Marathon:
DiamondCrash
00:34:107 (6) - Overlap, I think. Sadface.
01:02:545 (1,2,3) - 'scuse me?

Lybydose
09:41:309 (1) - Bah, remove new combo.

DC you fucker, found no problems with the rest of the map. And I looked, honest. Good job all.

Derp. I'd say /late but that's redundant now.

Fixed Shinta's fixes. For the 01:02:545 one, guessin it's the stream, but I've moved that square pattern just after that stream, since with it how it was, You can't see the note underneath

...I'm just gonna go ahead and pretend that 22 and 728 reciprocate each other and the star priority of this map is therefore 728.

No but seriously, this map is awesome. Keep it up~

Yeah, I need to get some more people to check this.

Soooooooooooooooooooo Good XD

I'm bored, and being a noobish modder, I should take a try on this.

DiamondCrash
00:31:723 (2,3) - spacing? move the others down too

NachoPiggy
02:30:984 (2) - clap at the end of the slider
02:31:641 (2) - ^ at the reverse
02:37:888 (11) - the slider ending like this seems incomplete
02:44:792 (3,4) - minor spacing error
02:46:765 - this part, IMO, needs more hitsounds
03:01:888 - ^

CDFA
06:00:061 (4,5) - this and the other one doesn't have the same hitsounds... being somewhat noobish to ask, is that ok?
06:16:746 (7,1) - overlapping

Emdyion
07:20:005 (1,2) - ugh, these look terrible

Lilac
08:27:730 (5) - you can just remove the combo right?

Xgor
10:09:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - excuse me if someone saw this and there was a comment, but it's not equal spacing....
10:11:940 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ but it's a little nazi


Woot......

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Emdyion
07:20:005 (1,2) - ugh, these look terrible

If only I could make it better...

i like this map a lot

very very fun XD

~Random mod

[General]
Nazi: There is unnecessary transparency in mappers' name's pictures
For example:
Blue Dragon.png is 291x69 and could be 264x55


[Marathon]
00:31:888 (4) - delete(I don't like random streams [+ sounds better])
00:32:052 (6) - ^
01:02:792 (3) - delete(too early for the stream start)

fun

_

[General]
*Storyboard had multiple issues and wasn't super clean, so I made some adjustments and nazi'd every line: http://puu.sh/1Bd8
*IIRC the only thing I "added" was flashes for the triplet beat at 00:19:312. Everything else in the SB should be the same albeit cleaned up. I'd still like to see the Doomsday's background be a little bit brighter, but then the flashes get too bright and hurt my eyes. I guess the subtle strobes should be fine.
*The only other SB-related complaint I have now is that the mapper names aren't centered nicely. I especially don't like how the shorter names look being right-aligned instead of centered. D:
*Tags: Maybe add "seven" to go with "7"? Also, I don't think "Collab" is needed since it's included in "Collaboration".
*Only 4 drain? How about raising that 1-2 ticks?

[Doomsday]
*Expected the first half to be at a slower SV. Maybe try something like 0.75x and scale down the sliders to keep their shapes?

[DiamondCrash]
00:31:477 (4,1) - Spacing? I mean I can still read it fine, but it might be confusing.
01:02:545 (1,2) - The overlap is a little bit hard to read... Maybe place 1 somewhere else or give 2 a new combo?

[pieguy1372]
01:26:545 (2) - should be on the next blue tick (and then appropriately adjust the distance spacing, of course)
01:29:175 (2) - ^
01:45:449 (1) - remove the new combo?

[Sallad4ever]
01:47:340 (6) - The sliderticks sound horrible on sliders like these... maybe try a lower volume?
01:53:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit difficult to read, even though I'm very familiar with the song/rhythm
02:25:559 (1) - Didn't expect this note, so how about removing it? Your other patterns start with a red tick note anyway.

[NachoPiggy]
*Expected more finishes in this part. I think I only heard like... one.

[Kurisuchianu]
*A bit too heavy on the slider use imo.
03:34:201 (5) - Unrankable; Second repeat arrow is hidden from the previous hitburst (100/300).
03:43:587 (3) - ^
03:46:268 (3) - ^

[Derekku]
*Still not super happy with how I mapped this, but I guess it's okay... Maybe I'll try changing some hitsounds around or something later.

[Beuchi-Chan]
*A few sliders could be adjusted to look more symmetrical/sexy.
05:09:526 - Expected a note here.
05:16:746 (1) - Expected this to end on the next white tick to follow the music.

[CDFA]
06:00:061 (4,5,6) - A bit too confusing to read
06:01:345 (4,5,6) - ^
06:09:687 (7) - Ughhh this is really hidden and silly... I suggest removing it.

[ignorethis]
06:36:960 (5) - I really suggest not doing this. Sliders that look exactly the same but have different speeds are usually pretty confusing and just result in combobreaks. ):
06:37:922 - Expected a note here.

[Emdyion]
07:17:492 (1,2) - Perhaps try silencing those extra slider ticks.

[xxheroxx]
07:40:148 (6) - Second repeat arrow is partially hidden under a previous hitburst
07:58:784 (2) - Expected this on the previous blue tick with a new note on 07:58:940.
08:03:484 (7) - And then this as a similar triplet pattern to what I suggested above.

[Lilac]
08:13:993 (7) - Expected this to be slightly farther away from 6 (or at least a new combo).

[Kecco]
09:11:940 (7) - Perhaps finish the end of this?

[Lybydose]
09:30:572 (4) - End on the previous blue tick?
09:37:203 (5) - Expected this on the previous red tick.
09:39:809 (6) - I think this actually sounds better on the next red tick.
09:45:888 (2) - Remove one repeat?

[Xgor]
10:09:098 (3) - new combo this instead of 10:09:414 (1)?
10:30:888 (7) - this combo is a bit long (time-wise), so perhaps new combo this?
10:40:993 (7) - ^
10:48:414 (1) - shorten to the red tick, although I think another uninherited section or two should be used for the preceding sliders and this.

[Blue Dragon]
11:05:352 (1) - fix the symmetry please :p

I'd still like to look over the timing again, but overall this map is pretty solid! I'm very pleased with it and am happy to have contributed.

Yay /


(except no FC )

Time to catch up finally!

chamelepeace710 wrote:

I'm bored, and being a noobish modder, I should take a try on this.

DiamondCrash
00:31:723 (2,3) - spacing? move the others down too eww, done

NachoPiggy
02:30:984 (2) - clap at the end of the slider I quite like it. done
02:31:641 (2) - ^ at the reverse ^
02:37:888 (11) - the slider ending like this seems incomplete I see what you mean, but I think it works fine as is.
02:44:792 (3,4) - minor spacing error Fine as is methinks
02:46:765 - this part, IMO, needs more hitsounds
03:01:888 - ^

CDFA
06:00:061 (4,5) - this and the other one doesn't have the same hitsounds... being somewhat noobish to ask, is that ok? Sounds better when they're the same I think.
06:16:746 (7,1) - overlapping That'll be okay

Emdyion
07:20:005 (1,2) - ugh, these look terrible See Emdyion's post

Lilac
08:27:730 (5) - you can just remove the combo right? Yes, but this part sticks to short combos, so keeping this would be best.

Xgor
10:09:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - excuse me if someone saw this and there was a comment, but it's not equal spacing.... Cleaned up a bit
10:11:940 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ but it's a little nazi ^


Woot......

*more to come*

Hope this is better...

Download: NicoNicoDouga - Nanairo no Nico Nico Douga (Doomsday) [Marathon].osu

Thrown that one in

（　´∀｀）┌★

Sorry about neglecting this so much, but I won't let it die, I can promise you that.

256,192,657157,5,0
256,192,657449,1,0
256,192,657742,1,0
256,192,657888,1,0
256,192,658035,1,0
192,48,658327,6,2,B|208:12|256:-12|304:12|320:48,1,160
256,96,658766,1,0
256,272,659059,2,0,B|256:184,1,80
188,148,659352,1,0
136,208,659498,2,2,B|112:264|140:332|184:348,1,160
256,376,659937,1,2
328,232,660230,6,0,B|366:214|404:232,2,80
364,304,660669,1,2
325,149,660961,1,0
405,149,661108,1,2
252,196,661400,1,2
364,84,661693,2,2,B|368:32|309:-13|248:16,1,160
288,85,662132,1,0
127,85,662425,1,2
208,224,662717,1,0
296,360,663010,6,4,B|456:360,1,160,4|0
216,360,663596,2,4,B|56:360,1,160,4|0
100,208,664181,2,2,B|96:260|155:305|216:276,1,160
412,208,664766,2,2,B|416:260|357:305|296:276,1,160
176,208,665352,5,2
336,208,665644,1,2
336,47,665937,1,2
176,47,666229,1,2
256,184,666522,6,2,B|231:262|281:262|256:340,1,160,2|0
255,340,666961,1,2
104,284,667254,6,0,B|132:316|132:360,2,80
31,247,667693,2,2,B|0:200|8:132|46:101,1,160
196,120,668132,2,2,B|227:167|219:235|181:266,1,160
256,296,668571,1,0
316,120,668864,6,2,B|284:167|292:235|330:266,1,160
484,248,669303,2,0,B|515:200|507:132|469:101,1,160,2|0
392,88,669742,1,0
352,20,669888,1,0
276,48,670035,2,2,B|198:23|198:73|120:48,1,160,2|0
44,20,670474,1,2
136,148,670766,1,2
48,280,671059,6,2,B|53:331|120:364|174:324,1,160,2|0
124,264,671498,2,2,B|176:225|242:258|248:310,2,160,0|2|0
272,204,672376,2,2,B|308:232|316:272,1,80
360,336,672669,1,0
440,332,672815,2,2,B|493:269|447:250|501:187,1,160,2|0
424,168,673254,2,0,B|400:206|398:248,2,80,0|0|2
256,16,673839,5,2
88,168,674132,1,2
116,244,674278,1,0
228,360,674571,1,2
256,284,674717,6,2,B|280:320|324:332|368:320|392:284,1,160,2|0
324,240,675157,1,0
256,200,675303,6,2,B|232:164|188:152|144:164|120:200,1,160,2|0
188,244,675742,1,0
160,316,675888,6,2,B|82:291|82:341|4:316,1,160,2|0
4,68,676474,2,2,B|82:93|82:43|160:68,1,160,2|0
256,44,677059,37,6
396,146,677352,37,2
342,311,677644,5,6
169,311,677937,37,2
115,146,678230,5,6
342,72,678522,37,10
255,339,678815,5,0
169,72,679108,37,10
256,192,679400,5,4
256,192,679474,12,2,682913

Remove my part and add this. Remapped and now way better. Not sure about the new combos though.

EDIT: woops fixed a silly mistake

Added BD's remapped part! Lookin' good.

Remapped my part because I thought I could do better. And I did

Go ahead and make the ending of my part the way you want it.

(Attachment contains my part only)

Download: NicoNicoDouga - Nanairo no Nico Nico Douga (Doomsday) [Emdyion].osu

I like this Marathon - Star.~

*Dude dude dude dude * Is NicoNicoDouga or Nico Nico Douga o.o | I've always wondered o-o ....

<3 beautiful

Lovely map,

Hope this gets approved soon~

still nothing ;_;

EDIT:



dat miss
dat acc

Here we go, marathon mod.

01:03:367 (1,2,3) - That spacing change. I don't think it's fitting, the music doesn't give it away at all. I'd change it.
01:11:915 (1,2,1,2,1) - Is this sudden 0.5x change really necessary? You could at least make it a bit less harsh, like 0.75x, but personally I see no need for any slowdown here.
01:26:545 (2) - Move it 1/4 forward please. When you know the melody, you intuitively click 1/4 later, so this isn't placed very well right now.
01:29:175 (2) - ^
01:31:641 (2,3,4) - I'd also space these a bit farther apart. I almost thought they were only 1/4 apart each =(
01:45:449 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:47:258 (5,6) - That slow down isn't really necessary. It works, and changing it isn't absolutely vital, but it's not necessary.
01:55:970 - 02:01:723 - The new combo placement starting here strikes me as a bit awkward. Go through them once more and check if you really want them like that and if they really make sense.
03:52:637 (6) - What is this finish. Remove please!
04:46:425 (4) - Could be prettier xP
05:59:420 (9) - Could remove that note.
06:17:067 (2,1) - Possibly a bit too close to each other.
(06:17:708 - SEKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI DE)
06:36:960 (5) - What an odd slowdown. Really necessary?
08:13:993 (7) - Personally I'd have this flipped. Would play a bit better, imho.
08:41:151 (4) - Pretty offscreen. Fix that! 37 SP and no one noticed an offscreen slider :<
08:41:782 - You could place a note here to both sync the song and have the spacing be a bit more consistent! Isn't that nice?
10:11:309 - Place note here
10:16:046 (5) - move one grid down or two, so it doesn't overlap?
10:30:177 (3,4,5,6) - This should be totally in 1/3 and you know it >:C
10:40:282 (3,4,5,6) - ^
10:48:414 (1) - whistle?

Very nice general map. Some oddities here and there which I all pointed out in my mod post, but generally pretty solid and fun.

added in Emdyion's part (really late, sorry about that!)

(I'll fix minor stuff myself, for more major fixes, I'll ask)

Larto wrote:

Here we go, marathon mod.

01:03:367 (1,2,3) - That spacing change. I don't think it's fitting, the music doesn't give it away at all. I'd change it. adjusted it a bit
01:11:915 (1,2,1,2,1) - Is this sudden 0.5x change really necessary? You could at least make it a bit less harsh, like 0.75x, but personally I see no need for any slowdown here. I'll ask pieguy about that one
01:26:545 (2) - Move it 1/4 forward please. When you know the melody, you intuitively click 1/4 later, so this isn't placed very well right now. Agreed
01:29:175 (2) - ^ ^
01:31:641 (2,3,4) - I'd also space these a bit farther apart. I almost thought they were only 1/4 apart each =( Spaced them out a bit like the 01:32:956 (2,3) sliders
01:45:449 (1) - Remove new combo? Yah. fixed
01:47:258 (5,6) - That slow down isn't really necessary. It works, and changing it isn't absolutely vital, but it's not necessary. Yeah, doesn't hinder play much to me. I'll ask sallad about it though.
01:55:970 - 02:01:723 - The new combo placement starting here strikes me as a bit awkward. Go through them once more and check if you really want them like that and if they really make sense. I'll rejig them around a little bit.
03:52:637 (6) - What is this finish. Remove please! heh. done
04:46:425 (4) - Could be prettier xP I think it looks okay, but I'll prettify it a little more
05:59:420 (9) - Could remove that note. Agreed
06:17:067 (2,1) - Possibly a bit too close to each other. Moved it a little so it doesn't overlap
(06:17:708 - SEKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI DE) oh you <3
06:36:960 (5) - What an odd slowdown. Really necessary? I'll ask the mapper about it
08:13:993 (7) - Personally I'd have this flipped. Would play a bit better, imho. I agree, but I think it'll work alright as is. that, and notes after would need adjusting since they'd overlap. saves too much trouble over it.
08:41:151 (4) - Pretty offscreen. Fix that! 37 SP and no one noticed an offscreen slider :< oh damn. I'll see how lily wants to readjust that
08:41:782 - You could place a note here to both sync the song and have the spacing be a bit more consistent! Isn't that nice? Sounds good. I'll do that
10:11:309 - Place note here oh damn I swore there was a note there last time. hmm. Fixed
10:16:046 (5) - move one grid down or two, so it doesn't overlap? Done
10:30:177 (3,4,5,6) - This should be totally in 1/3 and you know it >:C Yup
10:40:282 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
10:48:414 (1) - whistle? Added

Very nice general map. Some oddities here and there which I all pointed out in my mod post, but generally pretty solid and fun. \o/

Thanks!

Goddamn, how old is this?

But yeah, fixed the stuff, it flows worse but who cares?

Download: NicoNicoDouga - Nanairo no Nico Nico Douga (Doomsday) [Marathon].osu

Righty'o. Sallad wants to keep his part as is. pieguy also wants to keep it as is, and ignore agreed with removing that slowdown in his part

And added Lily's new part! (late again. go me)

Graved again? ;_;

uhhhhh wrong map BD!
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=13946&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

... Rest In Peace ...

Doomsdayyyyyyyy

Not sure how this will go, but let's give it a shot

Revived!

I'm still waiting for the day that this gets continued ;w;

!