mekadon95 wrote:

[Easy
00:25:419~00:27:346 - Maybe a spinner here than sliders (Or maybe 1/2 streams :3) It's easy and putting spinner there would be too hard.
01:29:618 (1) - Add finish Hmm... finish would be too 'heavy' for that part as I think
01:38:699 (1,2,1,2) - I was thinking for a slider>hitcircle>slider.. kind of thing That can be nice, but maybe that would be too hard for easy (though I can be wrong)
01:47:907 (1,2,1,2) - ^ ^
02:21:516 (2) - New combo I think this way is better
02:22:659 (3) - ^ ^
02:28:341 (1) - Spinner? It would be too short for easy

Normal
01:34:062 (1) - Spinner? Do it as long as Oni ww hmm... let it player can rest with that part
01:38:699 (1,2,3,4...) - Make it more interesting, you use the same pattern too much =[ I'll try when I can think about better one
01:47:907 (1,2,3,4...) - ^ ^
02:08:066 (1,2) - Linear slider don't really match each other fixed
02:15:601 (3,4,5) - Do it in the same angle as 02:14:764 (1,2) fixed 02:14:764 (1,2)

Muzu
No authentic issues :3

Oni
Okay, fine to me...

Insanae
00:31:080 (4,5,6) - What is this? Remove it; it's not fit at all here
00:33:292 (2,3) - ^
Some in between, but I highlight red zones
00:52:648 (2,3,4,5) - Remove it
00:57:072 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:01:481 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:00:246 (1,2,3,4) - Do lesjuh jumps instead
A lot notes actually needs to be removed but yeah, I'm sure you'll find it later let garven decide

mekadon95 wrote:

Insanae
00:31:080 (4,5,6) - What is this? Remove it; it's not fit at all here They're called offbeats. I like 'em since they fit really well.
00:33:292 (2,3) - ^ ^
Some in between, but I highlight red zones
00:52:648 (2,3,4,5) - Remove it ..
00:57:072 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:01:481 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:00:246 (1,2,3,4) - Do lesjuh jumps instead ?
A lot notes actually needs to be removed but yeah, I'm sure you'll find it later Well, thanks for looking, anyway.[/spoilerbox]

star~~

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Insane]
01:34:062 - remove new combo

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Easy]
00:45:286 - remove new combo fixed
01:34:062 - ^ fixed
01:38:555 - remove this timing section When changing volume or something it should be applied a little earier than the note so that it can be applied when the player hit circle a little ealier. So, this timing section is needed.
01:47:764 - ^ ^
01:52:479 - remove new combo fixed
02:01:090 - remove this timing section same as 01:38:555

[Normal]
01:34:062 - remove new combo fixed
02:28:341 - ^ fixed

[Hard]
01:34:062 - remove new combo fixed
01:52:479 - ^ fixed
02:28:341 - remove new combo fixed

[Insane]
01:04:371 - new combo denied, as garven said
01:34:062 - remove new combo fixed, as garven said
02:16:159 - new combo denied, as garven said

kino77 wrote:

[General]
Was those red timing section necessary? As I mentioned above
I feel like the whole notes is a little ahead the song... I'll check

[Easy]
HPDR lv.2? fixed
OD lv.4? I think 3 is better

Astom wrote:

[Hard]
- +2 HP Drain Rate let's... +1?
- +1 OD fixed

[Garven's Insane]
- +1 HP Drain Rate
-01:59:121 (1) remove this combo and add new combo in 01:59:402 (2). let garven decied

Davidz123 wrote:

Anything marked with * is a suggestion.

[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
00:10:658 - Add Note (?) *
00:11:765 - ^ *
00:12:871 - ^ *
00:13:978 - ^ *
00:15:084 - ^ *
00:16:191 - ^ *
00:17:297 - ^ *
00:18:404 - ^ *
00:19:509 - ^ *
00:20:609 - ^ *
00:21:710 - ^ *
00:22:811 - ^ *
00:23:912 - ^ *
00:25:013 - ^ *
00:26:114 - ^ *
00:27:215 - ^ * please wait, I'll implement all of these a few hours later...

EDIT: HP Drain to right 1 fixed

LOL! It sounds much better with those.

[2 Taiko Diffs]
*Requested to be ignored*

[Garven's Insane]
Fine.

• • Disable countdown

• • 00:46:000 (x) - Add a break

• • 00:46:000 (x) - Add a break

• • 00:46:000 (x) - Add a break

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Disable countdown fixed

[Easy]

• • 00:46:000 (x) - Add a break fixed

[Normal]

• • 00:46:000 (x) - Add a break fixed

[Hard]

• • 00:46:000 (x) - Add a break fixed

Astom wrote:

Hi
[Garven's Insane]
- +1 HP Drain Rate
-01:59:121 (1) remove this combo and add new combo in 01:59:402 (2).

tmokb93 wrote:

[General]
Okay.

[Easy]
00:14:399 (1) - Stack it under 00:13:288 (2)'s end. fixed

[Normal]
00:41:984 (3) - Delete this. fixed
00:42:260 (4) - Move it 1/1 before and extend by 1/1. fixed
01:02:992 (1,2,3,4) - Flip horizontally. fixed

[Hard]
00:54:850 - Add a hitcircle.
00:54:988 (3) - 1/4 before.
00:55:954 - Add a hitcircle.
00:56:092 (7) - 1/4 before. I fixed some rhythm inspired by these, thanks.

[Garven]
Why this was mapped with 1/3, and the others with 1/4? D: the last part uses 1/3, and others using 1/4. Thats why.
Nothing for you

Krisom wrote:

[General]
Consider changing the brown combocolor. The approach circle is sometimes hard for me too see, like in Garven's Insane, 00:21:713 (4). fixed

[Easy]
00:29:846 (1) - Remove the New Combo fixed
00:38:674 (1) - ^ fixed
01:18:490 (1) - ^ (?) fixed
01:22:931 (1) - ^ (?) fixed
02:23:792 - The offset/BPM seems a bit late in this section, it may be me though... fixed
Also, some hitsound modding, though I'm not sure if this fits taiko... ..oh well :3
00:09:955 (1) - Finish the start? fixed
00:12:177 (1) - ^ fixed
00:14:399 (1) - ^ fixed
00:16:621 (1) - ^ fixed

;D

[Normal]
Nothing wrong, just hitsound suggestions
00:27:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Place some claps in this combo... hmmm... ...maybe claps on (2), (3), (5) and (6) ? fixed
00:32:329 (2,4) - Clap both the end and the start of these sliders. fixed
00:36:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:27:640. fixed
00:41:157 (2) - Clap the end and the start fixed
00:50:020 (2,4) - ^ fixed
00:54:436 (2,4) - ^ fixed
00:58:852 (2,4) - ^ fixed
01:03:268 (2,4) - ^ fixed

Great Normal diff ^^!

[Hard]
Nothing wrong here, I'd like to see places like 00:10:649 (3)'s end or 00:19:639 (4) clapped, but it's a solid pattern, so I wont suggest anything ^^!

[Garven's]
Great!
00:21:713 (4) - Alredy mentioned it, but this is hard to see with the current color scheme...
01:05:614 (14) - Maybe a new combo :3? I don't like 14 D:
I'm not going to lie, I could not do the gutar solo, but...
01:34:062 (7) - I don't like how this spacing looks, it's a sudden jump at the end of the solo, one could assume that you're aiming to the next beat...
01:59:954 (4) - This was a slider? o.O
02:17:401 (14) - Maybe new combo ^^? let garven decide this

Krisom wrote:

Hello Hello :3

[Garven's]
Great!
00:21:713 (4) - Alredy mentioned it, but this is hard to see with the current color scheme...
01:05:614 (14) - Maybe a new combo :3? I don't like 14 D: Heh, it used to be that way. Ah well, I'll leave it for now.
I'm not going to lie, I could not do the gutar solo, but...
01:34:062 (7) - I don't like how this spacing looks, it's a sudden jump at the end of the solo, one could assume that you're aiming to the next beat... Um, it's pretty much the same jump you're doing with that exact rhythm several times prior. I don't see the issue...
01:59:954 (4) - This was a slider? o.O Hrm, rearranged a bit
02:17:401 (14) - Maybe new combo ^^?

>w< Star!

Sushi971 wrote:

Get rid of .osb file fixed

[Easy]
00:45:952 (Break) - Is it really needed? fixed

[Normal]
00:45:952 (Break) - Is it really needed? fixed

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Looks good~

[Hard]
00:15:510 (4,5) - consider alignment? fixed

[Taiko Oni]
*_*

[garven's]
00:46:441 (Break) - Needed?
00:48:600 (1,3) - symetry? let garven check these

m980 wrote:

[Easy]
There are 8 un-noticable unsnapped notes near the end of the map. Just snap them :p (They're about 6ms off) My mistake, fixed!

[Normal]
00:48:603 (3) - Might wanna snap this. (Even though it's only 3 ms off, it needs to be done >.>) My mistake, fixed!

[Garven's Insane]
It's difficulties like this that remind me how much I hate guest difficulties.

There are so many things that are just in the map to increase difficulty/score. If your goal in mapping is to make a hard/high-max-score map, then you shouldn't be mapping. I'm mainly referring to the offbeat notes that just fill the empty space.
00:31:088 (4,5,6,7) -
00:39:915 (4,5,6,7) -
00:52:642 (2,3,4,5) -
00:57:058 (2,3,4,5) -
Why are they there? For difficulty inflation. They don't sound good >.> If you want to place notes during a pause in the music, then atleast make it sound good... If you don't want to, then you don't have to. I just feel that so much more can be done in the empty space (or.. nothing at all)
02:27:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't know what this stream is for. Oh wait... difficulty inflation. I'd get rid of it.

Overall
I think the mapset is pretty cool. I'll check over this map again later, and if it fits the bill, you can have your bubble.

m980 wrote:

It's difficulties like this that remind me how much I hate guest difficulties.

Garven wrote:

m980 wrote:

It's difficulties like this that remind me how much I hate guest difficulties.

Thanks.

m980 wrote:

Sorry if you took offense to that. It's just my belief that a guest difficulty should NEVER outshine the original mapper's difficulties in both score and difficulty.

Well, I was asked to make an insane specifically... I don't see how to avoid either of those criteria in that situation. Considering it's my first Insane creation since the unreadable pile of crap my first attempt was, I'm pretty proud of it. Maybe I was just a bit irate after a day of work and coming back to that - it's not bugging me at all now with your perspective. Anyway...

[Garven's Insane]
Just a suggestion
01:02:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not sure about these jumps. Same with the repeat. I'd get rid of them. But it's your call.

I had designed the chorus' to gradually have spacing increases as it went along, and that's pretty much the last part of it. I equalized the jump distance on the second set of them as a compromise.

I'll check back. Garven should just post to tell me whether he's keeping the jumps or not. Then I'll give this a bubble.

lepidopodus wrote:

Yeahy~

So, I should find another BAT to rank this or...

Zekira wrote:

Oh god...

*plays*

arken1015 wrote:

Now, Zekira should make that song as TaikOsu <<<

lepidopodus wrote:

arken1015 wrote:

Now, Zekira should make that song as TaikOsu <<<

Are you serious? 999 combo and over 200 BPM with 1/4 notes....

Ok, if someone can FC Haya Saitama2000 Oni with standard, I consider to support that lol (jk?)

arken1015 wrote:

NO FC USER on that song???

lepidopodus wrote:

Seriously, making somewhat hard Oni maps to TaikOsu is just DISATSER. Even easy one has under 50 S.

Zekira wrote:

One thing that motivates me to make TaikOsu is the lack of S'es, actually.

Family Dondon has one FC already though D:

Cookiezi should totally go on rampage and FC Haya Saitama2000 already >_>