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Girls Dead Monster - Shine Days (Full ver)

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Clare
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年6月26日 at 16:20:08

Artist: Girls Dead Monster
Title: Shine Days (Full ver)
Source: Angel Beats!
Tags: eri yui kitamura yuinyan S i R i R u Frill youngdow climbb65588
BPM: 156
Filesize: 6424kb
Play Time: 04:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Clare's Sunshine (4.99 stars, 697 notes)
  2. Frill's Beats (3.08 stars, 291 notes)
  3. S i R i R u's Days (4.94 stars, 581 notes)
  4. youngdow&climbb's Taiko :3 (5 stars, 1425 notes)
Download: Girls Dead Monster - Shine Days (Full ver)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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no.13 map

Girls Dead Monster!!

thanks for S i R i R u Frill and youngdow climbb65588 Diff :3

and S i R i R u nice BG thnak you~
eveless
回去看...

先STAR
Cyril Scarlet
Editing ~ Editing ~ ;)

Full Ver. I can't finish in one day XD I'll finished in 1~2 day Clare (●´ω`●)ゞ
Topic Starter
Clare

S i R i R u wrote:

Editing ~ Editing ~ ;)

Full Ver. I can't finish in one day XD I'll finished in 1~2 day Clare (●´ω`●)ゞ
OKOK~^^
NanaDesu
star~~~ :)
Cyril Scarlet
ヾ(●´▽`●)ノ彡

Download: RuRu.rar
Topic Starter
Clare

S i R i R u wrote:

ヾ(●´▽`●)ノ彡
thank you^^
PSPDS Eddie
ヾ(゚ω゚)ノ゛
Frill
Topic Starter
Clare

Frill wrote:

sorry>.<;
Finish was it late.
thank you>"<
add Frill's Diff
Dotsu
~STAR~
Colin Hou
*^*/
Louis Cyphre
Must
Should
Suggestion

[General]
You must put absolutly same tags in ALL difficults. Please fix that

[Frill's Beats]
I can't find anything wrong. But i think you need to cut some Kiai parts. It's too long.


[S i R i R u's Days]
Very well done :3

[Insane]
May be change title to Clare's days? :: )
01:02:673 - new combo
01:21:904 - please put this notes in other places. Make a distance between them.

03:14:789 - new combo
03:30:366 - starting from here use distance snap and fully resnap extend 03:40:366

Very nice map. Star~
Topic Starter
Clare

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Must
Should
Suggestion

[General]
You must put absolutly same tags in ALL difficults. Please fix that

[Frill's Beats]
I can't find anything wrong. But i think you need to cut some Kiai parts. It's too long.


[S i R i R u's Days]
Very well done :3

[Insane]
May be change title to Clare's days? :: )
01:02:673 - new combo ok
01:21:904 - please put this notes in other places. Make a distance between them.
ok
03:14:789 - new combo ok
03:30:366 - starting from here use distance snap and fully resnap extend 03:40:366 ?

Very nice map. Star~
fixed
thank you~>"<
Pokie
我該死orz....
Overall
各個高潮部份都提高音量? 記得不要直接加在跟kiai一樣的綠線裡o.o
(另外前面00:58:058 (1) - 這段也是可以提高音量:D)

..umm, 一般的slidertick或許用無聲?

Clare
要說的差不多都在irc說了XD...其他都是nazi...

這個難度, BG上的字換成"Clare's Sunshine"比較好@@?
00:31:135 (1) - 這裡開始, 到00:57:673 (4) - , 把音量降到60左右?
00:49:981 (6) - add note? 也加clap o.o
00:53:827 (7) - new combo
00:54:019 (1) - 拿掉new combo
01:09:596 (8) - add note XD
01:46:904 (1) - spacing..!? (是故意的嗎 orz||
02:44:212 (3) - new combo
03:40:558 (2,3) - finish?
04:17:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5,6 下移? 這樣4好難點XD

可以更好:)

SiRiRu
Maybe use OD7?
Nice hitsounds :D

Frill
01:59:971 (2) - clap?
02:44:971 (3) - remove clap here, and add it at 02:45:356 (4) -
03:32:663 (4) - remove sliderwhiste XD
03:52:278 (2) - also clap here

:? Star!
Cyril Scarlet
I feel very slow for OD7 with this song >w<" haha
Topic Starter
Clare

Pokie wrote:

我該死orz....
Overall
各個高潮部份都提高音量? 記得不要直接加在跟kiai一樣的綠線裡o.o
(另外前面00:58:058 (1) - 這段也是可以提高音量:D)

..umm, 一般的slidertick或許用無聲?

Clare
要說的差不多都在irc說了XD...其他都是nazi...

這個難度, BG上的字換成"Clare's Sunshine"比較好@@?
00:31:135 (1) - 這裡開始, 到00:57:673 (4) - , 把音量降到60左右?
00:49:981 (6) - add note? 也加clap o.o
00:53:827 (7) - new combo
00:54:019 (1) - 拿掉new combo
01:09:596 (8) - add note XD
01:46:904 (1) - spacing..!? (是故意的嗎 orz||
02:44:212 (3) - new combo
03:40:558 (2,3) - finish?
04:17:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5,6 下移? 這樣4好難點XD

可以更好:)
修好了~謝謝>"<
SiRiRu
Maybe use OD7?
Nice hitsounds :D

Frill
01:59:971 (2) - clap?
02:44:971 (3) - remove clap here, and add it at 02:45:356 (4) -
03:32:663 (4) - remove sliderwhiste XD
03:52:278 (2) - also clap here
fixed
:? Star!
太感謝 Pokie了>"<
Aenna
hi
DeadAlready
嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿~(喂)

star~ >w</
sexy-commando
excellent beatmap and song, i love it ^^ star 8-)
Garven
As per your request:

Wow, this is a nice song. Good choice. :D

[Frill]
01:13:058 (7) - Add clap
01:30:173 (2,1) - Maybe curve the purple 1 slider to get rid of the overlap? Or reposition the 2 slider?
01:37:673 (3) - ^
01:49:596 - Start kiai here. It's right when the guitars hit that power chord that you want that spray of stars flying.
01:55:750 (4) - Add finish to beginning of slider
02:01:904 (4) - Add finish. Try listening through again for the missing custom claps that you missed, and maybe add finishes to where there's a big cymbal crash in the music during the kiai sections.
02:00:943 - End the kiai here
02:01:904 - Restart it here.
02:17:673 (3) - Scoot this right a few grid points to get rid of overlap (if you can't tell, I don't really like the look of 'em in lower OD, hehe). Don't worry about distance snap for something that minor. Applies to copy paste iterations later on
02:30:750 (3,5) - The overlap here doesn't look very good at all. :/
03:41:904 - Start kiai here
04:18:827 - End kiai here

[SiRuRu]
Holy crap, sudden difficulty jump, hehe.
01:46:327 - Add a note here and start the spinner a tick later?
Really fun difficulty. :D

[Clare]
Your BG doesn't follow the same theme as the others by having the same difficulty name. It just says "Clare' Dif"
Same kiai positioning comments as Frill's difficulty
01:46:904 (1) - Grrah. I'm so gullible.
Another fun difficulty, but too hard for me to live the entire time. :P

Great set of maps here, and a nice song to boot.
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
save BGs to my folder.

[Frill]
00:49:212 (5) - forget a clap here?
01:37:673 (3) - ^
01:41:904 (1,2,3) - spacing looks a little strange, but not a really problem.
02:38:827 (1) - finish at the start?
02:49:981 (2) - turn off grid snap and move it down about 0.8 grid to let the reverse stack with (4)
nice done!

[S i R u R u]
you need a 44byte normal-sliderslide2.wav XD, sliderslide is not silenced when you use tick sounds. and i want you to use more whistle sounds= =
@Clare:你是不是忘了加消音的normal-sliderslide2.wav了……

00:35:750 (3) - 1 grid left?
00:43:250 (7) - use a normal-finish(volume=60) or normal-normal(volume=70) instead of the clap
01:23:154 - add a note?
02:50:750 (5,6) - 1 grid up, 5-whistle.
03:39:596 (1,2) - 1 grid down, nazi.
03:40:558 (6,7) - = = you know it.
pretty good.

[Clare]
还是note 太random的问题。。。整体感一点啊= =
00:41:904 (4,5) - 下2左1。
00:42:866 (1) - clap, 顺带一句按我感觉(2)这个音可以没有。
00:56:712 - 加音?
01:04:019 (1) - 左一格。
01:40:750 (1,2) - 换下new combo位置。标跳用吧
01:55:558 (7) - 和之前的对应的话是上一。。。
03:14:885 (1) - 这new combo位置好诡异。。。
03:33:827 (2,4) - 消whistle.
03:34:789 (5) - 违和。
04:30:366 (4) - clap.
04:30:558 (5) - 加音。
Topic Starter
Clare

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
save BGs to my folder.

[Frill]
00:49:212 (5) - forget a clap here?
01:37:673 (3) - ^
01:41:904 (1,2,3) - spacing looks a little strange, but not a really problem.
02:38:827 (1) - finish at the start?
02:49:981 (2) - turn off grid snap and move it down about 0.8 grid to let the reverse stack with (4)
nice done!

[S i R u R u]
you need a 44byte normal-sliderslide2.wav XD, sliderslide is not silenced when you use tick sounds. and i want you to use more whistle sounds= =
@Clare:你是不是忘了加消音的normal-sliderslide2.wav了……

00:35:750 (3) - 1 grid left?
00:43:250 (7) - use a normal-finish(volume=60) or normal-normal(volume=70) instead of the clap
01:23:154 - add a note?
02:50:750 (5,6) - 1 grid up, 5-whistle.
03:39:596 (1,2) - 1 grid down, nazi.
03:40:558 (6,7) - = = you know it.
pretty good.

[Clare]
还是note 太random的问题。。。整体感一点啊= =
00:41:904 (4,5) - 下2左1。
00:42:866 (1) - clap, 顺带一句按我感觉(2)这个音可以没有。
00:56:712 - 加音?
01:04:019 (1) - 左一格。
01:40:750 (1,2) - 换下new combo位置。标跳用吧
01:55:558 (7) - 和之前的对应的话是上一。。。
03:14:885 (1) - 这new combo位置好诡异。。。
03:33:827 (2,4) - 消whistle.
03:34:789 (5) - 违和。
04:30:366 (4) - clap.
04:30:558 (5) - 加音。
謝了!~Rin 我的部分修好了
add normal-sliderslde2.wav

@S i r i r u:can you fix my BG >"<? thank you~~
Cyril Scarlet
Topic Starter
Clare
thank you very much~S i R i R u > <"
youngdow
Topic Starter
Clare

youngdow wrote:

Sorry for late ;)
thank you for Tikao DIff :3
climbb65588
Just go 8-)
lepidopodus
Taiko modding... These are suggestions, so you don't need to take this seriously.

youngdow&climbb's Taiko :3
youndow's part
(I'll mod youngdow's part as Korean, cause he's not that good at English)
Overall: 말한 바 있지만, 노트가 상당히 뻑뻑해. 음악의 분위기가 절정에 들어섰다면야 좀 어려운 노트도 좋고 밀도를 좀 높여도 좋지만, 그런 파트가 아닐때는 중간 중간에 노트를 슬쩍슬쩍 빼는 것이 분위기 맞추는데는 도움될지도 모르겠다. 패턴 자체는 그렇게 나쁘지는 않고, 크게 무리해서 들어간 패턴은 없는 듯. 전에 말했지만 1/3/5는 왠만한 맵에는 잘 맞아들어간다고. 아 그리고 패턴 넣을 때 페이드인도 고려해서 적절하게 난이도를 맞추어 줬으면 좋겠다.
00:31:135 ~ 00:43:443 - 꽤나 무거운 시작이네... 노래의 절정에 들어서면 모르겠다만 이쪽은 노트 밀도가 너무 높은 듯? 그리고 이렇게 되면 분위기가 뜨는 뒷 부분의 강조 효과는 떨어지게 되지. 조금 더 구체적으로는 1/2 캇이 연달아 나오는 부분에서 캇을 몇개 빼보는게 더 나을지도 모르겠다.
00:32:866 (20) - 큰 동이 그다지 어울리는 것 같지는 않아
00:36:520 (43,44) - 노트 밀도가 높다보니 큰 노트로 이 부분을 강조한 건가? 하지만 아직 큰 노트가 나오기에는 분위기가 그렇게 뜨지는 않은 듯?
00:43:443 ~ 01:23:443 - 스네어 나오는 부분 마다 큰 동이 나오고 있네... 그 부분이 이렇게 까지 강조가 되어야하는지는 잘 모르겠어. (개인적으로는 이런 부분을 캇으로 처리하곤 했다만 어떻게 처리할지는 고민해 보는게 좋을지도.)
00:57:096 - 1/6 3연타라... 여기에는 노트를 넣는게 어떨가? 사실 드럼도 거기에 소리는 있으니까. 다만 종류가 다른 드럼인 듯? (드럼은 잘 몰라 미안 ;;)
00:57:289 - kiai는 마디 단위로 걸어주는 것이 좋은 것 같더라고. 보통 작곡가들도 마디 단위로 곡을 만드니까. 다만 kiai는 곡의 해석에 따라서 다를 수도 있으니까 이 말에 너무 신경쓸 필요는 없고.
01:02:673 (208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - 개인적으로는 이런 부분을 큰 노트로 강조하는 것이 좋다고 생각해. 큰 노트를 너무 자주 쓰다보니 큰 노트 특유의 강조효과가 좀 약해진 것 같기도 하고.
01:21:808 - 태고에서 kiai time은 미리 끝낼 필요는 없어. 어차피 마지막 노트위에 timing section을 잡아서 kiai time을 끝내면 그 노트는 kiai time의 점수 추가 효과에서 제외되거든.
01:23:443 ~ 01:35:750 - 00:31:135 ~ 00:43:443과 마찬가지. 사실 음악 자체는 반복이라서 적절한 반복에 적절한 변화를 주는 것도 추천.
01:49:596 ~ 01:51:135 - 앞에서는 대충 요 어딘가에서 kiai가 들어갔던 것 같은데... 음악이 비슷하니 여기도 넣는게 더 좋지 않을려나 해서 말이야.
01:49:596 ~ 02:14:212 - 00:43:443 ~ 01:23:443와 같음.
02:02:577 - 01:21:808과 마찬가지, 다만 효과는 반대겠지만.
02:14:212 ~ 02:38:827 - 앞과는 확실히 분위기가 다르니 여기에는 큰 노트를 넣어주는게 좋겠다. 뭐 지금은 조금 많은 편인 것 같으니까 적절히 빼주는게 좋을 것 같지만 앞부분에 비해서는 좀 많이 남겨두는게 좋아보여. 예를 들어서 02:14:212 (424,425,426,427,428) 같은 부분은 적절한 듯.
02:38:827 (1) - 이 스핀을 보컬에 맞춰주는게 좋을 것 같아. 그러니까 02:38:058로 당기는 것이 어떨까 싶은데.... 별론가?
02:42:000 - 01:21:808과 마찬가지.

climbb's part
02:48:058 (18) - Compared with 02:44:981 (1), 02:46:519 (10), and 02:49:596 (28), I don't think this note should be emphasize that much, so how about remove finish from this?
03:02:866 (100,101,102) - I can here unsual big drum sound here, and this is the 'entrance' to somewhat different part, so how about add finish here?
03:08:827 (139,140,141,142,143,144) - How about 1/3?
03:12:866 (158) - big sound is in 03:12:673, and I can't hear any significant sound here, so how about removing finish from here?
03:19:212 (198,199,200,201) - I think this measure should be more emphasized, so how about adding finish here to make them big notes? and if you make them big, how about change K to D in 03:19:789 (200) to emphasize 03:20:173 (202) ?
03:20:366 (203) - how about delete this to emphasize 03:20:173 (202) more?
03:40:366 (311,312,313) - make them big notes to emphasize?
03:41:231 - I suggest to start and end kiai time with measures, though interpretation can be different so I don't mind if you ignore this. Just inform you, you don't have to start kiai earlier than the note cause if you start kiai with note, kiai effect (20% more score) is activated even you hit the note slighty ealier. (If you hit the note way too early, like 50ms ealier, it seems that effect won't activated. I test several times...)
03:54:596 (396) - how about make it big?
03:54:981 (398) - how about make it big?
03:55:558 (401) - how about make it big?
03:57:673 (414) - how about make it big?
03:58:058 (416) - how about make it big?
04:04:981 (453,454,455) - how about make it big?
04:21:904 (544) - put a note here?
04:22:673 (550,551,552,553,554,555) - dkddk d?
04:43:443 (84, 1) - Personally I don't like put spiners like this, but it can be personal preference, don't mind this too much XD

Maybe I'll mod again after some fixing? lol
Vikon
[General]
1) there should be a diff under 3, But the osu rating of [Frill's Beats] is 3.07.
2) Great map, just some suggestions.

[Frill's Beats]
02:17:673 (3) covered by 02:15:366 (1), doesn't look good.
02:32:289 (5) ^
02:38:05, 02:38:63,03:12,48 : the volume change of these 3 timing section can be bigger, it is hard to hear the changes clearly
04:09:981 (3) ^
04:17:673 (3) add clap on the beginner of the slider?
04:24:596 (5) covered by 04:23:058 (3) , doesn't look good.

[S i R i R u's Days]
02:13:05 useless timing section? or you forgot to make changes?

[Clare's Sunshine]
00:57:96 這個timing section的音量差距可以再調大一點,現在很難清楚聽得出有分別
01:50:27 ^
03:39:69 ^
03:42:57 ^
04:17:866 (5,6,1) spacing?

realllllllllly nice map~!
Cyril Scarlet
Topic Starter
Clare

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) there should be a diff under 3, But the osu rating of [Frill's Beats] is 3.07.
2) Great map, just some suggestions.

[Frill's Beats]
02:17:673 (3) covered by 02:15:366 (1), doesn't look good.
02:32:289 (5) ^
02:38:05, 02:38:63,03:12,48 : the volume change of these 3 timing section can be bigger, it is hard to hear the changes clearly
04:09:981 (3) ^
04:17:673 (3) add clap on the beginner of the slider?
04:24:596 (5) covered by 04:23:058 (3) , doesn't look good.

[S i R i R u's Days]
02:13:05 useless timing section? or you forgot to make changes?

[Clare's Sunshine]
00:57:96 這個timing section的音量差距可以再調大一點,現在很難清楚聽得出有分別
01:50:27 ^
03:39:69 ^
03:42:57 ^
04:17:866 (5,6,1) spacing?

realllllllllly nice map~!
感謝^^ 音量把前面的變小5%後面沒變~不太喜歡太大聲><
mayosiiiiii
good map :)
Frill
Topic Starter
Clare

Frill wrote:

okay fixed.

here~
thank you~Frill
Kurai
Nice~
Orz-
:( :)
Mafiamaster
[Clare's Sunshine]
01:46:904 (1) - 这是一个移动的小远从以前的6。

修理,我会泡
Topic Starter
Clare

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Clare's Sunshine]
01:46:904 (1) - 这是一个移动的小远从以前的6。

修理,我会泡
haha~~fixed! ^^
Mafiamaster
Bubbled!
Alace
lol chinese Mafia
Ranked
Cyril Scarlet
.☆.+:^ヽ(∇ ̄*)o♪Congratulations♪o(* ̄∇)ノ^;+.☆.
Colin Hou
第一张没有mod过的GDM from Clare... 纪念一下(逃
Frill
Nice :oops:

☆彡(ノ^ ^)ノ Congratulations ヘ(^ ^ヘ)☆彡
Kecco
Fantastic map, gratz.
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