1. 00:13:491 (3) - More blanket? PIC Change slider 2nd point to: x: 392 y: 213, and last point to: x: 316 y: 219, after fix DS: 00:14:373 (4) -
   
2. 00:17:903 (4) - This slider bit ugly. Maybe this? Ugly example
   
3. 00:55:550 (2,3) - This overlay ugly. Do not cover slider end. not too elegant. Use similar: Img
   
4. 01:06:432 (1) - Better slider shape: pic
   
5. 01:14:667 (3) - Better blanket? Second slider point to: x: 416 y: 292, last point: x: 344 y: 356 ?
   
6. 01:18:197 (1) - Better blanket: second point: x: 267 y: 279 and last point to: x: 207 y: 228
   
7. 01:27:608 (1) - Maybe this: Use similar
   
8. 01:35:550 (4,5) - Flow bit unnatural. I think, press CTRL + G here: 01:36:432 (5) - and here: 01:37:020 (1) -
   
9. 02:01:726 (2) - Improve blanket
   
10. 02:04:079 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Hmm, i think, make "slider wheel" jump. use similar: Bad example
    
11. 02:19:373 (1) - Please, map this part. Spinner not fit here

1. 00:24:961 (6) - Use this: click
   
2. 00:45:256 (1,5) - Perfect stack?
   
   
3. 00:49:961 (1) - Slider shape
   
4. 02:02:903 (4) - Maybe blanket?
   
5. 02:19:373 (1) - Same as hard

1. maybe you can add some whistle in some part,current sound effect is too quiet and I can't even know what I 'm clicking when playing

1. 00:13:491 (3) - try this flow?
   
2. 00:17:020 (1) -
   
3. 00:30:844 - spinner begins here?
4. 00:45:256 (1,2) - flow is kinda weird for beginners I think maybe move downward a bit
5. 01:11:726 (3,4) - there's no need to blanket I think this plays kinda sudden
6. 01:22:020 (8) - It become quiet and quiet so there's no need to use a reverse slider try 1/2 one?
7. 01:34:667 (5,6) - bad flow here try sth like this
   
8. 01:51:138 (1) -
   
9. 01:55:844 (1,2) - this flow is too hard for beginners
10. 02:14:667 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:17:903 (4) - maybe move red anchor upward a bit 73 338? for a nicer flow
2. 00:25:844 (6) - I'd suggest to use red anchor for00:26:432 (1,2,3) - are straight flow
3. 00:27:314 (4) - ctrl+j and make some small adjustments?
4. 00:31:726 (3) - 251 187 for better flow?also move 00:32:020 (4) -
5. 00:54:667 (1) - slider could be improved move the 4th dot to 106 225
6. 01:11:138 (1) - Well seems that you are following vocal but this sound shouldn't be ignored imo
7. 01:25:550 (2,3,4) - I 'd suggest stack them or it's awkward to play
8. 01:53:197 (4,5) - ds1.2 pls
9. 02:02:903 (1,2) - flow could be improved

1. Rhythmical Issues
   1. 00:17:020 (1,2) - This really bothers me for a simple reason. You are missing a lot of
      guitar here which would be very useful to use a 1/1 slider in order to avoid 00:18:491 (2) hitting
      in the void. This plays very awkward.
      
      
      Timeline + Code

      
      
      

      112,200,17020,6,0,L|124:120,1,70
      180,72,17609,2,0,L|272:60,1,70
      316,112,18197,2,0,P|364:132|448:84,1,140

      The code is so you have an example of how to fix the pattern.
   2. 00:22:314 (2,3) - Basically same as above.
      
      
      Timeline

      
   3. 00:38:785 (5,6) - ^ // With the same Rhythm as suggested.
      
   4. 00:31:138 (1) - I believe someone already mentioned it. It plays rather weird if the spinner starts
      on the Guitar since the vocals are much more dominant here. Also the 1/1 space between them is
      quite uncomforting. Please reconsider starting the spinner on 00:30:844
      
   5. 00:59:373 (1) - ^
      
   6. 00:45:256 (1,2) - Well the only real Problem here is the fact that the slider (2) starts on nothing.
      You could simply remove the repeat and place it on red tick to start, but then you'd be left with a rather
      uncomfortable break. As far as my Example is concerned, you could use the 2/1 slider to make a
      symmetrical pattern. The two circles afterwards serve to emphasize the key-changing guitar.
      
      
      Timeline

      
   7. 00:55:256 (2,3) - Those would be the same as above. Empty hits.
      
      
      Timeline

      
   8. 01:16:726 (6) - Missed oppertunity imo. You could have used this part really well for a double 1/1
      slider. If you convert 6 into a 1/1 slider, this would not only fit very well with the sounds/vocals, but it
      would also take away a little of the 'overmapping'-strain, if that makes sense. I personally am
      strained from the soft-hitsound so this would be a refreshing little break.
      
   9. 01:35:550 (6,7) - Very similar to above acctually. A 1/1 slider would support the piano and
      the strings much better than the current rhythm.
      
      
      Timeline

      
   10. 01:38:785 (3,4) - ^
       
       
       Timeline

       

1. Rhythmical Issues:
   1. 00:36:726 (4,5) - I was quite skeptic of this rhythm when I played it. Now I know when. While
      (4) is on beat with the hi-hats, the slider start of 00:37:167 (5) is not + it's on a blue tick which makes it
      sound even more off. I strongly suggest you to map on the vocals which can be achieved by placing a
      1/2 slider on 00:37:020 . Altho if you do that, it would play nicer if you used two circles instead of a 1/4
      slider.
   2. 00:48:932 (5) - There should be a 1/1 slider on 00:48:785 to follow the rather strong Piano.
      
   3. 00:46:138 (4,5) - ^ // the hit on 00:46:579 needs to go due to being void. You can use a 1/4 slider
      or two circles, dosnt really matter.
   4. 00:51:285 (3) - ^
      
   5. 00:39:079 (3,4) - Same story with this, but here you'd need a diffrent rhythm to suite the rather long
      break. I highly suggest a 1/1 slider beginning on 00:39:079 to suite the vocals. This would feel alot
      nicer than having an empty beat.
      
   6. 01:39:079 (4,1,2,3,4) - There's the same Rhythmical progression that I pointed out on normal.
      You should consider using a 1/1 slider Rhythm here as well to support the vocals and the Piano as
      it provides a 'boost' in music and a build-up.
      
      
      Timeline

      
   7. 01:41:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The rhythm, that I suppose it follows, is extremely quiet. This makes
      the patten sound extremely off-key and out-of-place + it can get hard to be accurate while playing since
      there isn'T anything to orient on. I highly suggest you simply follow the vocals here.
      
      
      Timeline

      
2. Placement Issues:
   1. 02:04:667 (4,5) - To me personally there is no reason to suddenly increase the distance. I know
      the purpose was to emphasize the vocals a bit more and to seperate it as a single part from the
      guitars + build-up but I think that wasn't the right choice. If you really wanted the vocals
      to stand out, you should convert 02:04:961 (5) into two cirles. That will give a diffrent tapping-
      rhythm and it will be recognizeble, that a new part has started. Ofc you'd have to fix the pattern accordingly.
      
      
      Pattern

      
3. Cosmetical Issues:
   1. 01:11:432 (1,1,1) - Remove the NC. This can get rather confusing to follow, also every NC provides
      a signiffican boost in HP which can make the map too easy. Other than that, the NC has no function here
      in terms of rhythm or music.
   2. 01:30:256 (1,1,1) - ^

General

1. I think you must change the combo color "Combo 3" Because I see the difference between "Combo 3" and "Combo 1" were a bit close so someone will see it as a same color.
2. I think you will need to find someone that good at timing because I hear that some part of mapset were a bit off from the song. Like 00:22:314 - .

Normal

1. 00:24:961 (6) - I suggest to make the 2nd white tick curved in other way => http://puu.sh/i8aJn/995602aeab.jpg to give more distance between that slider and 00:26:432 (1) - 's tail so we can avoid a little confuse.
2. 00:45:256 (1,5) - Maybe you can do something about this overlap ?
3. 00:59:079 (1) - This spinner should be started at 00:59:373 - because the emphasis in the song was there. And to continue the 1 beat flow from 00:57:020 (5) - . People (Especially me) will start spinning at 00:59:373 - because of that 1 beat flow.
4. 01:39:961 (5,6,7) - for this part, try to use this pattern => http://puu.sh/i8blg/542d242fa8.jpg because I hear the emphasis was at 01:40:256 - so this part should be a click.

Hard

1. 01:10:844 (1,2,3,4) - It's better to follow both instrument and vocal like you did in Normal Diff rather than just follow the vocal.
2. 01:29:667 (4,5,6,7) - same as above.
3. 01:26:726 (5) - I think you can reverse it in other way => http://puu.sh/i8bKa/c3e564966d.jpg to avoid the confuse between it and 01:27:608 (1) - because someone (like me) who play it with FL mod won't figure that there was a reverse because the reverse arrow will be lost.
4. 01:39:961 (3) - Like I said in Normal diff about where should be the click was.

Combo Color

1. How about adding 1 more color, Lavender, make it 4 combo colors 0.0

Normal

1. 01:42:020 (1) - Prefer to map here, spin is like a really fast cursor movement, doesn't fit here, no audible changes

Hard

1. 01:29:667 (4) - NC like 01:10:844 (1) -
2. 01:44:226 (1) - Same as Normal 0.0

Others

• Really short mod, no major issues
  
  Rhythms and hitsounds are pretty much ready, but I don't like how you arrange the sliders (esp Normal), too many shapes, forced (imperfect) blankets
  
  I'm sorry

General

1. Since you trim the song into half, you can add short version ver in the tags. Add also ファイナルファンタジー (this is the Japanese title for the game), ff10-2 ffx-2.

Normal

1. 00:24:948 (6) - I think the head would need a whistle, else it sounds empty.
2. 00:24:948 (6) - I would go follow the instruments instead of the vocals since the rhythms are following the melody and it would keep consistency.Currently it doesn't sound good to me. Try this instead:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:242 (1) - Personal preferences; move the red node to where the slidertick would go in a hollow, like x:493 y:286. The bounce effect will fit with the upbeat on 00:45:831 .
4. 02:05:242 to the end - The patterns are repeated like 01:46:419 to 01:58:772 twice which is kind of lazy to the map. I was hoping for more variety to the patterns.

Hard

1. 01:10:831 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is following the vocals, and I don't think it'll make a fit. Normal has more objects in this section, but I think Hard would also need more. Also the gaps skipping some good beats. I'd try this rhythm:
   
   SPOILER

   
   This is applies to 01:29:654 (1,2,3,4) .
2. 01:18:184 (1,2) - Keep the distance steady in-between (1.20x)? There is no change in the music that would increase the distance.
3. 01:46:419 (1,2,3) - 02:05:242 (1,2,3) - I'm questioning about those patterns, if it won't confuse the players to a 1/4 rhythm due to the little spacing. But the spacing makes us differentiate between this and 01:47:889 (4,5,6) if you can clearly see. This is not any suggestion but I just want to say that.