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Hatsune Miku - Yokkyuu Fuman

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Cike
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Cike
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年8月25日 at 1:10:41

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Yokkyuu Fuman
Source: VOCALOID
Tags: 21centerP SKIN Garven kaouji
BPM: 175
Filesize: 4507kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.03 stars, 137 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 569 notes)
  3. Normal+ (4.3 stars, 252 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Yokkyuu Fuman
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Gan xie dang!!Gan xie guo jia!!

First,I'm so sorry for stealing the skin that is made by Garven and kaouji without telling anyone.Also,the spinner-circle is from the latest Bad Apple!!(Sorry I don't know who make it orz__)

Second,I select the white combo colour instead of gray or black just because the dark combo colour will make you see the note unclearly.

At last,thanks to all people that give me star or mod my map.Sorry for my poor English.

Please redownload if you have this map before Aug 24.
Last edited by Cike , edited 47 times in total.
Furudo_Erika_old
53 posts
Joined September 2009
Furudo_Erika_old
star
KEMONO_old
19 posts
Joined January 2010
KEMONO_old
give you star :) :)
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Nice SB...Go through all the difficulties and check your snapping...some parts are way off!
I recommend adding kiai time at 01:39:169 (for all diffs)

[Easy]
02:14:484 - 02:22:369 - these spinners....theres to many....makes the map look ugly...make some into sliders or something


[Normal+]
01:10:026 (6) - shorten this slider to end at 01:10:626
01:59:398 (7) - repeat this slider 1 more time
02:00:084 (8) - remove this note
02:14:484 - 02:22:369 - same thing as in easy....
02:48:769 (7) - repeat this slider 1 more time
02:49:455 (8) - remove this note
03:02:484 (6) - shorten this slider to end at 03:02:998
03:05:226 (6) - ^ same thing but end at 03:05:741
03:10:712 (7) - repeat this slider 1 more time
03:11:398 (8) - remove this note
03:13:455 (6) - shorten this slider to end at 03:13:969
03:16:198 (6) - ^ same thing, but end at 03:16:712

[Hard]
Hard? more like insane...
This map looks messy and all over the place...snap properly....
Also some of the streams with sliders etc...are a big WTF! ....edit around with that...

~STAR
Saten ruiko
196 posts
Joined November 2009
Saten ruiko
star
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
0o0
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
You went over the limit on my queue. :/ I was curious anyway since you used some of the monochrome skin elements that I had made, hehe.

[SB]
Neat. :D Though I'd add the epilepsy warning to all your maps.

[Easy]
02:11:741 (3) - Uh, forget to put in some new combos in here?
Since you have storyboard stuff all the way to the end here, it's kind of weird to just sit there and wait, and see the kiai stars blast out. Take out all the extra timing sections after the end here - or just map until the end. There's not that much more song to map anyway.

[Normal]
01:05:226 (8) - I was kind of expecting this to be on the red tick to go with the vocals.
01:41:912 (2) - Make sure this is stacked properly.
02:00:084 (8) - Same with the 1:05:226 comment.
02:08:998 (5) - New combo?
02:22:712 - Maybe add a note? Also the break afterward feels excessively long.
02:37:455 (1) - Start this spinner a little earlier. It's kind of short. Also, end it at 02:38:655. It'll give players a little more time to get ready for the next note.
Take out all the extra timing sections after the end here - or just map until the end. There's not that much more song to map anyway.

[Hard]
01:33:683 (2,3,4,5) - This whole series is probably considered unrankable due to the repeats being covered.
Fun difficulty, though I think the streams in this make it go beyond the hard difficulty and into the Insane category.
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. increase the volume 20~30
[Easy]:
  1. 01:44:312 (1,2,3,4) - 这样摆放对新手来说有点眼花...如果可能的话 把每个都横着放如何?
  2. 02:14:484 (4) - new combo
  3. 02:18:598 (8) - ^
[Normal+]:
  1. 01:48:426 (1) - 这个持续到01:49:455
[Hard]:
  1. 00:57:169 (1) - 这个ctrl+j一下会更好玩点 :3
  2. 01:35:741 (8) - new combo combo数最大不能超过15 虽然这种情况比较特殊 :S 你也可以等BAT指出再改
  3. 01:41:569 (8) - ^ 之后的情况不再指出了
  4. 这个难度感觉slider用的太多（短的带折返的除外）有的部分过于相似 可以考虑全部用circle以SOLO的形式来摆放 例如:
  5. 02:08:998 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这样的形式
  6. 以及有个很多人共有的问题就是基本只压Vocal 所以前段明显很多空白都不必留的都出现了 可以考虑用circle或者把slider加折返来填补 但是这个属于个人风格 视情况而定吧.
star for 消失No.2 lol
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
Hi~

以下纯属意见：

[General]

  • 1.Combo Color 与背景有点冲突
[Easy]

  • OD - 1
    00:54:255(3):结尾处+Finish
    00:56:998:加个Slider持续到00:57:342
    00:59:741:^
    01:22:369:转盘持续到这里
    01:44:312(1):开头处+Finish
    01:49:112(7):换成一个1/2拍重复4次的Slider
    01:49:798(1):Finish
    02:00:084:加一个Circle
    02:22:712:^
[Normal+]

  • 00:54:491(1):Finish
    01:04:541(7):在白线上+Clap
    01:07:284:建议换成一个长一个半拍的重复一次的Slider（ 8-) 后面也是）
    01:10:026:^
    01:22:369:转盘持续到这里
    01:59:398(7):在白线上+Clap
    02:59:741(7):红线上+Clap
    03:10:712(7):^
    03:12:083(1):Finish

[Hard]

  • 01:16:198(8):Clap
    01:22:369:转盘持续到这里
    01:38:141(7,8):没完全重合
    01:49:798(1):开头+Finish
    02:39:169(1):^
    03:02:484(7):Clap
    03:12:083(1):开头处+Finish
好久没见这么好的图啦@

~STAR~ + #KUDOSU STAR#
Miss You_old
9 posts
Joined October 2009
Miss You_old
:)
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi,
I could find anything wrong

[hard]
should probably rename this insane, or at least hard+
03:31:626 (1) - don't think you need this new combo

nice map
NaomiMinette
osu! Alumni
3,916 posts
Joined June 2009
NaomiMinette
Let's see...

[General]
Just a suggestion, but shouldn't the slider ball be grayed out too?

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal+]
Also fine~

[Hard+]
This feels like an Insane...

* 01:33:683 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Any particular reason why each slider isn't stacked properly underneath the previous slider?
* 01:44:826 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

I didn't really have anything to complain about, so have a ★~

P.S. I love the figure 7's you put at 03:23:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) on Hard+ :)
Hyouketsu_Musume
Hyouketsu_Musume
star
Chester Stoddart
1 post
Joined February 2010
Chester Stoddart
star
Nicoyang
1 post
Joined August 2009
Nicoyang
star
Sakura
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2010
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
mp3 doesnt have a name?

[General]
Incoherent mapping, please make sure ur diffs are of the same length

[Hard+]
Hard? this is Insane imo

[Normal+]
Where's the rest of the map?...

[Easy]
Once again... where's the rest of the map?

Sorry, but i dont give stars to maps with diffs that have inconsistent lengths.
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
o_o'
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
[Easy]

减2OA 加HP掉率? OA感觉太高了4mod凹起来很难
感觉排版有点单调@_@
而且距离有点小误差 或许换Grid LV3会好一些吧
00:46:712 (1) - Remove new combo 在2加New Combo 由于后面的来回滑杠 还是建议取消掉

[Normal+]

02:00:255 加个Note试试看
02:04:884 (3,4) - 3添加1/2拍 4减去1/2拍并加New combo如何
02:08:312 (4) - 从这里开始New combo?
02:37:112 (1) - 提前1/2拍结束 Soft可换N

[Hard]

倒数第三个Timing开Kiai

好鬼畜 =w=

觉得没用就别给kds了
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
G
  1. sliderb的图片大小不是应该128x128么
  2. 38秒左右的 初音XX 移动的很生硬 建议向上移动的时候采取弧形上升（纯个人看法
  3. 不需要 music track lead-in 归0它
  4. spinner-circle做的缺少质感..去新rank的烂苹果里 试试他那个SP CIRCLE怎么样
  5. 背景和note颜色搭配不是很理想
  6. 第一根蓝线有意义吗<_<
  7. 你的easy没做完 另两个难度做完了 我想知道你的easy结尾的 thanks for play给谁看?
    你需要在easy里设置不同的SB
Easy

HP DRAIN RATE不要是0

[00:59:741] 离得近了，向左一格
[01:04:541] 这里又远了，向上两格
[01:32:655] 向上两格
[02:00:769] finish
[02:11:741] finish
[02:45:341] 离1近了离2远了
[02:39:169] finish
[02:50:141] finish
结束的地方有点奇怪

Normal+

检查一下normal少加的finish,就像easy里那样

Hard+

check finish

[01:07:284] new combo
[01:10:026] new cb
[01:51:169] n c
[01:53:912] n c

玩家总是把map分为pending和ranked两种 但是在mapper眼中至少药在ranked maps中分出4个等级
差 一般 好 神
那么差图无非就是太难或者过于无聊
无聊是很可怕的 他让你的map plays数不能持久 让map在MP不被人有兴趣玩到
往往一张有意思的map由丰富的节奏 和音效以及排键组成
并且少有复制现象出现

这张map ranked不是问题
但我相信你做map不只是为了ranked 8-)

EDIT 忘记一个事情..关于难度名问题 其实并不好说 因为你的这个难度主要靠特定部位的难度来提升难度 而不是提升整体平均难度 所以叫hard+也无可厚非 不过既然改成insane就这样也好:p
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
1) Your SB Elements have an uneeded space, you have to cut off
2) No Tags?

[Easy]
The slider velocity is too high for easy diff

00:43:969 (1) - Finish?
01:41:569 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:48:426 (5) - ^

[Normal+]
Fun map!

01:03:169 (5) - New combo?
01:14:141 (5) - ^
01:58:026 (5) - ^
02:47:397 (5) - ^
03:09:340 (5) - ^
03:18:255 (2) - Clap
03:20:312 (5) - New combo?

[Insane]
Fine~

MARVELOUS SONG!!
STAR + KD STAR
deepsea
osu! Alumni
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deepsea
._.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

Rename your mp3 to a better name please. Remember you have to change the mp3 name on all the difficulties through the file .txt.

Black combo colour is really hard to see sometimes. Can you change it to another colours please?

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

[Normal+]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

[Insane]

Circle size +1 at least, it would be more fun.

02:35:912 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:28:884 (7) - New combo.

EDIT: Re-Bubbled~
kuyukiP
365 posts
Joined May 2009
kuyukiP
Hi there~

Add some tags,
and also, the kiai time? Shouldn't you put it in some other place besides the end?
Maybe when you're doing combo colors, do a gray and white instead of just white and white?

Loving this map and the song. SB is fun, too~ Really good job.
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
General-
Who's the creator of this song? He should be at least added to the tags, so search for him.
I'm pretty sure that I've seen this skin lots of times before. This is not yours, and you should credit in the firt post the creator of the skin :/

Easy-
00:58:369 (2) - This is being overlapped by 00:59:055 (3) in an ugly and fixeable way.
This ends in a really akward place.

Normal+-
This is a hard
02:59:741 (3) - Remove the clap at the repeat, it's out of place.

Insane-
01:02:998 (2,3) - Stack these ones correctly under (1)'s end. If you cant, stack them manually or move them away.
01:04:369 (5,6,7) - Stack these ones correctly under (4)'s end.If you cant, stack them manually or move them away.
01:05:741 (2,3) - Stack these ones correctly under (1)'s end. If you cant, stack them manually or move them away.
01:31:283 (3,4) - Stack these ones correctly under (2)'s end. If you cant, stack them manually or move them away.
02:00:598 (2,3) - Stack these ones correctly under (1)'s end. If you cant, stack them manually or move them away.

I'd fix that before asking for a rank, specially the creator and giving credit to the one who made the skin. According to NatsuneRin's toseenbo description, the skin was made by Garven and kaouji.


Great song! And really fun map
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Popped for now so.

Fix these moddings and let me know when I have to Re-Bubble.

EDIT: Re-Bubbled~
KanaRin
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KanaRin
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swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
good map~ :D
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
  1. http://puu.sh/7HY - it doesn't need to be that big. Delete all the unnecessary transparency please (applies for all storyboard elements).
  2. Tags must be the same on all difficulties. Also edit the tags so they're only words instead of complete sentences (delete small words like "any" or "by").
  3. The differences in Kiai between difficulties are rather bothersome.
  4. I don't like how [Easy] is not fully mapped, but I'm sure you won't map the rest of it considering how near is ranking for you. >_>
Yeah. Pop~

EDIT: If you ask me, I'd add Kiai fountains at 01:49:798 and 02:22:712 only, since that's where more impact comes in. Using it for every chorus would be a bit overkill.

You still need to crop the images with unnecessary transparency, by the way...

Compare http://puu.sh/81D to http://puu.sh/7HY. See all that unused space? That's what I call unnecessary transparency. It really needs to be cropped to use the minimum space possible.

There, I hope you know what to do now. =>
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Gens
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Joined August 2008
Gens
Jeez, I'm getting to many mod posts from here...

But anyway, I see you cropped the file but other images like "title.png", "singer.png" and "miku.png" still need to be cropped.

EDIT: Did you full submit? The images are still like that. =(

I recently added a new FAQ entry regarding this issue: http://osu.ppy.sh/?p=faq&n=10&c=12
Check it if you still have doubts.

I could crop them for you, if you want.

EDIT2: Nope. Still like that, after redownloading again.

If you're having trouble, I have cropped the files for you. In case you lost your files or something. :p

Scratch all that. It must have been some connection problem from my end.
Bubbled!
Alace
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Alace
ranked
Glass
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Joined January 2010
Glass

luhan9527 wrote:

First,I'm so sorry for stealing the skin that is made by Garven and kaouji without telling anyone.Also,the spinner-circle is from the latest Bad Apple!!(Sorry I don't know who make it orz__)
Why did you do it if you knew it was stealing? And it wouldn't be stealing if you actually ASKED them if you could use the skin, and you even knew who made it...
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
...not sth serious, i guess they won't mind, but...
those are for wowaka series... though well i think the skin fits the song well.
next time remember to tell them... just this.

late but congrats on first ranked map~ nice job~

下次记得和他们先打个招呼……恩。图很好。继续加油。
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Actually I had known he had taken them as I had modded this early: viewtopic.php?p=466059#p466059
I don't really mind.

Though it was weird seeing this pop up when I was looking through my own maps. :/
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
Using the default skin, it's fairly hard to see the cursor most of the time, since the only (which I was sure was unrankable) combo colour is a pure white. Surely it wouldn't be too much trouble to fix this then rerank? At least there's no kiai, that would have been awful.

Other than that and the Normal+ being a straight Normal, fine map.
Poppo
21 posts
Joined May 2011
Poppo
but skin..
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