Heloo~ Here's for the M4M.

These are just suggestion. If you don't want to change it, Feel free to do so.

GENERAL

HITSOUNDS

NORMAL

HARD

1. Those Combo Colorus don't fit really well imo >.<
   Try these instead

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,150,0
   Combo2 : 141,255,28
   Combo3 : 255,85,85
   Combo4 : 255,255,128

2. The title should contain "Cut ver.", like "MAGIC! - Rude (Cut ver.)" since your beatmap is just 1 minute of the original song (which is almost 4 minutes)
3. Add “Don’t Kill the Magic” to tags, since this is the official album from where this song is
4. Remove "bg.jpeg" from your beatmap's folder since you don't use it anymore[/list[
   
   
   [Hard]
   

   1. 00:01:969 (3,4) - I feel bad for this pattern. Can you make a blanket ? Like this?
   2. 00:02:802 (4) - My player's instincts tell me this slider needs a Ctrl + G *^* Nvm
   3. 00:02:802 (4,1) - & 00:04:469 (2,4) - Can you stack them better?
   4. 00:10:302 (4) - Maybe a Ctrl + G?
   5. 00:13:635 (3,4,5) - Just to be nazi: Can you use these slider ends to make a better triangle? Like this
   6. 00:15:302 (1,2) - Again nazi. Can you improve this blanket? From this to this
   7. 00:34:468 (1,3) - I don't really like this overlap >.<
      Try something like this for that overlap:
      1. 00:34:259 (5) - Move it to 176:116 and do a blanket with (4)
      2. 00:34:468 (1,2) - Select them both and move them at: (1) to 40:20 and (2) to 176:116 (just drag one of them where I said and they will fit both)
      3. 00:35:301 (3) - Move this to 120:220
      This way you'll keep the pattern after (4) and you'll also keep the feeling you had with the rest of the pattern (Check all the list before denying/applying)
   8. 00:36:551 (5) - Judging the previous spacing, you need a NC (if you followed the previous suggestion, otherwise just skip this)
   9. 00:39:884 (6) - You surely need a NC here because you change Snap Divisor
   10. 00:45:301 (1,2) - Spread them a little more so (3) can start in the exact middle of the circle they create. Basically, improve blanket xD
   11. 00:46:967 (4) - This shape doesn't have any meaning as it is imo :/ What about an "S" shape? (A proper one, though)
   12. 00:46:967 (4,6) - Bad overlap :/
   13. 00:50:300 (4,5) - : What about this?
   14. 00:51:967 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit too massy imo. Try something like this
   15. 00:59:467 (4,5,6) - AAAAAAA Please, these sliders are just put there in a "I try to make a good pattern using cloned sliders"-way while there is no blanket at all. Try somethinkg like this or even change pattern if you feel like doing it
   16. 01:01:967 (3) - Give a meaning to this slider please. Also, use the previous 2 sliders to make a blanket xD (/me runs)
   17. 01:02:800 (4) - NC?
   18. 01:03:425 (5,6) - Again, improve this blanket xD

   Hitsound section for this diff:
   
   

   1. 00:27:801 - The volume is really too high here. Reduce it up to 30%
   2. 00:54:467 - Again, volume too high. Reduce it up to 55%
   
   
   [Normal]
   

   1. I'd decrease OD and AR by 1
   2. 00:01:969 (3,2) - I don't really like this overlap, but I can't come up with anything atm. Keep this in mind, maybe someday you'll be able to do something better
   3. 00:19:468 (3,4) - Please keep the DS constant throughout your map on Normal diffs. After this I checked the other DSs and it came out you have a lot of different spacings, which is really bad on Normal diffs and lower. Please fix this matter
   4. 00:25:718 (1,2) - Anti-jumps aren't so easy to read as well as stacks in general. Try to find out how to change this (it's a normal diff so it won't change much were you move it. Just move it)
   5. 00:26:135 (2,3,4) - Probably you already know the issue here
   6. 00:27:801 (1,2,3,4) - This reminds me of a pattern I used on my Lindsey Stirling - Senbonzakura :^)
   7. 00:41:134 - No SV changes on Normal diffs and lower please

   Hitsound section for this diff:
   
   Same as for the Hard diff, that's all
   
   I did my job on this. Good luck :3

1. 00:40:301 (2) Stack the slider end onto the 5 HC
2. 00:40:717 (3) Snapping the 3 back and forth slider here and adding a HC on the big white tick is much more readable to play. Placements are up to you
3. 01:06:758 (5,6,7) This triple was a bit awkward to reach. How about doing this placement? It would give clockwise rotational flow
   
   SPOILER

   

1. change BG resolution : 1228 x 767 to 1024 x 768
2. audio lead in : +864 ( all difficult )
3. please make same hitsound on every difficulty ..
4. this just my suggestion . kiai time on all difficult can start on 00:41:551 - and end on 01:07:800

1. Check DS again please. 1.5 don't raise / reduce
2. 00:26:968 (4) - missing whistle (tail)
3. 00:34:468 (3) - missing clap (tail)
4. 00:51:967 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:52:800 (2) - NC

1. 00:40:301 (2,3) - sound very weird over here. . mind if you re-map this part.
2. 00:34:884 (2,4) - stack
3. 01:02:592 - add not
4. 00:34:259 (5) - move to x:44 y:168 better
5. 00:25:718 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:26:135 (4) - NC
7. 00:18:635 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:17:802 (5) - NC

1. The way you do your combo lengths is not immediately apparent, but seems to follow some coherent pattern that I can't decipher.

1. I'd go with AR7. AR8 feels forced and too fast.
2. 00:02:802 (4) - blanket?
3. 00:05:302 (4) - this one isn't quite stacked under the slider end of 00:04:469 (2)
4. 00:08:635 (1,2,3) - Alright, so these three notes follow the vocals, but 00:10:302 (4,5) - these two follow the drums. I'd suggest making it consistent.
5. 00:15:302 (1,2) - blanket/parallel?
6. 00:22:801 (3,4,5,6,7) - It sorta feels like you crammed in these sliders. Maybe move 00:21:968 (2) - down to the left to start? Not sure.
7. 00:27:593 (7) - A finish hitsound should be something you hit, not that you receive as you end a slider. (AKA, active/passive hitsounding). I'd either remove the hitsound or make it so that there's a circle when you have the finish hitsound.
8. 00:40:301 (2) - This slider's length is like on an 1/8 or something and sounds very strange
9. 00:42:384 (3,4) - slider overlap... ack.
10. 00:53:425 (6,7) - blanket?
11. 00:58:634 (2,3,4) - blanket??
12. 01:01:133 (1,2,3) - balance this pattern out so that the start hit circles on these sliders form a line? looks nicer IMO
13. 01:06:758 (5,6) - 00:13:427 (1,2,3) - 00:25:926 (2,3) - be consistent about how you stack or unstack these.

Charles445 wrote:

[General]
Delete drum-slidertick.wav, you need to have one of the two audible (and the ticks sound nice with the song) done
Delete soft-hitfini.wav, it's an accidental file done
Delete soft-slidertick.wav, same reason as the drum tick one done

[Normal]
00:16:135 (3,4) - Bad spacing Fixed
00:19:468 (3,4,5) - Space these out a little tiny bit more. From a distance they look like they are touching. I actually concerning about it. But done
00:26:135 (3) - Add new combo so this is easier to read. Done
00:32:801 (1) - Try to move the start of this slider closer to the previous slider, aim for 1.5x spacing. Done

[Hard]
00:08:635 (1) - Move this more to the right, makes the spacing easier to see. Done
00:16:135 (3) - Rotate clockwise 3 degrees, makes a better blanket (Edit -> Rotate by...) Done
00:20:718 (8) - Try flipping and reversing this and putting it up in the top right. -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3101938 Okay
00:25:093 (7) - I'd recommend using two circles instead. This is the first time I say no to your overview
00:27:593 (7) - Same here, circles feel better. Nope
00:36:551 (1,2,3) - Maybe move these a bit more to the right. I'll consider it
00:40:222 - Try snapping the slider end here (1/16) Done
00:40:561 - Try snapping the slider end here (1/16) Done
00:47:592 (5,6) - Instead of two sliders, try circle slider circle. Pattern changed as yourtell me
00:49:467 (3) - Rotate counter clockwise 2 degrees for better blanket. Done
00:50:925 (5,6) - Again, circle slider circle feels better here. Pattern changed as you tell me
00:57:592 (8) - Try two circles here instead. Nope
01:01:133 (1,2,3) - Move these more to the left so the distance between 3 and 4 is greater. Done
Really good ending Thanks

afk98 wrote:

#modreqs

Some small things.

Easy => Normal? LOL
Somewhere around the kiai time, if you listen to the metronome, it goes off a beat. Might want to check that. Just being nitpicky.
The CS seems to make this a little difficult for an easy. I'll consider it
00:26:447 - Distance snap jump too far. No, it doesn't o.O
00:41:551 - Not sure if you want to keep this slider velocity change (preference) because it's not as suitable for an easy. This is an Normal, my friend.
00:44:884 (5) - Move the NC (new combo) here? It'll be harder to read since it's an anti-jump

Normal => Hard? LOL
00:11:343 - Not sure if you just want to put a slider here (the voice goes a little offbeat). Nope
Move 00:58:217 (1) to 00:58:008 (1) and make it a reverse slider? Nope. It's better to make a slider after a beat
01:01:133 (1) - The hitsounds sound a little off-beat with the music (hitting on the weaker beats instead). There's not hitsounds here o.O (It's still using hitnormal)

Snaggletooth wrote:

Since this is a Cut version you need to include "(Short Ver.)" in the title.

inverness wrote:

I strongly recommend you to remove (Cut Ver.) from the title since http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/89198 said so

• Check your spacing. I think there is some little mistakes

• Spacing mistakes. Try to avoid unstable spacing on normal. There is no reason to make them different
  00:01:968 (3) For example. Prev:1,71 Next:1,46
  00:19:468 (3,4,5) DS = 1,6. For what? Possible to redo in 1,5
  00:41:550 it sounds like a 00:44:884 (5) but there is no circle here
  00:56:758 (4) you can make it reverse, like 01:00:300 (4)
  00:59:883 (3,4) try to redo like this
  SPOILER

  
  01:11:133 It isn't important but you can make a finish here (on hard diff too)

• Song isn't so fast for your slider speed. Try to make them slower
  00:56:967 (7,8) Sounds better
  SPOILER

  
  00:45:300 (1,2) Is this slider's form really important? You can make them less rude
  SPOILER

  
  00:34:467 (1,2) ^
  00:41:967 (2,3) ^

ZinaMarina wrote:

Well met, comrade! (From m4m)

General

• Check your spacing. I think there is some little mistakes

Normal

• Spacing mistakes. Try to avoid unstable spacing on normal. There is no reason to make them different Note, that you can make some DS breaks at Normal. And also, This is a low BPM song so I guess using proper DS breaks won't be much problem here.
  00:01:968 (3) For example. Prev:1,71 Next:1,46 Fixed
  00:19:468 (3,4,5) DS = 1,6. For what? Possible to redo in 1,5 Making this touching makes this less fun to play
  00:41:550 it sounds like a 00:44:884 (5) but there is no circle here You know that you can skip a beat in Normal you know >.<
  00:56:758 (4) you can make it reverse, like 01:00:300 (4) You're kidding
  00:59:883 (3,4) try to redo like this
  SPOILER

  
  Nope
  01:11:133 It isn't important but you can make a finish here (on hard diff too) The spinner is already become the finsiher, my friend :3

Hard

• Song isn't so fast for your slider speed. Try to make them slower You're kidding
  00:56:967 (7,8) Sounds better
  SPOILER

  
  
  00:45:300 (1,2) Is this slider's form really important? You can make them less rude
  SPOILER

  
  Well, I like that more you know, more consitent and shapy
  00:34:467 (1,2) ^ ^
  00:41:967 (2,3) ^ ^

Удачи тебе с этим // Good luck
Thanks!

Lanturn wrote:

So I noticed that you have a map about the same length as a fun diff I made using Lust's map about a year ago.
My question is. Would you be willing to accept a Normal+ GD? It should fit in the middle of your two diffs.

If you want a preview, you can download it below. It's the diff called Lanturn's Normal+ (ignore the Taiko and the other diffs)
http://puu.sh/hZD8G.osz

Let me know, and thanks if you do accept it


Also note that you want to start your timing at 00:01:135 - so the measures are correct. You are currently one measure too early.

[ Zora ] wrote:

Hello :3

Hard

00:13:427 (1,2) - Try making it stacked instead of leading it to the slider so it fits with the rest of the song. Hmm, I'll consider it

00:20:509 - Try adding a note here between the 7th note and the slider No, try to give a moment to give a upbeat to make it more fun

00:52:175 (2,3,4) - I think this triangle pattern is a little bit awkward for a hard difficulty. It kinda feels weird to go to the slider after #4, so maybe changing the position for the 4th note would help. Yeah, I know. Especially beacause it's going to the right angle (Makes it more painful). But I think i'm gonna keep it for a while

PurpleHawk wrote:

[General]
I think an offset of 721 is slightly better?
(so with Lanturn's mod: 1137) 1135 LOL

[Normal]
Great diff, the DS may be a bit inconsistent at times, but generally it works because of the flow and strong downbeat #OOOOOOOOWWWWW ^o^/

[Hard]
00:39:884 (1,2,3) - These are a bit wierd rhythmically, I can't quite figure out a perfect way to make these, but I think this works slightly better?
http://gyazo.com/1a80ea0bd90cdcf095a89cfaa4c08006
That's 1/12 beat snap. Now you know how hard to map a Reggae map LOL

Not really much to say, you have some great difficulties with awesome hitsounding, good luck with ranking Thanks!

no kudosu

General

Nothing

Hard

00:03:635 (1) - Not perfectly stacked under 00:02:802 (4)
00:05:302 (4) - ^
00:49:051 (2) - Move this slider to about x:380 y:128 to make the slider tails for 1, 2 and 3 the same distance apart
00:56:341 (5) - Not perfectly stacked under 00:55:717 (3)
01:04:883 (1) - The blanket with 01:04:050 (6) could be improved
Other than that, this diff is pretty much perfect imo

Lanturn's Advanced

Nothing I could find

Normal

Again, can't find anything c:

Lanturn wrote:

Difficulty: http://puu.sh/i06yX.osu

Just right click and save as into your song folder!

As for the hitsounds, I would like to keep them as the default ones they currently are. When I mapped this, I mapped it trying to get the most of the default set.

As for a BG.. I'm not really sure what you'd be looking for. With your current background, try looking here and if you find a picture you like, let me know and I'll resize it properly for you.

Also one more thing.
Since you moved the red timing over. Some of the green inherited timing points are 1ms off. I resnapped them for you quickly if you wanted to save time. Just copy and paste these into the correct spot in the .osu file.

Normal

[TimingPoints]
1135,416.652199576404,4,2,1,50,1,0
13634,-100,4,3,1,35,0,0
14884,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
26134,-100,4,3,1,40,0,0
27800,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
28217,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
40300,-100,4,3,1,45,0,0
41133,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
41550,-76.9230769230769,4,2,2,50,0,1
54049,-76.9230769230769,4,2,2,35,0,1
54466,-76.9230769230769,4,2,2,80,0,1
54883,-76.9230769230769,4,2,2,50,0,1
67799,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0

Hard

[TimingPoints]
1135,416.652199576404,4,2,1,50,1,0
13426,-100,4,3,1,45,0,0
14884,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
25925,-100,4,3,1,45,0,0
27800,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
28217,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
40300,-100,4,3,1,45,0,0
41133,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
41550,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,1
54049,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,35,0,1
54466,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
54883,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,1
67799,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0

thanks again for accepting

TheKoala wrote:

Hi c: M4M from my queue

General

Nothing

Hard

00:03:635 (1) - Not perfectly stacked under 00:02:802 (4) This is why I hate Auto-Stack XD
00:05:302 (4) - ^ ^ XD
00:49:051 (2) - Move this slider to about x:380 y:128 to make the slider tails for 1, 2 and 3 the same distance apart You're kidding
00:56:341 (5) - Not perfectly stacked under 00:55:717 (3) Same as 00:03:635 (1) XD
01:04:883 (1) - The blanket with 01:04:050 (6) could be improved Don't really like blankets, tho LOL
Other than that, this diff is pretty much perfect imo Thanks

Lanturn's Advanced

Nothing I could find

Normal

Again, can't find anything c: #OOOOOOOOWWWWW ^O^/

Sorry for the short mod, but this set is amazing c:
I'll give it a star
Good luck!

Chamue wrote:

General
The size of the background should be 1366*768

Normal
No problems

Lanturn's Advanced
No problems

Hard
00:05:302 (4) - move on x:131 y:199 Not a problem :3
Again,no problems but have some suggestions:
00:10:719 (5) - ctrl+G You're kidding XD
00:37:384 (1,2) - you can try ctrl+G with 1 slider or 2,but I think the best would be 1 No
01:07:591 (9) - can you put a circle I think i'll keep it :/

Sorry for such a short mod,to compensate I'll give a star
Nice sampes!~ Thanks!
My map - https://osu.ppy.sh/s/300763 Currently busy so maybe the mod will be late

Good Luck~

Sniqht wrote:

[Normal]

00:01:136 (1,2,3) - Try to keep distance snap same here. Oh, shit. I forgot that. Thanks!
00:03:635 (1) - Make this slider shorter. I want to mean end this at 00:04:259. You're Kidding XD
00:04:468 If you do it, you should put a circle or slider here.
00:37:384 (1,2) - Blanket better. Move 00:37:801 (2) - two ticks down. It doesn't supposed to be a blanket sorry :/
00:56:759 (4) - One tick down. I don't understand what are you talking about D:

[Lanturn's Advanced]

I can't find mistakes at this diff eehm but I have a few advices.

00:16:134 (3,4) - You can blanket here.
00:18:218 (2,3) - Blanket 2 with 3's end. You can do this with moving 00:18:634 (3) - one tick left.
00:30:300 (5) - One tick down.
00:40:300 (1,2) - Blanket can be good. Move 00:41:133 (2) - a few ticks down.

Leave Lanturn to answer

[Hard]

00:02:802 (4) - Move two tick left and blanket will be better. Uh...
00:03:635 (1) - If you do it, you should fix stacking here. This is why I hate auto-stacks LOL
00:10:719 (5) - Ctrl + J and replace. I'll consider it
00:47:592 (5,6) - Fix blanket. I don't like mod like this
00:50:925 (5) - Two ticks right. No
00:54:050 (7) - Two ticks down. No
01:04:883 (1) - ^ No
01:05:717 (3) - One tick down. No

George wrote:

---Hard---
00:02:802 (4) - I would make this slider a bit more curved and fix the overlap at 00:03:635 (1) - You're Kidding
00:07:385 (5) - I would extend this slider more so its timed correctly to the word "suit" Pic Uh...
00:34:884 (2) - 00:35:718 (4) - Maybe fix overlap Done

---Advanced---
00:05:093 (2) - Center this between 00:04:468 (1,3) -

---Normal---
00:06:552 (4) - I'd move this over to overlap the start of 00:04:885 (2) Try not to make a lot of space breaks D:

1. You have to use this for drum-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide according to the rules. Current file size is 160kB while it should be 44B.
2. I think you should use different resolution of background. Current one is none of the one of standard aspect ratios (4:3, 16:9 or 16:10)
3. I'd personally increase volume of soft-hitclap because it is quite loud in music, but not so easy to spot in gameplay.

1. 00:13:426 (1,2) - These two circles are off-rhythm. Real problem is that these are not 1/4 notes but 1/6, thus they fit perfectly on 00:13:495 - and 00:13:565 - . You can notice it on 25% speed quite clearly. Beware there are also notes like this: 00:25:925 (2,3,4) - These are 1/4 as they should be, don't change them, there are only some like this.
2. 00:37:384 (1) - Just my personal opinion, but CTRL+G makes imo more playable flow from the previous object.
3. 00:42:801 (4) - You didn't use overlaps like this in the map. I think you should at least make the center overlapped instead of cirlce. Just like screenshot below.
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:39:884 (1) - The slider is on 39:884 which doesn't fit the timing. Its start can only be on 00:39:883 - , it is 1 ms late now.
5. 00:40:821 (3) - This slider must be 1/3 starting on 00:40:855 - because it doesn't currently fit the drums. You shouldn't follow the voice because it sounds echoed, thus the voice end would be offbeat.
6. 00:52:799 (3) - Change this slider to fit the voice on 00:53:008 - or the sound on 00:53:216 - . If not, at least remove the loud cymbal on repeat becasue it completely doesn't fit the song as there is only a quiet cymbal on 00:53:112 - .

1. 00:11:342 - Remove the clap because it doesn't really fit the map, there isn't a sound to emphasize in the song here, it really is on 00:11:551 - where you frequently used a clap, but not on start of this slider.
2. 00:40:300 (1) - The slider's repeat is really off. You should follow vocal and snap it on 1/1 or snap it to the drums as you wanted, those are 00:40:560 - 1/8 and 00:40:873 - 1/8.
3. Combined usage of new combos didn't go well there. You sometimes follow background music (downbeat), but sometimes you use vocals, which isn't really cool here, because that makes your kiai start in a middle of combo and so on. I think you should stick to one style and keep it consistent.

1. 00:08:635 (2) - The clap is not reasonable there I suppose.
2. 00:20:093 (4) - I'd definitely decrease amount of these patterns. It is normal difficulty and should be able to be played by newbies, but this does decrease their opportunity a lot. You don't have to map everything in the song, simplify it as much as you can if it is normal or easy difficulty.
3. 00:26:135 (1,2) - This also could be simplified, removing 00:26:551 (2) - and using 1 repeat slider would mate it much better for normal difficulty. Like screenshot below.
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:37:384 (1) - This is quite fast too, maybe should be just a circle on 00:37:383 - instead.
5. 00:38:634 (3,4) - (4 touches the HP bar, you have to check all resolutions with default skin always) You have to move it down, I put the also 3, because if you move only 4, it will probably ruin the patterns.
6. 00:41:967 (1,2) - This is the same problem as 00:26:135 (1,2) -.
7. 00:45:301 (1,2) - Same as above.
8. 00:48:634 (1,2) - Same as above.
9. 00:53:425 (4) - Could be replaced with a circle on 00:53:633 - to avoid the difficult rhythm, two repeat sliders are especially difficult for newbies.
10. 00:56:759 (4) - Same as above, could be just circle on 00:56:966 - .
11. 01:01:133 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:26:135 (1,2) - .
12. 01:02:800 (1,2) - Same as 00:53:425 (4) - .
13. 01:05:300 (1,2) - Same as 00:26:135 (1,2) - .
14. The mapset must have at least one diff for newbies, that means constant spacing, no sudden changes, proper swapping of circles and sliders, simple and sensible rhythms. I know we consider normal and easy as a diff which is 1.6 stars, but actually its construction is like hard difficulty and the settings are also high.

Wafu wrote:

Mod as requested

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. You have to use this for drum-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide according to the rules. Current file size is 160kB while it should be 44B. Done
2. I think you should use different resolution of background. Current one is none of the one of standard aspect ratios (4:3, 16:9 or 16:10) [color=#FF0000]The thing you should realize, is that image have 16:10 aspect ratio. Why you don't do the math? XD[/color]
3. I'd personally increase volume of soft-hitclap because it is quite loud in music, but not so easy to spot in gameplay I guess I can.

Hard

• 
  

1. 00:13:426 (1,2) - These two circles are off-rhythm. Real problem is that these are not 1/4 notes but 1/6, thus they fit perfectly on 00:13:495 - and 00:13:565 - . You can notice it on 25% speed quite clearly. Beware there are also notes like this: 00:25:925 (2,3,4) - These are 1/4 as they should be, don't change them, there are only some like this.
2. 00:37:384 (1) - Just my personal opinion, but CTRL+G makes imo more playable flow from the previous object.
3. 00:42:801 (4) - You didn't use overlaps like this in the map. I think you should at least make the center overlapped instead of cirlce. Just like screenshot below.
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4. 00:39:884 (1) - The slider is on 39:884 which doesn't fit the timing. Its start can only be on 00:39:883 - , it is 1 ms late now. Done
5. 00:40:821 (3) - This slider must be 1/3 starting on 00:40:855 - because it doesn't currently fit the drums. You shouldn't follow the voice because it sounds echoed, thus the voice end would be offbeat. Oh yeah I remember that it's actually 1/16
6. 00:52:799 (3) - Change this slider to fit the voice on 00:53:008 - or the sound on 00:53:216 - . If not, at least remove the loud cymbal on repeat becasue it completely doesn't fit the song as there is only a quiet cymbal on 00:53:112 - .

Lanturn's Advanced

1. 00:11:342 - Remove the clap because it doesn't really fit the map, there isn't a sound to emphasize in the song here, it really is on 00:11:551 - where you frequently used a clap, but not on start of this slider.
2. 00:40:300 (1) - The slider's repeat is really off. You should follow vocal and snap it on 1/1 or snap it to the drums as you wanted, those are 00:40:560 - 1/8 and 00:40:873 - 1/8.
3. Combined usage of new combos didn't go well there. You sometimes follow background music (downbeat), but sometimes you use vocals, which isn't really cool here, because that makes your kiai start in a middle of combo and so on. I think you should stick to one style and keep it consistent.

Normal

1. 00:08:635 (2) - The clap is not reasonable there I suppose. Done
2. 00:20:093 (4) - I'd definitely decrease amount of these patterns. It is normal difficulty and should be able to be played by newbies, but this does decrease their opportunity a lot. You don't have to map everything in the song, simplify it as much as you can if it is normal or easy difficulty. [/color]
3. 00:26:135 (1,2) - This also could be simplified, removing 00:26:551 (2) - and using 1 repeat slider would mate it much better for normal difficulty. Like screenshot below.I'll consider it
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:37:384 (1) - This is quite fast too, maybe should be just a circle on 00:37:383 - instead.
5. 00:38:634 (3,4) - (4 touches the HP bar, you have to check all resolutions with default skin always) You have to move it down, I put the also 3, because if you move only 4, it will probably ruin the patterns. Done
6. 00:41:967 (1,2) - This is the same problem as 00:26:135 (1,2) -. [/color]
7. 00:45:301 (1,2) - Same as above. Same
8. 00:48:634 (1,2) - Same as above. Same
9. 00:53:425 (4) - Could be replaced with a circle on 00:53:633 - to avoid the difficult rhythm, two repeat sliders are especially difficult for newbies. No
10. 00:56:759 (4) - Same as above, could be just circle on 00:56:966 - .
11. 01:01:133 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:26:135 (1,2) - . Same
12. 01:02:800 (1,2) - Same as 00:53:425 (4) - . No
13. 01:05:300 (1,2) - Same as 00:26:135 (1,2) - . Same
14. The mapset must have at least one diff for newbies, that means constant spacing, no sudden changes, proper swapping of circles and sliders, simple and sensible rhythms. I know we consider normal and easy as a diff which is 1.6 stars, but actually its construction is like hard difficulty and the settings are also high. [/color]

Conclusion: Rankable after some changes
You have to redesign the spread so there is at least one difficulty which could be passed by complete newbies. Regardless the star rating, normal difficulty is almost like regular hard difficulties and there are many sudden changes which are not appropriate for new players. I think you'll have to decrease difficulty of Hard and Normal or keep it as it is and make Easy diff which really will be easy and passable by most new players.

Crimmi wrote:

Hello there~

[General]
The BPM I saw is 144.01, surely you can adjust it by .01 second and round it off to just 144.00. No, I can't. Check Lust's Mapset Instead.

[Normal]

00:08:634 (2) - Maybe line this down so it aligns with (5,1). like this http://puu.sh/idAZn/a452d1d730.jpg Uh I can't see anything diffrent o.O
00:11:551 (1) - My suggestion http://puu.sh/idB9a/6c346db339.jpg You're kidding. It's gonna break the spacing XD
00:22:800 (3) - Maybe align this with (2) so it could form a triangle shaped pattern with (1,2). Maybe?

[Lanturn's Advanced]

00:03:634 (5) - Suggestion.
00:12:801 (4) - This object is touching the scorebar. Here.

Leave Lanturn to answer

[Hard]

00:45:716 (2) - maybe raise this a few notches up so it could look like this? Avoid making them touching each other.
01:01:549 (2) - ^ ^

Nothing else I could find in this map, good luck~
Thanks

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Why you don't do the math? XD

Lanturn wrote:

The slider is definitely in 1/3. No doubt about it.

Lanturn wrote:

And the scorebar thing doesn't matter. In widescreen it doesn't even come close anyways.

Wafu wrote:

Lanturn wrote:

The slider is definitely in 1/3. No doubt about it.

It is not 1/3, there is recognizably shorter gap between 1st and 2nd drum than the gap between 2nd and 3rd drum, thus it can only be 1/8. I know why I was saying this. You should notice on 25% or less speed.

Lanturn wrote:

And the scorebar thing doesn't matter. In widescreen it doesn't even come close anyways.

It does matter, it is unrankable. Not everyone does have widescreen or doesn't play with it. Maps must be fair for all players, object cannot be just covered by interface, it can cause some confusion.

Wafu wrote:

It is not 1/3, there is recognizably shorter gap between 1st and 2nd drum than the gap between 2nd and 3rd drum, thus it can only be 1/8. I know why I was saying this. You should notice on 25% or less speed.

Wafu wrote:

It does matter, it is unrankable. Not everyone does have widescreen or doesn't play with it. Maps must be fair for all players, object cannot be just covered by interface, it can cause some confusion.