hime_nikki04 wrote:

Hola! Mi español no es fluido... Lo siento... storyboard es muy buen... No falta. Star ~

Mystearica wrote:

Okay.. your map ratings suggest the following:

Easy -> Normal
Normal -> Normal+ changed to normal and hard

[Insane]

I feel it's kind of overmapped...but it's ok I guess.

[Ignacio's Insane]

I could nitpick a little on the stream but I'll let it go

[Normal]

Okay.

I think it's alright overall~

La Cataline wrote:

Nice map. Cute skin. Good SB. Star.

1. Offset: 3290

1. 00:34:925 (1) - Remove new combo.
2. 00:45:045 (1) - ^
3. 00:53:539 (1) - ^
4. 00:52:997 (3,1,2) - Spacing (Move it up maybe?)

1. 00:28:600 (6,1,2) - Look at difference between stacks.
2. 00:36:371 (5) - Place it under (1)
3. 00:37:817 (1) - Move new combo to (2)

1. 00:21:371 (13) - New combo.
2. 00:50:648 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 00:52:456 (1) - ^

Astom wrote:

Kecco wrote:

You can link only your OWN map.


You can post other users' map.

PlEsE GiVe Me a KuDoSu FoR My MoD HaHaHa >;3

Midget wrote:

~Overall~

1. Offset: 3290

changed to 3291

~Hard~

1. 00:34:925 (1) - Remove new combo. no
2. 00:45:045 (1) - ^ no
3. 00:53:539 (1) - ^ ok
4. 00:52:997 (3,1,2) - Spacing (Move it up maybe?) I center it

~Ignacio's Insane~

1. 00:28:600 (6,1,2) - Look at difference between stacks.
2. 00:36:371 (5) - Place it under (1) rdy
3. 00:37:817 (1) - Move new combo to (2) rdy

~Insane~

1. 00:21:371 (13) - New combo.ok
2. 00:50:648 (1) - Remove new combo.ok
3. 00:52:456 (1) - ^ ok

Nice.

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
-I don't know but maybe this song is TV Size, if it's so you should rename the map's title. Use this thread to prevent mistakes : viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 (Maybe you didn't type TV Size because you wanted to create a storyboard?)
-Offset : 3.289 ~ Resnap All Notes

•Insane•
00:19:192 (10) - New combo? no
00:20:999 (10) - ^ no
00:24:252 (8) - ^ -^
00:30:758 (11) - ^ -^

•Ignacio's Insane•
Good D:

•Hard•
01:00:949 (3) - Distance error. fixed
01:27:154 (5) - New combo? It will be more stylish. haha ok

•Normal•
Good.

Nice map~
Good SB~
+Star~

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Hmm, maybe add another combo color for [Normal], [Hard], [Insane], just seeing pink isn't really a good contrast lol.
-- Is this TV Size? If so put it in the title.
-- BG is too wide by 3 pixels lol.

Normal:

00:19:736 (1) – Remove new combo? Looks kinda odd.
00:20:640 (2) – New combo here if done ^
00:48:110 (4) – This feels weird silenced when it’s a circle. Maybe increase the volume slightly?
01:06:544 (1) – Start this at 01:06:363? Like other diffs.

Rhythm might be a bit confusing for new players, idk.

Hard:

00:31:303 (1) – Remove custom clap from the start.
01:15:580 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) – It’s the same thing as Normal? Maybe do something different here? =P

Pretty good.

Ignacio:

00:25:339 (6) - Add note.
00:32:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – Eh. This stream doesn’t sound so great, almost as if it was thrown in. Maybe add some hitsounds or something.
00:44:496 (6) – Custom clap?
00:46:483 (5) – New combo?
00:48:110 (4) – Silent note, bit weird, raise the volume?

Might need a warning for that x2.

Insane:

So many double stacks o_o

00:31:213 (13,1,2,3) – Hard to see, it feels a bit messy =S
00:46:483 (1) – Remove new combo? It seems kinda pointless.
01:23:893 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) – Nasagumi SB event makes these streams harder to see u_u

That pink gets a bit hard to see with the high od.

Just opinions/suggestions ^_^
Starred.

brikel wrote:

Hi~ Hi~

[Ignacio's Insane]
01:11:243 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing regularly? Uhm it's fine to me, and that is not hard

I don't find enought problem. It's nice~!
Star+Star~

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[Ignacio]
00:25:158 (5,6) - Move these note as (5) on the image mm ok


Perfect map
Star ~
no Kudo :O

roflninja wrote:

Hi,
everythings fine for me

[hard]
just a suggestion
01:11:242 (1-5) - maybe space these a bit further? no

nice map

Leorda wrote:

Bueno

[General]
You need an easier diff No D:

[Skin]
The hit0.png is hard to see. If I miss the object at black space, it's really hard to see Fixed

[File]
Your beatmap file have 2 osb, delete one Oh I didn't notice that lol

[Normal]
00:26:784 (x) - Add note? rdy
00:43:050 (1) - Remove new combo?ok
00:43:772 (3) - New combo?ok
00:44:495 (4) - Not stacked with 3 at end no
00:45:941 (3) - Not stacked with 2 at end no
00:48:110 (4) - Why this object are silence? :p
00:56:784 (1) - Finish? ok
01:08:893 (1) - Why this object are silence at end? :p

[Hard]
00:41:062 (2) - Not stacked with 1 at end no
00:41:785 (2) - ^ no
00:42:146 (1,2,3) - Not stacked together at end of slider no
00:46:483 (1) - Why this object are silence at end? :p
01:08:893 (1) - ^:p

[Ignacio's Insane]
Why this combo color are diffrent from other? Guest diff lol?

00:40:881 ~ 00:43:140 (T) - You must add 2x warning No, I don't miss this sliders when I play it for first time
00:48:652 (1) - How about stack with 4? rdy
00:48:110 (4) - Why this object are silence at end? ;p
01:25:881 (1) - Not stacked with 6 at end no
01:26:423 (3) - Not stacked with 3 at end no

[Insane]
Fine~

Nice song
STAR

Sallad4ever wrote:

Joking
But the Great map part is true :3

ztrot wrote:

your guest diff has diff colors from the rest of the map any reasons?
And the slider speed ups don't fit in some parts 00:40:881 (2) 00:41:604 (3) 00:42:327 (2) 00:42:688 (3) It feels far to random for me
this is all guest diff by the way your maps are fine and the speed up and slow downs made sense

Shinxyn wrote:

>_<~
The combos are so pink~ kinda hard to tell them apart sometimes... I already them but u download the song before of the change =P

Normal-
As a Normal, this is fine, as the "easiest" diff, I don't like this ~ it switchs between following vocal and the beat, its quite confusing
I would prefer something easier v_v Some little changes, but I think that is fine

Hard-
Stacks at start looked a bit ugly xD Fixed
00:51:544 (5) - with all the 1/2 stacked notes, this one 1/1 stacked part is trappy, I guess thats on purpose though >_< :p
Okay~

Ignacio's-
00:17:025 (4) - the map started on vocal, the beats before followed vocal, so... this extra note here makes no sense to me right now, not to mention the increased spacing makes no sense to me either since the vocal doesn't get any more intense, nor does the music stand out as much as the vocal!
00:37:809 (5,1) - using .5x forces the spacing to be halved too... space this part proper though...
00:39:977 (6,7) - ^ then when you changed it back to 1x, spacing changes too... sighh
00:40:881 (2,3,2,3) - random 2x!
01:18:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I can hear the drums, but its kinda hard to, and this pattern following the drums in the background is only used once, so its kinda confusing (then it turns into all 1/2 notes...)
@_@

Insane-
00:15:218 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are you following vocal here...? if you are, just add more notes.., if not... then.. I don't understand what exactly the notes partially follow... uhm I take off a circle, sounds better now
Like Normal, I had a tricky time following this map, trying to go between vocal and instrumental... cuz your map's pace speeds up and slows down at awkward places? the speed ups I meant were the streams...

@___@?

Lissette wrote:

Normal
00:48:200 - borra esta timing section
00:49:556 - me volvi loca buscando esta timing section, y es que estan una debajo de la otra xD, borra una ><

buen mapa, no hay errores, solo eso que no es la gran cosa

Star! ^^

Lizbeth wrote:

Insane
01:00:941 (3) - abusivo D: =P

Hard
00:31:303 (1) - acortalo 1/2 beat, y muevelo al siguiente tick blanco... Y agregas un circle aqui: 00:31:303 (creo que se escucha mejor)ok
00:36:905 - agrega un circle no xD

Son solo sugerencias :3 el mapa esta bien
Star..!
buena diff ignacio <3

Mafiamaster wrote:

Bubbled

ykcarrot wrote:

The title should be 'Mirai e Go'

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/My_Bride_is_a_Mermaid#OVA

ykcarrot wrote:

You didn't understand Japanese pronunciation.
Translate Software isn't always right.

'未来へGo' means 'Go to the future'
If Hiragana へ(he) is used as postpositional particle in the sentence, this へ is pronounced 'e'.
So, 'Mirai e Go' is right. Ask this Japaneses.

James2250 wrote:

Some suggestions but not going to pop as nothing is unrankable

It would be nice if you resized your sb images to 640x480 so they don't go over 5sb load it's only for 1 seg or less and it's close to 5x so I think isn't a problem

Hard:
Why does this difficulty have more breaks than any other one mmm I don't know, but fixed
00:16:845 (2,3) - don't like these stacked, makes the spacing look odd sry I haven't more ideas of how order them xD

Insane:
00:07:266 (3,1) - don't like anti jump here I think it's fine
00:41:062 (3,1) - ^ -^
01:27:146 (1) - I would extend this to 01:30:037 and silence it (and why not include it on all difficulties) it sounds nice oks

Ignacio's Insane:
01:27:236 (1) - same as other spinner ok

Feel free to ignore all this, it won't stop ranking~

Larto wrote:

Insane:
00:54:797 (1,2,3,4) - What's with this spacing? I could hardly read this. ok ok
00:57:688 (5,6,7) - Eh. I see where you're going with this. But it doesn't look or feel right. Well fixed.
01:00:218 (1,2,3) - ..This, on the other hand, plays right, but I don't see why you did this. I'm not going to change that =P
01:01:483 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal. u_u ok
01:03:110 (4) - Space farther away. -^
01:03:471 (1,2,3,1) - Make the spacing equal. -^
01:11:242 (1,2,3,4) - This is readable, but I don't really see a need to have spacing like this.. I'm not going to change that =P

Hard:
Rankable.

Normal:
Rankable.

James2250 wrote:

I remember you asked for a rebubble but after Jarby's reaction to my bubble the first time I think I will stay away for a while
But there are plenty of other MAT's

(sorry)

orioncomet wrote:

This timing sound off to me at the end of song so try
BPM: 166.03 | Offset: 3,287

mapset look good


EDIT: after mapper changed timing
irc modded
fix spacing error on Normal diff
fiz 01:29:927 green line to use soft-hitsound to all diffs
suggestion to add some note on Insane to follow with vocal


EDIT2: mew? re-bubble

Larto wrote:

Fair enough