This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 14 août 2010 at 17:56:58

Artist: ON/OFF
Title: Rinne-Rondo (TV Size)
Source: Vampire Knight Guilty
Tags: Armin
BPM: 124
Filesize: 14909kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Armin's Insane (5 stars, 325 notes)
2. Easy (1,1 stars, 64 notes)
3. Hard (4,77 stars, 187 notes)
4. Normal (3,66 stars, 110 notes)

Download: ON/OFF - Rinne-Rondo (TV Size)
Download: ON/OFF - Rinne-Rondo (TV Size) (no video)
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2nd Beatmap ! ^^

Vampire Knight Guilty -
Rinne-Rondo (TV Size) - By ON/OFF

Skin by Osuplayer111 and Card N'FoRcE
Skin Sliders Border by Armin
Thanks to Armin for the guest difficulty
[ Add video ( high quality) ]

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RE DOWNLOAD PLEASE !!

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Difficulty :

- Armin's Insane - 100% ( Done. )
- Hard - 100% ( Done. )
- Normal - 100% ( Re-Mapped. )
- Easy - 100% ( Re-Mapped. )

Modding :

1- dksslqj Mod
2- banvi Mod
3- Cyborg Mod
4- Vikon Mod
5- Odaril Mod
6- Astom Mod
7- gdeath Mod
8- ouranhshc Mod
9- I_Tatsuo_I Mod
10- Haneii Mod
11- Card N'FoRcE Mod
12- OH-SHI- Mod
13- jericho2442 Mod
12- Inozuma Mod
13- Beuchi-Chan Mod
14- Clare Mod
15- fartownik Mod
16- lepidopodus Mod
17- Azure_Kyte Mod
18- ykcarrot Mod
19- tmokb93 Mod
20- Mafiamaster Mod
21- yaya Mod
22- Clement Mod
23- Shinxyn Mod
24- Gens Mod
25- Osuplayer111 Mod


Enjoy !!

[Easy]
please delete unnecessary timing tick
00:21:690 (1) - some strange objects.. please fix
00:24:593 (1,2) - △
00:32:335 (1,3) - △
01:00:883 (1) - △
01:04:996 (1,2) - △
01:06:206 (2) - △

[Normal]
00:11:529 (6,1) - some strange objects.. please fix
00:41:287 (5) - △
00:51:448 (5,6) - △
00:57:980 (3) - distance check


[Hard]
00:44:432 (7) - add the new combo
01:16:367 (1) - Isn't it strange?

Thanks

Fixed.

Hi~

mod

star & gl

Thanks

Fixed.

Delete .osb and full submit.
Title : Rinne-Rondo-

[Hard]

00:01:367~00:06:690 (x) - 1/3 beat is better!!
00:05:238 (8) - New combo.
00:19:270 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:20:238 (3) - New combo.
00:33:061 (1) - Like this.


00:36:690 (x) - Add note~ better?


00:39:593 (4) - New combo.
00:49:270 (3) - ^
00:58:948 (7) - ^
01:20:722~01:24:593 (x) - 1/3 beat is better!!

[Normal]

00:01:367~00:06:690 (x) - Same as Hard~
00:11:045 (5) - Spacing.
00:11:529 (6) - New combo.
00:13:222 (1) - End at (00:14:916)
00:17:819 (3) - End at (00:18:303)
00:19:270 (1) - End at (00:20:722)
00:25:803 (3) - End at (00:26:529)
00:29:432 (1) - I think this is too close to the spinner before, since this is an easy diff.
00:31:367 (1) - Spacing.
00:34:270 (7) - End at (00:34:754)
00:35:238 (1) - End at (00:36:206)
00:36:690 (x) - Add circle.
00:37:174 (x) - ^
00:37:658 (x) - ^
00:38:141 (1) - End at (00:39:109) and remove new combo.
00:39:351 (2) - New combo.
00:40:077 (3) - End at (00:40:561)
00:41:287 (5) - End at (00:42:012)
00:42:980 (7) - End at (00:43:464)
00:44:190 (1) - Like this.


00:48:787 (2) - End at (00:49:720)
00:49:720 (x) - Kiai start here.
00:49:512 (3) - New combo.
00:49:512~00:53:625 (x) - Like this.


00:57:012 (2) - New combo and kiai start here.
00:57:980 (3) - End at (00:58:464)
00:59:674 (5) - End at (01:00:399)
01:08:625 (6) - New combo.
01:09:351 (7) - End at (01:09:835)
01:10:803 (1) - End at (01:12:012)
01:20:722~01:24:593 (x) - Same as Hard~

[Easy]

00:16:851 (1) - Unsnapped. x:
00:21:690 (1) - I think this is too close to the spinner before, since this is an easy diff. End at (00:22:174)
00:24:593 (1) - End at (00:25:077)
00:26:529 (1) - End at (00:27:496)
00:28:222 (1) - Move back to the white tick.(00:27:980) End at (00:28:948)
00:32:335~00:36:206 (x) - Like this.


00:39:593~00:42:980 (x) - Like this.


00:49:270~01:07:899 (x) - Like (01:12:496) pattern, or this picture pattern is better.


00:53:867 (1) - Move forward to the white tick.(00:54:109) End at (00:56:529)
01:04:996 (1) - I think this is too close to the spinner before, since this is an easy diff.
01:08:867 (1) - Move forward to the white tick.(01:09:593) End at (01:12:012)
01:16:367 (1) - End at (01:20:238)
01:20:722~01:22:658 (x) - Same as Hard~
01:24:593 (1) - End at (01:27:496)

Thanks.

Fixed.

Hi, is me again.

[General]
1) the size of your BG is 1023 x 767, try to use a 1024 x 768 instead ?


[Easy]
1) it is not recommended to place a note at blue tick in [Easy]
2) lack of hitsound
00:22:17 the changes of volume is too small, strengthen the difference or delete this timing section?
00:22:658 (1) being an [Easy], this note is too near the spinner?
00:25:561 (2) end at 00:26:045
00:27:980 (1) too near the spinner?
00:32:335 (1) ^
00:38:141 (1) ^
00:57:012 (1) ^
01:05:238 (1) ^

[Normal]
1) seems you need an "audio lead in" in this diff
00:06:690 (1) end at 00:08:141
00:09:109 (1) add a note here ?
00:41:045 (7) new combo?
00:44:190 (1) add 1 more reverse ?
00:46:609 (1) end at 00:47:335 ?
00:49:512 (1,2,3,4,5) seems they are off rhythm
00:55:561 (1) end at 00:56:529 ?
01:18:303 (1) end at 01:20:238 and move the timing section here?

[Hard]
00:01:690 (2) unsnapped object
00:03:625 (4,5) ^
00:05:399 (2,1) ^
01:21:690 (4) delete this slider and add notes at 01:21:690 ,01:21:932 ,01:22:174 ,01:22:295 ?
01:22:980 (6,1,3,4) unsnapped object ?

Thanks.

Fixed.

to change absolutely
not great, to change if possible
suggestions


Easy :
Rien à dire.

Normal :
00:17:093 (2) - Pour suivre les paroles, ce slider devrait commencer un quart de beat plus tard ( 00:17:214 - )
00:26:770 (4) - Cette note devrait se trouver à 00:26:950 - (pour suivre les paroles).

Hard :
00:02:577 (3) - Ce slider devrait commencer un quart de beat plus tard.
00:48:061 (1) - Ce slider est complètement hors du rythme, je te suggère de suivre la musique pour ici, quitte à faire finir le spinner plus vite.
01:20:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Eux aussi sont complètement hors du rythme, même remarque que précédemment.
01:23:504 (1,2,3) - Pareil.

Pas de star pour le moment, ce dernier passage que fait vraiment bizarre.

Thanks.

Fixed.

Hi x3

[General]
-Take off audio of the video, Vampire Knight Guilty - On_Off Rondo.fvl do not need audio.
-Try to use same kiai time
-Do not use timing points over the point in what you want change the volumen, use it 1/4 before or sometimes this change do not work

[Normal]
-00:46:609 (1) Maybe too short for a normal diff

[Hard]
-01:28:222 (1) start it in 01:28:162 ( 1/8 before ) and make finish it in 01:28:404 (use 1/8 for make it ), or delete it because do not fit to well the song
-Normal and Easy are much better mapped, I suggest remap some parts
-Same slider velocity that normal? maybe increse it to 1,6 - 1,7 makes the diff better

Good luck and star~

Thanks.

Fixed.

Overall:
Sound better with slidertick 1.0 imo.

[Easy]
00:26:529 (1) - the short spinner is a bit hard as [Easy].how about making it end on 00:27:980?
00:36:690 (1) - ^
i'd make it end on 00:38:141 and remove the slider on the 00:38:383 (1)

[Normal]
00:01:367 (1) - make it end on 00:02:819
00:05:238 (1) - make it end on 00:06:206
hmmm...i suggest put note following the drum.
there are some notes put between blue line and white line.
i'm confused why do you add notes like this.it seems that the rhythm is a bit strange.

[Hard]
the parts of beginning and ending appear the same situation as above i said.
i know the rhythm itself is hard to add notes.but putting notes like this is not a good selection.
Pls find attached the exapmle i made from 00:01:367 to 00:09:109.take a look whether it plays better.
the last point i have to say is that the soft-clap is not suitable for this song imo.
you can have a try to add hitsound with Normal-hit and soft-whistle.

Star!

Download: ONOFF - Rinne-Rondo (TV Size) (Slanox) [Hard].osu

Thanks for your part ^^

Fixed.

I don't know if this was said but put the slider velocity to 1.20. This aplies between 09:769 and 13:948

Thanks.

Hard
00:01:367 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 1/3 beat divisor
00:18:545 (7) - 1 grid right
00:19:996 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:23:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/3 snaps
00:25:803 (4) - spacing
00:30:400 (2) - not symmetrical
00:31:851 (3) - 1 grid up, 1 grid right
00:34:270 (4) - 1 grid right
00:41:770 (7,1) - ^
00:44:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remap this
00:48:061 (1,2) - doesn't even match the music
00:52:658 (6) - two grids up
01:01:609 (4,5) - spacing
01:08:867 (2) - 1 grid up
01:20:722 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 1/3 snaps

Normal
make sure all of the sliders are snapped

Easy
Remap this, too many unsnapped slider, too many out of phase sliders

Thanks.

Fixed.

Hai, sorry for the long wait. I can't really mod during the weekend. I can only mod during weekdays. Which may seem strange, I know.
Anyway~~
Here's my mod~

[Overall]
I can't hear any of the hit objects. Raise the volume please.
I don't like how you spam Kiai time like the way you are. Kiai time separated by two seconds? I hate it.

[Easy]
00:01:367 (1) - This slider sounds horrible landing on a blue tick. Shorten it so it can land on the white tick.
00:03:303 (2) - Same as above.
00:05:238 (3) - This slider sounds horrible the way it's placed on the timeline.
It would sound better if this spinner started at 00:07:174 and ended at the same point it's currently on.
00:09:835 - Move backward on the timineline two ticks.
Bah, this difficulty isn't very good. There's too many sliders that don't make sense.

[Normal]
00:17:093 through 00:19:029 - Why are these sliders ending on... Hell 1/6 beats? Fix it.
Oh man, there's alot of sliders like that. Were you previously mapping on 1/6 beat divisor?
That's the only major problem I have for this map.

[Hard]
This is okay.

I can't star this. Your easy is pretty bad right now, and your normal needs work.

Thanks.

Fixed.

BPM 124.17
~Easy~
00:40:56 (2,3)- spacing
00:42:254 (4,3)- ^
No hitsounds?

~Normal~
00:39:351 (2,3) – spacing
00:40:561 (3,4) - ^
00:50:964 (2,3) - ^
00:51:690 (3,4) - ^
00:51:932 (4,5) - ^
00:52:174 (5,6) - ^
01:00:158 (2,3) - ^
01:06:690 (3,4) - ^
01:07:658 (4,5) - ^
01:09:835 (2,3) - ^
01:21:690 (2,3) - ^
01:23:625 (2,3) - ^
01:24:230 (3,4) - ^
Needs more hit sounds (why not use the same ones from hard?)

~Hard~
00:01:972 (2,3) – spacing
00:02:093 (3,4) - ^
00:02:577 (4,5) - ^
00:03:787 (2,3) - ^
00:04:149 (3,4) - ^
00:10:803 (4,5) - ^
00:11:287 (5,6) - ^
00:30:642 (2,3) - ^
00:46:125 (2,3) - ^
00:50:480 (4,5) - ^
01:15:399 (8,9) - ^

Looking good so far, good luck
~Star~

Thanks.

Fixed.

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Offset: 390

- Easy:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  00:01:367 (1,2) - they sounds a bit weird at the end.
  There are way too many 1/2 beats like 00:34:512 (3,4,5,6) that make the map feel more like a Normal than like a Easy. Also, the spacing is so close that everything gets kinda messy and even harder to read. I think you should consider removing some beats in order to balance the difficulty in a better way.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:41:287 (3) - wrong and seriously misreadable spacing, move farther
  00:42:980 (4) - ^

- Normal:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Some claps, mostle near the end, sound weird. Examples: 01:07:900 (5) - 01:15:883 (4)
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:29:432 (1) - is the new combo so necessary?
  00:59:674 (4) - make it 1/4 longer
  01:23:867 (3,4) - move both one square down; then move (4) by another square to the left.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:27:254 (6) - the end is wrongly snapped: fix it lenght so that it end at the white line.
  00:39:351 (2) - the end is wrongly snapped: fix it lenght so that it end at the red line.
  00:47:093 (1) - the end is wrongly snapped: fix it lenght so that it end at the white line.
  Maybe there are others like these so please do "Timing - Recalculate Slider Lenghts" and recheck that everything is fine.

- Hard:

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:01:367 (1) - looks bad and the 1/2 speed can be distracting, so please move it a bit to the left.
  00:44:916 (7) - remove this, it sounds and play better without it.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:24:270 (8,1) - please no. Move (1) farther.
  00:47:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - totally wrong pattern. Please respect the timing placement i used in this image. Circles are also respaced in that image, but that's a suggestion, the most important thing is that you use the exact same beat timing (note: 1/4 snap divisor)
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:20:722 (1,2,3,4) - again, totally wrong and unintuitive pattern. This is the rhythm you should follow for vocals (note: 1/6 snap divisor)
  
  SPOILER

  

Sorry, all difficulties have many things that need fixing so i won't star yet.
Please fix everything i pointed out (at least what i wrote under "Errors") then ask me again after you got other 2-3 moddings from other people and i'll recheck.
Good luck.

Ok, done.
Custom Hitsound: http://up.ppy.sh/files/soft-hitclap2.wav

Download: ONOFF - Rinne-Rondo (TV Size) (Slanox) [Armin's Insane].osu

Thanks.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Offset: 390

- Easy:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  00:01:367 (1,2) - they sounds a bit weird at the end.
  There are way too many 1/2 beats like 00:34:512 (3,4,5,6) that make the map feel more like a Normal than like a Easy. Also, the spacing is so close that everything gets kinda messy and even harder to read. I think you should consider removing some beats in order to balance the difficulty in a better way.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:41:287 (3) - wrong and seriously misreadable spacing, move farther
  00:42:980 (4) - ^

- Normal:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Some claps, mostle near the end, sound weird. Examples: 01:07:900 (5) - 01:15:883 (4)
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:29:432 (1) - is the new combo so necessary?
  00:59:674 (4) - make it 1/4 longer
  01:23:867 (3,4) - move both one square down; then move (4) by another square to the left.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:27:254 (6) - the end is wrongly snapped: fix it lenght so that it end at the white line.
  00:39:351 (2) - the end is wrongly snapped: fix it lenght so that it end at the red line.
  00:47:093 (1) - the end is wrongly snapped: fix it lenght so that it end at the white line.
  Maybe there are others like these so please do "Timing - Recalculate Slider Lenghts" and recheck that everything is fine.

- Hard:

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:01:367 (1) - looks bad and the 1/2 speed can be distracting, so please move it a bit to the left.
  00:44:916 (7) - remove this, it sounds and play better without it.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:24:270 (8,1) - please no. Move (1) farther.
  00:47:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - totally wrong pattern. Please respect the timing placement i used in this image. Circles are also respaced in that image, but that's a suggestion, the most important thing is that you use the exact same beat timing (note: 1/4 snap divisor)
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:20:722 (1,2,3,4) - again, totally wrong and unintuitive pattern. This is the rhythm you should follow for vocals (note: 1/6 snap divisor)
  
  SPOILER

  

Sorry, all difficulties have many things that need fixing so i won't star yet.
Please fix everything i pointed out (at least what i wrote under "Errors") then ask me again after you got other 2-3 moddings from other people and i'll recheck.
Good luck.

Fixed.

Slanox's Hard:
- 00:44:966. - The vocalist is about to get to the chorus, a slight second pause there would sort of be a dampener. It would build up nicely if you change it. Also, 01:23:259 - Woah, very queasy note placing. I suggest some space to breathe. The notes after that section are blunt and slightly mistimed.


Armin's Insane:
- 00:58:616 - Slider is lagging a bit behind the vocals, move it up a notch in the Timeline. Same thing with the slider at 01:00:228.

Pretty nice map and skin. Fun patterns on Armin's lol. Star'd

Thanks.

Fixed.

SOFT mod is gogo

timing section 2,456 has no point, deleate it
timing section 2,698 has no point, deleate it
again i see not point in the 6,085 and 6,327 timing sections, they change nothing in the sound or map so there rather pointless
again 16,851 ^

[Easy]

there's a lot of aimod normal criteria on this map, fix it so there is less if you want

since there's alot best to use spoiler :p


[Normal]

00:20:228 (6) - this needs to be made to fit in with the combo at 00:21:196 (1) so newcombo the (6) and move it so it matches the spacing of that combo
00:34:260 (7) - new combo
00:40:067 (3) - new combo
00:41:035 (1) - remove new combo
tbh though i think this part could be mapped much better, because atm it dont suit the song good

00:49:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move this whole part back 2 ticks so it starts on the white tick then add a note at 00:52:648
00:55:551 (1) - make this slider repeat once
00:58:938 (3) - new combo suits here
01:04:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - there is 2 different spacings in this one combo. fix it so they use only one
01:20:712 (1,2,3) - broken spacing, (1,2) should have more distance than (2,3)
01:24:583 (4) - spacing too close to (3) fix please

[Hard]

00:44:422 - get rid of this break
01:20:712 (1,2,3,4,5) - waay too blind >_> position these better
01:24:260 (8) - placing this under (2) makes it very iratating to play, place somewhere else

not many big probs with this diff

[Armins Insane]

(suggestion) 00:23:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing on this make this horrid to play, space it more to how it suits the song rather than trying to create a close nit pattern
00:39:583 (5) - newcombo

no big problems found

______________________________________
well these maps still need alot of work xD but good job anyway

also theres quite abit more than what ive posted, but one step at a time eh

Thanks.

Fixed.

Hey!~

[General]
Too much spinners put randomly (particularly in easy), and a lot of weird pattern.

[Easy]
I suggest to remap this difficulty, since most of notes doesn't follow the music very well.
Too much spinners randomly put and all...
Well, if you still want to keep and just improve it, I'll point out what's wrong to me:
00:06:922 (1) - Start this spinner 1/2 later.
00:09:825 (1) - Delete this note.
00:10:067 (2) - Start it 1/1 sooner, and make it repeat once more.
00:17:567 (2,3) - Delete these and add one at 00:17:809.
00:19:744 (1) - 1/1 later and add note at 00:19:260.
00:30:631 (1) - Delete.
00:31:357 - Make some pattern from here to 00:32:325.
00:35:712 (4) - Replace by only a note at 00:35:712.
00:36:680 (1) - Start it 1/1 sooner and extend it by 1/1.
00:42:970 (4) - Lyric starts 1/4 later.
00:51:680 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:890 (3) - Delete.
00:54:099 (1) - Delete and make some pattern from 00:53:131 to 00:56:519.
01:08:131 - Add a note.
01:09:583 (1) - Delete and make some pattern instead.
01:20:712 (1,2,1) - Remake this part. (More like the beginning)

[Normal]
Ok this difficulty is better, still too much things ankward.
00:44:180 (1) - Try something like this

00:54:583 (4) - Hmm, make it so it doesn't jump?
01:02:567 (4) - I suggest to repeat it once and add a note at 01:04:260.
01:10:793 (1) - 1/2 later.
01:24:583 (4) - Delete it and make the spinner 1/2 sooner.

[Hard]
Most effort have been put here I guess.
Not much to say, just rhythm at certain point is too monotone (huh?)
Starting here 00:49:260 to 01:16:115 is the most disturbing part.
You do thi kind of pattern to each lyric:

Try something like this:

And this to follow a bit more the music.

01:23:373 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's not well snapped (resnap at 1/3).

Ok, that's it~
Fix these and I'll star.

EDIT: Star~

Thanks.

Fixed.

sliderrrr border

Download: ONOFF - Rinne-Rondo (TV Size) (Slanox) [Easy].osu

Download: ONOFF - Rinne-Rondo (TV Size) (Slanox) [Normal].osu

Download: ONOFF - Rinne-Rondo (TV Size) (Slanox) [Hard].osu

Thanks ~

Updated.

Thanks for your star.

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Why is "gdeath" on Tags?
- Make Kiai Times the same on all diffs.
- Timing sounds a bit off... Probably the offset is wrong :/

~Easy~
00:26:277 (3) - Move to the white tick, I think it sounds better.
00:49:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This sounds so weird x.x.. Suggestion:

00:58:454 (3) - Delete this note and add a repeat to the short slider? It looks a bit hard for a newbie imo >:
01:02:083 (4) - Move to the white tick and shorten it by 1/2 (white tick).
01:08:615 (4) - Enlarge by 1/2 (white tick).

~Normal~
00:01:357 (1,2) - Suggestion...

01:14:422 (1) - Fix Spacing.
01:21:357 (x) - Add a note here? (Use a 1/3 snap divisor for this)

~Hard~
00:01:962 (2,3) - Snap to 1/3.
00:05:228 (1,2) - Snap the endpoints to 1/3.
00:24:260 (8) - Delete this note? Sounds weird o.o
00:42:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fix spacing, there are parts of this combo with a slight shorter spacing.
00:46:841 (1) - Shorten to white tick?

~Armin's Insane~
- Add Armin to Tags ._.

Not bad but there are a lot of snap errors x.x
Good luck!!
EDIT: *star* (after a little IRC mod)

Thanks you.

Fixed.

hihi~
i find two ON/OFF - Rinne-Rondo (TV Size) in pending maps OTL,you'd check it,ask BATdelete it
check all kiai line is not in the note

[Easy]
00:36:438 (1) - this spin begin in 00:36:196? end 00:38:131

[Normal]
00:12:970 (T) - this line before note
00:20:228 (X) - add note?
00:36:438 (1) - this spin begin in 00:36:196? end 00:38:131
00:41:519 (3) - begin in 00:41:277 ? end 00:43:696

[Hard]
00:01:357 (T) - use first red line,and delete this green line
00:09:583 (T) - this line before note
00:16:851 (T) - delete this line? didn't use
00:21:448 (T) - ^
00:22:648 (T) - ^
00:38:131 (1) - it's 1/3
01:10:551 (8) - new combo? but i think change slider is better

[Armin's Insane]
fine
nice diff!

good job!
star!

Thanks.

Fixed.

The timing feels off, get someone to check it.

Make kiai time the same on all diffs.

[Armin]

01:16:962 (1,1) - Unrankable spinners (less than 2000~ on auto).

[Hard]

00:02:164 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:38:131 (1,2,3) - Spacing. Also this part sounds weird, please remap it.

[Normal]

01:23:615 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:23:857 (3) - This slider should be made in 1/3 too. Please edit it with 1/3 snap divisor and move its start point to 01:23:938.

[Easy]

Slider tick 2 sounds odd. Decrease it to 1.

00:38:857 (1) - Sounds better moved 1/2 back. Also add a circle here 00:39:099 for the consistency.
00:43:696 - Why is here a break? There's not any in previous diffs. Map this part.
00:50:228 (2,3) - Spacing.

+star

Thanks.

Fixed.

Thanks you Beuchi, for a mod IRC.
And thanks for your star ~

☆

Thanks Licnect for your star.

Basically mines are all suggestions, as I'm not good at modding...
(grid = tiny grid if I didn't mention it.)

Easy
00:05:228 (3) - move slider end 1 grid down, then move entire slider to 1 grid left?
00:10:067 (1) - kinda lots of slider returns, how about split this?
00:12:970 (2) - ^
00:12:970 (T) - You should put this uninherited section slightly faster than the note, cause if you hit the slider slighty earlier, the sound effect does not take effect if you put the section like this.
00:16:841 (1) - move middle of the slider 2 grid left?
00:18:293 (3) - how about make this slider like this?
00:20:712 (1) - move 1 grid left?
00:24:583 (1) - move both points of the middle of the slider to 1 grid right?
00:27:970 (2) - make the slider one beat long?
00:29:422 (2) - move middle & end of the slider 1 grid up, and remove whistle from slider body?
00:39:583 (3) - I think you can adjust the slider looks better...
00:41:519 (4) - ^, and adjust spacing?
00:57:970 (2) - make it linear to make more readable?
01:13:938 (3,4,5) - I think this part is confusing for begginners. how about adjust placing of the notes?
01:24:583 (3) - same as 00:05:228 (3).

Normal
00:05:228 (1) - how about make this symmetric?
00:10:067 (4,5) - maybe linear slider would be better
00:11:519 (1) - move slider end 1 grid down?
00:18:535 (4) - try to make this have better shape
00:20:228 (6) - move slider end 1 grid down?
00:27:244 (6,1) - how about.... this?
00:33:172 (x) - add a note here?
00:33:293 (6) - and move to 00:33:414, and make 3/4 beat long?
00:42:244 (6) - how about... this?
....ok, I'll make double post because of attachment limit.

continue modding....

00:51:196 (3) - how about like this?
...or somewhat better than this.
01:00:873 (1) - I don't think this looks good, how about adjusting this?
01:02:567 (4) - ^
01:04:744 (1) - remove clap from start & end of slider
01:06:922 (4) - move this to 01:07:164, and make it a beat long?
01:14:422 (1,2,3) - uh... note placement seems not that good. think about adjusting this.

Hard
00:01:357 (1) - make this linear?
00:02:809 (5) - ^
00:03:938 (3,4,5,6) - hmm.. how about adjusting these symestric?
00:05:712 (2) - hmm... I'm not sure, but we should consider spacing here...
00:17:083 (2) - remove whistle?
00:17:567 (4) - remove whistle from the end of the slider?
00:18:777 (8) - ^
00:29:906 (1,2) - replace to finish?
00:30:873 (3) - remove finish?
00:38:777 (1,2,3) - I think 1/3 doesn't make sense....
01:15:510 (3) - make this similar to 01:15:148 (2)?
01:18:535 (8) - how about linear slider?
01:20:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust like this?
...or something better than this. I don't think even this one isn't that good. try to adjust to pentagon shape.

Armin's Insane
NICE
00:32:325 (6) - replace to clap in the end of the slider?
01:14:906 (1) - replace to finish?
01:15:994 (8) - clap?
01:20:470 (1) - lower the volume here?

Ok, I'll star.

Thanks.

Fixed.

Here's my mod. Hope it helps

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
00:12:970 (5) - move the timing section here back 1/4 note so that if the player clicks early the soft hitsound will still be heard on the beginning.
00:49:260 (1) - Same problem here. It'll be better to make a new timing section 1/4 earlier with soft hitsounds than to move the kiai one back 1/4. I also noticed this timing section is 10ms ahead of the timing. make it 49,260 instead of 49,270.
00:57:002 (1) - Change the offset of this timing section from 57,012 to 57,002.
01:05:228 (1) - Same thing here. Subtract 10 from the current offset.
01:10:067 (1) - Respace this.

It's an easy. Good job.

[Normal]
I'm just going to tell you to move timing sections back 1/4 if they start ON a note and change the hitsounds in any way. This applies to all diffs.

I can't say there's too many technical problems here.

[Hard]
Same Timing suggestions here
01:21:519 - Note here?

Not many here, either.

[Armin's Insane]
Absolutely fantastic.

The maps are sound, really timing sections were all I could suggest you improve. Have a star for your efforts.

Thanks you.

Fixed.