ave new feat. Sakura Saori - Pure My Voices · forum

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-06-22T16:36:16+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年7月12日 at 8:11:54

Artist: ave new feat. Sakura Saori
Title: Pure My Voices
Source: PrismRhythm
Tags: Lump of Sugar ave;new
BPM: 133
Filesize: 18274kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.71 stars, 294 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 429 notes)
Normal (2 stars, 143 notes)

Download: ave new feat. Sakura Saori - Pure My Voices
Download: ave new feat. Sakura Saori - Pure My Voices (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Pure My Voices

Last edited by Aenna 2010-07-11T23:12:19+00:00, edited 10 times in total.

SamiPale

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SamiPale 2010-06-23T05:46:32+00:00

/stress

why my all ave;new beatmap can't appear pre-bg but you and saymun can D:

Mokou_Fujiwara

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Joined May 2010

Mokou_Fujiwara 2010-06-23T11:47:34+00:00

Yeah.I love this galgame and I am attracted by the character=A=
Waiting for you finished it. good luck.
Star

Furawa

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Furawa 2010-06-24T07:39:28+00:00

///v///

gowww

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gowww 2010-06-24T08:06:28+00:00

nice~

ponsaku

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ponsaku 2010-06-25T04:17:25+00:00

私に見えているものは、あなたにも見えますか？

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-06-25T15:03:43+00:00

なんというロリ声ｗｗ

taNa

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taNa 2010-06-25T18:23:38+00:00

cyborg is god

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2010-06-26T21:23:08+00:00

Hi

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

Timing looks fine

Maybe you could rename "Normal" to "Easy" and then make another Normal? the difficulty gap between Normal and Hard is pretty big, and Normal is pretty easy, so a proper Normal would fit perfectly.

[NORMAL]

Very nice. No problems

[HARD]

Doesn't feel that much easier than Insane. Hmm.

I couldn't see anything wrong though.

[INSANE]

A little overmapped imo. It isn't too bad, but it feels like you overused jumps and stacks a bit too much.

01:10:655 (1,2) - Maybe you could remove this jump? I dunno, but I don't really like this jump. Doesn't fit in very well to me. There are other jumps like this, but this one doesn't work too well.

A pretty nice map overall. Insane might be a little overmapped to me, but it wasn't enough to kill the map, so its all good.

Starred

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2010-06-29T20:38:30+00:00

Offset: 950 (-8) (Note: my comp is a little laggy, so I am not too sure about this)

Normal: fine

Hard: fine

Insane:
Combo mod:
00:23:514 (2) - I think the new combo effect you were aiming for would be more effective if you had a new combo on each word, so please add a new combo here
00:26:221 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 00:19:003 (1)

Very nice mapset. Like normal, I find very little wrong with your maps, yay! Star. (No need for kds for this post)

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-06-29T22:35:39+00:00

fixed~

Masana

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Masana 2010-06-30T14:12:47+00:00

cyborg is lolicon

DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2010-07-01T08:56:30+00:00

taNa wrote:
cyborg is god

S i R i R u wrote:
なんというロリ声ｗｗ

star~ >w</

Mystearica

Mystearica 2010-07-02T01:26:54+00:00

Just suggestions, since your map is pretty much perfect:

1. Use silenced sounds on slidertick and sliderslide? I think those'll fit in better. (Up to you here)
2. Remove ave;new from tags? You can just call the artist ave;new since that's the correct name. (Please consider this one)
3. Insane -1 overall to 7? I think 7 overall fits low BPM better, I personally would use 6 but of course, you don't need to change it if you like fast approach circles, it's not a problem.

[Insane]

01:56:551 (1) - Fade out on the spinner?
02:00:498 (1) - Fade out this last section slowly to about 30 starting at say 75-80%?

[Hard]

Same as Insane.

[Normal]

Same as Insane.

I like how you used whistles and I hate whistles, very nicely done. I LOVE your rhythm.

完璧です！お疲れ様でした。

PS lol @ bakaru loli voice

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-07-02T04:09:44+00:00

Mystearica wrote:
Just suggestions, since your map is pretty much perfect:

1. Use silenced sounds on slidertick and sliderslide? I think those'll fit in better. (Up to you here) Done~
2. Remove ave;new from tags? You can just call the artist ave;new since that's the correct name. (Please consider this one) ";" <- A lot of bugs >:
3. Insane -1 overall to 7? I think 7 overall fits low BPM better, I personally would use 6 but of course, you don't need to change it if you like fast approach circles, it's not a problem. No

[Insane]

01:56:551 (1) - Fade out on the spinner? Done~
02:00:498 (1) - Fade out this last section slowly to about 30 starting at say 75-80%? Done~

[Hard]

Same as Insane.

[Normal]

Same as Insane.

I like how you used whistles and I hate whistles, very nicely done. I LOVE your rhythm. thanks!

完璧です！お疲れ様でした。

PS lol @ bakaru loli voice

thank you ~
Added hitsound. re-dl please.

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-07-02T05:13:21+00:00

ぱくりおつ

Muya

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Muya 2010-07-02T06:31:18+00:00

Backstep

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Backstep 2010-07-02T13:40:53+00:00

Nice map.

><" Star.

quo

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quo 2010-07-02T16:30:37+00:00

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AisamaDX

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AisamaDX 2010-07-06T08:08:49+00:00

Listen to my voice~♪

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-07-11T07:39:08+00:00

"True My Heart" much? xD
Either my computer sucks really bad, and the video quality lags (and glitches a bit for me) or its the video's fault T_T...
I asked a few people, just to check offset, they got +5, and that works well for me too
^ fixed on irc

Normal-
Good

Hard-
Great

Insane-
Awesome

Your style changed a bit? (those jumps seem... familiar)
Hmmm... hopefully the video is just me >_<~ bubbled!

Alace

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Alace 2010-07-11T20:32:23+00:00

Video issue
compare with youtube`s vid http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a0BYEqFkN0E
i noticed that your vid is off frame in some parts, change a vid ??

Really nice map

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-07-11T23:12:49+00:00

changed.
re-dl plz~

Alace

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Alace 2010-07-12T09:10:00+00:00

Try this one XD
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?2ytjgmmwny2

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-07-12T10:06:35+00:00

thank you~

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-07-13T04:11:01+00:00

yay, better video quality! (though filesize is big... not breaking the rules... I think limit was 24MB... okay)

........why am I the one rebubbling this?
Baka Alace

Alace

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Alace 2010-07-13T05:58:55+00:00

because you have a lag vid
baka shin

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-07-13T07:32:02+00:00

yay( '-' )