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Topic Starter
kazumikos
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 19, 2010 at 2:02:02 PM

Artist: Be
Title: Shanghai Runner
Source: LaTale
Tags: ost original sound track Actoz Soft Sallad4ever
BPM: 123.7
Filesize: 5858kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.57 stars, 95 notes)
  2. Hard (4.93 stars, 332 notes)
  3. Normal (4.19 stars, 181 notes)
  4. Sallad's Runner (5 stars, 339 notes)
Download: Be - Shanghai Runner
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Omg~...
...I think I'm falling in love with.........Shulin's avatar o_o!!
(>_>...`)
p/s: I hate my new mouse!!! >_<
banvi
Hello^^

mod
SPOILER
General
Hitsound volume is big overall. Please turn down~ (especially max volume)
Easy
01:32:394 (1) remove new combo
01:34:092 (2) new combo
01:43:793 (1) remove new combo
02:03:922 (1) ^
Normal
00:24:245 (3) 1 grid right(grid lv3)
00:45:587 (3,4) 1 grid right and also move the rest of them.
00:46:557 (2,3) 1 grid up
00:48:012 (3,4,5,6) 1 grid down
00:58:198 (3) ^
02:02:952 (4,5,6,1) 1 grid up
02:04:164 (2,3) 1 grid up and 1 grid right
Hard
00:21:577 (1,2,3) spacing is different with 00:20:607 (1,2,3)
00:41:949 (1) remove new combo
01:21:481 (1) ^
02:04:528 (1) uh... I think this sppiner is werid...

nicemap~
star & gl ;)
Topic Starter
kazumikos

banvi wrote:

Hello^^

mod
SPOILER
General
Hitsound volume is big overall. Please turn down~ (especially max volume)
Easy
01:32:394 (1) remove new combo
01:34:092 (2) new combo
01:43:793 (1) remove new combo
02:03:922 (1) ^
Normal
00:24:245 (3) 1 grid right(grid lv3)
00:45:587 (3,4) 1 grid right and also move the rest of them.
00:46:557 (2,3) 1 grid up
00:48:012 (3,4,5,6) 1 grid down
00:58:198 (3) ^
02:02:952 (4,5,6,1) 1 grid up
02:04:164 (2,3) 1 grid up and 1 grid right
Hard
00:21:577 (1,2,3) spacing is different with 00:20:607 (1,2,3)
00:41:949 (1) remove new combo
01:21:481 (1) ^
02:04:528 (1) uh... I think this sppiner is werid...

nicemap~
star & gl ;)
I didn't notice that xD
Thx =3
NotShinta
Easy
00:18:910 (2) - Remove grid snap and move this so that it's exactly under the end point for (1)

Hard
00:17:696 (6) - Spacing.
00:37:340 (6) - ^

Fine, actually. Well done.
Topic Starter
kazumikos

IAmNotShinta wrote:

Easy
00:18:910 (2) - Remove grid snap and move this so that it's exactly under the end point for (1)

Hard
00:17:696 (6) - Spacing.
00:37:340 (6) - ^

Fine, actually. Well done.
Thanks =D
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos).osb 这个文件删掉然后Full Submit一下
  2. Source: LaTale
  3. Tags: ost original sound track
  4. 60%开始的部分感觉音量太低了
[Easy]:
  1. 00:46:921 (T) - 这个time section 放在00:47:042
  2. 00:54:803 (1) - 已经接触到HP bar了..
  3. 01:02:467,01:02:564 (T) - 前面的那根应该在01:02:321 音量不要变 和KIAI部分一致 后面那根删掉
  4. 01:49:007 (T) - 这个放在01:49:128
  5. 02:04:528 (T) - 这个放在02:04:407
[Normal]:
  1. 00:16:000 (T) - 这里的绿线删去 直接把红线改成C2
  2. 00:46:921 (T) - KIAI取消 然后在00:47:042这里加一根音量一样的线再+KIAI
  3. 01:02:467,01:02:564 (T) - 同EASY
  4. 01:49:007 (T) - 这个放在01:49:128
  5. 02:04:528 (T) - 这个放在02:04:407
[Hard]:
  1. 00:16:000 (T) - 这里的绿线删去 直接把红线改成C2
  2. 01:02:467,01:02:564 (T) - 同EASY
  3. 01:15:175 (T) - 01:17:964的线移到这里来
  4. 01:54:464 (1) - reverse arrow被挡到太多 这个是不允许的
  5. 01:49:007 (T) - 这个放在01:49:128 以及这个音量和前面的有细微差别...应该需要调整下
  6. 02:04:528 (T) - 这个放在02:04:407
KIAI+浅色note会让不少人抓狂的呐...

star~

这个avatar好熟悉 lol
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos).osb 这个文件删掉然后Full Submit一下
  2. Source: LaTale
  3. Tags: ost original sound track
  4. 60%开始的部分感觉音量太低了
[Easy]:
  1. 00:46:921 (T) - 这个time section 放在00:47:042
  2. 00:54:803 (1) - 已经接触到HP bar了..
  3. 01:02:467,01:02:564 (T) - 前面的那根应该在01:02:321 音量不要变 和KIAI部分一致 后面那根删掉
  4. 01:49:007 (T) - 这个放在01:49:128
  5. 02:04:528 (T) - 这个放在02:04:407
[Normal]:
  1. 00:16:000 (T) - 这里的绿线删去 直接把红线改成C2
  2. 00:46:921 (T) - KIAI取消 然后在00:47:042这里加一根音量一样的线再+KIAI
  3. 01:02:467,01:02:564 (T) - 同EASY
  4. 01:49:007 (T) - 这个放在01:49:128
  5. 02:04:528 (T) - 这个放在02:04:407
[Hard]:
  1. 00:16:000 (T) - 这里的绿线删去 直接把红线改成C2
  2. 01:02:467,01:02:564 (T) - 同EASY
  3. 01:15:175 (T) - 01:17:964的线移到这里来
  4. 01:54:464 (1) - reverse arrow被挡到太多 这个是不允许的
  5. 01:49:007 (T) - 这个放在01:49:128 以及这个音量和前面的有细微差别...应该需要调整下
  6. 02:04:528 (T) - 这个放在02:04:407
KIAI+浅色note会让不少人抓狂的呐...

star~

这个avatar好熟悉 lol
Ah, Thank you =3
It fortuned that I know Chinese :|
Colin Hou
God... I thought that you are from Hong Kong, that's a deadly mistake...
Topic Starter
kazumikos
Hm...
Must be the flag :?
Vikon

kazumikos wrote:

Hm...
Must be the flag :?
yeah, the flag is too similar ~!! :D

[General]
1) I can see there are 2 .osb file, delete them~
2) the size of " Wallpaper017_1280 " is 960 X 768 ,try to use a 1024 X 768 or 800 x 600 instead.
3) this is a soft song, I don't think the countdown in [Easy] and [Normal] is suitable for the song, consider to disable them?

[Easy]
00:29:581 (2) covered by 00:27:641 (2), doesn't look good.
01:00:624 (3) end at 01:02:079? (and move the timing section here)

[Normal]
00:20:607 (1,2) spacing (too close)
00:26:913 (2,3,4,5) spacing
01:02:321 (5) remove clap and whistle, add finish?
01:41:367 (1) covered by the "300" of 01:40:397 (7), doesn't look good.

[Hard]
00:18:788 (2,3) covered by 00:17:696 (6) , doesn't look good.
01:27:544 (3) covered by the "300" of 01:26:331 (1) ,doesn't look good.
01:41:367 (1) it almost hit the hp Bar, try to pull it down?
01:54:464 (1) you miss clap and whistle at the beginner and a whistle at the end?
01:54:949 (2) miss a whistle?
02:04:407 (6) remove clap and whistle, add finish?

Nice map, star~
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Vikon wrote:

kazumikos wrote:

Hm...
Must be the flag :?
yeah, the flag is too similar ~!! :D

[General]
1) I can see there are 2 .osb file, delete them~
2) the size of " Wallpaper017_1280 " is 960 X 768 ,try to use a 1024 X 768 or 800 x 600 instead.
3) this is a soft song, I don't think the countdown in [Easy] and [Normal] is suitable for the song, consider to disable them?

[Easy]
00:29:581 (2) covered by 00:27:641 (2), doesn't look good.
01:00:624 (3) end at 01:02:079? (and move the timing section here) but imo, it should be end at 01:02:321, cuz that is right the end of the bass sound :? any later or earlier sound weird...(I tried)

[Normal]
00:20:607 (1,2) spacing (too close)
00:26:913 (2,3,4,5) spacing
01:02:321 (5) remove clap and whistle, add finish? yea, that sound better but still weird somehow... :-? so I just added finish but didn't remove clap and whistle, then I also added finish in (3) and (4). Cuz, in my computer that sound just fine... :cry:
01:41:367 (1) covered by the "300" of 01:40:397 (7), doesn't look good.

[Hard]
00:18:788 (2,3) covered by 00:17:696 (6) , doesn't look good.
01:27:544 (3) covered by the "300" of 01:26:331 (1) ,doesn't look good.
01:41:367 (1) it almost hit the hp Bar, try to pull it down?
01:54:464 (1) you miss clap and whistle at the beginner and a whistle at the end? Eeps, I forgot to add them from the last time I fixed my map +_+
01:54:949 (2) miss a whistle?
02:04:407 (6) remove clap and whistle, add finish? Uhm.. like normal imo

Nice map, star~
Thx alot for modding
I fixed them all :D
Garven
As per your request:

[Easy]
The whistles that you put in for your kiai sections sound kind of random at best. Try to do some sort of pattern with your whistles to try and accent the music.
Otherwise, fine.

[Normal]
Oh hey, hit sounds now. Maybe try to do more with your easy on hit sounds then. :/
Diff is fine, though.

[Hard]
00:56:258 (4,5,6) - Scoot these three right one grid. (and re-adjust the later combo too)

Nice and straightforward mapset here. Nothing for me to pick at besides hit sounds anyway.
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Easy]
The whistles that you put in for your kiai sections sound kind of random at best. Try to do some sort of pattern with your whistles to try and accent the music.ok, I fixed that random sound
Otherwise, fine.

[Normal]
Oh hey, hit sounds now. Maybe try to do more with your easy on hit sounds then. :/ I tried :( but it sound not good as normal cuz easy got less hits and more sliders T.T so imo, the only hit sound can be added in easy map is whistle.. T.T
Diff is fine, though.

[Hard]
00:56:258 (4,5,6) - Scoot these three right one grid. (and re-adjust the later combo too) fixed xD

Nice and straightforward mapset here. Nothing for me to pick at besides hit sounds anyway.
Thx alot for modding :)
La Cataline
[general]
i like it, how you stylized combo colours according to the bgs.
[normal]
01:40:397(7) new combo?
[hard]
combos are strange, that's why some mods might be strange too:
SPOILER
00:46:315(1) no new combo?(not sure)
00:56:743(6) new combo?
01:01:351(1) no new combo?(not sure)
01:34:334(1) no new combo?
01:34:577(2) new combo?
01:38:457(4) ^
01:38:700(1) no new combo?
01:39:670(3) according to the previous combo consistency there should be a new combo here.
01:39:912(1) no new combo?
01:43:065(7) according to the previous combo consistency there should be a new combo here.
01:47:915(1) no new combo?(not sure)
01:51:068(7) new combo?
01:51:796(1) no new combo?
01:54:464(1) ^
01:54:949(2) new combo?
02:01:497(1) no new combo?
02:02:467(1)^
02:02:709(2) new combo?
star~
Topic Starter
kazumikos

La Cataline wrote:

[general]
i like it, how you stylized combo colours according to the bgs.Thx xD
[normal]
01:40:397(7) new combo?done =3
[hard]
combos are strange, that's why some mods might be strange too:
SPOILER
00:46:315(1) no new combo?(not sure)Yea, it's ok without new combo but I think that would make the combo being too long(?!) :? so i just made new combo here according to 3 hitsounds
00:56:743(6) new combo?
01:01:351(1) no new combo?(not sure)It's fine there ( I think? :? ) replace (6) by a new combo then remove new combo at (1) doesn't change anything
01:34:334(1) no new combo?fixed
01:34:577(2) new combo?ok
01:38:457(4) ^
01:38:700(1) no new combo?Uhm, I think place the new combo at 01:38:700 is better, thx for suggesting xD
01:39:670(3) according to the previous combo consistency there should be a new combo here.done
01:39:912(1) no new combo?ok now
01:43:065(7) according to the previous combo consistency there should be a new combo here.mhm, :-? god I shouldn't place a slider here ~.~ (so confused +_+)
01:47:915(1) no new combo?(not sure)Uhm, Just like 00:46:315 it's gonna be too long :S
01:51:068(7) new combo?it's ok now
01:51:796(1) no new combo?^
01:54:464(1) ^^
01:54:949(2) new combo?^
02:01:497(1) no new combo?^
02:02:467(1)^^
02:02:709(2) new combo?k
star~
Thx alot for modding and suggesting :)
Sunny Holic
what a lovely music and cool map! i love it very much! good background and good map >_<!

Hard
I strongly recommend use these combo colors >_< will be more lovely with these pastel colors
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 241,208,215
Combo3 : 175,240,249
Combo4 : 250,137,112

00:45:829 (6) - new combo
00:46:314 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:978 (5,6) - i think you can stack better without gird snap~
00:52:257 (2,3) - turn off grid snap and use 0.0x distance snap, can stack better
01:00:381 (3) - 1 grid up and right
01:19:055 (3,4,5,6) - 1 grid up
01:27:544 (3) - use 0.0x distance snap~
01:32:637 (2) - 1 grid down
01:34:334 (5) - 2 grid up and 1 grid left
01:36:274 (4,5,6,7) - 1 grid up


Normal
3rd combo color try this 'R:190 G:249 B:254'
and 4th combo color 'R:21 G:99 B215' is better

00:18:667 (1,2,3) - i think you can stack better without gird snap~


Easy
i think don't use grid snap for this diff.. unnecessary
try to place all notes without grid snap, will looks better

try use these combo colors
[Colours]
Combo1 : 201,170,44
Combo2 : 250,244,130
Combo3 : 255,170,130
Combo4 : 251,125,133

01:37:487 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid right


~
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Sunny Holic wrote:

what a lovely music and cool map! i love it very much! good background and good map >_<!

Hard
I strongly recommend use these combo colors >_< will be more lovely with these pastel colors
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 241,208,215>> This color is almost... white :| so I think I'll use my color which is a bit.... pinker! xD
Combo3 : 175,240,249
Combo4 : 250,137,112

00:45:829 (6) - new combo
00:46:314 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:978 (5,6) - i think you can stack better without gird snap~
00:52:257 (2,3) - turn off grid snap and use 0.0x distance snap, can stack better
01:00:381 (3) - 1 grid up and right
01:19:055 (3,4,5,6) - 1 grid up
01:27:544 (3) - use 0.0x distance snap~
01:32:637 (2) - 1 grid down
01:34:334 (5) - 2 grid up and 1 grid left
01:36:274 (4,5,6,7) - 1 grid up


Normal
3rd combo color try this 'R:190 G:249 B:254'
and 4th combo color 'R:21 G:99 B215' is better

00:18:667 (1,2,3) - i think you can stack better without gird snap~


Easy
i think don't use grid snap for this diff.. unnecessary
try to place all notes without grid snap, will looks better

try use these combo colors
[Colours]
Combo1 : 201,170,44
Combo2 : 250,244,130
Combo3 : 255,170,130
Combo4 : 251,125,133

01:37:487 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid right


~
Ok, I fixed everything else :D
Thx alot for modding xD
brikel
Hi~ Hi~ :D

Umm... If You don't used SB, remove "be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos).osb" and upload fullsubmission
And.... I think Slider Tick Rate change 1. 2 STR feel noisy.

[Easy]
Fine~~ :)

[Normal]
um.. The hitsound is noisy.. sound volume set 50% and don't use many hitsound
And 'clap+whistle' is so noisy. use only 1 sound.
00:50:195 (2) - remove whistle?
00:54:075 (2) - remove whistle?
01:01:836 (3),(4) - use only finish and 01:02:321 (5) - use "finish+whistle".
01:45:490 (2) - move the end point at 01:45:975, that means use 1 repeat. And
01:46:218 ,01:46:460 - add circle
01:52:281 (2) - remove whistle?
02:03:922 (1), (2) - use only finish and 02:04:407 (3) - use "finish+whistle".

[Hard]
Um....don't use many hitsound. It's noisy. :o
01:01:836 (3),(4) - use only finish and 01:02:321 (5) - use "finish+whistle".
02:03:922 (1), (2) - use only finish and 02:04:407 (3) - use "finish+whistle".

It's good song. Star~ :)
Topic Starter
kazumikos

brikel wrote:

Hi~ Hi~ :D

Umm... If You don't used SB, remove "be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos).osb" and upload fullsubmissionreally, I wanna use SB :cry: but it's just .... running around in my head :( *sniff
And.... I think Slider Tick Rate change 1. 2 STR feel noisy. ok, I removed it

[Easy]
Fine~~ :)

[Normal]
um.. The hitsound is noisy.. sound volume set 50% and don't use many hitsound
And 'clap+whistle' is so noisy. use only 1 sound. :( That would be mean my computer got problem
00:50:195 (2) - remove whistle?
00:54:075 (2) - remove whistle?
01:01:836 (3),(4) - use only finish and 01:02:321 (5) - use "finish+whistle".
01:45:490 (2) - move the end point at 01:45:975, that means use 1 repeat. And
01:46:218 ,01:46:460 - add circle
01:52:281 (2) - remove whistle?
02:03:922 (1), (2) - use only finish and 02:04:407 (3) - use "finish+whistle".

[Hard]
Um....don't use many hitsound. It's noisy. :o
01:01:836 (3),(4) - use only finish and 01:02:321 (5) - use "finish+whistle".
02:03:922 (1), (2) - use only finish and 02:04:407 (3) - use "finish+whistle".

It's good song. Star~ :)
Ok,I fixed all
Thx a lot ^^
Shulin
General:

-- Source should be just “LaTale” you don’t need "Original Soundtrack" (add to tags?)
-- Remove “Shanghai” from tags, it’s in the song title.
-- Delete .osb and full submit.
-- Offset seems a bit late, try +8-10 (get a second opinion?)

Easy:

-- It would be great if you used your custom hitclap here to.

00:15:999 -- Reduce hitsound volume by 2-3 ticks. (Try to keep volume consistent across all difficulties)
00:47:042 – Reduce the volume on this inheriting section to.
00:47:042 (1) – Add finish to the start?
01:48:158 (3) – Add finish at the end?

Nice Easy.

Normal:

-- Same thing about volume here, try to get it the same as Easy and Hard.
-- Find a BG without the black borders?
-- Hp Drain +1?

00:47:042 (1) – Add finish?
01:17:964 – Raise the volume by 1-2 ticks, too quiet imo.
01:49:128 (1) – Add finish?
02:04:407 (3) – Raise the volume on this note? You’ve placed hitsounds but made it silent =S

Hard:

00:18:667 (1,2,3) – Move this left a little so it’s not overlapping with 00:17:696 (6) –
00:47:042 (1) – Add finish?
00:53:105 (2,3,4) – Was this intentionally misaligned?
01:15:417 to 01:32:273 – You should try to avoid using silent notes (especially for so long), try increasing the volume by 1-2 ticks.
01:49:128 (1) – Add finish?

This difficulty feels a little clustered at times, it’s fine though =P

Decent mapset, minor suggestions. Star ^_^
roflninja
Hi :)

[normal]

01:20:995 (2,3) - nothing wrong, but a little high, this just bugs me, up to you to change
hp drain +1 maybe? again fine and up to you

nice map ;)
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Source should be just “LaTale” you don’t need "Original Soundtrack" (add to tags?)
-- Remove “Shanghai” from tags, it’s in the song title.
-- Delete .osb and full submit.Weird, I deleted that file but y it keep reappear o_o, and yea, I did a full submit but how come everyone keep telling me so :?
-- Offset seems a bit late, try +8-10 (get a second opinion?)k, i fixed it

Easy:

-- It would be great if you used your custom hitclap here to.

00:15:999 -- Reduce hitsound volume by 2-3 ticks. (Try to keep volume consistent across all difficulties)
00:47:042 – Reduce the volume on this inheriting section to.
00:47:042 (1) – Add finish to the start?
01:48:158 (3) – Add finish at the end?
done :|

Nice Easy.

Normal:

-- Same thing about volume here, try to get it the same as Easy and Hard.
-- Find a BG without the black borders?
-- Hp Drain +1?

00:47:042 (1) – Add finish?
01:17:964 – Raise the volume by 1-2 ticks, too quiet imo.
01:49:128 (1) – Add finish?
02:04:407 (3) – Raise the volume on this note? You’ve placed hitsounds but made it silent =SEeps, I forgot to delete that time section :|

Hard:

00:18:667 (1,2,3) – Move this left a little so it’s not overlapping with 00:17:696 (6) –
00:47:042 (1) – Add finish?
00:53:105 (2,3,4) – Was this intentionally misaligned? Actually... yea.... but I think I'm gonna fix it
01:15:417 to 01:32:273 – You should try to avoid using silent notes (especially for so long), try increasing the volume by 1-2 ticks.
01:49:128 (1) – Add finish?

This difficulty feels a little clustered at times, it’s fine though =Pk, I see wat u mean :|

Decent mapset, minor suggestions. Star ^_^
Thx alot
Updating :D
Topic Starter
kazumikos

roflninja wrote:

Hi :)

[normal]

01:20:995 (2,3) - nothing wrong, but a little high, this just bugs me, up to you to change
hp drain +1 maybe? again fine and up to you

nice map ;)
Thx :)
[DBF]
[Overall]
Notes/sliders must be put only on map border.
Dont put timing sections exactly on the notes, put this on blue/red ticks, but not on notes.

[Easy]
Overall difficulty +2.
02:03:445 (3) - add bit.

[Normal]
02:04:651 - make time section with "end KIAI time"

Star~
KRZY
Hi~

Sorry for the late modding, I must be really lazy lol

[Easy]
In general, try to add claps every beat or so during kiai time. All-whistle is not fun! :(

00:29:112 (1) - Right now it looks like this:
How about making it like this?
Looks more arranged imo XD

02:02:240 (2) - Look at this one also:
How about making it like this?
Again, looks more arranged XD

[Normal]
02:04:423 (3) - End kiai time here.

[Hard]
00:27:649 (7) - Move 1 grid up.


It's hard to make Normal as enjoyable as yours is :D Good job!

Star!
Sallad4ever
A very cute song, I love it :)
Can I make a diff for you?
Topic Starter
kazumikos

DJ KRZY wrote:

Hi~

Sorry for the late modding, I must be really lazy lol

[Easy]
In general, try to add claps every beat or so during kiai time. All-whistle is not fun! :(

00:29:112 (1) - Right now it looks like this:
How about making it like this?
Looks more arranged imo XD

02:02:240 (2) - Look at this one also:
How about making it like this?
Again, looks more arranged XD

[Normal]
02:04:423 (3) - End kiai time here.

[Hard]
00:27:649 (7) - Move 1 grid up.


It's hard to make Normal as enjoyable as yours is :D Good job!

Star!

[DBF] wrote:

[Overall]
Notes/sliders must be put only on map border.
Dont put timing sections exactly on the notes, put this on blue/red ticks, but not on notes.

[Easy]
Overall difficulty +2.
02:03:445 (3) - add bit.

[Normal]
02:04:651 - make time section with "end KIAI time"

Star~
Thx alot!!
I fixed all xD
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Sallad4ever wrote:

A very cute song, I love it :) Thx xD
Can I make a diff for you?
sure~y not xD
Sallad4ever

kazumikos wrote:

Sallad4ever wrote:

A very cute song, I love it :) Thx xD
Can I make a diff for you?
sure~y not xD
Thanks :)
Here's the first half
Download: Be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos) [Sallad's Runner].osu
I promise I'll finish this by tomorrow or 2 days if I'm late (cause it's not good to do fast mapping :3)

I hope you'll like it :D
Yuji Tokaji
Hello,

[Easy]

Good work !

[Normal]

- 01:27:188(2) : On the white tick 01:27:309.
- 01:27:552(3) : On the white tick 01:27:794.

[Hard]

Very good !


Pretty map & song.
Get my star !
Sallad4ever
Yes done :)
still need mods though orz
Download: Sallad's Runner.rar

Please used that BG for my diff :3
Sallad4ever
Hai Kazumi please update my diff =3
Download: Be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos) [Sallad's Runner].osu
Thanks :D
mekadon_old
Hi~~

[easy]
00:54:811 (1) - End points not aligned at the same x axis (horizontal line)
01:56:897 (1) - try changing this shape into smth better

[normal]
01:51:561 (6) - align with (3); it's really a little out by few grids so you don't really need to care about it if you want :D

[hard]
01:01:844 (4,5,6) - Try making jumps or change it into a spinner
01:49:136 (1) - Align with (5)
02:03:930 (4,5,6) - Convert all to soft hitsounds

[sallad's runner]
00:56:751 (1,2,3,4) - Please change it, it might throw some ppl off
IMO this diff is kinda dissapointing though
Topic Starter
kazumikos

mekadon95 wrote:

Hi~~

[easy]
00:54:811 (1) - End points not aligned at the same x axis (horizontal line)done
01:56:897 (1) - try changing this shape into smth betterk

[normal]
01:51:561 (6) - align with (3); it's really a little out by few grids so you don't really need to care about it if you want :DI fixed it ^^

[hard]
01:01:844 (4,5,6) - Try making jumps or change it into a spinnerdone, hope it's ok :?
01:49:136 (1) - Align with (5)done
02:03:930 (4,5,6) - Convert all to soft hitsoundsthat was soft hitsound :|

[sallad's runner]
00:56:751 (1,2,3,4) - Please change it, it might throw some ppl off
IMO this diff is kinda dissapointing thoughIt's fine and interesting IMO ^^

Thx alot for modding =3
Sallad4ever

mekadon95 wrote:

Hi~~
[sallad's runner]
00:56:751 (1,2,3,4) - Please change it, it might throw some ppl off really? I'm sure I'm following the music here so the music could guide the player
IMO this diff is kinda dissapointing though Unless you said which part that make you dissapointed I can't fixed anything :(
Thanks for the modding :)
Mok
My, my, i was absent, sorry TT

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
Remove La Tale from Tags, is already the Source.

[Easy]
You should decrease HP Drain Rate by two or 3 ticks.

[Normal]
You should increas HP Drain Rate by 1 tick.
Lemon Water_old
Hello!
Just some suggestions. ^^

General
Maybe add Actoz Soft to the tags since they made the game.

Easy
Looks good to me. :)

Normal
Couldn't find anything wrong here either. :o

Hard
Oh look, I finally found some things!

00:46:323 (4) - Move 1 grid up and 1 grid left. (Lvl 3)
01:21:367 (x) - Maybe add note?
01:34:100 (4) - Move 1 grid down. (Lvl 3)
01:55:684 (5) - This slider sounds funny here.
02:00:050 (7) - Style suggestion: Move 10 grid right.

Sallad's Runner
00:22:556 (2) - Move 2 grid right and 1 grid down. (Lvl 3)
01:33:978 (x) - Maybe add note here?

Nothing serious, this map was really well made!
STAR!
EDIT: Oops I faked starred! >:(
REAL STAR!
Sallad4ever
Applied the nazi mod :3
for the add note part, I actually want to start it slow after the previous kick sliders that's why I didn't put a note there
Download: Be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos) [Sallad's Runner].osu

Thanks for modding KirbyLemons In Your Eyes :P
Topic Starter
kazumikos

tmokb93 wrote:

My, my, i was absent, sorry TT

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
Remove La Tale from Tags, is already the Source.k

[Easy]
You should decrease HP Drain Rate by two or 3 ticks.done :3

[Normal]
You should increas HP Drain Rate by 1 tick.done

Lemons In Your Eyes wrote:

Hello!
Just some suggestions. ^^

General
Maybe add Actoz Soft to the tags since they made the game.k

Easy
Looks good to me. :)

Normal
Couldn't find anything wrong here either. :o

Hard
Oh look, I finally found some things!

00:46:323 (4) - Move 1 grid up and 1 grid left. (Lvl 3)done ^^
01:21:367 (x) - Maybe add note?uhm, I think it's fine here
01:34:100 (4) - Move 1 grid down. (Lvl 3)k
01:55:684 (5) - This slider sounds funny here.yea =3... anyway, imo it shouldn't be changed :|
02:00:050 (7) - Style suggestion: Move 10 grid right.done

Sallad's Runner
00:22:556 (2) - Move 2 grid right and 1 grid down. (Lvl 3)
01:33:978 (x) - Maybe add note here?
Thx alot for ur help xD
Sunny Holic
wow~ you got a cool guest diff >_<

here is some suggestions~

Sallad's Runner
try these cute combo colors that suits your cute background~ >_<
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 255,134,159
Combo3 : 255,219,187
Combo4 : 248,236,177

01:26:703 (6,7,8) - remove these and add 3 notes like 01:26:824 (6),01:27:188 (7),01:27:552 (8).. so that make notes follow piano sound

and below is just suggestions ^-^.. with same beat, some places are 3 stream but some places are not.. i think need unify..
make it 3 streams only in kiai time, or unify whole map with 3 streams. choose one~

unify whole map with 3 streams
00:31:650 (N) - add note between last one and next one
00:32:863 (N) - ^
00:33:833 (N) - ^
00:35:773 (N) - ^
00:36:743 (N) - ^
00:37:713 (N) - ^
00:39:653 (N) - ^
01:33:978 (N) - ^
01:35:919 (N) - ^
01:37:859 (N) - ^
01:38:829 (N) - ^
01:39:799 (N) - ^
3 streams only in kiai time
00:41:594 (3) - remove note
00:43:534 (3) - ^
01:43:679 (3) - ^
Sallad4ever
Sorry I'm really late kazumi, it's hard to wake up after watching the WC final :o

Nice idea Sunny :D
I choose to remove the notes before kiai
as for the combo color, I used your suggestion but I darken them cause it's too bright when in kiai :o

Thanks for the modding :3
Sallad4ever
lol I didn't realize double post :o

Download: Be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos) [Sallad's Runner].osu
Musty
I love it too ^^

You want to me a mod ^^

i mod :)

Easy :

[01:23:700] (1,2,3) The spacing for this series is bad, space equitably ;)

Sorry but i have only this mod xD

Star <3
Leorda
Chao

[General]
Add "Sallad4ever" in tags please (except [Sallad's Runner])

[File]
Delete osb file

[Easy]
00:26:678 (1) - Whistle at end?
00:31:044 (5) - Whistle?
00:54:811 (1) - Make symetric?
01:20:761 (1) - Too short for easy diff
01:23:671 (1) - ^
01:28:522 (1) - ^

01:52:046 (4) - Move 1 grid down?

[Normal]
00:33:469 (5,6) - Random pattern! Make it like this please http://puu.sh/2BA
01:22:701 (4) - Not stack with 3 at end

[Hard]
01:01:844 (4) - New combo? Since it's jump pattern
02:03:930 (4) - ^

[Sallad's Runner]
*) Please add "ost" "original" "sound" "track" "Actoz" "Soft" in tags please, the tags must same on each diff
*) Don't use gray combo color, because that color is same at multiplayer when player gets failed

Good song
STAR
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Leorda wrote:

Chao

[General]
Add "Sallad4ever" in tags please (except [Sallad's Runner])
k
[File]
Delete osb file

[Easy]
00:26:678 (1) - Whistle at end?
00:31:044 (5) - Whistle?
00:54:811 (1) - Make symetric?
01:20:761 (1) - Too short for easy diff
01:23:671 (1) - ^
01:28:522 (1) - ^

01:52:046 (4) - Move 1 grid down?
done
[Normal]
00:33:469 (5,6) - Random pattern! Make it like this please http://puu.sh/2BAwell I made a few changings here which I think, look better
01:22:701 (4) - Not stack with 3 at endit was ><

[Hard]
01:01:844 (4) - New combo? Since it's jump pattern
02:03:930 (4) - ^
k

[Sallad's Runner]
*) Please add "ost" "original" "sound" "track" "Actoz" "Soft" in tags please, the tags must same on each diff
*) Don't use gray combo color, because that color is same at multiplayer when player gets failed

Good song
STAR

Sweyax wrote:

I love it too ^^love? wat? :S u mean Shulin's avatar? :S

You want to me a mod ^^

i mod :)

Easy :

[01:23:700] (1,2,3) The spacing for this series is bad, space equitably ;) ok I fixed it ^^

Sorry but i have only this mod xD

Star <3
Thx alot for modding :3
Krisom
Modding as requested on queue

Looks like I like this song!!


[Easy]
00:31:529 (1) - Finish the start
00:57:236 (3) - Unwhistle the start.
00:58:691 (1) - Unwhistle the repeat
01:00:632 (3) - Whistle the start. Maybe add a finish at the end?
01:32:402 (3) - Maybe add a finish at the end?
01:50:106 (2) - Unwhistle both end and start.
01:52:046 (4) - Unwhistle start.
01:56:897 (1) - Finish the start. Also, I was expecting a clap at the end.
02:00:777 (1) - Finish the start.
Good!

[Normal]
Don't you think is kinda hard for a normal? lot's of 1/2 for a normal imo.
00:49:961 (1,2,3) - The clap at the end would sound much better if (2) was not whistled imo.
00:53:841 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:811 (1,2...5) - I'd remove the whistles from the 1/2 notes. It's ok as it is now though.
00:57:721 (1,2,3) - /look at 00:49:961/
01:33:615 (1) - Finish
Why during the second Kiai it feels like if the clapped notes are also whistled?...
Oh, use for the second kiai what I suggested in the first one (if you use what i suggested for the first one, that is...)

[Hard]
01:33:615 (1) - Finish?
01:43:073 (1) - You may want to move this one (and the notes stacked under it) 1 or 2 grids right. As it is stacked, the spacing visually changes when playing, and then (1) feels closer to (6) comparing (5) and (6)'s spacing. It's up to you though.
Well! I like it!!

[Sallads]
Sweet as always


Star!
Shiro
to change absolutely
not great, to change if possible
suggestions

Easy:
02:00:777 (1) - This slider is partially hidden by the previous one. It's still playable though.
I like the hitsounds a lot on this diff. The diff itself isn't boring, that's a plus.

Normal:
Nothing wrong on this map. Once again, the map is very pleasant to play, and the hitsounds are very nice.

Hard:
Nothing wrong. Extremely pleasant to play. The little streams are perfectly placed and aren't retardedly long and fit perfectly the music. Hitsounds, once again, are very good.

Sallad's Runner:
As pleasant to play as the other diffs. Hitsounds are nice, too.
00:39:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this pattern a lot.
00:44:140 (5,7) - I wouldn't introduce those little jumps though.

This is the best map I've ever modded, and one of the best I've downloaded. I'm looking forward to it being ranked.
Sakura
Aha! LaTale song why did you remind me that i need to log back in before my pet dies once again while i hiatus >_<
oh yeah im supposed to mod this, not complain about me going to hiatus on LaTale. Also how the hell did u get the sound track, there are a few LaTale songs i love i would like to map >_>

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
Fine

[Sallad's Runner]
01:15:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - For this (and other similar increasing spacing) i recommend you use new combo every 4 notes, it would look better.

Ok, i'll give you a star while i go run shangri-la again... wait what? i need to mod a lot i dont have time for that DX lol
Yay for random comments anyways +Star
Sallad4ever

Odaril wrote:

Sallad's Runner:
00:44:140 (5,7) - I wouldn't introduce those little jumps though. I used 1.5 DS for these jumps and I think it's big enough :D

Sakura301 wrote:

[Sallad's Runner]
01:15:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - For this (and other similar increasing spacing) i recommend you use new combo every 4 notes, it would look better.
Yup I'll try changing the combo according to the stress on the song...... maybe :?
Thanks a lot for the modding everyone :)
Download: Be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos) [Sallad's Runner].osu
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Krisom wrote:

Modding as requested on queue

Looks like I like this song!!


[Easy]
00:31:529 (1) - Finish the start
00:57:236 (3) - Unwhistle the start.
00:58:691 (1) - Unwhistle the repeat
01:00:632 (3) - Whistle the start. Maybe add a finish at the end?
01:32:402 (3) - Maybe add a finish at the end?
01:50:106 (2) - Unwhistle both end and start.
01:52:046 (4) - Unwhistle start.
01:56:897 (1) - Finish the start. Also, I was expecting a clap at the end.
02:00:777 (1) - Finish the start.
Good!
Done xD

[Normal]
Don't you think is kinda hard for a normal? lot's of 1/2 for a normal imo.Then should I change it normal+? :S anyway imo, the only difference between easy and normal is 1/2 notes =S
00:49:961 (1,2,3) - The clap at the end would sound much better if (2) was not whistled imo.
00:53:841 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:811 (1,2...5) - I'd remove the whistles from the 1/2 notes. It's ok as it is now though.
00:57:721 (1,2,3) - /look at 00:49:961/
01:33:615 (1) - Finish
Why during the second Kiai it feels like if the clapped notes are also whistled?...
Oh, use for the second kiai what I suggested in the first one (if you use what i suggested for the first one, that is...)
K, I fixed it

[Hard]
01:33:615 (1) - Finish?
01:43:073 (1) - You may want to move this one (and the notes stacked under it) 1 or 2 grids right. As it is stacked, the spacing visually changes when playing, and then (1) feels closer to (6) comparing (5) and (6)'s spacing. It's up to you though.
Well! I like it!!
Done :D
[Sallads]
Sweet as always


Star!

Odaril wrote:

Easy:
02:00:777 (1) - This slider is partially hidden by the previous one. It's still playable though.well.. I intentionally did it :| But.. uhm... I fixed it, since it's kinda tough for newbie :S
I like the hitsounds a lot on this diff. The diff itself isn't boring, that's a plus.

Normal:
Nothing wrong on this map. Once again, the map is very pleasant to play, and the hitsounds are very nice.

Hard:
Nothing wrong. Extremely pleasant to play. The little streams are perfectly placed and aren't retardedly long and fit perfectly the music. Hitsounds, once again, are very good.

Sallad's Runner:
As pleasant to play as the other diffs. Hitsounds are nice, too.
00:39:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this pattern a lot.
00:44:140 (5,7) - I wouldn't introduce those little jumps though.
Thx alot for modding :D
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