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Anxient wrote:

but seriously tho, what happened to ringatings (spelling w/e) edited bg? you know the censor with the butterflies?
yeah, what he said
posted
QATs are so funny

old ranking system was way better than this, same for old BATs

I'm fine if you say this is not a quality map and it needs more work, but not if more than half ranked beamaps are mapped exactly like this. Just rank it as the rest, ora just don't rank any of these maps. Don't try to find random stuff to change for no reason like the rhythm things in the [Relaxing] difficulty, please lol

this will get ignored as everything in this game :) no one cares. but it's important to expose our own thoughts

don't take it as an offence, DNA. same for QATs. I just dislike the way work on this game, but I also know it's not as easy as everyone thinks.
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The only issue that bugs me with this ranking system is the fact that the BNG and the QAT are two totally different things and don't interact with eachother.


At least with the old system, everyone gave a green light, not just half of the people.


The qualification part o the system is great though imo.
posted
lol rip my 351pp score
I expected that DQ, to be honest, haha.
Good luck on requalifying your map, that was funny to spend 30 mins playing this map with HDNCSD :3
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Quality Assurance Team wrote:

Unsuitable Background
  • Due to visibility of the character’s underwear, we consider your background unsuitable for all age groups. Please change it.
lmao this is what i expected
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Blue Dragon wrote:

hey guys, can you please stop complaining about the BG issue?

[–]houndbluedragon 11 pontos 5 hours ago
that was worded really badly but it's a kind of valid issue
I mean, there are thousands and thousands of generic anime wallpapers on the internet, why pick exactly one that has something suggestive on it?

btw I agree with Anxient, should just use Ringating's BG and go with it. easy fix, win4win
Why? Nobody has replied about the ridiculous hypocrisy even though it may not be the biggest of concerns. Just sweep it under the rug like always I guess.
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Cherry Blossom wrote:

lol rip my 351pp score

Cherry Blossom wrote:

I expected that DQ
why do you torture yourself like this
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Can you guys chill for a bit untill the mapper is back or at least wait for the mapper's reply.
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[Taiga] wrote:

Hello DarnessAngel,

Gratz for making another Koigokoro as pretty good map, i feel sad that it was DQ. My few personal feelings about your mapset:


117's Normal

While playing it i had weird idea - i am missing something in circle flow to the music.

00:41:377 (1,2) - In this moment, placing 2 additional notes would fill in my opinion missing beats. What you think about this: http://puu.sh/iUgBm.jpg ?
02:08:806 (1) - This one note is placed right when vocal starts and at same moment right before break time. In my opinion ending on slider before and leaving vocal without any notes fits better to this pattern. >No, this pattern I don't want to fix

Wish it will help you to polish diffs and rank up this map asap.

Good luck my friend!
No reply = Fix

Thanks your mod :)
Angel大你還會回來嗎??

這裡是摸的連結,KD都還沒給 :?
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4324258

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136,176,142520,6,0,P|80:172|12:188,2,100,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,220,143806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,308,144235,2,0,L|268:376,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,224,145092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,136,145520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,56,145949,6,0,L|464:44,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,136,146806,2,0,L|392:146,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,224,147663,2,0,P|324:276|188:300,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,228,148949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,148,149377,6,0,L|208:40,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,36,150235,2,0,L|100:135,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,224,151092,2,0,L|-24:212,2,50,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,151949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,280,152377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,336,152806,6,0,P|348:348|436:344,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,308,153663,2,0,P|484:252|492:184,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,120,154520,2,0,P|372:132|328:120,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,155377,2,0,L|252:24,2,50,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,180,156235,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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related to the BG issue https://osu.ppy.sh/b/527033&m=1 this is ranked. A lot seems to have changed in 10 months. or what?
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TheLukay wrote:

related to the BG issue https://osu.ppy.sh/b/527033&m=1 this is ranked. A lot seems to have changed in 10 months. or what?
ikr, also the pictures in question would reach PEGI12 at worst. apparently boobs and ass is all cool but god beware theres a crotch around.

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/32854 while we are at it lets disqualify random songs with panty shots...

the salt level is already at critical heights
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Oh well, rip my pp because of background salt.
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Where did the mapper go?
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Obviously he is already afk.
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peppy wrote:

Where did the mapper go?
probably quit
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juuuusttt btw,how stupid and nonsense the disqualify for the bg really is

sooo the original bg of this map is not acceptable really...?

but stuff like this is oky,lol https://osu.ppy.sh/b/653335


/me hides
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Kotori-Chan wrote:

juuuusttt btw,how stupid and nonsense the disqualify for the bg really is

sooo the original bg of this map is not acceptable really...?

but stuff like this is oky,lol https://osu.ppy.sh/b/653335


/me hides
the reason for the DQ wasn't even the BG though
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You may not remember me, but you posted in my modding queue...6 Months ago.Yeah, Sorry about that, but I had time so (if you even still want it) here it is. XD

00:49:949 (3) - Change this into a Slider and note. You had such a good beat going on.
00:51:235 - Add a note here.
01:04:949 - ^
01:15:663 (3) - Curve more to improve blanket.
01:20:377 - Add a note.
01:22:520 (3) - Divide up into sliders and beats, especially since the next slider is also long.
01:39:663 (1) - No NC (new combo)
01:47:806 - Add a note
02:16:520 (2,2) - Stack these?
02:27:663 (3) - Divide into smaller beats.

Overall nice difficulty. Just some missing beats or really long sliders that ruin the oh-so nice beat :P
Overall Difficulty: 6

00:15:235 (1) - No NC
00:18:235 (2,3) - REALLY unattractive overlap.
00:20:806 (1,3) - Stack better.
00:25:092 (2,3) - Bad overlap.
00:30:235 (3,4,1) - Since they're the same time apart, make them the same distance apart to avoid confusion.
00:30:663 (1) - No NC
00:38:806 (2,3) - Please stack
00:39:663 (1,2,3,4) - Why the sudden slow?
00:43:092 (1,2) - Bad overlap.
00:44:163 (1) - No NC
00:45:663 (3) - Curve more
00:46:092 (4) - ^
00:55:092 (1,2) - Bad overlap (I'm just going to not list this anymore, as it saves time.)
01:03:663 (1,2) - Curve slightly more?
01:04:092 (2,5) - Stack.
01:07:520 (1) - Why so far down? Raise it up
01:11:592 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - REALLY CONFUSING, especially for hard.
01:13:949 - You didn't have this break for normal mode. Why put it in hard?
01:25:949 (1,2,3,1,2) - Doesn't flow well. Change it up.
01:31:092 (1,2) - Fix blanket
01:36:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern could be improved.
01:43:092 (1,2,3,4) - ;-;
01:54:663 (1,2) - Why have this sudden jump? Why not complete the pattern?
02:00:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern flows oddly.
02:20:806 (1,2) - Curve more
02:21:663 (3,1,2) - Why not have the pattern go 2,3,1? Flows better IMO
02:21:877 (1) - No NC

Nice job, but some really odd parts that don't play very well. Oh, and overlapping.
00:01:520 (1,1) - Stack?
00:01:520 (1) - No NC
00:14:806 (3,2) - Stack
00:15:020 (1) - No NC
00:17:377 (1,2,3,4) - Separate these more.
00:18:235 (5,6) - Bad overlap.
00:20:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This seems a bit hard for a .....hard mode. Consider making it a bit easier XD
00:24:235 (1,3) - Put farther away from 2 and stack.
00:25:949 (1,2) - Stack
00:27:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Once again seems to hard.
00:30:663 (1) - The Skystar here is a bit too strong.
00:37:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - The overlapping. ;-;
00:43:306 (2,1,1,2,3) - Don't overlap as it lets people just hold their mouse still.
00:52:949 (4) - Curve more
00:54:235 (5,6) - Bad overlap.
01:13:949 - Once again, why the break when there is none in normal?
01:27:235 (1) - Unnecessary NC
01:27:663 (1,2) - Bad overlap (Just fix all the overlaps)
01:42:235 (3) - Curve more
02:24:449 (2,3,4,5) - Spread out more

Good difficulty, but it feels almost EXACTLY like "Relaxing" except with some harder parts. Honestly one of these modes feels unnecessary. However they both are pretty good. Just please no overlapping :(
00:01:092 (1) - No NC
00:01:520 (1) - Too much Skystar.
00:08:806 - At this point try not to make the streams in one place. Make them move a little.
00:14:806 (1) - No NC
00:15:235 (1) - Skystar
00:25:092 (5,6) - bad overlap
00:30:235 (1,2) - No NC
00:30:663 (1) - Skyst- Actually, this fits pretty nicely. Keep it XD
00:43:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Curve this stream more. The NCs after it are O.K, since it is difficult at that point.
00:51:985 (2,3) - Why not make it a triplet?
00:55:413 (2,3) - ^
01:05:699 (2,3) - ^ (I'm going to stop listing this now)
01:08:377 (7) - Make this point upwards a bit more. Flows oddly
01:13:520 (1) - REALLY doesn't flow well.
01:31:842 (2,3) - Triplet or just a single slider
01:41:377 (1,2) - Looks a bit odd. Adjust 2 more so they don't overlap
01:45:556 (2) - Remove note
02:22:520 (1,2) - Adjust 2 so they don't overlap.

Nice one. I like this one the most :3 Most of the NCs were actually necessary because they came after a hard part. Good job 8-)


Pretty Nice map overall, but relaxing and hard mode feel REALLY similar, and both have lot's of unattractive overlaps. However they are still good. This set mostly just makes the same mistakes. Keep it up. Hope this gets ranked! :)
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