Sunny Holic wrote:

what a lovely music and cool map! i love it very much! good background and good map >_<!

Hard
I strongly recommend use these combo colors >_< will be more lovely with these pastel colors

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 241,208,215>> This color is almost... white :| so I think I'll use my color which is a bit.... pinker! xD 
Combo3 : 175,240,249
Combo4 : 250,137,112

00:45:829 (6) - new combo
00:46:314 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:978 (5,6) - i think you can stack better without gird snap~
00:52:257 (2,3) - turn off grid snap and use 0.0x distance snap, can stack better
01:00:381 (3) - 1 grid up and right
01:19:055 (3,4,5,6) - 1 grid up
01:27:544 (3) - use 0.0x distance snap~
01:32:637 (2) - 1 grid down
01:34:334 (5) - 2 grid up and 1 grid left
01:36:274 (4,5,6,7) - 1 grid up


Normal
3rd combo color try this 'R:190 G:249 B:254'
and 4th combo color 'R:21 G:99 B215' is better

00:18:667 (1,2,3) - i think you can stack better without gird snap~


Easy
i think don't use grid snap for this diff.. unnecessary
try to place all notes without grid snap, will looks better

try use these combo colors

[Colours]
Combo1 : 201,170,44
Combo2 : 250,244,130
Combo3 : 255,170,130
Combo4 : 251,125,133

01:37:487 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid right


~

Ok, I fixed everything else
Thx alot for modding xD

brikel wrote:

Hi~ Hi~

Umm... If You don't used SB, remove "be - Shanghai Runner (kazumikos).osb" and upload fullsubmissionreally, I wanna use SB but it's just .... running around in my head *sniff
And.... I think Slider Tick Rate change 1. 2 STR feel noisy. ok, I removed it

[Easy]
Fine~~

[Normal]
um.. The hitsound is noisy.. sound volume set 50% and don't use many hitsound
And 'clap+whistle' is so noisy. use only 1 sound. That would be mean my computer got problem
00:50:195 (2) - remove whistle?
00:54:075 (2) - remove whistle?
01:01:836 (3),(4) - use only finish and 01:02:321 (5) - use "finish+whistle".
01:45:490 (2) - move the end point at 01:45:975, that means use 1 repeat. And
01:46:218 ,01:46:460 - add circle
01:52:281 (2) - remove whistle?
02:03:922 (1), (2) - use only finish and 02:04:407 (3) - use "finish+whistle".

[Hard]
Um....don't use many hitsound. It's noisy.
01:01:836 (3),(4) - use only finish and 01:02:321 (5) - use "finish+whistle".
02:03:922 (1), (2) - use only finish and 02:04:407 (3) - use "finish+whistle".

It's good song. Star~

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Source should be just “LaTale” you don’t need "Original Soundtrack" (add to tags?)
-- Remove “Shanghai” from tags, it’s in the song title.
-- Delete .osb and full submit.Weird, I deleted that file but y it keep reappear o_o, and yea, I did a full submit but how come everyone keep telling me so
-- Offset seems a bit late, try +8-10 (get a second opinion?)k, i fixed it

Easy:

-- It would be great if you used your custom hitclap here to.

00:15:999 -- Reduce hitsound volume by 2-3 ticks. (Try to keep volume consistent across all difficulties)
00:47:042 – Reduce the volume on this inheriting section to.
00:47:042 (1) – Add finish to the start?
01:48:158 (3) – Add finish at the end?
done

Nice Easy.

Normal:

-- Same thing about volume here, try to get it the same as Easy and Hard.
-- Find a BG without the black borders?
-- Hp Drain +1?

00:47:042 (1) – Add finish?
01:17:964 – Raise the volume by 1-2 ticks, too quiet imo.
01:49:128 (1) – Add finish?
02:04:407 (3) – Raise the volume on this note? You’ve placed hitsounds but made it silent =SEeps, I forgot to delete that time section

Hard:

00:18:667 (1,2,3) – Move this left a little so it’s not overlapping with 00:17:696 (6) –
00:47:042 (1) – Add finish?
00:53:105 (2,3,4) – Was this intentionally misaligned? Actually... yea.... but I think I'm gonna fix it
01:15:417 to 01:32:273 – You should try to avoid using silent notes (especially for so long), try increasing the volume by 1-2 ticks.
01:49:128 (1) – Add finish?

This difficulty feels a little clustered at times, it’s fine though =Pk, I see wat u mean

Decent mapset, minor suggestions. Star ^_^

Thx alot
Updating

roflninja wrote:

Hi

[normal]

01:20:995 (2,3) - nothing wrong, but a little high, this just bugs me, up to you to change
hp drain +1 maybe? again fine and up to you

nice map

DJ KRZY wrote:

Hi~

Sorry for the late modding, I must be really lazy lol

[Easy]
In general, try to add claps every beat or so during kiai time. All-whistle is not fun!

00:29:112 (1) - Right now it looks like this:

SPOILER

How about making it like this?

SPOILER

Looks more arranged imo XD

02:02:240 (2) - Look at this one also:

SPOILER

How about making it like this?

SPOILER

Again, looks more arranged XD

[Normal]
02:04:423 (3) - End kiai time here.

[Hard]
00:27:649 (7) - Move 1 grid up.


It's hard to make Normal as enjoyable as yours is Good job!

Star!

[DBF] wrote:

[Overall]
Notes/sliders must be put only on map border.
Dont put timing sections exactly on the notes, put this on blue/red ticks, but not on notes.

[Easy]
Overall difficulty +2.
02:03:445 (3) - add bit.

[Normal]
02:04:651 - make time section with "end KIAI time"

Star~

Sallad4ever wrote:

A very cute song, I love it Thx xD
Can I make a diff for you?

kazumikos wrote:

Sallad4ever wrote:

A very cute song, I love it Thx xD
Can I make a diff for you?

sure~y not xD

mekadon95 wrote:

Hi~~

[easy]
00:54:811 (1) - End points not aligned at the same x axis (horizontal line)done
01:56:897 (1) - try changing this shape into smth betterk

[normal]
01:51:561 (6) - align with (3); it's really a little out by few grids so you don't really need to care about it if you want I fixed it ^^

[hard]
01:01:844 (4,5,6) - Try making jumps or change it into a spinnerdone, hope it's ok
01:49:136 (1) - Align with (5)done
02:03:930 (4,5,6) - Convert all to soft hitsoundsthat was soft hitsound

[sallad's runner]
00:56:751 (1,2,3,4) - Please change it, it might throw some ppl off
IMO this diff is kinda dissapointing thoughIt's fine and interesting IMO ^^

mekadon95 wrote:

Hi~~
[sallad's runner]
00:56:751 (1,2,3,4) - Please change it, it might throw some ppl off really? I'm sure I'm following the music here so the music could guide the player
IMO this diff is kinda dissapointing though Unless you said which part that make you dissapointed I can't fixed anything

tmokb93 wrote:

My, my, i was absent, sorry TT

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
Remove La Tale from Tags, is already the Source.k

[Easy]
You should decrease HP Drain Rate by two or 3 ticks.done :3

[Normal]
You should increas HP Drain Rate by 1 tick.done

Lemons In Your Eyes wrote:

Hello!
Just some suggestions. ^^

General
Maybe add Actoz Soft to the tags since they made the game.k

Easy
Looks good to me.

Normal
Couldn't find anything wrong here either.

Hard
Oh look, I finally found some things!

00:46:323 (4) - Move 1 grid up and 1 grid left. (Lvl 3)done ^^
01:21:367 (x) - Maybe add note?uhm, I think it's fine here
01:34:100 (4) - Move 1 grid down. (Lvl 3)k
01:55:684 (5) - This slider sounds funny here.yea =3... anyway, imo it shouldn't be changed
02:00:050 (7) - Style suggestion: Move 10 grid right.done

Sallad's Runner
00:22:556 (2) - Move 2 grid right and 1 grid down. (Lvl 3)
01:33:978 (x) - Maybe add note here?

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 255,134,159
Combo3 : 255,219,187
Combo4 : 248,236,177

Leorda wrote:

Chao

[General]
Add "Sallad4ever" in tags please (except [Sallad's Runner])
k
[File]
Delete osb file

[Easy]
00:26:678 (1) - Whistle at end?
00:31:044 (5) - Whistle?
00:54:811 (1) - Make symetric?
01:20:761 (1) - Too short for easy diff
01:23:671 (1) - ^
01:28:522 (1) - ^
01:52:046 (4) - Move 1 grid down?
done
[Normal]
00:33:469 (5,6) - Random pattern! Make it like this please http://puu.sh/2BAwell I made a few changings here which I think, look better
01:22:701 (4) - Not stack with 3 at endit was ><

[Hard]
01:01:844 (4) - New combo? Since it's jump pattern
02:03:930 (4) - ^
k

[Sallad's Runner]
*) Please add "ost" "original" "sound" "track" "Actoz" "Soft" in tags please, the tags must same on each diff
*) Don't use gray combo color, because that color is same at multiplayer when player gets failed

Good song
STAR

Sweyax wrote:

I love it too ^^love? wat? :S u mean Shulin's avatar? :S

You want to me a mod ^^

i mod

Easy :

[01:23:700] (1,2,3) The spacing for this series is bad, space equitably ok I fixed it ^^

Sorry but i have only this mod xD

Star <3

Odaril wrote:

Sallad's Runner:
00:44:140 (5,7) - I wouldn't introduce those little jumps though. I used 1.5 DS for these jumps and I think it's big enough

Sakura301 wrote:

[Sallad's Runner]
01:15:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - For this (and other similar increasing spacing) i recommend you use new combo every 4 notes, it would look better.
Yup I'll try changing the combo according to the stress on the song...... maybe

Krisom wrote:

Modding as requested on queue

Looks like I like this song!!


[Easy]
00:31:529 (1) - Finish the start
00:57:236 (3) - Unwhistle the start.
00:58:691 (1) - Unwhistle the repeat
01:00:632 (3) - Whistle the start. Maybe add a finish at the end?
01:32:402 (3) - Maybe add a finish at the end?
01:50:106 (2) - Unwhistle both end and start.
01:52:046 (4) - Unwhistle start.
01:56:897 (1) - Finish the start. Also, I was expecting a clap at the end.
02:00:777 (1) - Finish the start.
Good!
Done xD

[Normal]
Don't you think is kinda hard for a normal? lot's of 1/2 for a normal imo.Then should I change it normal+? :S anyway imo, the only difference between easy and normal is 1/2 notes =S
00:49:961 (1,2,3) - The clap at the end would sound much better if (2) was not whistled imo.
00:53:841 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:811 (1,2...5) - I'd remove the whistles from the 1/2 notes. It's ok as it is now though.
00:57:721 (1,2,3) - /look at 00:49:961/
01:33:615 (1) - Finish
Why during the second Kiai it feels like if the clapped notes are also whistled?...
Oh, use for the second kiai what I suggested in the first one (if you use what i suggested for the first one, that is...)
K, I fixed it

[Hard]
01:33:615 (1) - Finish?
01:43:073 (1) - You may want to move this one (and the notes stacked under it) 1 or 2 grids right. As it is stacked, the spacing visually changes when playing, and then (1) feels closer to (6) comparing (5) and (6)'s spacing. It's up to you though.
Well! I like it!!
Done
[Sallads]
Sweet as always


Star!

Odaril wrote:

Easy:
02:00:777 (1) - This slider is partially hidden by the previous one. It's still playable though.well.. I intentionally did it But.. uhm... I fixed it, since it's kinda tough for newbie :S
I like the hitsounds a lot on this diff. The diff itself isn't boring, that's a plus.

Normal:
Nothing wrong on this map. Once again, the map is very pleasant to play, and the hitsounds are very nice.

Hard:
Nothing wrong. Extremely pleasant to play. The little streams are perfectly placed and aren't retardedly long and fit perfectly the music. Hitsounds, once again, are very good.

Sallad's Runner:
As pleasant to play as the other diffs. Hitsounds are nice, too.
00:39:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this pattern a lot.
00:44:140 (5,7) - I wouldn't introduce those little jumps though.

Thx alot for modding

Sakura301 wrote:

Aha! LaTale song why did you remind me that i need to log back in before my pet dies once again while i hiatus >_<
oh yeah im supposed to mod this, not complain about me going to hiatus on LaTale. Also how the hell did u get the sound track, there are a few LaTale songs i love i would like to map >_>I googled it (lol )
Well... actually u can download them here (I found this page when I was looking for a guide to raise my treasure hunter) :S

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
Fine

[Sallad's Runner]
01:15:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - For this (and other similar increasing spacing) i recommend you use new combo every 4 notes, it would look better.

Ok, i'll give you a star while i go run shangri-la again... wait what? i need to mod a lot i dont have time for that DX lol
Yay for random comments anyways +Star

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Sallad's Runner]
00:17:220 (4,6) - not symmetry= =? i guess something wrong here. turn off grid snap or distance snap to fix? (problem is caused by spacing different of 2-3 and 3-4) Yes this is weird, the DS is actually correct :? . Anyway Fixed
01:01:602 - why not use the circle here and another at 01:02:329? or use a hold slider (0.5x?) since i think you need a beat at this time and the spinner is really short, auto can only get 2000 bonus. Finally someone complain about the eggpain spinner, I love you
01:19:063 (4,5,6,7) - why not use 3/4 to fit the music? ah I'm not following the piano sound here
01:33:978 - add a note? nop :P
02:03:687 (1) - same problem. I want to keep this spinner for now cause it's near the end :D

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

at first i think you are from Hong Kong until i saw Colin Hou's mod...XDDDDD
it's... your first map? well we can always find people that is talented.
that was so ashamed It is not I tried mapping some maps before but I didn't submit them , well... just call that "training"
[General]
from 00:31:529 (1) - the volume should be a little louder than the first part?

[Easy]
nice.

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate -1
00:33:469 (5,6) - 1 grid up + 1 grid right to keep symmetry of 1&2?
01:19:063 (4,5) - just delete 5 and repeat 4 once?

[Hard]
00:19:160 (4) - it should be align with 123..?
01:37:010 (7) - 1 grid up to keep the same spacing with notes before= =

[Sallad's Runner]
00:17:220 (4,6) - not symmetry= =? i guess something wrong here. turn off grid snap or distance snap to fix? (problem is caused by spacing different of 2-3 and 3-4)
01:01:602 - why not use the circle here and another at 01:02:329? or use a hold slider (0.5x?) since i think you need a beat at this time and the spinner is really short, auto can only get 2000 bonus.
01:19:063 (4,5,6,7) - why not use 3/4 to fit the music?
01:33:978 - add a note?
02:03:687 (1) - same problem.

good map-v- and... good luck then~ a little present~

Colin Hou wrote:

God... I thought that you are from Hong Kong, that's a deadly mistake...

NatsumeRin wrote:

at first i think you are from Hong Kong until i saw Colin Hou's mod...XDDDDD

• - I love the custom clap <33333

• 00:47:050 (1) - add whistle at slider's end?
  01:18:578 (2) - place them like this?:
  01:32:402 (3) - try to use inheriting section to increase the volume step by step? (I found that you used the same method on Normal o.o please also add them on Easy >.<)
  
  
  Normal
  [list:413a2]

• Nice work!
  
  
  Sallad's
  [list:413a2]

Pokie wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

God... I thought that you are from Hong Kong, that's a deadly mistake...

NatsumeRin wrote:

at first i think you are from Hong Kong until i saw Colin Hou's mod...XDDDDD

wwwwwwww I can't stop laughing.

*cough* Okay, let's start modding

General

• - I love the custom clap <33333

Easy

• 00:47:050 (1) - add whistle at slider's end?k
  01:18:578 (2) - place them like this?: [attachment=0:98927]002.jpg[/attachment:98927] God o_o I found out a big mistake o_o 01:19:306 (3) should be place at 01:19:427 .. (after carefully check the normal and hard I recognized it =_=)
  phew I fixed it anyway thx for ur notice xD
  01:32:402 (3) - try to use inheriting section to increase the volume step by step? (I found that you used the same method on Normal o.o please also add them on Easy >.<)
  done
  
  Normal
  [list:98927]

02:00:050 (2) - whistle?
mhm

Hard

• Nice work!
  
  
  Sallad's
  [list:98927]

Nothing I should complain!


---
Perfect one! I must throw a star

mtmcl wrote:

Satisfactory. I bubble.

Sunny Holic wrote:

wow~~ congrats~~~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Thanks for the mod post Cleimaster (eventhough nothing were changed XD)

Anyway congratz with your first ranked map kazumi