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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on May-05-15 at 10:51:29 AM

Artist: Wakeshima Kanon
Title: World's End, Girl's Rondo(Asterisk DnB Remix)
Source: selector spread WIXOSS
Tags: f/c works op opening full
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8856kb
Play Time: 05:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Owari - 4Key (3.87 stars, 2670 notes)


Download: Wakeshima Kanon - World's End, Girl's Rondo(Asterisk DnB Remix)
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Asterisk 好評 :D
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[poi]
00:01:628 (1628|1,1628|2) - i cant really agree here, you doubled here while it has same exact sound as 00:02:314 (2314|2) -
00:04:371 (4371|0,4371|3) - same here, tho if you would do a little check in 00:04:714 (4714|3) - and try to playback rate in 25% you would hear a big difference tho. Infact you didnt put another note 00:07:114 (7114|2) - which has the same sound so its inconsisten.
00:07:114 (7114|2) - suggestion for the patter here. you could try to ctrl h it better flow for me i guess.
00:12:599 (12599|3) - tbh i doesnt really get this to be a single noted only. while it is loud enough and has sound familliarities with 00:12:257 (12257|2,12257|3) - .
00:13:971 (13971|2) - same tho, but maybe its your mapping style yes? but still it feels quite weird. 00:15:342 (15342|1,16714|3) -
00:17:057 (17057|2,17057|3,17142|1,17228|2,17314|1) - you could try a little polishing in the flow -> http://puu.sh/hj2o8/e9b159259b.jpg
00:18:085 (18085|0) - highly suggesting you that you add another note in here. its very incosisten with 00:18:428 (18428|0,18428|1) - and stuffs.
00:26:999 (26999|1,26999|0) - would literally suggest that you follow 00:26:314 (26314|2,26314|0,27685|1,27685|3) - these pattern instead the flow for me is a bit nazi.
00:29:057 (29057|2) - suggests you to move this note to 4th column and then 00:30:428 (30428|2,30428|3) - put these notes in the middle. better flow for your next pattern.
00:49:971 (49971|3,50142|1,52714|0,52885|1) - just to clarify something, this seems weird for me actually. you followed this sounds but you didnt with the same sound in 00:51:171 - 00:51:514 - 00:53:571 and so on.
00:56:657 (56657|2,56828|1,56828|3,56999|2) - pattern seems nazi try this, http://puu.sh/hj2Ov/6a2f2f061e.jpg
00:57:857 (57857|3,57971|3,58085|3,58199|3) - i like these but as a suggestion since your following the vocal here, you could try patterns such as J,K,J,K instead it follows more than the jacks.
00:58:971 (58971|3,59057|2,59142|1) - the 1/4 here seems a little low for me to hear even tho i put in on 25% playback rate tho.
01:00:599 - 01:03:342 could still polish the pattern in here though.
01:30:085 (90085|2,90085|1,90257|1,90257|3) - could have copied 01:29:742 (89742|0,89742|3,89914|2,89914|0) - instead for a neat flow.
01:35:228 (95228|0,95314|0,95399|0) - suggestion like the before one, could try D,F,D for hand balance.
01:36:599 (96599|2,96599|1,96771|3,96771|0) - just wondering about these part, you mapped them as NOTES but 01:33:857 (93857|0) - 01:42:257 (102257|1) - just a question tho.
01:37:285 (97285|3,97285|0,97457|3,97457|0) - would change these notes placement instead, it doesnt follow 01:37:114 (97114|3,97114|0) - anymore cause it has a new sound tbh.
01:49:971 (109971|0,109971|1) - could triple here like 01:44:485 (104485|0,104485|2,104485|3) - it has ALMOST exact sound tho.
01:52:371 (112371|1,112371|0,112457|2,112542|0,112628|1,112714|3,112714|2) - was bothered by this pattern i almost felt i wasnt at the stream anymore, could polish the pattern.
01:58:199 (118199|1,118199|0,118199|3) - wow lmao i dont know lol, i dont really suggest for you to try triples here. and so on.
01:58:199 (118199|0,118199|1,118199|3,126085|2,126257|0) - could exchange column these 2 for better pattern.
02:11:142 (131142|3,131228|2,131314|0,131399|3,131399|1,131485|2,131571|0,131571|3,131657|1,131742|3,131828|2) - rearrange this more the flow is currently nazi.
02:28:714 (148714|2,149057|2,149399|2) - suggestion, could do a ln mapping here, i think it fits the most.
02:42:085 (162085|2,162085|3,162085|0) - suprised in here but the thing is 02:43:457 (163457|2) - it has only single note but i know its a little bit milder than the other one but could still add another note to the single note.
02:46:199 (166199|0) - same problem, 02:47:571 (167571|1,167571|0) - this one is doubled but has the same sound actually.
03:28:714 (208714|2,208714|0,208714|3) - i understand in here that it is already loud enough to be tripled but here 03:29:057 (209057|3,209057|1,209057|2) - i cant actually agree.
04:20:485 (260485|3,260828|1) - could ctrl j this, better pattern.
04:32:999 (272999|1) - move to 1 because i think the F,J pattern should only be at 04:32:485 (272485|1,272485|2) - for uniqueness tho i suggest,
04:39:514 (279514|1,279514|0,279685|1,279685|0,279857|1,279857|0) - could rearrange this into a better one cause the sound here is unique and cool. so i though you could do something about to the pattern and make it unique and cool and not just jack.
05:00:599 (300599|0,300599|2,300599|3) - again with the triple but it actually has the same sound as all the 2 notes here.
05:15:857 (315857|1,315857|2,315942|3,316028|2,316028|0,316114|1,316199|0,316199|3,316285|2,316371|0,316371|1,316457|3,316542|2,316542|1,316628|0,316714|3,316714|1,316799|2,316885|3,316885|0) - would suggest you to do something neater in here. it kinda looks messy.

nice song.
posted

YunoFanatic wrote:

[poi]
00:01:628 (1628|1,1628|2) - i cant really agree here, you doubled here while it has same exact sound as 00:02:314 (2314|2) -fixed
00:04:371 (4371|0,4371|3) - same here, tho if you would do a little check in 00:04:714 (4714|3) - and try to playback rate in 25% keepyou would hear a big difference tho. Infact you didnt put another note 00:07:114 (7114|2) - which has the same sound so its inconsisten.my mistake, fixed
00:07:114 (7114|2) - suggestion for the patter here. you could try to ctrl h it better flow for me i guess.
00:12:599 (12599|3) - tbh i doesnt really get this to be a single noted only. while it is loud enough and has sound familliarities with 00:12:257 (12257|2,12257|3) - .mistake, fixed
00:13:971 (13971|2) - same tho, but maybe its your mapping style yes? but still it feels quite weird. 00:15:342 (15342|1,16714|3) - lol, how did i make these mistakes orz
00:17:057 (17057|2,17057|3,17142|1,17228|2,17314|1) - you could try a little polishing in the flow -> http://puu.sh/hj2o8/e9b159259b.jpg
00:18:085 (18085|0) - highly suggesting you that you add another note in here. its very incosisten with 00:18:428 (18428|0,18428|1) - and stuffs.added
00:26:999 (26999|1,26999|0) - would literally suggest that you follow 00:26:314 (26314|2,26314|0,27685|1,27685|3) - these pattern instead the flow for me is a bit nazi. no change, no point for me to do that
00:29:057 (29057|2) - suggests you to move this note to 4th column and then 00:30:428 (30428|2,30428|3) - put these notes in the middle. better flow for your next pattern.no change, keeping my current pattern
00:49:971 (49971|3,50142|1,52714|0,52885|1) - just to clarify something, this seems weird for me actually. you followed this sounds but you didnt with the same sound in 00:51:171 - 00:51:514 - 00:53:571 and so on.added note
00:56:657 (56657|2,56828|1,56828|3,56999|2) - pattern seems nazi try this, http://puu.sh/hj2Ov/6a2f2f061e.jpg fixed
00:57:857 (57857|3,57971|3,58085|3,58199|3) - i like these but as a suggestion since your following the vocal here, you could try patterns such as J,K,J,K instead it follows more than the jacks.keeping this
00:58:971 (58971|3,59057|2,59142|1) - the 1/4 here seems a little low for me to hear even tho i put in on 25% playback rate tho.keep
01:00:599 - 01:03:342 could still polish the pattern in here though.fixed some jacks
01:30:085 (90085|2,90085|1,90257|1,90257|3) - could have copied 01:29:742 (89742|0,89742|3,89914|2,89914|0) - instead for a neat flow.
01:35:228 (95228|0,95314|0,95399|0) - suggestion like the before one, could try D,F,D for hand balance.no change, I'd like to keep it as jack
01:36:599 (96599|2,96599|1,96771|3,96771|0) - just wondering about these part, you mapped them as NOTES but 01:33:857 (93857|0) - 01:42:257 (102257|1) - just a question tho.I deicded not to put a LN because it is only 1/2 long and I wanted to map 01:36:771 - sounds
01:37:285 (97285|3,97285|0,97457|3,97457|0) - would change these notes placement instead, it doesnt follow 01:37:114 (97114|3,97114|0) - anymore cause it has a new sound tbh.no change to these, keeping current pattern
01:49:971 (109971|0,109971|1) - could triple here like 01:44:485 (104485|0,104485|2,104485|3) - it has ALMOST exact sound tho.
01:52:371 (112371|1,112371|0,112457|2,112542|0,112628|1,112714|3,112714|2) - was bothered by this pattern i almost felt i wasnt at the stream anymore, could polish the pattern.
01:58:199 (118199|1,118199|0,118199|3) - wow lmao i dont know lol, i dont really suggest for you to try triples here. and so on.it is for the bells
01:58:199 (118199|0,118199|1,118199|3,126085|2,126257|0) - could exchange column these 2 for better pattern.fixed
02:11:142 (131142|3,131228|2,131314|0,131399|3,131399|1,131485|2,131571|0,131571|3,131657|1,131742|3,131828|2) - rearrange this more the flow is currently nazi.fixed and re-arranged
02:28:714 (148714|2,149057|2,149399|2) - suggestion, could do a ln mapping here, i think it fits the most.
02:42:085 (162085|2,162085|3,162085|0) - suprised in here but the thing is 02:43:457 (163457|2) - it has only single note but i know its a little bit milder than the other one but could still add another note to the single note.
02:46:199 (166199|0) - same problem, 02:47:571 (167571|1,167571|0) - this one is doubled but has the same sound actually.
03:28:714 (208714|2,208714|0,208714|3) - i understand in here that it is already loud enough to be tripled but here 03:29:057 (209057|3,209057|1,209057|2) - i cant actually agree.same as 03:28:371 -
04:20:485 (260485|3,260828|1) - could ctrl j this, better pattern.
04:32:999 (272999|1) - move to 1 because i think the F,J pattern should only be at 04:32:485 (272485|1,272485|2) - for uniqueness tho i suggest,
04:39:514 (279514|1,279514|0,279685|1,279685|0,279857|1,279857|0) - could rearrange this into a better one cause the sound here is unique and cool. so i though you could do something about to the pattern and make it unique and cool and not just jack.keeping it cuz I like it
05:00:599 (300599|0,300599|2,300599|3) - again with the triple but it actually has the same sound as all the 2 notes here.
05:15:857 (315857|1,315857|2,315942|3,316028|2,316028|0,316114|1,316199|0,316199|3,316285|2,316371|0,316371|1,316457|3,316542|2,316542|1,316628|0,316714|3,316714|1,316799|2,316885|3,316885|0) - would suggest you to do something neater in here. it kinda looks messy.it was for the bell sound

nice song.
thanks for mod, fixed most
posted
sorry for the wait,a little bit busy irl. Here's the mod

column |1|2|3|4|

00:17:657 (17657|1) - delete (barely audible or no sound at all)
00:17:999 (17999|3) - ^
01:37:285 (97285|3,97285|0) - move to 2 and 3 (different pitch)
02:11:485 (131485|2) - delete (barely audible)
02:13:371 (133371|3) - ^
03:05:828 (185828|0,185828|3) - delete one (not too loud)
03:22:971 (202971|0,203142|2,203314|1,203485|3) - i think it's barely audible
05:12:685 (312685|0,312857|2,313028|1,313199|3) - ^

sorry if does not much help for you

that's all
posted


1|2|3|4

Please reply soon and point out what rejected and why

Since i have trouble to play this map this mod is not the best... i hope it helps xD

poi


00:22:199 - until 00:42:771 - except 00:33:171 - please use single Notes for this piano, doubles dont fit well and also after that the drums seems undermapped with this doubles ^^
01:41:171 (101171|2,101514|0) - Remove and 01:41:228 (101228|1,101285|0,101342|3,101399|2,101457|1) - stream into right
02:10:199 - until 02:14:657 - i dont get this stream - i hear this one, increasing sound in bg, but i dont think a stream fit this :/
03:22:885 - here again :/
03:32:828 - Piano Part - see above
04:43:285 (283285|3,283342|2,283399|1,283457|0,283514|3,283571|2,283628|1,283685|0,283742|3,283799|2,283857|1,283914|0) - See above
05:12:599 - Stream again :/

Little reject from a aprt before:
01:03:342 - until 01:06:085 - please remove green lines - not required xD

I hope this can help, star for you :3
posted
Hi
M4M according to your queue :3

Poi
01:32:142 - Maybe triple? for Impact sound
01:35:399 (95399|0) - Change to LN, and finish it 2 ticks after it (1/4)
01:43:628 - add note? for vocal
01:44:828 - add note? It's a same soubd like - 01:39:342
01:47:914 - Add one note on 3 for beat
02:10:199 - 02:13:285 - Does that stair really necessary? Idk if you use hitsound. but what does that stair notes follow?
03:22:971 - 03:25:971 - ^
05:12:685 - 05:15:685 - ^
02:51:171 - a beat. Add note?
03:07:628 - A beat. shouldn't be 2 note here?
03:50:485 - a low tune can be hearded. just like - 03:49:799
03:50:828 - ^
03:51:171 - ^
04:38:742 (278742|2,278828|1,278914|0) - Ghost notes?
04:41:485 (281485|2,281571|1,281657|0) - ^

Also. your Mp3 is above 192kbps
Check AI

Good luck :)
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JamesHappy15 wrote:

sorry for the wait,a little bit busy irl. Here's the mod

column |1|2|3|4|

00:17:657 (17657|1) - delete (barely audible or no sound at all)There is sound and I decide to keep it for consistency
00:17:999 (17999|3) - ^^
01:37:285 (97285|3,97285|0) - move to 2 and 3 (different pitch)I am focusing on the kinds of sound here
02:11:485 (131485|2) - delete (barely audible)same as before, there is sound in the background that sounds like wind if played with 100%
02:13:371 (133371|3) - ^
03:05:828 (185828|0,185828|3) - delete one (not too loud)ok
03:22:971 (202971|0,203142|2,203314|1,203485|3) - i think it's barely audiblethere is sound if you listen with 100% you can hear the winds sound and if you make it 25% and increase the volume that hurts your head you can hear the pitch of the wind sound changing
05:12:685 (312685|0,312857|2,313028|1,313199|3) - ^^

sorry if does not much help for you

that's all
Thanks for the mod

Kagu-chan wrote:



1|2|3|4

Please reply soon and point out what rejected and why

Since i have trouble to play this map this mod is not the best... i hope it helps xD

poi


00:22:199 - until 00:42:771 - except 00:33:171 - please use single Notes for this piano, doubles dont fit well and also after that the drums seems undermapped with this doubles ^^The double of piano is totally fine here for me
01:41:171 (101171|2,101514|0) - Remove and 01:41:228 (101228|1,101285|0,101342|3,101399|2,101457|1) - stream into right
02:10:199 - until 02:14:657 - i dont get this stream - i hear this one, increasing sound in bg, but i dont think a stream fit this :/I didn't remove them because there are sounds and those are not ifor sound increasing, there are actually single sounds on the 1/4 lines
03:22:885 - here again :/
03:32:828 - Piano Part - see above
04:43:285 (283285|3,283342|2,283399|1,283457|0,283514|3,283571|2,283628|1,283685|0,283742|3,283799|2,283857|1,283914|0) - See above
05:12:599 - Stream again :/all explained above

Little reject from a aprt before:
01:03:342 - until 01:06:085 - please remove green lines - not required xDSVs, I don't see why not

I hope this can help, star for you :3
thanks for mod and star

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi
M4M according to your queue :3

Poi
01:32:142 - Maybe triple? for Impact soundno change
01:35:399 (95399|0) - Change to LN, and finish it 2 ticks after it (1/4)ok
01:43:628 - add note? for vocalno sound
01:44:828 - add note? It's a same soubd like - 01:39:342ok
01:47:914 - Add one note on 3 for beatno change
02:10:199 - 02:13:285 - Does that stair really necessary? Idk if you use hitsound. but what does that stair notes follow?listen with 25% or check the reason I wrote on the respond to the mods above
03:22:971 - 03:25:971 - ^
05:12:685 - 05:15:685 - ^
02:51:171 - a beat. Add note?ok
03:07:628 - A beat. shouldn't be 2 note here?
03:50:485 - a low tune can be hearded. just like - 03:49:799
03:50:828 - ^
03:51:171 - ^no sound
04:38:742 (278742|2,278828|1,278914|0) - Ghost notes?
04:41:485 (281485|2,281571|1,281657|0) - ^

Also. your Mp3 is above 192kbpswill change after
Check AI

Good luck :)
Thanks for mod, no reply=fixed
posted
please remove green lines - not required xDSVs, I don't see why not
Since there just no notes. It does not make any sense. After this break its the same speed as before, so its just wasted ressources here
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There is actually speed up effects
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col=1,2,3,4

Hitsound volume 35%

HP 8.5
01:40:885 - http://puu.sh/hAF1d/c9eb0a4181.jpg
01:41:171 (101171|1) - no sound
01:41:514 (101514|3) - ^
04:41:228 (281228|3,281399|0,281399|2,281485|1,281571|2,281657|3,281742|0,281742|1,282085|2,282085|3,282257|1,282428|0,282428|2,282599|3,282771|0,282771|1,283114|3,283114|2) - ctrl+h
04:37:799 (277799|0) - change to LN
04:37:971 - http://puu.sh/hAGaF/167ee84d6c.jpg

good luck.
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all fixed
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太神拉拉拉
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Gaia wrote:

太神拉拉拉
www
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seems good,bubbled
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Thank you :D
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What the hay?
This map is not even a month yet XD
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I will soon qualify it
2nd bubble i think
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offset 257 :arrow: 295


good luck
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