1. Hard (4.64 stars, 232 notes)
2. Lunatic (4.86 stars, 424 notes)
3. Normal (2.94 stars, 127 notes)
4. termerys' voodoo (4.9 stars, 426 notes)

monik wrote:

ีมีคนบอกว่าถ้าว่างๆให้ดาวทีก็เลยมา หุหุ

- - ว่าแต่มันให้ยังไงอะ ๆๆ

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

My first though is that you should create an easy difficulty (3 stars or less) ...rules... and GO through and check your snapping in all difficulties, some of the notes are off

[Normal]
00:40:227 (1) - move slider to this tick and shorten so it ends at 00:41:590 (then insert a break) << I can't insert a break =w="
00:59:136 (x) - add a slider here that extends to 00:59:408 (and remove the circle 1 from there) << fix

[Hard]
02:01:227 (3) - remove this note (sounds better without it) << OwO fix
02:04:499 (1) - shorten this spinner to end at 02:05:681 << fix
02:06:045 (x) - add note here << fix
02:06:227 (x) - add note here << fix

[Insane]
This difficulty seems fine to m...just a suggestion though...during the break why not try and go with that awesome guitar rift in the background, would make the difficulty more fun and awesome

Well...its a good map, i really like it!

~STAR

i really like it!

I want to hear this ~~~

termerys wrote:

ขอม็อดนิสนึงละกัน =w=b

Normal: ทำได้ดี /me clap

02:03:772(6)- ระยะห่างระหว่าง (5) กะ (6) ห่างไปนิดนึงสำหรับดิฟที่ง่ายที่สุด ให้มันใกล้กว่านั้นอีกนิดนึงจะดีกว่านะ << fix
02:07:772(timing point)- ลืมใส่ kiai รึเปล่าเนี่ย << ไม่ลืมนะ O_o

Hard: น่าเบื่อไปนิดนะ =w= แต่ก็ทำได้ดี << น่าเบื่อยังไงหว่า

00:29:227(3)- ขยับไปทางซ้าย 1 grid ให้มันสมมาตร << fix
01:02:681(1)- ขยับลงมา 1 grid มั้ย ถ้าขยับ ก็ต้องขยับทั้งยวงเลย ตั้งแต่ตัวนี้ จนถึงตัวก่อน spinner << fix
01:29:954(1)- ขยับไปทางขวา 1 grid ให้มันตรง แล้วก็ขยับทั้งยวง ตั้งแต่ตัวนี้ จนถึง (5) สีขาว << ตรงแล้วนา + หา (5) สีขาวไม่เจอ
01:54:045(5)- ไม่ควรบัง reverse arrow นะ << fix

Insane: มันส์พะยะค่ะ =w=b

00:18:863(3)- ขยับลงมา 1 grid ทั้งยวงถึง (6) << fix
01:48:681(1,1,1)- จิงๆไม่ต้อง new combo ทุกตัวก็ได้นะ แต่ถ้าอยากให้มันเพิ่ม hp ก็ได้ ไม่เปนไร << คิดว่าน่าจะได้

+star =w=b

ayey wrote:

[Normal]
00:53:772 (1) - Make the slider stop at 00:54:136? << fix
02:01:045 (2) - Move 1/4 forward << fix

[Hard]
00:30:136 (2) - Move 1/2 forward << fix
00:33:045 (2) - ^ << fix

[Insane]
00:26:681 (x) - Add a note? Add finish << I think it's ok. because it will too difficult
00:26:863 (1) - If you added ^ remove the finish << same
01:27:772 (x) - Add a note? << same

Starred~

Thanks very mush

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- You hvae 2.osb file.. Delete some of them or both and do a full submit again

[Normal]
- low overall difficulty by 1 tick << fix
01:18:681 (1,2,3) - make them to silder like [Hard] << fix
01:25:227 (1) - remove sound finish at last silder << fix

[Hard]
- +1 overall difficulty << fix
00:51:772 (1) - make this silder to 1/2 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18681 << fix
00:52:499 - start KIAI time here is better then 00:52:317 << fix
01:25:227 (1) - remove sound finish at last silder << fix

[Insane]
00:13:954 - remove sound silder-tick here << fix
00:14:317 (4) - remove sound clap at last silder << fix
00:43:954 (8) - move this note to 1/2 forward (00:44:136) and don't forget about spacing changes << fix
00:55:590 (6) - ^ (00:55:772) and don't forget about spacing changes << fix
01:18:772 - add note =] << fix =]
01:25:227 (1) - remove sound finish at last silder << fix
01:39:590 (3,4,5) - too close.. hard to click/see at the first try, made them far from (2) then this plz << fix
01:51:045 - add note << fix
02:01:590 (4) - wrond spacing, This note isn't the same pattern as (1,2,3) << fix
02:02:499 (6) - move this note to 1/2 forward (02:02:681) and don't forget about spacing changes << fix ~~

fonchocolate wrote:

กลิ้งหลายๆตลบแล้วคลานมาอีกที ว่ายน้ำข้ามมาอีกแล้วก็บินมา แปะดาวให้~~

NekoMOE wrote:

For Tsundere child

vincerio wrote:

for her tsundere~

vincerio wrote:

here my suggestions :3

[Normal] >> fix
reduce drian rate by 1?
00:22:317(2) - move down + right 1 grid lv 3
00:23:045(3) - hold alt+ move down 2 grid lv 3
01:04:863(2) - add finish hitsound
01:29:590(5) - move down 1 grid lv 3
01:29:954(6) - move down 2 grid lv 3
02:01:590(3) - make it symmetry
02:04:681(1,2) - disable grid snap and re-stack it
02:06:590 - snap at 02:06:681(white tick)slider end at 02:07:045(white tick)
02:06:499 - add note here
02:08:499 - spacing(too near)
02:09:863(1,2) - (1)ugly overlap (2) wrong spacing

[Hard] >> fix
00:34:317(4) - move up+left 1 grid lv 3
01:03:136(2) - spacing(distance snap)
01:35:954(2) - disable grid snap and move it
02:08:863(3) - make it symmetry

[Insane] >> fix
00:26:681 - add note
00:40:772 - remove new combo
00:41:772(1,1,1) - remove new combo
00:48:863 - remove slider hitsound(finish)
01:03:227(3,4) - seperate this away from 2 or snap 2 at 01:02:805(white tick)
01:04:590 - remove this | (end slider at white tick or expand to red tick)
01:04:681 - add note |

แต๊งกิ้วพี่หมอ

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General] >>fix
sound holic appears twice in the tags
shoujo ningyou is already on the title you can remove it from the tags
touhou is already on the source, you can remove it from the tags

[osz File Scan!] >> fix
There are 2 empty .osb file detected, please delete and full submit.
You are missing spinner approach circle, hitcircle overlay, approach circle on your skin even if you use the default ones.

[Insane]
00:11:408 (1) - Sounds weird, the sound this slider is supposed to be following breaks in the middle of it. >> ... ? I think that fine
00:20:863 (1) - Mapping to silence? >> -.- it's look strange
00:25:954 (1) - No new combo >> fix
00:26:408 (3,4) - Mapping to silence? >> strange, to
00:29:499 (2,3) - ^ >> ^
00:40:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Nice stream... however it doesnt follow the song, if it is following the lyrics it feels like an slider for me, and if its following the instruments it feels like there should be less notes.
00:52:772 (3) - Mapping to silence?>> like ^
01:18:772 (2) - ^ >> ^
01:27:499 (2) - ^ >> ^
01:30:408 (4) - ^ >> ^
01:32:954 (2,3) - ^ >> ^
01:33:317 (2) - ^ >> ^
01:49:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds awkward >> i think it's ok
01:58:227 (2) - Mapping to silence? >> no, thank you
02:08:863 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds awkward >> ^
02:11:317 (2) - Mapping to silence? >> ^

[Hard]
00:10:863 (4) - New combo? >> fix
00:13:227 (4) - ^ >> fix
00:59:772 (3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds awkward. >> it's ok 'w'
01:04:317 (1,2) - Mapping to silence? >> um ...
01:36:136 (3) - End at 01:36:499 and add a note at 01:36:863 >> fix

[Normal]
Fine

Most of the mapping to silence means basically that the intended instrument on the combo as far as i hear it, doesnt seem to be doing anything in that exact note, while there may be other instruments playing, they are holding a note since before hence it would be awkward to put a note there, as the spot feels it shuold be empty.

;A; " Mapping to silence " i think if i fix it ... it will very strange

[Overall]
Needs more work, Lunatic feels overmapped with all those notes that dont seem to be following anything, streams that come outta nowhere when the song doesnt hint me to a stream, and other things, Hard looks ok, but needs some work, and Normal is fine

i'm tried fixing this