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annika69

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annika69 2015-04-11T18:10:10+00:00

Holy bg

Anywayss

[Lunatic]
00:34:786 (2) - Move to X:272 Y:280 ?
01:14:331 - Add note?
01:19:786 - Same^^
02:11:775 (1) - NITPICKING ALERT but move to X:420 Y:248 ? :^)
02:36:576 (2,3) - Fix stack
02:45:695 - Add note?
02:45:695 - Same^^
03:07:513 - Same^^

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2015-04-11T18:11:49+00:00

Hello, when I was testplaying, I saw weird things, i'll just mention them.

Destiny

00:04:559 (2,3,4,5,6) - a little confusing, because you don't follow the piano on this tick, and you follow it here 00:04:559 to avoid the polarity issue. It should be better if you follow this tick 00:05:326 - for consistency with the rhythm.
00:45:554 (2) - Due to the low SV, this pattern is surprising because the gap between 00:45:554 (2,3) - is not predictable, i thought it was 1/1 here, consider reducing the distance between 00:45:554 (2,3) - to make this pattern easier to read.
01:26:633 (4,5,6,7,1) - There should be more distance between these notes to give a better impact, the current atmosphere is being more powerful and it is weird to play objects which have less distance between them. That makes sense if you play with volume, but you don't do it here.
01:50:156 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - same as ^ , 04:53:905 (4,5,6,7,1) - too
01:48:110 (5) - I didn't really get this pattern, you skip this tick 01:48:280 - where you can put a clap. It's a little weird because you didn't skip this tick on previous patterns, i know you follow vocals first. But, make things consistent too.
02:22:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I see that you decrease the DS on each circles but this shape can be improved, you can make it more regular to give a smoother motion.
04:47:258 (1) - This note needs to be emphasized, the distance between 04:47:088 (6,1) - is lower compared to 04:46:917 (5,6) - and if you're supposed to emphasize 04:47:258 -, it should be the other way round (higher distance between 04:47:088 (6,1) -)
05:41:804 (5,6,1) - This was a little uncomfortable to play, because the player needs enough aim to handle these objects on a straigh line. There should be a larger angle between these objects. I think of something like this which can make this pattern a little smoother.
SPOILER

I tried to understand how you mapped it, but i didn't really get some patterns.
In my opinion, this map needs more mods, this map is safe, but things could be improved.
Good Luck.

happy30

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happy30 2015-04-11T23:12:47+00:00

@Cherry Blossom

00:04:559 (2,3,4,5,6) - a little confusing, because you don't follow the piano on this tick, and you follow it here 00:04:559 to avoid the polarity issue. It should be better if you follow this tick 00:05:326 - for consistency with the rhythm.

I follow the drums here with the NC, as you can hear by my hitsound choice.

00:45:554 (2) - Due to the low SV, this pattern is surprising because the gap between 00:45:554 (2,3) - is not predictable, i thought it was 1/1 here, consider reducing the distance between 00:45:554 (2,3) - to make this pattern easier to read.

fixed

01:26:633 (4,5,6,7,1) - There should be more distance between these notes to give a better impact, the current atmosphere is being more powerful and it is weird to play objects which have less distance between them. That makes sense if you play with volume, but you don't do it here.

note density is already much higher here, no need to fuck people up with extra spacing.

01:48:110 (5) - I didn't really get this pattern, you skip this tick 01:48:280 - where you can put a clap. It's a little weird because you didn't skip this tick on previous patterns, i know you follow vocals first. But, make things consistent too.

fixed

02:22:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I see that you decrease the DS on each circles but this shape can be improved, you can make it more regular to give a smoother motion.

fixed DS

04:47:258 (1) - This note needs to be emphasized, the distance between 04:47:088 (6,1) - is lower compared to 04:46:917 (5,6) - and if you're supposed to emphasize 04:47:258 -, it should be the other way round (higher distance between 04:47:088 (6,1) -)

fixed

05:41:804 (5,6,1) - This was a little uncomfortable to play, because the player needs enough aim to handle these objects on a straigh line. There should be a larger angle between these objects. I think of something like this which can make this pattern a little smoother.

its unfomfortable as intended. I know how to map a 100% smooth map, but it is boring to play

Kite

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Kite 2015-04-12T02:11:44+00:00

Irc mod, idk how to mod perfect map ;_;

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03:18 Kite: tbh everything looks really amazing so far D:
03:18 Kite: i am at 75%
03:19 Kite: 04:23:906 (1,2) - this is the first thing that i dont like
03:19 Kite: the slider seems random
03:19 Kite: remove 1 and move slider earlier
03:19 Kite: fits better and plays better imo
03:21 happy30: oh
03:21 happy30: i thought there was a sound there
03:23 happy30: fiiixed
03:24 Kite: 00:57:315 (2) - id place this 1/2 earlier
03:24 Kite: feels more comfortable to play
03:26 Kite: also your folder has 2 bg pics, not sure what you use the 1080p one
03:26 Kite: for
03:27 happy30: zoom is for sb
03:28 Kite: ah
03:32 Kite: 02:18:792 (2,3,4,5,1,2) -
03:32 Kite: this section feels weird
03:32 Kite: trying to come up with a better rhythm to play
03:33 happy30: alright
03:34 Kite: http://puu.sh/hault/dd3877ca19.jpg
03:34 Kite: try this
03:36 Kite: 02:40:014 (4,5) - and id space those out a bit more 4: x427 y277 5: x229 y355
03:40 Kite: 03:56:292 (6,7,8) - x231 y43 plays a lot better imo
03:42 Kite: ok really cant find anything else
03:46 Kite: hmm well hope it helped at least a little bit

Owntrolf

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Owntrolf 2015-04-12T03:07:47+00:00

Imb4 bg replace for "nsfw"
00:45:695 (1) - I think this would be better if it was moved to the large white tick and have a normal circle placed where it used to start
02:09:900 (3) - Ctrl+h ctrl+j Ctrl+g

t0ns of spinners

02:06:831 (2) - This sliderhead feels really quiet compared to yellow1 or yellow3
02:12:627 (4) - Similar thing here
02:24:218 (2,3,4,5) - Wat are these doubles doing here it feels like a sound is being skipped

04:29:502 (1,2) - I think the slider should go first

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2015-04-12T12:10:20+00:00

why this one

happy30

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happy30 2015-04-13T13:02:16+00:00

Heatherfield wrote:
why this one

which one do you want

happy30

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happy30 2015-04-13T15:51:07+00:00

rest in peace, my two fates

Aka

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Aka 2015-04-13T16:08:12+00:00

ar8.5 fits better huh

Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2015-04-13T16:41:23+00:00

because bg was changed

happy30

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happy30 2015-04-13T16:49:27+00:00

thank you.
I prefer 8.3 (though 8 is best)

izzydemon

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izzydemon 2015-04-13T17:08:35+00:00

rip tits
nice sb, congrats on bubble

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2015-04-13T18:14:24+00:00

Two bubbles.

happy30

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happy30 2015-04-13T18:19:39+00:00

thank youuuu♥

Lally

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Lally 2015-04-13T22:42:40+00:00

what i just did here o3o

log o3o

23:19 happy30: lazylilly~
23:19 Lally: o3o hi
23:19 Lally: not lazy but busy ;w;
23:19 happy30: mmh
23:20 happy30: bussally~~
23:20 Lally: lol
23:20 Lally: sup
23:21 happy30: il lget my map ranked soon tm
23:22 happy30: first in many months

23:22 Lally: wich one? o3o
23:23 *happy30 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/675854 Hatsunetsumiko's - Two Fates]
23:23 happy30: new one
23:25 Lally: sling o3o
23:26 Lally: dling*
23:26 happy30:

23:27 Lally: uuuh nice flow o3o
23:27 happy30: thanks

23:28 happy30: song is a little long >_<
23:28 Lally: sound relaxing =v= i like it o3o
23:28 happy30: nice o3o
23:29 happy30: rank it

23:29 Lally: looking if everything is fine o3o
23:30 happy30: 0w0
23:30 Lally: what about OD 7.5?
23:30 happy30: yeah, sound good, because of the few red lines
23:31 Lally: would be better since AR is 8.3
23:33 Lally: 05:37:713 (1) - this one u could stack it different
23:33 Lally: wich doesent go to be hided with the slider
23:33 Lally: imo is better
23:33 Lally: atm looks a bit strange
23:33 happy30: mmh, it's normal stack actually
23:33 happy30: it goes automatically like that
23:34 Lally: it was the only in the map with this kind
23:34 happy30: ill make it space out then
23:35 Lally: imo is better ; puuuush is sloawawawawawawa :V http://puu.sh/hcXca/09f741cd63.jpg
23:35 Lally: like that?
23:35 Lally: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3010579
23:35 happy30: i have this now.... .. .. .. .. ... .. slow puuuuuuuushh .. . . .. . ... . . . . . .
23:36 Lally: 00:52:627 - this line is unsnapped
23:36 Lally: 02:23:906 - same about this one
23:36 happy30: http://puu.sh/hcXly/6b2d33d9ff.jpg
23:36 Lally: ok naisu o3o!!
23:37 happy30: alright
23:37 Lally: update and we do a big party \o3o\
23:37 happy30: fixed
23:37 happy30: 0w0///
23:37 happy30: updated
23:40 Lally: not sure if is possible today checking how many qualify maps we have
23:41 happy30: 7 so far
23:41 Lally: lucky 7
23:41 Lally: let's do it o3o
23:41 happy30: o.o7

happy30

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happy30 2015-04-13T22:51:21+00:00

thank youu!!