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Girls' Generation - Merry-go-round (Cutdown Ver.)

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Sunny Holic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 6월 29일 화요일 at 오전 12:36:03

Artist: Girls' Generation
Title: Merry-go-round (Cutdown Ver.)
Tags: snsd _llkey_18
BPM: 100
Filesize: 5974kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. llkey's Carousel (3.72 stars, 207 notes)
  2. Relaxing (1.8 stars, 139 notes)
  3. Speeding (4.49 stars, 206 notes)
Download: Girls' Generation - Merry-go-round (Cutdown Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6th Track of Girls' Generation 1st Album - Girls' Generation

Glass skin by Gens
_llkey_18
:) :)
Kurai
Hi

[Relaxing]
01:23:506 (1) - New combo

[llkey]
00:07:306 (x) - Add note ?
00:46:306 (5) - Remove and put 00:46:606 (1) 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/1

[Speeding]
Nice

Good Job‼ You get my star ^o^
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi

[Relaxing]
01:23:506 (1) - New combo

[llkey]
00:07:306 (x) - Add note ?
00:46:306 (5) - Remove and put 00:46:606 (1) 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/1

[Speeding]
Nice

Good Job‼ You get my star ^o^
Done~ thanks~~~
Garven
Modding as per request:

[Skin]
It's hard to see the notes. Transparent circles on a bright background. :/
You need a hit0.png
The bg looks really low quality compared to the polish of the skin. It's due to the 400x300 resolution. Find at least a 800x600 one, considering you found a 1024x768 one for your fail image...

[Relaxing]
Sooo slooooow, hehe.
The only thing I see with this diff is that the notes after the spinners feel a little too soon.

[Carousel]
In general, a lot of your sliders need work. They all look lop-sided and not very appealing to the eyes. They kind of work in some spots, but for the most part, they just look bad. Try touching them up a bit.
00:01:906 (5) - Remove whistle from sliderslide. Also, why so many anchor points for a simple slider?
00:06:106 (3) - This could look a lot better. Try doing something like this with a lot of your stand-a-lone sliders.
02:07:906 (1) - Remove the finish from this. If anything, it should have a silenced finish. :/

[Speeding]
00:01:906 (3) - Remove whistle from sliderslide.
This is a nice difficulty. It plays really nice. Not quite the "speeding" I was expecting, though.

A nice basic set of maps. Carousel just needs some good polishing up on the sliders, really. Everything else is fine.
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

Garven wrote:

Modding as per request:

[Skin]
It's hard to see the notes. Transparent circles on a bright background. :/
You need a hit0.png
The bg looks really low quality compared to the polish of the skin. It's due to the 400x300 resolution. Find at least a 800x600 one, considering you found a 1024x768 one for your fail image...
:idea: I have looked for this photo for 3 days! I searched hundreds photos in filcker, google, picasa etc, I found this place call "brighton pier", but i still can't find this photo!.. :o :o :o :o

[Relaxing]
Sooo slooooow, hehe.
The only thing I see with this diff is that the notes after the spinners feel a little too soon.

[Carousel]
In general, a lot of your sliders need work. They all look lop-sided and not very appealing to the eyes. They kind of work in some spots, but for the most part, they just look bad. Try touching them up a bit.
00:01:906 (5) - Remove whistle from sliderslide. Also, why so many anchor points for a simple slider?
00:06:106 (3) - This could look a lot better. Try doing something like this with a lot of your stand-a-lone sliders.
02:07:906 (1) - Remove the finish from this. If anything, it should have a silenced finish. :/

[Speeding]
00:01:906 (3) - Remove whistle from sliderslide.
This is a nice difficulty. It plays really nice. Not quite the "speeding" I was expecting, though.
:idea: I think it can be called 'speeding' as a 'carousel' :P

A nice basic set of maps. Carousel just needs some good polishing up on the sliders, really. Everything else is fine.
:idea: llkey's carousel : this is what his way(slider shape). i don't think it's problem. also his maps which like this were ranked without problem
otherwise are done~ thx~
La Valse
소인의 싸구려 별을 받으시오
_FISSKISS_
pretty song +star
Sekuyi
lovely! have a <3*
miniJJ
星~
weixiaootaku
star!
RandomJibberish
General
I don't really like the yellow star2.png. Make it pink to fit better?

Relaxing
01:09:106 (3) - Point downward for readability?
01:49:906 (3) - ^

llkey's Carousel
00:34:306 (5,6,7) - Shorten these jumps a little, and move 5 closer to 4
02:04:906 (5) - Add a beat where this starts, move forward half a beat and shorten so it ends where it did before. I presonally don't like the slowdown but meh
02:07:906 (1) - End a beat earlier?

Speeding
00:16:606 (4,5,2) - I don't like this overlap
00:24:706 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - AH THE WHISTLES

Great map.
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
I don't really like the yellow star2.png. Make it pink to fit better?

Relaxing
01:09:106 (3) - Point downward for readability?
01:49:906 (3) - ^

llkey's Carousel
00:34:306 (5,6,7) - Shorten these jumps a little, and move 5 closer to 4
02:04:906 (5) - Add a beat where this starts, move forward half a beat and shorten so it ends where it did before. I presonally don't like the slowdown but meh
02:07:906 (1) - End a beat earlier?

Speeding
00:16:606 (4,5,2) - I don't like this overlap
00:24:706 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - AH THE WHISTLES

Great map.
thank you~
Frill
These are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.


[Relaxing]

00:49:306 (2,4) - remove finish?
00:51:106 (1) - maybe add finish
01:31:906 (1) - umm.. add finish? but suggetions.

[llkey's Carousell]

00:04:306 (5) - Perhaps, add whistle in start and end
00:25:306 (5) - remove whistle?
00:27:106 (3) - add whistle

[Speeding]

00:08:506 (3) - add whistle
00:51:106 (1) - same relaxing
01:10:306 (4) - hmm.. this is to make it beautifull vertically?
01:43:906 (2) - add whistle in start and slider?

Good
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

Frill wrote:

These are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.


[Relaxing]

00:49:306 (2,4) - remove finish?
00:51:106 (1) - maybe add finish
01:31:906 (1) - umm.. add finish? but suggetions.

[llkey's Carousell]

00:04:306 (5) - Perhaps, add whistle in start and end
00:25:306 (5) - remove whistle?
00:27:106 (3) - add whistle

[Speeding]

00:08:506 (3) - add whistle
00:51:106 (1) - same relaxing
01:10:306 (4) - hmm.. this is to make it beautifull vertically?
01:43:906 (2) - add whistle in start and slider?

Good
all done! cool~! i like your hit sound modding~ thank you very much~!
Mafiamaster
[General]
Change the lead-in time to 2 seconds instead of 1. This should give people a little more time to get ready (just in case).
Remove countdown on all difficulties.
comboburst-0,comboburst-2,comboburst-3 all exceed the max width of pixels. Max width being 500 so please reduce!

[_likey]
00:57:406 (5,6) - Move exactly under the endpoint of 4.
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

Mafiamaster wrote:

[General]
Change the lead-in time to 2 seconds instead of 1. This should give people a little more time to get ready (just in case).
Remove countdown on all difficulties.
comboburst-0,comboburst-2,comboburst-3 all exceed the max width of pixels. Max width being 500 so please reduce!

[_likey]
00:57:406 (5,6) - Move exactly under the endpoint of 4.
oh... how stupid i am.. about comboburst.. i just forgot to do full sumission.. now done~
all fixed~ :)
Mafiamaster
Alright, looks good now. Bubbled!
Yuji Tokaji
Hey ^^

Good job ~
Star~
sisiJiang
:)
Gaejugi
boggle boggle~
Shino
지원사격!!
Pra_Suika
:?: I don't know English. hahaha

..................랄까 -
Bikko
안 귀중한 별
kino77
>w<~~~
Hurude Rika
good luck
LaunchedthousandShip
Nice one x)
get it rank
!star
Ra-s
:)
Joon
+star GL
mtmcl
What a nice song <3 Ranked.
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic
_llkey_18,Kurai_,Garven,hutka,_FISSKISS_,Sekuyi,weixiaootaku,RandomJibberish,Frill,Mafiamaster,Slanox,Tiny stone,Gaejugi,crowzen2,Pra_Suika,Bikko,kino77,[KOR]RIKA,Suck,lRasl,hujune,mtmcl

thank you all >_< love you
Cheery
Grats on rank ! :)

I really like this glass skin <3 :D
Andrea
Heart fixed.
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

osuplayer111 wrote:

Heart fixed.
thx ^^
Derekku
Why does kiai start on the blue tick before each chorus instead of the white tick?

orz
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