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Forte Escape - End of the Moonlight

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MoonFragrance
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Joined April 2009
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MoonFragrance
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 6월 13일 일요일 at 오후 3:23:31

Artist: Forte Escape
Title: End of the Moonlight
Source: DJMAX
Tags: TECHNIKA Portable 2 Miya US Eyehead Ponglow
BPM: 155
Filesize: 9837kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.59 stars, 233 notes)
  2. Maximum (5 stars, 300 notes)
  3. Normal (2.5 stars, 111 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.83 stars, 585 notes)
Download: Forte Escape - End of the Moonlight
Download: Forte Escape - End of the Moonlight (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 28th beatmap, Completed.

Techno Pop song in DJMAX Online, Portable 1,2 and TECHNIKA 1,2.

Composed by Forte Escape
Visualized by US, Ponglow, Eyehead
Vocal by Miya
Last edited by MoonFragrance , edited 27 times in total.
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
Good job >x< b
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
+Star :)
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. change the #2 combo color.. it's quite alike with #3 and confusing.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:26:463 (4) - reshape this
[Hard]:
  1. 00:09:237 (4) - 1 grid up
  2. 00:23:172 (4) - 1 grid right
  3. 01:04:979 (3) - 1 grid down
  4. 01:05:172 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 right
  5. 01:27:237 (2) - 1 grid left
  6. 01:41:366 (7) - move the last way point 1 grid up
  7. 01:44:463 (7) - reshape it with 4 way points.
[Maximum]:
  1. 01:25:882 (6) - 2nd way point 3 gird left and 1 down.
Star~
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
Hi MoonFragrance, is always a please mod your maps~
DjMax~

•Overall•
Delete the .osb file and Full Submit

•Maximum•
00:37:688 (2) - 1 grid up and 1 right?
01:06:721 (8) - 1 grid up and 1 left; 01:06:817 (9) - 2 grids up; 01:06:914 (1) - 3 grids up and 1 right.
01:08:753 (6) - 1 grid up?
01:45:237 (6) - New combo?

•Hard•
01:03:043 (4) - Another arrow?
01:29:946 (2,3) - 2 grids left?

•Normal•
00:00:334 (1) - Third point (penultimate) of this slider 1 grid right and 1 down.
00:26:463 (4) - Last point of this slider 1 grid left.

Nice map~
+Star~
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Well, these are merely suggestions.

Taiko
00:00:334 (1) - It's kinda quite start, and music goes louder and louder, so I think it would be better to place notes with lower density in start, and denser and denser as music goes on. But actually, it seems fine already.
00:14:269 (1,2) - I think these notes are too 'big' compared with music.
01:45:624 (25) - I think deleting this note would be better

Well actually I don't care with patterns a lot cause I think patterns are strongly affectted by personal preference. Anyway, others seem nice. star~
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Favourited
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
:P sorry for delay

Normal
01:06:914 (T) - double section o.o
01:13:688 (T) - ^
01:24:527 (T) - useless section?

Hard
00:45:237 (4) - remove whistle at 00:46:011 and add it on 00:46:398?
00:51:237 (6) - 1 grid right
01:13:688 (3) - 1 grid left
01:06:914 (T) - double section o.o
01:13:688 (T) - ^

Maximum
00:22:011 (3) - 1 grid left
00:25:882 (3) - like this?
SPOILER
01:06:914 (T) - double section o.o
01:13:688 (T) - ^
01:42:140 (6,7,8) - 1 grid up & right
01:45:237 (6) - new combo?


Star:D
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Pokie wrote:

01:06:914 (T) - double section o.o
It's for kiai.
The map is fixed :3
Thanks for modding, Colin, Kecco, lopidon, Pokie :3
And thank for star vincerio, Ras, bmin XD
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, here comes... a star?
Lol, your map is good, I couldn't find anything to complain about.
Here you go~
*star*
Kim Jin Seok
369 posts
Joined December 2008
Kim Jin Seok
Star+ :)
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
[Normal]
00:01:694 (2) - The last way point,1 grid up.
00:04:791 (2) - ^
01:01:694 - Adding a note? Well,nvm.
01:05:372 (2) - A little bumpy.Fix the shape,please.

[Hard]
00:00:340 (1) - The last way point,1 grid up.Should be look better then.
00:55:888 (1) - Um,1 grid down?
Well,and some other moments,were circles are sticked together.Nothing wrong with it,but I just don't like this.

Others are fine.

Good luck,star~
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Oh... I seem you are ranked regular mapper.

I think , This map is perfect. :)
I can't find problem and my suggestion.
This song is good ,too.

Only , I give you star. I'm sorry. :|
Good Luck ;)
Vendemmia
Former osu! Champion: 2013
126 posts
Joined July 2009
Vendemmia
엔오문~~~~~~~~~
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
The comboburst is too tall. Max px is 767.
Babble
230 posts
Joined July 2009
Babble
Hiya!

Maximum
00:50:656 (7) - Slightly overmapped IMO. I din't hear anything in the music that would contribute to this hitcircle. Delete maybe?

That's all I could find, out of all the difficulties. very well mapped :D

+Star
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

babble wrote:

Maximum
00:50:656 (7) - Slightly overmapped IMO. I din't hear anything in the music that would contribute to this hitcircle. Delete maybe?
It's fitted to synth sound :3
Combo burst is fixed :D
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,945 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Offset: -10ms

Found a better quality video for you:
http://www.mediafire.com/?mhzlkmmgntz

Aside from that, exceptional beatmap. More than ready for ranking I'd say.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Ephemeral wrote:

Offset: -10ms

Found a better quality video for you:
http://www.mediafire.com/?mhzlkmmgntz

Aside from that, exceptional beatmap. More than ready for ranking I'd say.
fixed offset, but i don't fixed the MV.
if i include high-resolution MV, the sized of osz is much bigger than before.
i don't like big size song lol
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,945 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
That's fine.

In that case, bubbled.
DeathxShinigami
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Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
Late Star
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
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