113 - A little too close for the spacing you used up until now. Move it to x:376 y:192. dam

That's all. Really fun mapset~
Good Luck

VINXIS wrote:

>too lazy to find 2 bn3 BN fixed yours , k thx
>maps 4 diffs in the length of 5 mins instead ez
>tfw the

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uncheck letterbox u dont evn have a sb u pleb wh letterbox for break not sb ok okokok?
lol ur tags dem tags

04:51:596 (1) - make spinner end 5% volume pls (and add green lined in the spinner so the volume fades out ya) no , current is ok imo
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1. 00:18:416 (4,1) - dis slider looks a bit wonky i m o mostly cuz of how far teh red anchor compared to the 1st point. pls change pls plspslsplsplslps dam[/color
2. 00:21:063 (3) - 1.03x to 0.98x pls (not that big of a deal imo but yea)
3. 00:33:694 (3,1) - doing this right after 00:31:489 (1,2) - sounds REALLY awkward for playing imo y u do dis I think this is fine as it is because I try to focus on the prominent sound here to make the rhythm a bit sound reasonable and I'm sure beginner can play this it low bpm song so should be no problem imo if I try to focus polarity here it would make the rhythm sound not right imo
4. 00:48:253 (3,1) - imo this'd look more comfortable to play if u moved the second slider more upwards imo imo dam imo
5. 01:01:268 (3,1) - tbh switch nc. The kick makes it feel like the next measure sounds early partly hmm not really imo both can be used for nc but I chose (1) cus it sound like new part more than kick
6. 01:06:783 (2) - people MIGHT get confused cuz that kik was like 1/2 before this head comes so mm yea but I can't think about rhythm to use here to map that kick but maybe I'm thinkinh like probably maybe it possible to play this without focus on kick sound cus that kick sound come so random here imo
7. 01:15:606 (1,2,3) - rip hitsoudns rip rhythm nice 1
8. 01:39:209 (4,1) - this'd look more natural as a blanket imo xdddd wh no , I think current is better imo
9. 02:01:488 (3,4,1) - adkjgsdkff its calling out for like 2 blankets mine pls do no blanket here
10. 02:32:591 (2,3) - rip hitsounds remapped rhythm thx for pointing out this
11. 02:59:724 (3,3) - y did u use long sliderz cus it fit the song here and it's cool
12. 03:08:547 (1,2) - B^) wh
13. 04:13:841 (1,2) - pls this one fine , mk I want to focus on prominent thing here and don't want to make anything too complex

NM

1. 00:51:562 (6,1) - imo they seem too close to each other like dam just looka t dat at least it's not close like this so it's mk
2. 01:01:268 (1,2) - if ur comboing w. vocals then switch nc ples current is fine imo
3. 01:26:856 (2,3) - wud be cool if they were parallel l 0 l o l o l it's not that cool imo
4. 01:33:253 (1) - d I'd put this at x:380 y:92 so the downward spacing is le evn w. 01:32:371 (5,6) - ya dam
5. 02:47:371 (4,5) - 1.06x gg https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3161919 next : 1.03x kfc gg
6. 03:02:150 (2,3) - 1.08x gg https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3161932 kfc gg
7. 03:09:209 (2,3) - omargod http://puu.sh/hXz11/d5ad263652.jpg kfc gg (I upload with osu! too fast so I use puush rip )
8. shit this must've happened before but never noticed LOL woops actually it like you have old ver or something or fk w/e
9. 03:39:430 (4) - x:436 y:244 looks more naturalle current is fine imo
10. 03:43:180 (5,6) - 0.93x did u just give up in life o r ###0 solve everything https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3161943
11. 03:46:488 (5) - 0.99x to 1.04x pls fk , fixed
12. 04:00:386 (2,3) - the mahatma https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3161957
13. 04:07:665 (3,4) - d ghandis https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3161960
14. 04:15:827 (4,1) - wow not evn equal spacing xdddddddddddddddddddddd (i'm jking pls dont kill m e) this one fine imo mk
15. 04:19:577 (4,5,1) - 0.97x to 1.02x d we did the same thing lmao https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3161971
16. 04:33:033 (4,5) - fucking same thing we did lmao actually I think slightly error here is fine but w/e fixed

HD

1. SV looks slow af at the beginning cus the song is slow af at the beginning
2. 00:46:047 (2,3,4) - imo this looks really bad skrgskjfklafa;sf as idk try dis instead or smth asf looks fine for me ,current flow nice imo
3. 01:03:474 (1) - if ur mapping w. vocal then the nc is r w rong sht fixed
4. 01:11:415 (2) - make it repeat xd current is fine imo
5. 01:51:783 (4,5) - rip flo. put the circle downwards it feels moar naturelle wh it looks fine here imo
6. 01:59:944 (2,3,4) - equal spacing for equal emphasization plz I'm doing bulidup technique here
7. 02:46:268 (2,3,4) - meh moving the slider and first circle higher wud look n i c e r rip this stack 02:45:606 (1,4) - uhh no
8. 02:54:209 (1) - pls closen the distance between 2nd red point and 1st point plz fixed a bit
9. 03:00:606 (3,4,1) - the first 2 sliders sud be closer than the 2nd n third one cuz emphasis like plz ya
10. 03:46:488 (3,4) - me irl ok , nice face
11. 04:10:974 (3,4,1) - same thing about spacing but this 1 looks more naturelle so bulidup technique here so

ill mod insane on irc if i hab 2 ksjghskjdfaslfaklfmklafas song's so fukcign long

Hard wrote:

didn't find stuff to mod. starred instead.

Owntrolf wrote:

03:50:018 (4,5,1,2) - For most diffs I dont get why you cant just map to "fu-ka-ku" instrument sound a bit more prominent than vocal for me here
04:48:253 (1) - Isnt the ending more work than needed because you just skip over your work of red ticks by using spinner no, that would be so hard to acc lol
Maybe map it

• Easy

  01:09:430 (2,3) - Maybe change to this to follow vocals better instead of the quiet piano
  SPOILER

  
  switch to vocal like that is not really good for beginner imo
  02:25:974 (3) - I think it would be better to remove the repeat and add a 3/2 slider where it used to end at because strong sounds are always nice to click prefer current one since I kinda want to focus only kick sound here
  03:50:018 (4,1,2) - I was playing this and I got confused because you suddenly switch to the low base guitar
  like heck you could use something simple like 3 1/1 normal circles and it matches the vocals not really confuse imo also follow vocal sound not right here tho

• Normal

  00:23:269 (2,3) - BALKBLKLBANKETBLANEKIT Blanket pls endurself , no
  Rest looks fine

• Hard

  I think 1/8 slider repeats are ok in this no, I think they are not
  
  00:11:136 (2) - Maybe move back 1 tick and change to 1/2 slider no, I want rhythm to be simple like this cus calm part
  01:50:680 (1,2) - Can we just have a 1/2slider+circle+1/2slider instead of the current 3/4+1/2 missing the sound on white tick , sound on white tick is only kick so I guess it's ok to skip cus I did skip it here too 01:42:959 - , 01:46:488 - , 01:53:547 - , etc lol but yea whatever spread still ok tho
  (theres some other instances of it in the map such as 03:03:033 (1,2) - Isayitplaysbad because I cant even pass the map memes)
  02:02:591 (4,1) - Blanket complaint because im bored looks fine
  02:36:562 (4,1,2) - stahp switching between background and vocals y
  02:37:444 (4) - Shouldnt this be like a reverse no, I prefer current one
  04:39:650 (3) - I feel so high /me runs o sht

• Insane

  00:26:798 (2) - This should probably be a 1/1 because there is no sound on the repeat there is a sound , listen carefully
  00:43:621 (5,1) - I find it sounds better with slider first then circle (you could just ctrl+g them) kick emphasis tho
  00:57:959 (1,2) - Maybe change to first slider is repeat and add a 1/2 slider after it to match vocals like this
  SPOILER

  
  I think reverse not fit here
  01:22:444 (6,1) - This should probably be a triplet or something since theres a sound on the blue tick I think there is not , not sure now lol ;_;
  01:40:312 (1,2) - Maybe convert to sliders no , circles4life
  01:41:856 - Maybe map the "su" that they say sound not right
  01:52:003 (6,7,8) - The distiance relative to 8 between 6 and 7 is different, maybe make them the same? its x1.00 and x1.21 right now it's suppose to be like that to fit the sound of the beat
  02:50:018 (3) - I think its better as 2 circles no ,its notalso dam stack 02:48:694 (5,3) - tho
  02:52:665 (1) - Maybe shorten to 1/2 and add a circle to where it used to end so we can click the vocal no, that not work imo
  -02:56:194 (1,2) - Maybe do the same thing I said at 00:57:959 same
  03:04:577 (6,7) - Change to 1 1/2 slider? uhh nope , current sound better to me
  03:33:033 (1,2) - Maybe manual snap it to look like the automatic snap at 03:34:797 (1,2) - rip
  04:48:253 (1) - Its probably possible to map this out
  SPOILER

  
  rip acc

You probably know what map to m4m .-.coughgrisaiaorringoffortune I choose grisaia q:

Sieg wrote:

yo

general
consider to make green a bit darker, white repeat arrow looks troublesome on it ok

insane
03:03:363 (2) - consider just to remove this note or better http://puu.sh/ieQkA/d99ca6d67b.jpg , it sounds a bit late to catch 1\4 to me deleted
04:27:408 (6) - remove whistle from the sliderbody oop
04:47:150 (1) - ^ oop
04:51:486 (1) - this is overdone, I recommend you remove this, first spinner is enough ok

hard
03:03:363 (2) -same as for ins yea
04:51:486 (1) - ^ and for all diffs yea

normal
00:31:489 (1) - remove green line from here and for easy oop

checked your questionable snapping spots and they all seems right (sliders a bit extended but that not really a big deal) to me , well.. except one i mentioned

didn't' checked metadata tho, if you provide sources before recheck that will be good
metadata : http://sora-no-method.jp/product/op.php , http://www.lantis.jp/release-item2.php?id=5306597dce0d0fd99f27682d42a90fe5
sweet mapset

Kibbleru wrote:

woah when wer u dis gud at mapping nice
is this the actual full version? i feel like this sounds more like a remix lol yes lol

04:31:047 (3) - i think this should be 1/6, pay attention to the ending part 04:31:268 - sounds 1/6 it sound like 1/8 here to me , I tried testing snap by placing circles on 1/8 and they sound perfect snapped to me ;_;
one thing though, when you have 1/8 repeat sliders, make sure you space out the previous 1/4 streams enough so that you can clearly read it
ie 00:37:886 (3,4,5) - looked a bit cramped ok

well if u need a qualify call me i guess. if the other guy is gunna bubble it

Kibbleru wrote:

remove osb there is no osb here and I try to redl and still doesn't has osb

SPOILER

i really dont think "loli" and "lolicon" is appropriate for the tags.. ok , removed

my hs checker broken can u tell me when normal finish is used? I deleted my normal-finish , delete map then redl map and you can see it not there now


looks good