谢啦 wsodarose wrote:
M4M
[Insane]
标签与GD不同狗币你的锅
00:59:031 (2,8) - 不要挨到 00:59:031 (2) - 往左挪一点点
01:03:262 (2,6) - 叠一起 然后01:03:839 (4) - 和00:59:993 (8) - 叠一起发现刚好还是Blanket
01:04:993 (1,5,6,7) - 然后这几个跟着往上挪就行了
改了些,有些时间跨度太大,我就不改了ww实在摸不出东西只能这样了
[tm's Insane]
tm的T不是要大写吗
[Hard]
00:45:954 (3,1) - 可以做Blanket 不了,这里是跟紧接着的slider的对称
[Normal]
HP-1 AR-0.5 和Easy差太远了! 本来歌BPM就不高 hp-1 ar keep ,5.5其实更好读
01:16:916 这个音很明显啊,就这么带过不好吧 跟vocal
[Easy]
00:23:454 (1,2) - 这里好像变距了 好
美丽
我尽力了!
thank youuur mod!! XD- G I D Z - wrote:
From my M4M queue sorry for being late, was busy x.x
General:
Tags not the same on every diff pls check and make them the same.
Easy:
00:01:916 (2) - You can make this slider start 1/1 beat earlier @ 00:01:531 and extend it by 1/1 beat to match the music. Cuz not that slider isnt following anything.
00:52:301 (1) - Make this blanketed by 00:49:993 (6) ? keep ,you konw its hard to change ;w; ,and i thnk its not very bad
01:02:685 (2) - DS inconsistent here.
01:09:608 (1) - ^
01:16:531 (5) - ^
others fixed
Normal:
Nothing here.
Hard:
Nice patterns and flow.
tm's insane:
00:27:685 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern doesnt really fit the music imo.
00:53:454 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ and it's boring.
00:56:147 (4,5,6,7) - Notes arent the problem but I suggest you re-pattern this jump as it felt too straight while playing like a square jump practice pattern lel.
00:58:070 (1,2,3,4) - Why the sudden DS change? What are you trying to emphasis here? I suggest to keep patterns consistent.
01:10:570 (5) - Feels like something is missing here. Add a note or you can snap 01:19:224 (2) further away for better reading.
Insane:
00:01:339 (1) - I think you can put this further away to emphasis a gap. Cuz The DS is read as if the notes snapped in 1/2 rhythms.
00:03:647 (1) - ^
00:59:416 (4,5,6) - I think the triplets will have a better flow in game-play if it was facing outwards. http://puu.sh/hlEBO/1ed9db27ea.jpg
01:26:916 (5) - NC? Cuz I think this pattern is more fun http://puu.sh/hlENW/92a4f30fee.jpg (Notes 2 and 5 are stacked).
all changed or fixed
Overall your Normal and Hard are great! GL with this map.
updated
@tm1209:baka goubi fix your tag!!!