[General]
Remove Set Fire to Villages from tags, as it's already in title
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[Normal]
00:00:134 (1,3) - These two sliders are overlapping, which looks ugly. As the flow between (1) and (2) can be improved, I recommend you to redo this part
I recommend. Place (1) somewhere under (3), Ctrl G (2) and keep (3)
00:03:539 (3,3) - These 2 sliders are also overlapping, but it's barely noticable. so it can stay (there is also no real way to fix this unless you do other changes, which would ruin the Original flow of the map
00:09:052 - It's recommended to have a circle here, as there is a strong sound here. Remember that you need to have even spacing, so put it in a space where the distance with the next note is 1.00
00:16:188 (4,5) - Bad overlap, but it also has a lowered distance which is not allowed. A newbie would think it's faster (for me it seems like 1/2 when I first saw it. Please increase the distance, and change the shape of (5) to something so it wil not overlap with (4) anymore
00:19:106 (8) - This slider looks pretty ugly, because it's so curvy, make it less curvy, and thus make it longer (so the head and tail wouldn't overlap that much)
00:24:620 - there is a strongbeat here, so I recommend you to add a circle here, or even better, a slider
00:27:215 (7) - Stacking isn't really nice here, imcrease the distance between this one and (6). Also, give this a NC, because the combo is quite long
00:28:188 (8,9) - This looks ugly, as the notes are badly overlapping each other. Move (9) to the right of (8) to make it looks better, it'll also increase the flow
00:45:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Redo this part. A map must have a consistent DS (spacing) in the diff. This part suddenly moves to 0.6 which is REALLY confusing, make it all 1.0 distance and move objects further apart
00:51:052 (9,10,11) - Stacks... Please... Don't... Just Redo
01:02:079 (5,1) - Slight overlap, move (1) a little to the right
01:05:323 (5,1) - A bigger overlap, move (1) away so they don''t overlap (but keep the spacing consistent)
01:15:377 (1) - Delete, and extend the spinner to the end (this note feels weird and awkward, as there is no strong sound
[Hard]
00:02:242 (6,7) - Move both to 304:303 to improve the stack
00:04:998 (2,4) - Overlap, move (4) to the right to improve it
00:05:647 (4,8) - What the heck, this looks ugly and confusing, start (8) at 367:194, andmove the red point to 356:268 to improve the looks
00:13:755 (1,2,3) - Move to 220:88 to improve the stack
00:15:701 (2,3) - This looks ugly, I suggest you to redo this, and add some curves to the sliders. The circle on the sliderhead also feels really weird
00:18:944 (4,5,6) - These jumps are too fast for just a hard difficulty. They are probably even too fast for an insane, an they make no sense. Give them normal spacing
00:23:809 (8,9,10,11) - This should be at a 1/3 divisor instead of 1/4. Set the divisor to 1/3 and resnap these notes (and give proper spacing)
00:27:215 (1,2,3) - Flows bad, ctrl H, and move to the current position for a better flow. It also helps, because there is a bad overlap
00:40:188 (1,5) - These sliders overlap a little ugly, move (1) more to the right, but keep distance the same
00:46:188 (2,3) - Move to 496:60 to improve blanket
01:02:079 (7,1) - Bad overlap, move (1) closer to (8) (on the right) as the distance is also quite high
01:04:674 (7,8,9,10,11) - Like the previous part, here it's 1/3 as well, no 1/4. Change it like in the previous part
01:15:701 - It feels like there is a sound here, try adding a circle, as it feels better to me
Good luck!
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